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Hana - i wo Tokinasai [Osu|Taiko]

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Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月17日 at 下午 09:30:58

Artist: Hana
Title: i wo Tokinasai
Source: Ikinari Anata ni Koi Shiteiru
Tags: kosiga fumis No_Gu Opening
BPM: 156
Filesize: 3787kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. fumis' Insane (5 stars, 329 notes)
  2. Gu's Easy (2.5 stars, 103 notes)
  3. Hard (4.94 stars, 237 notes)
  4. kosiga's Normal (3.14 stars, 123 notes)
  5. Taiko Oni (4.78 stars, 453 notes)
Download: Hana - i wo Tokinasai
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#15
PC Game いきなりあなたに恋している OP


[Mapset]
Easy:By No_Gu
Normal:By kosiga
Hard:By me
Insane:By fumis

[Special Thanks]
kosiga:Normal Diff
fumis:Insane Diff
No_Gu:Easy diff

-----Specral Thx for Mod-----
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Byakugan249
ertyukjh010
Scorpiour
JoJo
spboxer3
No_Gu
Leorda
iroseka
Crisiy
nold_1702
KDS
aabc271
-Baby Strawberry-
Fionana
tutuhaha
eikkaleyd
Flask
Foreverends
LKs
DarkRingSystem
arken1015
Pink Agate
Midasmens
Chewin(Bubble THX)
Garven(Ranked!Thanks><)
Last edited by Sun Rainbow , edited 79 times in total.
kosiga
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Joined May 2011
kosiga
good luck :3
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
I saw promis (slap


加油啊彩虹別棄置了
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
just random modding from #modreqs.

Easy

  1. 00:07:733 (6) - 往左移一点
  2. 00:23:887 (4) - 形状不好看
  3. 00:38:503 (1) - 最好别这样
  4. 00:45:810 (2) - 对称
  5. 01:24:656 (5) - 不科学
  6. 01:31:195 (2,3) - 换成长slider吧。
Kosiga

  1. 00:22:156 (3) - end at 00:22:541 ? o.o
  2. 00:22:926 - then slider here
  3. 01:19:272 (3) - move first slider point 1 grid right? ._.
  4. 01:30:233 (4,5) - reverse slider
Hard

  1. 00:08:310 (3) - 后面三个点往右移一格
  2. 00:13:503 (3) - 没叠好
  3. 00:21:772 (1) - 不是很合适///
  4. 00:31:195 - add note? 叠到后面slider上
  5. 00:44:849 (3) - 看不清啊0.0
  6. 00:48:695 (1) - 太坑了 不能这样
  7. 00:49:272 - ^ add note吧
  8. 01:07:541 (10) - ._.
Fumis

  1. 00:05:426 (3) - slider this then triplet next?
  2. 01:33:118 - add note in middle ._.
good luck w
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun.

[General]
Weird. The BG doesn't show for me in the website. try a full submission and make sure you saved everything properly from the video to the BG.
this song has a video right? I recommend that you add it this is a PC game and PC games should have a video of the opening. remember you can ignore this, adding a video is optional.
if you add the video, disable the letterbox during breaks as it gets in the way with the video.

[Easy]
the settings look too easy for beginners to play. Do HP and OD2 and AR3. the HP and OD 2 would be perfect for an easy diff, and AR3 would flow a lot smoother to the notes.
00:06:195 (5) - either move this somewhere else or change the look of this slider. the hitburst is covering this note and that makes it hard for beginners to know where the note is, and it plays weird if it isn't stacked properly. if you ignore this, then stack this on (3) perfectly so that it'd play a lot smoother during gameplay.
00:13:887 (1) - either add a clap or a finish. both would work as it matches that sound.
00:23:887 (4) - make this slider symmetrical. if you play this during gameplay, the flow would look weird people might feel uncomfortable when they reach this part.
00:33:887 (2,4) - this overlap looks bad. beginners might get confused because of this, so do something liks this to make it look less confusing. if you do this, you might need to move other notes around to follow the DS.
00:38:503 (1) - when you map easy diffs, i highly suggest that you avoid doing repeats more than once. beginners won't know when this repeat will end or continue, so i suggest doing something easier for this. for example 1 1/1 repeat slider and a circle for a better flow, or a 3/1 slider to make it easier for beginners.
00:43:503 (4) - maybe it's just me, but this slider doesn't flow to the vocals or the instrumental accurately. try to do something else where it follows the vocals.
00:54:272 (1) - same as 00:38:503.
00:56:964 (1) - this slider looks like it's just put there, and it makes a bad overlap from the kick slider. try doing separate beats, 2 1/1 sliders, maybe even 3. this is just an example so i'll leave this up to you.
00:58:887 (2) - again this is unsymmetrical but it's no big deal. you can fix it if you like.
01:19:272 (1) - same as 00:38:503.
01:27:733 (3) - ^
01:31:195 (2,3) - ^
you need to add hitsounds. i heard finishes here and there but that's not enough. add hitsounds at every 2nd and 4th downbeat. in other words the white ticks. the white ticks represents the downbeats, and don't be afraid to add notes at the red ticks. there's several parts where the vocals continue and where it start, but don't overdo it. you want this to be an easy and fun diff for beginners.

[kosiga]
js i like diff names with just the name.
i feel that AR4 is too slow. maybe increase it by 1? same reason as easy about the AR.
01:03:118 (1) - maybe add a finish with the whistle, or replace the whistle for a finish because it goes well with the vocals?
01:15:426 (1) - ^
01:24:656 (1,2) - just a minor spacing error. it's up to you weather you can fix it or not.
01:32:733 - i always feel that something is missing here, so either add a circle, or remove (4) and add a 1/2 slider to follow the instrumental accurately.
other than that this is a good diff. it has rank potential i'll tell you that.

[Hard]
maybe OD6 and AR7 to challenge players? IMO the settings look too easy for this diff.
00:09:849 (1) - same as 00:23:887 on easy.
00:12:156 (1) - IMO this overlap looks bad as some of the hitburst is covering this note. try to move it somewhere else so that it doesn't happen.
00:13:983 (2) - delete this note because it's not following anything at all.
00:21:580 (5) - i don't mind seeing overlaps but IMO this looks bad as the slider is covering the circle. this is just my personal opinion on this.
00:30:618 (1) - remove the NC for this. the singer is saying "atashima" and it's connected in vocals. correct me if i'm wrong.
00:38:118 (1,2,3,4) - to make it easier, replace it for a 1/4 kick slider. personally i don't like to see streams in hard diffs because that'd be considered too hard for some players.
00:38:406 (1,2,3,4) - try to expend the jump because i don't like jumps like this is they overlap each other. you can add jumps in hard diffs, but don't overdo it.
00:47:156 (1) - I think this is considered a hold slider and a hold slider is unrankable. as a MAT or BAT about this. if it is unrankable, try to do different slider than this to make it easier for players and less confusing.
00:51:195 (2,3) - similar to 00:21:580.
00:59:080 (9,10) - remove this because it doesn't flow to the vocals that accurate, and add a 1/1 slider to follow the vocals a bit accurately.
01:06:387 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - if there's 1 thing i don't like to see when i play maps, it's this. patterns like this can be challenging but also boring because you're going around in the same spot. i suggest replacing it for a 1/1 repeat slider and a 1/2 slider to follow vocals more accurately.
01:08:887 (3,4,5,6) - same as 00:38:118.
01:31:772 (5) - why is it beside (4)? that ruins the star pattern and players might expect it. so move this note up to the point it makes a star jump.
not bad, but there's something that bothered me. i remember seeing several notes with a DS of 0.7 try to avoid that because it looks messy and there's a high chance of bad overlaps. i suggest using a DS of either 0.8 or 1.0 to make it easier and fully visible for players to see.

[fumis]
00:55:426 (1) - move the spinenr 1 tick up and end it 1 tick back. add a note on the downbeat to complete the star jump. i don't like to see patterns that are incomplete. it ruins the flow during gameplay IMO.
01:21:195 (3) - maybe replace this for triplets to challenge players? this 1/4 repeat slider looks too as players would most likely pass this with ease IMO.
i like it. nice job on the streams and placements.

I guess that's it. GL :D
Sun Rainbow
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Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow
哭了FIONANA你给我找的吗……
Fionana
252 posts
Joined April 2011
Fionana
加油吧w
Fionana
252 posts
Joined April 2011
Fionana
=_= 抽了double post
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
好吧

General: 我看不到网上的照片，请full submit, 如果找得到video的话就放上去吧，不过记得要untick letterbox during break...


[Easy]
HP OR 2, AR3
00:06:195 (5) - 移掉或换形状. 遮挡让沙包蛋疼.不要的话跟3重叠
00:13:887 (1) - clap / finish
00:23:887 (4) - 弄对称.会弄到player不舒服.
00:33:887 (2,4) - 遮挡难看. 试试看这样 this .如果做了接下来调一下
00:38:503 (1) - 不建议使用多于一次的重复在easy
00:43:503 (4) - 似乎没跟vocal，试试看别的东西.
00:54:272 (1) - 跟 00:38:503 一样.
00:56:964 (1) - 这拉条看起来很随便, 而且遮到那个kick slider.试看其他做法，1/1slider.
00:58:887 (2) - 不对称.
01:19:272 (1) - same as 00:38:503.
01:27:733 (3) - ^
01:31:195 (2,3) - ^
加 hitsounds.加 finish. 可在红线加note，但不要乱来，就能弄成一个对沙包来说很好玩的map

[Hard]
OD6 and AR7 现在太过容易了
00:09:849 (1) - same as 00:23:887 on easy.
00:12:156 (1) - 遮挡很难看呢，hit burst也挡住了
00:13:983 (2) - 删了
00:21:580 (5) - 遮挡难看.
00:30:618 (1) - remove the NC for this. 歌手唱 "atashima" ，还没完
00:38:118 (1,2,3,4) - 用个 1/4 kick slider 比较容易.个人觉得串串在hard不好.
00:38:406 (1,2,3,4) - 个人不大喜欢跳的时候遮挡.
00:47:156 (1) - 这可能unrankable (这里L_P多嘴一句：rankable但是也觉得难看).
00:51:195 (2,3) - 与 00:21:580 类似.
00:59:080 (9,10) - 删.
01:06:387 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 不喜欢这种东西，这难读但是可以同时很无聊.
01:08:887 (3,4,5,6) - same as 00:38:118.
01:31:772 (5) - 为什么放在4的旁边？（L_P又多嘴一句：无聊 爱怎样放就怎样放）
不坏但建议下次用0.8 spacing, 这样会避免重叠等等等

求个kd
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Kosiga

  1. 00:22:156 (3) - end at 00:22:541 ? o.o
  2. 00:22:926 - then slider here
  3. 01:19:272 (3) - move first slider point 1 grid right? ._.
  4. 01:30:233 (4,5) - reverse slider
sorry, no change..orz

Byakugan249 wrote:

[kosiga]
js i like diff names with just the name. =x=
i feel that AR4 is too slow. maybe increase it by 1? same reason as easy about the AR. ok~ change to AR 5
01:03:118 (1) - maybe add a finish with the whistle, or replace the whistle for a finish because it goes well with the vocals? ok. change to finish
01:15:426 (1) - ^ ^
01:24:656 (1,2) - just a minor spacing error. it's up to you weather you can fix it or not. You are very finely observed o.o But this is intentional. To place the beautiful star formation, I was able to find only here ...orz EDIT: I tried to change!
01:32:733 - i always feel that something is missing here, so either add a circle, or remove (4) and add a 1/2 slider to follow the instrumental accurately. good :3 but since I continue to put 1/2 rhythm, I do not want to put it here.. orz 01:32:156 (3) - I can change this to the repeat slider , but let me think a little ><
other than that this is a good diff. it has rank potential i'll tell you that.
thank you~ :)

Download: Hana - i wo Tokinasai (Short Ver.) (Sun Rainbow) [kosiga].osu
Last edited by kosiga , edited 1 time in total.
Sun Rainbow
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Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow
Easy remap了
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


[General]

☆ a.jpg 要是用不到就刪掉吧
☆ "3,2,1!"倒數功能不一致，檢查一下

[Easy]

HP2 AR3 OD2 基本的EZ數值
[Layout]
00:04:656 (3) - 重疊會影響新手的判斷
00:07:733 (6) - New combo
00:26:195 (6) - ^
01:10:041 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/323265 包圍得不好看，嘗試圍著那個圈圈包圍
[rhythm]
01:30:618 () - 這裡放個轉盤來處理；後面幾個多折返的短Slider，EZ是不允許
[Hitsound]
00:56:964 (1) - Finish

[kosiga]

為甚麼這個難度沒Video??
[Layout]
01:25:810 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 要排成5邊型麼

[Hard]

AR+1 比較方便讀譜
[Layout]
00:18:695 (6) - 與 00:16:964 (1) 重疊
00:47:156 (1) - 醜orz
00:48:695 (1) - 錯誤距離
[rhythm]
01:29:272 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - 這個Stream太難了對於Hard來說，Hard的話長連打其實都不適合，而且這個還混合了短Slider

[fumis]

Fine :)

就這樣吧~
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for request

[General]
  1. 视频的声音要去掉。
  2. Countdown也要都关掉
  3. Letterbox During Breaks去掉，因为有视频。
  4. Audio Lead-in 1000ms就可以了，现在的略长了。
  5. 另外整体而言volumn太低了，感觉至少要+20%-25%的样子。
[Easy]
  1. HP+1
  2. 00:04:656 (3) - 首先Easy最好别出遮挡而且这里在出现的时候大部分都被遮挡了这个肯定不行，其次也没叠好
  3. 00:06:195 (5) - 同上，避免遮挡，而且和(6)没有包裹好
  4. 00:08:118 - 这段break比较莫名……建议map上
  5. 00:29:244 - ^
  6. 00:35:426 (4) - 继续遮挡问题, Easy就别这么玩了
  7. 01:06:195 (1) - 不好看，前面几个slider拉的不是挺好的么这个太楞了
[kosiga]
  1. 00:03:887 (3) - 既然00:02:926 (2) - 已经下了红白线的节奏了，(3)这里我也建议从前面红线开始，结尾不变。
  2. 00:16:195 (3) - ^
  3. 00:19:464 - 因为你在用1/2的节奏很多所以这里少的一个音会让你整个节奏变的有点不舒服，如果不想补note的话前面的slider其实应该拆成两部分的，即前一半结束在00:18:695 - ，后一半从00:19:080 - 到00:19:464 -
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:887 (1,2) - 这里三连下的很没道理……所以删掉(2)吧
  2. 00:21:580 (5) - 删
  3. 00:28:887 (1,2,3) - 这里三连明显在红线上啊…如图
  4. 00:44:656 (1,2,3) - 继续没道理的三连
  5. 00:48:695 (1,2,3) - 这里stack和背景颜色太近了导致读图不能，Hard难度还是别这么玩好了又不是没有Insane
  6. 00:56:772 - spinner结束到这里比较好，然后00:56:964 - 补note
  7. 00:59:080 (9,10) - 这里是个红线到红线的1/1slider节奏啊……建议改了
  8. 00:59:656 (1,2,3,4) - 然后跟着上面那里，这里整个off节奏了……
  9. 01:04:272 (4,5,1) - 继续没道理的白线三连，修改方法同前面图……
这个diff整个节奏还需要再调整调整……各种混乱……排版倒是ok了，

[fumis]
  1. 00:17:733 (3,4) - 这里我建议用折返而不是slider+note，能显得更轻快一点
  2. 00:21:003 (4,5) - 这俩一起叠到现在(5)的位置似乎会不错
  3. 00:58:599 (2,3,4) - 这里建议向后做红线三连（2 3 4 连一起）
恩差不多就这些啦，Insane难度做的不错的说加油吧～～
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
some fixed :3

thank you~

Download: Hana - i wo Tokinasai (Short Ver.) (Sun Rainbow) [kosiga].osu
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow
ERT大大你有升级吗？我EASY REMAP了
HARD 准备REMAP
KOSIGA THX》。《
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Be shure to full submit before I mod, because we don't see the Background on your Beatmap's Information.

ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010

Sun Rainbow wrote:

ERT大大你有升级吗？
升級是甚麼意思？
會員的話我沒有贊助，MAT的話我也沒能力升級



request from game PM

[Easy]

[Layout]
  1. 00:11:195 (1) - 還可以包圍得更好看，您看中間還有空軌：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328898
  2. 00:16:964 (1) - 跟 00:15:810 (3) 重疊了
  3. 00:20:810 (1,2) - 您的原意是 00:21:964 (2) 在 00:20:810 (1) 對吧？但是 00:20:810 (1) 的第2點在 X:304，所以 00:21:964 (2) 的位置也應該在 X:304 的軸上，所以請將
  4. 00:21:964 (2) 向左移動2格 (Grid Lv4)
  5. 00:24:656 (1) - 跟 00:23:118 (1) 重疊的部份有點多，所以移動到其他地方去
  6. 00:26:195 (1) - 您看到您的都走位了= =：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328902；最起碼要畫成這個樣子：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328905 您真的畫不到就問我拿座標lol
  7. 00:55:426 (1) - ^
  8. 01:21:580 (1) - ^
  9. 01:26:964 (3,4) - Ctrl+R? 第一個原因是 01:26:964 (3) 被 01:24:656(1) 擋著，所以跟 (4) 交換位置就多點時間給玩家閱讀；第二個原因是從 01:24:656(1) 到 01:26:580 (2) 不都順時針去嗎？lol 所以 01:26:964 (3,4) 都應該是順時針去
[Hitsound]
  1. 00:55:426 (1) - 結尾用Finish代替
  2. 00:57:349 (1) - 開頭RemoveFinish，Finish一般是放在長白線的Note
  3. 01:30:618 (1) - Finish?
我不知道之前是怎樣，不過今次的節奏我覺得不錯~~
就這樣吧~ GoodLuck
Last edited by ertyukjh010 , edited 3 times in total.
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow
大大upload last version啊啊啊！！！
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Sun Rainbow
OK全部完成~
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo
Mod来了~接好~
*Req via ingame

  1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
  2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
  3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.
[General]
  1. 目测没有video? 那就把fumis和kosiga难度里的video offset移除.这个我顺便在下面的难度里也提一下直接让guest mapper改好了.
  2. 可以的话把taikoBG转换成jpg格式..
[fumis]
  1. Remove video offset since there is no video I guess?
  2. Remove useless countdown.
  3. Awesome diff~ Couldn't find anything more.
[Hard]
  1. 啥...怎么前半段一个音效都没...别偷懒啊魂淡~完全没加音效的话不好mod啊,试着塞点whistle吧.我给些建议好了,你按照我的规律下下去...
    • 这些地方加whistle
    1. 00:01:580 (1) -
    2. 00:02:349 (3) - 开头
    3. 00:02:926 (5) - 开头
    4. 00:03:695 (7) - 开头
    5. 00:04:080 (8) - 结尾
    6. 00:04:656 (1) - 开头
    7. 00:05:426 (3) - 开头
    8. 00:06:003 (4) - 开头
    9. 00:06:772 (6) - 开头
    10. 00:07:349 (7) -
  2. 00:08:887 (4,5) - 这里的节奏配合vocal打着有些别扭,试试改成这样
    SPOILER
  3. 00:15:618 (0) - 这里加个note,不然这个多余的blank太不协调/_\
  4. 00:16:387 (0) - 同上~
  5. 00:25:810 (6) - 这里vocal音是拖着的,建议使用slider,摆这样的节奏.后面那拍空着也罢~本来就既没有鼓点也没有vocal~
    SPOILER
  6. 00:27:349 (3,1) - 这里也是,建议跟好vocal.
    SPOILER
  7. 00:28:695 (5) - 然后这里加个1/2slider.
  8. 00:36:003 (2) - 这里也是拖拽音,试试这样的节奏.
    SPOILER
  9. 00:47:156 (3) - 没叠好.关grid snap然后0.0x DS叠~
  10. 00:50:041 (4,1) - 鉴于3,4间的间距,这里spacing建议也加大到2.0左右.
  11. 00:53:887 (8,1) - 交换new combo.
  12. 01:05:618 (2) - 没叠好+1~
  13. 01:07:349 (4) - 这尼玛太丑了..
[kosiga]
  1. General issues are same to fumis' diff~~ Plz fix them.
  2. The using of hitsound clap is a bit weird for me... Others are fine.
[Easy]
  1. 00:16:964 (1,2) - 不介意的话往右边挪点避免遮挡..虽然我经常这么干但是一直被各种蓝名红名说/_\
  2. 00:28:887 (3) - 我觉得这里3和1重叠有些不协调.然后就是后面那个00:29:272 (1) - 我觉得不好看.....
  3. 00:35:426 (1,2,3) - 说不上为什么..就是感觉这里节奏十分奇葩...试试这样吧.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:41:580 (1) - hidden reverse哪怕出现在insane里也是unrankable.
  5. 01:06:580 (3) - New combo I guess.
  6. 01:21:580 (1) - 往右下去一点,避免overlap.
  7. 01:24:656 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这里要大改,又stack又遮挡对easy来说太蠢了..
mod烧人参啊..=o= anyway star'd!
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