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[Toothpaste]
00:06:718 (3) - CTRL+G Since all the other 3 small repeat sliders are faced the correct way, why shouldn't this one be aswell? It ruins the flow a tiny bit imo.
I'm thinking the HP is a bit too easy on you. I would like to see HP 5 "atleast".
[Salad]
00:02:385 (1) - CTRL+G fits in a bit better I guess.
[Cup]
00:22:052 (2,3,4) - I think the distance between these could be reduced, it's not exactly hard, but it doesn't fit in with this much spacing I think. Atleast half it for each circle Imo.
[General]
There is no preview time set for any of the maps, you should set one! I know it's not super necesairy but I feel like it will atleast sound better then it starting in the middle of the song or something.
00:06:718 (3) - CTRL+G Since all the other 3 small repeat sliders are faced the correct way, why shouldn't this one be aswell? It ruins the flow a tiny bit imo.
I'm thinking the HP is a bit too easy on you. I would like to see HP 5 "atleast".
[Salad]
00:02:385 (1) - CTRL+G fits in a bit better I guess.
[Cup]
00:22:052 (2,3,4) - I think the distance between these could be reduced, it's not exactly hard, but it doesn't fit in with this much spacing I think. Atleast half it for each circle Imo.
[General]
There is no preview time set for any of the maps, you should set one! I know it's not super necesairy but I feel like it will atleast sound better then it starting in the middle of the song or something.
Topic Starter
Mod Reply
Negri_sk wrote:
[Toothpaste]
00:06:718 (3) - CTRL+G Since all the other 3 small repeat sliders are faced the correct way, why shouldn't this one be aswell? It ruins the flow a tiny bit imo.
I'm thinking the HP is a bit too easy on you. I would like to see HP 5 "atleast".
[Salad]
00:02:385 (1) - CTRL+G fits in a bit better I guess.
[Cup]
00:22:052 (2,3,4) - I think the distance between these could be reduced, it's not exactly hard, but it doesn't fit in with this much spacing I think. Atleast half it for each circle Imo.
[General]
There is no preview time set for any of the maps, you should set one! I know it's not super necesairy but I feel like it will atleast sound better then it starting in the middle of the song or something.
All fixed, thanks for the mod!
m4m
gl on your map!
General
- Preview time: I think 00:09:385 - works as a better preview time.
- Hitsounds: The map isn't hitsounded which is unrankable!
- Combo colours: There are no combo colours, please add some!
Salad
This salad can be SS'd without even touching dash. Salads needs some dashing on stronger beats! :< Here are some examples of where you can add some easy dashes:
- 00:00:052 (1,2) -
- 00:03:052 (3,4) -
- 00:06:718 (4,1) -
- 00:14:718 (1,2) -
- 00:19:718 (3,1) -
Toothpaste
I think generally, this diff lacks use of normal dashes. It has hypers that are nicely placed but no normal dashes which is sad 
I'll try point some out! Also, I think CS4 works better with the spread!
I'll try point some out! Also, I think CS4 works better with the spread!- 00:00:052 (1,2) - You could add a dash here
- 00:01:385 (4,5) - ^
- 00:02:718 (2,3) - ^
- 00:09:302 (4,1) - As a platter, this hyper is unrankable as far as I know
- 00:12:052 (1,2) - You could add dash here
- 00:27:968 (4,5) - This jump too is as far as I know unrankable in platters.
- 00:28:052 (5) - Also, put NC here and remove NC on 00:28:385 (1) -
gl on your map!
Topic Starter
BennyBananas wrote:
m4mGeneral
- Preview time: I think 00:09:385 - works as a better preview time. Of course.
- Hitsounds: The map isn't hitsounded which is unrankable!Soon.
- Combo colours: There are no combo colours, please add some! Colours added.
SaladThis salad can be SS'd without even touching dash. Salads needs some dashing on stronger beats! :< Here are some examples of where you can add some easy dashes:
- 00:00:052 (1,2) -
- 00:03:052 (3,4) -
- 00:06:718 (4,1) -
- 00:14:718 (1,2) -
- 00:19:718 (3,1) - All fixed, thanks.
ToothpasteI think generally, this diff lacks use of normal dashes. It has hypers that are nicely placed but no normal dashes which is sadThanks for the mod~
- 00:00:052 (1,2) - You could add a dash here
- 00:01:385 (4,5) - ^
- 00:02:718 (2,3) - ^
- 00:09:302 (4,1) - As a platter, this hyper is unrankable as far as I know
- 00:12:052 (1,2) - You could add dash here
- 00:27:968 (4,5) - This jump too is as far as I know unrankable in platters.
- 00:28:052 (5) - Also, put NC here and remove NC on 00:28:385 (1) - All fixed too
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gl on your map!
hi m4m
General :
- why no hitsound? , can add clap for every 2nd and 4th whiteticks and whistle for every 1st whiteticks
- 00:37:385 - 20% 00:40:052 - 5% pls
- apply your custom combo colour from Toothpaste diff to Cup and Salad too
Cup :
- 00:06:052 (2) - since the music is so calm, really suggest to at least give movement for this slider. move tail to x:336
- 00:12:052 (1) - same as above, tail x:48 instead
- 00:20:052 (1) - the spacing is a bit low. x:352 instead
- 00:24:718 (2) - 0,43x spacing only? consider to make further distance ;_;
- 00:29:385 (3) - stack isnt really good for ctb. consider move to x:352
Salad :
- 00:00:718 (2,3) - consider swap the jump, the pitch of melody is in 00:01:385 -
- 00:03:385 (4) - more movement for the slider pls, tail x:496
- 00:08:718 (3) - weird spacing due same pattern with 00:07:385 (1,2) - but different spacing with them.. move this (3) to x:416 so dash for 00:09:385 (1) - too
- fine diff but remaking your jump distance, i can catch them all without dash unless 00:36:718 (2) -
Toothpaste :
- wow weird spacing 00:02:274 - (1/6) and 00:02:496 - (1/6) for this 00:02:302 (1) -
- 00:10:052 (3) - snap of tail.. idk what it's following for. if from melody then should be at 00:10:163 -
- 00:11:635 (3) - start from 00:11:607 - end at 00:11:829 - (1/6) to follow the melody
- 00:11:968 (4) - overmap i guess
- 00:18:052 (5) - x:240 to make better flow with a movement and dash
good luck ~
General :
- why no hitsound? , can add clap for every 2nd and 4th whiteticks and whistle for every 1st whiteticks
- 00:37:385 - 20% 00:40:052 - 5% pls
- apply your custom combo colour from Toothpaste diff to Cup and Salad too
Cup :
- 00:06:052 (2) - since the music is so calm, really suggest to at least give movement for this slider. move tail to x:336
- 00:12:052 (1) - same as above, tail x:48 instead
- 00:20:052 (1) - the spacing is a bit low. x:352 instead
- 00:24:718 (2) - 0,43x spacing only? consider to make further distance ;_;
- 00:29:385 (3) - stack isnt really good for ctb. consider move to x:352
Salad :
- 00:00:718 (2,3) - consider swap the jump, the pitch of melody is in 00:01:385 -
- 00:03:385 (4) - more movement for the slider pls, tail x:496
- 00:08:718 (3) - weird spacing due same pattern with 00:07:385 (1,2) - but different spacing with them.. move this (3) to x:416 so dash for 00:09:385 (1) - too
- fine diff but remaking your jump distance, i can catch them all without dash unless 00:36:718 (2) -
Toothpaste :
- wow weird spacing 00:02:274 - (1/6) and 00:02:496 - (1/6) for this 00:02:302 (1) -
- 00:10:052 (3) - snap of tail.. idk what it's following for. if from melody then should be at 00:10:163 -
- 00:11:635 (3) - start from 00:11:607 - end at 00:11:829 - (1/6) to follow the melody
- 00:11:968 (4) - overmap i guess
- 00:18:052 (5) - x:240 to make better flow with a movement and dash
good luck ~
Topic Starter
Mod Reply
Xinely wrote:
hi m4m
General :
- why no hitsound? , can add clap for every 2nd and 4th whiteticks and whistle for every 1st whiteticks
- 00:37:385 - 20% 00:40:052 - 5% pls Done.
- apply your custom combo colour from Toothpaste diff to Cup and Salad too Done.
Cup :
- 00:06:052 (2) - since the music is so calm, really suggest to at least give movement for this slider. move tail to x:336
- 00:12:052 (1) - same as above, tail x:48 instead
- 00:20:052 (1) - the spacing is a bit low. x:352 instead
- 00:24:718 (2) - 0,43x spacing only? consider to make further distance ;_;
- 00:29:385 (3) - stack isnt really good for ctb. consider move to x:352 All sugestions applied, thanks.
Salad :
- 00:00:718 (2,3) - consider swap the jump, the pitch of melody is in 00:01:385 -
- 00:03:385 (4) - more movement for the slider pls, tail x:496
- 00:08:718 (3) - weird spacing due same pattern with 00:07:385 (1,2) - but different spacing with them.. move this (3) to x:416 so dash for 00:09:385 (1) - too
- fine diff but remaking your jump distance, i can catch them all without dash unless 00:36:718 (2) - All aplied too, thanks.
Toothpaste :
- wow weird spacing 00:02:274 - (1/6) and 00:02:496 - (1/6) for this 00:02:302 (1) -
- 00:10:052 (3) - snap of tail.. idk what it's following for. if from melody then should be at 00:10:163 -
- 00:11:635 (3) - start from 00:11:607 - end at 00:11:829 - (1/6) to follow the melody
- 00:11:968 (4) - overmap i guess
- 00:18:052 (5) - x:240 to make better flow with a movement and dash All sugestions applied, really helpful.
good luck ~ Thanks for the mod!
This should be ranked already, just a little mod.
[General]
[General]
- You can make Platter letter H, why not make Salad become letter N.
- 00:00:718 (2,3) - to make more advance movement move 00:00:718 (2) - this to x:384 & 00:01:052 (3) - this to x:336.
- 00:04:385 (1) - make this tail of this slider horizontal to the right at x:384.
- 00:29:052 (3) - same like above at x:384.
Topic Starter
SYAHME wrote:
This should be ranked already, just a little mod.
[General][Toothpaste]
- You can make Platter letter H, why not make Salad become letter N. I think the letter don't judge the diff xD.
- 00:00:718 (2,3) - to make more advance movement move 00:00:718 (2) - this to x:384 & 00:01:052 (3) - this to x:336.
- 00:04:385 (1) - make this tail of this slider horizontal to the right at x:384.
- 00:29:052 (3) - same like above at x:384. All suggestions applied.
Thanks for the mod
I usually don't mod this kind of maps, but you are my friend and I need some m4m lool so... I'll try to do it faster with general advices (it doesn't mean a mod with poor quality)
Cup
- Antes de empezar, no se como utilizas tus espaciados, los diferencias mediante cuadros o usas el referente a x? voy a suponer que usas ambos para no complicarte la vida, pero para tus proximos proyectos define eso bien, ya que formara parte de tu mapping style, y te lo digo porque hay notas y sliders que no forman parte de tu grid size, te dejare 00:00:052 (1,2) - como un ejemplo, si tratas de moverlos te daras cuenta que se adaptan al cuadro.
- Con referencia a los espaciados, para ser diff cup recomiendo usar solo dos tipos de distancias: Distancia normal y Distancia enfatizadora, la distancia normal es la distancia que se va a usar en la mayoria del mapa, esto hace que se vea muy ordenado y sin espacios random como en 00:14:052 -, no me explico porque usas 1.78x en 00:12:052 (1,2) - y luego usas 0.97x en 00:14:052 (2,3) - cuando 00:14:052 - y 00:15:385 - son sonidos literalmente iguales, la distancia enfatizadora es sin embargo la que le va a dar el toque de jump pero sin apretar el dash, me refiero a que si vas a usar una distancia normal de 0.70x o aproximado como 00:00:052 (1,2) - uses un 1.2x o aproximado ( puede ser mas como el 1.80x que has usado en este mapa, pero la diferencia entre 0.70x y 1.80x es muy grande imo, considera incrementar el 0.70x a 1.00x o baja el 1.80x a 1.40x o 1.20x ) para enfatizar sonidos fuertes como en 00:06:718 - que no has enfatizado o 00:17:385 (1,2) - que son mas notorios.
- 00:01:052 - olvidaste una nota ahi verdad? me resulta algo complicado ver como si la agregaste en 00:09:385 (1,2,3) -. Consistencia pls.
- 00:04:718 (1,2) - pienso que la estructura anda un poquito mal en esta parte ya que 00:06:718 - a mi parecer es un sonido muy fuerte para una diff cup que debio ser enfatizado, creo que el reverse debio ser primero y luego el slider, para eso te recomiendo presionar Ctrl+G en 00:04:718 (1,2) - solo en estructura, una vez lo tengas listo re acomoda tus sliders para que tengas un mejor flow, recuerda que la distancia entre 00:06:052 - y 00:06:718 - tiene que ser enfatizadora.
- 00:12:052 (1,2) - creo que te lo puse como ejemplo en el segundo punto general, considera acortar dicha distancia con algo muy similar a la distancia entre 00:14:052 (2,3) -
- 00:15:385 (3,4) - esperaba el jump en 00:16:052 -, al igual que un punto anterior ya mencionado creo que debes enfatizar ese sonido y para no hacer mas puntos repetitivos te dire que 00:24:718 (2) - tiene el mismo problema, porque no hiciste a todos como 00:32:718 (2,1) -? hubiera sido mas facil
- 00:17:385 (1,2) - estoy algo sorprendido, se supone que estos son los sonidos mas fuertes de todo el mapa, como minimo esperaba que usaras 1.80x como vi en otras partes, pero no, hiciste lo contrario, redujiste la distancia a 1.60x, necesitas un poco mas de orden, aprovecha que el mapa es corto y re-ajusta tus distancias nota por nota.
- 00:20:052 (1,2,3,4) - a travez de todo el mapa no vi que tomaras en cuenta a sonidos parecidos a 00:22:385 -, ( para que veas a lo que me refiero, el mismo sonido puede ser encontrado en 00:02:385 - 00:11:718 - 00:30:385 - y hay una carencia de dicha nota ) porque hacerlo aca? al principio lo interprete como variedad de patrones, pero una cosa muy distinta es seguir los mismos sonidos con diferente estructura como 00:09:385 (1,2,3) - y 00:28:052 (1,2,3,4) - a seguir sonidos que de por si decidiste no usarlo en los primeros patrones.
- esto no es del todo necesario pero considera agregar una linea verde en 00:38:718 - y ponle un volumen de 10%, cuando le vas a bajar el volumen a un spin, en mi opinion debe ser gradual, asi no sentiras el impacto de la reduccion brusca que tendra cuando espinees el ultimo platano, esto es mas general pero si lo aplicas a esta diff, aplicalo a todas tmb.
Salad
- Porque tu CS es 3? no se veria mejor si lo haces con un buen spread respect a las otras diffs, me refiero a que si tu cup es 2.5 y tu platter 4.5, lo mas logico seria una salad con 3.5 verdad?
- 00:00:052 (1,2,3) - no entiendo porque hay mas distancia entre 00:00:052 (1,2) - que entre 00:00:718 (2,3) - cuando el sonido mas alto incluyendo el eco esta en 00:01:385 -
- 00:02:274 (1) - para serte sincero me encanto y no suena mal, pero porque solo aqui? si lo haces solo aqui pierde su veracidad ya que todos los demas estan en 1/4, considera hacer los demas como en 00:11:607 - 00:20:940 - 00:30:274 - o de otro modo conviertelo en 1/4 y muevelo hacia 00:02:385 -
- Otra vez tus distancias dejan mucho que desear, siento que mapeaste al ojo y sin usar el Distance Snap, si 00:00:718 (2,3) - tenia 2.20x y se supone que 00:10:385 (2,3) - es el mismo patron con diferente estructura, porque solo 1.91x? peor aun si te doy el ejmplo de 00:00:052 (1,2) - donde tu distancia en 1/2 es 2.81x y en 00:00:052 (1,2) - es 1.35x, yo te recomiendo pedirle mod a Magic Bomb ya que el es el unico que mapea este tipo de canciones tan lentas y que te diga mas o menos como es que utiliza sus distancias.
- 00:12:052 (1,2,3) - mismo problema que en el primer punto orz, porque no hacer algo como 00:26:718 (4,5,1) - ?
- 00:21:385 (4,1) - eso esta casi apilado, incrementa las distancia un poco.
- 00:28:718 (2) - no puedes usar un reverse aqui porque hay un sonido fuerte que tiene que ser enfatizado con dash en 00:29:385 -
- Te recomiendo que la distancia entre 00:30:718 (1,2) - sea menor a la de 00:31:718 (2,3) -.
Trabaja mas tus distancias, hay muchas irregularidades que incluso no dejan modear propiamente ya que no se cuando es que usas distancias grandes y cuando usas distancias bajas.
Toothpaste
- 00:03:885 (5,6) - no hay necesidad de usar hyperdash ahi, ya que por consistencia no lo usaste en 00:13:218 (3,1) - ni en 00:22:552 (1,2) - y por ultimo ni siquiera enfatizaste el sonido poniendole un slider largo que le quito todo el ritmo ( 00:31:718 (4) - ), por eso te vuelvo a repetir, el mapeado lo siento bien, tu problema es la estructura y la consistencia, no es que yo sea un pro mapeando o modeando pero tengo conocimientos de otros modos, los cuales me han enseñado muchas cosas, el Taiko me enseño lo que es la consistencia no solo dentro de la dificultad si no dentro del set en si, y el standard me enseño a tener una buena estructura para poder seguir todas las melodias con buen sentido, para este mapa en particular te recomiendo lo siguiente, vamos a coger 00:02:052 (5,1,2) - como ejemplo de consistencia, siguiendo la musica, en 00:11:385 (2,3,1) - hay un patron identico verdad? pero ya que la cancion es corta, repetir dos patrones puede ser algo aburrido, vamos a dividir la cancion en 4 grupos, 1: 00:00:052 - 2: 00:09:385 - 3: 00:20:052 - 4: 00:28:052 -, la division nos ayuda a mantener una buena estructura con una mexcla entre variedad y consistencia a la vez, es decir, la estructura de 1 debe ser igual a la de 3, lo mismo con 2 y 4, actualmente tu estructura con respecto al ejemplo es 1 ( 00:02:052 (5,1,2) - ) igual a 2 ( 00:11:385 (2,3,1) - ) y 3 ( 00:20:718 (2,1,2) - ) igual a 4 ( 00:30:052 (6,1,2) - ), ahora ya sabes en lo que tienes que trabajar.
- 00:10:718 - sonido fuerte, se suponia que aqui deberia haber un hdash como en 00:01:052 (3,4) - o 00:19:885 (5,1) -, si vas a seguir un sonido fuerte con hdash una vez, estas condenado a usar el hdash para todo sonido identico, por eso no uses hdashes por cualquier lado.
- 00:18:385 (6) - tiene que estar un poco mas a la derecha, para asi poder crear un hdash que una a 00:18:385 (6,1) - al igual que 00:17:218 (2,3) -, en x:448 estaria bien.
- 00:29:385 (4,5) - seguiria mejor la musica si fuera un solo slider.
- 00:35:385 (1,2) - eso esta apilado, trata de buscar una forma en la que quede algo como 00:36:052 (3,4) -.
- Widescreen Support porfavor.
The main problem here is structure imo, you should work on it them re-arrange your distances. Best of Lucks bro, also before forget, you are good mapper, you don't need to map short and slow songs to find the speed-rank, anyways if you really like the song... I can't say anymore, cya.
My precious mod is gone forever.