1. 02:12:713 - I think this part is not well timed. 02:07:139 - This TP Should've 127139 offset.
2. 00:09:049 (4,5,6) - Don't you think this flow will be better a bit when you'll move 00:09:549 (5,6) - these circles a bit to up? Like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7947174 I think it makes this composition smoother to aim.
3. 01:47:300 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+g would make it more comfortable and smoother I think.
4. 01:53:653 (3) - What are you think about moving this slider a bit to left to obtain perfect symmetry triangle between ends of 01:52:947 (1,2,3) - these sliders? Something like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7947210
5. 02:12:272 (2) - I think you can curve this slider less, because it will make nice blanket composition with 02:12:802 (1) - this slider. And ofc it will keep consistancy with other moments of map. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7947242 If you do this I prefer stack 02:12:272 (2,3) - these sliderends.
6. 02:33:978 (1,2) - I don't think these circles should be stacked, because rythm between them is too strong. You can stack 02:33:802 (6,2) - these circles and it should work well.
7. 02:50:034 (4,5) - I think this flow is very uncomfortable. I prefer stack 02:50:373 (5) - this circle with 02:49:695 (3) - this sliderend to obtain better flow.
8. 02:55:966 - This clap should be clickable. What are you think about rytmical Ctrl+g 02:55:627 (5,1) - here?
9. 03:02:067 (3) - You can curve this slider less to down to obtain nice in visual slidershapes stack with 03:03:254 (2) - this slider, like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7947305
10. 03:35:538 (2,4) - Why not blanket here? It'll make nice symmetry composition with 03:35:201 (1,3) - these sliders.
11. 04:06:454 (1) - Ctrl+g will make flow between 04:06:121 (10,1) - these sliders more smoother and will add here nice circular movement.
12. 04:15:288 (3,4,5) - This movement is weird. To fix it you can make small overlap 04:14:954 (2,4) - here, like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7947339
13. 04:35:523 (4,5) - This compositon should be spaced more than previous, because rythm gap is bigger and currently one composition is very misleading while playing.
14. 04:54:356 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - I think this stream is kinda overmapped, because you haven't here rythm like this.
15. 06:09:432 (1) - This note should be emphasised a bit more (by increasing spacing)
16. 06:24:673 (3) - I think you can curve this slider a bit more to make nice blanket shapes composition, like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7947388
17. 06:37:989 (8) - This note is missing clap I think.
18. 07:03:690 (1,2,3,4,1) - Looks overspaced, I think you can decrease spacing here a bit.
19. 07:15:217 (2,3,4) - I think these sounds are not important like you emphasised them, better option is making here sliders instead of circles.
20. 07:32:125 (3) - This wave can be more symmetrical (by moving 3rd slider path point a bit to left).
21. 08:18:790 (1) - This slider should be spaced more, because you've stacked it like 08:17:614 (1,2) - these ones, but here you've much stronger rythm.
22. 08:22:172 (1,2) - This flow is a bit weird, because 08:22:614 (2) - this circle seems a bit random placed. I prefer use composition like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7947442

SLM wrote:

학교 안가고 하는모딩

[princess]

* 00:08:549 (2,3) - 여기에비해 00:16:549 (2,3) - 이게 보컬이 강조된 느낌이 부족한듯해서 이미 모양을 잡아놔서 고치긴 힘들듯
삼각형 크기 약간 늘리는게 어떨까요 http://puu.sh/vCQQy/731491d5d8.jpg

* 00:36:032 (1,2) - 이런식으로 컨h 하는게 흐름이 좀더 좋을거같음 http://puu.sh/vCQFQ/77bfa2df85.jpg 1에 강조를 주고싶어서
저렇게 둔거임

* 01:59:212 (3,4) - 이 두개를 01:58:947 (2) - 살짝 겹치는건 어떨까요 http://puu.sh/vCRMa/b173d93d29.jpg 이런식으로 겹치는거
초초초초 야다

* 02:33:260 (3,4,5,6) - 조금씩 겹치는 점프는 어떨까요
http://puu.sh/vCS7u/86c7b52cd6.jpg or 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/vCSgX/cba86fa2f0.jpg ^

* 03:36:212 (4) - 이건 왜 안 컨쥐죠 03:37:560 (6) - 복붙해서 그대로 쓰면 될듯한데 for fun..

* 04:45:857 (4) - 04:47:190 (4) - 여기 뉴콤 넣는게 1/3리딩에 더 도움이 되지않을까 생각 별로 상관없을거 같음

* 05:13:039 (1) - 이거 05:12:706 (4) - 랑 스택하는게 보기에 더 깔끔할듯 1에 큰 점프를 주고싶지 않아서..

* 07:15:059 (1,2,3,4) - 여기 소리는 약한데 너무 오버매핑아닌지..? 1/2 단타랑은 좀 안맞는듯
1/2슬라 두개 쓰는게 어떨까요 대충 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/vCUfL/311840b556.jpg For Fun

끗

_Meep_ wrote:

:) no kanade?

[C u r i] wrote:

_Meep_ wrote:

:) no kanade?

i really want to put it, but i can't find kanade mp3 ;w;

Syph wrote:

helo~

[Princess]

02:12:260 - pls put preview point here it's the best song ww
i think you could try ar9 honestly owo Okay~

00:13:049 (3,4,5) - ctrl g rhythm? sounds nicer to me I don't feel that change is necessary
06:54:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - mapping this as only circles would be a lot more fun imo owo for acc lul

gl!

Avoid keysounding without hitnormal support. If hitsounds blend perfectly with the song, feedback is minimal.

1. 01:12:028 (5,6) - too closed, this is the only place you use such a small spacing for 1/1
2. 02:23:113 (6) - clap? if it's on purpose i suggest to delete this note because missing one clap in a stream is kinda bad w
3. 02:34:584 (4) - unnecessary to map it, this part is very calm so it doesn't need 1/4, also 02:34:672 (4,5) - spacing is too large, doesn't fit the song
4. 02:51:898 - finish should be on 02:52:237 - instead i think
5. 03:02:237 - whistle?
6. 03:12:067 - whistle or clap here?
7. 03:22:392 - missing whistle
8. 03:36:212 (4) - how about ctrl+g because of 03:35:201 (1,2) - this
9. 04:03:788 (1,3) - perfect stacked slider should be avoided ww, hard to read
10. 04:35:301 (4,5) - why is the spacing so large? especially 04:35:745 (7,1) - this, it's too hard
11. 04:45:745 (3,4) - try the same spacing with 04:45:412 (3,1) - ?
12. 04:47:079 (3,4) - ^
13. 06:54:217 (1) - ctrl+g then 06:54:532 (2) - it would be easier to click
14. 07:31:433 (4) - don't think the drum whistle makes sense here
15. 07:39:663 (1) - why new combo