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Ice - Zetsu [OsuMania]

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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, June 23, 2019 at 9:08:57 PM

Artist: Ice
Title: Zetsu
Tags: diverse system team grimoire of darkness
BPM: 191
Filesize: 6031kb
Play Time: 04:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. End - 4Key (5.08 stars, 3606 notes)
Download: Ice - Zetsu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Jumptrill // Minijack // LN


My thought on this map
This is definitely not my best map, in fact, I consider this map to be pretty generic overall. But this is one of the first maps that I have ever created and the first map that I aimed for ranked which makes me have a huge attachment to this map. I decided not to mess with the map style that I gave to the map before so some parts might be questionable.

Redownload if downloaded before 17/1/19

Nvm too lazy to do full diff spread

Old GD
Moku_Hazushi's diff: here
Another Lie's diff: here
Etsu's diff: here

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Last edited by AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH , edited 135 times in total.
John Doe
181 posts
Joined March 2014
John Doe
Just to clarify this, if i say something about 1/2/3/4, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

Generell
Put more variaty in your map, mapping 10 notes stacked is not fun to play neighter considered as rankable. For example: If you map a stream, try to map it so it got nearly equal notes on 1/2/3/4 to make it better to play.
Do not put notes in your map where you can't hear a sound, neighter let go notes where you mapped notes before.
Listen closely while putting in notes and LNs, maybe consider turning the speed on 50% and listen to the parts again to make sure you did not miss something. An example: 01:56:920 (116920|3) This note is not mapped on a sound, which is quite hard to hear while listening on full speed, but on 50%, it is noticable.

Venus
00:00:297 (297|0,297|3,297|2,297|1,611|3,768|2,925|3,1239|3,1553|0,1553|3,1553|2,1867|3,2181|1,2181|2,2181|3,2496|3,2810|0,2810|2,2810|3,2967|2,3124|3,3281|2,3438|1,3438|3,3752|3,4066|0,4066|2,4066|3,4380|3,4694|3,4694|1,4694|2,5009|3) You mapped too much on 4, try to balance this better
00:04:694 (4694|1) Your LN is as long as the previous LNs, you cannot make it shorter just to be able to make a quad after id, that's not allowed
00:32:967 Do not stop using notes randomly, this part is in nothing different then the parts befor, so keep maping these single-notes
00:38:071 In a part like this, the sound on which you placed your stacked notes changes, which is a perfect opportunity for you to bring some variaty in your map. You could basically do something like higher note = placing notes more on the right side, lower note = placing notes more on the left side
00:40:506 You should not place notes where you can't hear a sound for it. On this quad, for example, is no sound that would indicate putting a quad in
01:14:433 (74433|1) If you are listening to the sound this LN should follow, you can hear that it should be only half as long as you mapped it, focus on things like this more

This can also be applied to the rest of your map, too

I whish you good luck and i hope i could help you a bit out with your mapping. Have a good day!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

LordTimeWaste wrote:

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 1/2/3/4, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

Generell
Put more variaty in your map, mapping 10 notes stacked is not fun to play neighter considered as rankable. For example: If you map a stream, try to map it so it got nearly equal notes on 1/2/3/4 to make it better to play.
Do not put notes in your map where you can't hear a sound, neighter let go notes where you mapped notes before.
Listen closely while putting in notes and LNs, maybe consider turning the speed on 50% and listen to the parts again to make sure you did not miss something. An example: 01:56:920 (116920|3) This note is not mapped on a sound, which is quite hard to hear while listening on full speed, but on 50%, it is noticable.

Venus
00:00:297 (297|0,297|3,297|2,297|1,611|3,768|2,925|3,1239|3,1553|0,1553|3,1553|2,1867|3,2181|1,2181|2,2181|3,2496|3,2810|0,2810|2,2810|3,2967|2,3124|3,3281|2,3438|1,3438|3,3752|3,4066|0,4066|2,4066|3,4380|3,4694|3,4694|1,4694|2,5009|3) You mapped too much on 4, try to balance this better
00:04:694 (4694|1) Your LN is as long as the previous LNs, you cannot make it shorter just to be able to make a quad after id, that's not allowed
00:32:967 Do not stop using notes randomly, this part is in nothing different then the parts befor, so keep maping these single-notes
00:38:071 In a part like this, the sound on which you placed your stacked notes changes, which is a perfect opportunity for you to bring some variaty in your map. You could basically do something like higher note = placing notes more on the right side, lower note = placing notes more on the left side
00:40:506 You should not place notes where you can't hear a sound for it. On this quad, for example, is no sound that would indicate putting a quad in
01:14:433 (74433|1) If you are listening to the sound this LN should follow, you can hear that it should be only half as long as you mapped it, focus on things like this more

This can also be applied to the rest of your map, too

I whish you good luck and i hope i could help you a bit out with your mapping. Have a good day!
Thanks for your mod ;)
DustMoon
430 posts
Joined June 2016
DustMoon
Hi~ from CanPoint modding queue[mania]
1|2|3|4|
Hard
00:00:297 (297|3) - delete
00:42:862 (42862|2) - delete because these a same drum00:42:862 (42862|3,42862|2,42862|0,43019|0,43019|3,43176|0,43176|3) -
00:43:647 (43647|3) - this LN should end00:43:962 -
00:49:145 (49145|0,49145|3,49171|2,49223|1,49276|0) - change
00:50:558 (50558|2) - change to single note
01:31:553 (91553|0) - move to 2
01:31:553 (91553|0,97365|0,97522|0) - change to one LN
02:08:935 (128935|1) - move to 3
02:36:108 (156108|1) - delete
03:17:338 (197338|3) - move to 3 03:17:260 (197260|1) - move to 4
03:32:653 (212653|1) - move to 1
04:39:249 (279249|1,279249|0,279249|2,279249|3) - change to LN
good luck! :)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~ from CanPoint modding queue[mania]
1|2|3|4|
Hard
00:00:297 (297|3) - delete
00:42:862 (42862|2) - delete because these a same drum00:42:862 (42862|3,42862|2,42862|0,43019|0,43019|3,43176|0,43176|3) -
00:43:647 (43647|3) - this LN should end00:43:962 -
00:49:145 (49145|0,49145|3,49171|2,49223|1,49276|0) - change
00:50:558 (50558|2) - change to single note
01:31:553 (91553|0) - move to 2
01:31:553 (91553|0,97365|0,97522|0) - change to one LN
02:08:935 (128935|1) - move to 3
02:36:108 (156108|1) - delete
03:17:338 (197338|3) - move to 3 03:17:260 (197260|1) - move to 4
03:32:653 (212653|1) - move to 1
04:39:249 (279249|1,279249|0,279249|2,279249|3) - change to LN
good luck! :)
Thanks a lot :)
Cokii-
356 posts
Joined July 2015
Cokii-
hey sorry short mod

Venus
00:02:810 (2810|3,2810|2,2967|1,3124|3,3281|2,3438|3) - consider changing this into an trill
00:04:537 - missing note
00:34:223 (34223|3,34380|2,34537|3,34694|2) - ^^
00:43:988 (43988|3,44001|2,44040|1,44092|3,44119|2) - delete some of these notes
00:44:433 (44433|2,44433|1,44433|0,44433|3) - delete a note same sound
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7657070
00:47:260 (47260|0) - add a not for consistency
00:51:815 - until 01:16:946 - is very weird and inconsistent
i could add a wall of text here sry but a lot of sounds aren't mapped or have weird patterning you should remap some sections

no kds if it didn't help

good luck with your map
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Cokiiplay wrote:

hey sorry short mod

Venus
00:02:810 (2810|3,2810|2,2967|1,3124|3,3281|2,3438|3) - consider changing this into an trill
00:04:537 - missing note
00:34:223 (34223|3,34380|2,34537|3,34694|2) - ^^
00:43:988 (43988|3,44001|2,44040|1,44092|3,44119|2) - delete some of these notes
00:44:433 (44433|2,44433|1,44433|0,44433|3) - delete a note same sound
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7657070
00:47:260 (47260|0) - add a not for consistency
00:51:815 - until 01:16:946 - is very weird and inconsistent
i could add a wall of text here sry but a lot of sounds aren't mapped or have weird patterning you should remap some sections

no kds if it didn't help

good luck with your map
Ty for the mod and the star 8-)
Crumpey
565 posts
Joined October 2013
Crumpey
As requested in Crumpey's mod queue

Hard
Hard(mod)
00:02:967 (2967|2) - simple jack that can easily be avoided
00:29:825 (29825|0) - ^^
00:42:862 (42862|0,42862|3,43019|3,43019|0,43176|3,43176|0) - not the same beats?
00:43:490 (43490|3,43490|2,43490|1,43490|0) - remove a note
00:45:140 (45140|1) - place a note
00:45:925 (45925|1) - remove this
00:48:045 (48045|3) - why is this a single where the same beat after is a quad?
00:48:674 (48674|0) - ^^
00:49:302 (49302|1,49302|3) - same beat but its now a double?
00:51:815 (51815|0) - this slider section can have some notes beside it
01:00:611 (60611|3,60925|0,61239|3,61553|0) - you start mapping a different sound, then stop randomly
01:19:302 (79302|2,79302|0) - different beat to the chord below, probs best to change it
01:27:941 (87941|2) - missing notes on all the blue lines, i cant tell if its intentional to make it easier or not, id think you should add them though
01:36:579 (96579|2) - why is this a single
01:37:051 (97051|1,97129|2) - ^^
01:39:092 (99092|0) - ^^
01:39:564 (99564|0,99642|1) - ^^
01:52:129 (112129|1) - on this ln section, add notes besides the lns where you see fit, its pretty bland
01:55:113 (115113|2) - note here maybe
01:57:626 (117626|0) - move to 3rd col ( 1|2|3|4 )
01:58:883 (118883|0) - ^^
02:04:904 (124904|3,124904|0,125113|3,125113|2,125113|1,125323|2,125323|3,125323|0,125323|1,125532|3,125532|2,125532|0,125742|3,125742|0,125951|0,125951|3,125951|2,125951|1) - why are some triples and others are not?
02:05:742 (125742|0,125742|3) - Unsnapped notes
02:08:935 (128935|2) - note after ln
02:11:187 (131187|0,131187|1,131187|3) - more unsnapped notes
02:11:396 (131396|1,131396|3) - ^^
02:27:941 (147941|3) - make double
02:28:412 (148412|1,149040|1) - ^^
02:29:511 (149511|0,149511|2,149668|2,149668|0,149825|0,149825|2) - move these around a bit
02:33:752 (153752|1,153752|3,153752|0,153752|2,153988|3,153988|2,153988|1,153988|0) - remove a note from each of these, Perhaps make the second part go off into an Ln
02:39:249 (159249|0,159249|3,159249|1) - Sound gets softer here, replace triple with a double or a single
02:39:799 (159799|1) - make a double
02:41:448 (161448|1,161448|0,161448|2,161448|3) - make a single
02:50:558 (170558|0,170558|3,170558|1) - ^^
03:13:726 (193726|2) - missed a note
03:17:574 (197574|3) - put notes besides these lns in this section, its pretty boring here
03:43:962 (223962|0,223962|1,223962|2) - remove a note
04:03:752 (243752|3) - remove this
04:04:694 (244694|1,244694|3,244694|0) - Ln not triple
04:12:391 (252391|3) - note here
04:13:412 (253412|1) - ^^
04:14:040 (254040|2) - ^^
04:19:302 (259302|1,259302|3,259302|0) - make a double
04:19:537 (259537|0) - note here
04:19:694 (259694|3) - ^^
04:19:773 (259773|0,259930|2,259930|1) - remove 2 notes on ln, and extend the ln to where it should go (cough here 04:20:087 (260087|0) - )
04:21:265 (261265|1) - note here somewhere
04:21:736 (261736|3) - remove
04:22:443 (262443|1) - add notes at end of ln
04:23:229 (263229|1,263386|3,263386|2) - same deal as before remove notes on ln and extend it
04:23:857 (263857|1,263857|0,263857|3,263857|2) - delete 3 notes
04:24:721 (264721|2) - add note
04:25:349 (265349|2) - (maybe add a note)
04:26:370 (266370|1) - notes at the end of ln
04:27:312 (267312|0,267312|1) - make a triple
04:27:626 (267626|3) - make a double
04:27:862 (267862|2) - missed a note
04:28:098 (268098|3,268098|0,268098|1,268098|2) - this shouldnt be a quad if the note below is a chord
04:28:098 (268098|1,268098|0,268098|3,268098|2) - again, the section after the quads has aounds there yet you havent mapped anything?
04:29:040 (269040|0,269040|3,269197|3,269197|0,269197|1,269354|0,269354|3,269354|1,269354|2) - same beat yet doubles triples and quads?
04:29:825 (269825|0) - extend ln again
04:31:318 (271318|2) - missed a note
04:32:496 (272496|1) - 2 notes after this ln
04:33:516 (273516|1,274145|1) - add notes here
04:34:773 (274773|0,275401|0) - and here
04:36:422 (276422|1,276422|3) - possibly another ln after for the echo-like effect

I suggest someone else should also look at hard because theres probably some mistakes i didnt catch, all in all solid map
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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935 posts
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Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As requested in Crumpey's mod queue

Hard
Hard(mod)
00:02:967 (2967|2) - simple jack that can easily be avoided
00:29:825 (29825|0) - ^^
00:42:862 (42862|0,42862|3,43019|3,43019|0,43176|3,43176|0) - not the same beats?
00:43:490 (43490|3,43490|2,43490|1,43490|0) - remove a note
00:45:140 (45140|1) - place a note
00:45:925 (45925|1) - remove this
00:48:045 (48045|3) - why is this a single where the same beat after is a quad?
00:48:674 (48674|0) - ^^
00:49:302 (49302|1,49302|3) - same beat but its now a double?
00:51:815 (51815|0) - this slider section can have some notes beside it
01:00:611 (60611|3,60925|0,61239|3,61553|0) - you start mapping a different sound, then stop randomly
01:19:302 (79302|2,79302|0) - different beat to the chord below, probs best to change it
01:27:941 (87941|2) - missing notes on all the blue lines, i cant tell if its intentional to make it easier or not, id think you should add them though
01:36:579 (96579|2) - why is this a single
01:37:051 (97051|1,97129|2) - ^^
01:39:092 (99092|0) - ^^
01:39:564 (99564|0,99642|1) - ^^
01:52:129 (112129|1) - on this ln section, add notes besides the lns where you see fit, its pretty bland
01:55:113 (115113|2) - note here maybe
01:57:626 (117626|0) - move to 3rd col ( 1|2|3|4 )
01:58:883 (118883|0) - ^^
02:04:904 (124904|3,124904|0,125113|3,125113|2,125113|1,125323|2,125323|3,125323|0,125323|1,125532|3,125532|2,125532|0,125742|3,125742|0,125951|0,125951|3,125951|2,125951|1) - why are some triples and others are not?
02:05:742 (125742|0,125742|3) - Unsnapped notes
02:08:935 (128935|2) - note after ln
02:11:187 (131187|0,131187|1,131187|3) - more unsnapped notes
02:11:396 (131396|1,131396|3) - ^^
02:27:941 (147941|3) - make double
02:28:412 (148412|1,149040|1) - ^^
02:29:511 (149511|0,149511|2,149668|2,149668|0,149825|0,149825|2) - move these around a bit
02:33:752 (153752|1,153752|3,153752|0,153752|2,153988|3,153988|2,153988|1,153988|0) - remove a note from each of these, Perhaps make the second part go off into an Ln
02:39:249 (159249|0,159249|3,159249|1) - Sound gets softer here, replace triple with a double or a single
02:39:799 (159799|1) - make a double
02:41:448 (161448|1,161448|0,161448|2,161448|3) - make a single
02:50:558 (170558|0,170558|3,170558|1) - ^^
03:13:726 (193726|2) - missed a note
03:17:574 (197574|3) - put notes besides these lns in this section, its pretty boring here
03:43:962 (223962|0,223962|1,223962|2) - remove a note
04:03:752 (243752|3) - remove this
04:04:694 (244694|1,244694|3,244694|0) - Ln not triple
04:12:391 (252391|3) - note here
04:13:412 (253412|1) - ^^
04:14:040 (254040|2) - ^^
04:19:302 (259302|1,259302|3,259302|0) - make a double
04:19:537 (259537|0) - note here
04:19:694 (259694|3) - ^^
04:19:773 (259773|0,259930|2,259930|1) - remove 2 notes on ln, and extend the ln to where it should go (cough here 04:20:087 (260087|0) - )
04:21:265 (261265|1) - note here somewhere
04:21:736 (261736|3) - remove
04:22:443 (262443|1) - add notes at end of ln
04:23:229 (263229|1,263386|3,263386|2) - same deal as before remove notes on ln and extend it
04:23:857 (263857|1,263857|0,263857|3,263857|2) - delete 3 notes
04:24:721 (264721|2) - add note
04:25:349 (265349|2) - (maybe add a note)
04:26:370 (266370|1) - notes at the end of ln
04:27:312 (267312|0,267312|1) - make a triple
04:27:626 (267626|3) - make a double
04:27:862 (267862|2) - missed a note
04:28:098 (268098|3,268098|0,268098|1,268098|2) - this shouldnt be a quad if the note below is a chord
04:28:098 (268098|1,268098|0,268098|3,268098|2) - again, the section after the quads has aounds there yet you havent mapped anything?
04:29:040 (269040|0,269040|3,269197|3,269197|0,269197|1,269354|0,269354|3,269354|1,269354|2) - same beat yet doubles triples and quads?
04:29:825 (269825|0) - extend ln again
04:31:318 (271318|2) - missed a note
04:32:496 (272496|1) - 2 notes after this ln
04:33:516 (273516|1,274145|1) - add notes here
04:34:773 (274773|0,275401|0) - and here
04:36:422 (276422|1,276422|3) - possibly another ln after for the echo-like effect

I suggest someone else should also look at hard because theres probably some mistakes i didnt catch, all in all solid map
tyty
Etsu
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Etsu
could make diff NM? o:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Etsu wrote:

could make diff NM? o:
Of course yes :)
Etsu
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Etsu
Hi

Finished diff nm -> http://puu.sh/v6mHp/d682138fcf.rar add my nick in tag please.

Thanks :3
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
DoNotMess
Hi, m4m as requested

Venus
00:01:553 (1553|0) - if u start ln here maybe u should 00:00:297 (297|3) - start from here because the instrument is also here
00:00:297 (297|3,1553|2,2181|2,2810|2) - (and so on) i would recommend 1 note because it's the same sound with 00:01:867 (1867|1,2496|2,2967|1) - but 00:05:323 (5323|0,5323|2) - this one is ok because it's different from the rest
00:06:579 (6579|0,9092|0,11605|2,12862|3,14119|3,17888|0) - ^
00:22:914 (22914|2) - ^
00:25:427 - add 3 for ^
i wouldnt mention the rest
00:43:647 - i think the sound here is 1/16 and u cant nerf the sound into 1/12, u can nerf the sound into 1/8 instead
00:43:844 - u should map the 1/8 here too, dont stop midway because this is the hardest diff
00:46:789 - add something for kick
00:46:946 - add something for kick
00:47:260 - the piano start here 00:47:103 - should start it from here
00:47:705 (47705|0,47705|3) - should be on the white line
00:47:731 (47731|2,47783|1,47810|0) - the sound is 1/6 in this section
00:47:862 (47862|3,47862|2) - should be on the red line
00:51:815 - u can map the audible percussion as 2 instead of putting them all as 2
01:11:291 - why stop here
01:22:679 - missing note
01:22:836 (82836|2) - ghost
01:31:003 - 01:31:318 - there are sound here also kick in the first
01:34:773 - kick here
01:36:108 - clap here
01:37:286 - kick here
01:39:799 -
01:40:506 - why not 4 notes
01:52:129 - kiai looks like 3* maps...this supposed to be 5*
02:41:134 - maybe 2 notes are enough because only piano
02:48:988 (168988|1) - move to 1 because it's different pitch from the rest
03:17:574 - again, looks like maps for 2* now...
04:12:391 - missing kick
04:18:045 - missing kick

i think this map needs more restructuring and the spread throughout the map is not really good but good ln idea, goodluck!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
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Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

DoNotMess wrote:

Hi, m4m as requested

Venus
00:01:553 (1553|0) - if u start ln here maybe u should 00:00:297 (297|3) - start from here because the instrument is also here
00:00:297 (297|3,1553|2,2181|2,2810|2) - (and so on) i would recommend 1 note because it's the same sound with 00:01:867 (1867|1,2496|2,2967|1) - but 00:05:323 (5323|0,5323|2) - this one is ok because it's different from the rest
00:06:579 (6579|0,9092|0,11605|2,12862|3,14119|3,17888|0) - ^
00:22:914 (22914|2) - ^
00:25:427 - add 3 for ^
i wouldnt mention the rest
00:43:647 - i think the sound here is 1/16 and u cant nerf the sound into 1/12, u can nerf the sound into 1/8 instead
00:43:844 - u should map the 1/8 here too, dont stop midway because this is the hardest diff
00:46:789 - add something for kick
00:46:946 - add something for kick
00:47:260 - the piano start here 00:47:103 - should start it from here
00:47:705 (47705|0,47705|3) - should be on the white line
00:47:731 (47731|2,47783|1,47810|0) - the sound is 1/6 in this section
00:47:862 (47862|3,47862|2) - should be on the red line
00:51:815 - u can map the audible percussion as 2 instead of putting them all as 2
01:11:291 - why stop here
01:22:679 - missing note
01:22:836 (82836|2) - ghost
01:31:003 - 01:31:318 - there are sound here also kick in the first
01:34:773 - kick here
01:36:108 - clap here
01:37:286 - kick here
01:39:799 -
01:40:506 - why not 4 notes
01:52:129 - kiai looks like 3* maps...this supposed to be 5*
02:41:134 - maybe 2 notes are enough because only piano
02:48:988 (168988|1) - move to 1 because it's different pitch from the rest
03:17:574 - again, looks like maps for 2* now...
04:12:391 - missing kick
04:18:045 - missing kick

i think this map needs more restructuring and the spread throughout the map is not really good but good ln idea, goodluck!
Ty, currently modding you, gonna finish soon :)
Aiseca
451 posts
Joined February 2017
Aiseca
Can I GD 6k of this map ?

CAuse your song is good. :)
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Aiseca wrote:

Can I GD 6k of this map ?

CAuse your song is good. :)
Of course :)
Can you make a hard diff?
thanks 8-)
Moku_Hazushi
76 posts
Joined August 2015
Moku_Hazushi
Hey there, you asked me for a mod and dont worry its coming im working on it :p
But i was wondering, is it possible to make an insane+ GD ? (something around 4.7*) the song is soooo cool <3

See ya soon for the mod owo)/
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Moku_Hazushi wrote:

Hey there, you asked me for a mod and dont worry its coming im working on it :p
But i was wondering, is it possible to make an insane+ GD ? (something around 4.7*) the song is soooo cool <3

See ya soon for the mod owo)/
Of course yes :) TY :)
Moku_Hazushi
76 posts
Joined August 2015
Moku_Hazushi
Legend is 0|1|2|3

Easy


00:10:977 - Add a note here to match with the organ (i'd create it at 2 and move 00:11:605 (11605|2) at 1)

00:10:349 (10349|0) - I'd add a double here to match with the piano, but dont add anything if it raises the difficulty too much

00:32:967 (32967|0,33595|1,34223|2,34852|3) - Make it from right to left because you did the same left to right just before

00:42:548 (42548|1,42705|2,42862|3) - What about the following pattern instead, it doesn't increase the difficulty and it adds some changes since you dont use this slider+note much in this diff



00:49:930 (49930|3,50244|2,50558|1) - Go for 0,1,2 to have a small jump for 00:49:616 (49616|2,49930|3) making it less monotonous

01:16:946 (76946|1,77574|2,78202|3,78831|2,79459|1,80715|2) - The same but mostly from right to left, before you insisted a lot with patterns going from left to right

01:38:935 (98935|1,99092|0,99564|1,99564|2) - This is 1 red tick late, it should start at 01:38:778 like the others before

01:45:846 (105846|1,106160|2,106475|3,106789|2) - The stairs are too monotonous, try making something else by moving 01:45:846 (105846|1) to 2

02:10:977 (130977|1,131213|2,131448|3,131605|2,131920|1,132234|0,132548|3,132548|1) - Really good kiai ending >w<)b

What i would do to keep those ln entertaining :

03:28:883 (208883|1) - At 2
03:30:140 (210140|3) - At 1
03:31:396 (211396|3) - At 3

Here is why, at 03:27:626 (207626|0) we are on the left, organ play a normal pitched note,
03:28:883 (208883|2) organ play a higher pitched note, we're moving to the right,
03:30:140 (210140|1) Again low pitched note, returning to the left,
03:31:396 (211396|3) - High pitched note, to the right

04:20:401 (260401|0) - At 3 (i think you have a tendency to often start pattern on the left xD)

Good difficulty, the kiai time are well done (especially the last one), good balance between easy part and more tricky part o3o

Etsu's Normal


00:32:967 (32967|1) - At 3, because last stairs was mostly left-oriented

00:38:935 (38935|3) - I dont know what musical event you tried to match with here, the introduction in really slow with accentuation on 1 and 1/2 of each measure so i think it more appropriate to start this ln at 00:39:249

01:11:605 (71605|3) - I would go for the following pattern here, you already used such pattern before (at 00:50:244 (50244|2) ) and i think it appropriate for the transition



01:21:972 - I would put a double note here to match with the piano and add variation

01:24:485 - Same comment as above, but of course dont feel like doing it if it increases the difficulty too much

01:26:998 - Same comment

03:11:291 (191291|0,191605|1) - I would switch 0 at 1 and 1 at 0

04:39:249 (279249|0) - Why not an ln, i was so frustrated when i played it T^T

As you can see, nothing much to say for the end, the kiais were great, AND THOSE SINGLE JACKS GIMMICK ARE SO AMAZING, maybe other modders will find something to criticize, but for me its really good >w<)b

SC


00:02:181 (2181|2) - At 1 to have the same jack feeling at 00:01:239 (1239|3,1553|3,1553|2)

00:12:548 (12548|0) - At 2 and 00:12:862 (12862|3) at 0 or 1, to keep with the previous jack + double pattern (at 00:11:291 (11291|0,11605|3,11605|0) )

00:14:433 (14433|3,14590|2,14747|1) - Make this starting to the left (at 0) be cause you have the exact same stair just before

00:31:082 (31082|3,31710|0,32338|1,32967|1,33595|0) - Make all of them 1 tick long LN, i think your map lack of small ln and this is a good opportunity to place some and maybe 00:32:967 (32967|1) at 3

00:36:422 (36422|0,37051|1,37679|2) - If you agreed making those ln before, you will have to make them 1 whiite tick LN long too to keep consistency

00:38:307 (38307|2,38935|2) - And those 2 too (I tried replacing all those by LN and it feels better for me)

00:47:221 (47221|3) + 00:47:849 (47849|0) + 00:48:477 (48477|2) + 00:49:119 (49119|0) - I think you should remove those last notes of each small dump, i know it will decrease the difficulty (by 0.7) but it makes the kiai way more playable for a difficulty below 4.5* where you don't expect many of those dump patterns.

(By the way, i have this weird timing bug at 00:48:988 see the screenshot below, Aimod says nothing so maybe its just for me but check it quickly)


01:17:103 (77103|3) - Should be on the blue tick just above

01:17:574 (77574|0) - Same

01:17:888 (77888|1) - Make a double here to announce the following double+triple+double at 01:17:888 (77888|1)

01:22:286 (82286|0) - Double here and single there 01:22:443

01:22:679 - I would have expected a note here and double there 01:22:757 since you look like you're mapping the synthesiser

01:22:836 (82836|2) - You should remove this one, it does not match with any musical thing (no battery or instrument)

01:23:229 - OPTIONAL you can make a double here to match with the battery if you want to increase the difficulty

01:23:543 + 01:23:857 + 01:24:171 - Same as above


01:27:626 (87626|1,87626|3) - I guess you made a double to match with the battery which is not wrong but just before you mapped the synthesiser, i think its more natural to keep a single note here and double at 01:27:783 and then you can accentuate the battery with double during the stream

01:28:019 (88019|3,88019|0) + 01:28:176 (88176|0,88176|1) + 01:28:333 (88333|3,88333|1) + 01:28:490 (88490|1,88490|2) + 01:28:647 (88647|0,88647|1) - Those doubles on blue ticks feel weird, I would rather go for doubles on white ticks to match with the battery

KIAI INCOMING

The beginning of this kiai is a bit disapointing, here is my suggestions but feel free to try something else if you don't like it. But you must do something to make this kiai more intense :

01:52:129 - Add double at 0 and 3
01:52:600 - Note at 3
01:52:914 - Note at 1
01:53:229 - Note at 0
01:53:386 - Note at 1
01:53:857 - Note at 2
01:54:171 - Note at 1
01:54:485 - Note at 3
01:54:642 - Note at 2
01:55:113 - Note at 3
01:55:427 - Note at 1
01:55:585 (115585|1) - Move at 0
01:55:899 (115899|0) - Move at 1

The rest of the kiai is fine

02:59:825 (179825|2,179825|0,179982|1,179982|2) - Why not like 02:59:197 (179197|2,179197|0,179354|1,179354|3) but symetrical ?

03:08:229 (188229|1,188229|3) + 03:08:543 (188543|2,188543|0) - Doubles here are not natural, try keeping the double on white or red ticks during the stream

03:10:585 (190585|1,190585|3) - Same remark

03:17:574 - For this calm part i'd have expected to have the piano mapped in addition to the lns

03:51:658 (231658|1) - At 2 because just before at 03:51:108 (231108|1,231108|3) you already had a note at 1

04:24:603 (264603|3) + 04:25:231 (265231|3) +04:33:399 (273399|0) + 04:34:027 (274027|0) + etc Same as the beginning, remove it to make those dump more playable for a 4* diff

Okay so many goods things and many weird things too ahah xD The kiais are globally good, not tricky to play or more playing intensive but they do the job. I think there is still work to do for this difficulty good luck ;3

I'll edit this post later on to add the modding for the insane and expert difficulties, but i already post this so you can see and maybe fix what is wrong ;3

See ya ~
Last edited by Moku_Hazushi , edited 2 times in total.
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Moku_Hazushi wrote:

Legend is 0|1|2|3

Easy


00:10:977 - Add a note here to match with the organ (i'd create it at 2 and move 00:11:605 (11605|2) at 1)

00:10:349 (10349|0) - I'd add a double here to match with the piano, but dont add anything if it raises the difficulty too much

00:32:967 (32967|0,33595|1,34223|2,34852|3) - Make it from right to left because you did the same left to right just before

00:42:548 (42548|1,42705|2,42862|3) - What about the following pattern instead, it doesn't increase the difficulty and it adds some changes since you dont use this slider+note much in this diff



00:49:930 (49930|3,50244|2,50558|1) - Go for 0,1,2 to have a small jump for 00:49:616 (49616|2,49930|3) making it less monotonous

01:16:946 (76946|1,77574|2,78202|3,78831|2,79459|1,80715|2) - The same but mostly from right to left, before you insisted a lot with patterns going from left to right

01:38:935 (98935|1,99092|0,99564|1,99564|2) - This is 1 red tick late, it should start at 01:38:778 like the others before

01:45:846 (105846|1,106160|2,106475|3,106789|2) - The stairs are too monotonous, try making something else by moving 01:45:846 (105846|1) to 2

02:10:977 (130977|1,131213|2,131448|3,131605|2,131920|1,132234|0,132548|3,132548|1) - Really good kiai ending >w<)b

What i would do to keep those ln entertaining :

03:28:883 (208883|1) - At 2
03:30:140 (210140|3) - At 1
03:31:396 (211396|3) - At 3

Here is why, at 03:27:626 (207626|0) we are on the left, organ play a normal pitched note,
03:28:883 (208883|2) organ play a higher pitched note, we're moving to the right,
03:30:140 (210140|1) Again low pitched note, returning to the left,
03:31:396 (211396|3) - High pitched note, to the right

04:20:401 (260401|0) - At 3 (i think you have a tendency to often start pattern on the left xD)

Good difficulty, the kiai time are well done (especially the last one), good balance between easy part and more tricky part o3o

Etsu's Normal


00:32:967 (32967|1) - At 3, because last stairs was mostly left-oriented

00:38:935 (38935|3) - I dont know what musical event you tried to match with here, the introduction in really slow with accentuation on 1 and 1/2 of each measure so i think it more appropriate to start this ln at 00:39:249

01:11:605 (71605|3) - I would go for the following pattern here, you already used such pattern before (at 00:50:244 (50244|2) ) and i think it appropriate for the transition



01:21:972 - I would put a double note here to match with the piano and add variation

01:24:485 - Same comment as above, but of course dont feel like doing it if it increases the difficulty too much

01:26:998 - Same comment

03:11:291 (191291|0,191605|1) - I would switch 0 at 1 and 1 at 0

04:39:249 (279249|0) - Why not an ln, i was so frustrated when i played it T^T

As you can see, nothing much to say for the end, the kiais were great, AND THOSE SINGLE JACKS GIMMICK ARE SO AMAZING, maybe other modders will find something to criticize, but for me its really good >w<)b

I'll edit this post later on to add the modding for the insane and expert difficulties, but i already post this so you can see and maybe fix what is wrong ;3

See ya ~
Thanks for your mod :) Most of these were fixed and apparently I have been obsessed with starting from left :cry:
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Moku_Hazushi wrote:

SC


00:02:181 (2181|2) - At 1 to have the same jack feeling at 00:01:239 (1239|3,1553|3,1553|2)

00:12:548 (12548|0) - At 2 and 00:12:862 (12862|3) at 0 or 1, to keep with the previous jack + double pattern (at 00:11:291 (11291|0,11605|3,11605|0) )

00:14:433 (14433|3,14590|2,14747|1) - Make this starting to the left (at 0) be cause you have the exact same stair just before

00:31:082 (31082|3,31710|0,32338|1,32967|1,33595|0) - Make all of them 1 tick long LN, i think your map lack of small ln and this is a good opportunity to place some and maybe 00:32:967 (32967|1) at 3

00:36:422 (36422|0,37051|1,37679|2) - If you agreed making those ln before, you will have to make them 1 whiite tick LN long too to keep consistency

00:38:307 (38307|2,38935|2) - And those 2 too (I tried replacing all those by LN and it feels better for me)

00:47:221 (47221|3) + 00:47:849 (47849|0) + 00:48:477 (48477|2) + 00:49:119 (49119|0) - I think you should remove those last notes of each small dump, i know it will decrease the difficulty (by 0.7) but it makes the kiai way more playable for a difficulty below 4.5* where you don't expect many of those dump patterns.

(By the way, i have this weird timing bug at 00:48:988 see the screenshot below, Aimod says nothing so maybe its just for me but check it quickly)


01:17:103 (77103|3) - Should be on the blue tick just above

01:17:574 (77574|0) - Same

01:17:888 (77888|1) - Make a double here to announce the following double+triple+double at 01:17:888 (77888|1)

01:22:286 (82286|0) - Double here and single there 01:22:443

01:22:679 - I would have expected a note here and double there 01:22:757 since you look like you're mapping the synthesiser

01:22:836 (82836|2) - You should remove this one, it does not match with any musical thing (no battery or instrument)

01:23:229 - OPTIONAL you can make a double here to match with the battery if you want to increase the difficulty

01:23:543 + 01:23:857 + 01:24:171 - Same as above


01:27:626 (87626|1,87626|3) - I guess you made a double to match with the battery which is not wrong but just before you mapped the synthesiser, i think its more natural to keep a single note here and double at 01:27:783 and then you can accentuate the battery with double during the stream

01:28:019 (88019|3,88019|0) + 01:28:176 (88176|0,88176|1) + 01:28:333 (88333|3,88333|1) + 01:28:490 (88490|1,88490|2) + 01:28:647 (88647|0,88647|1) - Those doubles on blue ticks feel weird, I would rather go for doubles on white ticks to match with the battery

KIAI INCOMING

The beginning of this kiai is a bit disapointing, here is my suggestions but feel free to try something else if you don't like it. But you must do something to make this kiai more intense :

01:52:129 - Add double at 0 and 3
01:52:600 - Note at 3
01:52:914 - Note at 1
01:53:229 - Note at 0
01:53:386 - Note at 1
01:53:857 - Note at 2
01:54:171 - Note at 1
01:54:485 - Note at 3
01:54:642 - Note at 2
01:55:113 - Note at 3
01:55:427 - Note at 1
01:55:585 (115585|1) - Move at 0
01:55:899 (115899|0) - Move at 1

The rest of the kiai if fine

02:59:825 (179825|2,179825|0,179982|1,179982|2) - Why not like 02:59:197 (179197|2,179197|0,179354|1,179354|3) but symetrical ?

03:08:229 (188229|1,188229|3) + 03:08:543 (188543|2,188543|0) - Doubles here are not natural, try keeping the double on white or red ticks during the stream

03:10:585 (190585|1,190585|3) - Same remark

03:17:574 - For this calm part i'd have expected to have the piano mapped in addition to the lns

03:51:658 (231658|1) - At 2 because just before at 03:51:108 (231108|1,231108|3) you already had a note at 1

04:24:603 (264603|3) + 04:25:231 (265231|3) +04:33:399 (273399|0) + 04:34:027 (274027|0) + etc Same as the beginning, remove it to make those dump more playable for a 4* diff

Okay so many goods things and many weird things too ahah xD The kiais are globally good, not tricky to play or more playing intensive but they do the job. I think there is still work to do for this difficulty good luck ;3

I'll edit this post later on to add the modding for the insane and expert difficulties, but i already post this so you can see and maybe fix what is wrong ;3

See ya ~
Again, most of these were fixed, thx 8-)
Etsu
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Etsu

Moku_Hazushi wrote:

Legend is 0|1|2|3


Etsu's Normal


00:32:967 (32967|1) - At 3, because last stairs was mostly left-oriented

00:38:935 (38935|3) - I dont know what musical event you tried to match with here, the introduction in really slow with accentuation on 1 and 1/2 of each measure so i think it more appropriate to start this ln at 00:39:249

01:11:605 (71605|3) - I would go for the following pattern here, you already used such pattern before (at 00:50:244 (50244|2) ) and i think it appropriate for the transition



01:21:972 - I would put a double note here to match with the piano and add variation

01:24:485 - Same comment as above, but of course dont feel like doing it if it increases the difficulty too much

01:26:998 - Same comment

03:11:291 (191291|0,191605|1) - I would switch 0 at 1 and 1 at 0

04:39:249 (279249|0) - Why not an ln, i was so frustrated when i played it T^T

As you can see, nothing much to say for the end, the kiais were great, AND THOSE SINGLE JACKS GIMMICK ARE SO AMAZING, maybe other modders will find something to criticize, but for me its really good >w<)b


I'll edit this post later on to add the modding for the insane and expert difficulties, but i already post this so you can see and maybe fix what is wrong ;3

See ya ~
all apply thanks for the mod <3

see that edit my diff but anyway i did seftmod xD

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Etsu wrote:

Moku_Hazushi wrote:

Legend is 0|1|2|3


Etsu's Normal


00:32:967 (32967|1) - At 3, because last stairs was mostly left-oriented

00:38:935 (38935|3) - I dont know what musical event you tried to match with here, the introduction in really slow with accentuation on 1 and 1/2 of each measure so i think it more appropriate to start this ln at 00:39:249

01:11:605 (71605|3) - I would go for the following pattern here, you already used such pattern before (at 00:50:244 (50244|2) ) and i think it appropriate for the transition



01:21:972 - I would put a double note here to match with the piano and add variation

01:24:485 - Same comment as above, but of course dont feel like doing it if it increases the difficulty too much

01:26:998 - Same comment

03:11:291 (191291|0,191605|1) - I would switch 0 at 1 and 1 at 0

04:39:249 (279249|0) - Why not an ln, i was so frustrated when i played it T^T

As you can see, nothing much to say for the end, the kiais were great, AND THOSE SINGLE JACKS GIMMICK ARE SO AMAZING, maybe other modders will find something to criticize, but for me its really good >w<)b


I'll edit this post later on to add the modding for the insane and expert difficulties, but i already post this so you can see and maybe fix what is wrong ;3

See ya ~
all apply thanks for the mod <3

see that edit my diff but anyway i did seftmod xD

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192,192,233071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,233386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,233543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,233700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,233700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,234171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,234328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,234328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,234956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,192,235270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,235585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,235899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,236213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,236527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,236763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,236763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,236998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,236998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,237155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,237155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,237312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,237469,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,237626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,237783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,237783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,238412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,238569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,238726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,238883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,239040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,239040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,239511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,239668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,239825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,239982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,240140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,240297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,240611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,240925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,241396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,241553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,241867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,242024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,242181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,242496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,242653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,242810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,242810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,243124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,243281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,243438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,243595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,243752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,244066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,244066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,244302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,244537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,244694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,245009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,245166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,245323,128,0,245637:0:0:0:0:
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192,192,245951,128,0,246265:0:0:0:0:
448,192,246265,128,0,246579:0:0:0:0:
64,192,246579,128,0,246893:0:0:0:0:
320,192,247051,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,247208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,247365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,247522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,247679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,247836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,247836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,248150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,248150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,248464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,248778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,248778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,249092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,249407,5,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,249407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,249721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,250035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,250035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,250349,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,250349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,250585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,250585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,250820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,250820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,250977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,250977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,251213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,251213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,251448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,251448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,251605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,251605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,251920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,251920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,252077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,252234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,252391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,252548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,252548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,252862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,253019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,253176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,253176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,253490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,253647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,253804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,253804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,254433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,254433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,254747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,255061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,255061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,255375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,255689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,192,256003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,256318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,256632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,256632,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,256867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,257103,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,257260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,257731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,258831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,259773,128,0,260087:0:0:0:0:
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448,192,260715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,261501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,261658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,263071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,263543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,263700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,264171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,265427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,265742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,266370,128,0,266684:0:0:0:0:
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448,192,267155,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,267626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,275480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,276422,128,0,276736:0:0:0:0:
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320,192,277993,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,277993,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,279249,128,0,284276:0:0:0:0:
64,192,279249,128,0,284276:0:0:0:0:
Updated ;)
Another Lie
Another Lie
Something to mod
HP & OD
EZ: 7 & 7
NM: 7.5 & 7.5
HD: 8 & 8
MX: 8.5 & 8.5
Venus: idk 8.5 & 8.5 - above
General SV
SV minimum should be x0.10 for better sightread. Example: this map
SC
00:44:256 (44256|3,44256|1) - fatal snapping, consider moving it to white line
00:57:469 (57469|0) - ^ move the end of LN to white line
Venus
Do not overuse 1/16 note snap. Every burst i heard are using 1/8 not 1/16. Please change them to 1/8 [Unrankable Issues]
SV mod will be placed in this post too
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Another Lie wrote:

Something to mod
HP & OD
EZ: 7 & 7
NM: 7.5 & 7.5
HD: 8 & 8
MX: 8.5 & 8.5
Venus: idk 8.5 & 8.5 - above
Fixed
General SV
SV minimum should be x0.10 for better sightread. Example: this map
I think I'll just put it at 0.01x
SC
00:44:256 (44256|3,44256|1) - fatal snapping, consider moving it to white line
00:57:469 (57469|0) - ^ move the end of LN to white line
Fixed
Venus
Do not overuse 1/16 note snap. Every burst i heard are using 1/8 not 1/16. Please change them to 1/8 [Unrankable Issues]
It is actually 1/16
SV mod will be placed in this post too
Thanks for your mod :)
Amiichii
729 posts
Joined November 2016
Amiichii
lie
23:57 *Amiichii is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1266880 Ice - Zetsu [A Lie's HD]] <osu!mania> |4K|
23:57 Another Lie: ea
00:02 Amiichii: maafkan saia yg copo
00:02 Amiichii: wkwk
00:03 Amiichii: nc 'w')b
00:03 Another Lie: epic style :v
00:03 Amiichii: ga jaog main instrumental
00:03 Amiichii: wkwk
00:03 Another Lie: cari cari kesalahan gih~
00:03 Amiichii: hadew
00:03 *Another Lie is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1266880 Ice - Zetsu [A Lie's HD]]
00:04 Amiichii: 00:21:658 - ga kurang note?
00:04 Amiichii: keknya ngga deh
00:04 Amiichii: ga ada bass baru
00:04 Another Lie: 00:21:658 - ga ada "bam" macam 00:17:888 (17888|0,17888|2) -
00:04 Amiichii: wkwk
00:05 Another Lie: :v
00:05 Amiichii: 00:42:783 (42783|1) - yakin?
00:05 Another Lie: 00:51:815 - tadi part sini niatnya dum dum dum gitu
00:06 Another Lie: 00:42:626 (42626|1,42626|0,42705|2,42705|3) - kan high sound
00:06 Another Lie: delete kah ini 00:42:783 (42783|1) - ?
00:06 Amiichii: 00:42:783 (42783|1) - no sound
00:06 Amiichii: i think
00:06 Amiichii: wkwk
00:06 Another Lie: ok sih :3
00:06 Another Lie: deleted
00:07 Another Lie: emang no sound :v
00:07 Amiichii: 00:45:140 - ga di add?
00:07 Amiichii: wwkwk
00:07 Amiichii: 00:49:537 - ga di add?
00:07 Amiichii: 00:54:328 (54328|3) - stop di 00:54:956 - ?
00:07 Amiichii: kawan"nya cuman 2/1s 
00:08 Amiichii: kok ini beda sendiri
00:08 Amiichii: wkwk
00:08 Another Lie: ah empty column itu emang disengaja
00:08 Another Lie: buat playability :v
00:08 Amiichii: yg mna?
00:08 Amiichii: akwak
00:08 Another Lie: 00:54:328 (54328|3) - ok ikut stop sana
00:08 Amiichii: 00:55:270 - and 00:55:427 - 
00:08 Another Lie: 00:45:140 - sama 00:49:537 - sengaja kosong
00:08 Amiichii: add piano?
00:09 Amiichii: 00:59:354 (59354|0) -  cut cut
00:09 Amiichii: wkwk
00:09 Amiichii: oh ok ok
00:09 Another Lie: 00:55:270 - sama 00:55:427 - ga terlalu fokus piano
00:09 Amiichii: 01:00:297 - ini jg add piano klo tadi di apply
00:09 Another Lie: keep no add
00:09 Amiichii: wkwk
00:09 Another Lie: 00:59:354 (59354|0) - cutted
00:09 Amiichii: soalnya ini 00:55:585 (55585|1,55899|2,56213|1,56527|0) -  piano
00:09 Another Lie: tiangnya kena cut :v
00:09 Amiichii: jadi aku saranin
00:09 Amiichii: ngga di add jg gpp
00:09 Amiichii: wkwk
00:10 Another Lie: [need 1/1]
00:10 Amiichii: padahal ini di add 01:02:810 (62810|2,62967|1,63124|3) - 
00:10 Amiichii: awkawkaw
00:10 Amiichii: baka!!
00:10 Another Lie: 01:05:323 (65323|1,65480|2,65637|3) - kecuali suara kyk gini 01:05:323 (65323|1,65480|2,65637|3) -
00:10 *Another Lie niatnya 1 1 1 1, baru 3
00:10 Another Lie: 3 baru 1 1 1 1
00:10 Amiichii: timingnya sama
00:10 Amiichii: LOL
00:11 Amiichii: 01:01:867 (61867|1) - ga dicut?
00:11 Amiichii: 01:04:380 (64380|0) - ^
00:11 Amiichii: dkk
00:11 Another Lie: 00:55:270 - added
00:11 Another Lie: 00:55:427 - added
00:11 Amiichii: wkwkk
00:11 Amiichii: dah serah kan dah tau konsistensinya gmn
00:11 Amiichii: lul
00:12 Another Lie: :v semua tiang cutted
00:12 Another Lie: next
00:12 Amiichii: 01:23:229 (83229|3,83307|1,83386|2,83464|0,83543|3,83621|1,83700|2,83778|0,83857|3,83935|1,84014|2,84092|0,84171|3,84249|1,84328|2,84407|0,84485|1) -  gw kzl ama ini
00:12 Amiichii: wakwak
00:12 Amiichii: knp ga dibuat stairs aja
00:12 Another Lie: ez :V
00:12 Another Lie: 4231
00:12 Another Lie: no
00:12 Another Lie: too ez
00:12 Amiichii: itu stairs pasnya bkn kek drum kanan kiri
00:12 Amiichii: LOL
00:12 Amiichii: yaudah
00:13 Another Lie: nanti kalo dimention sama orang
00:13 Another Lie: baru stairs
00:13 Amiichii: 01:31:396 (91396|2,91475|0,91553|3,91632|0,91710|3,91789|0,91867|3,91946|0) - klo ini kek tadi lah gpp
00:13 Amiichii: wkwk
00:13 Another Lie: tapi "too common" T_T
00:13 Amiichii: wkwk
00:13 Amiichii: ok skip
00:13 Amiichii: next
00:13 Another Lie: sayangnya ini hard
00:13 Another Lie: yah kalo insane / lebih
00:13 Another Lie: gw bikin pink semua :V
00:14 Amiichii: lel
00:15 Another Lie: 02:09:721 - added 1 note lagi
00:15 Amiichii: 02:15:218 (135218|0) -lg mikir ini ikut apa
00:15 Another Lie: 02:21:658 - added
00:15 Amiichii: wkwk
00:16 Amiichii: soalnya drumnya ada di 02:15:297 -  dan 02:15:375 - 
00:16 Another Lie: 02:15:218 - dum follow flownya 02:15:061 (135061|3,135061|2) -
00:16 Amiichii: wkwk
00:16 Another Lie: oh anjeg
00:16 Another Lie: V:
00:16 Another Lie: pantes ada yg kurang
00:16 Amiichii: apa si?
00:16 Another Lie: 02:12:783 (132783|1) -
00:16 Amiichii: wkwk
00:16 Another Lie: ok gw ganti semua yg red ke blue
00:16 Amiichii: zeeb
00:17 Another Lie: serius
00:17 Another Lie: rasanya ga enak
00:17 Amiichii: emang
00:17 Another Lie: gw mainin ada yg kurang :V
00:17 Amiichii: kan itu flowmu
00:17 Amiichii: bkn flowku
00:17 Amiichii: awkawk
00:17 Amiichii: :p
00:17 Another Lie: MAKASIH
00:17 Another Lie: saia kurang telitih~
00:17 Another Lie: next :3
00:18 Amiichii: 'w')b
00:18 Amiichii: 02:17:181 - ini ga diadd?
00:18 Another Lie: 02:17:181 - add to 4
00:19 Another Lie: 02:40:192 - add to 3
00:19 Amiichii: 02:41:448 (161448|2,161448|3,161763|2,161763|3,162077|3,162077|2) - saran http://puu.sh/vk9j5/1d22720fe8.jpg
00:20 Amiichii: reason pitchnya  membesar/naik
00:20 Amiichii: atau dibalik jg gpp
00:20 Amiichii: serah
00:20 Amiichii: wkwk
00:20 Amiichii: 02:46:475 (166475|1,166475|0,166789|1,166789|0,167103|0,167103|1) - ^
00:20 Another Lie: ugh... semua ternyata salah pitch...
00:20 Another Lie: masyaallah
00:20 Amiichii: :'<
00:20 Another Lie: konsistencynya :V
00:21 Amiichii: dst ya. itu kan masalah style
00:21 Amiichii: ga ngikut pitch gpp
00:21 Amiichii: wkwk
00:21 Another Lie: liat tuh semua note -_- yawla ampuni baim yawla
00:21 Another Lie: gw jadi hitung lagi :V
00:21 Another Lie: next :v
00:21 Amiichii: wkwk
00:21 Another Lie: gw kalo serius ngemap tuh biasanya pake notepad
00:22 Another Lie: buat itung consistency
00:22 Amiichii: ini doble
00:22 Amiichii: 03:17:574 (197574|3) - ini cingle
00:22 Amiichii: 03:18:831 (198831|3) - ini uga
00:22 Amiichii: maunya  apa ci?
00:22 Amiichii: wkwk
00:22 Another Lie: now i know what you mean :V
00:23 Amiichii: awkawk
00:23 Another Lie: done semua
00:24 Another Lie: :V
00:24 Amiichii: 03:37:679 (217679|3) - aku lebih suka ini di cut segini 03:37:993 - 
00:24 Amiichii: 1/1s
00:24 Amiichii: lebih menitmati
00:24 Amiichii: wkwk
00:24 Amiichii: *menikmati
00:24 Amiichii: wakawk
00:25 Another Lie: 03:37:679 (217679|3) - cut to white line
00:25 Amiichii: dst ya
00:25 Amiichii: dkk nya
00:25 Amiichii: ga sendirian dia
00:25 Another Lie: 03:38:150 (218150|2,218464|0) - moved to col 4
00:25 Amiichii: berjamaah
00:25 Amiichii: awkawk
00:25 Another Lie: dts
00:25 Another Lie: dst
00:25 Amiichii: 03:45:218 (225218|1,225532|3,225846|1,226160|2) - ga dibuat LN semua ja?
00:26 Another Lie: sabar :V
00:26 *Another Lie belom selesai :V
00:26 Amiichii: 03:46:475 (226475|0) - ini LN buat apa?
00:26 Amiichii: ok
00:26 Amiichii: minyak dulu
00:26 Amiichii: pindah channel
00:26 Another Lie: done
00:26 Amiichii: waakw
00:26 Another Lie: 03:45:532 (225532|3,225846|1,226160|2) - k LN
00:26 Another Lie: 03:46:475 (226475|0) - ada suara panjang, endnya disini 03:46:789 -
00:27 Amiichii: yaudah brati cut
00:27 Amiichii: wkwk
00:27 Another Lie: udah
00:27 Another Lie: :V
00:27 Amiichii: 03:46:475 (226475|0) - dkk
00:27 Another Lie: gw eue lu ntar :V
00:27 Amiichii: antek"nya masi banyak
00:27 Amiichii: awkawk
00:27 Another Lie: yawla
00:28 Another Lie: mana kawan kawannya?
00:28 *Another Lie cuma nemu 1 :v
00:28 Amiichii: 03:47:731 (227731|3) - dkk
00:28 Amiichii: ini salah timing
00:28 Amiichii: awkawk
00:28 Amiichii: 03:48:988 (228988|3) - ^
00:29 Another Lie: udah di cut
00:29 Another Lie: semua
00:29 Another Lie: -_-
00:29 Another Lie: kirain apa -_-
00:29 Amiichii: o uda
00:29 Amiichii: naise 'w')b
00:30 Another Lie: udah?
00:30 Amiichii: dah
00:30 Amiichii: kelar
00:30 Amiichii: njer
00:30 Amiichii: salah channel chat tadi
00:30 Amiichii: wakawk
00:30 Another Lie: post sanah~ :V
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Amiichii wrote:

lie
23:57 *Amiichii is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1266880 Ice - Zetsu [A Lie's HD]] <osu!mania> |4K|
23:57 Another Lie: ea
00:02 Amiichii: maafkan saia yg copo
00:02 Amiichii: wkwk
00:03 Amiichii: nc 'w')b
00:03 Another Lie: epic style :v
00:03 Amiichii: ga jaog main instrumental
00:03 Amiichii: wkwk
00:03 Another Lie: cari cari kesalahan gih~
00:03 Amiichii: hadew
00:03 *Another Lie is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1266880 Ice - Zetsu [A Lie's HD]]
00:04 Amiichii: 00:21:658 - ga kurang note?
00:04 Amiichii: keknya ngga deh
00:04 Amiichii: ga ada bass baru
00:04 Another Lie: 00:21:658 - ga ada "bam" macam 00:17:888 (17888|0,17888|2) -
00:04 Amiichii: wkwk
00:05 Another Lie: :v
00:05 Amiichii: 00:42:783 (42783|1) - yakin?
00:05 Another Lie: 00:51:815 - tadi part sini niatnya dum dum dum gitu
00:06 Another Lie: 00:42:626 (42626|1,42626|0,42705|2,42705|3) - kan high sound
00:06 Another Lie: delete kah ini 00:42:783 (42783|1) - ?
00:06 Amiichii: 00:42:783 (42783|1) - no sound
00:06 Amiichii: i think
00:06 Amiichii: wkwk
00:06 Another Lie: ok sih :3
00:06 Another Lie: deleted
00:07 Another Lie: emang no sound :v
00:07 Amiichii: 00:45:140 - ga di add?
00:07 Amiichii: wwkwk
00:07 Amiichii: 00:49:537 - ga di add?
00:07 Amiichii: 00:54:328 (54328|3) - stop di 00:54:956 - ?
00:07 Amiichii: kawan"nya cuman 2/1s 
00:08 Amiichii: kok ini beda sendiri
00:08 Amiichii: wkwk
00:08 Another Lie: ah empty column itu emang disengaja
00:08 Another Lie: buat playability :v
00:08 Amiichii: yg mna?
00:08 Amiichii: akwak
00:08 Another Lie: 00:54:328 (54328|3) - ok ikut stop sana
00:08 Amiichii: 00:55:270 - and 00:55:427 - 
00:08 Another Lie: 00:45:140 - sama 00:49:537 - sengaja kosong
00:08 Amiichii: add piano?
00:09 Amiichii: 00:59:354 (59354|0) -  cut cut
00:09 Amiichii: wkwk
00:09 Amiichii: oh ok ok
00:09 Another Lie: 00:55:270 - sama 00:55:427 - ga terlalu fokus piano
00:09 Amiichii: 01:00:297 - ini jg add piano klo tadi di apply
00:09 Another Lie: keep no add
00:09 Amiichii: wkwk
00:09 Another Lie: 00:59:354 (59354|0) - cutted
00:09 Amiichii: soalnya ini 00:55:585 (55585|1,55899|2,56213|1,56527|0) -  piano
00:09 Another Lie: tiangnya kena cut :v
00:09 Amiichii: jadi aku saranin
00:09 Amiichii: ngga di add jg gpp
00:09 Amiichii: wkwk
00:10 Another Lie: [need 1/1]
00:10 Amiichii: padahal ini di add 01:02:810 (62810|2,62967|1,63124|3) - 
00:10 Amiichii: awkawkaw
00:10 Amiichii: baka!!
00:10 Another Lie: 01:05:323 (65323|1,65480|2,65637|3) - kecuali suara kyk gini 01:05:323 (65323|1,65480|2,65637|3) -
00:10 *Another Lie niatnya 1 1 1 1, baru 3
00:10 Another Lie: 3 baru 1 1 1 1
00:10 Amiichii: timingnya sama
00:10 Amiichii: LOL
00:11 Amiichii: 01:01:867 (61867|1) - ga dicut?
00:11 Amiichii: 01:04:380 (64380|0) - ^
00:11 Amiichii: dkk
00:11 Another Lie: 00:55:270 - added
00:11 Another Lie: 00:55:427 - added
00:11 Amiichii: wkwkk
00:11 Amiichii: dah serah kan dah tau konsistensinya gmn
00:11 Amiichii: lul
00:12 Another Lie: :v semua tiang cutted
00:12 Another Lie: next
00:12 Amiichii: 01:23:229 (83229|3,83307|1,83386|2,83464|0,83543|3,83621|1,83700|2,83778|0,83857|3,83935|1,84014|2,84092|0,84171|3,84249|1,84328|2,84407|0,84485|1) -  gw kzl ama ini
00:12 Amiichii: wakwak
00:12 Amiichii: knp ga dibuat stairs aja
00:12 Another Lie: ez :V
00:12 Another Lie: 4231
00:12 Another Lie: no
00:12 Another Lie: too ez
00:12 Amiichii: itu stairs pasnya bkn kek drum kanan kiri
00:12 Amiichii: LOL
00:12 Amiichii: yaudah
00:13 Another Lie: nanti kalo dimention sama orang
00:13 Another Lie: baru stairs
00:13 Amiichii: 01:31:396 (91396|2,91475|0,91553|3,91632|0,91710|3,91789|0,91867|3,91946|0) - klo ini kek tadi lah gpp
00:13 Amiichii: wkwk
00:13 Another Lie: tapi "too common" T_T
00:13 Amiichii: wkwk
00:13 Amiichii: ok skip
00:13 Amiichii: next
00:13 Another Lie: sayangnya ini hard
00:13 Another Lie: yah kalo insane / lebih
00:13 Another Lie: gw bikin pink semua :V
00:14 Amiichii: lel
00:15 Another Lie: 02:09:721 - added 1 note lagi
00:15 Amiichii: 02:15:218 (135218|0) -lg mikir ini ikut apa
00:15 Another Lie: 02:21:658 - added
00:15 Amiichii: wkwk
00:16 Amiichii: soalnya drumnya ada di 02:15:297 -  dan 02:15:375 - 
00:16 Another Lie: 02:15:218 - dum follow flownya 02:15:061 (135061|3,135061|2) -
00:16 Amiichii: wkwk
00:16 Another Lie: oh anjeg
00:16 Another Lie: V:
00:16 Another Lie: pantes ada yg kurang
00:16 Amiichii: apa si?
00:16 Another Lie: 02:12:783 (132783|1) -
00:16 Amiichii: wkwk
00:16 Another Lie: ok gw ganti semua yg red ke blue
00:16 Amiichii: zeeb
00:17 Another Lie: serius
00:17 Another Lie: rasanya ga enak
00:17 Amiichii: emang
00:17 Another Lie: gw mainin ada yg kurang :V
00:17 Amiichii: kan itu flowmu
00:17 Amiichii: bkn flowku
00:17 Amiichii: awkawk
00:17 Amiichii: :p
00:17 Another Lie: MAKASIH
00:17 Another Lie: saia kurang telitih~
00:17 Another Lie: next :3
00:18 Amiichii: 'w')b
00:18 Amiichii: 02:17:181 - ini ga diadd?
00:18 Another Lie: 02:17:181 - add to 4
00:19 Another Lie: 02:40:192 - add to 3
00:19 Amiichii: 02:41:448 (161448|2,161448|3,161763|2,161763|3,162077|3,162077|2) - saran http://puu.sh/vk9j5/1d22720fe8.jpg
00:20 Amiichii: reason pitchnya  membesar/naik
00:20 Amiichii: atau dibalik jg gpp
00:20 Amiichii: serah
00:20 Amiichii: wkwk
00:20 Amiichii: 02:46:475 (166475|1,166475|0,166789|1,166789|0,167103|0,167103|1) - ^
00:20 Another Lie: ugh... semua ternyata salah pitch...
00:20 Another Lie: masyaallah
00:20 Amiichii: :'<
00:20 Another Lie: konsistencynya :V
00:21 Amiichii: dst ya. itu kan masalah style
00:21 Amiichii: ga ngikut pitch gpp
00:21 Amiichii: wkwk
00:21 Another Lie: liat tuh semua note -_- yawla ampuni baim yawla
00:21 Another Lie: gw jadi hitung lagi :V
00:21 Another Lie: next :v
00:21 Amiichii: wkwk
00:21 Another Lie: gw kalo serius ngemap tuh biasanya pake notepad
00:22 Another Lie: buat itung consistency
00:22 Amiichii: ini doble
00:22 Amiichii: 03:17:574 (197574|3) - ini cingle
00:22 Amiichii: 03:18:831 (198831|3) - ini uga
00:22 Amiichii: maunya  apa ci?
00:22 Amiichii: wkwk
00:22 Another Lie: now i know what you mean :V
00:23 Amiichii: awkawk
00:23 Another Lie: done semua
00:24 Another Lie: :V
00:24 Amiichii: 03:37:679 (217679|3) - aku lebih suka ini di cut segini 03:37:993 - 
00:24 Amiichii: 1/1s
00:24 Amiichii: lebih menitmati
00:24 Amiichii: wkwk
00:24 Amiichii: *menikmati
00:24 Amiichii: wakawk
00:25 Another Lie: 03:37:679 (217679|3) - cut to white line
00:25 Amiichii: dst ya
00:25 Amiichii: dkk nya
00:25 Amiichii: ga sendirian dia
00:25 Another Lie: 03:38:150 (218150|2,218464|0) - moved to col 4
00:25 Amiichii: berjamaah
00:25 Amiichii: awkawk
00:25 Another Lie: dts
00:25 Another Lie: dst
00:25 Amiichii: 03:45:218 (225218|1,225532|3,225846|1,226160|2) - ga dibuat LN semua ja?
00:26 Another Lie: sabar :V
00:26 *Another Lie belom selesai :V
00:26 Amiichii: 03:46:475 (226475|0) - ini LN buat apa?
00:26 Amiichii: ok
00:26 Amiichii: minyak dulu
00:26 Amiichii: pindah channel
00:26 Another Lie: done
00:26 Amiichii: waakw
00:26 Another Lie: 03:45:532 (225532|3,225846|1,226160|2) - k LN
00:26 Another Lie: 03:46:475 (226475|0) - ada suara panjang, endnya disini 03:46:789 -
00:27 Amiichii: yaudah brati cut
00:27 Amiichii: wkwk
00:27 Another Lie: udah
00:27 Another Lie: :V
00:27 Amiichii: 03:46:475 (226475|0) - dkk
00:27 Another Lie: gw eue lu ntar :V
00:27 Amiichii: antek"nya masi banyak
00:27 Amiichii: awkawk
00:27 Another Lie: yawla
00:28 Another Lie: mana kawan kawannya?
00:28 *Another Lie cuma nemu 1 :v
00:28 Amiichii: 03:47:731 (227731|3) - dkk
00:28 Amiichii: ini salah timing
00:28 Amiichii: awkawk
00:28 Amiichii: 03:48:988 (228988|3) - ^
00:29 Another Lie: udah di cut
00:29 Another Lie: semua
00:29 Another Lie: -_-
00:29 Another Lie: kirain apa -_-
00:29 Amiichii: o uda
00:29 Amiichii: naise 'w')b
00:30 Another Lie: udah?
00:30 Amiichii: dah
00:30 Amiichii: kelar
00:30 Amiichii: njer
00:30 Amiichii: salah channel chat tadi
00:30 Amiichii: wakawk
00:30 Another Lie: post sanah~ :V
I hope i understand :(
genkicho
449 posts
Joined May 2013
genkicho
NICE.
I wrote very long mod and accidentially ctrl+w and it closed the tab. FIRETRUCK GO*GLE
here i will just write major error on this map.

Venus
00:43:647 (43647|3,43667|2,43687|1,43706|0,43726|3,43746|2,43765|1,43785|0,43804|3,43824|2,43844|1,43863|0,43883|3) - please be consistent with this kind of pattern, sometime you use 1/16 and 1/12
00:51:815 (51815|0) - for the LNs, please recheck the length like this , 00:54:328 (54328|1) - it doesnt end there
00:55:585 (55585|2,55899|3,56213|1,56527|0) - i think mini LNs better for that sound. apply to similar sound
00:59:276 (59276|3,59354|3) - 01:00:532 (60532|1,60611|1) - pls avoid unintended minijack when theres LN
01:01:475 (61475|3,61553|3,61632|0,61710|0) - ^
01:11:920 (71920|1) - too few notes, and looks weird when there are only LNs,, cuz there are many other sounds
01:16:946 (76946|1) - from this part i suggest doublenote on every white line
01:21:815 (81815|2,81815|1,81815|0,81815|3) - why quad
01:24:485 (84485|0,84721|0,84956|1,84956|0,85192|0,85427|0,85585|0) - please recheck anchor on this map, there are many, and im lazy to rewrite it cuz the fooooookin ctrl+w
01:27:626 (87626|3,87705|3) - unintended i suppose.. pls avoid
01:39:564 (99564|3,99564|0,99642|0,99642|3,99721|0,99721|3,99799|1,99799|2,99878|0,99878|2,99878|1) - avoid (?)
01:52:129 this part too few notes (?) compared to other parts, this looks undermapped
01:58:255 (118255|2) - extend it and delete the note that blocks it
02:23:700 (143700|1,143857|1) - different sound i suggest different column, please apply to similar pattern in this map like here 02:28:726 (148726|1,148883|1) -
02:41:448 (161448|2,161448|3,161448|0,161448|1,161763|2,161763|3,161763|0,161763|1,162077|0,162077|1,162077|3,162077|2,162391|2,162391|3,162391|0,162391|1) - different sound, but they look same, i suggest change to LNs, and apply to other similar patterns
02:57:941 (177941|1,177941|3,178098|3,178098|0,178098|2) - according to piano, make double and triple same column like this 02:59:825 (179825|2,179825|0,179982|2,179982|0) -
03:10:035 (190035|0) - i think you dont need to doubletrill it cuz not really loud sound
03:46:946 (226946|3,226946|1,227024|1,227024|3,227103|1,227103|3) - painful

i think thats all, i got soooo maannyyyy pattern suggestions but fu-ed up with ctrl+w
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

genkicho wrote:

NICE.
I wrote very long mod and accidentially ctrl+w and it closed the tab. FIRETRUCK GO*GLE
here i will just write major error on this map.

Venus
00:43:647 (43647|3,43667|2,43687|1,43706|0,43726|3,43746|2,43765|1,43785|0,43804|3,43824|2,43844|1,43863|0,43883|3) - please be consistent with this kind of pattern, sometime you use 1/16 and 1/12
00:51:815 (51815|0) - for the LNs, please recheck the length like this , 00:54:328 (54328|1) - it doesnt end there
00:55:585 (55585|2,55899|3,56213|1,56527|0) - i think mini LNs better for that sound. apply to similar sound
00:59:276 (59276|3,59354|3) - 01:00:532 (60532|1,60611|1) - pls avoid unintended minijack when theres LN
01:01:475 (61475|3,61553|3,61632|0,61710|0) - ^
01:11:920 (71920|1) - too few notes, and looks weird when there are only LNs,, cuz there are many other sounds
01:16:946 (76946|1) - from this part i suggest doublenote on every white line
01:21:815 (81815|2,81815|1,81815|0,81815|3) - why quad
01:24:485 (84485|0,84721|0,84956|1,84956|0,85192|0,85427|0,85585|0) - please recheck anchor on this map, there are many, and im lazy to rewrite it cuz the fooooookin ctrl+w
01:27:626 (87626|3,87705|3) - unintended i suppose.. pls avoid
01:39:564 (99564|3,99564|0,99642|0,99642|3,99721|0,99721|3,99799|1,99799|2,99878|0,99878|2,99878|1) - avoid (?)
01:52:129 this part too few notes (?) compared to other parts, this looks undermapped
01:58:255 (118255|2) - extend it and delete the note that blocks it
02:23:700 (143700|1,143857|1) - different sound i suggest different column, please apply to similar pattern in this map like here 02:28:726 (148726|1,148883|1) -
02:41:448 (161448|2,161448|3,161448|0,161448|1,161763|2,161763|3,161763|0,161763|1,162077|0,162077|1,162077|3,162077|2,162391|2,162391|3,162391|0,162391|1) - different sound, but they look same, i suggest change to LNs, and apply to other similar patterns
02:57:941 (177941|1,177941|3,178098|3,178098|0,178098|2) - according to piano, make double and triple same column like this 02:59:825 (179825|2,179825|0,179982|2,179982|0) -
03:10:035 (190035|0) - i think you dont need to doubletrill it cuz not really loud sound
03:46:946 (226946|3,226946|1,227024|1,227024|3,227103|1,227103|3) - painful

i think thats all, i got soooo maannyyyy pattern suggestions but fu-ed up with ctrl+w
ty for the mod 8-)
riunosk
1,136 posts
Joined January 2015
riunosk
m4m 1 2 3 4
important! ; before you start reading through my mod, please note that im not there to throw hate or flame you, im just attempting to help improve the chart
General
why is the first beat not at 00:00:297 - ? i dont see a reason why it should be much later than that
ez
00:05:323 (5323|2,5323|1,6579|3) - i suggest 34 and 2 for pitch
00:16:632 (16632|0) - i think it should be fine if you stack this on top of the previous note, since its the same sound idk
00:54:328 (54328|3) - why is this not an LN, considering the previous notes follow the same sound
00:59:354 (59354|0) - ^
00:55:270 - do a 1/2 minitrill here as you did the same for 01:02:810 -
01:10:663 (70663|3) - i'll stop mentioning these
01:24:485 (84485|1,85742|2) - what are these following?
02:22:286 - this section is so empty i could fall asleep (its a kiai as well !!)
03:32:024 - i think this LN can be split into two here
04:06:579 - what happened here?! why is this empty?!
04:39:249 - why is this a quad on easy difficulty
last kiai feels ultra empty, please add more notes inside to prevent the start of a new ice age
etsu
01:30:925 (90925|2,91003|1,91082|3) - maybe 4 3 2 for more even flow
02:01:396 (121396|0,121475|1,121553|2) - flip to 4 3 2 to reduce focus on 1
02:58:569 (178569|3,178726|3) - is lower pitched than 02:59:825 (179825|2,179982|2) - , so flip these two
04:16:632 (256632|3,256632|0,256867|3,256867|0,257260|3,257260|0,257496|3,257496|0) - why not vary these?
that liar in april
00:00:297 - i dont see why this should be a triple
00:02:810 (2810|0,2810|3) - i dont see the need for a double here
^ these applies for the entire section
ess see
00:00:297 - refer to my mod on lie's difficulty for this section
00:31:082 (31082|3,31710|0,32338|1) - what are these for?
00:36:422 - same for the LNs
00:40:192 - this should NOT be a triple, no sound for it
00:44:276 (44276|3,44433|3,44590|3,44747|3) - anchor
00:48:045 (48045|3,48202|3,48359|3,48516|3,48674|3,48831|3,48988|3,49145|3,49302|3) - this can be minimized
00:51:815 - to 01:16:946 - this should not be this empty, considering its SC
01:19:302 (79302|2,79302|3,79302|0) - no reason for triple
01:21:579 (81579|2,81579|3,81579|0,81815|3,81815|0,81815|2) - ^
01:24:485 - i suggest mapping the kicks just like before and after this part to be consistent with your patterning
01:31:475 (91475|2,91632|2,91789|2,91946|2) - unnecessary anchor
01:35:323 - to 01:39:878 - please, listen carefully at 50% and map it according to the kicks and snares. theres just too many for me to list out. also snares shouldnt be quads here since theres no sound for it
01:42:077 - a LOT of ghost notes here, listen at 25% or 50%
01:54:564 - missing note
02:05:323 (125323|2,125323|0,125323|1,125323|3,125951|2,125951|0,125951|1,125951|3) - these should not be quads, no sound for it
02:07:365 (127365|0,127522|0,127836|0,127993|0,128150|0,128464|0,128621|0,128857|0,129092|0,129249|0,129407|0,129721|0,130035|0,130192|0,130506|0,130742|0,130977|0,131213|0) - quite the focus on 1 eh?
02:13:176 - i'll stop mentioning about kicks and snares, its starting to annoy me
02:24:328 - this section here has a lot of unnecessary anchoring that can be avoided
02:41:134 (161134|3,161134|0,161134|1,161134|2) - are you fking kidding me, quad on a quiet sound
02:58:569 (178569|3,178569|0,178726|3,178726|0) - different pitch from the previous 4 notes
02:59:825 (179825|2,179825|0,179982|1,179982|3) - ^
03:01:867 (181867|1,181867|3,181867|0) - just turn this into a single note >:(
03:10:035 (190035|0,190192|0,190349|0,190506|0,190663|0,190663|2,190820|2,190977|2,191134|2,191291|2) - anchor
03:17:574 - this section you can map the piano sounds so that its not so boring
03:37:679 - im not even going to bother modding this kiai, refer to my suggestions above
moku
before i start modding, i strongly suggest you avoid using SC+, as the + can cause a lot of confusion on the difficulty, theres a forum about it somewhere but i lost the link so maybe you can change it to SHD
00:43:647 (43647|1,43804|1,43962|1,44119|1) - anchor
00:45:532 (45532|2,45689|2,45846|2,46003|2,46160|2) - ^
00:49:302 (49302|1,49459|1,49616|1,49773|1,49930|1,50087|1) - hmm
01:10:820 (70820|2,70977|2,71134|2,71291|2) - ^
01:18:359 (78359|1,78516|1,78674|1,78831|1,78988|1,79145|1) - anchor overload
01:19:145 (79145|2,79302|2,79459|2,79616|2) - here too!!
01:21:972 (81972|2,82129|2,82286|2,82443|2,82600|2,82757|2) - why are there so many anchors
01:22:600 (82600|3,82757|3,82914|3,83071|3) - :?
01:23:543 (83543|3,83621|3,84171|0,84249|0) - why minijack?
01:28:255 - same for the minijacks here
01:29:354 (89354|1,89511|1,89668|1,89825|1,89982|1,90140|1) - blub
01:33:281 (93281|3,93438|3,93595|3,93752|3,93909|3,94223|3,94380|3,94537|3) - why
01:34:773 (94773|0,94852|0) - dont see the need for this
01:38:307 (98307|1,98464|1,98621|1,98778|1,99092|1,99249|1,99564|1,99721|1,99878|1) - quite the anchor you got here
01:40:820 (100820|0,100977|0,101134|0,101291|0,101448|0,101763|0) - oh god
01:41:134 (101134|2,101291|2,101605|2,101763|2,101920|2,102077|2,102234|2,102391|2) - i think i need my math teacher around
01:43:962 (103962|1,104119|1,104276|1,104433|1,104590|1) - to count
01:52:443 (112443|1,112600|1,112757|1,112914|1,113229|1,113386|1) - the amount
01:53:700 (113700|2,113857|2,114014|2,114171|2,114485|2,114642|2,114799|2,114956|2,115427|2,115585|2,115977|2) - of
01:56:684 (116684|1,116841|1,116998|1,117155|1) - anchors
01:54:564 (114564|1,114642|1) - also this minijack is disgusting
01:58:569 (118569|1,118726|1,118883|1,119040|1,119197|1,119354|1,119511|1,119668|1,119825|1,119982|1,120454|1,120611|1,120768|1,120925|1,121082|1,121239|1,121396|1,121553|1,121710|1,121946|1,122103|1,122338|1,122496|1,122653|1,122810|1,122967|1,123124|1,123438|1,123595|1,123752|1,123909|1,124223|1,124459|1,124537|1) -
02:04:459 (124459|1,124537|1) - why
02:05:794 (125794|2,125951|2,126108|2,126265|2,126422|2,126579|2,126736|2,126893|2,127051|2,127208|2,127365|2,127522|2,127679|2,127836|2,127993|2) - >:(
----i'll stop mentioning anchors now, theres way too much for my sanity----
02:31:946 (151946|0,152024|0) - pls dont do this to me
03:27:548 (207548|2,207626|2) - WHY >:C
03:37:679 - i have a gut feeling this section is copypasted
----i'll stop mentioning minijacks now----
massive anchoring issues
venus
oh boy here we go
00:42:548 (42548|3,42548|2,42626|3,42626|2,42705|3,42705|2) - holy FK WHY
00:50:244 - aiae confirmed?
01:00:532 (60532|1,60611|1) - goddammit move it to 1
too...much...minijacks...that arent needed...*dies*
02:06:579 (126579|2) - moving this to 1 will get rid of that minijack
02:08:935 (128935|1,128955|2,128975|3,128994|0,129014|1,129033|2,129053|3,129073|0,129092|1) - this isnt snapped correctly
02:27:155 (147155|3,147155|2,147155|0,147155|1) - no need for this
02:31:710 - oh god.
02:36:108 - no. just dont do this, please
02:56:213 (176213|2,176213|1) - although this is following a sound, i dont think this should be mapped
03:14:433 - i dont think you should map this brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr sound
03:38:935 (218935|2,218935|0,218935|1,218935|3) - this is only a kick, come on
03:43:962 - ^
03:54:485 - snapping pls?
04:09:092 (249092|0,249092|1,249092|2,249092|3) - kick!
04:19:773 - i just suggest you dont map this sound altogether
my god what have i just seen
i have no words to describe what i just saw
i suggest a remap for this mapset
Abraxos
855 posts
Joined October 2014
Abraxos
i was redirected here

venus


playability
let's do a bit of math shall we
00:43:647 (43647|3,43667|2,43687|1,43706|0,43726|3,43746|2,43765|1,43785|0,43804|3,43824|2,43844|1,43863|0,43883|3) -
191 bpm 1/16s roughly translate to 764 bpm streams, in this case jumptrills

now we compare
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/350094 - 1/8 234 bpm bursts, 468 bpm realtime
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/770127 - 1/8 256 bpm jumptrills, 512 bpm realtime

you want to know the similarities between these two maps with their bursts and yours? theyre very awful to play
whats worse is how your burst is way faster than the two i listed, and the two listed are already infamous enough for how garbage they are

i dont recommend you charting something this hard when youre this new into the scene - hard DOES NOT MEAN good; get that into your head

no kds
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

riunosk wrote:

m4m 1 2 3 4
important! ; before you start reading through my mod, please note that im not there to throw hate or flame you, im just attempting to help improve the chart
General
why is the first beat not at 00:00:297 - ? i dont see a reason why it should be much later than that
ez
00:05:323 (5323|2,5323|1,6579|3) - i suggest 34 and 2 for pitch
00:16:632 (16632|0) - i think it should be fine if you stack this on top of the previous note, since its the same sound idk
00:54:328 (54328|3) - why is this not an LN, considering the previous notes follow the same sound
00:59:354 (59354|0) - ^
00:55:270 - do a 1/2 minitrill here as you did the same for 01:02:810 -
01:10:663 (70663|3) - i'll stop mentioning these
01:24:485 (84485|1,85742|2) - what are these following?
02:22:286 - this section is so empty i could fall asleep (its a kiai as well !!)
03:32:024 - i think this LN can be split into two here
04:06:579 - what happened here?! why is this empty?!
04:39:249 - why is this a quad on easy difficulty
last kiai feels ultra empty, please add more notes inside to prevent the start of a new ice age
etsu
01:30:925 (90925|2,91003|1,91082|3) - maybe 4 3 2 for more even flow
02:01:396 (121396|0,121475|1,121553|2) - flip to 4 3 2 to reduce focus on 1
02:58:569 (178569|3,178726|3) - is lower pitched than 02:59:825 (179825|2,179982|2) - , so flip these two
04:16:632 (256632|3,256632|0,256867|3,256867|0,257260|3,257260|0,257496|3,257496|0) - why not vary these?
that liar in april
00:00:297 - i dont see why this should be a triple
00:02:810 (2810|0,2810|3) - i dont see the need for a double here
^ these applies for the entire section
ess see
00:00:297 - refer to my mod on lie's difficulty for this section
00:31:082 (31082|3,31710|0,32338|1) - what are these for?
00:36:422 - same for the LNs
00:40:192 - this should NOT be a triple, no sound for it
00:44:276 (44276|3,44433|3,44590|3,44747|3) - anchor
00:48:045 (48045|3,48202|3,48359|3,48516|3,48674|3,48831|3,48988|3,49145|3,49302|3) - this can be minimized
00:51:815 - to 01:16:946 - this should not be this empty, considering its SC
01:19:302 (79302|2,79302|3,79302|0) - no reason for triple
01:21:579 (81579|2,81579|3,81579|0,81815|3,81815|0,81815|2) - ^
01:24:485 - i suggest mapping the kicks just like before and after this part to be consistent with your patterning
01:31:475 (91475|2,91632|2,91789|2,91946|2) - unnecessary anchor
01:35:323 - to 01:39:878 - please, listen carefully at 50% and map it according to the kicks and snares. theres just too many for me to list out. also snares shouldnt be quads here since theres no sound for it
01:42:077 - a LOT of ghost notes here, listen at 25% or 50%
01:54:564 - missing note
02:05:323 (125323|2,125323|0,125323|1,125323|3,125951|2,125951|0,125951|1,125951|3) - these should not be quads, no sound for it
02:07:365 (127365|0,127522|0,127836|0,127993|0,128150|0,128464|0,128621|0,128857|0,129092|0,129249|0,129407|0,129721|0,130035|0,130192|0,130506|0,130742|0,130977|0,131213|0) - quite the focus on 1 eh?
02:13:176 - i'll stop mentioning about kicks and snares, its starting to annoy me
02:24:328 - this section here has a lot of unnecessary anchoring that can be avoided
02:41:134 (161134|3,161134|0,161134|1,161134|2) - are you fking kidding me, quad on a quiet sound
02:58:569 (178569|3,178569|0,178726|3,178726|0) - different pitch from the previous 4 notes
02:59:825 (179825|2,179825|0,179982|1,179982|3) - ^
03:01:867 (181867|1,181867|3,181867|0) - just turn this into a single note >:(
03:10:035 (190035|0,190192|0,190349|0,190506|0,190663|0,190663|2,190820|2,190977|2,191134|2,191291|2) - anchor
03:17:574 - this section you can map the piano sounds so that its not so boring
03:37:679 - im not even going to bother modding this kiai, refer to my suggestions above
moku
before i start modding, i strongly suggest you avoid using SC+, as the + can cause a lot of confusion on the difficulty, theres a forum about it somewhere but i lost the link so maybe you can change it to SHD
00:43:647 (43647|1,43804|1,43962|1,44119|1) - anchor
00:45:532 (45532|2,45689|2,45846|2,46003|2,46160|2) - ^
00:49:302 (49302|1,49459|1,49616|1,49773|1,49930|1,50087|1) - hmm
01:10:820 (70820|2,70977|2,71134|2,71291|2) - ^
01:18:359 (78359|1,78516|1,78674|1,78831|1,78988|1,79145|1) - anchor overload
01:19:145 (79145|2,79302|2,79459|2,79616|2) - here too!!
01:21:972 (81972|2,82129|2,82286|2,82443|2,82600|2,82757|2) - why are there so many anchors
01:22:600 (82600|3,82757|3,82914|3,83071|3) - :?
01:23:543 (83543|3,83621|3,84171|0,84249|0) - why minijack?
01:28:255 - same for the minijacks here
01:29:354 (89354|1,89511|1,89668|1,89825|1,89982|1,90140|1) - blub
01:33:281 (93281|3,93438|3,93595|3,93752|3,93909|3,94223|3,94380|3,94537|3) - why
01:34:773 (94773|0,94852|0) - dont see the need for this
01:38:307 (98307|1,98464|1,98621|1,98778|1,99092|1,99249|1,99564|1,99721|1,99878|1) - quite the anchor you got here
01:40:820 (100820|0,100977|0,101134|0,101291|0,101448|0,101763|0) - oh god
01:41:134 (101134|2,101291|2,101605|2,101763|2,101920|2,102077|2,102234|2,102391|2) - i think i need my math teacher around
01:43:962 (103962|1,104119|1,104276|1,104433|1,104590|1) - to count
01:52:443 (112443|1,112600|1,112757|1,112914|1,113229|1,113386|1) - the amount
01:53:700 (113700|2,113857|2,114014|2,114171|2,114485|2,114642|2,114799|2,114956|2,115427|2,115585|2,115977|2) - of
01:56:684 (116684|1,116841|1,116998|1,117155|1) - anchors
01:54:564 (114564|1,114642|1) - also this minijack is disgusting
01:58:569 (118569|1,118726|1,118883|1,119040|1,119197|1,119354|1,119511|1,119668|1,119825|1,119982|1,120454|1,120611|1,120768|1,120925|1,121082|1,121239|1,121396|1,121553|1,121710|1,121946|1,122103|1,122338|1,122496|1,122653|1,122810|1,122967|1,123124|1,123438|1,123595|1,123752|1,123909|1,124223|1,124459|1,124537|1) -
02:04:459 (124459|1,124537|1) - why
02:05:794 (125794|2,125951|2,126108|2,126265|2,126422|2,126579|2,126736|2,126893|2,127051|2,127208|2,127365|2,127522|2,127679|2,127836|2,127993|2) - >:(
----i'll stop mentioning anchors now, theres way too much for my sanity----
02:31:946 (151946|0,152024|0) - pls dont do this to me
03:27:548 (207548|2,207626|2) - WHY >:C
03:37:679 - i have a gut feeling this section is copypasted
----i'll stop mentioning minijacks now----
massive anchoring issues
venus
oh boy here we go
00:42:548 (42548|3,42548|2,42626|3,42626|2,42705|3,42705|2) - holy FK WHY
00:50:244 - aiae confirmed?
01:00:532 (60532|1,60611|1) - goddammit move it to 1
too...much...minijacks...that arent needed...*dies*
02:06:579 (126579|2) - moving this to 1 will get rid of that minijack
02:08:935 (128935|1,128955|2,128975|3,128994|0,129014|1,129033|2,129053|3,129073|0,129092|1) - this isnt snapped correctly
02:27:155 (147155|3,147155|2,147155|0,147155|1) - no need for this
02:31:710 - oh god.
02:36:108 - no. just dont do this, please
02:56:213 (176213|2,176213|1) - although this is following a sound, i dont think this should be mapped
03:14:433 - i dont think you should map this brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr sound
03:38:935 (218935|2,218935|0,218935|1,218935|3) - this is only a kick, come on
03:43:962 - ^
03:54:485 - snapping pls?
04:09:092 (249092|0,249092|1,249092|2,249092|3) - kick!
04:19:773 - i just suggest you dont map this sound altogether
my god what have i just seen
i have no words to describe what i just saw
i suggest a remap for this mapset
Aiaeiaiaeiaieai....
Ty for your super long and helpful mod. Almost all are applied.Btw, will mod you back asap :)
Btw, Another Lie said that your mod on his diff is rejected so yeah
Last edited by AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH , edited 1 time in total.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Abraxos wrote:

i was redirected here

venus


playability
let's do a bit of math shall we
00:43:647 (43647|3,43667|2,43687|1,43706|0,43726|3,43746|2,43765|1,43785|0,43804|3,43824|2,43844|1,43863|0,43883|3) -
191 bpm 1/16s roughly translate to 764 bpm streams, in this case jumptrills

now we compare
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/350094 - 1/8 234 bpm bursts, 468 bpm realtime
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/770127 - 1/8 256 bpm jumptrills, 512 bpm realtime

you want to know the similarities between these two maps with their bursts and yours? theyre very awful to play
whats worse is how your burst is way faster than the two i listed, and the two listed are already infamous enough for how garbage they are

i dont recommend you charting something this hard when youre this new into the scene - hard DOES NOT MEAN good; get that into your head

no kds
fixed :o
(btw back when I was mapping and modding, I didn't know whether it should be 1/16 and 1/12 so yeah :P )
Etsu
1,240 posts
Joined October 2013
Etsu

riunosk wrote:

m4m 1 2 3 4
important! ; before you start reading through my mod, please note that im not there to throw hate or flame you, im just attempting to help improve the chart
General
why is the first beat not at 00:00:297 - ? i dont see a reason why it should be much later than that

etsu
01:30:925 (90925|2,91003|1,91082|3) - maybe 4 3 2 for more even flow
02:01:396 (121396|0,121475|1,121553|2) - flip to 4 3 2 to reduce focus on 1
02:58:569 (178569|3,178726|3) - is lower pitched than 02:59:825 (179825|2,179982|2) - , so flip these two
04:16:632 (256632|3,256632|0,256867|3,256867|0,257260|3,257260|0,257496|3,257496|0) - why not vary these? /*are right

i have no words to describe what i just saw
i suggest a remap for this mapset
all accepted thanks for mod :)

Updated
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Curiossity
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Curiossity
Ice - Zetsu MOD

From Curiossity's Mania Marathon M4M Modding Queue

Columns: 0|1|2|3

I'll go ahead and mod the whole diff, cause stopping half way through isn't my style @.@

Venus
00:41:527 (41527|1,41527|3) - Why is this a double, the violin sound isn't any louder. Should probably be single

00:42:155 - There's 1/4th piano notes starting here, maybe you should map them? Feels weird not to, idunno

00:46:867 - You could probably fit in a note here for the violin, as well as other places between kicks in this section (i.e. here 00:47:496 - and here 00:48:124 (48124|2) - etc.)

00:47:103 (47103|0,47103|3,47142|1,47181|2,47221|3,47260|0,47299|1,47338|2,47378|3) - First, if these are following the piano, then i believe they should be 1/6th notes. Second, why follow the piano here and not before? Try to stay consistent.

00:47:731 (47731|3,47731|0,47770|2,47810|1,47849|0,47888|3,47927|2,47967|1,48006|0) - ^, etc

00:58:019 - Note here? Also, pay attention to consistent layering, not quite sure about it in this section but it's something to look out for.

01:03:045 - See above. Goes for many other places in this part as well.

01:11:291 (71291|0) - Starting here, the drums are at 1/3 beats. Map accordingly.

01:16:946 (76946|0) - Here, you focus exclusively on the synth and not the drums anymore, which is a strange transition to make. It would be better if you mapped both at the same time (paying attention to layering) as it could make for some more interesting and challenging patterns.

01:24:249 (84249|1) - According to your patterning, this should be a double and 01:24:407 (84407|2,84407|1) - should be a single.

01:27:469 (87469|1) - More consistency issues. Last time you had a five burst every other note was a double (kinda), but now the last three are all doubles. I don't think they got more intense either.

01:29:511 (89511|3) - And here, you ignore the synth you've been mapping previously and start just mapping the kicks. Although this might be justifiable, I'm just pointing out the sudden change in allocation of notes. It might be better to have something like a jumpstream here instead.

01:33:595 - You should probably map this sound here, and layer it more strongly elsewhere. Feels strange not hitting it.

01:35:480 (95480|3) - Now you layer it really strongly. Try to stay consistent within these individual sections, it's what holds the map together.

01:37:365 (97365|3) - Here, this sound is a triple but 01:34:852 (94852|3) - here it's only a double. Also the note that follows right after goes from a double to a quad. Change these to be the same, as well as 01:39:878 (99878|3) -

01:42:155 (102155|3) - Ghost note, every place where the synth doesn't play. This section should probably be all five note bursts, essentially.

01:47:103 (107103|3) - Alright, so I see that you're consistent in going straight to 1/2 hands for when the kicks come in, which is good. But this note as well as 01:47:260 (107260|2) - should probably be triples, just to follow patterning.

01:48:045 (108045|3) - Make this a quad for the bigger sound?

01:49:302 (109302|3) - ^

01:51:972 (111972|3) - Maybe not a double

01:53:386 (113386|3) - This note is not emphasized enough for the sound

Yeah, in general this section has issues with layering since you've got the four column LN patterns going on. Maybe break one of the LNs to provide additional emphasis on the larger sounds.

02:02:810 (122810|2) - But here you map it with 1/2 LNs instead of the four column pattern you had last time.

02:06:108 (126108|1,126265|2,126736|0) - These should be more than a single note. Double, if not triple. Also, sick place for SVs here, if you want to add them.

02:07:208 (127208|3,127208|1,127365|0,127365|3,127365|1) - Same sound, different layering.

02:07:836 (127836|0,127836|2,127993|3,127993|2,127993|0) - and 02:08:464 (128464|3,128464|0,128621|1,128621|3,128621|0) - Same.

02:10:349 (130349|1,130349|2,130427|3) - Make this part a jumptrill, the sounds on every 1/4th are the same.

02:11:763 (131763|1) - Add a note on 2

02:12:234 (132234|3) - Maybe remove one of these LNs, having two makes it feel more akin to a kick when there's /nothing/ in the music

02:12:548 (132548|2) - Starting here, more piano that you could probably map

02:20:715 (140715|1,140715|2,140715|0,140872|0,140872|3,140872|1,140872|2) - I've just started to ignore these, honestly, where the same sound is given different number of notes. Maybe it's intentional, for aesthetics or something. I'll make a general remark at the end and probably not mention it that much anymore.

02:22:836 - There should be a note here for the kick. This appears multiple times in this section as well.

02:32:024 (152024|0,152051|1,152077|2,152103|3,152129|0,152155|1,152181|2,152208|3,152234|0,152260|1,152286|2,152312|3) - The pitch changes here for these notes, maybe switch up the pattern to show this.

02:32:338 (152338|0) - Why no 1/4 violin notes here?

02:33:752 (153752|0) - Should probably just be a triple

02:33:988 (153988|3) - Long LN here?

02:36:108 (156108|3,156134|2,156160|1,156187|0,156213|3,156239|2,156265|1,156291|0,156318|3,156344|2,156370|1,156396|0) - Not sure that this pattern really works here. The drums were loud a beat or so ago, not so much right now. Consider remaking this part, so that the pattern itself shows the fading of the drums (1/8 -> 1/6 -> 1/4 -> 1/6 -> 1/8, or something similar. See Mat's Architecture map for an example.) Although this might not be a super idea, since the pacing of the drums doesn't really change, the volume does, and you probably need to show that somehow. I'm just throwing out ideas.

02:37:365 (157365|3) - You completely ignore the drums in this part.

03:14:433 (194433|3) - The other time you had 1/12 burst, it was alright since the sound was something like 1/16 - way too crazy. Here, though, I'm fairly confident it's only 1/8, so you should probably switch the mapping here to that. Also incorporate the kicks into the pattern. i.e. 03:14:433 (194433|3) - 03:14:590 (194590|2) - 03:14:747 (194747|3) - 03:14:825 (194825|1) - 03:14:904 (194904|2) - 03:14:982 (194982|0) - kicks. and 03:15:061 (195061|3) - too

03:36:422 (216422|0) - Poor violin

03:46:632 (226632|1) - Why this jack? There's another sound 1/4 after the second note here but you don't map that

03:54:485 (234485|0,234511|1,234537|2,234564|3,234590|0,234616|1,234642|2) - Shouldn't be 1/12, but 1/8th. Goes for other bursts in this section as well

Everything else I have to say is just a rehash of what I've covered above.

Yeah. So, there's a few consistency issues here. I feel like you switch too quickly between mapping different instruments, and in this complex of a song (especially in the hardest diff) you really should be trying to express all of them and use creative patterning techniques to bring them together. You should also pay a keen eye to what patterns you're giving to what sounds, as I feel this diff hasn't been really consistent on that.

I do like the SVs, though, as well as the feel of the map. Hopefully some of what I've said is helpful, and remember, these are all just suggestions. I'll probably come back and go over it again if you want me to. Just let me know. Good luck!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Curiossity wrote:

Ice - Zetsu MOD

From Curiossity's Mania Marathon M4M Modding Queue

Columns: 0|1|2|3

I'll go ahead and mod the whole diff, cause stopping half way through isn't my style @.@

Venus
00:41:527 (41527|1,41527|3) - Why is this a double, the violin sound isn't any louder. Should probably be single

00:42:155 - There's 1/4th piano notes starting here, maybe you should map them? Feels weird not to, idunno

00:46:867 - You could probably fit in a note here for the violin, as well as other places between kicks in this section (i.e. here 00:47:496 - and here 00:48:124 (48124|2) - etc.)

00:47:103 (47103|0,47103|3,47142|1,47181|2,47221|3,47260|0,47299|1,47338|2,47378|3) - First, if these are following the piano, then i believe they should be 1/6th notes. Second, why follow the piano here and not before? Try to stay consistent.

00:47:731 (47731|3,47731|0,47770|2,47810|1,47849|0,47888|3,47927|2,47967|1,48006|0) - ^, etc

00:58:019 - Note here? Also, pay attention to consistent layering, not quite sure about it in this section but it's something to look out for.

01:03:045 - See above. Goes for many other places in this part as well.

01:11:291 (71291|0) - Starting here, the drums are at 1/3 beats. Map accordingly.

01:16:946 (76946|0) - Here, you focus exclusively on the synth and not the drums anymore, which is a strange transition to make. It would be better if you mapped both at the same time (paying attention to layering) as it could make for some more interesting and challenging patterns.

01:24:249 (84249|1) - According to your patterning, this should be a double and 01:24:407 (84407|2,84407|1) - should be a single.

01:27:469 (87469|1) - More consistency issues. Last time you had a five burst every other note was a double (kinda), but now the last three are all doubles. I don't think they got more intense either.

01:29:511 (89511|3) - And here, you ignore the synth you've been mapping previously and start just mapping the kicks. Although this might be justifiable, I'm just pointing out the sudden change in allocation of notes. It might be better to have something like a jumpstream here instead.

01:33:595 - You should probably map this sound here, and layer it more strongly elsewhere. Feels strange not hitting it.

01:35:480 (95480|3) - Now you layer it really strongly. Try to stay consistent within these individual sections, it's what holds the map together.

01:37:365 (97365|3) - Here, this sound is a triple but 01:34:852 (94852|3) - here it's only a double. Also the note that follows right after goes from a double to a quad. Change these to be the same, as well as 01:39:878 (99878|3) -

01:42:155 (102155|3) - Ghost note, every place where the synth doesn't play. This section should probably be all five note bursts, essentially.

01:47:103 (107103|3) - Alright, so I see that you're consistent in going straight to 1/2 hands for when the kicks come in, which is good. But this note as well as 01:47:260 (107260|2) - should probably be triples, just to follow patterning.

01:48:045 (108045|3) - Make this a quad for the bigger sound?

01:49:302 (109302|3) - ^

01:51:972 (111972|3) - Maybe not a double

01:53:386 (113386|3) - This note is not emphasized enough for the sound

Yeah, in general this section has issues with layering since you've got the four column LN patterns going on. Maybe break one of the LNs to provide additional emphasis on the larger sounds.

02:02:810 (122810|2) - But here you map it with 1/2 LNs instead of the four column pattern you had last time.

02:06:108 (126108|1,126265|2,126736|0) - These should be more than a single note. Double, if not triple. Also, sick place for SVs here, if you want to add them.

02:07:208 (127208|3,127208|1,127365|0,127365|3,127365|1) - Same sound, different layering.

02:07:836 (127836|0,127836|2,127993|3,127993|2,127993|0) - and 02:08:464 (128464|3,128464|0,128621|1,128621|3,128621|0) - Same.

02:10:349 (130349|1,130349|2,130427|3) - Make this part a jumptrill, the sounds on every 1/4th are the same.

02:11:763 (131763|1) - Add a note on 2

02:12:234 (132234|3) - Maybe remove one of these LNs, having two makes it feel more akin to a kick when there's /nothing/ in the music

02:12:548 (132548|2) - Starting here, more piano that you could probably map

02:20:715 (140715|1,140715|2,140715|0,140872|0,140872|3,140872|1,140872|2) - I've just started to ignore these, honestly, where the same sound is given different number of notes. Maybe it's intentional, for aesthetics or something. I'll make a general remark at the end and probably not mention it that much anymore.

02:22:836 - There should be a note here for the kick. This appears multiple times in this section as well.

02:32:024 (152024|0,152051|1,152077|2,152103|3,152129|0,152155|1,152181|2,152208|3,152234|0,152260|1,152286|2,152312|3) - The pitch changes here for these notes, maybe switch up the pattern to show this.

02:32:338 (152338|0) - Why no 1/4 violin notes here?

02:33:752 (153752|0) - Should probably just be a triple

02:33:988 (153988|3) - Long LN here?

02:36:108 (156108|3,156134|2,156160|1,156187|0,156213|3,156239|2,156265|1,156291|0,156318|3,156344|2,156370|1,156396|0) - Not sure that this pattern really works here. The drums were loud a beat or so ago, not so much right now. Consider remaking this part, so that the pattern itself shows the fading of the drums (1/8 -> 1/6 -> 1/4 -> 1/6 -> 1/8, or something similar. See Mat's Architecture map for an example.) Although this might not be a super idea, since the pacing of the drums doesn't really change, the volume does, and you probably need to show that somehow. I'm just throwing out ideas.

02:37:365 (157365|3) - You completely ignore the drums in this part.

03:14:433 (194433|3) - The other time you had 1/12 burst, it was alright since the sound was something like 1/16 - way too crazy. Here, though, I'm fairly confident it's only 1/8, so you should probably switch the mapping here to that. Also incorporate the kicks into the pattern. i.e. 03:14:433 (194433|3) - 03:14:590 (194590|2) - 03:14:747 (194747|3) - 03:14:825 (194825|1) - 03:14:904 (194904|2) - 03:14:982 (194982|0) - kicks. and 03:15:061 (195061|3) - too

03:36:422 (216422|0) - Poor violin

03:46:632 (226632|1) - Why this jack? There's another sound 1/4 after the second note here but you don't map that

03:54:485 (234485|0,234511|1,234537|2,234564|3,234590|0,234616|1,234642|2) - Shouldn't be 1/12, but 1/8th. Goes for other bursts in this section as well

Everything else I have to say is just a rehash of what I've covered above.

Yeah. So, there's a few consistency issues here. I feel like you switch too quickly between mapping different instruments, and in this complex of a song (especially in the hardest diff) you really should be trying to express all of them and use creative patterning techniques to bring them together. You should also pay a keen eye to what patterns you're giving to what sounds, as I feel this diff hasn't been really consistent on that.

I do like the SVs, though, as well as the feel of the map. Hopefully some of what I've said is helpful, and remember, these are all just suggestions. I'll probably come back and go over it again if you want me to. Just let me know. Good luck!
Thanks for your mod
Btw, you can go over the map anytime you want 8-) (I want doe mods :p)
Mentholzzz
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Mentholzzz

OWO
General
* delete the source , this song doesn't from the game "Team Grimoire" or anime "Team Grimoire" , you can put "Team Grimoire"
* add tag "Grimoire of Darkness" because the song is from this album.

Easy
00:27:941 (27941|0,28569|1,29197|2,29825|3) - Ctrl-H for pr
02:37:365 - until 03:07:522 - why u use the jump for the air(?) sound ? , i suggest to put the note to the percussion or the piano instead ,example>>(percussion) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8076012 or (piano) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8076093
03:36:893 (216893|0) - move to col.3 for hand balance
03:56:527 - add note for a loud sound , for example >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8075917

Venus
00:47:103 (47103|0,47103|3,47142|1,47181|2,47221|3,47260|0,47299|1,47338|2,47378|3) - the piano here is in 1/6
00:47:731 (47731|3,47731|0,47770|2,47810|1,47849|0,47888|3,47927|2,47967|1,48006|0) - ^
00:48:359 (48359|3,48359|0,48399|1,48438|2,48477|3,48516|0,48556|1,48595|2,48634|3) - ^
00:48:988 (48988|0,48988|3,49027|2,49066|1,49105|0,49145|3,49184|2,49223|1,49263|0) - ^
00:57:155 (57155|1,57312|1,57469|1,57626|1,57783|1) - i suggest to move 00:57:626 (57626|1) - to col.3
01:22:129 (82129|1) - move to col.1
01:23:150 - why double here? as well as 01:23:307 - & 01:23:621 - & 01:24:249 - & 01:24:407 - & 01:28:176 - & 01:28:333 - & 01:28:647 - & 01:28:962 -
01:31:003 - double here
01:43:883 - why double here? as well as 01:44:354 - & 01:44:511 - & 01:46:867 - & 01:47:024 -
01:53:857 (113857|0) - make this one LN
01:59:590 - remove one note
02:50:715 - add note here
02:50:872 - and here
04:23:582 (263582|2) - ghost note?
04:23:268 (263268|1,263307|2,263346|3,263386|0,263425|1,263464|2,263503|3) - the piano here is 1/6
04:23:896 (263896|2,263935|1,263975|0,264014|3,264053|2,264092|1,264132|0) - ^
04:24:524 (264524|1,264564|2,264603|3,264642|0,264681|1,264721|2,264760|3) - ^
04:25:153 (265153|1,265192|2,265231|3,265270|2,265310|1,265349|0,265388|1) - ^
04:33:320 (273320|2,273359|1,273399|0,273438|2,273477|1,273516|3,273556|2) - ^
04:33:948 (273948|2,273988|1,274027|0,274066|2,274105|1,274145|0,274184|3) - ^
04:34:577 (274577|1,274616|2,274655|0,274655|3,274694|1,274734|2,274773|3,274812|0) - ^
04:35:205 (275205|2,275205|0,275244|1,275283|3,275323|0,275323|2,275362|1,275401|2,275441|3) - ^
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Mentholzzz wrote:


OWO
General
* delete the source , this song doesn't from the game "Team Grimoire" or anime "Team Grimoire" , you can put "Team Grimoire"
* add tag "Grimoire of Darkness" because the song is from this album.

Easy
00:27:941 (27941|0,28569|1,29197|2,29825|3) - Ctrl-H for pr Fixed
02:37:365 - until 03:07:522 - why u use the jump for the air(?) sound ? , i suggest to put the note to the percussion or the piano instead ,example>>(percussion) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8076012 or (piano) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8076093 Nah, this part focuses on the bass (?) sound
03:36:893 (216893|0) - move to col.3 for hand balance Fixed
03:56:527 - add note for a loud sound , for example >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8075917 Fixed

Venus
00:47:103 (47103|0,47103|3,47142|1,47181|2,47221|3,47260|0,47299|1,47338|2,47378|3) - the piano here is in 1/6
00:47:731 (47731|3,47731|0,47770|2,47810|1,47849|0,47888|3,47927|2,47967|1,48006|0) - ^
00:48:359 (48359|3,48359|0,48399|1,48438|2,48477|3,48516|0,48556|1,48595|2,48634|3) - ^
00:48:988 (48988|0,48988|3,49027|2,49066|1,49105|0,49145|3,49184|2,49223|1,49263|0) - ^ All fixed
00:57:155 (57155|1,57312|1,57469|1,57626|1,57783|1) - i suggest to move 00:57:626 (57626|1) - to col.3 Fixed
01:22:129 (82129|1) - move to col.1 Nah, I'm good with that
01:23:150 - why double here? as well as 01:23:307 - & 01:23:621 - & 01:24:249 - & 01:24:407 - & 01:28:176 - & 01:28:333 - & 01:28:647 - & 01:28:962 - Because the sound there is more stressed than other
01:31:003 - double here Fixed
01:43:883 - why double here? as well as 01:44:354 - & 01:44:511 - & 01:46:867 - & 01:47:024 - Fixed
01:53:857 (113857|0) - make this one LN Fixed
01:59:590 - remove one note Fixed
02:50:715 - add note here Fixed
02:50:872 - and here Fixed
04:23:582 (263582|2) - ghost note? Fixed
04:23:268 (263268|1,263307|2,263346|3,263386|0,263425|1,263464|2,263503|3) - the piano here is 1/6
04:23:896 (263896|2,263935|1,263975|0,264014|3,264053|2,264092|1,264132|0) - ^
04:24:524 (264524|1,264564|2,264603|3,264642|0,264681|1,264721|2,264760|3) - ^
04:25:153 (265153|1,265192|2,265231|3,265270|2,265310|1,265349|0,265388|1) - ^
04:33:320 (273320|2,273359|1,273399|0,273438|2,273477|1,273516|3,273556|2) - ^
04:33:948 (273948|2,273988|1,274027|0,274066|2,274105|1,274145|0,274184|3) - ^
04:34:577 (274577|1,274616|2,274655|0,274655|3,274694|1,274734|2,274773|3,274812|0) - ^
04:35:205 (275205|2,275205|0,275244|1,275283|3,275323|0,275323|2,275362|1,275401|2,275441|3) - ^ All fixed
Ty for your mod :)
Stug
97 posts
Joined September 2014
Stug
Yo!


From mine and Vortex- modding queue

Very stressed atm since I've got alot of requests undone because of my recent 42 hour silence ughhhhhh, will do what I can
Venus difficulty
00:06:579 (6579|2) - This slider should end here 00:08:935 - :idea:

00:17:888 (17888|1) - And this slider should end here 00:19:459 - :idea: :idea:

00:37:993 (37993|1) - And this slider should end here 00:40:506 - :idea: :idea: :idea:

00:42:155 (42155|2) - Feels like this is a ghost note, if you're mapping to indicate the background piano there should be notes before 00:42:077 - and after 00:42:234 -

00:43:922 - Feel like there should be a note here

00:44:276 - And a slider here

00:44:590 - and sliders from here to here 00:45:218 -

I know it's hard to avoid in 1/8th mapping and high bpm, but be aware of these minijacks 00:46:396 (46396|0,46475|0) - 00:50:480 (50480|3,50558|3) - :o

00:54:014 (54014|0,54171|0,54328|0,54485|0) - Try and move the last a column or two to the right, makes for better gameplay

01:32:496 - If this sound is mapped as a triple then this one should be aswell 01:32:810 - same goes for other doubles/triples in that part

01:37:365 - This should be the quad, as indicated by the sound > not this one 01:37:522 - since you've mapped these sounds 01:37:993 - as quads

01:47:731 (107731|0,107731|1,107888|1,107888|0,107888|2,108045|1,108045|0,108045|3,108045|2) - Don't understand why these are mapped with different amounts of notes

01:52:600 - Add a note to emphasize the drum sound

01:53:386 - ^

01:53:857 - ^

01:57:626 - ^

01:58:883 - ^

02:01:710 - ^

02:09:721 - ^

02:10:977 - ^

02:11:920 - ^

02:13:333 - Don't understand these quads wooooooooooooo

02:24:014 (144014|1,144092|1) - Try and avoid this jack

02:22:286 - 02:27:312 - 02:28:569 - These should be quads, since you've mapped the other ones like quads

02:40:820 (160820|3,160820|2,160820|0,160977|2,160977|1,161134|0,161134|3) - Try and replace these with sliders, better emphasizes the piano sound, shouldn't be doubles aswell since there's no drum

02:48:516 - 02:50:244 - 02:53:857 - 03:06:422 - 03:07:051 - 03:07:679 - Missing notes

03:38:150 - Add a note

03:39:407 - ^

03:39:721 - ^

03:43:176 - ^

03:43:490 - ^

03:44:433 - ^

03:48:516 - ^

03:49:773 - ^

04:08:307 - ^

04:08:621 - ^

04:09:564 - ^

04:09:878 - ^

04:17:260 - 04:17:731 - Feel like you can add some notes inbetween these parts to emphasize the drum

Should really add notes here 04:20:035 - and here 04:20:061 - Feels kinda weird ending it just like that while playing

04:21:658 - Add a note

04:26:684 - ^

04:27:626 (267626|2,267705|0) - Make these doubles, make this 04:27:783 - a double and add a note here 04:27:862 - don't know why this ain't a trill

04:28:255 - You should really map after the piano, just like you've done here 04:33:281 - don't add in breaks like this :)

04:36:736 - Add a note on the third column

I feel like alot of the "add a note" are justified since you've done it on other parts like this 03:49:459 - and the map is already such a high star rating that skipping drum emphasization like this is unnecessary

That's it for my mod, I'll check the other diffs later, just gotta finish the other mods ;)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

cpotfangirl wrote:

Yo!


From mine and Vortex- modding queue

Very stressed atm since I've got alot of requests undone because of my recent 42 hour silence ughhhhhh, will do what I can
Venus difficulty
00:06:579 (6579|2) - This slider should end here 00:08:935 - :idea:

00:17:888 (17888|1) - And this slider should end here 00:19:459 - :idea: :idea:

00:37:993 (37993|1) - And this slider should end here 00:40:506 - :idea: :idea: :idea: All fixed

00:42:155 (42155|2) - Feels like this is a ghost note, if you're mapping to indicate the background piano there should be notes before 00:42:077 - and after 00:42:234 - Fixed

00:43:922 - Feel like there should be a note here Now I just've noticed :P Fixed

00:44:276 - And a slider here Nah, i think it is ok there

00:44:590 - and sliders from here to here 00:45:218 - Fixed

I know it's hard to avoid in 1/8th mapping and high bpm, but be aware of these minijacks 00:46:396 (46396|0,46475|0) - 00:50:480 (50480|3,50558|3) - :o
It is my intention :P so nah
00:54:014 (54014|0,54171|0,54328|0,54485|0) - Try and move the last a column or two to the right, makes for better gameplay Fixed

01:32:496 - If this sound is mapped as a triple then this one should be aswell 01:32:810 - same goes for other doubles/triples in that part Fixed

01:37:365 - This should be the quad, as indicated by the sound > not this one 01:37:522 - since you've mapped these sounds 01:37:993 - as quads Fixed

01:47:731 (107731|0,107731|1,107888|1,107888|0,107888|2,108045|1,108045|0,108045|3,108045|2) - Don't understand why these are mapped with different amounts of notes Fixed

01:52:600 - Add a note to emphasize the drum sound

01:53:386 - ^

01:53:857 - ^

01:57:626 - ^

01:58:883 - ^

02:01:710 - ^

02:09:721 - ^

02:10:977 - ^

02:11:920 - ^ All fixed

02:13:333 - Don't understand these quads wooooooooooooo Fixed

02:24:014 (144014|1,144092|1) - Try and avoid this jack Fixed

02:22:286 - 02:27:312 - 02:28:569 - These should be quads, since you've mapped the other ones like quads Fixed

02:40:820 (160820|3,160820|2,160820|0,160977|2,160977|1,161134|0,161134|3) - Try and replace these with sliders, better emphasizes the piano sound, shouldn't be doubles aswell since there's no drum Fixed

02:48:516 - 02:50:244 - 02:53:857 - 03:06:422 - 03:07:051 - 03:07:679 - Missing notes Fixed

03:38:150 - Add a note

03:39:407 - ^

03:39:721 - ^

03:43:176 - ^

03:43:490 - ^

03:44:433 - ^

03:48:516 - ^

03:49:773 - ^

04:08:307 - ^

04:08:621 - ^

04:09:564 - ^

04:09:878 - ^ All fixed

04:17:260 - 04:17:731 - Feel like you can add some notes inbetween these parts to emphasize the drum Fixed

Should really add notes here 04:20:035 - and here 04:20:061 - Feels kinda weird ending it just like that while playing Fixed

04:21:658 - Add a note

04:26:684 - ^ All fixed

04:27:626 (267626|2,267705|0) - Make these doubles, make this 04:27:783 - a double and add a note here 04:27:862 - don't know why this ain't a trill All fixed

04:28:255 - You should really map after the piano, just like you've done here 04:33:281 - don't add in breaks like this :) Rather than adding piano notes as your suggestion, I'll remove the piano notes before this part

04:36:736 - Add a note on the third column Nah, nobody like 1/8 jack

I feel like alot of the "add a note" are justified since you've done it on other parts like this 03:49:459 - and the map is already such a high star rating that skipping drum emphasization like this is unnecessary

That's it for my mod, I'll check the other diffs later, just gotta finish the other mods ;)
Tyty 8-)
Captain Cusheen
222 posts
Joined October 2016
Captain Cusheen
M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/608798
SC
00:46:867 (46867|1) - move this ln to collumn 4
00:54:328 (54328|1) - this ln should end riiiight 00:55:113 - there
then add ln ._.
00:59:354 (59354|2) - same
01:01:867 (61867|2) - same
01:04:380 (64380|0) - same
03:35:480 (215480|0) - up to 03:36:344 - I prefer trills :3 but optional since SHD has trills uwu
03:37:993 - add note
[boxes= Shd]
00:48:359 - why does this part has one note but 00:47:103 - and 00:47:731 - have two notes ._.
00:48:988 - same for this one
[/box]
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
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Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Captain Cusheen wrote:

M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/608798
SC
00:46:867 (46867|1) - move this ln to collumn 4 Nah, I don't see the reason to do that
00:54:328 (54328|1) - this ln should end riiiight 00:55:113 - there Fixed but rather ending it in 00:55:113 , it end in 00:54:956
then add ln ._. Nope
00:59:354 (59354|2) - same ^
01:01:867 (61867|2) - same ^
01:04:380 (64380|0) - same ^
03:35:480 (215480|0) - up to 03:36:344 - I prefer trills :3 but optional since SHD has trills uwu Nope, it would be hard, I want this part to be easy
03:37:993 - add note
[boxes= Shd] Fixed
00:48:359 - why does this part has one note but 00:47:103 - and 00:47:731 - have two notes ._. ?
00:48:988 - same for this one ?
[/box]
ty :) , gonna mod you soon
Mykaterasu
584 posts
Joined March 2014
Mykaterasu
Hi from my Modding Queue.
Lanes 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 respectively

I have a habit of hounding on the same mistakes over and over. If something is talked about and it appears a lot, I'll just say it appears a lot and it's up to you find them all.

Initially I was going to mod Venus and SC but after modding Venus and looking at SC I saw how much of the mod applied to both, so I only modded Venus. :|

Venus
  • If I bullet pointed the following paragraph in mod form it would take ages so I'll just talk about it in prose instead.

    For me, this difficulty has been very haphazardly assembled. It just doesn't seem to uphold current ranked quality standards for me at this point in time. LNs don't really feel special when they're used, because they're pretty much used in every section for a multitude of things. The use of repeated lanes feels random at some points, like the osu!standard to osu! mania converter was used to map them. This happens for jacks too; they feel arbitrarily placed sometimes without logical function because they come about from placing certain chords/patterns together (see 01:28:255 (88255|3,88333|3) - 01:28:883 (88883|2,88962|2) - 01:54:485 (114485|0,114564|3,114642|3,114642|0) - 02:06:501 (126501|2,126579|2) - ). When you look at the end result the jack becomes more prominent than the chord/pattern variation and you end up with a bad jack usage rather than a good chord/pattern variation. It's OK to use repeated lanes, jacks and LNs but I don't think the way you've used them has been entirely effective here. This all combined with sometimes odd choice of flow and balance creates some very unpleasant game-play (see things like 01:00:611 (60611|3,60611|1,60768|2,60925|2,61082|0,61082|3,61239|3,61239|0,61396|2,61475|0,61553|2,61553|3,61632|0,61710|2) - ) where your command of the lanes felt very weak. That said, just because I dislike how you've done this map, it doesn't mean I don't have criticism to give aside from that. I won't talk about the generic things like this in the mod because applying it comes about from understanding my alternate perspective and opinion that might end up rewriting the whole map.

    Basically, just think about what I've said here. At some point if any part of you thinks it's right, you'll know it. For the rest of the mod, I'll just go at what I think is wrong with what you've done objectively poorly here.
  1. 00:10:349 (10349|0,10977|1,11605|0,12234|1,12862|0,13490|1,14119|0,14747|1) - This is really boring to play. LNs grab attention and they just stay on the left-hand side for so long.
  2. 00:41:763 (41763|3,41763|2,41763|1,41920|2,41920|1,41920|0) - These chords are both the same in the music, thematically it would be better to make them the same instead of symmetrical. This stylistic mapping choice that gives repeated chords of the same note numbers more interest, ignore if you wish.
  3. 00:42:234 (42234|3,42391|1,42548|0,42705|1,42862|2) - Doesn't feel representative of the strings because it doesn't follow them by pitch relevancy. Pitch relevancy in LNs can make or break them sometimes, especially when a pitch relevant solution is possible/plausible.
  4. 00:43:019 (43019|3,43019|0,43019|1,43176|1,43176|2,43176|3,43176|0) - 3 notes -> 4 but before that 00:41:763 (41763|3,41763|2,41763|1,41920|2,41920|1,41920|0) - 3 -> 3 and then 00:44:276 (44276|1,44276|3,44276|2,44433|0,44433|1,44433|2) - 3 -> 3 again. Very unclear chord structure. This happens multiple times from what I can see. 00:46:946 (46946|3,46946|1,46946|2) - 00:47:574 (47574|2,47574|0,47574|3,47574|1) - etc...
  5. 00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1,43962|3,43962|0) - Why not this?
    Flows much better and represents it much better too.
  6. 00:45:473 (45473|1) - Check your snapping.
  7. 00:52:993 - Why did you choose to omit a note here? Feels really odd not have a note in lane 3.
  8. 00:55:585 (55585|2,55899|3,56213|1,56527|0) - These are too staccato to be LNs for me.
  9. 01:27:941 (87941|2,88098|2,88255|2,88412|2,88569|2,88726|2,88883|2,88962|2,89119|2) - This lane is taking a little too much. This happens in other places too, such as 01:48:202 (108202|1,108359|1,108516|1,108674|1,108831|1,108988|1,109145|1,109302|1,109459|1) - here and 02:24:642 (144642|3,144799|3,144956|3,145113|3,145270|3,145427|3,145585|3,145742|3,145899|3,145977|3,146056|3,146213|3,146370|3,146527|3,146684|3,146841|3,146998|3) - here. Take a look at the whole map lane by lane and see when you've got repeated usage of a key for an exceedingly long time.
  10. 02:08:935 (128935|1,128962|2,128988|3,129014|0,129040|1,129066|2) - 02:09:564 (129564|2,129590|1,129616|0,129642|3,129668|2,129694|1) - This is a 1/8th rhythm, not a 1/12th.
  11. 02:12:548 - There's a 1/4 piano rhythm going on in this section. It'd be nice to play some of it.
  12. 02:41:134 (161134|3,161134|0,161448|2,161448|0,161448|1,161448|3) - Equate your SV distances properly. This is clearly far too short.
    Total distance travelled = (0.01*3) + (1.50*1) = 1.53 units.
    Target distance = (1.00*4) = 4 units.
    2 and a half odd units short.
    Make the exit after 02:42:391 (162391|3,162391|1,162391|0,162391|2) - this chord readable when you fix it. If you don't know how, consult one of the many guides that people have written on mania SVs. I won't talk about SVs again, so check them all yourself.
    EDIT - I ended up writing a quick pastebin on mania SV calibration, which can be found here.
  13. 02:57:783 - The piano is lost here. It's just 1/2 2 and 3 note chords without any purpose in accenting one instrument or another. It was getting to that point in the previous section, but now it's not present anymore.
  14. 03:37:365 (217365|2,217365|0,217443|3,217443|1,217522|2,217600|3,217600|1) - This arrangement of doubles doesn't represent the music at all. You don't have to overuse doubles just because you want the star rating to be high.

Overall, as I said - I'm not a massive fan of the song or how this is mapped, but to each their own. Good luck with the mapset. :)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Mykaterasu wrote:

Hi from my Modding Queue.
Lanes 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 respectively

I have a habit of hounding on the same mistakes over and over. If something is talked about and it appears a lot, I'll just say it appears a lot and it's up to you find them all.

Initially I was going to mod Venus and SC but after modding Venus and looking at SC I saw how much of the mod applied to both, so I only modded Venus. :|

Venus
  • If I bullet pointed the following paragraph in mod form it would take ages so I'll just talk about it in prose instead.

    For me, this difficulty has been very haphazardly assembled. It just doesn't seem to uphold current ranked quality standards for me at this point in time. LNs don't really feel special when they're used, because they're pretty much used in every section for a multitude of things. The use of repeated lanes feels random at some points, like the osu!standard to osu! mania converter was used to map them. This happens for jacks too; they feel arbitrarily placed sometimes without logical function because they come about from placing certain chords/patterns together (see 01:28:255 (88255|3,88333|3) - 01:28:883 (88883|2,88962|2) - 01:54:485 (114485|0,114564|3,114642|3,114642|0) - 02:06:501 (126501|2,126579|2) - ). When you look at the end result the jack becomes more prominent than the chord/pattern variation and you end up with a bad jack usage rather than a good chord/pattern variation. It's OK to use repeated lanes, jacks and LNs but I don't think the way you've used them has been entirely effective here. This all combined with sometimes odd choice of flow and balance creates some very unpleasant game-play (see things like 01:00:611 (60611|3,60611|1,60768|2,60925|2,61082|0,61082|3,61239|3,61239|0,61396|2,61475|0,61553|2,61553|3,61632|0,61710|2) - ) where your command of the lanes felt very weak. That said, just because I dislike how you've done this map, it doesn't mean I don't have criticism to give aside from that. I won't talk about the generic things like this in the mod because applying it comes about from understanding my alternate perspective and opinion that might end up rewriting the whole map.

    Basically, just think about what I've said here. At some point if any part of you thinks it's right, you'll know it. For the rest of the mod, I'll just go at what I think is wrong with what you've done objectively poorly here.
  1. 00:10:349 (10349|0,10977|1,11605|0,12234|1,12862|0,13490|1,14119|0,14747|1) - This is really boring to play. LNs grab attention and they just stay on the left-hand side for so long.
  2. 00:41:763 (41763|3,41763|2,41763|1,41920|2,41920|1,41920|0) - These chords are both the same in the music, thematically it would be better to make them the same instead of symmetrical. This stylistic mapping choice that gives repeated chords of the same note numbers more interest, ignore if you wish.
  3. 00:42:234 (42234|3,42391|1,42548|0,42705|1,42862|2) - Doesn't feel representative of the strings because it doesn't follow them by pitch relevancy. Pitch relevancy in LNs can make or break them sometimes, especially when a pitch relevant solution is possible/plausible.
  4. 00:43:019 (43019|3,43019|0,43019|1,43176|1,43176|2,43176|3,43176|0) - 3 notes -> 4 but before that 00:41:763 (41763|3,41763|2,41763|1,41920|2,41920|1,41920|0) - 3 -> 3 and then 00:44:276 (44276|1,44276|3,44276|2,44433|0,44433|1,44433|2) - 3 -> 3 again. Very unclear chord structure. This happens multiple times from what I can see. 00:46:946 (46946|3,46946|1,46946|2) - 00:47:574 (47574|2,47574|0,47574|3,47574|1) - etc...
  5. 00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1,43962|3,43962|0) - Why not this?
    Flows much better and represents it much better too.
  6. 00:45:473 (45473|1) - Check your snapping.
  7. 00:52:993 - Why did you choose to omit a note here? Feels really odd not have a note in lane 3.
  8. 00:55:585 (55585|2,55899|3,56213|1,56527|0) - These are too staccato to be LNs for me.
  9. 01:27:941 (87941|2,88098|2,88255|2,88412|2,88569|2,88726|2,88883|2,88962|2,89119|2) - This lane is taking a little too much. This happens in other places too, such as 01:48:202 (108202|1,108359|1,108516|1,108674|1,108831|1,108988|1,109145|1,109302|1,109459|1) - here and 02:24:642 (144642|3,144799|3,144956|3,145113|3,145270|3,145427|3,145585|3,145742|3,145899|3,145977|3,146056|3,146213|3,146370|3,146527|3,146684|3,146841|3,146998|3) - here. Take a look at the whole map lane by lane and see when you've got repeated usage of a key for an exceedingly long time.
  10. 02:08:935 (128935|1,128962|2,128988|3,129014|0,129040|1,129066|2) - 02:09:564 (129564|2,129590|1,129616|0,129642|3,129668|2,129694|1) - This is a 1/8th rhythm, not a 1/12th.
  11. 02:12:548 - There's a 1/4 piano rhythm going on in this section. It'd be nice to play some of it.
  12. 02:41:134 (161134|3,161134|0,161448|2,161448|0,161448|1,161448|3) - Equate your SV distances properly. This is clearly far too short.
    Total distance travelled = (0.01*3) + (1.50*1) = 1.53 units.
    Target distance = (1.00*4) = 4 units.
    2 and a half odd units short.
    Make the exit after 02:42:391 (162391|3,162391|1,162391|0,162391|2) - this chord readable when you fix it. If you don't know how, consult one of the many guides that people have written on mania SVs. I won't talk about SVs again, so check them all yourself.
    EDIT - I ended up writing a quick pastebin on mania SV calibration, which can be found here.
  13. 02:57:783 - The piano is lost here. It's just 1/2 2 and 3 note chords without any purpose in accenting one instrument or another. It was getting to that point in the previous section, but now it's not present anymore.
  14. 03:37:365 (217365|2,217365|0,217443|3,217443|1,217522|2,217600|3,217600|1) - This arrangement of doubles doesn't represent the music at all. You don't have to overuse doubles just because you want the star rating to be high.

Overall, as I said - I'm not a massive fan of the song or how this is mapped, but to each their own. Good luck with the mapset. :)
Will apply tomorrow
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Mykaterasu wrote:

Hi from my Modding Queue.
Lanes 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 respectively

I have a habit of hounding on the same mistakes over and over. If something is talked about and it appears a lot, I'll just say it appears a lot and it's up to you find them all.

Initially I was going to mod Venus and SC but after modding Venus and looking at SC I saw how much of the mod applied to both, so I only modded Venus. :|

Venus
  • If I bullet pointed the following paragraph in mod form it would take ages so I'll just talk about it in prose instead.

    For me, this difficulty has been very haphazardly assembled. It just doesn't seem to uphold current ranked quality standards for me at this point in time. LNs don't really feel special when they're used, because they're pretty much used in every section for a multitude of things. The use of repeated lanes feels random at some points, like the osu!standard to osu! mania converter was used to map them. This happens for jacks too; they feel arbitrarily placed sometimes without logical function because they come about from placing certain chords/patterns together (see 01:28:255 (88255|3,88333|3) - 01:28:883 (88883|2,88962|2) - 01:54:485 (114485|0,114564|3,114642|3,114642|0) - 02:06:501 (126501|2,126579|2) - ). When you look at the end result the jack becomes more prominent than the chord/pattern variation and you end up with a bad jack usage rather than a good chord/pattern variation. It's OK to use repeated lanes, jacks and LNs but I don't think the way you've used them has been entirely effective here. This all combined with sometimes odd choice of flow and balance creates some very unpleasant game-play (see things like 01:00:611 (60611|3,60611|1,60768|2,60925|2,61082|0,61082|3,61239|3,61239|0,61396|2,61475|0,61553|2,61553|3,61632|0,61710|2) - ) where your command of the lanes felt very weak. That said, just because I dislike how you've done this map, it doesn't mean I don't have criticism to give aside from that. I won't talk about the generic things like this in the mod because applying it comes about from understanding my alternate perspective and opinion that might end up rewriting the whole map.

    Basically, just think about what I've said here. At some point if any part of you thinks it's right, you'll know it. For the rest of the mod, I'll just go at what I think is wrong with what you've done objectively poorly here. I can see what you meant here. Will take your advice :)
  1. 00:10:349 (10349|0,10977|1,11605|0,12234|1,12862|0,13490|1,14119|0,14747|1) - This is really boring to play. LNs grab attention and they just stay on the left-hand side for so long. Fixed
  2. 00:41:763 (41763|3,41763|2,41763|1,41920|2,41920|1,41920|0) - These chords are both the same in the music, thematically it would be better to make them the same instead of symmetrical. This stylistic mapping choice that gives repeated chords of the same note numbers more interest, ignore if you wish. Yeah, I don't think that that's suitable for my mapset
  3. 00:42:234 (42234|3,42391|1,42548|0,42705|1,42862|2) - Doesn't feel representative of the strings because it doesn't follow them by pitch relevancy. Pitch relevancy in LNs can make or break them sometimes, especially when a pitch relevant solution is possible/plausible. Fixed
  4. 00:43:019 (43019|3,43019|0,43019|1,43176|1,43176|2,43176|3,43176|0) - 3 notes -> 4 but before that 00:41:763 (41763|3,41763|2,41763|1,41920|2,41920|1,41920|0) - 3 -> 3 and then 00:44:276 (44276|1,44276|3,44276|2,44433|0,44433|1,44433|2) - 3 -> 3 again. Very unclear chord structure. This happens multiple times from what I can see. 00:46:946 (46946|3,46946|1,46946|2) - 00:47:574 (47574|2,47574|0,47574|3,47574|1) - etc... I don't really understand what you're really mean by this one
  5. 00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1,43962|3,43962|0) - Why not this?
    Flows much better and represents it much better too. I changed that part but it is not the same as your suggestion
  6. 00:45:473 (45473|1) - Check your snapping. Fixed
  7. 00:52:993 - Why did you choose to omit a note here? Feels really odd not have a note in lane 3. ?
  8. 00:55:585 (55585|2,55899|3,56213|1,56527|0) - These are too staccato to be LNs for me. Nah, I think it is even suit for that part
  9. 01:27:941 (87941|2,88098|2,88255|2,88412|2,88569|2,88726|2,88883|2,88962|2,89119|2) - This lane is taking a little too much. This happens in other places too, such as 01:48:202 (108202|1,108359|1,108516|1,108674|1,108831|1,108988|1,109145|1,109302|1,109459|1) - here and 02:24:642 (144642|3,144799|3,144956|3,145113|3,145270|3,145427|3,145585|3,145742|3,145899|3,145977|3,146056|3,146213|3,146370|3,146527|3,146684|3,146841|3,146998|3) - here. Take a look at the whole map lane by lane and see when you've got repeated usage of a key for an exceedingly long time. Fixed
  10. 02:08:935 (128935|1,128962|2,128988|3,129014|0,129040|1,129066|2) - 02:09:564 (129564|2,129590|1,129616|0,129642|3,129668|2,129694|1) - This is a 1/8th rhythm, not a 1/12th. Fixed
  11. 02:12:548 - There's a 1/4 piano rhythm going on in this section. It'd be nice to play some of it. I'd rather focus on the main sound than the piano
  12. 02:41:134 (161134|3,161134|0,161448|2,161448|0,161448|1,161448|3) - Equate your SV distances properly. This is clearly far too short.
    Total distance travelled = (0.01*3) + (1.50*1) = 1.53 units.
    Target distance = (1.00*4) = 4 units.
    2 and a half odd units short. I changed it to x3.5
    Make the exit after 02:42:391 (162391|3,162391|1,162391|0,162391|2) - this chord readable when you fix it. If you don't know how, consult one of the many guides that people have written on mania SVs. I won't talk about SVs again, so check them all yourself. I think it is not that hard to read
    EDIT - I ended up writing a quick pastebin on mania SV calibration, which can be found here.
  13. 02:57:783 - The piano is lost here. It's just 1/2 2 and 3 note chords without any purpose in accenting one instrument or another. It was getting to that point in the previous section, but now it's not present anymore. Fixed
  14. 03:37:365 (217365|2,217365|0,217443|3,217443|1,217522|2,217600|3,217600|1) - This arrangement of doubles doesn't represent the music at all. You don't have to overuse doubles just because you want the star rating to be high.

Overall, as I said - I'm not a massive fan of the song or how this is mapped, but to each their own. Good luck with the mapset. :)
Ty for your mod :)
dkingo
553 posts
Joined June 2016
dkingo
Hello, M4M from my queue, not my type of song but I'll try :)
mod
[EZ]
  1. 00:45:532 - Feels weird when it's empty, try to put 1/1 notes or just a LN
  2. 01:21:972 (81972|2,82443|3,82914|2,83543|2,83857|3,84171|2) - Not good hand balance for EZ diff, you can move 01:22:914 (82914|1,83229|0,83543|1) - 1 col left
  3. 02:21:344 (141344|2) - Move to col 4, fits better with the pitch
  4. 03:46:475 - Same as above, try to add some 1/1 notes
  5. 04:14:747 (254747|0,254904|1) - Move 1 col right, will be better when pattern changes a bit

[SC]
  1. 00:08:307 (8307|1) - Move to col 4 so it doesn't go in order
  2. 00:26:841 (26841|3) - Move to col 3, I think this jack isn't necessary
  3. 00:27:155 (27155|3) - Move to col 1
  4. 00:48:202 - Why 4 notes here? Can't hear anything special
  5. 00:49:694 (49694|1,49773|2,49852|1,49930|2,50009|1,50087|2,50166|1) - I think stair is better than trill here, trill is a bit too hard to play
  6. 01:19:302 (79302|0) - Move to col 2 with the pitch
  7. 01:26:841 - The volume doesn't change, keep using 1 LN
  8. 01:38:621 - Here should be triple instead of 01:38:464 -
  9. 01:49:616 - The sounds are same, you should unify the pattern by using same amount of note
  10. 02:20:872 (140872|2,140951|3) - Ctrl+G
  11. 02:22:600 - Use triple to this sound
  12. 02:26:684 (146684|1,146841|3,146841|1,146998|1,146998|3,147155|3,147155|1,147312|3,147312|1,147469|3) - These jacks are too scared,
    need to rearrange
  13. 03:55:585 (235585|3) - Move to col 3
  14. 04:07:051 (247051|1) - Move to col 1
  15. 04:11:448 (251448|2) - Move to col 4
  16. 04:18:045 - Here is a beat that you can map
Alright that's all~
Good luck!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

dkingo wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue, not my type of song but I'll try :)
mod
[EZ]
  1. 00:45:532 - Feels weird when it's empty, try to put 1/1 notes or just a LN Fixed
  2. 01:21:972 (81972|2,82443|3,82914|2,83543|2,83857|3,84171|2) - Not good hand balance for EZ diff, you can move 01:22:914 (82914|1,83229|0,83543|1) - 1 col left Agree
  3. 02:21:344 (141344|2) - Move to col 4, fits better with the pitch I'd rather not, if another modder mention this, I'll fix it
  4. 03:46:475 - Same as above, try to add some 1/1 notes Fixed
  5. 04:14:747 (254747|0,254904|1) - Move 1 col right, will be better when pattern changes a bit I like it that way though

[SC]
  1. 00:08:307 (8307|1) - Move to col 4 so it doesn't go in order Fixed
  2. 00:26:841 (26841|3) - Move to col 3, I think this jack isn't necessary Fixed
  3. 00:27:155 (27155|3) - Move to col 1 Nah, this fits the pitch better
  4. 00:48:202 - Why 4 notes here? Can't hear anything special The sound there is more stressed than the first 2. If anyone address this again, I'll fix it
  5. 00:49:694 (49694|1,49773|2,49852|1,49930|2,50009|1,50087|2,50166|1) - I think stair is better than trill here, trill is a bit too hard to play Imo, I think the opposite so nah
  6. 01:19:302 (79302|0) - Move to col 2 with the pitch Fixed
  7. 01:26:841 - The volume doesn't change, keep using 1 LN Fixed
  8. 01:38:621 - Here should be triple instead of 01:38:464 - Fixed
  9. 01:49:616 - The sounds are same, you should unify the pattern by using same amount of note Fixed
  10. 02:20:872 (140872|2,140951|3) - Ctrl+G Fixed
  11. 02:22:600 - Use triple to this sound Fixed
  12. 02:26:684 (146684|1,146841|3,146841|1,146998|1,146998|3,147155|3,147155|1,147312|3,147312|1,147469|3) - These jacks are too scared,
    need to rearrange Fixed
  13. 03:55:585 (235585|3) - Move to col 3
  14. 04:07:051 (247051|1) - Move to col 1
  15. 04:11:448 (251448|2) - Move to col 4 All fixed
  16. 04:18:045 - Here is a beat that you can map Added
Alright that's all~
Good luck!
Ty :P Gonna mod urs asap 8-)
Last edited by AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH , edited 1 time in total.
Oscyy
403 posts
Joined August 2014
Oscyy
hello, m4m from YOUR queue (poop), havent posted it, will post soon. Also nice song

DISCLAIMER

  1. I really like hard song, i just dont like its too underrated (map is too hard for that star rating) so most of the time i will nerfing that map (too much unnecessary minijack, bad ln, etc)
  2. since I only play harder song, i will only check harder diff (above 4*, special req exception)
  3. I am new from mapping so i guess i dont always do a good mod
  4. I always assuming the map I'll mod is going to rank so I'll do my best
  5. Also i have bad english
  6. As always, no kudosu if this mod is pointless
1|2|3|4

Venus
00:12:077 (12077|2) - i think it should me in col 2 since ln is already coming in col 3
00:25:270 (25270|0) - col 2
00:34:537 (34537|1,34694|3) - switch position
00:42:548 (42548|1,42626|1,42705|1) - 00:42:626 (42626|3,42705|3) - its okay if you want to map with so much minijack but playability is more important tbh, and i think you should avoid that 3 jacks in a row, and also 00:42:705 - shouldnt be triples, my suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8215684
00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1) - 1/8 will do it for playability
00:45:218 (45218|1) - delete, doubles is enough
00:45:401 (45401|2,45427|3,45454|0,45480|1,45506|2) - again, 1/8
00:46:344 (46344|2,46370|1,46396|0,46422|3,46448|2) - ^
00:47:103 (47103|3,47103|0,47155|1,47208|2,47260|3,47312|2,47365|3,47417|1,47417|2,47417|0) - idk how to explain this change so osu.ppy.sh/ss/8215731 will explain for hand balance, and you can ctrl+h in 00:47:731 - , 00:48:359 - ,and 00:48:988 -
00:50:244 (50244|2,50270|3,50297|0) - 1/8, 1/12 start in 00:50:323 -
01:00:611 (60611|3,60925|2,61239|0,61553|3) - ln should be 1/4 long based on 25% playback
01:03:124 (63124|1,63438|2,63752|0,64066|3) - ^
01:04:223 (64223|1,64302|2) - shift 1 column to the right
01:05:637 (65637|1,65951|2,66265|3,66579|1) - 1/4 ln
01:06:422 (66422|0) - col 3
01:11:527 (71527|2,71605|0) - switch position
01:15:689 (75689|2,76003|0,76318|3,76632|2) - 1/4 ln
01:33:909 (93909|0,93909|3) - 1 note will do
01:36:422 (96422|0,96422|3,96422|1) - ^
01:36:893 (96893|0,96893|1,96893|3) - 2 note
01:44:040 (104040|3) - ooooooooooo (ghost)
01:44:668 (104668|2) - ^
01:48:359 (108359|1,108359|0,108359|2) - give quad for the cymbal
01:49:302 (109302|3,109302|0,109302|2,109302|1) - triple only
01:52:914 (112914|2) - col 2 for aesthethic
01:54:328 (114328|1) - 1/2 ln then 01:54:564 (114564|0) - col 2 for playability
02:13:412 (133412|1,133412|2) - ooo (ghost?)
02:14:668 (134668|2,134668|1) - oooo (ghost??)
02:17:181 (137181|3,137181|2,137181|0) - ctrl+h and then delete the one on col 4
02:18:438 (138438|0,138438|1) - ooooo (ghost???)
02:19:694 (139694|3,139694|2) - oooooo (ghost????)
02:20:951 (140951|1,140951|0) - ooooooo (ghost?????)
02:22:757 (142757|1,142757|3) - oooooooo (ghost??????)
02:22:836 (142836|0) - col 4
02:22:914 (142914|3) - delete (double is enough)
02:23:700 (143700|1) - ooooooooo (ghost???????)
02:24:014 (144014|1,144014|3) - oooooooooo (ghost????????)
02:24:092 (144092|0) - shift to col 2, add note on col 4, 02:24:171 (144171|3) - delete
02:24:956 (144956|0,144956|3) - ooooooooooo (ghost?????????)
02:25:270 (145270|1,145270|3) - oooooooooooo (ghost??????????)
02:25:353 - add note col 4 02:25:427 (145427|0) - delete
02:25:663 (145663|0) - ghost
02:26:213 (146213|2,146213|3) - ghost!
02:26:527 (146527|0,146527|2) - ghost!!
02:31:082 (151082|0,151082|1) - delete these, playability is more important than cymbals(?)
02:31:710 (151710|0,151736|1,151763|2,151789|3,151815|0,151841|1,151867|2,151893|3,151920|0,151946|1,151972|2,151998|3) - 1/8, rest of it 1/12
03:14:433 (194433|3,194472|0,194511|2,194551|1,194590|0,194629|3,194668|1,194708|2,194747|3,194786|0,194825|2,194865|1,194904|0,194943|3,194982|1,195022|2) - i think you should be following piano and kick sound instead that roll since its louder
03:46:789 (226789|1) - delete
04:17:496 (257496|1,257496|2,257653|1,257653|2) - i think these should be 1 note
04:18:752 (258752|1,258831|1) - bad time to have a minijack
04:19:773 (259773|0,259799|1,259825|2,259852|3,259878|1,259904|2,259930|3,259956|0,259982|1,260009|2) - you could place it better than this
04:29:825 (269825|2,269852|1,269878|0,269904|3,269930|2,269956|1,269982|0,270009|3,270035|2,270061|1) - ^
04:21:605 (261605|2,261632|1,261658|0) - shift this one to the right and 04:21:658 (261658|3) - to col 1 and ctrl+h for 04:21:658 (261658|3) -
04:27:626 - missing note
04:31:239 (271239|3,271318|3,271396|3) - no 3 jack when holding ln
04:31:605 (271605|3,271632|2) - switch

sv:
04:37:993 - normalize this, way to slow

SHD
00:26:527 (26527|1) - ghost
00:38:150 (38150|2) - ^
00:45:375 - you can place a ln to replace that weird... shredder(?) sound
00:52:836 (52836|1) - ghost
00:54:092 (54092|2) - ^
00:55:349 (55349|2) - ^
00:56:763 - missing note
00:57:862 (57862|0) - ghost
00:59:119 (59119|1) - ^
01:00:375 (60375|3) - ^
01:02:888 (62888|1) - ^
01:04:145 (64145|0) - ^
01:05:401 (65401|2) - ^
01:06:658 (66658|1) - ^
01:07:914 (67914|3) - ^
01:09:171 (69171|2) - ^
01:10:427 (70427|0) - ^
01:12:941 (72941|2) - ^
01:14:197 (74197|0) - ^
01:15:454 (75454|1) - ^
01:17:967 (77967|3) - ^
02:04:459 (124459|1) - no minijack while holding ln
02:04:459 (124459|1) - missing note
02:04:459 (124459|1) - ^
02:35:166 (155166|1,155166|3,155480|3,155480|1,155794|3,155794|1,156108|1,156108|3,156265|2,156422|0,156422|1,156579|3) - what is this?
02:38:071 (158071|1) - ghost
02:39:328 (159328|2) - ^
02:39:799 - missing
02:43:098 (163098|1) - ghost
02:44:354 (164354|1) - ^
02:48:124 (168124|2) - ^
02:49:380 (169380|2) - ^
02:50:637 (170637|2) - ^
02:52:993 (172993|0,173150|0) - ^
03:16:946 (196946|0) - unnecessary
03:39:799 (219799|3) - ghost
03:44:197 (224197|2) - ^
03:45:454 (225454|2) - ^
03:48:752 (228752|2) - ^
03:50:009 (230009|2) - ^
03:53:307 - missing note
03:53:935 - ^
03:58:176 (238176|0) - white line
03:58:962 (238962|2) - ghost
03:59:433 (239433|2) - white line
04:01:946 (241946|0) - ^
04:03:202 (243202|3) - ^
04:04:459 (244459|0) - ^
song repeat, i think you can selfmod

I think that's all, sorry if my mod too offensive :?
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

hello, m4m from YOUR queue (poop), havent posted it, will post soon. Also nice song

DISCLAIMER

  1. I really like hard song, i just dont like its too underrated (map is too hard for that star rating) so most of the time i will nerfing that map (too much unnecessary minijack, bad ln, etc) But I don't want my map to be a pp farming map... >:(
  2. since I only play harder song, i will only check harder diff (above 4*, special req exception)
  3. I am new from mapping so i guess i dont always do a good mod
  4. I always assuming the map I'll mod is going to rank so I'll do my best
  5. Also i have bad english
  6. As always, no kudosu if this mod is pointless
1|2|3|4

Venus
00:12:077 (12077|2) - i think it should me in col 2 since ln is already coming in col 3 Fixed
00:25:270 (25270|0) - col 2 What is the different
00:34:537 (34537|1,34694|3) - switch position Fixed
00:42:548 (42548|1,42626|1,42705|1) - 00:42:626 (42626|3,42705|3) - its okay if you want to map with so much minijack but playability is more important tbh, and i think you should avoid that 3 jacks in a row, and also 00:42:705 - shouldnt be triples, my suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8215684 I fixed so that the jack isn't that insane to play with but I still have to pass ur suggestion
00:43:647 (43647|3,43674|2,43700|1,43726|0,43752|3,43778|2,43804|1,43831|0,43857|3,43883|2,43909|1) - 1/8 will do it for playability Nah
00:45:218 (45218|1) - delete, doubles is enough Fixed
00:45:401 (45401|2,45427|3,45454|0,45480|1,45506|2) - again, 1/8 Nah
00:46:344 (46344|2,46370|1,46396|0,46422|3,46448|2) - ^ ^
00:47:103 (47103|3,47103|0,47155|1,47208|2,47260|3,47312|2,47365|3,47417|1,47417|2,47417|0) - idk how to explain this change so osu.ppy.sh/ss/8215731 will explain for hand balance, and you can ctrl+h in 00:47:731 - , 00:48:359 - ,and 00:48:988 - Fixed
00:50:244 (50244|2,50270|3,50297|0) - 1/8, 1/12 start in 00:50:323 - They r the same
01:00:611 (60611|3,60925|2,61239|0,61553|3) - ln should be 1/4 long based on 25% playback
01:03:124 (63124|1,63438|2,63752|0,64066|3) - ^ All fixed
01:04:223 (64223|1,64302|2) - shift 1 column to the right Fixed
01:05:637 (65637|1,65951|2,66265|3,66579|1) - 1/4 ln All 1/4 LNs are fixed
01:06:422 (66422|0) - col 3 All changing col are fixed
01:11:527 (71527|2,71605|0) - switch position Fixed
01:15:689 (75689|2,76003|0,76318|3,76632|2) - 1/4 ln
01:33:909 (93909|0,93909|3) - 1 note will do Fixed
01:36:422 (96422|0,96422|3,96422|1) - ^ ^
01:36:893 (96893|0,96893|1,96893|3) - 2 note Fixed
01:44:040 (104040|3) - ooooooooooo (ghost)
01:44:668 (104668|2) - ^ All fixed
01:48:359 (108359|1,108359|0,108359|2) - give quad for the cymbal Nah
01:49:302 (109302|3,109302|0,109302|2,109302|1) - triple only
01:52:914 (112914|2) - col 2 for aesthethic
01:54:328 (114328|1) - 1/2 ln Nope then 01:54:564 (114564|0) - col 2 for playability
02:13:412 (133412|1,133412|2) - ooo (ghost?) They are kicks, listen carefully, the same to all ur oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
02:14:668 (134668|2,134668|1) - oooo (ghost??)
02:17:181 (137181|3,137181|2,137181|0) - ctrl+h and then delete the one on col 4 Nope
02:18:438 (138438|0,138438|1) - ooooo (ghost???)
02:19:694 (139694|3,139694|2) - oooooo (ghost????)
02:20:951 (140951|1,140951|0) - ooooooo (ghost?????)
02:22:757 (142757|1,142757|3) - oooooooo (ghost??????) Now all of these notes are used to symbolized the stress of each sound
02:22:836 (142836|0) - col 4 Nope
02:22:914 (142914|3) - delete (double is enough) Can't because it is this part's pattern
02:23:700 (143700|1) - ooooooooo (ghost???????)
02:24:014 (144014|1,144014|3) - oooooooooo (ghost????????)
02:24:092 (144092|0) - shift to col 2, add note on col 4, 02:24:171 (144171|3) - delete Nope
02:24:956 (144956|0,144956|3) - ooooooooooo (ghost?????????)
02:25:270 (145270|1,145270|3) - oooooooooooo (ghost??????????)
02:25:353 - add note col 4 02:25:427 (145427|0) - delete Nope
02:25:663 (145663|0) - ghost Fixed
02:26:213 (146213|2,146213|3) - ghost!
02:26:527 (146527|0,146527|2) - ghost!!
02:31:082 (151082|0,151082|1) - delete these, playability is more important than cymbals(?) If other addressed this again then I'll fix it
02:31:710 (151710|0,151736|1,151763|2,151789|3,151815|0,151841|1,151867|2,151893|3,151920|0,151946|1,151972|2,151998|3) - 1/8, rest of it 1/12 they are the same
03:14:433 (194433|3,194472|0,194511|2,194551|1,194590|0,194629|3,194668|1,194708|2,194747|3,194786|0,194825|2,194865|1,194904|0,194943|3,194982|1,195022|2) - i think you should be following piano and kick sound instead that roll since its louder Nah
03:46:789 (226789|1) - delete It is for the bass
04:17:496 (257496|1,257496|2,257653|1,257653|2) - i think these should be 1 note Nope
04:18:752 (258752|1,258831|1) - bad time to have a minijack I don't see it is a bad time to use jack but rather good time to use jack
04:19:773 (259773|0,259799|1,259825|2,259852|3,259878|1,259904|2,259930|3,259956|0,259982|1,260009|2) - you could place it better than this
04:29:825 (269825|2,269852|1,269878|0,269904|3,269930|2,269956|1,269982|0,270009|3,270035|2,270061|1) - ^ All fixed
04:21:605 (261605|2,261632|1,261658|0) - shift this one to the right and 04:21:658 (261658|3) - to col 1 and ctrl+h for 04:21:658 (261658|3) - ?
04:27:626 - missing note Fixed
04:31:239 (271239|3,271318|3,271396|3) - no 3 jack when holding ln Kinda... fixed?
04:31:605 (271605|3,271632|2) - switch Fixed

sv:
04:37:993 - normalize this, way to slow

Welp, somehow this diff got harder

SHD
00:26:527 (26527|1) - ghost
00:38:150 (38150|2) - ^
00:45:375 - you can place a ln to replace that weird... shredder(?) sound
00:52:836 (52836|1) - ghost
00:54:092 (54092|2) - ^
00:55:349 (55349|2) - ^
00:56:763 - missing note
00:57:862 (57862|0) - ghost
00:59:119 (59119|1) - ^
01:00:375 (60375|3) - ^
01:02:888 (62888|1) - ^
01:04:145 (64145|0) - ^
01:05:401 (65401|2) - ^
01:06:658 (66658|1) - ^
01:07:914 (67914|3) - ^
01:09:171 (69171|2) - ^
01:10:427 (70427|0) - ^
01:12:941 (72941|2) - ^
01:14:197 (74197|0) - ^
01:15:454 (75454|1) - ^
01:17:967 (77967|3) - ^
02:04:459 (124459|1) - no minijack while holding ln
02:04:459 (124459|1) - missing note
02:04:459 (124459|1) - ^
02:35:166 (155166|1,155166|3,155480|3,155480|1,155794|3,155794|1,156108|1,156108|3,156265|2,156422|0,156422|1,156579|3) - what is this?
02:38:071 (158071|1) - ghost
02:39:328 (159328|2) - ^
02:39:799 - missing
02:43:098 (163098|1) - ghost
02:44:354 (164354|1) - ^
02:48:124 (168124|2) - ^
02:49:380 (169380|2) - ^
02:50:637 (170637|2) - ^
02:52:993 (172993|0,173150|0) - ^
03:16:946 (196946|0) - unnecessary
03:39:799 (219799|3) - ghost
03:44:197 (224197|2) - ^
03:45:454 (225454|2) - ^
03:48:752 (228752|2) - ^
03:50:009 (230009|2) - ^
03:53:307 - missing note
03:53:935 - ^
03:58:176 (238176|0) - white line
03:58:962 (238962|2) - ghost
03:59:433 (239433|2) - white line
04:01:946 (241946|0) - ^
04:03:202 (243202|3) - ^
04:04:459 (244459|0) - ^
song repeat, i think you can selfmod

I think that's all, sorry if my mod too offensive :? Not at all (^w^)b
Ty for ur really long mod, gonna mod u asap 8-)
Oscyy
403 posts
Joined August 2014
Oscyy
Rotf, oooo *ghost sound* :D

Anyway, hurray +0,01 star rating :D
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