General

1. idk if the title's correct but seems like there's ranked version of it: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/329268
2. 全diff没有音效，没音效是unrankble的，加上吧。
3. 各种tag也加进去。

Seal

1. 00:07:548 (5) - nc。建议你全图nc过一遍，在downbeat处下nc就行，目前这个样子nc非常乱。
2. 00:13:404 (6) - 这个应该是1/1滑条才对吧。。。
3. 00:15:235 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里太空了，建议加几个滑条或者note。。。00:33:780 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同理。
4. 00:24:141 (3,4,5) - 莫名的大间距，建议改小或者换梗。
5. 00:24:751 (1,2) - 这里1/2跳居然这么小，明明刚才1/6间距都那么大的说，建议改大。
6. 00:31:340 (6) - 这个ds太近了，建议放到117,78那种位置，打起来顺手点。
7. 00:37:563 (5,6) - 这种1/4又跳的大的不行，建议别这么搞233.。。
8. 间距控制还要好好琢磨一下。

Normal

1. 00:03:156 top diff从这里开始map的，所以下面diff也需如此。
2. 00:16:333 (3,4) - 不包吗？
3. 00:26:582 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 不要在低难度里放那么多连续note。
4. 00:31:706 (5) - 掰弯？

Easy

1. 全图nc过一遍，比如00:20:725 (3) - 就能nc了，别连太长combo count。

1. 00:40:491 - 轉盤可以5% volume

1. 這麼簡單的Easy，個人覺得sv有點大
2. 沒什麼問題但是有些需要注意的地方，以後可以用到
3. 00:17:797 (1,2,3,4) - 盡量避免這樣的小範圍繞圈
4. 00:21:457 (4,5) - 盡量避免這樣逆向的flow

1. 00:26:582 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 雖然音樂是這樣的但是單點太多了不適合出現在Normal里

1. 沒有什麼大問題但是一些距離的細節沒有處理好，這個diff應該只是普通hard的級別所以不應該出現不必要的讀圖梗。
2. 00:04:986 (5,6) - 看這個距離和00:05:352 (7,1) - 這個距離，再對應看一下時間軸上的距離，你就知道我想說什麼了，這種diff里總體上空間距離和時間距離成正比，除了少數的讀圖梗以外。
3. 00:19:261 (5,6,7) - ^
4. 00:36:830 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:24:141 (3,4,5) - 這是整個diff里唯一一個難梗，這樣就讓diff的整體難度不平均，而且這裡的音樂也不特別，不支持這麼放。

1. 00:19:261 (2) - why don't use same shape in 00:21:457 (2)?
2. 00:23:653 (1) - could improve curve better ? like in 00:25:849 (3)?

1. 00:29:510 (1) - missing add clap in end

1. 00:03:156 (1) - the end point, could move down little to better align with 00:03:888 (2), just for good flow
2. 00:05:352 (1) - could remove NC, the song is "continue"
3. 00:04:620 (3,1) - the spacing could keep 1.20x, is don't make sense because there no song low or something, the song is keep high 1.20x still better
4. 00:10:476 (3,4) - my view the blanket is off
5. 00:20:725 (1,2) - could use same shape then fix DS and flow like this http://puu.sh/lP6L7/1dfc3b627f.jpg this could improve gameplay

1. 00:19:627 (6) - could use same shape in 00:18:895 (4), then fix DS 1.80x like other parts
2. 00:21:091 (3,4,5) - this could make jump because vocal high then next object 00:22:067 (6,7), vocal stop the song back to normal, you did other parts, you make jump when vocal is high like in 00:09:378 (3,4) and many more, this part need change IMO

1. Add finish in 00:06:084 in all diffs

1. 00:15:601 (2) - Try to place it lower, the current angle between head and tail is too sharp, something like 00:20:725 (1,2) will be good

1. 00:05:718 (6) - Ctrl+g this will be nice. the current distance is too far in my opinion