1. Add more combo colour
2. Missing hitsound?

1. 00:03:175 (2) - 00:06:926 (4) - Remove NC
2. 00:25:207 - Add circle between slider - slider
3. 00:50:051 (1) - I think this spinner should end at 00:53:801 -
4. 01:05:051 (1) - I think newbie player will confused about this so try this
5. 01:06:926 (3) - Add clap at the end of slider
6. 01:18:176 (3) - Add clap at reverse arrow
7. 01:21:691 (1) - It's too short try to place slider instead

1. 00:03:176 (1,2,1) - Try this
2. 00:19:113 (2,3,1) - It's a agee triangle
3. 00:25:676 (4) - NC here
4. 00:48:176 (3) - Move to x:20 y:176 for blanket with 00:47:238 (2) -
5. 01:10:441 (3) - Move to x:60 y:292 for more flow
6. 01:35:051 (1,2) - Make them blanket

1. 00:22:863 (3,4,5) - It's a agee triangle
2. 00:25:676 (1,2) - Blanket?
3. 00:38:566 (2) - Move to x:140 y:276
4. 00:43:254 (2) - Move to x:384 y:268

1. 00:32:941 (1) - Try to Ctrl+G
2. 00:46:066 (6,1,2,3) - Try this

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1. could you make the combo colors more distinct? The two purples are pretty similar to each other, maybe try a purplish blue instead.
2. 00:08:332 - some feedback here would still be nice, maybe use a soft hitsound instead of muting?
3. 00:19:699 - I still hear a faint instrument sound, so no need to mute the sliderend. same thing at 01:34:699 -
4. 00:35:051 (1) - maybe rotate this -30 degrees and keep blanket. I feel 00:35:051 (1,2,3) - could use more emphasis than previous rhythms since the vocal intensity increases here
5. 00:38:801 (1) - I think you could add another hitsound in this section to follow the bass drum and only use the normal hitsound to follow the drums. The current hitsounding is a little bland.
6. 00:52:394 (2) - end this at 00:52:629 - and make 00:52:394 (2,1) - a bigger spacing for emphasis. there's no sound at the blue tick and it just plays strange
7. add claps in to offbeats in your kiai section? same thing with hard (you did it with easy and normal though)
8. 01:00:363 (3) - make this a kickslider to capture drum sound? same thing at 01:15:363 (3) -

1. 00:05:988 (5,1) - blanket is a little tight, would prefer 1.6 DS instead
2. 00:15:363 (3,1) - repeat makes me think that 00:16:301 (1) - should be on the left side of the map. Maybe break into 3 notes instead to represent the 3 instrument sounds?
3. 00:25:441 (4) - move to [269,266]? flow is rough compared to 00:28:957 (2,3,1) -
4. 00:34:582 (3,4,1) - make this angle flatter so it flows nicer into (1) ?
5. 00:36:926 (1) - ctrl+j? flow between 00:36:691 (3,1) - is pretty rough compared to your previous patterns
6. 00:41:730 (3) - starting 1/4 sliders on blue ticks isn't a good idea for a hard diff. I would recommend a simpler rhythm http://puu.sh/nucGK/07f4e8cd3d.jpg . same thing at 00:45:480 (3) -
7. 00:42:551 (1,2) - can you adjust these so 00:43:254 (2) - is a ctrl+j, ctrl+g from 00:42:551 (1) - ? would look better
8. 01:11:613 (6) - stack on slidertail of 01:09:738 (2) - ? I don't think DS is as important here since the strange angle between 01:11:144 (5,6) - adds emphasis

1. 00:48:176 (3) - 00:52:160 (4) - add NC?
2. looks fine

1. 00:12:082 (4) - maybe move to [348,169] so flowbreak is on the downbeat at 00:12:551 (1) - instead of at (4)
2. 00:16:301 (1,2) - just make these parallel, also helps improve flow to 00:18:176 (3) - http://puu.sh/nudli/56dc1a3603.jpg (just adjust (2) and reposition (3) a little)

MokouSmoke wrote:

from #modreqs
[Hard]

1. 00:05:988 (5,1) - blanket is a little tight, would prefer 1.6 DS instead done
2. 00:15:363 (3,1) - repeat makes me think that 00:16:301 (1) - should be on the left side of the map. Maybe break into 3 notes instead to represent the 3 instrument sounds? Breaking it into 3 notes could work I guess but I ended up just changed the position of the reverse slider
3. 00:25:441 (4) - move to [269,266]? flow is rough compared to 00:28:957 (2,3,1) - Changed the patterns for the verse, this time focusing more on the flow
4. 00:34:582 (3,4,1) - make this angle flatter so it flows nicer into (1) ?
5. 00:36:926 (1) - ctrl+j? flow between 00:36:691 (3,1) - is pretty rough compared to your previous patterns
6. 00:41:730 (3) - starting 1/4 sliders on blue ticks isn't a good idea for a hard diff. I would recommend a simpler rhythm http://puu.sh/nucGK/07f4e8cd3d.jpg . same thing at 00:45:480 (3) - I like your idea, ty
7. 00:42:551 (1,2) - can you adjust these so 00:43:254 (2) - is a ctrl+j, ctrl+g from 00:42:551 (1) - ? would look better I like the way it looks now
8. 01:11:613 (6) - stack on slidertail of 01:09:738 (2) - ? I don't think DS is as important here since the strange angle between 01:11:144 (5,6) - adds emphasis done

[Normal]

1. 00:48:176 (3) - 00:52:160 (4) - add NC? added
2. looks fine

[Easy]

1. 00:12:082 (4) - maybe move to [348,169] so flowbreak is on the downbeat at 00:12:551 (1) - instead of at (4) Nicely spotted! I moved it but to different cooridnates
2. 00:16:301 (1,2) - just make these parallel, also helps improve flow to 00:18:176 (3) - http://puu.sh/nudli/56dc1a3603.jpg (just adjust (2) and reposition (3) a little) didnt want to because reasons

Good luck!

Skeuddy wrote:

Hey

Muzukashii

1. 00:20:519 - Some note done
2. 01:23:683 - ^ Not really needed, and this would be too hard for a muzukashii wouldnt it..? Well it would certainly be pusshing it
3. 00:55:207 (5) to 00:55:090 Done, Also changed some things around with the patterns
4. 00:58:957 (16) to 00:58:840 ^
5. 01:10:207 (5) to 01:10:090 ^
6. 01:13:957 (16) to 01:13:840 ^

Diasios wrote:

[oko's Oni]

♦ 00:20:519 (84,86) - 84 d and 86 k did this differently by making 87 a k as well
♦ 00:39:855 (x) - Add d why lol nothing significant is there
♦ 00:41:496 (x) - ^
♦ 00:43:605 (x) - ^

Diasios wrote:

[General]

♦ Offset is off, try 1323. (don't forget to resnap everything)


[Easy]

♦ 00:03:175 (2) - This is the only diff without a new combo here, add it for consistency. fixed
♦ 00:49:113 (4) - Rotate this slider for a better flow: I like it my way, its more my style. Though I will admit your suggetsion makes more a lotsense. I'm being stubborn

SPOILER

♦ 00:50:051 (1) - What about ending this spinner at 00:52:394? sounds good


[Normal]

♦ 00:07:863 (2) - Rotate this slider 15°/20° for a better flow: (and maybe curve this slider 00:06:926 (1) a bit) looks nice, ty

SPOILER

♦ 01:09:738 (2) - Flip this slider horizontally and rotate it a little for a better flow: Very nice! It's so simple yet it works so much better than what I had originally

SPOILER

[Hard]

♦ 00:30:832 (3,4,1) - You could improve this pattern rotating the slider and moving it a bit up:

SPOILER

♦ 00:32:707 (3,4,1) - ^
♦ 00:56:613 (3) - Try to curve this slider downwards and see if you like it or not, I personally do: I kidna prefer it the old way

SPOILER

[Haitenai]

♦ Why did you call this diff Haitenai? I'd just call it Insane, if you really want something different then what about "Nyansane" or "Nynsane"? These sucks as well honestly but at least they let you understand which diff you are playing. I like haitenai. Ok so maybe adding Nyan or just keeping it as insane would probs be better but I wanna try my luck with haitenai, because, reasons
♦ I'd reduce AR a bit, 8 seems fine imo. 8.5 plays better imo
♦ 00:07:863 (2) - Flip this slider horizontally for a better flow: Nice ty

SPOILER

[Muzukashii]

♦ 00:39:972 (4,5) - both k I dunno if I want a kdd type of triplet but I am definitely considering it. I am trying to re arrange the patterns in this section to make this part easier but if not I'll go with this
♦ 00:43:957 (19) - k ^
♦ 01:08:097 (50) - ?

Lami wrote:

[General]

just let you know.

Inconsistency in combo colours:

[Easy]

00:50:051 (1,1) - too short recovery time after spinner. I moved the spinner
please wait to put circle until finish spinner.
example)
#1) 00:53:332 (1) - remove this
#2) 00:50:051 (1) - change to slider
#3) 00:53:332 (1) - move to center but im not sure whether this way is safe or not.

[Normal]

00:20:988 (2,3,1) - make better DS fixed
00:28:957 (3,1) - ^ fixed

01:02:941 - inconsistent rhythm in same music
compare with 00:55:441 (3) - and etc Thnx for spotting, fixed

01:38:801 (1) - not highly recommend like hard diff. but it's better rhythm imo. sorry but I don't know what you're trying to tell me

[Hard]

00:20:051 (1) - as 00:20:051 (1) - cool sound ok

01:34:933 (1) - ^ ^

00:38:215 (1,2) - swap rhythm. it's more comfortable for playingggg I disagree

01:22:863 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - well, this partten is extreamly harder than other partten.
consider to make easily.. This is intended as I do think the drum fill should be have a harder rhythm just like in the haitenai diff. However I have considered this and if someone else mentions it I will change 01:22:863 (3,4,5) into a reverse slider

1:38:801 (1) - recommend to use rhythm in highest diff. sure

[Haitenai]

really recommend to reduce to AR 8~8.2 reduced to 8.2
not reach in 4 stars. and below 130 bpms song.

00:15:480 - fill up this rhythm? as drum sound like 00:11:613 (3,4) - hmm I dunno, I'll think about this one

01:30:363 (3) - similar above issue ^

00:38:097 (4,5,6) - aa.. it's kinda uncomfortable for playing imo.
since other partten is really clear, except this...
swap this rhythm? 00:38:215 (5,6) - sure

00:52:980 (2,3) - increase DS as 00:53:332 (3) - is very very emphasis sound in this song. Increased DS

01:37:863 (3) - add NC? I didnt add it here to be conistent with 00:22:863 (3) , though the spinner maybe it would be a good idea to add a bit of hp for the players just before the final spinner. Something I'll ask a few other ppl

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enough good flow and placement in my eyes

CookieKivi wrote:

For M4M! ~
Will be a short mod.. ah, sorry. D:

[Normal]
00:07:863 (2) - Change the slider that it looks like this This sldier has been suggested for change so many times xD Anyways I changed it a different way
00:39:504 (2) - Try it like this http://puu.sh/nAqab.jpg

~

[Hard]
Try to fix this. A Hard diff can doesnt need to be DS the same for the whole map, the different DS are intentional

00:03:176 (1,2,3) - Ah, dat Overlap. I like this but you should change it. ;; I dont see why it needs to be changed

[Haitenai]
00:09:738 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/nAqsc.jpg How about that? Feels better while playing sure
00:10:676 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/nAqyW.jpg ^ ok
00:12:551 (1,2,3,4) - 1,2 http://puu.sh/nAqCI.jpg 3,4 http://puu.sh/nAqDM.jpg no change
01:01:301 (1) - Make it a bit more curvy no change

Meh, i hope this was helpful. -poofs-

1. 00:19:113 (31) - Change to d kd kd (the 2nd kd starting on the red tick) or d kd kkd
   
   
2. 00:29:894 (14) - Move to 00:29:777
   
   
3. 00:40:910 (8) - Add d and change 00:41:144 to k
   
   
4. 00:44:660 (22) - Same as ^
   
   
5. 00:46:301 (1) - The music is at almost the same density but this part gets suddenly easy? I get that it forms a buildup to the kiai, but add some notes
   
   
6. 01:20:285 (40) - Add k and ctrl+g 01:20:754 and 01:20:871
   
   
7. 01:21:926 (47) - MAYBE move to 01:21:808. Either way is fine imo
   
   
8. 01:23:801 (1) - Do all the same things from the beginning

1. 00:05:051 (4) - d kkdkd
   
   
2. 00:10:676 (21) - d
   
   
3. 00:14:894 (38) - ^
   
   
4. 00:18:176 (53) - ^
   
   
5. 00:55:207 (184) - ^
   
   
6. 00:57:082 (194) - ^
   
   
7. 00:57:551 (195) - k (combo broken )
   
   
8. 00:58:488 (200) - dk kd
   
   
9. 01:02:238 (218) - dkkdk? It's fine either way
   
   
10. 01:04:816 (232) - Add dk to make a dkd pattern (keeping this as a break is also fine)
    
    
11. 01:11:613 (266) - dk kk k ddk d dk kd k
    
    
12. 01:25:676 (335) - Same as Muzu
    
    
13. 01:29:894 (352) - ^
    
    
14. 01:33:176 (367) - ^

1. 00:06:691 (11) - ctrl+g with next note
   
   
2. 00:53:801 (228) - k or K
   
   
3. 00:57:551 (249) - ^ (but this one should probably be just k)

IntelliTroodon wrote:

Muzu:

1. 00:19:113 (31) - Change to d kd kd (the 2nd kd starting on the red tick) or d kd kkd done, I actually did this when I first mapped this because reasons xD
   
   
2. 00:29:894 (14) - Move to 00:29:777 done, I've also moved all the other notes. Nice ears I didnt know it was on the blue tick at all
   
   
3. 00:40:910 (8) - Add d and change 00:41:144 to k ok
   
   
4. 00:44:660 (22) - Same as ^ same
   
   
5. 00:46:301 (1) - The music is at almost the same density but this part gets suddenly easy? I get that it forms a buildup to the kiai, but add some notes I get waht you mean, I'll try to come up with a better rhythm
   
   
6. 01:20:285 (40) - Add k and ctrl+g 01:20:754 and 01:20:871 I'll do this for now but I'll come up with my own change later as the flow seems a little awkard
   
   
7. 01:21:926 (47) - MAYBE move to 01:21:808. Either way is fine imo Yh I think its best left alone as it is on the downbeat and the next part transfers over to the drums
   
   
8. 01:23:801 (1) - Do all the same things from the beginning done

Nice diff, just be careful to keep the difficulty and style(specifically which part of the music you focus on most) consistent, as any inconsistency in these ares will DESTROY any quality or playability, for a Muzu diff especially. I'll try