1. [Shalon]'s Jubeataiko (4.78 stars, 628 notes)
2. Another (4.95 stars, 401 notes)
3. Extra (5 stars, 513 notes)
4. Hyper (4.75 stars, 248 notes)
5. Normal (3.12 stars, 138 notes)

fartownik wrote:

Man, this is epic. Please finish the set, don't let these awesome streams grave.

1. 00:25:490 (163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175) - These really shouldn't be 1/3 or 1/6. It doesn't fit with the music and is really really awkward to play. These need to be changed. Just move them back onto the blue tick and they will work.
2. 00:28:936 (181,182,183) - Same with these.

1. 01:09:847 (461,462,463,466,467,468,469) - Make these finishes?

[Shalon] wrote:

Oops, what I did.. sorry to bother you

fartownik wrote:

hi there, my mod as promised

[Extra]

01:03:868 (2,3) - Kind of now what I expected to play here. I guess you could change these repeats into single 1/4 sliders, that'd follow the background claps even more. This part is meant to be a little relaxer to prepare for the next section (the extremely spaced out 1/4 jumps). The next section does pretty much the same thing. There's definitely a lot that can be done here, but I think I want to leave it like this
01:07:111 (2,3) - Same thing. This one's here just to be consistent. I m reluctant to change it.
01:10:861 (2) - Why not just a single circle here? The double doesn't really follow the instrument in the background.I have a reason for this!
It's all about polarity. This slider serves as a polarity bridge, or, a transition from something on the blue to something on the white. If I left it as just a circle, it would go from blue to white with nothing in between to help it. It basically makes the offbeat stuff not feel offbeat.
Other examples of polarity bridges include 00:30:220 (5), 00:37:821 (6), 00:39:341 (5), 00:45:828 (6), and finally 01:10:861 (2) - which is what we were discussing. All of those are there solely to correct polarity.
These little bridges help the player significantly, whether they realize it or not.
I used this technique when making Carlito, and it worked very well.

So, basically, the reason I want to have it be a slider is to make it a little more readable.

[Hyper]

The difficulty parameters are slightly too low for a Hyper. I guess you should use these.
Used a slight variation. Instead of 6 HP 7 AR 6 OD I used 5 HP 7 AR 5 OD

00:15:628 (1) - Sounds at least weird. Also I'm not sure how to deal with it. You can end in at the current place of the repeat and add 3 notes later following the instrument or lengthen the slider and delete repeat so it ends on the red tick (00:17:047). You have plenty of possibilities. I like how this slider matches the piano, so I made the ticks quieter. This keeps the focus on the slider without having that annoying tick tick at random
00:17:250 (1) - If you used any of my advices from up, you should move this finger back by 1/4 so it follows the music. Uh... not sure what you mean by this, I think the spinner is alright as it is.
00:54:138 (3) - End on the blue tick? Sounds better. I'm avoiding a confusing beat here.
00:57:381 (4) - Same. Same. The blue ticks wouldn't be isolated by a repeat slider.
01:00:624 (3) - Same. Same.
01:39:746 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - Just a suggestion. The music here is begging you to put some 1/4's. You might like to add some 1/4 sliders instead of the 1/2 circles, that'd be totally better. This hyper isn't supposed to be too difficulty, and I especially don't want to piss off the player at the end.

[Normal]

Also here the OD and AR are too low. Raise them by 1 tick?
Variation of that, just raised AR by 1. Star rating sucks

01:09:543 (1) - I guess you can just transform it into a 4-repeated slider. Won't make it much harder but will follow the beat better. When I was a beginner player these drove me absolutely nuts. It's way too hard to see the repeat for beginners - hell, most players don't even look for it anymore, they just guess. To a beginner, it's not something they do naturally.
01:11:165 (1) - Same. Same as above.
01:39:137 (1,2) - Again a bit weird. How about deleting the repeat from (1) and adding a circle on the red tick before the second slider? Yeah, I like that

Also I need you to find someone to check taiko, can't mod it well.
Great map, feel free to call me after fixes and taiko modding.

Rukarioman wrote:

Hey There^^

First of all, the mapping spread could be better, but I'm pretty sure you are aware of that.

[Hyper]
00:36:301 (1,2,3) - This spacing threw me off. Would you mind changing that around?

I actually don't have more to add. It's a pretty great mapset, but from what I can see no one checked the Taiko yet, so call me back after you got someone that thoroughly checked it.