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Depraved Reality of Friends

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Meah
We all start with innocence,
Step by step we sense,
That life we have now,
Is not life we expected somehow.

A person who’s a friend,
Most of their time we lend,
They listen to words unexpressed,
Who’ll comfort you 100%, you guess?

Some turn their heads to you,
Just to listen things out of curiosity
Ending up for your life to be silly
‘Cause at the end of the day,
Knives on your back they’ll lay

Essence of having friends,
Became null and untrue
Pushing you to ignore them
Not for them to hate you,
But in order for you not to hurt yourself

Having a friend,
Is an all-time trend
And yes,
It all comes with consequences
Of being hurt and fooled,
Pulling sadness to come over you
Making the reality of having friends,
Be depraved
johnmedina999
But friends comfort you when you're down,
Friends make sure you're not lonely when they're around.
If you're depressed, they'll make it better.
They'll play vidya with you, talk to you, take off that frown.

Maybe one of your friends betrayed you,
Put the supposed knife in your back,
But these types of friends are only a few
Of the many, many friends in your pack.

The betrayer is not your friend at all,
It's alright to cry, but later move on,
Stand up straight, stand up tall,
And maybe fill in the space
That your "friend" left, and in his place
Find someone else of whom you are fond.
ColdTooth
Can the rose really brighten up?
The land before my cup?
Is it but a thought, a layout
Of the creation of mind
Soaring through the desert pout
Crushing the dreams of the kind
Or is it just another dream?

Too late, I figure, too soon
As the sky turns a bright yellow
Angels begin to form into a cocoon.
Dearest of me, hold tight in mellow
Someday the sky of my city
Will also turn with a pity.

Find the one you will breathe
Or art thou shamefully rhythmic?
Is this the way of the crane, I ask
But he comes over to me, a trident of maniacs
Piercing through my heart with a clash
And a booming sound above in the golden sky

Thus, OT was born, a new realm of land.
Shouting out above, with new grains of sand
Flying through the bones of the old.
We all wonder how they were bold
With their mighty weapons of steel and iron
As we all suffer the same heartburn
johnmedina999
Really ColdTooth? You just ruined the fun.
This thread was a discussion about friends, and why you shouldn't have one.
I kept the poem going with my advice,
And you had to ruin it. You are so precise
With your shitposting, you don't know when to stop.
Like Blitzfrog said, you need to know when to shitpost 'till you drop
And when to go with the flow and stop.
ColdTooth
Hey, you didn't follow a great rhyme pattern
I guess I need to engage into Saturn
And show you how to rhyme
It's as easy as opening up a lime

Didn't think I'd end it there
But do keep an eye on lesson three
Awkward as it seems, it's just a fair
Dose of electric, and you're all free

Look I got a sweet payment comin' in
You think I'm going end this shitpost
Nah man, else I belong in a trash bin
For the next time I come back to most
Mahogany
Violet eyes searching
Friendship found in no old tome
Magic lies in Friends
johnmedina999
@ColdTooth:

My rhyme pattern is irregular
Because my personality is too,
And I'm not just coming up with rhymes out of the blue (like you):

ColdTooth wrote:

Hey, you didn't follow a great rhyme pattern
I guess I need to engage into Saturn
My rhymes have meaning, my rhymes have style.
(Hopefully) my rhymes make people smile.

So it should be me teaching you how to rhyme.
I suggest you stop typing and wasting your time.

Unless you decide to stay on topic,
In that case, you're welcome here,
If not, I want you to stop it.
abraker
I browse OT day to day
Looking for what to say
I see a thread, I click
Oh look, a dick!
Yes, it's the usual shit
A wall of text that doesn't even fit
I still have hope
actually wait, nope
I actually don't have any hope for you fucks
Everything in this shitty hell sucks
clover
no fun allowed
Mahogany

FrozenMilkshake wrote:

no fun allowed
A Kind heart masking
Rage hides among butterflies
Shame and doubt clip wings
Blitzfrog
Friends are all fake,
None for your best.
It's all for their sake,
When here comes the test,
Of friendship and care.
They'll surely all fail.
For they don't dare,
And far they will sail.
They'll leave you broken,
And leave you all sad.
When you are bitten,
Then you are mad.
But too late they're gone,
And sorrow shall come.
Whilst you weep in sadness,
They'll sleep with your mom
johnmedina999
I guess Meah's heartfelt, inspiring poem was thrown to waste
By OT's shit squad having a race
To see who can derail the thread the fastest.

I apologize, Meah, your poem was great
But it fell to bait
And now I'm left flabbergasted.

So I excuse myself from this thread,
And to all the shitposters, I hope you die from the poisoning of lead.
ColdTooth

johnmedina999 wrote:

So I excuse myself from this thread,
And to all the shitposters, I hope you die from the poisoning of lead.
As heartbroken as I feel
It's like you forgot how to heal
What happened to me was a tragedy
You may refer to me as your majesty

You might be getting better at that rhyming
Maybe I'll apologizing about my griming
But listen closely to the ColdTooth rap
As your about to hear some more crap

Because I don't have the time to deal with poison
I just have to look at the sun
It'll make me melt, just like the ice cream you felt
Droppin' on your feet, as you listen to the beat

I'm not the funniest guy around
You might just have to keep me bound
But I'll bounce back in world with no sense
Sounds like I might be a little too tense
levesterz
I click on this thread
All I see is wall of text
Now my eye are sore

(Nice poem btw)
Rwyta
One Two Three Four
How many fucking imitators will copy me like a whore?
Rwyta
Almost forgot

Mayowazu ni ima mujun darake no sekai o sono te de uchihanate

Zutto yume miteta boku ni nare ta kana touni kae rena i toko made kita mitai 
Jibun no ashi de ni danto bashi te sou motto saki e kakete ikeru hazu dakara ran away 
 
Fukaku naru kizu wonu itsuke tsunagu pasu jiku ni mawari dasu
Nareta itami a seru ko kyuu tobii to kizu kana i furishi te mata hitori

Nani ga sei touna i nae i gou darega machi gatta taika harau no
Anta ga kira ina a itsu wa kitto tada sore dakede fuse ikai nanda
Re iten datte te i genshi ta tte zen zen natto ku dekina i riyuu mo (Aaaah eu vou gozar)
Sai zen sen wa itsu datte koko datta sai zen saku wa saisho kara na katta (Vem que eu vou te tacar o piru)

TATOE---

Sekai no subete ga miiro ni tokete mo kitto
Anata no koe ga suru
Daijoubu kaerou tte
Demo

Aa mou itai itai nante
Koe wa tashika ni todoitetan desu
Kimi ga "kirai" kirai nante
Kotoba sabitsuite kikoenai ya (YAMETE YO)

Nyaa
Mofumofu mofumofu hashiridasu nani wo mamoru tame?
Chiisa na karada de kakenukeru hontou wa nemutai ndesho?

EA-MAN ga taosenai yo
Ano tatsumaki nankai yattemo yokerenai
Ushiro ni mawatte
Uchi tsuzuketemo izure wa kaze ni tobasareru

Kogare futte mo tonde mo toshigoro me de madou
Kimi ni itsushika sachi aran
Itsumo fundarikettari bakari de nayamashii
Kimi ni itsushika sachi aran

Kurukuru tokei no hari Guruguru atama mawaru
Datte tsubura medama Futatsu shika nai no ni
Sanbon no hari nante Chinpunkan

We need to find a way
I need to follow through
I need to find the faith
To help us make it through-oughh
Make it through-ouguough

Let the bass kick!
O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U- JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A- E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A- JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA

Nanika no tame ni kogare, ikiteru kanshoku wa kitto
Darenimo makenai chikara ni naru

We make it united [4x]

Suwaru, suwaru OH SIT DOWN PLEASE (YEAH!)
FEEDBACK ni karada azukete
Meguru, meguru OH TURN IT AROUND (YEAH!)
Unari wo agete MOTOR joutai

Seishun wo kakenukero (Go!)
Issho ni (Go!) te wo tsunaide hashire
Tatoe koronda to shite mo minna de tachiagareba ii (se~no!)

Baby yeah, oh baby shake me, show your blood
Join me to underground, give it to this flood
Maybe yet...You don't know this beautiful world
Everlasting emotion makes me bright

Kuchidzuke daiyamondo wo anata no yubi ni watasou
Katachi no nai yakusoku itsu datte omoidashite
Aishiteru

CRY THUNDER

Watashi Hatsune Miku mawashimasu
Kubi o tate ni bunbun furu
Watashi Hatsune Miku mawashimasu
Atama o furi mawashite utau

Watashi Hatsune Miku utaimasu
Kono uta o utau toki wa
Watashi Hatsune Miku utaimasu
Kubi o itamenai teido ni
Kubi o futte
Ne

See you next time.
Tae
I agree!
Endaris
A wondrous turn of events I see
oh if a poet I could be
in german it is hard to rhyme
and when i rhyme it is a crime

colors, feelings, metaphors, oh if i could draw from this well that seems to go deeper than our grief for plotter
but just like plotter i cannot get a hold. i'm standing here, unable to comfort my friend who is looking at my knife for some odd reason
Endaris
Here are the battle ratings so far guys.

SPOILER

Meah wrote:

We all start with innocence,
Step by step we sense,
That life we have now,
Is not life we expected somehow.

A person who’s a friend,
Most of their time we lend,
They listen to words unexpressed,
Who’ll comfort you 100%, you guess?

Some turn their heads to you,
Just to listen things out of curiosity
Ending up for your life to be silly
‘Cause at the end of the day,
Knives on your back they’ll lay

Essence of having friends,
Became null and untrue
Pushing you to ignore them
Not for them to hate you,
But in order for you not to hurt yourself

Having a friend,
Is an all-time trend
And yes,
It all comes with consequences
Of being hurt and fooled,
Pulling sadness to come over you
Making the reality of having friends,
Be depraved
Entity 22.16
Emotive Charge 54.40
Total 76.56

SPOILER

johnmedina999 wrote:

But friends comfort you when you're down,
Friends make sure you're not lonely when they're around.
If you're depressed, they'll make it better.
They'll play vidya with you, talk to you, take off that frown.

Maybe one of your friends betrayed you,
Put the supposed knife in your back,
But these types of friends are only a few
Of the many, many friends in your pack.

The betrayer is not your friend at all,
It's alright to cry, but later move on,
Stand up straight, stand up tall,
And maybe fill in the space
That your "friend" left, and in his place
Find someone else of whom you are fond.

Entity 35.70
Emotive Charge 38.40
Total 74.10


SPOILER

ColdTooth wrote:

Can the rose really brighten up?
The land before my cup?
Is it but a thought, a layout
Of the creation of mind
Soaring through the desert pout
Crushing the dreams of the kind
Or is it just another dream?

Too late, I figure, too soon
As the sky turns a bright yellow
Angels begin to form into a cocoon.
Dearest of me, hold tight in mellow
Someday the sky of my city
Will also turn with a pity.

Find the one you will breathe
Or art thou shamefully rhythmic?
Is this the way of the crane, I ask
But he comes over to me, a trident of maniacs
Piercing through my heart with a clash
And a booming sound above in the golden sky

Thus, OT was born, a new realm of land.
Shouting out above, with new grains of sand
Flying through the bones of the old.
We all wonder how they were bold
With their mighty weapons of steel and iron
As we all suffer the same heartburn

Entity 12.29
Emotive Charge 47.40
Total 59.69


SPOILER

johnmedina999 wrote:

Really ColdTooth? You just ruined the fun.
This thread was a discussion about friends, and why you shouldn't have one.
I kept the poem going with my advice,
And you had to ruin it. You are so precise
With your shitposting, you don't know when to stop.
Like Blitzfrog said, you need to know when to shitpost 'till you drop
And when to go with the flow and stop.

Entity 14.85
Emotive Charge 29.60
Total 44.45


SPOILER

ColdTooth wrote:

Hey, you didn't follow a great rhyme pattern
I guess I need to engage into Saturn
And show you how to rhyme
It's as easy as opening up a lime

Didn't think I'd end it there
But do keep an eye on lesson three
Awkward as it seems, it's just a fair
Dose of electric, and you're all free

Look I got a sweet payment comin' in
You think I'm going end this shitpost
Nah man, else I belong in a trash bin
For the next time I come back to most

Entity 14.95
Emotive Charge 12.80
Total 27.75


SPOILER

johnmedina999 wrote:

@ColdTooth:

My rhyme pattern is irregular
Because my personality is too,
And I'm not just coming up with rhymes out of the blue (like you):

ColdTooth wrote:

Hey, you didn't follow a great rhyme pattern
I guess I need to engage into Saturn
My rhymes have meaning, my rhymes have style.
(Hopefully) my rhymes make people smile.

So it should be me teaching you how to rhyme.
I suggest you stop typing and wasting your time.

Unless you decide to stay on topic,
In that case, you're welcome here,
If not, I want you to stop it.

Entity 17.22
Emotive Charge 60.00
Total 77.22


SPOILER

abraker wrote:

I browse OT day to day
Looking for what to say
I see a thread, I click
Oh look, a dick!
Yes, it's the usual shit
A wall of text that doesn't even fit
I still have hope
actually wait, nope
I actually don't have any hope for you fucks
Everything in this shitty hell sucks

Entity 10.82
Emotive Charge 77.60
Total 88.42


SPOILER

Blitzfrog wrote:

Friends are all fake,
None for your best.
It's all for their sake,
When here comes the test,
Of friendship and care.
They'll surely all fail.
For they don't dare,
And far they will sail.
They'll leave you broken,
And leave you all sad.
When you are bitten,
Then you are mad.
But too late they're gone,
And sorrow shall come.
Whilst you weep in sadness,
They'll sleep with your mom

Entity 28.88
Emotive Charge 78.40
Total 107.28


SPOILER

johnmedina999 wrote:

I guess Meah's heartfelt, inspiring poem was thrown to waste
By OT's shit squad having a race
To see who can derail the thread the fastest.

I apologize, Meah, your poem was great
But it fell to bait
And now I'm left flabbergasted.

So I excuse myself from this thread,
And to all the shitposters, I hope you die from the poisoning of lead.

Entity 24.69
Emotive Charge 50.40
Total 75.09


SPOILER

ColdTooth wrote:

As heartbroken as I feel
It's like you forgot how to heal
What happened to me was a tragedy
You may refer to me as your majesty

You might be getting better at that rhyming
Maybe I'll apologizing about my griming
But listen closely to the ColdTooth rap
As your about to hear some more crap

Because I don't have the time to deal with poison
I just have to look at the sun
It'll make me melt, just like the ice cream you felt
Droppin' on your feet, as you listen to the beat

I'm not the funniest guy around
You might just have to keep me bound
But I'll bounce back in world with no sense
Sounds like I might be a little too tense

Entity 15.55
Emotive Charge 66.40
Total 81.95


SPOILER

Allmynamestaken wrote:

Mayowazu ni ima mujun darake no sekai o sono te de uchihanate

Zutto yume miteta boku ni nare ta kana touni kae rena i toko made kita mitai 
Jibun no ashi de ni danto bashi te sou motto saki e kakete ikeru hazu dakara ran away 
 
Fukaku naru kizu wonu itsuke tsunagu pasu jiku ni mawari dasu
Nareta itami a seru ko kyuu tobii to kizu kana i furishi te mata hitori

Nani ga sei touna i nae i gou darega machi gatta taika harau no
Anta ga kira ina a itsu wa kitto tada sore dakede fuse ikai nanda
Re iten datte te i genshi ta tte zen zen natto ku dekina i riyuu mo (Aaaah eu vou gozar)
Sai zen sen wa itsu datte koko datta sai zen saku wa saisho kara na katta (Vem que eu vou te tacar o piru)

TATOE---

Sekai no subete ga miiro ni tokete mo kitto
Anata no koe ga suru
Daijoubu kaerou tte
Demo

Aa mou itai itai nante
Koe wa tashika ni todoitetan desu
Kimi ga "kirai" kirai nante
Kotoba sabitsuite kikoenai ya (YAMETE YO)

Nyaa
Mofumofu mofumofu hashiridasu nani wo mamoru tame?
Chiisa na karada de kakenukeru hontou wa nemutai ndesho?

EA-MAN ga taosenai yo
Ano tatsumaki nankai yattemo yokerenai
Ushiro ni mawatte
Uchi tsuzuketemo izure wa kaze ni tobasareru

Kogare futte mo tonde mo toshigoro me de madou
Kimi ni itsushika sachi aran
Itsumo fundarikettari bakari de nayamashii
Kimi ni itsushika sachi aran

Kurukuru tokei no hari Guruguru atama mawaru
Datte tsubura medama Futatsu shika nai no ni
Sanbon no hari nante Chinpunkan

We need to find a way
I need to follow through
I need to find the faith
To help us make it through-oughh
Make it through-ouguough

Let the bass kick!
O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U- JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A- E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A- JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA

Nanika no tame ni kogare, ikiteru kanshoku wa kitto
Darenimo makenai chikara ni naru

We make it united [4x]

Suwaru, suwaru OH SIT DOWN PLEASE (YEAH!)
FEEDBACK ni karada azukete
Meguru, meguru OH TURN IT AROUND (YEAH!)
Unari wo agete MOTOR joutai

Seishun wo kakenukero (Go!)
Issho ni (Go!) te wo tsunaide hashire
Tatoe koronda to shite mo minna de tachiagareba ii (se~no!)

Baby yeah, oh baby shake me, show your blood
Join me to underground, give it to this flood
Maybe yet...You don't know this beautiful world
Everlasting emotion makes me bright

Kuchidzuke daiyamondo wo anata no yubi ni watasou
Katachi no nai yakusoku itsu datte omoidashite
Aishiteru

CRY THUNDER

Watashi Hatsune Miku mawashimasu
Kubi o tate ni bunbun furu
Watashi Hatsune Miku mawashimasu
Atama o furi mawashite utau

Watashi Hatsune Miku utaimasu
Kono uta o utau toki wa
Watashi Hatsune Miku utaimasu
Kubi o itamenai teido ni
Kubi o futte
Ne

See you next time.

Entity 26.17
Emotive Charge 47.20
Total 73.37


SPOILER

Endaris wrote:

A wondrous turn of events I see
oh if a poet I could be
in german it is hard to rhyme
and when i rhyme it is a crime

colors, feelings, metaphors, oh if i could draw from this well that seems to go deeper than our grief for plotter
but just like plotter i cannot get a hold. i'm standing here, unable to comfort my friend who is looking at my knife for some odd reason

Entity 14.91
Emotive Charge 30.40
Total 45.31
ColdTooth
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