Skeuddy wrote:

Hello, Shiroi Hiroshi, from my queue : hello skeuddy , thanks a lots

Oni

1. 00:09:932 and 00:10:020 - Some note (kat's) ok
2. 00:12:049 and 00:12:137 - ^ (kat's) ok
3. 00:52:987 - ^ ok
4. 00:59:869 (199,205) - ^ (don's)
5. 01:26:163 - ^
6. 01:53:869 - ^
7. 02:13:105 - ^
8. 02:22:987 - ^
9. 02:24:487 - ^ (k) and 02:24:399 (172) - k
10. 02:32:340 - ^ (d) and 02:32:075 (225) - d
11. 02:49:987 - ^
12. 02:50:340 and 02:50:693 - ^
13. 00:24:222 (35,36) - Swap
14. 01:02:340 (209,210) - ^ and 01:03:399 (212) - k
15. 01:04:458 (215,217) - ^ and 01:04:810 (216) - k
16. 01:06:222 (220,221) - ^
17. 01:16:458 (252,253) - ^
18. 01:23:163 (273,274) - ^
19. 01:30:752 (304,306) - ^
20. 01:35:163 (327,328) - ^
21. 01:36:222 (333,335) - ^
22. 01:45:399 (9,10) - ^
23. 01:46:458 (12,13) - ^
24. 01:59:869 (64,65) - ^
25. 01:06:928 (222) - d
26. 01:07:987 (225) - ^
27. 01:08:869 (229) - ^
28. 01:17:340 (255,258) - ^
29. 01:37:105 (336,337,338) - ^
30. 01:43:281 (3) - ^
31. 01:52:810 (42) - ^
32. 01:09:752 (233) - k
33. 01:24:399 (277,278,280,281) - ^
34. 01:38:340 (341,342) - ^
35. 01:58:105 (55,61) - ^
36. 02:00:575 (66) - ^
37. 04:34:458 (10) - ^
38. 04:36:575 (16) - ^
39. 00:26:163 (44,46,48,50) - Delete
40. 02:38:693 (237,238) and 02:42:928 (246) - ^
41. 03:24:222 (442) - Remove finisher. Not rankable
42. 00:33:663 (79,80,81,82,83,84) - On one 1/4 tick to the right
43. 02:17:781 (139,140,141) - ^
44. 00:35:340 - 00:51:399 - Don's and kat's not feet on sounds. Sure, place their on song
45. 02:51:046 - 03:24:222 - ^
46. 03:24:928 - 04:14:693 - ^
47. 04:41:163 - 04:47:516 - ^
48. 01:41:340 - End of spin
49. 01:57:752 - End of slider
50. 04:26:075 (738) to 04:26:163

Good luck!

Surono wrote:

needs Improving mod? lel [2]

1. Nice TATOE previews
   
2. 
   
3. BG is fine, just do this

1. 00:00:000 - delete this
2. 00:16:958 (30) - remove finisher,, 2over4hit
3. 00:16:958 (30) - delete don and make this kat to finisher *wat de hell kd 1/8*
4. 00:16:958 (30) - have pitch, add don
5. 00:29:163 - move to 00:28:987 - and 00:29:163 - add this don
6. 00:30:310 - delete or change don
7. 00:33:663 - i see over on here
8. 00:35:693 - ~ 00:51:399 - wuw long 1/2, why not adding 1/4 patterns and rest? XD
9. 00:52:458 - give finisher, and 00:52:458 - ~ 01:07:987 - ^same issue, and now many 1/1 XD
10. 01:55:810 - wrong slider? vocal started 01:55:987 - on here

Surono wrote:

to lazy with reply on Skeudy mod, and lazy mapping? XD wuuehh > kinda ;_; , i had school to do so

>General

1. Nice TATOE previews > glad you like it and sorry not check aimod , i think fixed now ?
   
2. 
   
3. BG is fine, just do this

err what is that for ? ok fixed

>Tehaco Sepeda what ?

1. 00:00:000 - delete this done
2. 00:16:958 (30) - remove finisher,, 2over4hit k
3. 00:16:958 (30) - delete don and make this kat to finisher *wat de hell kd 1/8* k
4. 00:16:958 (30) - have pitch, add don already did , hope so
5. 00:29:163 - move to 00:28:987 - and 00:29:163 - add this don yep , sound make sense now , thanks mr.
6. 00:30:310 - delete or change don changed to D ?
7. 00:33:663 - i see over on here : then what should i do ? add d ? K ? or smash the screen
8. 00:35:693 - ~ 00:51:399 - wuw long 1/2, why not adding 1/4 patterns and rest? XD , i dont get it
9. 00:52:458 - give finisher, and 00:52:458 - ~ 01:07:987 - ^same issue, and now many 1/1 XD oh ok add pattern with ^ , im confused now
10. 01:55:810 - wrong slider? vocal started 01:55:987 - on here

i taught its right ? isnt it ?

sry just it, i am will looking to clock, dem frgt in laptop have clock *midnight modding intensilfelfsss*
your many 1/2.. i cant make long mod bcus.. lazy, afraid if map is destroy, and this map like WIP @_@ still need improve by Mapper, not modder :'D
Cya, Gluck

Shiroi Hiroshi wrote:

mr. your english is very good

lidahapi wrote:

need ctb GD? :3/

lidahapi wrote:

Thank you ;w;

I'll make it as soon as i can

With lyrics SB + Translation ;w;

1. OD5~6?
2. 00:35:340 -01:26:340 - 02:51:046 - 04:15:752 - x2!? too fast. how about 1.25~1.5
   ↓ is example.
3. 00:37:458 (99) - delete?
4. 00:45:222 (137) - delete?
5. 00:48:399 (155) - delete?
6. 00:50:516 - delete

ManP wrote:

yo! from my queue :3

First,I suggest that place more 1/4 notes
Second,please place over 1/4 rest in kiai time.
Third,1st red line have to be placed on 1st note.

[Oni]

1. OD5~6?
2. 00:35:340 -01:26:340 - 02:51:046 - 04:15:752 - x2!? too fast. how about 1.25~1.5
   ↓ is example.
3. 00:37:458 (99) - delete?
4. 00:45:222 (137) - delete?
5. 00:48:399 (155) - delete?
6. 00:50:516 - delete

nice song. ihope it gets ranked

lidahapi wrote:

oh no, incoming mods, i haven't finish the sb yet ;w;

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Sh1n1's M4M Taiko Queue~~

About

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

General

1. HP: 5 ok fine

Intense mod in comming :3 ayyy thanks

Oni

1. 00:13:285 (26) - should be d to keep consistency with 00:10:814 (18,19) - ok nice
2. if you applied my previous advice make sure to Hold Ctrl+G at 00:13:990 (27,28) - to contrast 00:12:932 (25,26) - ay fine
3. 00:15:547 (30) - high piano sound, change to d, same as 00:16:958 (32) - sure
4. 00:26:869 - did you miss a note here? ups don will be match ?
5. 00:27:752 (55) - should be d to add variation of these patterns: 00:23:163 (37,38,39) - 00:25:281 (46,47,48) -
6. 00:30:046 - you are skipping and important sound to make an overmapped stream, I suggest you to move 00:30:310 (66) - to 00:30:046 - and them delete 00:30:663 (70) - to cath a better rhythm. okay okay
7. 00:33:222 - missing note here, too. e you right don will be okay ?
8. 00:35:340 (87,88,89,90,91) - what the hell :O overmapped bro, really, I'll suggest one pattern, it's up to you: well someone suggest it but you right again , best modder i ever see mr.
   - 00:35:605 (90) - move to 00:34:987 -
   - add a note at 00:35:252 - and make sure that from 00:35:163 - to 00:35:516 - could be changed into this pattern: kkddk ok
9. Hold Ctrl+G at 00:35:693 (91,92) - because drum is at 00:35:869 -, furthermore following piano 00:35:869 (92,93) - such notes should be similar, 00:36:222 (94,95,96) - should be like your previous patterns, and 00:36:752 (97) - is not necessary, the song is intense indeed but you should add more breaks at certain places, for example, transitions. from 00:35:693 - to 00:37:281 - your pattern should be like dkkdkd ddk, after that, k could be added at 00:36:134 - sure
10. 00:37:810 (102) - 00:38:516 (106) - 00:38:869 (108) - are not necessary to follow song nicer, intensity is decreasing, your patterns should reflect that. eee no ?
11. 00:37:987 (103) - should be k following drums and 00:39:575 (112) - should be deleted to emphasize 00:39:752 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - great idea
12. from 00:40:105 - to 00:41:869 - you did calm part and then with the same sound you change your patterns from 00:42:222 - to 00:45:046 -, you should keep consistency with first pattern or make something similar, for example 00:42:399 (121) - and 00:43:105 (125) - could be deleted and 00:43:987 (130) - should be D to emphasize high pitch. ok deleted
13. 00:49:458 (159) - should be deleted, you need more breaks at certain places. ok deleted
14. 00:54:222 (175,176,177,178,179) - why stream at places like that? you are on the calmest part of the song, streams are not allowed imo, delete 00:54:310 (176,177,178) - sure deleted sorry im bad at streaming
15. 01:00:752 (194) - could be removed if you want to add more emphasis at 01:00:928 (195) - okay
16. 01:21:046 (253,254,255,256,257,258,259) - overmapped detected, 01:21:046 (253) - strong beat, 01:21:134 (254) - should be deleted. too much overmapped
17. I'm not sure about this: 01:24:222 (266,267,268,269,270,271,272) -, 01:24:222 (266) - strong beat here, so 01:24:399 (267) - should be removed, and 01:24:752 (269,270) - might sound nicer with k k okay
18. from 01:26:340 - we could start to add more triplets cuz Oni need more triplets, now is like an Hard Muzukashii, for example add d at 01:26:958 - and delete 01:28:634 - to keep balance with breaks hooo nice
19. add k at 01:31:193 - to add more triplets, it will more fun this diff :3 whoaaa nice such elite mapper
20. remenber that you should add more breaks as I said before, on this section: 01:31:810 (300) - and 01:32:869 (306) - should be deleted to add more variety keeping balance of breaks. okay~
21. I can hear a 5-plet from 01:34:458 - to 01:34:810 - try this pattern: kkddk whoa nice
22. a note should be added on 01:35:428 - d or k ?
23. Ok, 01:39:046 (1) - spin follow voice nicer but consider that you are mapping an Oni diff, should be replaced by notes imo, spin will be good from 01:42:222 - to 01:42:928 - okay okay T-T
24. if you applied my previous advice make sure to change 01:43:281 (5) - into [b]D, because I heared a cymbal sound. furthermore at 01:43:899 - a note should be added. okay
25. we need more breaks at kiai: 01:45:575 - 01:48:046 - i forget
26. 01:46:016 - 01:47:428 - you should add notes at these places too, furthemore at 01:50:252 - there is an important triplet that you can't ignore.
27. why you didn't add notes at 01:51:134 - 01:51:222 - 01:51:487 - 01:51:575 - bcause im newbie , okay added
28. 01:51:752 (49) - should be finish note, K will be good. you are evil
29. 01:52:722 - note here too and 01:53:516 (59,60,61,62,63) - works better at triplet than 5-plet, delete 01:53:605 (60) - okayyy
30. 01:54:222 (63,64,65,66,67) - song didn't decrease, keep consistency with previous patterns, add notes at 01:54:752 - 01:54:399 - 01:54:046 -
31. add notes at 01:58:193 - 01:58:546 - 01:58:899 - to follow piano. okay
32. 01:59:693 (77) - this note could be deleted to add one stream from 01:59:869 - to 02:00:222 -: kkkkd might sound nicer okay
33. add a note at 02:01:193 -
34. we need more breaks on kiai time as I said before, notes that should be deleted: 02:02:516 (94) - 02:04:987 - fine
35. a note could be added on 02:02:958 - 02:05:428 - 02:07:193 - 02:08:075 - 02:08:428 - 02:08:516 - okay
36. to avoid loooong mod try to keep consistency with my advices to the next part.

see you next time ?

Good Luck Shiroi :3