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SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - e of s (game edit)

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Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mao
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 8. Januar 2017 at 23:37:28

Artist: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
Title: e of s (game edit)
Source: ソウルリバース ゼロ
Tags: SOUL REVERSE ZERO sega Aimer rpg Yuii- Desperate-kun
BPM: 80
Filesize: 26391kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Desperate's Hard (2,75 stars, 191 notes)
  2. Easy (1,63 stars, 98 notes)
  3. Insane (3,51 stars, 223 notes)
  4. Yuii-'s Normal (1,99 stars, 139 notes)
Download: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - e of s (game edit)
Download: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - e of s (game edit) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranked mapset #19 o/

Easy - by me
Normal - by Yuii-
Hard - by Desperate-kun
Insane - by me

The Insane was mapped as part of a 2:30h speedmapping competition for the Mentorship Program. Actually it was only for mentees so my entry didn't get accepted but I like it :(
Last edited by Mao , edited 11 times in total.
wajinshu
1,579 posts
Joined April 2015
wajinshu
[Desperate's Hard]
00:32:741 (3) - Maybe put whistle on the sliderhead?
00:33:491 (4) - I think its better to start this slider here without extending
[Insane]
00:21:116 - 00:24:304 - 00:27:304 - Rhythms on these places are pretty much same. At last 2 places you use circles + 3/4 sliders which better emphasizes the sound of the piano. Although I understand that the vocals are strong there but I'd like to see you using the same rhytm through all these 3 places
00:20:929 - try to use this rhytm here
pic
00:32:741 - I think its better to map this part since the music is the same 00:38:554 (4)
00:57:866 (5,6) - What's the purpose of having a repeat slider here? I would prefer to have a circle there + 1/2 slider. Skipping a strong beat is not a good idea
01:22:054 (3) - Move it on X:75 Y:49 for the perfect blanket xd

Mapset looks good :)
Good luck!
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo
Hihi

nice song


  • [general]
  1. right now Desperate's has OD7 and HP 6 while insane has OD5 and HP5 :S I guess you have to balance that a bit

    [insane]
  2. 00:12:304 - I think you're missing an important sound here. maybe try to make it a nota + 1/4? Would fit better for the next part also
  3. 00:21:116 (1) - similar as before ^ I guess 00:21:304 - is worth to be clickable because of the emphasis D: (for example 00:24:304 (1) - here plays better like this imo)
  4. 00:33:116 (2) - I get that you're following vocals here, but missing 00:33:304 - doesn't feel good imo, maybe if you make 00:33:116 (2) - this a 1/4 slider would cover both things
  5. 00:57:304 (3,4,5,6) - a bit nazi but maybe make the blanket have similar spacing? Just to look good as structure i guess
  6. 01:29:741 (4,1) - For such a calm part, I think that you could reduce the distance or at leaste ctrl+g 01:29:929 (1) - it

    [desperate's]
  7. 00:26:929 (7) - This slider seems to be skipping some good material for the music imo, which is the drum that is behind. I see you want to follow vocals 00:27:491 (1) - with this, but still trying to make 00:26:929 (7) - this a 1/4 + circle would fit quite good~
  8. 00:32:741 (3,1,2) - I don't really like the rhythm you're trying to use here because of 2 reasons: From the previous sliders you're kinda following vocals but then you start a 1/4 00:32:741 - which feels a bit off imo, mainly because making 00:32:929 - clickable would emphasize better i believe. Second is that 00:33:491 - here you're ending with a tail which doesn't follow vocals properly imo. Well it's just a suggestion but since it's a calm part I suggest you to follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/sSTA3/265f1489ec.png Give it a try!

    [yuii's]
  9. 00:31:429 (2,3) - bit nazi but you can improve this blanket a bit
  10. 00:53:554 (6) - I think it would be nice if you cover 00:54:116 - this drum sound too. Moving this 00:53:554 (6) - this so it starts 00:53:741 - and then making 00:53:366 (5) - this a 1/4 would be enough i think
  11. 01:06:679 (1,2) - same as before for blanket

    just me being a bit picky with blanket because there's no much to fix on this diff imo xd

Okay that's all from me. Hope it can help :D GL!
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mao
wajinshu

wajinshu wrote:

[Insane]
00:32:741 - I think its better to map this part since the music is the same 00:38:554 (4) This whole part is following vocals to keep the calm feeling of the song.
00:57:866 (5,6) - What's the purpose of having a repeat slider here? I would prefer to have a circle there + 1/2 slider. Skipping a strong beat is not a good idea
The purpose of this repeat is to have the feeling of a longer slider because of the vocal hold but also to cover the snare but as this is not the rhythm's main focus here, it does not need the strong clickable feedback.

iYiyo

iYiyo wrote:

[insane]
[*]00:12:304 - I think you're missing an important sound here. maybe try to make it a nota + 1/4? Would fit better for the next part also I have fixed the following one because the song becomes more intense and because of consistency but in these calm parts I always followed the vocals as they stand out the most here in my opinion.
[*]00:33:116 (2) - I get that you're following vocals here, but missing 00:33:304 - doesn't feel good imo, maybe if you make 00:33:116 (2) - this a 1/4 slider would cover both things I don't really get the issue here, this section is so calm and my concept was to follow vocals mainly in these calm sections as mentioned before (and as you have already seen). Adding more notes that are not on vocals would destroy that calm feeling right before the song intensifies into the chorus.

Thanks for the mods :3 Insane's difficulty settings are my bad, it's not intentional like this. Anyways, everything not mentioned here has been applied!
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
hello my dear, as requested on Discord.

Normal
  1. 00:19:241 (3) - I'd curve this slider just a little more and make a better blanket as well here.
  2. 00:19:804 (4,5) - The blanket is not really great with the curve of the slider (4) and the reverse of the slider (5)
  3. 01:06:679 (1,2) - Make a better blanket with the curve of the slider (2) with the end of the slider (1)
Hard
  1. 01:20:554 (7) - As for the hitsound of this circle, I would suggest you to delete the whistle and the finish and also put the addition to Auto. I feel it sounds better that way and it's going to be consistent with 01:19:054 (3) -
Insane
  1. 00:46:616 (3) - Just a minor thing. Maybe you could move this circle so it would have a consistent spacing x:400 y:20
  2. 00:54:491 (2,3) - I guess you can do a better blanket here!
  3. 01:29:554 (3) - If we look previously, you've made some effects with your new combos that were emphasizing the vocals. At this point, you're not following it. So, I would suggest you to add a new combo and delete the combo on 01:29:929 (1) -
Really great mapset! Keep up!
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mao
Applied everything in Insane, thanks! :D
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
[General]
  1. Mind linking metadata source?
  2. Would be nice if you guys make last slider consistent. I like shorten version btw.
  3. I know that rhythm in the song is not really simple to execute in lower difficulties but I still can see some possibilities to make easier difficulty. Wonder for some more reliable opinions on this, will see.
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:179 - You can add circle here, would be nice as progression increase to this part 00:17:179 (4) also noticeable beat in the music.
  2. 00:22:804 (4,5) - Maybe ctrl+g them, you will have both strong lyric beats clickable in this case as long as following vocals part, pmuch complements 00:22:054 (3) - this slider.
  3. 01:06:304 (1,2) - Consider to increase spacing here, it's will be better for momentum for the 1/2 gap because of prev. huge spaced 01:05:179 (2,3,4,5,1) - pattern.
  4. 01:28:804 (1) - Consider to convert this into 2 circles because of strong drum part.
[Desperate's Hard]
  1. 00:11:741 (6,7) - Try triplet instead here, imo it plays better because of lyrics stanza on 00:12:116 (7)
  2. 00:26:929 (7) - Supposed to follow "long" lyric but I think 00:27:304 - deserves to be represented as clickable object because of new music stanza.
  3. 00:52:616 (4,5,6) - Consider to tighten up them. 00:52:804 (5,6) - spacing is almost as same as you use for 1/2 yet there is nothing 00:52:991 (6) - that deserves to be such stressed.
[Yuii-'s Normal]
  1. 00:06:866- Why don't start here, seems quite logical spot. You make accent on lyrics anyway.
  2. 00:11:179 (4) - Consider to replace with 1/4 slider to stress strong 00:11:366 - beat here. Also it will make rhythm transfer more easier because of similarities with 00:07:804 (3,4)
  3. 00:19:241 (3,4,5) - Can get the main line you follow here. Dominant lyrics stanzas 00:19:241 - 00:19:616 (3) - 00:20:179 That's a bit hard to follow in normal so maybe you can try - https://puu.sh/t3TTs/d125b86707.png
  4. 00:32:179 (3) - Consider to end on 00:32:741 - a bit more appropriate to the music rhythm.
  5. 00:47:366 (5) - I bet there is should be circle here 00:48:116 - if you line to represent lyrics with this slider, otherwise it would be better to make some kind of hybrid follow here https://puu.sh/t3Uf1/eccf3ceee1.png
  6. 00:59:741 (6) - finish on repeat here is absolutely distracting, stealing all the emphasis you put into following lyrics here, consider to remove.
nice nice
Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-

iYiyo wrote:

[yuii's]
  1. 00:31:429 (2,3) - bit nazi but you can improve this blanket a bit - pixeled
  2. 00:53:554 (6) - I think it would be nice if you cover 00:54:116 - this drum sound too. Moving this 00:53:554 (6) - this so it starts 00:53:741 - and then making 00:53:366 (5) - this a 1/4 would be enough i think - vocals + break is nice for low difficulties :(
  3. 01:06:679 (1,2) - same as before for blanket - yes

    just me being a bit picky with blanket because there's no much to fix on this diff imo xd
Okay that's all from me. Hope it can help :D GL!

Gabe wrote:

Normal
  1. 00:19:241 (3) - I'd curve this slider just a little more and make a better blanket as well here. - my blankets are terrible when it comes to tails
  2. 00:19:804 (4,5) - The blanket is not really great with the curve of the slider (4) and the reverse of the slider (5) - ja
  3. 01:06:679 (1,2) - Make a better blanket with the curve of the slider (2) with the end of the slider (1) - sí

Sieg wrote:

- Trust me if I say this difficulty is already easy enough.

[Yuii-'s Normal]
  1. 00:06:866- Why don't start here, seems quite logical spot. You make accent on lyrics anyway. - sliders are more lenient when it comes to lower difficulties, starting off with a slider on easy/normals is always a good idea because it helps newbies to avoid unnecessary 100s. aaaalso, i am leaving a 1/1 gap after the spinner if that makes any sense!!
  2. 00:11:179 (4) - Consider to replace with 1/4 slider to stress strong 00:11:366 - beat here. Also it will make rhythm transfer more easier because of similarities with 00:07:804 (3,4) - i disagree, it's barely audible in the bgm and it'd just add a more dense pattern when it shouldn't be like that
  3. 00:19:241 (3,4,5) - Can get the main line you follow here. Dominant lyrics stanzas 00:19:241 - 00:19:616 (3) - 00:20:179 That's a bit hard to follow in normal so maybe you can try - https://puu.sh/t3TTs/d125b86707.png - it's not hard to follow at all, it's a bunch of 1/2 patterns.. but i will change it anyway because your suggestion is less dense and that seems better yaya.
  4. 00:32:179 (3) - Consider to end on 00:32:741 - a bit more appropriate to the music rhythm. - why do you think that? cause of the beat? it doesn't seem so appropriate when i'm finishing it on the guitar sound
  5. 00:47:366 (5) - I bet there is should be circle here 00:48:116 - if you line to represent lyrics with this slider, otherwise it would be better to make some kind of hybrid follow here https://puu.sh/t3Uf1/eccf3ceee1.png - right. i also adjusted this apttern cause it was bad
  6. 00:59:741 (6) - finish on repeat here is absolutely distracting, stealing all the emphasis you put into following lyrics here, consider to remove. - whistle'd!!
nice nice

@Mao: please fix full whistle on 00:12:116 (1) - !!

Thank you everyone for the mods, much appreciated. Great mods 8-)

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osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42096
Countdown: 0
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Title:e of s (game edit)
TitleUnicode:e of s (game edit)
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
Creator:Mao
Version:Yuii-'s Normal
Source:ソウルリバース ゼロ
Tags:SOUL REVERSE ZERO sega Aimer rpg Yuii- Desperate-kun
BeatmapID:1156338
BeatmapSetID:541856

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OverallDifficulty:4
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Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mao
Sieg

Sieg wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:14:179 - You can add circle here, would be nice as progression increase to this part 00:17:179 (4) also noticeable beat in the music. I kinda wanted this part to be very calm and almost vocal only so that 00:18:304 (1) - stands out more :/
  2. 00:22:804 (4,5) - Maybe ctrl+g them, you will have both strong lyric beats clickable in this case as long as following vocals part, pmuch complements 00:22:054 (3) - this slider. But that would ignore 00:23:366 - which is a really important vocal here imo. Moreover 00:22:804 (4) - represents the hold.
  3. 01:28:804 (1) - Consider to convert this into 2 circles because of strong drum part. I made this slider to both cover vocals and because 01:29:554 (1,2) - are much stronger drums so that I wanted these to stand out from everything else here.

I'm mapping an Easy now and will get some more mods on it. Also Metadata source:
http://www.sh-nzk.net/artist/sawanohiro ... nfo/475310
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo

wajinshu wrote:

[Desperate's Hard]
00:32:741 (3) - Maybe put whistle on the sliderhead? I am using whistle for vocals tho
00:33:491 (4) - I think its better to start this slider here without extending don't really know what you mean from the timestamp but i like the rhythm here, because it follows the vocal quite well imo

iYiyo wrote:

[desperate's]
[*]00:26:929 (7) - This slider seems to be skipping some good material for the music imo, which is the drum that is behind. I see you want to follow vocals 00:27:491 (1) - with this, but still trying to make 00:26:929 (7) - this a 1/4 + circle would fit quite good~ i really like this variation to emphasize the special vocals here.. i changed hitsounding to fit better with the rhythm here, but that's all i'll do
[*]00:32:741 (3,1,2) - I don't really like the rhythm you're trying to use here because of 2 reasons: From the previous sliders you're kinda following vocals but then you start a 1/4 00:32:741 - which feels a bit off imo, mainly because making 00:32:929 - clickable would emphasize better i believe. Second is that 00:33:491 - here you're ending with a tail which doesn't follow vocals properly imo. Well it's just a suggestion but since it's a calm part I suggest you to follow this rhythm http://puu.sh/sSTA3/265f1489ec.png Give it a try! i tried it with a circle instead of the 1/4 but it felt unintuitive so i decided to do it this way, i think it flows pretty well with the song. for the second one i think it fits well to the vocals because there is another, imo stronger emphasis where i start my 2nd slider
@Gabe Fixed.

Sieg wrote:

[Desperate's Hard]
  1. 00:11:741 (6,7) - Try triplet instead here, imo it plays better because of lyrics stanza on 00:12:116 (7) I considered this but it makes the rhythm a bit unintuitive imo because the 'doubles' loose the effect, so I'd like to keep it.
  2. 00:26:929 (7) - Supposed to follow "long" lyric but I think 00:27:304 - deserves to be represented as clickable object because of new music stanza. I really like this variation, I tried to make the hitsounding more fitting to the rhythm so it feels better but I don't think I want to change the actual rhythm here :<
  3. 00:52:616 (4,5,6) - Consider to tighten up them. 00:52:804 (5,6) - spacing is almost as same as you use for 1/2 yet there is nothing 00:52:991 (6) - that deserves to be such stressed. The jump feels fine to emphasize the drum here, also I used similarly big jumps throughout the rest of the kiai o.o
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Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mao
Thank you :D
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Del05
Hi
As Mao request
sorry for short mod
nice map

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:866 - 00:04:616 - 00:05:366 - unused green line ?

[Yuii-'s Normal]
  1. 00:31:429 (2,3) - improve blanket, not blanket well
  2. 00:37:429 (2,3) - ^^
  3. 00:55:616 (3,5) - it seem so close compare to the other object

[Desperate's Hard]
  1. 00:34:054 - 00:40:054 - i think better map this sound too since you map this sound at previous section
  2. 00:26:929 (7) - i would like to end this slider at 00:27:210 (1/8 snap) or 00:27:116 then add circle at 00:27:304 cause i think 00:27:304 should be clickable object since it is a new stanza and have finish sound
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mao
Removed them, thanks :3
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo

Del05 wrote:

[Desperate's Hard]
  1. 00:34:054 - 00:40:054 - i think better map this sound too since you map this sound at previous section Nope because I'm following the vocals
  2. 00:26:929 (7) - i would like to end this slider at 00:27:210 (1/8 snap) or 00:27:116 then add circle at 00:27:304 cause i think 00:27:304 should be clickable object since it is a new stanza and have finish sound replaced the finish, i want to keep the rhythm though for emphasis
thx :3
Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
Did the third thingy, as for blankets, they look seriously bad if I move them. So instead, I just create a "blanket" with the slidertails to make it look pretty... I (almost) always do that and it looks better hehe

update
osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:e of s (game edit)
TitleUnicode:e of s (game edit)
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
Creator:Mao
Version:Yuii-'s Normal
Source:ソウルリバース ゼロ
Tags:SOUL REVERSE ZERO sega Aimer rpg Yuii- Desperate-kun
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Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mao
Updated!
Lasse
Beatmap Nominator
3,596 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse
general
did you try something like 244, 91, 122 instead of the orange for you combocolors? think it would go well with the bg (which really made me expect at least one red combo colors) and the others
http://i.imgur.com/IqPtoBa.jpg

insane
(hitsounding things might apply to lower diffs too)
think ar could be slightly lower, it just felt a bit too "fast" while playing to me, ~8.2-8.3
would probably also lower hp a bit as your combos get really long it can become quite hard to recover from mistakes
00:06:491 (2) - shouldnt this have drum finish like 00:09:491 (2) - ?
00:12:116 (1) - whistle on sliderbody intended here? I don't think it fits
00:31:429 (2) - minor visual thing, but I think sth like http://i.imgur.com/ef5ZDWI.jpg would look nicer and play nearly the same
00:38:554 (4,5,6,1) - would be nice to not have them grouped as 4 cause of the vocals on 00:38:929 (6,1) -
00:40:804 (3) - the audio is actually panning from right to left here, having the slider move in the same direction would be awesome, but also require lots of moving things around
01:00:304 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/UABFccX.jpg makes it look slightly broken lol
01:05:929 (1) - would work fine without the nc, the sv change is not that big and vocal/musical pattern still continues here. also sounds like the drum on the sliderend is on the 1/6 tick just before http://i.imgur.com/JD24GEP.jpg
01:25:804 (1,2,1,2) - compared to your other similar sliderpatterns before this felt quite unnatural to play so it stands out despite music being so similar (but it looks cute). did you try ctrlg on 01:25:804 (1) - and 01:26:554 (1) - ? think that's pretty nice to play with leniency actually http://i.imgur.com/ZbxhD2q.jpg (might want to reduce spacing a bit then though)

hard
00:11:929 (7,1) - would move the whistle from sliderend of 7 to head of. fits the rhythm you mapped better and works well with the piano (or to 7 head if you want it for vocals)
00:29:741 - could add a clap to follow the thing in the song
00:32:741 - don't think your current rhythm works very well with vocals or instruments cause piano + vocals on 00:32:929 - is so much stgronger than 00:33:116 - , having that clickable would be great
00:47:179 (6,7) - please no double finish :c
01:02:554 (7) - should have normal hitnormal like other snares in the chorus

normal
why are all your timing lines in the intro shifted back 1/4 lol
00:08:554 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - can you somehow have this a little less dense? seems a bit much compared to how you mapped the rest of the intro
00:28:804 (3,4) - why are you doing this to me http://i.imgur.com/pfvfqXt.jpg :c
00:40:804 (1) - I'd just delete this/replace with a slider cause not having the start of the chorus clickable kills so much emphasis
cute spacing/sv concept

easy
00:43:804 (3) - how about ctrlj on this? since movement into sliders matters a bit more than out of them. or maybe just http://i.imgur.com/M43WQQP.jpg
do you really need these 1/4 sliders, they still seem kinda acceptable, but could probably do well without them

poke me whenever
Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-

Lasse wrote:

normal
why are all your timing lines in the intro shifted back 1/4 lol - cause that's how people's supposed to do it but nobody does it because idk they are bade ehhehehe
00:08:554 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - can you somehow have this a little less dense? seems a bit much compared to how you mapped the rest of the intro - made it uglier
00:28:804 (3,4) - why are you doing this to me http://i.imgur.com/pfvfqXt.jpg :c - http://puu.sh/h5RCC/529e268ba6.png
00:40:804 (1) - I'd just delete this/replace with a slider cause not having the start of the chorus clickable kills so much emphasis
cute spacing/sv concept - idk about this tbh i really really like that spinner because it adds a bit more of emphasis to that weird sound in the background, i would rather leave it. i added more lines btw to it so it makes more sense to have it!!!
thank you for the very detailed mod as always, lasse wowow!! appreciated~

it's uglier
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 42096
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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TitleUnicode:e of s (game edit)
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
ArtistUnicode:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
Creator:Mao
Version:Yuii-'s Normal
Source:ソウルリバース ゼロ
Tags:SOUL REVERSE ZERO sega Aimer rpg Yuii- Desperate-kun
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Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Mao
Lasse

Lasse wrote:

insane
00:06:491 (2) - shouldnt this have drum finish like 00:09:491 (2) - ? The sound at 9s actually has a stronger drum.
00:40:804 (3) - the audio is actually panning from right to left here, having the slider move in the same direction would be awesome, but also require lots of moving things around Talked to you about that one already.
01:05:929 (1) - would work fine without the nc, the sv change is not that big and vocal/musical pattern still continues here. also sounds like the drum on the sliderend is on the 1/6 tick just before http://i.imgur.com/JD24GEP.jpg To me it actually sounds like 1/8 is closer o.o Also I'll keep the NC as I usually place them for SV changes and 1.5 -> 1.25 isn't that small.
01:25:804 (1,2,1,2) - compared to your other similar sliderpatterns before this felt quite unnatural to play so it stands out despite music being so similar (but it looks cute). did you try ctrlg on 01:25:804 (1) - and 01:26:554 (1) - ? think that's pretty nice to play with leniency actually http://i.imgur.com/ZbxhD2q.jpg (might want to reduce spacing a bit then though) I liked both a lot and asked some others and it's still really hard to decide but I think I like mine a bit better :/

Thanks a lot :3 I'll update when Desp fixed his stuff.
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
All fixed, nice mod!

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:e of s (game edit)
Artist:SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
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Creator:Mao
Version:Desperate's Hard
Source:ソウルリバース ゼロ
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139,259,55429,1,4,3:0:0:0:
139,259,55616,2,0,P|151:202|178:126,1,135.000005149842,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,43,56179,1,4,3:0:0:0:
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182,213,56929,2,0,P|221:201|252:197,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,208,57304,5,4,3:0:0:0:
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30,87,59741,2,0,P|26:53|21:20,2,67.5000025749208,0|4|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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185,88,61054,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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503,111,61804,2,0,P|438:111|387:62,1,135.000005149842,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,18,62366,1,4,0:0:0:0:
321,4,62554,2,0,P|336:74|344:143,1,135.000005149842,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,219,63116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
429,264,63304,5,0,0:0:0:0:
429,264,63491,2,0,P|372:277|340:345,1,135.000005149842,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,358,64241,2,0,P|256:327|257:294,1,67.5000025749208,0|4,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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261,36,65554,1,0,1:0:0:0:
251,133,65741,1,0,3:0:0:0:
337,92,65929,2,0,P|369:82|451:72,1,112.5,2|4,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,246,66679,6,0,P|398:255|380:277,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,326,67054,2,0,P|267:318|210:316,1,90,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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183,151,68554,2,0,P|201:199|228:249,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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46,178,69679,6,0,P|36:156|29:134,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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295,35,70804,2,0,P|262:64|254:114,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,183,71554,2,0,P|198:209|211:258,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,344,72304,5,4,1:0:0:0:
382,344,72491,2,0,P|387:275|397:203,1,135.000005149842,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,117,73054,2,0,P|451:99|488:99,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,59,73429,1,4,3:0:0:0:
341,59,73616,2,0,P|286:105|223:99,1,135.000005149842,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,40,74179,1,6,3:0:0:0:
124,218,74554,1,2,1:3:0:0:
37,58,74929,1,2,3:0:0:0:
177,126,75304,6,0,P|110:135|44:150,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,244,75866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,284,76054,2,0,P|159:274|181:253,1,67.5000025749208,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,316,76429,2,0,P|255:322|229:343,1,67.5000025749208,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
257,199,76804,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,199,76991,2,0,P|289:215|320:230,1,67.5000025749208,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,178,77366,1,4,3:0:0:0:
465,178,77553,2,0,P|435:197|406:217,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,370,77929,2,0,P|376:334|374:299,1,67.5000025749208,6|4,1:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
257,199,78304,5,4,1:0:0:0:
257,199,78491,2,0,P|313:180|343:109,1,135.000005149842,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,30,79054,2,0,P|266:35|223:36,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,37,79429,1,4,3:0:0:0:
394,37,79616,2,0,P|396:107|443:149,1,135.000005149842,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
494,230,80179,1,6,3:0:0:0:
331,332,80554,1,2,1:3:0:0:
475,314,80929,1,2,3:0:0:0:
290,253,81304,5,4,0:0:0:0:
290,253,81491,2,0,P|221:258|174:308,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,351,82054,2,0,P|90:318|80:282,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,141,82429,1,4,3:0:0:0:
31,141,82616,2,0,P|78:186|144:190,1,135.000005149842,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,80,83179,1,6,3:0:0:0:
234,157,83366,1,8,0:3:0:0:
196,68,83554,2,0,P|165:68|131:84,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,162,83929,2,0,P|349:162|383:146,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,31,84304,5,4,1:0:0:0:
483,31,84491,2,0,P|476:105|471:178,1,135.000005149842,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,262,85054,2,0,P|449:266|422:282,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,363,85429,1,4,3:0:0:0:
282,363,85616,2,0,P|277:295|270:228,1,135.000005149842,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,131,86179,1,6,3:0:0:0:
143,309,86554,1,0,1:0:0:0:
23,183,86929,2,0,P|58:169|97:170,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,246,87304,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,246,87491,2,0,P|184:195|193:129,1,135.000005149842,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,63,88054,2,0,P|297:68|330:75,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,40,88429,2,0,P|139:47|106:52,1,67.5000025749208,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
282,162,88804,2,0,P|315:167|348:174,1,67.5000025749208,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,143,89179,2,0,P|92:150|59:155,1,67.5000025749208,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,243,89554,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,234,89741,1,4,1:3:0:0:
183,320,89929,2,0,P|233:339|295:319,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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