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Kaneko Chiharu - iLLness LiLin [OsuMania]

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ByeForNow
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ByeForNow
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年9月12日 at 下午 5:05:42

Artist: Kaneko Chiharu
Title: iLLness LiLin
Source: SOUND VOLTEX IV HEAVENLY HAVEN
Tags: Arzenvald the 6th kac original song contest winner aonasai near noah pirates welcome to heaven sdvx 4
BPM: 280
Filesize: 4103kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Archy's ADVANCED - 4Key (2.7 stars, 843 notes)
  2. Archy's BASIC - 4Key (1.25 stars, 348 notes)
  3. EXHAUST - 4Key (3.4 stars, 1271 notes)
  4. HEAVENLY - 4Key (4.92 stars, 1861 notes)
  5. MAXIMUM - 4Key (4.19 stars, 1610 notes)
  6. NOVICE - 4Key (1.89 stars, 563 notes)
Download: Kaneko Chiharu - iLLness LiLin
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Too bad it's graveyarded now. Good luck to Abraxos with studies!
Check this out too! > > https://osu.ppy.sh/s/582025 < <
Do you? Prepare to be shocked!
28/4/17 Re-download for hitsounds!
awesome BG by this guy https://twitter.com/akaandsia?lang=en
awesome music by this guy https://twitter.com/Chiharu_v9?lang=en
for rank hahaha, yay i know sdvx haha fun
not your usual jumptrilling sdvx chart yeah, goodluck
warning LNs, underated chart
Ready for check.
heavenly diff is FC-able ok
selfnote1
exhaust in progress, done
advanced in progress, done
novice in progress, done
basic in progress, GD-ed, done
banner..?, ...
hitsound in progress, done
bg source https://twitter.com/akaandsia

yesyes, I will rename the highest diff's name, no worries renamed~

Hitsound diff is not for modding
update history
ok let's start
4/4/17
- finished diff, opening for mods
- adjustment to exh and sdvx diff after testplay from playin14
- applied irc mod from Another Lie
18/4/17
- applied mod from ajeemaniz
20/4/17
- applied mod from genkicho
- tiny amendment to EXH after applying genkicho's mod
23/4/17
- some self mod
- beginning hitsounding
- added a storyboard hitsound in the middle of the map as an experiment
24/4/17
- applied IRC mod from Soul Evans
28/4/17
- applied mod from Soul Evans
- applied hitsounds to difficulties
30/4/17
- applied mod from Abraxos
6/5/17
- Added Arzenvald's GD 'Archy's BASIC'
7/5/17
- Added Arzenvald's GD 'Archy' ADVANCED'
- Applied hitsounds to GDs
9/5/17
- Applied Raveille's mod
16/5/17
- Applied Vortex-'s mod
22/5/17
- Applied B A D's mod
12/6/17
- Applied imtdb1's mod
25/6/17
- Applied Tofu1222's mod
- Applied Ochasan's mod
13/7/17
- Applied Freerum's iirc
22/7/17
- Corrected metadata as mentioned by Kii_Piuer
12/9/17
- hey
Thanks all for testplaying, suggestions and opinions to improve the chart~
Last edited by ByeForNow , edited 59 times in total.
Another Lie
Another Lie
Starting mod
Chat
02:00 Another Lie: hey
02:01 ByeForNow: o/
02:01 Another Lie: do you want irc?
02:01 Another Lie: i'm free now
02:01 ByeForNow: sure thing
02:01 ByeForNow: i assume you saw my post? xd
02:01 Another Lie: aye
02:01 Another Lie: i noticed my mail
02:01 ByeForNow: \o/
02:01 *Another Lie is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1256795 Kaneko Chiharu - iLLness LiLin [ADVANCED]]
02:01 *ByeForNow is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1257756 Kaneko Chiharu - iLLness LiLin]
02:01 Another Lie: pretty nice stuff you have
02:02 ByeForNow: thanks, pretty nice queue you have :P
02:02 ByeForNow: informative
02:02 Another Lie: not really, that was the 2nd
02:02 ByeForNow: o
02:02 Another Lie: 00:02:198 (2198|2) - move it to 2nd col maybe? for balance with 00:02:270 (2270|3,2341|2) - 
02:03 ByeForNow: o, sure
02:03 ByeForNow: fixed
02:03 Another Lie: 00:14:948 (14948|3) - make it jack, maybe move to 1st col?
02:03 Another Lie: consistency thing
02:04 ByeForNow: ops, nice catch o:
02:04 ByeForNow: fixed
02:04 ByeForNow: I ctrl+G 00:15:055 (15055|1,15163|2) - too, for balance
02:06 Another Lie: 00:16:127 (16127|2,16234|1) - move 1 step to the right. Also 00:16:341 (16341|3,16413|2,16484|1,16555|0,16627|3,16698|2,16770|1,16841|0) -  for [https://puu.sh/v8aTX.png this] idea
02:07 ByeForNow: woo nice, applied
02:07 ByeForNow: my brain kinda stopped working in some sections of this difficulty
02:07 Another Lie: in my opinion, that idea is for consistency pitch [because this note having low sound 00:16:913 (16913|3,16984|2,17055|1,17127|0) - 
02:07 Another Lie: haha
02:07 ByeForNow: I think I was making this diff at 2 am or s/ lol
02:08 Another Lie: well, 2 am is for nocturne :D
02:08 ByeForNow: i agree with ur opinion \o/
02:08 ByeForNow: and yeah xD
02:08 Another Lie: 00:28:234 (28234|2) - change with short note, because the should stopped at 00:28:341 - 
02:09 ByeForNow: so u mean end ln at 00:28:341 - or change to a normal note?
02:09 Another Lie: yes
02:09 ByeForNow: which is it? :o
02:10 Another Lie: 00:28:234 (28234|2) - change with normal note at 00:28:234 - 
02:10 Another Lie: 3rd col
02:10 ByeForNow: okay
02:10 ByeForNow: wait well
02:10 ByeForNow: I kinda make it LN to 00:28:555 -
02:11 ByeForNow: to layer the sound from 00:28:341 - 00:28:555 - together
02:11 ByeForNow: not sure what sound is called :V
02:11 ByeForNow: maybe I add a LN note at 00:28:341 - ?
02:11 Another Lie: i don't hear long pitch there
02:12 ByeForNow: It's kinda like a wave-like sound
02:12 Another Lie: well, your choice :D
02:12 Another Lie: it's not that major issue
02:12 ByeForNow: hmm, I'll put it in first
02:13 ByeForNow: you're right about 00:28:234 - ending at 00:28:341 - though :D
02:13 ByeForNow: alright fix
02:13 Another Lie: :)
02:14 Another Lie: although i only modded under 200 BPM T_T
02:14 Another Lie: i only modded once 400 BPM
02:14 Another Lie: and it seriously damaged my ears
02:14 ByeForNow: wow 400 BPM?
02:14 ByeForNow: I can imagine D:
02:15 Another Lie: [https://osu.ppy.sh/s/499381 this one]
02:16 ByeForNow: >RoughSketch feat. Akapin
02:16 ByeForNow: !!!
02:16 ByeForNow: I'll check it out later :P
02:16 ByeForNow: Kobaryo makes nice speedcore sometimes
02:17 ByeForNow: imo, some of his songs are just sounds to damage your ears so yeah @_@
02:17 Another Lie: i'll suggest this for HP & OD
02:19 ByeForNow: 'this'?
02:19 Another Lie: https://puu.sh/v8bLi.png
02:20 ByeForNow: yeah, I'll do that
02:20 ByeForNow: the last diff name is a joke, I'll change it xD
02:20 Another Lie: :D
02:20 ByeForNow: mentioned in forum
02:21 Another Lie: ok, let's continue to novice
02:21 *Another Lie is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1257756 Kaneko Chiharu - iLLness LiLin [NOVICE]]
02:21 Another Lie: 00:01:341 (1341|2) - remove, not as loud as 00:00:913 (913|0,913|1) - 
02:22 Another Lie: 00:43:341 (43341|2) - consider shortened it to 00:43:555 - 
02:23 ByeForNow: 1st one applied,
02:24 Another Lie: 01:02:627 - add note at 1st col
02:24 ByeForNow: 2nd keep for now, want a little variety from all the 1/1 LN
02:24 Another Lie: 01:04:341 - add note 2nd col
02:24 Another Lie: 01:06:055 - add note 3rd col
02:24 Another Lie: 01:06:377 (66377|2) - move it to 1st / 4th, your choice
02:25 Another Lie: 01:06:805 (66805|3) - focus on main sound [consider delete it for better gameplay at normal diff] 
02:25 Another Lie: 01:07:770 - add note 4th col
02:25 Another Lie: respond if you're done
02:25 *Another Lie wait
02:26 ByeForNow: 1. , 2. , 3. ,4. moved to 4, fixed
02:26 Another Lie: k
02:26 *Another Lie continue
02:26 Another Lie: 01:09:484 - add note to 2nd col
02:27 Another Lie: 01:11:198 - add note to 3rd col
02:27 ByeForNow: 01:06:805 (66805|3) - , probably keep now, 01:06:377 (66377|3,66805|3) - is layering to the not obvious noise you're talking about
02:27 Another Lie: 01:12:055 (72055|2) - move to 2nd col for balance with 01:11:198 - 
02:27 ByeForNow: it's like an alternate to 01:03:055 (63055|1,63198|1,63341|1) -
02:27 ByeForNow: if remove 01:06:805 (66805|3) - , i think no reason to place 01:06:377 (66377|3) -  too
02:28 ByeForNow: 01:07:770 - fixed
02:28 ByeForNow: next 2 also fixed
02:28 Another Lie: well because i didn't hear 01:06:805 (66805|3) - that doesn't mean you need to remove this 01:06:377 (66377|2) - 
02:28 Another Lie: i hear this 01:06:377 (66377|2) - "nit" pitch
02:28 Another Lie: but i didn't hear "nit" at 01:06:805 (66805|3) - 
02:28 Another Lie: oh god
02:28 Another Lie: wrong
02:29 ByeForNow: I do however :S
02:29 Another Lie: totally wrong about them 01:06:377 (66377|2,66805|3) - 
02:29 ByeForNow: so keep for now I guess
02:29 Another Lie: it should be here 01:06:377 (66377|2,66805|3) - 
02:29 ByeForNow: oh?
02:29 Another Lie: 01:06:591 - 
02:29 Another Lie: there
02:29 Another Lie: hear with 25%
02:30 ByeForNow: ahh I see where you're getting at
02:31 Another Lie: i wasn't focused enough [curently 02:30 AM in my timezone]
02:31 ByeForNow: 01:06:270 - how about this doe
02:31 ByeForNow: It's 4:29 am here = u =...
02:32 Another Lie: 01:06:270 - hmm... i don't really know about this
02:32 Another Lie: when it comes to normal diff, i only mapped main sound
02:33 ByeForNow: I think I'll keep for now and ask people opinion about this b4 making a decision
02:33 Another Lie: ok
02:33 ByeForNow: It really is an odd sound lol
02:33 Another Lie: 01:12:913 - add note
02:33 Another Lie: to keep consistent
02:33 ByeForNow: done
02:34 Another Lie: ok done
02:34 *Another Lie done modding
02:34 ByeForNow: \o/
02:34 Another Lie: maybe for exhaust & above, i can't risk my ears :D
02:34 Another Lie: sorry for that
02:34 ByeForNow: okay wtf i just realised
02:34 ByeForNow: my computer is late by 1 hour
02:34 Another Lie: lol
02:34 ByeForNow: early by 1 hour*
02:34 ByeForNow: LOL
02:34 Another Lie: 280 BPM x 2
02:34 ByeForNow: I was like, why is my phone showing 3:33 am
02:35 ByeForNow: and yeah sure np :P
02:35 ByeForNow: oh yeah
02:35 ByeForNow: correction btw
02:35 ByeForNow: regarding metadata
02:35 ByeForNow: This song is from SDVX 4 where
02:35 Another Lie: i don't really know about sdvx
02:35 ByeForNow: GRAVITY is now known as HEAVENLY
02:35 Another Lie: ask Fresh Chicken for SDVX file
02:35 ByeForNow: so I changed it
02:35 ByeForNow: well, now you know :P
02:35 ByeForNow: nah
02:35 *ByeForNow plays SDVX
02:35 Another Lie: :O
02:35 ByeForNow: o uo
02:36 Another Lie: well, good luck for finding modders :D
Arzenvald
4,056 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
00:28:234 (28234|2,28234|3) - i'd make this a single note, then make some SV here, both HVN & EXH
00:52:341 (52341|2) - i'd shift this LN in EXH to differs it from HVN

00:52:341 (52341|2,108913|0,108966|1,109020|0) - this is harder in EXH, if you commit to use that LN structure, at least avoid those trills mostly 1 hand trill

01:51:484 (111484|3) - in HVN i'll make this inverse LN for teh lulz

i'd argue that you need 2nd ADV to make smoother gap between ADV & NOV xp
ByeForNow
283 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
ByeForNow

ajeemaniz wrote:

00:28:234 (28234|2,28234|3) - i'd make this a single note, then make some SV here, both HVN & EXH I think the part here is too short to make a decent SV, for me that is. I tried making a SV and it just feels unnecessary imo
00:52:341 (52341|2) - i'd shift this LN in EXH to differs it from HVN okay

00:52:341 (52341|2,108913|0,108966|1,109020|0) - this is harder in EXH, if you commit to use that LN structure, at least avoid those trills mostly 1 hand trill should be okay now after applying above

01:51:484 (111484|3) - in HVN i'll make this inverse LN for teh lulz lol sht just got real

i'd argue that you need 2nd ADV to make smoother gap between ADV & NOV xp If I have the time maybe
Thanks for mod~
genkicho
449 posts
Joined May 2013
genkicho
NM From My Mod Que


Col 1 2 3 4

HEAVENLY
00:02:627 (2627|3) - i think that part the piano change to 1/4
00:04:341 (4341|3,4341|2,4555|2,4555|3,4770|2,4770|3,4984|2,4984|3) - i think it looks bad, maybe rearrange like this
00:11:413 (11413|1,11520|1) - - i think thats not on purpose, and looks bad like that.... i suggest rearrange (?)
00:17:413 (17413|1,17413|3,17627|0,17627|2) - what are those doubles for (?)
00:41:198 (41198|3) - i suggest just use normal notes for this part, cuz the LNs dont fit that part
00:57:913 (57913|3,57913|2,58127|3,58127|2) - different piano sound, i suggest different column
00:58:770 (58770|0,58770|3) - i think should be mini LNs
00:59:198 (59198|3,59198|2,59413|2,59413|3) - different sound too
01:48:913 (108913|1) - this part i suggest use the mini LNs for piano, and normal notes for the other sound
01:54:055 (114055|2,114270|2,114484|2,114698|2,114913|2,115127|2,115341|2,115555|2) - rearrange (?)
i think thats all :>
ByeForNow
283 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
ByeForNow

genkicho wrote:

NM From My Mod Que


Col 1 2 3 4

HEAVENLY
00:02:627 (2627|3) - i think that part the piano change to 1/4 Not really necessary imo. Firstly I think it will be inconsistent as if following to the piano closely (listen at 25%), the piano is 1/4 only during 00:02:627 - 00:02:841 - slight pause then continue at 00:03:002 - with 00:03:323 - barely even hearing the piano sound. Therefore, while it is correct that the piano sound is 1/4. However I choose to simplify things out by just using a consistent 1/3 pattern, it seems to play out fine too so yeah.
00:04:341 (4341|3,4341|2,4555|2,4555|3,4770|2,4770|3,4984|2,4984|3) - i think it looks bad, maybe rearrange like this Nice catch
00:11:413 (11413|1,11520|1) - - i think thats not on purpose, and looks bad like that.... i suggest rearrange (?) Anchoring is done to layering kicks. I make it dense to compensate to the cymbal sound at 00:11:198 - where I only layered 2 notes as 3 notes wouldn't be comfortable to press imo.
00:17:413 (17413|1,17413|3,17627|0,17627|2) - what are those doubles for (?) I don't really have a nice arguement for this. However, imo, at the start of white line, the sound seems to be emphaisesed by a tiny bit to me. Otherwise, it's mainly just to make the pattern denser as the highest difficulty chart.
00:41:198 (41198|3) - i suggest just use normal notes for this part, cuz the LNs dont fit that part imo, I do think the LNs fit that part. It's a little nice touch to pattern variation when the rhythm changes from 1/4 to 1/3. Therefore, keep for now
00:57:913 (57913|3,57913|2,58127|3,58127|2) - different piano sound, i suggest different column alright, applied
00:58:770 (58770|0,58770|3) - i think should be mini LNs nice
00:59:198 (59198|3,59198|2,59413|2,59413|3) - different sound too done
01:48:913 (108913|1) - this part i suggest use the mini LNs for piano, and normal notes for the other sound If that's the case, everything would be LN as there's piano sound throughout the section lol. Hence, keep for now.
01:54:055 (114055|2,114270|2,114484|2,114698|2,114913|2,115127|2,115341|2,115555|2) - rearrange (?) oops, arranged
i think thats all :> Thanks for your help!
Soul Evans
Elite Mapper
425 posts
Joined June 2014
Soul Evans
Soul's Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4

General


  1. BPM: Okay
  2. Offset: Okay
  3. AiMod: Okay
  4. Tags: Okay
  5. BG: Okay
  6. Kiai: Okay
  7. Metadata: Okay
  8. Folder’s problem: None
  9. Hitsound: Okay
  10. Timing: Okay
  11. Other: Okay
    [ADVANCED]
  12. 00:03:341 (3341|0,3484|0) - i don't like how these notes are on top of each other, i know you probably did pitch for the streams which is nice, but the stack here kinda bothers me, i'd suggest doing something such as moving the last note to 4
  13. 00:03:484 - I think this is ok to use 1/4 for this brrr sound or w/e, it's suitable and all and it wont make it hard since the map is like 3.35
  14. 00:05:627 (5627|1,5948|1) - In some sections, you had this but i'm not really a fan of a note being ontop of a LN like that, maybe you can re-arange it in some ways to make it more flowey or something
  15. 00:10:341 (10341|3,10663|0) - this feels so empty for the section, like what i'm hearing this is technically easier than the sections before it so why not map 1/4? it's suitable i think
  16. 00:19:877 - I think you can add a note in column 3 or something since i can hear a beat here and it felt empty to play
  17. 00:20:627 (20627|3,20627|0,20734|2,20841|1,20841|0,20948|2,21055|1,21055|0) - I can advise changing the placement of these patterns because pitch changed here, so following it along side the notes under it, it would seem one-sided
  18. 00:23:305 - add a note here, same reasoning as i stated above it
  19. 00:30:270 - adding a bit of light 1/4 here would be better to emphasize stuff
  20. 00:32:788 (32788|2) - Not really a fan of this, i mean, it came out of nowhere and doesn't seem consistent to me, so i could recommend just removing it in this case
  21. 00:35:198 - Why are these LNs when sections similar like 00:26:627 - 00:23:198 - have notes? i dunno, doesn't seem consistent to me hence i suggest a change to be consistent, and also 00:35:305 - add a note here like what i suggested previously etc.
  22. 00:36:913 (36913|2,37020|1) - To avoid the stack beneath wouldn't it be better to CTRL+H?
  23. 00:37:663 (37663|2,37770|1,37877|2,37930|1,37984|0,38091|0,38198|1,38270|2,38341|1,38413|0) - not to be rude but i think this could be patterned better
ByeForNow
283 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
ByeForNow
Replying after hitsound is mostly done

Soul Evans wrote:

Soul's Modding
1 / 2 / 3 / 4

General


  1. BPM: Okay
  2. Offset: Okay
  3. AiMod: Okay
  4. Tags: Okay
  5. BG: Okay
  6. Kiai: Okay
  7. Metadata: Okay
  8. Folder’s problem: None
  9. Hitsound: Okay
  10. Timing: Okay
  11. Other: Okay
    [ADVANCED]
  12. 00:03:341 (3341|0,3484|0) - i don't like how these notes are on top of each other, i know you probably did pitch for the streams which is nice, but the stack here kinda bothers me, i'd suggest doing something such as moving the last note to 4 makes sense
  13. 00:03:484 - I think this is ok to use 1/4 for this brrr sound or w/e, it's suitable and all and it wont make it hard since the map is like 3.35 For consistency sake, I will keep since I've already used similar pattern such as at 00:05:627 (5627|1,5948|1) - ,00:05:627 (5627|1,5948|1) - + reason at next blue text
  14. 00:05:627 (5627|1,5948|1) - In some sections, you had this but i'm not really a fan of a note being ontop of a LN like that, maybe you can re-arange it in some ways to make it more flowey or something I can see what potential problem it might cause, arranged
  15. 00:10:341 (10341|3,10663|0) - this feels so empty for the section, like what i'm hearing this is technically easier than the sections before it so why not map 1/4? it's suitable i think The reason why I am using this pattern is to have a as smooth difficulty scale as much as possible from NOV -> ADV. As someone have mentioned that the advancement from NOV patterns to ADV patterns is already kinda too harsh, I will avoid adding more 1/4. However I will keep this in mind if I made a choice to make another difficulty in between NOV and ADV
  16. 00:19:877 - I think you can add a note in column 3 or something since i can hear a beat here and it felt empty to play Keep and will take note due to same reason above
  17. 00:20:627 (20627|3,20627|0,20734|2,20841|1,20841|0,20948|2,21055|1,21055|0) - I can advise changing the placement of these patterns because pitch changed here, so following it along side the notes under it, it would seem one-sided I agree!
  18. 00:23:305 - add a note here, same reasoning as i stated above it Explained why I wouldn't apply
  19. 00:30:270 - adding a bit of light 1/4 here would be better to emphasize stuff As for this part, I guess there's no harm since it's a much more noticeable sound than the sound mentioned in 00:10:341
  20. 00:32:788 (32788|2) - Not really a fan of this, i mean, it came out of nowhere and doesn't seem consistent to me, so i could recommend just removing it in this case After applying the mod above, I think this should be fine now since there's a little 1/4 before these patterns. It's meant to highlight the drum sounds, notes are placed according to pitch, anchoring is made due to similar sound. Rearranged the second similar pattern so it plays similar to first pattern
  21. 00:35:198 - Why are these LNs when sections similar like 00:26:627 - 00:23:198 - have notes? i dunno, doesn't seem consistent to me hence i suggest a change to be consistent, and also 00:35:305 - add a note here like what i suggested previously etc. Imo, Comparing 00:33:484 - 00:35:841 - to timing points like 00:26:627 -, 00:23:198 - as mentioned, 00:35:198 - are arguably different in terms of loudness; more emphasised during this section. Therefore, I made them as LN to show a difference, plus that section felt more hyped so imo it makes sense to place LN instead of NM note. Didn't add note as explained too
  22. 00:36:913 (36913|2,37020|1) - To avoid the stack beneath wouldn't it be better to CTRL+H? Nice catch!
  23. 00:37:663 (37663|2,37770|1,37877|2,37930|1,37984|0,38091|0,38198|1,38270|2,38341|1,38413|0) - not to be rude but i think this could be patterned better No problem, let's see if this pattern plays better
Thanks for the mod!
ByeForNow
283 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
ByeForNow
Hitsound is done. B)
However, I think it can be improved?
Arzenvald
4,056 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
> basic not suitable
fite me 8)
ByeForNow
283 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
ByeForNow

Arzenvald wrote:

> basic not suitable
fite me 8)
GD? 83
Abraxos
855 posts
Joined October 2014
Abraxos
I have nothing to do I'll mod this later lol

general


are you sure you dont want to resize your bg it looks weird

heavenly: 00:17:841 (17841|3,17859|2) - is this intentional its pretty weird

the highest diff of illness is MXM actually but heck

hvn

are you sure you want OD 8.5 theres a lot of LN releases

00:04:984 (4984|3,4984|2) - 00:05:627 (5627|0,5627|1) - 00:06:270 (6270|0,6270|2) - not sure why these are all different, with respect to the other LNs here the sounds are clearer but even at 00:04:984 - i can hear the synth pretty clearly at 00:05:091 -

00:10:716 (10716|1,10770|2,10823|1,10877|2,11038|1,11091|2,11145|1,11198|2) - maybe mirror the trills

00:11:091 (11091|2,11198|2,11305|2) - intentional?

00:17:198 (17198|2,17252|1,17305|2,17413|1,17466|2,17520|1,17627|2,17680|1,17734|2,17788|1) - are you sure you want to trill the inner columns because you know therye harder to hit than the outer columns
it also makes the entrance into the LNs weird

00:19:555 - for the LN section - i feel like this part is biased towards the inner columns, just see 00:19:770 (19770|2,19877|1,19984|2,20091|1,20198|1,20305|2,20413|1,20520|2) - these things and 00:20:734 (20734|1,20841|1,20948|1,21055|2,21163|2,21270|2) - and 00:26:627 (26627|1,26734|2,26841|2,26948|1,27055|1,27163|2,27270|2,27377|1) - 00:28:555 (28555|1,28663|2,28770|2,28877|1,28984|1,29091|2,29198|1,29198|2) - etc. etc.
im pretty sure you can switch hands/columns for the patterning up a bit here

00:38:627 - these should be chord gluts, not chordjacks imo
i dont really think having patterning like this really fits in well with the LNs, i mean the LNs are already kinda tight so
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the jacks dont have to be in the inner columns btw

00:44:627 (44627|3,44680|2,44734|3,44788|2) - pretty biased to the right here

00:48:913 - look at where the anchors fall in the stream here, almost every one is either in 2 or 3
is there a purpose in having this chart be mainly biased to the inner columns or

00:52:448 - piano note here
the beat (from here 00:52:341 - ) goes like dududu on 1/4 i really need to learn music

00:52:341 - not sure how i feel about slowjam LNs, theyre always so hard to acc reeeeeeeeeeee

01:25:127 (85127|2,85180|1,85234|2,85288|1,85395|2,85448|1,85502|2,85555|1,85984|2,86038|1,86091|2,86145|1) - you can definitely vary the trills here a bit, everything seems so center heavy here

01:28:877 (88877|2,88984|2) - is this intentional?

01:32:841 (92841|2,92948|1,93055|3,93055|2,93163|1,93270|0,93270|2,93377|3,93430|2) -01:46:555 (106555|3,106663|1,106770|0,106770|2,106877|1,106984|3,106984|2,107091|0,107145|1,107198|2) - 1/3 piano notes here

01:48:913 - not sure how i feel about the 1/4 LNs, theyre kinda hard to read on certain skins which can be annoying
01:51:484 (111484|2,111538|1,111591|2,111645|1,111752|2,111805|1,111859|2) - this worries me the most though, i dont think players will expect inverse LNs when youve mainly been giving quite straightforward LN streams and the like, hence the spike is pretty meh

ending stream is biased to the inner columns too

short mod because the chart is overall pretty clean

for exh:
01:48:913 - why is the ending of exh almost exactly the same as hvn bfn pls
same thing here as with hvn, the streams are pretty biased to the inner columns - you can check by playing the map through once

yeah i dont have much to nazi since this chart is decent to me so :+1:
maybe i can req this to a bn sometime
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Abraxos wrote:

I have nothing to do I'll mod this later lol
Thanks man \o/

Reply for hvn

Abraxos wrote:

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are you sure you dont want to resize your bg it looks weird Keep for now until I find a better bg xd

heavenly: 00:17:841 (17841|3,17859|2) - is this intentional its pretty weird Yes, it is intentional. Kinda like a style-ish ending if you get what I mean

the highest diff of illness is MXM actually but heck We don't really needa follow the game ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ (If BN mentions this as a problem watso/e I'll change it)

hvn

are you sure you want OD 8.5 theres a lot of LN releases Lowered to 8 if that's okay

00:04:984 (4984|3,4984|2) - 00:05:627 (5627|0,5627|1) - 00:06:270 (6270|0,6270|2) - not sure why these are all different, with respect to the other LNs here the sounds are clearer but even at 00:04:984 - i can hear the synth pretty clearly at 00:05:091 - Oh, you're right! Nice catch :O
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00:10:716 (10716|1,10770|2,10823|1,10877|2,11038|1,11091|2,11145|1,11198|2) - maybe mirror the trills I tried mirroring it and adjusting the pattern below to fit it but somehow it just doesn't play right imo.

00:11:091 (11091|2,11198|2,11305|2) - intentional? after the trills 00:10:716 (10716|1,10770|2,10823|1,10877|2,11038|1,11091|2,11145|1,11198|2) - 00:11:305 (11305|2) - is actually kinda easier to press due to muscle memory (Might be bull sh*t but that's how it felt for me)
I actually spend quite some time over these 2 mods within the box (=), adjusting (aka applying the mod) kinda affected a lot of pattern afterwards lmao... The patterns actually play fine for me so I'm kinda more inclined to keep the pattern. However, I also like ideas and suggestions to improve the map; do you have any pattern suggestions that I can probably look at to see? Maybe it's more favorable and I will probably use it instead of what I came up with
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00:17:198 (17198|2,17252|1,17305|2,17413|1,17466|2,17520|1,17627|2,17680|1,17734|2,17788|1) - are you sure you want to trill the inner columns because you know therye harder to hit than the outer columns
it also makes the entrance into the LNs weird Shifted notes around, let's see if this plays better!

00:19:555 - for the LN section - i feel like this part is biased towards the inner columns, just see 00:19:770 (19770|2,19877|1,19984|2,20091|1,20198|1,20305|2,20413|1,20520|2) - these things and 00:20:734 (20734|1,20841|1,20948|1,21055|2,21163|2,21270|2) - and 00:26:627 (26627|1,26734|2,26841|2,26948|1,27055|1,27163|2,27270|2,27377|1) - 00:28:555 (28555|1,28663|2,28770|2,28877|1,28984|1,29091|2,29198|1,29198|2) - etc. etc.
im pretty sure you can switch hands/columns for the patterning up a bit here
Because of how players are pretty much forced to hold notes due to mini LNs like 00:28:984 (28984|1) - or LN 00:22:984 (22984|3) -
Imo it feels really discomforting to the hands if you were to hold 23 and press 1 and 4 than hold 14 and press 2 and 3, aka joint problems. (280bpm..)
Also it's kinda for easier LN reading sake if that makes sense to you.
00:20:734 - just went with the flow after 00:20:627 (20627|2,20627|0,20627|3) - hence it's at 2,3

00:38:627 - these should be chord gluts, not chordjacks imo
i dont really think having patterning like this really fits in well with the LNs, i mean the LNs are already kinda tight so
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the jacks dont have to be in the inner columns btw
Interesting! I would definitely apply this if it wouldn't for 00:37:020 (37020|2,37020|0,37127|1,37127|2,37234|3,37234|1,37341|2,37341|0,37448|1,37448|3,37555|1,37555|2) - where the patterns would look similar.
For me, the chordjacks kinda makes the section look cleaner and more variation? I'll keep this in mind though

00:44:627 (44627|3,44680|2,44734|3,44788|2) - pretty biased to the right here True, arranged

00:48:913 - look at where the anchors fall in the stream here, almost every one is either in 2 or 3
is there a purpose in having this chart be mainly biased to the inner columns or Keep for now

00:52:448 - piano note here
the beat (from here 00:52:341 - ) goes like dududu on 1/4 i really need to learn music
abrax for musician hype. Anyways, I think it's better to just simplify things out and focus on the main piano sound. Plus slowjam, I doubt I wanna add more notes to make it more complicated lol

00:52:341 - not sure how i feel about slowjam LNs, theyre always so hard to acc reeeeeeeeeeee Should be fineeeee I mean I already lowered it to 0.9, it used to be 0.8 or something LOL. If it gets pointed out lotsa times I'll just remove it or something

01:25:127 (85127|2,85180|1,85234|2,85288|1,85395|2,85448|1,85502|2,85555|1,85984|2,86038|1,86091|2,86145|1) - you can definitely vary the trills here a bit, everything seems so center heavy here Let's see...

01:28:877 (88877|2,88984|2) - is this intentional? Arranged!

01:32:841 (92841|2,92948|1,93055|3,93055|2,93163|1,93270|0,93270|2,93377|3,93430|2) -01:46:555 (106555|3,106663|1,106770|0,106770|2,106877|1,106984|3,106984|2,107091|0,107145|1,107198|2) - 1/3 piano notes here Very nice catch! +_+

01:48:913 - not sure how i feel about the 1/4 LNs, theyre kinda hard to read on certain skins which can be annoying I kinda get mixed reviews about this, some people thinks it's nice, some people think it's okay, some people questions about it. So I guess I'll just keep it lol. I made them a little easier to press after making it less center column biased
01:51:484 (111484|2,111538|1,111591|2,111645|1,111752|2,111805|1,111859|2) - this worries me the most though, i dont think players will expect inverse LNs when youve mainly been giving quite straightforward LN streams and the like, hence the spike is pretty meh This is kinda made just for the lolz (aka might remove when checking) but on the same time I really wanna get an 'OK' for this pattern >w<! (for obvious reasons weee) I tried to make it more playable/readable now!

ending stream is biased to the inner columns too Should be better now

short mod because the chart is overall pretty clean Glad to know! (whew this is a short mod?)

for exh:
01:48:913 - why is the ending of exh almost exactly the same as hvn bfn pls Hello ^____^
same thing here as with hvn, the streams are pretty biased to the inner columns - you can check by playing the map through once Okie dokie

yeah i dont have much to nazi since this chart is decent to me so :+1: NAZI ABRAX!!! :joy::ok_hand:
maybe i can req this to a bn sometime That's nice of you haha. Revive rank he4ven when
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ByeForNow
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Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
ByeForNow

Arzenvald wrote:

do you like BASIC
osu file format v14

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Title:iLLness LiLin
TitleUnicode:iLLness LiLin
Artist:Kaneko Chiharu
ArtistUnicode:かねこちはる
Creator:ByeForNow
Version:Archy's BASIC
Source:SOUNDS VOLTEX IV HEAVENLY HEAVEN
Tags:the 6th kac original song contest winner aonasai near noah pirates welcome to heaven sdvx 4
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192,192,71198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,71198,128,0,72055:0:0:0:0:
64,192,72055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,72055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,72913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72913,128,0,73770:0:0:0:0:
64,192,74627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,74948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,75270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,75913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,76341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,76770,128,0,76984:0:0:0:0:
448,192,76984,128,0,77198:0:0:0:0:
64,192,77198,128,0,78055:0:0:0:0:
448,192,78055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,78377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,79127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,79341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,79984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,80627,128,0,81055:0:0:0:0:
448,192,81055,128,0,81484:0:0:0:0:
64,192,81484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,81913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,82127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,83413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,84270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84484,128,0,84913:0:0:0:0:
320,192,84913,128,0,86627:0:0:0:0:
448,192,84913,128,0,86627:0:0:0:0:
64,192,86627,128,0,88341:0:0:0:0:
192,192,88341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,88984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,89413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,89627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,89841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,90055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,90270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,90484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,90698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,91127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,91555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,91770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,92413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,92841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,93055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,93484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,94127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,94770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,94984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,95198,128,0,96055:0:0:0:0:
64,192,95198,128,0,96055:0:0:0:0:
192,192,96055,128,0,96913:0:0:0:0:
448,192,96484,128,0,96913:0:0:0:0:
64,192,96913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,97555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,97984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,98413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,99270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,100127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,100341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,100555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,100770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,100984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,101198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,101413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,101627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,101841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,102055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,102377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,102698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,103127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,103555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,103770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,105055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,105484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,106555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,106984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,107198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,107520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,107841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,108055,128,0,108698:0:0:0:0:
448,192,108913,128,0,109770:0:0:0:0:
320,192,109341,128,0,109770:0:0:0:0:
64,192,109770,128,0,110627:0:0:0:0:
192,192,110198,128,0,110627:0:0:0:0:
448,192,110627,128,0,111913:0:0:0:0:
320,192,110841,128,0,111913:0:0:0:0:
192,192,111055,128,0,111913:0:0:0:0:
64,192,111270,128,0,111913:0:0:0:0:
64,192,112341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,112984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,113413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,113627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,114055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,114055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,114698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,115127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,115770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,115984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,116413,128,0,117484:0:0:0:0:
192,192,116627,128,0,117484:0:0:0:0:
64,192,117484,128,0,118341:0:0:0:0:
You really made it lmao, I'm sorry for being a lazy a.hole xd
Raveille
787 posts
Joined February 2012
Raveille
M4M on this owo.

Will only do mods on the GDs cause they have 0 mods right now.

|1|2|3|4|

BASIC
00:02:627 (2627|2) - this to 4 for emphasis on that super high piano note
00:24:484 (24484|2,25127|1) - ctrl+h for better playability and also creates symmetry in column 3 and following up column 2
00:36:055 (36055|1) - this should be an LN cause it can act as the sudden beat chopping part of the music
01:27:913 - LN at either 3 or 4 till 01:28:341 - for emphasis on the rolling beats

ADVANCED (Archy)
00:09:270 (9270|2,9377|3,9484|2,9591|1,9698|0) - make this a bit more varies other than just copying the pattern from before. like this for instance
00:26:734 (26734|3,26948|3,27163|3,27377|3) - move this whole thing to 3 cause eeeeeee the 4th column
00:28:127 (28127|0,28234|0) - it is an ADVANCED diff so maybe you could move this to column 3 instead?
00:32:627 - note at 1? feels abrupt not to have a note at the first line of a new part
01:12:055 (72055|0) - can this LN cut off at 01:12:913 - ?
01:26:627 (86627|0,86627|3) - these can be LNs till 01:27:913 -
01:56:413 - the 1/4 part should start here instead

good luck on ranking! BEAT FRESH CHICKEN
Arzenvald
4,056 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
i'll skip 01:26:627 because i like it empty for some visual reason, and 00:32:627 the spacing intended to emphasize the previous snare, wow rad mod thanks radelie! <3
Vortex-
139 posts
Joined October 2014
Vortex-
HEAVENLY
00:10:716 (10716|1,10770|2,10770|0,10823|1) - Abit of a akward patterns is it?

00:17:859 (17859|2) - Thats a weird placement for an LN

00:17:859 (17859|2) - Missing a note here

00:42:055 (42055|2) - This LN may be unnecessary

00:42:966 (42966|1,43020|2,43073|1,43127|2) - Having a thrill here might be akward to play

00:43:234 (43234|1,43341|1) - Small jack here? Re-arrange this if you can

00:44:627 - Maybe use LN for this small section?

00:52:341 - What happened to the piano sounds here? They seem to appear later on, but I can recommend mapping them from the start on, for the consistency's sake.

01:06:413 (66413|1) - Spooky ghostnote? :thinking:

01:16:823 (76823|2) - Dem läskiga spök noterna is appearing again

01:18:109 (78109|1) - Same as above

01:52:055 - You missed a piano sound note here

01:54:270 (114270|3,114270|2) - You need to have a reason for a jump here.
01:54:484 (114484|2,114484|0) - And here

And done with mod!

The map seems to be over all consistent and fun to play!

Gl with ranku! :)
ByeForNow
283 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
ByeForNow

Vortex- wrote:

HEAVENLY
00:10:716 (10716|1,10770|2,10770|0,10823|1) - Abit of a akward patterns is it? Should be okay now

00:17:859 (17859|2) - Thats a weird placement for an LN Intended for a stylish entrance before 00:18:055 -

00:17:859 (17859|2) - Missing a note here Is this a wrong timing stamp? If not, I don't see any missing notes

00:42:055 (42055|2) - This LN may be unnecessary LN is to layer the piano loud dragging piano sound

00:42:966 (42966|1,43020|2,43073|1,43127|2) - Having a thrill here might be akward to play Let's see if this works better

00:43:234 (43234|1,43341|1) - Small jack here? Re-arrange this if you can It doesn't really bother the gameplay that much imo so keep for now

00:44:627 - Maybe use LN for this small section? I really wanna apply this. However I have to reject. I can see why you have the idea of making LN for this small section. However, they kinda stick out like a sore thumb, aka too sudden imo. I will keep this in mind though

00:52:341 - What happened to the piano sounds here? They seem to appear later on, but I can recommend mapping them from the start on, for the consistency's sake. I'll layer the more obvious piano sounds for this part, I don't wanna cramp up too much notes in the Layering (LN+Notes) pattern

01:06:413 (66413|1) - Spooky ghostnote? :thinking: Not too sure about this, will confirm with a BN

01:16:823 (76823|2) - Dem läskiga spök noterna is appearing again I'm sorry what? lol. If you're talking about this being a ghost note, I have to disagree as it's layered to a instrument I can hear

01:18:109 (78109|1) - Same as above ^

01:52:055 - You missed a piano sound note here Intended as a break from the intense LN pattern before

01:54:270 (114270|3,114270|2) - You need to have a reason for a jump here. Jump to emphasis the high pitch noise of the sounds, similar reason how I layered 01:18:109 (78109|1) -
01:54:484 (114484|2,114484|0) - And here ^

And done with mod! wwww\o/

The map seems to be over all consistent and fun to play! Glad to hear!

Gl with ranku! :)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi
Hi Hi Hi ___Cliche q___Hi Hi Hi
Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi
Let's start
0|1|2|3
General
* Listen closely from 00:02:627 to 00:03:484 , they are all 1/4 stream
Heavenly
00:16:913 (16913|3,16984|2,17055|1,17127|0) - I would suggest turning this into 1/3 long LNs
00:34:555 (34555|1,34555|3) - Why only 1/4 long, it should be 1/2 long
00:34:984 (34984|2,34984|0) - What I am seeing here is that you map the pssssssh sound? as 1/4 LNs. If I'm correct then these should be 1/4 long
00:38:270 (38270|2,38341|1,38413|2,38484|1,38555|0) - Why using LNs here
00:39:698 (39698|3,39698|1,39752|2,39805|1,39859|0) - Chord trills?
00:40:341 (40341|0,40341|3,40395|1,40448|2,40502|0,40555|1,40555|3,40609|2,40663|1,40716|3) - ^
00:42:913 (42913|3,42913|0,42966|1,43020|2,43073|0) - ^
00:43:984 (43984|1,43984|3,44038|2) - ^
And all the other same part
00:57:163 (57163|0) - 1/2 long LN?
00:57:377 (57377|1) - ^
Yeah the rest is pretty good (^_^)b
Hope this mod help you and GL for ranking (sry short mod though :( )
ByeForNow
283 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
ByeForNow
applying on monday ...done
edit:

[B A D] wrote:

Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hello
Hi Hi Hi ___Cliche q___Hi Hi Hi Hi
Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi Hi uh.. hi?
Let's start okay xd
0|1|2|3
General
* Listen closely from 00:02:627 to 00:03:484 , they are all 1/4 stream check reply in genkicho's mod
Heavenly
00:16:913 (16913|3,16984|2,17055|1,17127|0) - I would suggest turning this into 1/3 long LNs sureww
00:34:555 (34555|1,34555|3) - Why only 1/4 long, it should be 1/2 long to have the note different from 00:34:341 (34341|1,34341|3) - for pitch
00:34:984 (34984|2,34984|0) - What I am seeing here is that you map the pssssssh sound? as 1/4 LNs. If I'm correct then these should be 1/4 long following 00:29:841 - , similar sound
00:38:270 (38270|2,38341|1,38413|2,38484|1,38555|0) - Why using LNs here For piano sounds. I didn't use LN for 00:37:288 - for the notes to resemble the drum more than the pianos
00:39:698 (39698|3,39698|1,39752|2,39805|1,39859|0) - Chord trills? No thanks, they're pretty obnoxious to press on 280 bpm lol and chord trills kinda makes the emphaising of pitch less obvious too imo.
00:40:341 (40341|0,40341|3,40395|1,40448|2,40502|0,40555|1,40555|3,40609|2,40663|1,40716|3) - ^ ^
00:42:913 (42913|3,42913|0,42966|1,43020|2,43073|0) - ^ ^
00:43:984 (43984|1,43984|3,44038|2) - ^ ^
And all the other same part
00:57:163 (57163|0) - 1/2 long LN? buffed up section >:)
00:57:377 (57377|1) - ^ ^
Yeah the rest is pretty good (^_^)b sounds great!
Hope this mod help you and GL for ranking (sry short mod though :( ) I think it made the map harder haha :P. Np, any help is greatly appreciated
Umo-
1,443 posts
Joined April 2016
Umo-
NM req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
You should check IRC mod becuase there are somne unicode artist that coflicts with the difficulties
NOVICE
00:24:913 - 00:28:234 - imo that part is unbalanced between right and left hand
00:34:555 (34555|3) - move to 4 to avoid jackhammer
00:44:948 (44948|4) - imo the LN fits better when its in 3rd column
00:45:698 - 00:51:270 - imo you should remove all of the double notes at that part because there aren't any strong sounds that support them
01:12:055 (61255|3) - move to 2 because there are too many notes in the 3rd column
01:24:913 - 01:26:627 - it would be better if you only placed only 1 LN at that part because I dont see what sound the current notes are following
Archy's ADVANCED
00:07:877 - meybe add a note here?
00:09:163 - ^
01:19:341 - meybe move those 3 notes in the 3rd column? imo its more pleasnt to play
Okay my mod stops here :D
Good Luck! :)
RuberusuScarlet
1,476 posts
Joined April 2013
RuberusuScarlet


Archy's ADVANCED>song setup>Artist

ã‹ã­ã“ã¡ã¯ã‚‹ :arrow: かねこちはる

pls no kudos
good luck
ByeForNow
283 posts
Joined October 2015
Topic Starter
ByeForNow

imtdb1 wrote:

NM req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
You should check IRC mod becuase there are somne unicode artist that coflicts with the difficulties oops, must've been my local unicode screwing things up lol. Waiting for Archy's update
NOVICE
00:24:913 - 00:28:234 - imo that part is unbalanced between right and left hand fixed I hope
00:34:555 (34555|3) - move to 4 to avoid jackhammer Purpose of minijack is to emphaise the sound better, keep for now
00:44:948 (44948|4) - imo the LN fits better when its in 3rd column Nice catch
00:45:698 - 00:51:270 - imo you should remove all of the double notes at that part because there aren't any strong sounds that support them Makes sense but I kinda wanted to make it more challenging with a consistent pattern with jump to start off each sections. I'll keep this pattern for now and if more people mention about this, I'll remove the jumps
01:12:055 (61255|3) - move to 2 because there are too many notes in the 3rd column Opps, yes!
01:24:913 - 01:26:627 - it would be better if you only placed only 1 LN at that part because I dont see what sound the current notes are following The LN is intended to layer the bell-like sound
Okay my mod stops here :D :D
Good Luck! :) Thanks for your help! \o/
Arzenvald
4,056 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
01:19:341 (79341|0,79448|0,79555|0) - ok, the rest keep, thanks!
Shima Rin
1,304 posts
Joined March 2015
Shima Rin
Hi, NM Request in my modding queue ;)

[EXHAUST]
  1. 00:02:627 - to 00:03:484 - all notes should be 1/4 snapped instead of 1/3
  2. 00:04:770 - 00:05:413 - 00:06:698 - 00:07:341 - 00:08:198 - 00:08:841 - 00:09:484 - 00:10:127 - Why you stop double all of these sounds? imo your double note use in this part is a bit irregular
  3. 00:11:198 - cuz there is a crash sound. i guess u may use triple
  4. 00:11:627 - 00:12:270 - 00:12:913 - 00:13:555 - 00:14:198 - same thing, irregualr double note use
  5. 00:21:270 - i guess one more short LN is needed which resembles this line 00:22:984 -
  6. 00:27:805 (27805|2,28020|2) - i really think u should double this two, cuz the sounds there are exactly still voice+kick
  7. 00:28:341 (28341|1) - actually no sound at all, this LN does not make sense
  8. 00:36:377 (36377|2,36377|3) - u should still keep short LNs here
  9. 00:45:270 (45270|1) - why this LN ends on a blue line....
  10. 00:45:484 - same thing, from this part put doubles on all white lines
  11. 01:19:341 (79341|0,79448|0,79555|0) - i can get your idea about these LNs, but what about these 01:21:913 (81913|2,82020|2,82127|2) - 01:22:770 (82770|1,82877|1,82984|1) - ? i dont really think here a group of 3 same sounds appear.If u wanna still keep short LNs, i guess u should also put on 01:22:234 - 01:23:091 - and etc.
  12. 01:32:841 (92841|3,93055|1,93055|0,93270|0,93270|3) - i guess you misplace double here. Try to follow your previous patten will be better
  13. 01:34:555 (94555|2,94770|2,94770|3) - ^
  14. 01:47:198 - if u wanna kind of put doubles on the overlapping time of heavy piano sound and heavy kick (what u've done before), then this should also be a double
  15. 01:57:484 (117484|2) - suggest LN ends here 01:58:127 -
[HEAVENLY]
  1. I guess this diff should be called MAXIMUM instead of HEAVENLY? according to chicken's set
  2. 00:03:913 - triple better cuz with voice+kick
  3. 00:04:341 - from this part same problem with EXHAUST, no more clarification i guess. Next time meets this problem i won't mention ok?
  4. 00:30:484 (30484|3,30484|2,30484|0) - music here isn't loud enough for triple i guess, maybe double
  5. 00:30:913 - double this
  6. 00:43:341 - suggest change like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8374553
  7. 00:50:841 (50841|0,50841|2) - 00:51:055 (51055|0,51055|3) - 00:51:270 (51270|1,51270|3) - here u have double notes, why not also place such in the previous two bars?
  8. 00:51:484 (51484|3) - delete this cuz no need to double
  9. 00:53:198 - better make this part like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8374567
  10. 01:12:055 - double needed
  11. 01:13:341 (73341|0) - but no need for this
  12. 01:21:913 (81913|1,81913|3,82020|1,82020|3,82127|1,82127|3) - like what I mention in EXHAUST
  13. 01:57:484 (117484|1) - same as EXHAUST
Hey This map is nice ;) Good Luck and hope my mods help you!
Ochasan
522 posts
Joined February 2015
Ochasan
ulululu

this one, harder
click
Archy's BASIC
01:50:627 (110627|3,110841|2,111055|1,111270|0) i don't think so, this is able for basic diff?

NOVICE
ehehehe :3 widescreen checklist plz :>
00:17:841 i think better add 1 or 2 notes instead of single LN
00:32:520 add 1 maybe
00:37:663 ^
00:44:948 (44948|3) this one harder for normal diff, delete it

i don't like to mod ADVANCED until 1 of true ADVANCED is out (really? 2 diff in 1 map)

EXHAUST
00:10:020 better
00:17:198 consider BPM and patter like this plz, 1234 or 1243 is better
00:42:913 this
00:44:305 (44305|1,44359|2) move to left edge then 00:44:413 (44413|1,44413|0) move to right edge

so far so good
ByeForNow
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a replying
ADVANCED -> EXHAUST
EXHAUST -> MAXIMUM
这样就不会搞乱了吧~
For future reference
>00:02:627 - to 00:03:484 - all notes should be 1/4 snapped instead of 1/3
Let's just keep it like this lol, not a lot of people would like 280bpm stream right off the bat

genkicho wrote:

00:02:627 (2627|3) - i think that part the piano change to 1/4 Not really necessary imo. Firstly I think it will be inconsistent as if following to the piano closely (listen at 25%), the piano is 1/4 only during 00:02:627 - 00:02:841 - slight pause then continue at 00:03:002 - with 00:03:323 - barely even hearing the piano sound. Therefore, while it is correct that the piano sound is 1/4. However I choose to simplify things out by just using a consistent 1/3 pattern, it seems to play out fine too so yeah.[/color]
ByeForNow
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Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi, NM Request in my modding queue ;)

[EXHAUST MAXIMUM]
  1. 00:02:627 - to 00:03:484 - all notes should be 1/4 snapped instead of 1/3 Posted reply for this part
  2. 00:04:770 - 00:05:413 - 00:06:698 - 00:07:341 - 00:08:198 - 00:08:841 - 00:09:484 - 00:10:127 - Why you stop double all of these sounds? imo your double note use in this part is a bit irregular It is kinda a bit irregular I guess. Treat 00:04:555 (4555|2,4555|1,4663|3,4770|0,4877|2,4984|1,4984|0) - as one section, the pattern will make more sense
  3. 00:11:198 - cuz there is a crash sound. i guess u may use triple O-k!
  4. 00:11:627 - 00:12:270 - 00:12:913 - 00:13:555 - 00:14:198 - same thing, irregualr double note use Explained
  5. 00:21:270 - i guess one more short LN is needed which resembles this line 00:22:984 - Lack of one more short LN to make it easier than HVN
  6. 00:27:805 (27805|2,28020|2) - i really think u should double this two, cuz the sounds there are exactly still voice+kick My intention was to make it jump per white line with the exception of 00:28:234 (28234|1,28234|0) -. Like a powerful ending before the silence (sorta) at 00:28:341 -
  7. 00:28:341 (28341|1) - actually no sound at all, this LN does not make sense >before the silence (sorta). I made this LN to layer the increasing scratch sound
  8. 00:36:377 (36377|2,36377|3) - u should still keep short LNs here Agree! (applied to HVN too)
  9. 00:45:270 (45270|1) - why this LN ends on a blue line.... Because of this 00:45:484 (45484|0,45484|3,45484|1) -
  10. 00:45:484 - same thing, from this part put doubles on all white lines Sorry no, keeping it simpler than HVN for difficulty curve sake
  11. 01:19:341 (79341|0,79448|0,79555|0) - i can get your idea about these LNs, but what about these 01:21:913 (81913|2,82020|2,82127|2) - 01:22:770 (82770|1,82877|1,82984|1) - ? i dont really think here a group of 3 same sounds appear.If u wanna still keep short LNs, i guess u should also put on 01:22:234 - 01:23:091 - and etc. Keeping the LNs as it's layering the bell-like noise. Not adding more LNs because it'll become obnoxious to play imo
  12. 01:32:841 (92841|3,93055|1,93055|0,93270|0,93270|3) - i guess you misplace double here. Try to follow your previous patten will be better Nice catch!
  13. 01:34:555 (94555|2,94770|2,94770|3) - ^
  14. 01:47:198 - if u wanna kind of put doubles on the overlapping time of heavy piano sound and heavy kick (what u've done before), then this should also be a double Good!
  15. 01:57:484 (117484|2) - suggest LN ends here 01:58:127 - Looks good! (applied to HVN too)
[HEAVENLY]
  1. I guess this diff should be called MAXIMUM instead of HEAVENLY? according to chicken's set a
  2. 00:03:913 - triple better cuz with voice+kick Sure thing
  3. 00:04:341 - from this part same problem with EXHAUST, no more clarification i guess. Next time meets this problem i won't mention ok? 00:04:555 (4555|2,4555|3,4663|1,4770|2,4770|3,4877|0,4984|3,5091|2) -
  4. 00:30:484 (30484|3,30484|2,30484|0) - music here isn't loud enough for triple i guess, maybe double Keep for now for difficulty curve
  5. 00:30:913 - double this O-K
  6. 00:43:341 - suggest change like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8374553 Keeping it simple
  7. 00:50:841 (50841|0,50841|2) - 00:51:055 (51055|0,51055|3) - 00:51:270 (51270|1,51270|3) - here u have double notes, why not also place such in the previous two bars? Increasing density in stream
  8. 00:51:484 (51484|3) - delete this cuz no need to double True
  9. 00:53:198 - better make this part like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8374567 Sorry no. The pattern might be confusing because I'm alternating between the treble and bass
  10. 01:12:055 - double needed Nice one!
  11. 01:13:341 (73341|0) - but no need for this nm for piano, ln for the increasing scratch
  12. 01:21:913 (81913|1,81913|3,82020|1,82020|3,82127|1,82127|3) - like what I mention in EXHAUST Explained
  13. 01:57:484 (117484|1) - same as EXHAUST OK!
Hey This map is nice ;) Good Luck and hope my mods help you! Thank you very much! >w<
ByeForNow
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Ochasan wrote:

ulululu

this one, harder
Archy's BASIC
01:50:627 (110627|3,110841|2,111055|1,111270|0) i don't think so, this is able for basic diff? Yes, it is ok imo

NOVICE
ehehehe :3 widescreen checklist plz :> Should be ok now?
00:17:841 i think better add 1 or 2 notes instead of single LN Sure
00:32:520 add 1 maybe [color=#BF00FFF]Keeping it simple with only jump at first beat of time signature[/color]
00:37:663 ^ ^
00:44:948 (44948|3) this one harder for normal diff, delete it Keep for now, it should be fine

i don't like to mod ADVANCED until 1 of true ADVANCED is out (really? 2 diff in 1 map)
...?

EXHAUST MAXIMUM
00:10:020 better No thanks, prefer to keep the alternating notes for pattern consistency
00:17:198 consider BPM and patter like this plz, 1234 or 1243 is better It's just a dense pattern for not more than 1 sec, it should be fine. 1234 1243 is kinda too bland
00:42:913 this Keep for something different from 00:40:341 (40341|3,40341|1,40395|2,40448|1,40502|0,40555|3,40609|2,40663|0,40716|1) -
00:44:305 (44305|1,44359|2) move to left edge then 00:44:413 (44413|1,44413|0) move to right edge Tight pattern is intended for the sound

so far so good Thanks for your mod!
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10:49 ByeForNow: It's a freerum o wo
10:59 ByeForNow: o.o..
11:00 Feerum: No. Feerum. Not Freerum. 
11:00 ByeForNow: F-freerum!
11:00 ByeForNow: O:
11:02 ByeForNow: Sorry to bother you = w=
11:02 ByeForNow: Can I ask for a map quality check?
11:07 Feerum: What do you mean with "quality check". Checking a Qualified Beatmap?
11:08 ByeForNow: No no as in
11:08 ByeForNow: checking in the quality of map
11:08 ByeForNow: if it's ready for bn checking
11:09 Feerum: Well. I really can't tell you this. The BN's decide what is ready for rank and what not. Every BN has a different view of "What is ready for BN check" ya know'. I could say yes but the BNs still can say no because they are unhappy with some Parts. 
11:09 Feerum: The best thing you could do is to ask several BNs for a Testplay and feedback. 
11:09 ByeForNow: Hmm..
11:09 ByeForNow: I see D:
11:09 ByeForNow: Alright then = w=
11:10 Feerum: But what map?
11:10 *ByeForNow is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1270595 Kaneko Chiharu - iLLness LiLin]
11:11 *Feerum is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1255419 Kaneko Chiharu - iLLness LiLin [HEAVENLY]]
11:12 Feerum: 00:02:627 -  The Piano is here 1/4 already. 
11:12 Feerum: in 1/3 it's wrong snapped
11:12 ByeForNow: oh
11:12 ByeForNow: I'll change that
11:13 Feerum: 00:17:859 (17859|2) -  is this 1/12 snap intended? 
11:13 Feerum: I mean it somehow makes sense, just want to be sure
11:13 ByeForNow: yes
11:13 ByeForNow: It's kinda like a 'stylish' entrance
11:13 ByeForNow: lol
11:14 Feerum: 00:24:216 -  You "could" add here a note on 4. Idk. Here's already a 1/4 sound. But that's optional. If you rather just follow the loud drums thats fine too
11:15 ByeForNow: I'll choose to just follow the loud drums
11:16 Feerum: 00:30:484 (30484|0,30484|1,30484|3) -  is this Hard here needed? Without the Hand i would make you a pretty cool pattern suggestion
11:16 ByeForNow: Lemme take a look at your suggestion first? o:
11:17 Feerum: Ehhh ofc my push doesn't like me now aaa one sec
11:17 ByeForNow: npnp
11:17 ByeForNow: take your time~~
11:17 Feerum: This here would be my suggestion http://puu.sh/wIpQE/b1ce253d25.png
11:17 Feerum: The marked notes have all the same sound
11:18 Feerum: that's why they placed on the same column
11:18 Feerum: If you try it you will see what i mean
11:18 Feerum: It gives a better feeling while playing. Like if you actually try to follow something :D
11:19 ByeForNow: wooow
11:19 ByeForNow: O_O
11:19 ByeForNow: splendid! :D I'll go for your suggestion
11:19 ByeForNow: I like it XD
11:19 Feerum: yay
11:20 ByeForNow: o wo~
11:21 Feerum: 01:16:823 (76823|2) -  this one is a ghost note
11:21 Feerum: no 1/4 anymore
11:22 ByeForNow: uu nice catch
11:23 ByeForNow: 01:16:770 (76770|1,76770|3,76877|1,76877|0) - This should be fine right
11:23 ByeForNow: not shifted I mean
11:23 ByeForNow: replicating 01:16:341 (76341|2,76448|2) -
11:24 Feerum: Yeah seems fine
11:24 ByeForNow: o wo)bbb
11:25 Feerum: Yeah remaining looks fine for me
11:25 ByeForNow: Okayy
11:26 Feerum: Just change the snap in the other diffs too i pointed out
11:26 Feerum: I think you could ask a BN
11:26 ByeForNow: Alrightly
11:26 ByeForNow: uu okay
11:26 Feerum: But like i said. They can still say no 
11:26 Feerum: Gonna post this in the thread~

good luck!
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source is wrong, it's SOUND* VOLTEX IV HEAVENLY HAVEN* xd
ByeForNow
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Kii_Piuer wrote:

source is wrong, it's SOUND* VOLTEX IV HEAVENLY HAVEN* xd
!!! Corrected, thank you~~
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