1. Aldwych's Easy (1,48 stars, 97 notes)
2. HOS' Hard (3,03 stars, 225 notes)
3. Normal (2,21 stars, 148 notes)

Kotori-Chan wrote:

from modreqs~

General~ distance snap and easy must be used in both diffs D:
so check aimod and fix stuff ;w; okay, I thought I spaced properly, gonna look at that again

Easy

00:13:517 (3,4,1,2) - change this pattern,it just feels boring and doesnt really suit well don't know to what

01:01:870 (4,5) - dont stack stuff in easy diffs done

01:06:811 (1,2) - weird blanket done

01:17:399 (1,2,3,1) - this might be a bit too hard for an easy diff,unstack these object and make them more clear done

01:22:341 (1) - blanket with 01:23:399 (2) - ? done I guess

Normal

Normals must be 2*+ D:

00:05:752 (2) - delete this note,its just unnecessary nope, there is a beat

00:21:635 (1,2,3,4) - feels kinda boring,maybe try to add a slider done

00:36:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this clearer and easier to read nah, I like that :3

00:44:929 (3) - i think you can improve this blanket a bit more changed

00:47:399 (1,2) - move these two a bit down yeah, why not


well good luck with the map :3 Thankyou very much

1. 00:06:988 (1,2,3,1,2,3) Any reason these are different than 00:01:241 (1,2,3,1,2,3)?
2. 00:08:047 (3,1) Delete NC, put at 00:09:105
3. 00:12:458 Delete NC
4. 00:26:223 Delete NC, put NC on 00:25:870
5. 00:36:105 (1,2,3,4,5) This pattern is a little confusing for normal diff.
6. 00:44:929 (3,4,5) Flow is wierd here, Rotate 4/5 so 4 starts below 3
7. 00:52:752 (1,1) You need way more space after a spinner on Normal diff. At least 2 beats. Delete 1 and you should be ok
8. 01:05:047 (1,1) You need more space after a spinner on Normal diff. At least 2 beats. Delete 1 and you should be ok
9. 01:22:341 (1,1,2) Flow is wierd. Maybe put 1 near top right corner and flip the last combo horizontal and vertical so start of this combo is in bottom right quadrant

1. 00:00:105 (1,2,3,4,5) Consistant spacing please
2. Dunno why you shot stars at this without it being finishe

Hiicantpk wrote:

Mod from chat/otherwise



Normal

1. 00:06:988 (1,2,3,1,2,3) Any reason these are different than 00:01:241 (1,2,3,1,2,3)? wut? xD
2. 00:08:047 (3,1) Delete NC, put at 00:09:105 done
3. 00:12:458 Delete NC ^^^
4. 00:26:223 Delete NC, put NC on 00:25:870 ^^^
5. 00:36:105 (1,2,3,4,5) This pattern is a little confusing for normal diff. I wanna keep it, let's see what BN will say in some time
6. 00:44:929 (3,4,5) Flow is wierd here, Rotate 4/5 so 4 starts below 3 changed
7. 00:52:752 (1,1) You need way more space after a spinner on Normal diff. At least 2 beats. Delete 1 and you should be ok done
8. 01:05:047 (1,1) You need more space after a spinner on Normal diff. At least 2 beats. Delete 1 and you should be ok ^^^
9. 01:22:341 (1,1,2) Flow is wierd. Maybe put 1 near top right corner and flip the last combo horizontal and vertical so start of this combo is in bottom right quadrant I flipped vertical and rotated

Hard

1. 00:00:105 (1,2,3,4,5) Consistant spacing please there was no problem
2. Dunno why you shot stars at this without it being finishe You know why? (look down)

With time this could be a really good ranked map. Keep at it. <- that why!

Thankyou very very much

1. I'm pretty sure the actual bpm is 85, not 170, but since it's just doubled I don't know if you need to fix this.
   try asking some BNs maybe? They should know.
2. the combo colours match the background, but using some more intense colours might look even better?
   Idk, I just thought they were very boring to look at because they looked exactly like the bg.
   I'd try these colours, maybe you like them?

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 241,184,50
   Combo2 : 215,64,151
   Combo3 : 128,218,97
   Combo4 : 35,207,243

1. 00:13:517 (3,4,1,2) - beginner players can't tap cosistently very well, so many clickable objects in a row is very uncomfortable to play for them. To avoid that, you can replace patterns like this with two short sliders or if the song provides the beats circle + slider + circle, or reverse slider + circle, or many more stuff, where players don't have to click each beat.
2. 00:16:694 (1) - listen closely, the downbeat is pretty strong here (the long white line), so it shouldn't be ignored. I'm not saying that downbeats should be cklickable in general. In the beginning for exmaple they're not much different from the other sounds, sometimes even weaker, but later in the song there are many strong loud downbeats that are unstressed atm.
3. 00:26:576 (1,2,1,2) - the movement makes this kinda uncomfortable to play, cause it's so straight up-down-up-down. In Easy diffs (and preferably in Normals, too), movement should be smoother (imo), so players can focus on the rhythm and don't have to struggle with this. Of course some sharp movements are okay, but the amount should be reduced, and if possible they can be used to accent extremely strong beats (like start of Kiai or end for example).
4. 00:44:929 (3) - overlapping sliderends can look very beautiful, but are too confusing for the easiest diff. so try to avoid them

1. all fine. probably. ^-^

1. there are still overlaps that make the diff uncomfortable to play/read for beginner players. I can only repeat my suggestion to increase DS, up to you.
2. 00:00:105 (1,2) - beat in-between still should be emphasized. short slider with reverse?
3. 00:01:517 (3) - there is still absolutely no beat where this slider starts. and no vocals either. But since you didn't change this with the last mod I don't know what to do about it.. maybe you should look for some newbie testplayers and ask them about how they feel about these rhythms..
4. 00:03:635 (4) - here, there's no beat on the sliderhead and no beat on the slidertail, so what is this mapped to?!
   Mentioned this before already, too, so I don't know what to suggest to improve this.
5. 00:05:752 (2,3) - same suggestions as here 00:00:105 (1,2) -, beat in-beatween should be mapped
   also, (2) is placed rather far down. it overlaps heavily with the default hit metre, so it'd be better to move it further up. (If it were a slidertrack it wouldn't bother me at all, but since it's a single circle and huge parts of it are covered.. meh)
6. 00:07:164 (4) - same as for 00:01:517 (3) -
7. 00:09:282 (1) - no beat here, either. there are beats on the red tick before and after, but not on the white tick.
8. 00:09:988 (2) - same as before, placed too far down
9. 00:12:811 (2) - there's no beat, there shouldn't be a clickable object
   In case you're trying to map to vocals - most other objects don't match to the vocals and switching between vocals and beat feels rather weird, especially for beginner players. they can't know by looking at the objects what sound to follow, so it's better to stick to either beat or vocals, but not both in lower difficulties. And a circle doesn't match the vocals 100%, they go on so it should be a slider instead
10. 00:15:988 (3) - again, there's no beat here. :/ (if it's vocals: should be a slider instead)
11. 00:21:282 (3) - no beat, no vocals. why is there a circle here?
12. 00:23:752 (2) - slider ends on nothing, should be longer or shorter by 1/2 beat
    --- honestly, there are too many objects mapped to nothing.. I mentioned this before, but since you didn't give any reason for keeping these objects, I can't help you. Sorry about that. :c
    -
    continuing with other stuff.
13. try to get an overall look over your diff ( http://puu.sh/lpiR3.jpg ), just press ctrl + A. notice how all of your objects are cluttered around the centre? it's even more noticeable while playing the diff that you don't use all of the playfield, which makes the diff more boring than it has to be. try to spread the objects more?
14. 00:13:517 (3,1,2,3,1) - movement could be improved. you could curve (1) and place (2) differently to round out the movement. http://puu.sh/lpiPC.jpg
15. 00:37:870 (1) - too close to the previous object. might not be much of an issue cause there's some time between the object. but still, for consistency it'd be better to adjust this.
16. 01:20:929 (3,1) - objects are on screen at the same time so DS should be fixed here. otherwise it's too confusing
    also (1) shouldn't overlap with 01:23:399 (2) - , that's too confusing as well :c

• overall look: http://puu.sh/lpk4c.jpg already mentioned this in Easy, so just as a reminder: use the playfield!

1. overall note: there are too many circles in a row, it's sometimes too much for a Normal diff and sometimes just doesn't match the music. since it's the same stuff as in Easy I won't point them out, so apologies if the mod turns out short. :c
2. 00:05:576 (1,2,3,4) - first red tick is mapped, but the following aren't, which makes this weird to play. it's the exact same sound, so the other beats should be mapped just like the first. to simplify the rhythm you could try short sliders for (2,3)
3. 00:11:223 - there should be a circle here, since it's the same rhythm as ^
   the following pattern has so many circles already, tho, so it'd be better to switch that up (talking about 00:11:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
4. 00:12:988 - should be mapped, too, imo.
5. 00:36:811 (3,4,5) - unreadable for this difficultyl level, unstack them?
6. 00:55:870 (1) - start of Kiai is the most dominant beat here, so it should be clickable.

1. overall look: http://puu.sh/lpk0M.jpg .. hm. :/
2. same issue about overlaps. not as much as in lower diffs, but it still feels better if players hoave to move between objects.
3. 00:00:811 (5) - slider doesn't work here because the sound stops and another one starts. this should be two circles.
4. 00:12:988 (5) - doesn't feel natural to play, try two short sliders instead?
5. 00:14:576 (4) - feels weird to have so many objects mapped to so many beats (or not) and here you ignore all of them.. probably better to split this up
   same goes for many more sliders, example: 00:19:870 (4) - 00:21:458 (3) - 00:25:517 (1) - . try to look for them yourself.
   --- welp, the stuff I pointed out in the other diffs just repeats itself. and there's no need to write everything twice.. xD you should know by now what to fix, if you want to.

Squirrel wrote:

hey there!
mod as per request :3
ofc I'm just making suggestions, so feel free to disagree!

General

1. I'm pretty sure the actual bpm is 85, not 170, but since it's just doubled I don't know if you need to fix this.
   try asking some BNs maybe? They should know. HERE https://songbpm.com/moxiie/anyway
2. the combo colours match the background, but using some more intense colours might look even better?
   Idk, I just thought they were very boring to look at because they looked exactly like the bg.
   I'd try these colours, maybe you like them?

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 241,184,50
   Combo2 : 215,64,151
   Combo3 : 128,218,97
   Combo4 : 35,207,243

   gonna keep mine :3

Easy
Tbh, I think this diff needs some more work. It doesn't feel like the map matches the song, it's just clicking objects with nice background music. :c
Sorry if this sounds rude to you, that's just my opinion. And I'm not saying that it's bad in general, it's just lacking some basics here and there, that easily can be added. :3 I dont think so

• 
  [General]

1. Check you AIMod, you got unsnapped timing points
2. You can increase volume on kiai
   
   [Easy]
   
3. I think you should use 1.0 DS so notes will not overlap
4. Start your diff from 00:11:399 - , becuase previous part doesnt follow the rhytm at all
5. 00:13:517 (3,1) - make them perpendicular
6. 00:18:811 (3) - Add reverse arrow (and reposition other notes)
7. 00:23:752 (2) - ^
8. 00:40:340 (4) - make something like this: http://scr.hu/1ks5/odtvt
   
   [Normal]
   
9. 00:05:576 (1,2,3,4) - This is really confusing for new players because they hear constant beat here abnd you skipped some of them. You can convert 00:05:752 (2,3,4) - into a reverse slider
10. 00:10:517 (2,3) - stack them, or covert into a slider
11. 00:53:399 - Add note here
    
    [Hard]
    
12. I think that slider velocity should be faster
13. 00:03:458 (3,3) - stack them
14. 01:12:811 (2) - ctrld + G
15. 00:08:046 (3,3,3) - Place NC on them instaed of 00:08:400 (1,1,1) -
16. 00:16:164 (3) - stack it on 00:16:340 (4) -
    
    [reanik's Insane]
    
17. 00:00:105 (1,2,1,2) - This beginning is a bit too extreme
18. 00:29:046 (5) - Place it at x: 70 y: 119
19. 00:38:928 (5,6) - Make them parallel
20. 00:40:340 (2) - If this is a blanket then its a bit off
21. 00:43:163 (3,5) - Overlap
22. 01:02:928 (2) - Move it to x: 359 y: 274
23. 01:07:340 (3,5) - Overlap
24. 01:10:163 (6) - Ctrl + G, it would create a nice patttern
25. 00:18:281 (3) - Please change this shape, should be more edgy so it would fit to 00:17:575 (1,2) -

DzyreLkp wrote:

Mod req hahaha c:

Insane

[*]00:05:575: fix distance snap Done
[*]01:00:457 (5) This slider ta areas: what the fuck is this slide? Gonna be blunt. Do not curse in a mod. It's just rude, and quite frankly, makes you look bad. Just a word of advice.
[*]rate tick: 1 Let me have a word with the main mapper, so I know it's not just this diff that's getting changed,
[*]circle size: 4 Not changing this

GOOD LOOKS!!!!!! xDDDDDDD



My first mod req, sorry some errors in code.

Term Akatski wrote:

from my queue M4M

Easy
00:01:517 (3,4) - fix blanket done some rotating
00:03:635 (4,1) - fix blanket seems fine
00:10:694 (3,1) - fix blanket ^
00:20:576 (2,4) - blanket this one slightly changed
00:49:163 (1) - change slider shape done
00:56:929 (2) - move to x:220 y:188 though i see what you did there and it looks great, distance snap is not forgiving, meh... can't do it

Normal
since osu is a rhythm game sensible rhythm is important
and this is normal diff so....
00:12:987 - add hit cirlce here doesn't sound cool for me
00:17:046 - add hit cirlce here following voice
00:17:752 - add hit cirlce here i like that one though, added
00:19:516 - add hit cirlce here ^
00:21:635 (1) - move to 00:21:457 nah...
00:23:046 - add hit circle here approved
00:32:752 - add hit circle sounds kinda... awful :c
00:49:870 (2,3) - fix blanket looks good to me
01:00:104 - hitcircle cool, yet
01:01:516 - hit circle ^
01:13:516 - hit circle nice ^^
01:19:869 - hit circle yup

Hard
00:52:870 (1) - shorten slider and add a hitcircle at the end k.
00:53:576 (3) - remove nah, gonna map that beat, doesn't matter what space there is in front of a spinner
00:53:752 (1) - move to 00:53:575 gonna follow that one beat that kind of pauses the drums
01:16:693-01:17:222 - map here i want the player to have a little pause, due to the point that rhythm changes, i put a circle though that the one drum in that break is mapped

Good luck thankyou very much, you improved the map a lot ^^ ♥