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ZUN remixed by LeaF - Arianrhod [OsuMania]

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Gekido
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Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Gekido
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 20. Mai 2018 at 16:50:39

Artist: ZUN remixed by LeaF
Title: Arianrhod
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Touhou 6 Embodiment of the Scarlet Devil Sakuya Izayoi Boss Theme Remix Lunar Clock Luna Dial
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3365kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. EZ - 5Key (1,35 stars, 330 notes)
  2. HD - 5Key (2,91 stars, 944 notes)
  3. Manipulator of Time - 5Key (4,1 stars, 1409 notes)
  4. NM - 5Key (1,98 stars, 584 notes)
Download: ZUN remixed by LeaF - Arianrhod
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Probably one of my favorite songs ever.

LeaF is love <3 (Check out their Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/leaf-7)

Equally as much love went into this map. I really enjoyed mapping this song and I'm trying my darn best to attentionwhore enough to get it ranked! ;)
Yes, I'm aware that there's already a ranked map but I noticed that when I was already done with EZ and NM when I was mass downloading maps via osu!direct. Hurrdurr, still had fun mapping nonetheless :)

ALSO: I kept complaining about resnapping every single timing point... because I didn't know you could just change their offset by highlighting two or more.
ADLKADJPOCWDIAMDPOAIMDASCOKDASPOMDSOIKAEENDMEPLEASE

EZ - done
NM - done
HD - done
Manipulator of Time - done

Hitsounds - done
SVs - done
Ready for modding~

Thanks to...
Modders (and other useful tips/suggestions)

Walao
Another Lie
MegaDarkLugia11(timing check)
puxtu (also timing)
HXJ_Crafter
Shizai (irc)
CrumpetFiddler (irc)
Soul Evans(irc)
Arzenvald(irc)


Star Shooters

Another Lie
kikones34
False - Ren


Testers

noftrahtcehe
Crono
JustinNF
Lenfried-


Please feel free to headbutt me if I forgot anyone.
Updates
Forgot -> Converted the audio file to 192 kb/s.
27th August 16 -> Applied walao's mod, thanks for that ^^
29th August 16 -> Added more of dem sweet SVs.
20th September 16 -> Applied HXJ_Crafter's mod, thanks for your help!
28th September 16 -> Added some SVs at the beginning of HD.
11th October 16 -> Added SVs at before the main part of the song in HD.
13th October 16 -> Moar SVs for MoT.
21st October 16 ->Changed offset to 28 and resnapped timing points. If I have to do this again I'll flip my table so hard asdjlkad
4th November 16 -> Applied Another Lie's mod and ajeemaniz's little (not yet posted) irc mod on the EZ diff.
23th December 16 -> Snapped LN's at the end of HD to 1/2 instead of 1/4.
20th January 17 -> Changed the part at 1:40 of HD because it didn't follow the instruments properly, thanks to Shizai for pointing it out! Applied some things of his irc mod and changed a couple of other things myself.
3rd May 17 -> Changed bits on EZ diff, thinking about fine tuning the SVs at some point (maybe not).
11th May 17 -> Changed bits of MoT diff.
27th May 17 -> Changed even more bits on MoT.
6th July 17 -> Changed some parts that I don't really remember w. Major change in the second kiai (MORE LNS WEWLAD)

If this gets ranked I'll lick my elbows.
Yes, both.
At the same time.
Cheers.
Last edited by Gekido , edited 41 times in total.
walao
248 posts
Joined April 2013
walao
Hiiiii, lost a coin flip for m4m so here I am xD

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5k: |1|2|3|4|5|
[General]
SPOILER
your offsets are incorrect, change the first timing point to 40, and the 2nd timing point to 1540
remember to resnap your green points/preview points :)

All suggestions beyond this point :3

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:06:415 (6415|0) - move to 3 to make a nice pattern (1,5,2,4,3)
00:07:540 (7540|2) - move to 1 for a sort of stairs pattern
00:20:665 (20665|3,21040|1) - CTRL + H so these aren't the same as 00:19:165 (19165|3,19540|1)
01:14:571 (74571|3,74665|2) - remove these and make a LN on 3 at 01:14:477 to 01:14:665
01:39:790 (99790|0,99790|4) - maybe move these to 2 and 4 instead? to not be the same as 01:39:040 (99040|4,99040|0)

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:01:915 (1915|4,2008|3,2102|2,2196|1,2290|0,2665|4,2665|3) - this stair doesn't fit with the music at all, maybe try this?
00:26:665 (26665|3,26852|1,26946|4,27040|0,27227|2,27321|3,27415|1,27602|4,27696|2) - These are on 1/3rds, you're mapping them on 1/4ths
- to map on 1/3rds, move the slider on the top right of the editor back a bit
00:36:227 (36227|2,36227|4,36227|0) - remove 3 since a triple doesn't fit the music
00:46:540 (46540|0,46727|4,46821|1,46915|3,47102|0,47196|4,47290|1,47477|3,47571|0,47665|4,47852|1,47946|3) - Same as before, these are on 1/3rds
- also maybe rearrange the pattern so that there are some notes on 3, since there aren't any in the pattern
01:29:571 (89571|3,89665|1,89758|3,89852|1,89946|3) - these are on 3rds as well, should be 4 notes instead of 5
01:39:415 (99415|2) - extend this to 01:39:790
01:40:165 (100165|3,100165|4,100258|2,100352|1,100446|0,100540|4,100633|3,100727|2,100821|1,100915|0,101008|1,101102|2,101196|3) - 3rds
01:45:415 (105415|2,105415|3) - move this over to 2 and 3 so it isn't the same as 01:43:915 (103915|3,103915|2)
01:49:165 (109165|0,109258|1,109352|2,109446|3) - 3rds, should be 3 notes instead of 4

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:01:674 (1674|3) - add a note here
00:10:540 (10540|4,10540|1,10633|0,10727|1,10915|4,11008|3,11102|1,11290|0,11383|3,11477|4,11665|0,11758|1,11852|2) - 3rds again
00:15:602 (15602|1,15790|3) - move these to 1 and 5 respectively
00:26:665 (26665|3,26665|4,26758|0,26758|1,26852|4,26852|3,26852|2,26946|1,27040|4,27040|0,27227|0,27227|4,27415|0,27508|3,27602|3,27790|1,27790|0) - 3rds
00:43:165 (43165|0,43165|1,43258|4,43258|3,43352|0,43352|1) - 3rds
00:46:540 (46540|1,46540|0,46633|3,46633|4,46727|0,46727|1,46915|3,46915|4,47008|1,47008|0,47102|3,47102|4,47290|0,47290|1,47383|3,47383|4,47477|0,47477|1,47665|4,47665|3,47758|1,47758|0,47852|4,47852|3) - 3rds, and maybe change rearrange so some notes are on 3
00:49:165 (49165|4) - move this over to 4 maybe
00:50:102 (50102|2) - i think you can put a note here because there's one in the song
00:51:883 (51883|3) - change this to a LN up to 00:52:165
00:54:883 (54883|3) - change this to a LN up to 00:55:165
01:06:040 (66040|3,66040|1) - 01:10:446 (70446|2) - all 3rds
01:14:477 (74477|4) - add a note here
01:15:415 (75415|3,75415|4) - don't think there's any reason for this to be a double
01:15:602 (75602|1,75602|0) - same here
01:17:196 (77196|3,77290|2) - i'm pretty sure this is a 3rd
01:17:571 (77571|0) - so is this
01:17:665 (77665|1) - add a note on 2
01:29:477 (89477|0,89477|4,89665|3,89665|1,89758|2,89852|3,89852|1,90040|0,90040|2,90040|4) - 3rds
01:40:258 (100258|2) - this should be on a 3rd
01:40:540 (100540|0,100540|4,100633|1,100665|3,100790|1,100790|3,100915|0,100915|2,100915|4) - these are also 3rds
01:41:290 (101290|4,101290|1,101290|3) - maybe remove a note and change it to 1 and 5 instead
01:41:383 - add a note here
01:41:477 (101477|1,101665|0) - suggest removing this
01:41:665 - add a note here
01:41:758 - add a note here
01:41:852 (101852|4) - maybe change this part to something like this
01:49:165 (109165|0,109165|4,109258|3,109258|1,109352|4,109352|0) - 3rds
01:52:540 (112540|2,112540|3,112540|1) - 01:53:852 (113852|3) - this section is all 3rds as well

[Manipulator of Time]
SPOILER
you have an extra note on the end of the LN at 01:24:602 (84602|3)
you also have a duplicate timing point at 01:01:237

00:04:352 (4352|3,4352|2,4352|4,4446|1,4446|4,4446|0,4540|1,4540|3,4540|2) - i would change this to this instead because i feel like what you have would play badly
00:10:633 (10633|4,10633|2) - 00:11:852 (11852|2,11852|4) - 3rds
00:12:977 (12977|1,12977|0,13071|2,13071|3,13165|3,13165|4,13258|1,13258|2,13352|0,13352|1,13446|2,13446|3) - rearrange this, again i feel like it would play badly
00:26:665 (26665|0,26665|1) - 00:27:696 (27696|4) - 3rds
00:27:696 (27696|4) - 3rds
00:43:165 (43165|1,43165|4,43258|3,43258|0,43352|1,43352|2) - 3rds
00:45:227 (45227|4,45227|2,45227|3,45321|1,45415|0,45415|4) - these are 6ths
00:45:602 (45602|0,45602|2,45602|1,45696|3,45790|4,45790|0) - 6ths
00:46:540 (46540|4,46540|2,46540|3) - 00:47:852 (47852|3,47852|2) - 3rds
01:02:290 (62290|4,62383|3,62477|2,62477|1,62540|2,62665|3,62665|1,62758|2,62852|3) - 3rds and 6ths, should look something like this
01:03:790 (63790|3,63883|2,63977|0,63977|1,64165|0,64258|2,64352|3) - 3rds and 6ths again, something like this
01:06:040 (66040|0,66040|2,66040|3) - 01:10:352 (70352|4) - 3rds
01:17:196 (77196|4,77290|4) - 3rds
01:17:571 (77571|0,77665|0) - 3rds
01:20:102 (80102|3,80102|2,80196|4,80290|2) - 6ths, try this
01:21:040 (81040|4) - why end this slider early, i would bring it up to where 01:21:040 (81040|2) is
01:29:477 (89477|1,89477|3,89571|2,89571|0,89665|1,89665|3,89758|2,89758|4,89852|3,89852|0,89946|4,89946|1) - 3rds
01:40:165 (100165|4,100165|3,100258|3,100258|2,100352|2,100352|1) - 3rds
01:40:446 (100446|4) - add a note
01:40:633 (100633|4,100633|2,100727|4,100727|2,100915|1,100915|3,101008|4,101008|0,101102|4,101102|0) - 3rds
01:41:383 (101383|4) - add notes here
01:41:477 (101477|4) - suggest removing this, doesn't match the song
01:41:758 (101758|0) - add notes here
01:42:040 (102040|0) - this is inconsistent with what you did in your Hard, check the suggestion i made there
01:49:165 (109165|4,109165|3,109258|1,109258|0,109352|2,109352|4) - 3rds
01:51:040 (111040|1,111040|2,111040|0) - 01:52:071 (112071|0) - 6ths, try something like this
01:52:540 (112540|0,112540|2,112540|1) - 01:53:852 (113852|0,113852|3) - 3rds

This was mostly a timing check because I can't really play 5K xD
Gekido
87 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Gekido
Many thanks for your mod! I'll make sure to get my mod for you done as quickly as possible! :) Coin toss OP

walao wrote:

your offsets are incorrect, change the first timing point to 40, and the 2nd timing point to 1540
remember to resnap your green points/preview points :)
Oh, I forgot to change the offset after replacing the 380kb/s mp3 with a 192kb/s mp3 file, stupid memory. >:(
Changed the offset and resnapped all inherited points as well as the preview points.

Also, during the application of this mod I noticed that you pointed out quite some non-existent errors (red text (which also means rejected suggestions)). This might be due to you changing the offset and the notes not getting snapped properly. Apologies if I sound a little upset in my reply for that :?

Sorry for any grammar/spelling/sentence errors, I applied this mod in one big sitting which took approx 6 hours. 8-)

EZ

walao wrote:

00:06:415 (6415|0) - move to 3 to make a nice pattern (1,5,2,4,3) - done
00:07:540 (7540|2) - move to 1 for a sort of stairs pattern - done
00:20:665 (20665|3,21040|1) - CTRL + H so these aren't the same as 00:19:165 (19165|3,19540|1) - done
01:14:571 (74571|3,74665|2) - remove these and make a LN on 3 at 01:14:477 to 01:14:665 - done
01:39:790 (99790|0,99790|4) - maybe move these to 2 and 4 instead? to not be the same as 01:39:040 (99040|4,99040|0) - I wanted to avoid a 2, 3, 2 (http://puu.sh/qQ4dM/30d0a20e85.jpg) there. I think 1 + 5 twice isn't too bad. But I'll move 01:39:790 (99790|4) - to col 4.

NM

walao wrote:

00:01:915 (1915|4,2008|3,2102|2,2196|1,2290|0,2665|4,2665|3) - this stair doesn't fit with the music at all, maybe try this? - I really like that idea :D done
00:26:665 (26665|3,26852|1,26946|4,27040|0,27227|2,27321|3,27415|1,27602|4,27696|2) - These are on 1/3rds, you're mapping them on 1/4ths
- to map on 1/3rds, move the slider on the top right of the editor back a bit - But, they ARE mapped in 1/3 http://puu.sh/qQ4OG/46ed132fb1.jpg :?
00:36:227 (36227|2,36227|4,36227|0) - remove 3 since a triple doesn't fit the music - Hmm, I think it fits though. The triple is supposed to have some "impact" since the music pauses for a little and then goes right back in. I'll leave the triple in there.
00:46:540 (46540|0,46727|4,46821|1,46915|3,47102|0,47196|4,47290|1,47477|3,47571|0,47665|4,47852|1,47946|3) - Same as before, these are on 1/3rds
- also maybe rearrange the pattern so that there are some notes on 3, since there aren't any in the pattern - But... http://puu.sh/qQ5fy/44577cb1ed.jpg :o I did change the pattern though.
01:29:571 (89571|3,89665|1,89758|3,89852|1,89946|3) - these are on 3rds as well, should be 4 notes instead of 5 - done
01:39:415 (99415|2) - extend this to 01:39:790 - done
01:40:165 (100165|3,100165|4,100258|2,100352|1,100446|0,100540|4,100633|3,100727|2,100821|1,100915|0,101008|1,101102|2,101196|3) - 3rds Whoops... fixed that.
01:45:415 (105415|2,105415|3) - move this over to 2 and 3 so it isn't the same as 01:43:915 (103915|3,103915|2) - done
01:49:165 (109165|0,109258|1,109352|2,109446|3) - 3rds, should be 3 notes instead of 4 I know I wasn't drunk when I mapped this but DAMN... done

HD

walao wrote:

00:01:674 (1674|3) - add a note here - done
00:10:540 (10540|4,10540|1,10633|0,10727|1,10915|4,11008|3,11102|1,11290|0,11383|3,11477|4,11665|0,11758|1,11852|2) - 3rds again - http://puu.sh/qQ5GO/a9e402c52e.jpg :o :o
00:15:602 (15602|1,15790|3) - move these to 1 and 5 respectively - done
00:26:665 (26665|3,26665|4,26758|0,26758|1,26852|4,26852|3,26852|2,26946|1,27040|4,27040|0,27227|0,27227|4,27415|0,27508|3,27602|3,27790|1,27790|0) - 3rds - lskadjaskldjdone
00:43:165 (43165|0,43165|1,43258|4,43258|3,43352|0,43352|1) - 3rds - http://puu.sh/qQ5Td/02afa8e153.jpg :o :o :o
00:46:540 (46540|1,46540|0,46633|3,46633|4,46727|0,46727|1,46915|3,46915|4,47008|1,47008|0,47102|3,47102|4,47290|0,47290|1,47383|3,47383|4,47477|0,47477|1,47665|4,47665|3,47758|1,47758|0,47852|4,47852|3) - 3rds, and maybe change rearrange so some notes are on 3 - Already are on 1/3 :cry: , but changed the pattern to http://puu.sh/qQ63F/08df26d107.jpg. I wanted to keep it easy but meh.
00:49:165 (49165|4) - move this over to 4 maybe - done
00:50:102 (50102|2) - i think you can put a note here because there's one in the song - done. Wanted it to be symmetrical for some reason.
00:51:883 (51883|3) - change this to a LN up to 00:52:165 - done
00:54:883 (54883|3) - change this to a LN up to 00:55:165 - done, also removed 00:55:071 (55071|0) - since it doesn't fit with the SV.
01:06:040 (66040|3,66040|1) - 01:10:446 (70446|2) - all 3rds - For some reason the notes from 01:09:665 - to 01:10:415 - were partially 1/4, the rest was all 1/3.
01:14:477 (74477|4) - add a note here - done
01:15:415 (75415|3,75415|4) - don't think there's any reason for this to be a double - http://puu.sh/qQ7hs/f1d5cb61cd.jpg There is no double?
01:15:602 (75602|1,75602|0) - same here - http://puu.sh/qQ7kx/27c0f7362a.jpg Same :?
01:17:196 (77196|3,77290|2) - i'm pretty sure this is a 3rd - Yup, it is.
01:17:571 (77571|0) - so is this - Correct.
01:17:665 (77665|1) - add a note on 2 - done
01:29:477 (89477|0,89477|4,89665|3,89665|1,89758|2,89852|3,89852|1,90040|0,90040|2,90040|4) - 3rds - http://puu.sh/qQ7so/7f4a0b3c04.jpg They are already 1/3 sasadksjdl :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
01:40:258 (100258|2) - this should be on a 3rd - It already is :(
01:40:540 (100540|0,100540|4,100633|1,100665|3,100790|1,100790|3,100915|0,100915|2,100915|4) - these are also 3rds - I agree, but they already are http://puu.sh/qQ7R2/6611a62c6f.jpg
01:41:290 (101290|4,101290|1,101290|3) - maybe remove a note and change it to 1 and 5 instead - http://puu.sh/qQ7Zx/cdd32d3c90.jpg Remove a note? I can change it to 1 + 5 though.
01:41:383 - add a note here - done
01:41:477 (101477|1,101665|0) - suggest removing this - done
01:41:665 - add a note here - done
01:41:758 - add a note here - done
01:41:852 (101852|4) - maybe change this part to something like this - I like the look of that, done did.
01:49:165 (109165|0,109165|4,109258|3,109258|1,109352|4,109352|0) - 3rds - skldjsakd http://puu.sh/qQ8gL/445bc2ee67.jpg
01:52:540 (112540|2,112540|3,112540|1) - 01:53:852 (113852|3) - this section is all 3rds as well - Same as before they already are x.x

Manipulator of Time

walao wrote:

you have an extra note on the end of the LN at 01:24:602 (84602|3) - I don't see one and neither does AImod.
you also have a duplicate timing point at 01:01:237 - I don't even see ONE timing point there http://puu.sh/qQ8Mu/a41391818e.jpg.

00:04:352 (4352|3,4352|2,4352|4,4446|1,4446|4,4446|0,4540|1,4540|3,4540|2) - i would change this to this instead because i feel like what you have would play badly - Hmmm, nobody who playtested MoT has complained about that bit. I'll change it anyways since I think it's not a very good idea with the triple chord.
00:10:633 (10633|4,10633|2) - 00:11:852 (11852|2,11852|4) - 3rds - They are though.
00:12:977 (12977|1,12977|0,13071|2,13071|3,13165|3,13165|4,13258|1,13258|2,13352|0,13352|1,13446|2,13446|3) - rearrange this, again i feel like it would play badly - Nuh, I wanna keep my precious 1/12 streams :( :( :(
00:26:665 (26665|0,26665|1) - 00:27:696 (27696|4) - 3rds Only those 00:27:508 (27508|0,27508|1,27633|0,27633|1) - were 1/4, the rest of the section was already 1/3.
00:27:696 (27696|4) - 3rds - I'm fairly sure that's 1/8 same as here 00:28:118 (28118|0,28165|1,28165|2) -
00:43:165 (43165|1,43165|4,43258|3,43258|0,43352|1,43352|2) - 3rds - They.
00:45:227 (45227|4,45227|2,45227|3,45321|1,45415|0,45415|4) - these are 6ths - Already.
00:45:602 (45602|0,45602|2,45602|1,45696|3,45790|4,45790|0) - 6ths - Are.
00:46:540 (46540|4,46540|2,46540|3) - 00:47:852 (47852|3,47852|2) - 3rds - Though. :cry:
01:02:290 (62290|4,62383|3,62477|2,62477|1,62540|2,62665|3,62665|1,62758|2,62852|3) - 3rds and 6ths, should look something like this - They are 1/3 and 1/6 http://puu.sh/qQ9CK/ad3d36c2c1.jpg :( And you pattern suggestion is good, but I think the current pattern is fitting. To me, there is no reason for the beginning of the LN be a double and the back and forth pattern (including the jack) has a nice feeling to it.
01:03:790 (63790|3,63883|2,63977|0,63977|1,64165|0,64258|2,64352|3) - 3rds and 6ths again, something like this - Same as above.
01:06:040 (66040|0,66040|2,66040|3) - 01:10:352 (70352|4) - 3rds - They are http://puu.sh/qQ9XW/32e59e8be2.jpg.
01:17:196 (77196|4,77290|4) - 3rds - done
01:17:571 (77571|0,77665|0) - 3rds - done
01:20:102 (80102|3,80102|2,80196|4,80290|2) - 6ths, try this - Already are 1/6, but changed the pattern.
01:21:040 (81040|4) - why end this slider early, i would bring it up to where 01:21:040 (81040|2) is - 01:21:040 (81040|2) - This LN is following the strings (not sure if those actually are strings...) and this one 01:21:040 (81040|4) - is following the piano.
01:29:477 (89477|1,89477|3,89571|2,89571|0,89665|1,89665|3,89758|2,89758|4,89852|3,89852|0,89946|4,89946|1) - 3rds - Heyyy, you're right. Those actually were 1/3s, must have misheard it.
01:40:165 (100165|4,100165|3,100258|3,100258|2,100352|2,100352|1) - 3rds - Well, back to the "those are 1/3" again... I'll give you a little red text before the boxes on what I think might gave happened.
01:40:446 (100446|4) - add a note - done
01:40:633 (100633|4,100633|2,100727|4,100727|2,100915|1,100915|3,101008|4,101008|0,101102|4,101102|0) - 3rds - Are 1/3 already.
01:41:383 (101383|4) - add notes here - The LN is supposed to empathize on the "beep" sound so I'm not sure if it's necessary to add notes.
01:41:477 (101477|4) - suggest removing this, doesn't match the song - Same as above.
01:41:758 (101758|0) - add notes here - A chord might be a bad idea right before a 1/12 burst.
01:42:040 (102040|0) - this is inconsistent with what you did in your Hard, check the suggestion i made there - Can't do a whole lot about it without removing the 1/12 burst, which I'm not gonna do. So I added a LN in col 2 from 01:42:040 - to 01:42:977 - which follow the "beep" sound.
01:49:165 (109165|4,109165|3,109258|1,109258|0,109352|2,109352|4) - 3rds - Are 1/3 already. :(
01:51:040 (111040|1,111040|2,111040|0) - 01:52:071 (112071|0) - 6ths, try something like this - They already were 1/6, but I applied your pattern because I really like it :D
01:52:540 (112540|0,112540|2,112540|1) - 01:53:852 (113852|0,113852|3) - 3rds - Already are 1/3 asdklaslkjsadsklad *dies*
lenpai
1,780 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
svs are cool and nice

no kds

ff could have SVs too, totally upon your discretion whether to add
01:01:540 -
01:03:040 -
01:04:540 -
Gekido
87 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Gekido
Thanks for the feedback, I think I'll add SVs there as well, at least for the MoT diff. :D
HXJ_Crafter
207 posts
Joined October 2015
HXJ_Crafter
From M4M _(:з>∠)_
5k Column | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[General]
Timing - Late My suggestion: Just one Timing point -> 0,375,4,2,1,40,1,0 (BPM=160.000 Offset=0 Vol=40%)
Hitsound - OK √
Setup - OK √

[Diffs]
Please first check Timing, I'll use mine
5K EZ
00:01:500 - why LN? blblblbl... my suggestion 6 notes
00:03:000 (3000|4,3375|2,3750|0) - Why don't use LN?
00:10:500 - Try all use LN? :D
00:21:750 (21750|3) - move to col 1 to keep balance
00:22:125 (22125|2,22500|4) - LN in col 4 , note in col 2
00:24:750 (24750|0) - col 1 better?
00:48:375 (48375|3,48562|2) - note in col 3 pls move to col 2, col 2 move to col 3 for pitch
01:35:625 (95625|4,96000|0) - Ctrl + H
01:46:312 (106312|3) - move to col 1
01:55:875 (115875|2) - Sug: 2 is OK
5K NM
00:01:500 - Try this
00:10:500 - same to EZ
00:52:031 (52031|4) - add in col 4 here

God luck O :D
Gekido
87 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Gekido
Hello, thanks for your mod and sorry for the late reply :o

Changed the timing to one timing point and offset to 0, I left the hitsound volume as it was though.


EZ

HXJ_Crafter wrote:

00:01:500 - why LN? blblblbl... my suggestion 6 notes - Been a while since I mapped it so I can't remember why I put a LN there, changed it.
00:03:000 (3000|4,3375|2,3750|0) - Why don't use LN? - I doesn't sound like a "streched" sound to me, so I think normal notes fit better.
00:10:500 - Try all use LN? :D - Yuzzz.
00:21:750 (21750|3) - move to col 1 to keep balance - Done.
00:22:125 (22125|2,22500|4) - LN in col 4 , note in col 2 - Done.
00:24:750 (24750|0) - col 1 better? - It already is :o
00:48:375 (48375|3,48562|2) - note in col 3 pls move to col 2, col 2 move to col 3 for pitch - Done.
01:35:625 (95625|4,96000|0) - Ctrl + H - Done.
01:46:312 (106312|3) - move to col 1 - Done.
01:55:875 (115875|2) - Sug: 2 is OK - You mean two LN's? In that case I'll delete this one and add LN's in col 1 and 5. I wanna keep it symmetrical.
NM

HXJ_Crafter wrote:

00:01:500 - Try this - Much smoother to play, applied.
00:10:500 - same to EZ - Added LN's and changed the pattern.
00:52:031 (52031|4) - add in col 4 here -Hmmm, I think a mini jack is a little to hard for a NM diff so I added it in col 5 instead.

Thanks again for your little mod :)
puxtu
2,926 posts
Joined August 2013
puxtu
offset +30
Gekido
87 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Gekido
How many times will I have to change the offset and resnap every single timing point on this map until I get it qualified? :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

I'll ask a couple more people and see what fits best.

Well either that or I apply your offset now and change it a g a i n later.

Thanks for your suggestion :)
MegaDarkLugia11
132 posts
Joined June 2016
MegaDarkLugia11
Timing check

I see other people talk about your offset so many times
so... I try my best to find the closest offset of you
then here you go
I hope this might be help you

Offset 28

If you have a question just PM me ok
good luck
Gekido
87 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Gekido
Thanks!

Let's hope no one complains and I have to resnap 200+ timing points never again :o
Another Lie
Another Lie
Maybe i can do little help for SV. And also beware for long post.
Why i'm modding your SV? because i already test it for myself
Manipulator of Time
00:01:528 - you can delete this timing, x1.00 = normal, since this section already have normal timing (you should delete that)
00:03:028 - delete (it is already nice without this SV) (from x1.50 to x0.50 - x0.80 isn't going smoothly to go back at x1.00, well normally you should think that about increasing / decreasing speed / multiple speed / dividing speed to go back at x1.00)
00:03:403 - ^ delete
00:06:778 - x0.90 it didn't feel right to use, maybe x0.80 / x0.75?
00:09:778 - ^ maybe x0.80 / x0.75?
00:15:028 - ^ maybe x0.80 / x0.75?
00:26:715 - x0.75 because that will be comfortable enough than x0.50(well, it is just advice that mean "you may / not following this")
00:26:840 - ^ x0.75
00:26:965 - ^ x0.75
00:27:090 - ^ x0.75
00:27:215 - ^ x0.75
00:32:840 - maybe x0.80 / x0.75?
for this section 00:45:215 - 00:47:965 - , it is a bit special to me. Maybe you could use this 
45215,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45246,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45278,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45309,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45340,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45371,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45403,-50,4,2,1,45,0,0
45496,-200,4,2,1,45,0,0
45590,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45621,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45653,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45684,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45715,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45746,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45778,-50,4,2,1,45,0,0
45871,-200,4,2,1,45,0,0
45965,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45996,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46028,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46059,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46090,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46121,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46153,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
46246,-200,4,2,1,45,0,0
46340,-50,4,2,1,45,0,0
46434,-200,4,2,1,45,0,0
46528,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46590,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46653,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46715,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46778,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46840,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46903,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46965,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47028,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47090,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47153,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47215,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47278,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47340,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47403,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47465,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47528,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47590,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47653,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47715,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47778,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47840,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47903,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47965,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
00:48:028 - maybe x0.80 / x0.75?
00:49:153 - clap sound? why not make double note?
00:52:340 - 00:52:528 - what is this -_- please re-arrange the SV (continue below)
00:52:340 - maybe if x1.25, that is still can be used properly. Also 00:52:434 - maybe x0.50 here
00:59:840 - add note to centre
for this section 01:01:528 - 01:01:996 - it may not a good SV, because only 2 lines in there. you should make it 3 lines / 5 lines. What i mean is, you can use 1/8 if your lines are 2 / 4 / 6 & etc (continue below. 1/8 Timing)
01:01:715 - this SV should be placed at here 01:01:668 -
01:01:996 - this SV should be placed at here 01:01:949 -
01:03:215 - placed here 01:03:168 -
01:03:496 - placed here 01:03:449 -
01:04:715 - placed here 01:04:668 -
01:04:996 - placed here 01:04:949 -
01:05:465 - placed here 01:05:418 -
01:05:746 - placed here 01:05:699 -
01:10:621 - placed here 01:10:574 -
01:10:903 - placed here 01:10:856 -
01:11:184 - placed here 01:11:137 -
01:11:465 - placed here 01:11:418 -
01:13:621 - better use x0.50 than x0.30
01:13:903 - placed here 01:13:856 -
01:14:184 - placed here 01:14:137 -
01:16:059 - placed here 01:15:965 -
01:16:434 - placed here 01:16:340 -
01:40:153 - for this section until 01:41:278 - you should use 1/12 & x0.75 SV like the code below
Another Lie
Another Lie

Another Lie wrote:

01:40:153 - for this section until 01:41:278 - you should use 1/12 & x0.75 SV like the code below i mean above
sorry for double post :cry:
Gekido
87 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Gekido
Thanks a lot for your very fast and long mod! :)

Green means that I applied it.
Red means I didn't.
Blue text is just a comment.


Another Lie wrote:

Manipulator of Time
00:01:528 - you can delete this timing, x1.00 = normal, since this section already have normal timing (you should delete that) - The timing point is there because the intro is very quiet and I used it to change the hitsound volume.
00:03:028 - delete (it is already nice without this SV) (from x1.50 to x0.50 - x0.80 isn't going smoothly to go back at x1.00, well normally you should think that about increasing / decreasing speed / multiple speed / dividing speed to go back at x1.00) - I replaced them with x1.00 SV's since just removing them looked very uncomfortable to play.
00:03:403 - ^ delete - Same.
00:06:778 - x0.90 it didn't feel right to use, maybe x0.80 / x0.75? - I didn't want to break the flow too much, but yeah, it could be slower. Applied.
00:09:778 - ^ maybe x0.80 / x0.75? - Same.
00:15:028 - ^ maybe x0.80 / x0.75? - Same.
00:26:715 - x0.75 because that will be comfortable enough than x0.50(well, it is just advice that mean "you may / not following this") - Hmm, yeah, it has a better flow to hit and fits a little better.
00:26:840 - ^ x0.75 - ^
00:26:965 - ^ x0.75 - ^
00:27:090 - ^ x0.75 - ^
00:27:215 - ^ x0.75 - ^
00:32:840 - maybe x0.80 / x0.75? - Yup.
for this section 00:45:215 - 00:47:965 - , it is a bit special to me. Maybe you could use this 
45215,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45246,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45278,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45309,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45340,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45371,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45403,-50,4,2,1,45,0,0
45496,-200,4,2,1,45,0,0
45590,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45621,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45653,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45684,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45715,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45746,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
45778,-50,4,2,1,45,0,0
45871,-200,4,2,1,45,0,0
45965,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
45996,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46028,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46059,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46090,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46121,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46153,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
46246,-200,4,2,1,45,0,0
46340,-50,4,2,1,45,0,0
46434,-200,4,2,1,45,0,0
46528,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46590,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46653,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46715,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46778,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46840,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
46903,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
46965,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47028,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47090,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47153,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47215,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47278,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47340,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47403,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47465,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47528,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47590,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47653,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47715,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47778,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47840,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
47903,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,45,0,0
47965,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,45,0,0
- Looks amazing, applied it :)
00:48:028 - maybe x0.80 / x0.75? - x0.80
00:49:153 - clap sound? why not make double note? - Whoops, I was too focused on the piano. Added.
00:52:340 - 00:52:528 - what is this -_- please re-arrange the SV (continue below) - I tried math, maybe gonna leave that out next time.
00:52:340 - maybe if x1.25, that is still can be used properly. Also 00:52:434 - maybe x0.50 here - It doesn't look like too much of a difference but I'll apply it.
00:59:840 - add note to centre - Done.
for this section 01:01:528 - 01:01:996 - it may not a good SV, because only 2 lines in there. you should make it 3 lines / 5 lines. What i mean is, you can use 1/8 if your lines are 2 / 4 / 6 & etc (continue below. 1/8 Timing) - Mhm, noted.
01:01:715 - this SV should be placed at here 01:01:668 - - Done.
01:01:996 - this SV should be placed at here 01:01:949 - - Done.
01:03:215 - placed here 01:03:168 - - Done.
01:03:496 - placed here 01:03:449 - - Done.
01:04:715 - placed here 01:04:668 - - Done.
01:04:996 - placed here 01:04:949 - - Done.
01:05:465 - placed here 01:05:418 - - Done.
01:05:746 - placed here 01:05:699 - - Done.
01:10:621 - placed here 01:10:574 - - Done.
01:10:903 - placed here 01:10:856 - - Done.
01:11:184 - placed here 01:11:137 - - Done.
01:11:465 - placed here 01:11:418 - - Done.
01:13:621 - better use x0.50 than x0.30 - - Not sure why it was x0.3. in the first place.
01:13:903 - placed here 01:13:856 - - Done.
01:14:184 - placed here 01:14:137 - - Done.
01:16:059 - placed here 01:15:965 - - Done.
01:16:434 - placed here 01:16:340 - - Done.
01:40:153 - for this section until 01:41:278 - you should use 1/12 & x0.75 SV like the code below - Replaced the x0.5 SV's with x0.75 SV's
I knew that some of the SVs could use a little work :o
False - Ren
False - Ren

Another Lie wrote:

2 shots from this thing, the other 1 is at the main thing
Gekido
87 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Gekido
Thanks :tada:

CS bubble wheeeen hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Arzenvald
4,058 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
I forgot to save log azzzz
Gekido
87 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Gekido
I should enable chat log again. Has been off since osu decided to make every option to default again.

You get your kds anyway :)
No_sync
380 posts
Joined November 2014
No_sync
hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 5K 0|1| 2 |3|4



General
MP3: PASS
BG: MISS
  1. The resolution 1096x768 doesn't look right. 1366x768 would have been good enough. With the "latest" resolution changes, you can use this one: https://puu.sh/wJ6Vy.jpg (If you like.)
Video: SKIP
  1. Not needed.
BPM & Offset: PASS
Diff.Spread: PASS
Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: MISS
  1. Just suggestions, i think that some values are too high or too low:
    1. EZ: OD=7 -> OD=6.5 | HP=6 -> HP=7 | There are more than 50 Longnotes here, i suggest lower the OD.
    2. NM: HP=7.2 -> HP=7.5
    3. Manipulator of Time: OD=8.7 -> 8.6/8.5/8 | Currently too high in my opinion.
Hitsound: MISS
  1. soft-hitclap.wav lasts 92ms. You need at least 100ms or more: https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#audio Use a different hitsound.
Hitsound Volume: MISS
  1. There are hitsounds present, but i don't think they are used properly. More info in "Mod!"
Kiai Time: MISS
  1. The kiai time changes in some difficulties:
    1. EZ, First kiai should start on 00:16:528 .
    2. Manipulator of Time, First kiai should end on 00:27:778 .
    3. Manipulator of Time, Second kiai should end on 01:41:278 .
Metadata: MISS
  1. The artist seems incorrect in my opinion, link: https://soundcloud.com/leaf-7/arianrhod
    1. Artist: "ZUN remixed by LeaF" -> "LeaF" (From the link and also to be consistent, i think is better to change to LeaF.)
    2. Tags: "月時計　～ ルナ・ダイアル" (I suggest you to add this for the description of the link.)
Widescreen Support: MISS
  1. Uncheck Widescreen Support on EZ, HD and Manipulator of Time.
Preview Point: MISS
  1. Try to snap at 01:29:278 . Instead of 01:29:290 - that doesn't have any snap.
AiMod Things: MISS
  1. First kiai in EZ isn't adjusted... already said above.
  2. Extra1: From Manipulator of Time, I don't know if this is good, the song ends before the map? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8585806 Never see this before lol.
  3. Extra2: Omit first bar line ? https://puu.sh/wJ5vW.png Try to erase and create again in the same point with the same values.

Mod!
[Hitsounds]
I use Manipulator of Time Difficulty for reference here:

The soft-hitnormal used is a kick (or snare? hm...), i rather replace that for some hihat sound (like the soft-hitwhistle that you are using right now... or that soft-hitclap). The main reason is because the constant volume change, is pretty noticeable.
In more detailed way:
00:01:903 (1903|3) - Here is 45%
00:02:278 (2278|3,2278|2) - ...90%
00:03:778 (3778|1,3778|3,3778|2) - 135% ... Well these sounds stack, that's what i saying here so is better use another hitsound like a soft hihat instead of this kick.

Another thing, for each cymbal you can use a kick. Is almost always like that.

Just a little more help:

00:04:903 (4903|0,5278|0,5653|0,6028|0) - I think these are kicks.

00:04:715 (4715|0,4809|1,5090|3,5184|2,5465|3,5559|4,5840|3,5934|2) - These can be replaced for some hihat, and so on...

In general, these two things are repetitive through all the map.

00:07:528 (7528|2,7528|4) - I don't know if is good using two Finish at the same time, like i said before you can replace one of these with a kick.

00:13:528 (13528|1,13528|0) - ^

00:15:028 (15028|0,15028|4) - ^ In This case Whistle, i rather use one only.

00:16:528 (16528|4,16528|3) - ^ Skipping from now on...

00:16:903 (16903|2,17278|2,17653|2,18028|2,18403|0) - Open hat, I think that soft-hitclap will be good here.

00:52:528 (52528|2,52528|4,52528|0) - Three Whistles? I think is too much.

01:01:528 (61528|1,61528|0,61528|2,61809|1,61809|2,61809|3,62090|4,62090|2,62090|3) - One snare for each hand.

[EZ]
00:04:340 (4340|2) - This Longnote isn't a bit hard for this difficulty? I rather do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594043

00:07:528 (7528|0) - I rather move this note to | 2 | for better rest in the left hand.

00:09:778 (9778|3,9965|2,10153|1) - I would try this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594054

00:28:340 (28340|4) - I rather change this Longnote to note instead, i think is a bit a hard for this diff.

00:31:340 (31340|2) - ^Same here.

00:36:965 (36965|0,37153|1,37340|3,37528|4) - I rather rearrange here for that synth/piano: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594077

00:45:028 (45028|4,45215|3,45403|2,45590|0,45778|1,45965|2,46153|4,46340|3,46528|2) - I rather spread the notes to fit better this part: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594083

00:48:215 (48215|4,48403|3,48590|1,48778|2,48965|0,49153|3,49340|1,49528|3) - I think roll pattern would fit better here to be honest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594091

01:09:028 (69028|2) - I think this longnote should end at 01:10:528 .

01:12:028 (72028|1) - Also here i think this should end at 01:13:528 .

01:30:028 (90028|3,90403|2,90778|1) - For symmetry, i think this will look better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594110

01:42:028 (102028|1,102778|3,102965|0,103153|1,103340|2,103528|3) - Why no longnote for the first note? Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594135

[NM]
00:01:996 (1996|1,1996|3,2278|2,2278|0,2559|1,2559|3,2840|4,3028|4) - In my opinion, that stack on |4| is a bit difficult, also this can be arranged better, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594151

00:15:215 (15215|3,15403|1,15590|3,15778|1,16153|3,16340|2,16528|2) - I prefer doing a roll pattern here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594163

00:27:778 (27778|0,28153|4) - These two are inconsistent, i think is better to do notes instead, so you can do emphasize better the 1/2 Longnote sound: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594173

00:31:528 (31528|1,31903|3,31903|0,32278|2,32278|4,32653|1,32653|3) - I think will look better like this for symmetry: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594181

00:36:215 (36215|4,36215|2,36215|0) - Three notes? Isn't too hard for NM? I rather erase the note on | 2 |

00:41:840 (41840|2,42215|2,42590|2,42965|2) - I prefer to spread more these notes: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594199

00:49:528 (49528|3,49528|1) - I prefer to continue the roll pattern, move 00:49:528 (49528|3) - to |0|

00:52:059 (52059|3,52153|3) - Jack? Too hard, in my opinion. Move 00:52:059 (52059|3) - to |4|

01:06:028 (66028|2,66403|3,66778|4,67153|3,67528|2,67903|1,68278|0,68653|1,69028|2,69403|3,69778|4,70153|3) - I don't see too much trouble here, just a suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594230 <- I think is more easier change between hands instead.

01:16:528 (76528|2,78028|0,78778|1,79153|4,79528|3,80278|1,81028|2,81778|3,82153|4) - I think is better to leave the short ones and the long ones like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594240

01:27:590 (87590|2,87684|1,87778|0,87965|1) - I rather move this notes better, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594272

01:41:278 (101278|4,102028|3) - I think it can be placed better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594280

01:42:778 (102778|0,102965|1,103153|2,103340|3,103528|1,103528|4) - The Longnote look odd, i think is for piano/synth but isn't so extended, i rather do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594294

01:52:528 (112528|3) - I rather move to | 2 | instead for better rest.

01:55:153 (115153|3,115340|1) - Ctrl+H, to follow the same direction of the previous roll.

[HD]
00:01:528 (1528|0,1528|1,1903|2,1903|4,1903|0) - Chord first, but after Hand? Is somewhat inconsistent. Also, 00:01:903 (1903|0,1903|4,1903|2) - I only hearing whistle here, not the drum. The drum sounds again in 00:01:996 Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594340

00:16:340 (16340|0,16340|4) - For symmetry, i think these will look better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594349

00:17:840 (17840|0,17934|1,18028|0) - Are really necessary these trills? I rather do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594356 Skipping from now on...

00:24:028 (24028|1) - No chord here?

00:46:903 (46903|0,47153|0,47403|0,47653|0,47903|0) - I rather move 00:47:903 (47903|0) - to |1| for better rest.

00:49:153 (49153|2) - No chord for this crash sound?

01:04:809 (64809|1,64809|3,65090|4,65090|3,65278|3,65278|4,65559|0,65559|2,65840|3,65840|1,66028|3,66028|1) - This look ankward, because of the previous symmetry. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594395

01:22:996 (82996|0,83090|0,83278|1,83371|1) - Too much effort on the left hand here, i rather do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594403

01:43:340 (103340|2) - Move to |0| for better symmetry.

01:55:340 (115340|4) - I rather move this note to |3| instead.

[Manipulator of Time]
00:10:340 (10340|3,10434|3,10528|3,10653|2,10653|4,10778|4,10778|2) - I think that tri-jack can be arranged better, for better rest in the right hand: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594436

00:30:215 (30215|4,30309|4,30403|4,30465|3,30590|3,30715|3) - Maybe use more | 2 | here instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594441

00:34:153 (34153|1,34153|4) - In my opinion for this sound, one longnote will fit perfect.

00:48:965 (48965|0) - I rather move this note to | 2 | instead, for symmetry.

01:26:840 (86840|2,87028|3) - No chords like before?

01:27:590 (87590|4) - I think if you move this note will look much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594463

01:29:528 (89528|2,89528|4,89653|3,89653|1,89778|2,89778|0,89903|1,89903|3,90028|4,90028|2,90028|0) - I think will look better this way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594472 For symmetry.

01:49:403 (109403|2,109403|4,109528|3) - I prefer to do this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594484

01:54:215 (114215|1,114215|2,114403|3,114403|0,114590|4,114590|2,114778|3,114778|1,114965|2,114965|0,115153|4,115153|1,115340|3,115340|0) - This looks odd, because are too confusing in my opinion, I rather use a symmetry pattern here. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594494

01:55:903 (115903|4,115903|0,115903|3,115903|2,115903|1) - Can you finish these before the song ends? It will look consistent with the other difficulties too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594507 <- HD in the right.

Hope this was useful... I don't know what is that extra yellow column. . . lol.

Good Luck! :)
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