1. Advanced (3.09 stars, 261 notes)
2. Aliscea's 7K HD - 7Key (2.71 stars, 759 notes)
3. Aliscea's 4K HD - 4Key (2.45 stars, 690 notes)
4. Aliscea's 7K MX - 7Key (4.18 stars, 1107 notes)
5. Another (5.44 stars, 542 notes)
6. Beginner (1.13 stars, 94 notes)
7. Choc's Extra (5.3 stars, 559 notes)
8. Crowie's Hard (3.41 stars, 331 notes)
9. Insane (4.17 stars, 392 notes)
10. NTR8's Myosotis (5.39 stars, 555 notes)
11. Prof G. Light Myosotis (2.68 stars, 174 notes)
12. Standard (1.91 stars, 162 notes)
13. Yuri's Taiko Oni (4.25 stars, 659 notes)

Guest Diff

Crowie's Hard by ghostshipCrowie
Choc's Extra by -Chocola-
Yuri's Taiko Oni by bank78952
Prof G. Light Myosotis by Professor Gila (previously known as lidahapi)
NTR8's Myosotis by Newtoniorock8
Aliscea's 4K & 7K by AlisceaSparku

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

General

1. Disable countdown and widescreen support

Hyper

1. 00:07:125 (4,5) - Maybe make them symmetrical fixed
2. 00:25:875 (4) - 00:26:625 (6) - ^ ^
3. 00:28:500 (5) - Maybe add a shape to this slider for a better flow I made it to a curve now
4. 00:34:312 (6) - Rotate by -15° or push it down a bit push it down
5. 00:35:062 (7,8,1) - Overlap better with 00:34:312 (6) - hope its fixed now
6. 00:36:750 (5,6) - idk if intended but it's not making a straight line is it straight now?
7. 00:38:250 (9,10) - You can do a better blanket imo I adjust the blanketting a bit
8. 00:38:625 (10) - Cut it in the middle a put a circle here 00:39:000 - instead fixed
9. 00:42:375 (3) - 00:43:125 (5) - a bit more symmetrical? (nazi) not sure what the nazi mean .-. , but I adjust 00:43:125 (5)
10. 00:46:500 (1) - 00:47:250 (3) - ^ hopefully its fixed now
11. 00:48:562 (1,2,3) - Weird note placement for 1 and 2 changed to 00:48:562 (6)
12. 00:53:250 (11,12,1) - You can do a better blanket imo its a jump tho :\
13. 01:00:000 (7) - 01:00:750 (9) - ^ (but up to you for this one) I adjust it a bit but not gonna rotate it
14. 01:12:750 (4,5) - More symmetrical fixed
15. 01:14:718 (2,3,4) - Hmm a bit weird but why not idk it look fine for me
16. 01:33:937 (5,6) - Symmetrical? fixed
17. 01:39:375 (1,2,3,4) - idk if it's necessary in a Hyper diff it may be too hard but up to you I change it to kickslider
18. 01:42:750 (7,1) - Better blanket I think its fine, but im gonna adjust it a bit

Another

1. 00:18:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Wow that may be too fast what about some kicksliders? I tried using kickslider, it doesnt end good :\ (its 1/6 stream so i think its fine )
2. 00:40:750 (2,3,4) - That note placement is a bit weird some people could misread it I adjust it a bit
3. 01:06:000 (1) - Blanket or overlap with 01:05:250 (1) - I prefer blanket
4. 01:11:249 (7) - 01:11:625 (9) - Better blanket fixed
5. 01:23:250 (1,2,3,4) - Stuff like this is really hard to hit/read why not add some fast sliders instead? I figured this sounds weird with circles, hopefully the slider will look good
6. 01:31:031 (3,1,2,3) - Change it into a diagonal or something because a straight vertical line like this is almost impossible to hit after this slider hopefully i dont make it worse
7. 01:43:125 (8,1) - Better blanket this feel familliar
8. 01:53:250 (3) - 01:53:625 (1) - Collides, try to move the sliderend a bit to the right oh, i didnt see that. fixed

Nice map/song overall, good luck!

• 01:12:000 (1,2,3,4) - It's not advisable to put two Kiai times close with such little gap. This part of the song, in my opinion, is not really that climatic. The next Kiai time is more suited for it.
  02:04:500 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part of the song isn't very "Kiai" so to speak, haha. Kiai time is used for climatic or exciting parts of the song.

  The most common term for Kiai Time when editing beatmaps is the "strongest part of the song" this is normally the chorus of the song, however some songs don't have a chorus, but they do have a strong part for you that feels cool, so you could insert Kiai Time in that section. Be advised however that spamming kiai start sections will cause a spam in kiai fountains. That is unrankable, and mostly hated by players because of the lag it may cause. -From osu!wiki

  But it's up to you.

• 00:12:750 (3,1) - A spinner in this break would be fun Maybe a few seconds before the 00:19:500 (1) note.
  01:02:625 (1) - This one note disrupts the connecting melody of the song by touching the previous slider.
  01:03:000 (2) - This slider after 01:02:625 (1) will be better off a little bit down there once you move the previous note from under that slider. In combination with the previous note, this will make a smooth "slanting line" like a staircase, which adds to the feel of the beatmap
  01:12:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Like in the Beginner diff, the Kiai here doesn't suit this section of the song :/
  02:04:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Like in the Beginner diff (again), the Kiai here doesn't suit this part of the awesome song.
  02:07:500 (6) - This slider sounds off. I suggest you make it a little longer to match the long vocal part of the song OR you can shorten it to 02:07:875 to keep the incoming spinner and to keep the whole thing nice and on-beat

AnTracius wrote:

Please delete this :3

AnTracius wrote:

Hey there! I'm from #modreq

Beginner

• 01:12:000 (1,2,3,4) - It's not advisable to put two Kiai times close with such little gap. This part of the song, in my opinion, is not really that climatic. The next Kiai time is more suited for it. I actually think this part is climatic enough (I'll see to it when everyone say i have to changed it). also for the gap, I know it will cause some distraction (especially taiko), but i think its fine. Its not like i put the kiai gap in 1 tick
  02:04:500 (1,2,3,4,1) - This part of the song isn't very "Kiai" so to speak, haha. Kiai time is used for climatic or exciting parts of the song.

  The most common term for Kiai Time when editing beatmaps is the "strongest part of the song" this is normally the chorus of the song, however some songs don't have a chorus, but they do have a strong part for you that feels cool, so you could insert Kiai Time in that section. Be advised however that spamming kiai start sections will cause a spam in kiai fountains. That is unrankable, and mostly hated by players because of the lag it may cause. -From osu!wiki

  But it's up to you.^

This is all for Beginner

Standard

• 00:12:750 (3,1) - A spinner in this break would be fun Maybe a few seconds before the 00:19:500 (1) note. A long spinner would be too much for normal, i think
  01:02:625 (1) - This one note disrupts the connecting melody of the song by touching the previous slider. fixed
  01:03:000 (2) - This slider after 01:02:625 (1) will be better off a little bit down there once you move the previous note from under that slider. In combination with the previous note, this will make a smooth "slanting line" like a staircase, which adds to the feel of the beatmap ^
  01:12:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Like in the Beginner diff, the Kiai here doesn't suit this section of the song :/ see the beginner mod
  02:04:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Like in the Beginner diff (again), the Kiai here doesn't suit this part of the awesome song. ^
  02:07:500 (6) - This slider sounds off. I suggest you make it a little longer to match the long vocal part of the song OR you can shorten it to 02:07:875 to keep the incoming spinner and to keep the whole thing nice and on-beat have to agree with this one

That's about it for the Standard difficulty. Everything else feels right and on-beat. I'll edit this if I find anything else

~AnTracius

[list]00:12:750 (3,1) - A spinner in this break would be fun Maybe a few seconds before the 00:19:500 (1) note. A long spinner would be too much for normal, i think

AnTracius wrote:

[list]00:12:750 (3,1) - A spinner in this break would be fun Maybe a few seconds before the 00:19:500 (1) note. A long spinner would be too much for normal, i think

I'm not talking about a long spinner, haha. A short one could do it Anything to feel that long empty gap between sections since it's very playable, actually. But I'll leave you to your choice

ghostshipCrowie wrote:

hii I'll take a GD for Hard diff

Edit: I think you should rename your Hyper diff to Insane or Hard, it seems more like an insane map than hyper..
I'll be making my diff easier than this one if you don't mind :3

sullywally wrote:

ghostshipCrowie wrote:

hii I'll take a GD for Hard diff

Edit: I think you should rename your Hyper diff to Insane or Hard, it seems more like an insane map than hyper..
I'll be making my diff easier than this one if you don't mind :3

Ok, I'll be waiting for the Hard diff then

Also, actually some map named their insane diff with Hyper (This one for example, https://osu.ppy.sh/b/369868&m=0), so I guess this is one of them...

ghostshipCrowie wrote:

still, since you want both a hard diff and insane, and I'm going to make the GD easier than Hyper diff, I suggest you to change the name

XinCrin wrote:

Current background doesn't fit song (at least lyrics)

xLolicore- wrote:

Can I make an Extra GD? o:

Zaven wrote:

This is my first mod and I don't have a ranked map yet, so take what I say with a grain of salt.
I saw your message on #modreq and decided to give it a shot!
Feel free to message me if you need me to clarify anything.

The majority of the issues I found were during the main Kiai section, mostly having to due with making it more intuitive to read.

Another:

SPOILER

00:38:125 (2) - The timing here caught me off guard, maybe a slider replacing the two notes would make this more intuitive? will not change to slider, but i adjust it so its easier to read, also the DS would probably make it obv. its 1/6
00:45:750 (1) - Personally I feel that a slider speed change should only be used if there is something in the music that indicates it. Some ranked maps that I've seen do this though, so I'm not sure. (on second thought it might be the tone of her voice) you already state the reason
00:55:375 (4) - The second note in the combo matches the music, but the 4th one feels unnecessary there's actually 1/6 beat in it (infact 00:55:062 and 00:55:437 also have a beat, but i decide to not add it, to avoid overmap)
01:01:125 (1) - The spacing on the notes in this stream is shorter than the stream just before it, I think those two should have the same.
01:24:375 (2) - The sound that this is following begins before the slider doesfixed
01:26:531 (4) - There are three beats in the music but only two hereI wont be following the beat on the background for this pattern
01:30:937 (1) - I feel like this being a slider, and the slider right after being replaced with a normal note would match the music betterfixed
01:40:031 (1) - This part is cool but the music doesn't seem to indicate the jumpswill keep this part, it fits imo
01:49:500 (1) - I feel like the curve on this slider should curve around the previous note. Maybe move it down and to the right a little and increase the depth of the curve.I guess what you mean is blanket (?), if so fixed
01:45:250 (3) - Maybe using some sliders at this part will make it more intuitive. Or just a triplet, since (check next comment) change the 1/6 beat to 1/4 beat, but
01:53:531 (4) - This has the same violin sound as the previous comment but uses a different timing pattern. I prefer this one.this and above are not the same
02:04:500 (1) - The piano starts playing before (2) and (3) come to match it, perhaps this one should be similar to those actually 02:04:500 (1,2,3,4) doesnt follow the piano (listen carefully)
02:05:250 (4) - Same as above comment^

Insane:

SPOILER

00:04:125 (3) - Perhaps move this out from underneath the previous note so it's a little easier to read.adjusting it a bit
00:06:000 (2) - Same thing as previous here.^
00:12:750 (1) - Maybe move this to the left to keep spacing consistent.I made it overlap instead, since its actually wasnt meant to be a jump
00:22:125 (5) - I think that the spacing of (5) and (6) should be increased a bit for consistency.fixed, i think...
00:54:375 (2) - This and the next few notes don't seem to match the rhythm of the music. I'm not sure why 1/12 time was used here.I dont know what im thinking when i made this XP
01:14:718 (2) - Use a consistent distance snap for this stream. (Maybe turn off grid snap for it if that caused the problem?) this actually was to made it easier to read(theres never a stream moving to a spinner i think), but since you point it a bit weird, I'll correct the distance
01:18:750 (1) - I think this should be sped up to be the same as the next few notes.think of it as the start of the dubstep part
01:20:250 (2) - The music has a beat on the red tick inside this slider. Maybe shorten the slider and add something so it matches better.i dont want an insane to have every beat mapped, its also to make it same with previous slider that have 3/4 length
01:22:875 (3) - Maybe replace this with two small sliders instead of one. I feel that it would match the music better.adjust everything so the kickslider could land into the stream
01:24:187 (7) - My guess is that you're trying to match the roar-like sound that plays here, but the slider starts before the sound does. Perhaps shorten it and have it start on the following blue tick.fixed
01:25:500 (5) - The previous note makes it sound like it's trying to match the high pitched sound in the music, but this doesn't match that. Perhaps shortening the slider and having it start on the next blue tick would sound better.fixed
01:26:250 (9) - The previous two sliders match the drum beat, but this suddenly doesn't. Maybe replace it with two smaller sliders.changed it and the beat doesnt follow the drum (it never was intended, actually)
01:28:031 (4) - I'm not sure how to describe what I mean exactly but this part doesn't seem to match with the music well, in my opinion.well.. I think i forget to change this one, fixed
01:31:500 (5) - I think this slider should be shortened and begin on the next blue tick.i shorten the slider, but the beat still start in white tick
01:32:250 (9) - This would be a nice spot for a mini stream instead of a slider.fixed
01:36:375 (7) - I think that this should start half a beat earlier, and then add a note on the red tick after it.imo it start in blue tick, but thanks for pointing it out
01:36:750 (1) - I think this should be removed and the two sliders following it should be moved up to it's place. (then a bit of shuffling with the next few notes to go with the change)i only change the 2 slider, and remove the circle

Advanced:

SPOILER

00:55:875 (2) - I think this should be moved just slightly closer to the previous note for consistency.fixed, along with the other note
00:57:000 (6) - The curve on this slider should be deepened slightly so it curves around the previous note.fixed
01:23:625 (10) - Maybe replace this with a slider half as big, and then add a note after to match the beat a bit better.i think i'll keep this
01:24:281 (1) - I'm not sure what to recommend for this part. I feel like this slider should be made a bit bigger so that it starts with the timing of the 'roar' like sound, but that would mean that the timing might be tough to read.this made me think for a bit, for now i'll keep it in the blue tick, and adjust the spacing, but if anyone complain, I'll probably put it in white tick again
01:36:375 (2) - Same as previous comment.^

Standard:

SPOILER

01:15:000 (1) - The start of this should be spaced farther away from (5) for consistency. I'm not the best with slider art myself, but see if you can play with it a bit to make it look neater. Maybe something like this?
i've fixed it for the sake of consistency, and also avoiding the circle to collide with the slider, but i made the end of slider look awfully weird XD

Beginner:

SPOILER

00:25:500 (1) - I think that the curve on this slider could be adjusted slightly so that it curves around the previous note.i fixed the starting curve a bit, so it wont curve ugly
00:39:750 (1) - Consider adjusting the shape of this slider a bit so that it curves around the next noteI really want to but im afraid i couldnt change it
00:46:500 (3) - The shape of this slider can be adjusted a little bit too so that it curves evenly with the next note.^
00:54:000 (5) - Rotate this to the right by around 10 degrees.how does one rotate 10 degree (?) anyway hopefully this one suits better

Zaven wrote:

This is my first mod and I don't have a ranked map yet, so take what I say with a grain of salt.
I saw your message on #modreq and decided to give it a shot!
Feel free to message me if you need me to clarify anything.

The majority of the issues I found were during the main Kiai section, mostly having to due with making it more intuitive to read.

Crowie's Hard:

SPOILER

01:23:062 (8) - Perhaps move this out from underneath the previous note for ease of reading. check.
01:25:593 (8) - This should have consistent spacing with the previous mini stream. Also, consider removing the note before it, moving this slider up by a tick and then increasing the reverses by one. check.
01:26:250 (10) - Perhaps remove this note, move the slider next to it forward by a tick and increasing the reverses by one. check.
01:27:187 (14) - Maybe move this out from under the previous for ease of reading. check.
01:31:125 (4) - I'm not sure how to describe it but this little section before the bigger slider feels off. not sure what you want me to do here but I did change it a little.
01:32:250 (10) - Perhaps remove this note, and move the slider after it up by one tick. Then, make it reverse once more. check.