1. Easy - 4Key (1.27 stars, 234 notes)
2. Heartless - 4Key (2.4 stars, 432 notes)
3. Normal - 4Key (1.7 stars, 330 notes)

AchsanLovers wrote:

Hi ~
NM req from my queue to lazy copy link

[General]

- uncheck widescreen suppport and countdown. =w= ok

- if you use 25% volume in opening (00:32:392 - and 00:00:347 - ) in kiai time you should use 50% not 60% :3 yeaaaa done

[Easy]

00:10:915 - add LN in col 4 for vocal ? mhm

00:26:256 (26256|1) - move to col 1 ? ok I guess

00:54:892 (54892|2) - move to col 2 ? think I'll stick with my original since it is a high note

01:22:165 (82165|0) - add LN and end in 01:22:846 - aight

01:26:256 (86256|2) - should end in 01:28:898 - doesn't matter that much so ok

[Normal]

00:04:437 (4437|2) - move to col 1 ? good idea

00:10:915 (10915|1) - same reason with Easy. yup

00:37:847 (37847|1) - cuz it same with 00:36:483 (36483|3) - you can move it to col 4 aight

01:00:346 - 1 note is enough, that note is not too loud. oh true

01:17:392 - maybe make like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6946544 [if you apply this one, just keep 01:18:415 (78415|2) - in there] don't really understand this one... it's the same? keeping it though

01:22:804 - hmm, i not sure with this one. maybe delete 01:22:889 (82889|2) - ? there are 3 notes so keeping it

01:23:358 (83358|1) - emm, i not hear any sound in hear. if you follow vocal shiri"ta"ku it's okay :3 yea the "ta" is very distinct

01:27:619 (87619|2) - move to col 2 ? okie

[Hard]

00:05:119 (5119|2) - lol i not hear anything in here :3 yea true

00:05:801 - 2 note is enough maybe delete 00:05:801 (5801|0) - ? but up to you. :3 yea that note represents the piano so im keeping it.

00:10:915 - same reason with easy. yesu yesu

00:31:426 - i hear a piano sound, you can add note in here. I was a little scared of adding this one but ok

00:32:562 - add note? i hear a sound. it's just her breathing, but ok

01:27:704 (87704|2) - should be 1/12. o yes

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just it, i hope my mod help your map.

Good Luck ~ o/

Ramuchi wrote:

HI! NM here!

Request

heyo
Type of request: NM
Title: Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta. (Anime Ver.)
Artist: Sawai Miku
Length: 1:27
Diff: focus on normal and hard
Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/552521 
Modder request : Ram
 
thanks in advance :smile:

YEAHHHH MORE PIANO SONG!!


[Normal]

00:12:619 (12619|2) - move to column 2 for pitch Shifted

00:12:960 (12960|1) - move to column 1 did that before I read this LOL

00:13:983 (13983|1) - move to column 3 ok

00:36:483 -
how about this pattern? i think [3 hold, 4] unbalance. true, did that

[Hard]

00:00:347 - ~ 00:04:437 - can u snap base clef sounds? like

this very good idea! done!

00:41:937 - i think long sound(?) in here.

how about this pattern? ok done


perfect! i cant mod more DDDD very nice pattern DDD

ill shoot GL ! '- ^ b

LeCookie wrote:

(1 2 3 4)
ohai :3

Hard
00:26:256 (26256|2) - This note would go better in the 3 column like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6955119 it's an anchor at 3 so no
00:26:937 (26937|3) - This note would go better in the 4 column like so: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6955125 aight
@both ^ - It feels smoother to play with those notes in said position.

Normal
01:22:889 (122889|3) - Move to column 4 for pitch. this is the normal diff so I want to make this 3 note part a little easier to hit.

Murumoo wrote:

halo~
( 1 2 3 4 )
my opinion - suggest
Ez level pass [good level]

NM

00:04:437 - suggest yupppp done
00:05:460 - suggest I want to stick with pitch relevancy on this one.
00:07:847 - add 1 note done
00:39:210 (39210|1) - move 3 alright
00:50:119 (50119|3) - move 1 or 2 2 so there wont be a 1/1 jack at 1
00:51:483 - remove 1 note or add Hard level 00:51:483 - 1 note removed
00:55:574 - ^ removed too
00:56:256 - add note 2 done
01:08:187 - suggest done
01:27:619 - suggest mhm

Hard

01:08:358 - add 1 note [watch normal level] got it
01:10:915 - remove note [Take care of the more emphasis sound] ohhhh oki
01:11:085 - add 1 note oki
01:15:006 - remove note [ghost note] made it an LN, it's a guitar sound
01:15:687 - suggest mhm
01:19:096 - suggest okie

Good luck

1. BPM: OK
2. Offset: OK
3. AiMod: OK
4. Audio: OK
5. Background: OK
6. Preview Point: OK

1. 00:42:619 - I think you should add one here for consistency .
2. 00:53:528 (53528|3,53869|3) - You should reconsider this. Well it's okay to have this note 00:53:528 (53528|0,53869|0) - but that kind of note can't handle to the beginners. (I was concerned to the beginners for this diff and it's up to you.)
3. 01:26:256 (86256|2) - you intentional the end of LN? if not the end of LN should be here 01:28:983 -

1. 00:07:847 (7847|0) - well i suggest to change this to LN. (it's up to you)
2. 00:11:256 - 00:12:619 - 00:13:983 - 00:15:347 - 00:16:710 - 00:18:074 - 00:19:437 - 00:20:801 - 00:22:165 - 00:23:528 - 00:24:892 - 00:26:256 - 00:27:619 - 00:28:983 - 00:30:347 - i think you need one note here for pitch.
3. 00:51:483 - 00:52:847 - add note here. Same sound here 00:48:756 (48756|3,48756|0) - 00:46:028 (46028|0,46028|2) -
4. 01:17:733 (77733|3,77733|1,78074|3,78074|1) - reconsider this note. (I was concerned at similarities of sound, well it's acceptable if this note have the same sound like this note 01:17:392 (77392|3,77392|0,77733|3,77733|1) )

1. 00:51:483 - 00:52:847 - as i said in normal (add one note).

Thanks again for my map and good luck to your map

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Mod for Mod Request

[General]

1. BPM: OK
2. Offset: OK
3. AiMod: OK
4. Audio: OK
5. Background: OK
6. Preview Point: OK

4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Easy]

1. 00:42:619 - I think you should add one here for consistency . okie
2. 00:53:528 (53528|3,53869|3) - You should reconsider this. Well it's okay to have this note 00:53:528 (53528|0,53869|0) - but that kind of note can't handle to the beginners. (I was concerned to the beginners for this diff and it's up to you.) switched the placement.
3. 01:26:256 (86256|2) - you intentional the end of LN? if not the end of LN should be here 01:28:983 - my bad whoops

[Normal]

1. 00:07:847 (7847|0) - well i suggest to change this to LN. (it's up to you) it's a piano note and it is not sustained so no.
2. 00:11:256 - 00:12:619 - 00:13:983 - 00:15:347 - 00:16:710 - 00:18:074 - 00:19:437 - 00:20:801 - 00:22:165 - 00:23:528 - 00:24:892 - 00:26:256 - 00:27:619 - 00:28:983 - 00:30:347 - i think you need one note here for pitch. all done, did change a few in the process.
3. 00:51:483 - 00:52:847 - add note here. Same sound here 00:48:756 (48756|3,48756|0) - 00:46:028 (46028|0,46028|2) - ok done
4. 01:17:733 (77733|3,77733|1,78074|3,78074|1) - reconsider this note. (I was concerned at similarities of sound, well it's acceptable if this note have the same sound like this note 01:17:392 (77392|3,77392|0,77733|3,77733|1) ) changed the pattern a bit so it won't be a 2 4 double twice.

[Hard]

1. 00:51:483 - 00:52:847 - as i said in normal (add one note). yup

Thanks again for my map and good luck to your map

1. It's fine.

1. 00:25:915 (25915|3,25915|2) - delete a note? or for emphasize piano? the piano is similar as 00:23:187 (23187|2) - since that feels strange this parter 00:25:233 (25233|1,25233|2,25574|0,25574|1,25915|3,25915|2,26256|1,26256|0) - imo
2. 00:27:619 (27619|3,27960|2) - control + g? for the pitch is different in 00:26:937 -
3. 00:38:528 - add note for the double? is similar as 00:41:256 - imo
4. 00:55:744 (55744|0) - move column 1. the sound no is similar for the jack 00:55:574 (55574|0,55744|0) - combine better for piano and is more comfortable for this diff

1. 00:15:687 (15687|0,16028|2,16369|3) - consider change in other column.. is almost repetitive as 00:12:960 (12960|0,13301|2,13642|3) - and 00:17:051 (17051|0,17392|1,17733|3) -
2. 00:23:187 (23187|1) - change column 0 for the balance.. (I feel that column 1 is working more than the other column imo)
3. 00:26:597 (26597|1,26937|2,27278|3) - change other column? it's a bit strange to repeat as 00:27:960 (27960|0,28301|1,28642|2) - imo.. i like as this:
   
   a

   
4. 00:42:960 (42960|1,43301|2,43642|1,43983|2) - control + h?
5. 01:04:096 (64096|3,64437|2) - control + g? i feels better by song imo
6. 00:59:324 (59324|2,60006|1) - control + h? i don't know that sound your follow but you must consider this note 00:57:278 (57278|2,57960|2,58642|2,59324|2) - i think that no is good idea follow 1/2 in same column

1. 00:13:642 (13642|1) - move column 0?
2. 00:18:074 (18074|0,18756|1) - control + g? for balance
3. 00:50:801 - add note here.. feels empty
4. 00:52:506 (52506|1) - delete? no sound import to this diff imo
5. 00:56:937 - to 01:00:687 - is repetitive makes the player feel strange.. consider change other pattern
6. 01:08:187 - ^ same above

Etsu wrote:

Hi o/

Mania M4M from this queue

Columns: 0|1|2|3

[General]

1. It's fine.

[Hard]

1. 00:25:915 (25915|3,25915|2) - delete a note? or for emphasize piano? the piano is similar as 00:23:187 (23187|2) - since that feels strange this parter 00:25:233 (25233|1,25233|2,25574|0,25574|1,25915|3,25915|2,26256|1,26256|0) - imo oh nice catch
2. 00:27:619 (27619|3,27960|2) - control + g? for the pitch is different in 00:26:937 - mhm
3. 00:38:528 - add note for the double? is similar as 00:41:256 - imo o ok
4. 00:55:744 (55744|0) - move column 1. the sound no is similar for the jack 00:55:574 (55574|0,55744|0) - combine better for piano and is more comfortable for this diff okie

[Normal]

1. 00:15:687 (15687|0,16028|2,16369|3) - consider change in other column.. is almost repetitive as 00:12:960 (12960|0,13301|2,13642|3) - and 00:17:051 (17051|0,17392|1,17733|3) - changed a lot here
2. 00:23:187 (23187|1) - change column 0 for the balance.. (I feel that column 1 is working more than the other column imo) done
3. 00:26:597 (26597|1,26937|2,27278|3) - change other column? it's a bit strange to repeat as 00:27:960 (27960|0,28301|1,28642|2) - imo.. i like as this: done
   
   a

   
4. 00:42:960 (42960|1,43301|2,43642|1,43983|2) - control + h? mhm
5. 01:04:096 (64096|3,64437|2) - control + g? i feels better by song imo no harm
6. 00:59:324 (59324|2,60006|1) - control + h? i don't know that sound your follow but you must consider this note 00:57:278 (57278|2,57960|2,58642|2,59324|2) - i think that no is good idea follow 1/2 in same column fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:13:642 (13642|1) - move column 0? the tone difference is not that big.
2. 00:18:074 (18074|0,18756|1) - control + g? for balance the tones is going up so it should stay that way.
3. 00:50:801 - add note here.. feels empty I know but there's no significant sound to map here other than vocal.
4. 00:52:506 (52506|1) - delete? no sound import to this diff imo alright
5. 00:56:937 - to 01:00:687 - is repetitive makes the player feel strange.. consider change other pattern done
6. 01:08:187 - ^ same above yup

Pizza wrote:

Hello! M4M with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/458969

1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Easy

00:29:324 (29324|1) - delete? i think this notes is unnecessary ok
00:30:687 (30687|1) - ^ ok
00:50:801 - add one notes on 3 for back piano sound ok
01:26:256 (86256|3) - this ln is end here 01:28:812 It is Easy difficulty so it is better if it ends perfectly on a white line + I'm mapping till the end of sound and there is stil lsome sound after 1:28.

Normal

00:50:801 - missing notes? see 00:39:892 (39892|0) - ok
00:31:369 (31369|3) - grace piano sounds here It's normal difficulty so I let that slide
01:26:256 (86256|3) - this ln is end here 01:28:812 same reasoning as before but exclude the Easy difficulty part

Hard

00:20:460 (20460|0,21483|1) - these two notes are the same pitch ok
00:24:892 - try this https://puu.sh/tLYmU/a26c4bc34c.png ok
00:50:801 - missing notes? this part is like this part 00:39:892 (39892|1) - ok
01:26:256 (86256|3) - this ln is end here 01:28:812 same reasoning

I think there are no major mistake/error on this map since the song and pattern was pretty simple.

Nice map!

ArcherLove wrote:

hai ravo
col=1~4

easy

00:07:165 (7165|2) - move to 4? okie
00:33:756 (33756|0) - move to2? okie
00:35:119 (35119|0) - move to 4? okie
00:37:847 (37847|0) - move to2? okie
00:54:892 (54892|2) - move to 2? okie
00:59:324 (59324|1,59665|2,59665|0,60006|1,60346|3) - http://puu.sh/u6UBl/afe0398376.jpg? okie
01:03:415 (63415|2,63756|3,63756|1,64096|2) - http://puu.sh/u6UDE/b0e0fda8d0.jpg? okie
01:09:892 (69892|0) - move to 3? okie
01:11:596 (71596|1,71937|0,71937|2) - http://puu.sh/u6UFg/55dbaf1dd0.png? okie and made another change

normal

00:04:267 (4267|1,4437|0) - ctrl+left arrow? 1x but i dont like the jack so no :c
00:07:847 (7847|0,8528|3) - ctrl+j? okie
00:09:892 (9892|2,9892|0) - move to 3-4? (LN at 4) moved to 4
00:53:869 (53869|0) - move to2? okie

hard

00:18:756 (18756|2,19437|3) - ctrl+j? okie
01:01:369 (61369|0,61710|1,61710|2) - swap collumn? idk what you mean by swap column but I tried


gl rav :p

Virtue- wrote:

Hi RAVE-KUN 'w')/ m4m with make magic

General

- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
- Files : OK!

1|2|3|4

[Easy]

1. 00:07:165 (7165|3) - make it into LN why not yea
2. 00:30:347 (30347|0) - ^ why not yea
3. 01:05:119 (65119|2) - move to 1 why not yea

[Hard]

1. 00:02:733 (2733|1) - move to 4 why not yea
2. 00:31:369 (31369|2,31426|3) - so it's should be 1/16, so delete this 00:31:426 (31426|3) - and change move into 00:31:327 - nice
3. 00:56:596 (56596|3) - double? (following this 00:57:619 (57619|0,57619|3) - )
4. 00:57:960 (57960|2) - ^
5. 00:59:324 (59324|1) - ^
6. 01:02:051 (62051|2) - ^
7. 01:03:415 (63415|0) - ^ and so on =w= alright sure

that's all >w<)b

deetsiu wrote:

Hello!

1,2,3,4

Normal

00:17:392 (17392|1) - Move to 00:17:222 (17222|1) I'm following piano, not vocals.
00:18:074 (18074|2) - Move to 4 Don't want an unnecessary jack
00:18:074 (18074|2) - Add?

Hard

00:17:392 (17392|3) - Move to 00:17:222 (17222|3) again, not following vocals.

This is all, cuz this mappset is ideal for me!

Remember!
It's only my suggestion, soo if you don't like my mod, just don't use it in your map!

Litharrale wrote:

quick NM
1|2|3|4

soft-hitnormal.wav and soft-hitwhistle.wav are identical sounds. Any reason for this? fuk overriding hitsounds lul changed

I'd strongly suggest not using the default hitsounds for the beginning part. It might sound fine with your skin pack but with mine for example, it doesn't sound right and doesn't fit in at all. This can also be fixed by lowering the sound further. lowered to 10 for all

hard

00:11:256 (11256|1) - Apply a finish hitsound. Perhaps drum-hitfinish.wav at about 10% uhm, this portion is just piano + vocals, so I do not apply drum at all here
00:25:233 (25233|3,25233|1,25574|0,25574|2) - ctrl-h for pitch. Change notes around to fit alright
00:34:437 (34437|1) - add a note for rhythm this sound is more of a rim or click hit, deserves only 1 note
00:43:642 (43642|1,43642|2) - move to 34 for drum pitch rite
00:33:074 (33074|3) - Hitsound with drum-hitfinish.wav at 15% 50% will do :^)
00:43:983 (43983|3) - ^ no, theres a finish on 3, you cannot use more than 2 of the same hitsound on the same line
00:56:596 (56596|0,57619|0,57960|2,58983|0) - Apply whistles to all of these and every example of this throughout kiai alright
01:04:778 (64778|0,64778|2) - This shouldn't be a double okie
01:12:108 (72108|2) - Strong sound here that i'd strongly suggest mapping strong sound? that's more of like a voice that surges in than a strong sound aka drum sounds. can't map much here im an idiot. added
01:27:676 (87676|2) - This isn't mapped to anything (the piano sound is earlier) moved it to 1/16 snap

Eternalie wrote:

hi, random , felt like it etc (don't expect too much ahue , and you can ignore kudos if you want, tho i'd like to make my total kudos count round that would be nice .....*sigh* )

here goes nothing

[Hard]
00:02:392 (2392|1,2733|3) - couldn't thoose two be a trill , the same pitch is repeating, and it would feel quite nice I think ye

00:13:983 (13983|2,13983|3,14324|0,14324|1,14665|2,14665|1) - here you use the bass and melody of the piano to make doubles but then
00:23:528 (23528|0) - here you aren't using doubles, but the bass is very certainly changing so according to other scheme it should be doubles ye edited
00:24:892 (24892|3) - same here, you should have one more note , according to the first pattern point out , it's litteraly the same type of sounds ye
00:28:301 (28301|0,29665|1) - same for thoose two, eventho they are more quiet so it's okay I guess ye
00:33:756 (33756|0,35119|0) - maybe thoose in 2 would make a bigger impact, as they aren't really the same sound as the chord before that dont really understand, if you want me to make those doubles, I'd say no cause its a clicking sound. I did change the position]
00:36:483 (36483|0,37847|0) - ^ same
00:48:074 (48074|3) - I think a normal whistle or a drum finish would blend better with the song nah, finish sounds weird. plus, its a triangle sound here
01:00:176 (60176|3,60176|2,60261|0,60261|1,60346|2,60346|3) - not too sure about this, maybe simples would do ye
01:11:085 (71085|2,71085|1,71256|3,71256|0) - this one works because there is not 1/4 rythm mixed with the 1/2 , so the one above is probably abit confusing for a hard
01:19:267 (79267|0,79352|1,79437|2,79437|3) - heyyyy and here you did it, : 3
01:22:165 (82165|1) - could add one here maybe ye
01:27:619 (87619|0,87619|1) - not too sure why this is a double, it's not really a big deal , but there isn't really a bigger drum sound here so, unless you mapped the piano aswell as a separated note :thinking: ye

anyway, that is, Good Luck

LordTimeWaste wrote:

From my modding queue

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

Hard

00:14:665 (14665|2,14665|1) I'd suggest breaking the doubles on these sounds a bit, like, taking one of the 2 notes and placing it 1/16th earlier it isn't earlier, it's later, fixed
00:32:562 (32562|0) Ghostnote good catch
00:34:778 I'd add one note here super hard to hear anything, and I'm not following the vocals for this part
00:55:574 I'd add one note here to emphasize it a bit more gotcha
01:00:006 I would suggest changing the following pattern into this because 1: You do not get a broken stream and 2: Jacking with your index fingers is more comfortable ritey

01:05:801 (65801|1) Would delete this okie
01:08:358 (68358|0,68528|1,68528|2) Add a note in between and move 01:08:528 (68528|1) to 0 mhm
01:20:460 (80460|0,80631|3) Would put them together to a jack since it is the same sound

Nice map so far, please rank!!!

Nevertary wrote:

hi, i'm from ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) queue

your request

hai dereeee NM

Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/552521
Name: Sawai Miku - Konna Sekai, Shiritakunakatta. (Anime Ver.)
Diffs: 4K EZ, NM, HD
Length: 1:27

thanks in advanced owo

NM fast mod

Heartless

00:18:415 - add 1 note here see reason in Normal
00:32:562 - ^ justified from LordTimeWaste, super subtle sound not worth mapping
00:49:437 - add on column 4 it isn't the super big climax yet so a 3 note hit shouldn't be necessary
00:55:403 - add on col 1 that shouldn't be necessary too
01:00:517 - add 1 a bit overmapping, the notes represent that the drums are of a higher pitch
01:01:028 - add on col 2 alright
01:04:778 - add 1 for bassdrum sound too subtle and it feels awkward if I do the same 2 2 2 note pattern here compared to the others
01:07:846 - add 1 note
00:56:937 - ^
00:58:301 - ^
00:59:665 - ^
01:02:392 - ^
01:03:756 - ^
01:05:119 - ^
01:04:778 - ^
01:09:210 - ^
01:10:574 - ^
01:11:426 - ^
01:11:937 - ^
01:13:301 - ^
01:14:665 - ^
01:18:756 - ^
01:19:608 - ^
01:19:778 - ^
01:21:483 - ^
01:24:210 - ^
01:25:574 - ^ i see what you are aiming for, added and edited some

Normal

00:18:415 - add 1note that's vocal mapping but i want to map piano here first
00:21:483 (21483|1) - u can change this into LN this sound isn't held down. it's the echo from the piano note
01:12:278 (72278|2) - i not hear a special sound that can make into LN :'/ there's a slow build up by the voice that grows stronger
01:13:983 (73983|0) - ^ the loud voice supports this (ik I did say I didn't want vocal mapping but this is a different section, so I can map different instruments and sounds)
01:14:665 (74665|2) - change into LN then 01:15:006 - add 1 here ill just change the LN only

Easy

00:05:801 (5801|0) - change into LN to 00:06:824 - ok
01:00:346 - add 1 mhm
01:01:710 - ^ mhm
01:09:892 - ^ doesn't feel too strong
01:10:915 (70915|3) - move to col 2 mhm
01:15:346 - add 1 mhm
01:16:710 - ^ alright
01:19:437 - ^ again, not strong

good luck ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) b

Adot wrote:

NM req
lets jump to pattern. Might give a bit mod.

click

• 
  
  [Easy]

1. 01:01:369 (61369|0) - what did you follow? if you didn't follow anything just remove it There is a subtle hi-hat sound that can be mapped (which I did in Normal and Heartless) but if the BNs think the same as you then I will remove it eventually
   
   [Normal]
2. 00:50:801 (50801|3) - the impact here is actually low.. suggest to remove it alright

well.. it is ready for rank. don't kudos if u don't apply.
thanks

-Sh1n1- wrote:

More love to Miku Sawai <3

Mentholzzz wrote:

Random short mod

00:27:960 (27960|3) - ghost note? (if u map piano only there.) there is a shallow bass note that can be followed in piano
01:03:415 - This should be double same as 01:02:051 - and 00:59:324 -fixed

It is a suggestion but shouldn't 01:22:804 (82804|0,82846|2,82889|3) - be keysounded too ?
01:27:619 (87619|0,87662|2) - here too as well talked to dudehacker and he said he cant find the notes in the midi sheet so

1. 00:18:415 - kinda awkward to start the pause here. add a note (Additionaly add F4s_s@59% and delete the F4s_s from the SB sample (Hit tab in the editor))
   
2. 00:29:324 - same case
   
3. 01:25:915 (85915|1) - delete this one? no instrument tho

1. 00:18:415 - same as Easy.
   
2. 01:25:915 (85915|1) - same. you can delete this since there's no instrument

1. 00:15:687 (15687|1,16028|1) - judging from the piano HS itself isnt same so i dont think this should be stacked xd
   
2. 00:18:415 - same as Easy.
   
3. 00:38:528 (38528|1) - you could delete this. its quite too much for such a low kick
   
4. 00:40:574 (40574|1,40915|1) - move to 1? its a different noise from - 00:39:892 (39892|1) -
   
5. 01:03:756 (63756|2,64096|3) - 4|3 respectively to avoid light anchor - 01:03:074 (63074|2,63415|2,63756|2) -
   
6. 01:08:443 (68443|1) - this sounds like a ghost to me
   
7. 01:11:085 - how about this https://puu.sh/vsyDZ/fcac3f737b.jpg
   looks more fit with the drum (the col 1|4 doubles represent the loud snare correctly too)
   
8. 01:20:631 (80631|2) - col 4? idk why is this stacked tho since it doesnt contain the same instruments as the note before
   
9. 01:21:824 (81824|1) - move to 1 probably. avoid - 01:21:483 (81483|1,81824|1,82165|1) -
   
10. 01:25:915 (85915|2) - delete again?

Rivals_7 wrote:

1|2|3|4

metadata already confirmed rite? yesu desu

[Easy]

1. 00:18:415 - kinda awkward to start the pause here. add a note (Additionaly add F4s_s@59% and delete the F4s_s from the SB sample (Hit tab in the editor))
   
2. 00:29:324 - same case
   
3. 01:25:915 (85915|1) - delete this one? no instrument tho

All applied for Easy

[Normal]

1. 00:18:415 - same as Easy.
   
2. 01:25:915 (85915|1) - same. you can delete this since there's no instrument

All applied for Normal too

[Heartless]

1. 00:15:687 (15687|1,16028|1) - judging from the piano HS itself isnt same so i dont think this should be stacked xd moved to 3 then
   
2. 00:18:415 - same as Easy. mhm
   
3. 00:38:528 (38528|1) - you could delete this. its quite too much for such a low kick ok
   
4. 00:40:574 (40574|1,40915|1) - move to 1? its a different noise from - 00:39:892 (39892|1) - yea true, moved
   
5. 01:03:756 (63756|2,64096|3) - 4|3 respectively to avoid light anchor - 01:03:074 (63074|2,63415|2,63756|2) - sure
   
6. 01:08:443 (68443|1) - this sounds like a ghost to me oooooooo yea
   
7. 01:11:085 - how about this https://puu.sh/vsyDZ/fcac3f737b.jpg
   looks more fit with the drum (the col 1|4 doubles represent the loud snare correctly too) alrighty owo
   
8. 01:20:631 (80631|2) - col 4? idk why is this stacked tho since it doesnt contain the same instruments as the note before alright owo
   
9. 01:21:824 (81824|1) - move to 1 probably. avoid - 01:21:483 (81483|1,81824|1,82165|1) - okie
   
10. 01:25:915 (85915|2) - delete again? yea okie

cool keysound owo

Rivals_7 wrote:

oki doki

Maxus wrote:

Hi Rave, for M4M

[General]

1. Please recheck all of your keysound files in case if there's unused one. Personally don't seem to find things wrong, but i really suggest you to recheck twice. alright
2. Have you confirmed your metadata directly? (I'm not entirely sure if you only look from ranked mapset tbh.) I copied tags from ranked ver,
   will add dudehacker into tags, and Miku Sawai confirmed from BN above.
3. Just friendly reminder, please really look the HS while applying my mod, so there isn't any mistake with the keysound/hitsound. alright

[Easy]

1. 00:28:301 - Kinda broke the structure imo, if you want to have pattern differentiation, i suggest to have http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8024519 instead. agreed
2. 00:33:074 (33074|0,33756|1) - Suggest switch column here for the balance here. okie
3. 00:39:892 (39892|3,40574|0) - Better in col 2 and col 4 here, i don't really understand the reason to trill at 00:38:528 (38528|3,39210|0,39892|3,40574|0) - , seem kinda random. mhm
4. 01:00:006 - a bit inbalance here, you can polish it with http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8024559 better yea
5. 01:02:392 - Personally your pattern have too much 3-4 double here, it's inbalanced in terms of note amount of patterning, so you might as well use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8024588 yea
6. 01:07:165 (67165|3,67846|3,68528|3,69210|3) - the note stack is too long here, solve it by moving 01:08:528 (68528|3) - to col 3. sure
7. 01:10:574 (70574|2,70915|1,71256|2) - 2-3-2 is much much better here, will mirror 01:11:937 - which is more solid in terms of patterning. niceeee
8. 01:12:619 - this also really right hand biased, you might as well try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8024620 mhm
9. 01:16:710 (76710|2,77051|1) - Switch column here for balance as well. yes

[Normal]

1. 00:18:756 (18756|1) - I do think you can move this to col 3 to mirroring the note trill at 00:16:369 (16369|0,16710|1,17051|0,17392|1) - , it would ultimately makes it more structured. okie
2. 00:23:187 - You can try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8024074 to also mirror 00:26:937 (26937|3,27278|2,27619|0,27619|1) - and it overall gives more balance and flow in the pattern as well. mhm
3. 00:31:369 (31369|3) - move to col 3 here for balance too, not sure why have to be in col.4 thinking 4 can make it so that the player feels the note is super high but sure thing
4. 00:35:801 - I don't think having LN that last in right hand for too long is a good thing like 00:33:074 (33074|3,35801|2,38528|3,39892|2) - , Try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8024106 , it will be much better constructed in terms of playability and pattern spreading. ok
5. 00:52:165 - The very same that I mention in Heartless diff, try to fix according to the example I gave you. I tried to fix, should be ok
6. 00:53:869 - Same again as above, please fix too, make sure the patterns are made well-balanced / structured properly. mhm
7. 00:58:642 (58642|1,58983|0) - Will be better if you switch column of these notes, it's really awkward you make the double at 00:58:983 - being at same column with 00:59:665 - albeit two of those have really different emphasis and isntrument. okie
8. 01:01:710 (61710|0,62051|2,62392|0) - Honestly here, 3-1-3 fits much better. alright
9. 01:06:483 - Felt really biased combined with previous pattern, personally i would say this will balance it better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8024281 seemsgood
10. 01:10:574 (70574|0,70915|2) - Switch column between these 2 notes to avoid unneeded one hand trill at 01:10:915 (70915|2,71085|3,71256|2,71426|3) - mhm
11. 01:12:619 (72619|1) - Change this into LN, this is a vocal LN you followed at 01:13:983 (73983|0) - okie
12. 01:17:562 (77562|2,77733|1) - Also switch column to make this pattern smoother to play i guess. mhm
13. 01:19:267 - I feel you need to add note here, the drum quite obvious. idk but i trust u, it's pretty soft though
14. 01:22:804 (82804|0,82889|2) - Sooo, I ever saw the other slow bpm map that also uses 1/16 snap on normal diff: t/501580/start=45 , and it got Disqualified because of that, so, i really recommend you to delete the 1/16 notes here. idk what to do here so I just made it a double
15. 01:27:676 (87676|2) - Delete this too for same reason as above. same

[Heartless]

1. 00:01:710 - The way of this patterning makes it seem like a bit random albeit this supposed to follow piano, the more accurate and comfortable one is something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8023767 okie
2. 00:12:960 (12960|2,13301|3) - Switch column here fits much better. yup
3. 00:17:733 - A bit subjective, but this pattern looked a bit out of place because it kinda isolate itself, and it repeatedly using 1-3 double pattern, perhaps you can have different double for variation and flow patterning like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8023831 true
4. 00:25:574 (25574|1) - This should be at column 1 making jack to be consistent with 00:26:597 (26597|3,26937|3) - oh ok
5. 00:35:460 (35460|1) - I really suggest make this into col 3 to form the jack with the LN here, it fits and suit the drum kick instrument, and provide consistency with 00:40:915 (40915|1,41256|1) - mhm
6. 00:46:369 - Add one more note here in col 1, otherwise you aren't consistent with 00:35:460 - and 00:40:915 - alright
7. 00:52:165 - Personally this LN cramping the 1/4 pattern lingering here, I really curious whether you really find this LN necessary? focusing in 1/4 only makes the pattern more spreaded properly and having proper emphasis on the more audible instrument too, something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8023903 will work really well for the instrument and patterning. mhm
8. 00:53:869 - This also too, you can stop the LN at the start where the chain of 1/4 occured to provide more pattern leniency like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8023919 yup
9. 01:00:346 (60346|1,60517|1,60858|1,61028|1) - Not sure why you would stack it like this, really recommend move 01:00:858 (60858|1) - to col.4 idk too ;w; changed
10. 01:03:074 (63074|1,63415|3) - Switch column between these 2 notes, this will balancing the left biased pattern you have before. mhm
11. 01:04:437 - A bit weird this pattern is repeating although that this doesn't have any strong drum cue that warrants such pattern, I advise try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8023952 ok done
12. 01:09:892 (69892|1,70233|3) - Also switch column between the 2 notes here, to balancing the note at left column. okie
13. 01:11:085 - When you make a lot of jack like here, having odd double usually makes the diff increase quite big here, So it's highly advice to use such jack double that the pattern mainly consist of 12-34 , like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8023992 here. (btw, the reason i also add the LN at 01:12:619 - , is for consistent LN you use at 01:13:983 - ). yea i saw, applied
14. 01:15:346 (75346|3) - This is supposed to be LN too, the electro guitar already started here. (Don't forget about the hitsound as well) yup added
15. 01:15:261 (75261|1) - I know what you try to follow here, but truthfully this is really out of place and awkward to have such really small LN appear suddenly, you can basically add 1/2 LN at 01:15:006 - instead following the rising synth guitar sound. sounds good
16. 01:17:733 - making this at the same column with 01:17:392 - is much better because they are the very same instrument that can be emphasize with the same double in the same column. something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8024021 will work. alright
17. 01:23:528 - Should be triple for a really loud finish sound. alright

Call me back if you're done, don't forget to always recheck :3

Maxus wrote:

The 1/16 in normal shouldn't be used.. already told you that it's already be dq reason in the past, so you should delete the 1/16 that I mention you in the mod.

In hard diff its alright though, feel free to keep in hard diff.
I can probably qualify tommorow, today already qualify a map