Skeuddy wrote:

Hello, Shiroi Hiroshi, from my queue : hello skeuddy , thanks a lots

Oni

1. 00:09:932 and 00:10:020 - Some note (kat's) ok
2. 00:12:049 and 00:12:137 - ^ (kat's) ok
3. 00:52:987 - ^ ok
4. 00:59:869 (199,205) - ^ (don's)
5. 01:26:163 - ^
6. 01:53:869 - ^
7. 02:13:105 - ^
8. 02:22:987 - ^
9. 02:24:487 - ^ (k) and 02:24:399 (172) - k
10. 02:32:340 - ^ (d) and 02:32:075 (225) - d
11. 02:49:987 - ^
12. 02:50:340 and 02:50:693 - ^
13. 00:24:222 (35,36) - Swap
14. 01:02:340 (209,210) - ^ and 01:03:399 (212) - k
15. 01:04:458 (215,217) - ^ and 01:04:810 (216) - k
16. 01:06:222 (220,221) - ^
17. 01:16:458 (252,253) - ^
18. 01:23:163 (273,274) - ^
19. 01:30:752 (304,306) - ^
20. 01:35:163 (327,328) - ^
21. 01:36:222 (333,335) - ^
22. 01:45:399 (9,10) - ^
23. 01:46:458 (12,13) - ^
24. 01:59:869 (64,65) - ^
25. 01:06:928 (222) - d
26. 01:07:987 (225) - ^
27. 01:08:869 (229) - ^
28. 01:17:340 (255,258) - ^
29. 01:37:105 (336,337,338) - ^
30. 01:43:281 (3) - ^
31. 01:52:810 (42) - ^
32. 01:09:752 (233) - k
33. 01:24:399 (277,278,280,281) - ^
34. 01:38:340 (341,342) - ^
35. 01:58:105 (55,61) - ^
36. 02:00:575 (66) - ^
37. 04:34:458 (10) - ^
38. 04:36:575 (16) - ^
39. 00:26:163 (44,46,48,50) - Delete
40. 02:38:693 (237,238) and 02:42:928 (246) - ^
41. 03:24:222 (442) - Remove finisher. Not rankable
42. 00:33:663 (79,80,81,82,83,84) - On one 1/4 tick to the right
43. 02:17:781 (139,140,141) - ^
44. 00:35:340 - 00:51:399 - Don's and kat's not feet on sounds. Sure, place their on song
45. 02:51:046 - 03:24:222 - ^
46. 03:24:928 - 04:14:693 - ^
47. 04:41:163 - 04:47:516 - ^
48. 01:41:340 - End of spin
49. 01:57:752 - End of slider
50. 04:26:075 (738) to 04:26:163

Good luck!

Surono wrote:

needs Improving mod? lel [2]

1. Nice TATOE previews
   
2. 
   
3. BG is fine, just do this

1. 00:00:000 - delete this
2. 00:16:958 (30) - remove finisher,, 2over4hit
3. 00:16:958 (30) - delete don and make this kat to finisher *wat de hell kd 1/8*
4. 00:16:958 (30) - have pitch, add don
5. 00:29:163 - move to 00:28:987 - and 00:29:163 - add this don
6. 00:30:310 - delete or change don
7. 00:33:663 - i see over on here
8. 00:35:693 - ~ 00:51:399 - wuw long 1/2, why not adding 1/4 patterns and rest? XD
9. 00:52:458 - give finisher, and 00:52:458 - ~ 01:07:987 - ^same issue, and now many 1/1 XD
10. 01:55:810 - wrong slider? vocal started 01:55:987 - on here

Surono wrote:

to lazy with reply on Skeudy mod, and lazy mapping? XD wuuehh > kinda ;_; , i had school to do so

>General

1. Nice TATOE previews > glad you like it and sorry not check aimod , i think fixed now ?
   
2. 
   
3. BG is fine, just do this

err what is that for ? ok fixed

>Tehaco Sepeda what ?

1. 00:00:000 - delete this done
2. 00:16:958 (30) - remove finisher,, 2over4hit k
3. 00:16:958 (30) - delete don and make this kat to finisher *wat de hell kd 1/8* k
4. 00:16:958 (30) - have pitch, add don already did , hope so
5. 00:29:163 - move to 00:28:987 - and 00:29:163 - add this don yep , sound make sense now , thanks mr.
6. 00:30:310 - delete or change don changed to D ?
7. 00:33:663 - i see over on here : then what should i do ? add d ? K ? or smash the screen
8. 00:35:693 - ~ 00:51:399 - wuw long 1/2, why not adding 1/4 patterns and rest? XD , i dont get it
9. 00:52:458 - give finisher, and 00:52:458 - ~ 01:07:987 - ^same issue, and now many 1/1 XD oh ok add pattern with ^ , im confused now
10. 01:55:810 - wrong slider? vocal started 01:55:987 - on here

i taught its right ? isnt it ?

sry just it, i am will looking to clock, dem frgt in laptop have clock *midnight modding intensilfelfsss*
your many 1/2.. i cant make long mod bcus.. lazy, afraid if map is destroy, and this map like WIP @_@ still need improve by Mapper, not modder :'D
Cya, Gluck

Shiroi Hiroshi wrote:

mr. your english is very good

lidahapi wrote:

need ctb GD? :3/

lidahapi wrote:

Thank you ;w;

I'll make it as soon as i can

With lyrics SB + Translation ;w;

1. OD5~6?
2. 00:35:340 -01:26:340 - 02:51:046 - 04:15:752 - x2!? too fast. how about 1.25~1.5
   ↓ is example.
3. 00:37:458 (99) - delete?
4. 00:45:222 (137) - delete?
5. 00:48:399 (155) - delete?
6. 00:50:516 - delete

ManP wrote:

yo! from my queue :3

First,I suggest that place more 1/4 notes
Second,please place over 1/4 rest in kiai time.
Third,1st red line have to be placed on 1st note.

[Oni]

1. OD5~6?
2. 00:35:340 -01:26:340 - 02:51:046 - 04:15:752 - x2!? too fast. how about 1.25~1.5
   ↓ is example.
3. 00:37:458 (99) - delete?
4. 00:45:222 (137) - delete?
5. 00:48:399 (155) - delete?
6. 00:50:516 - delete

nice song. ihope it gets ranked

lidahapi wrote:

oh no, incoming mods, i haven't finish the sb yet ;w;

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Sh1n1's M4M Taiko Queue~~

About

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

General

1. HP: 5 ok fine

Intense mod in comming :3 ayyy thanks

Oni

1. 00:13:285 (26) - should be d to keep consistency with 00:10:814 (18,19) - ok nice
2. if you applied my previous advice make sure to Hold Ctrl+G at 00:13:990 (27,28) - to contrast 00:12:932 (25,26) - ay fine
3. 00:15:547 (30) - high piano sound, change to d, same as 00:16:958 (32) - sure
4. 00:26:869 - did you miss a note here? ups don will be match ?
5. 00:27:752 (55) - should be d to add variation of these patterns: 00:23:163 (37,38,39) - 00:25:281 (46,47,48) -
6. 00:30:046 - you are skipping and important sound to make an overmapped stream, I suggest you to move 00:30:310 (66) - to 00:30:046 - and them delete 00:30:663 (70) - to cath a better rhythm. okay okay
7. 00:33:222 - missing note here, too. e you right don will be okay ?
8. 00:35:340 (87,88,89,90,91) - what the hell :O overmapped bro, really, I'll suggest one pattern, it's up to you: well someone suggest it but you right again , best modder i ever see mr.
   - 00:35:605 (90) - move to 00:34:987 -
   - add a note at 00:35:252 - and make sure that from 00:35:163 - to 00:35:516 - could be changed into this pattern: kkddk ok
9. Hold Ctrl+G at 00:35:693 (91,92) - because drum is at 00:35:869 -, furthermore following piano 00:35:869 (92,93) - such notes should be similar, 00:36:222 (94,95,96) - should be like your previous patterns, and 00:36:752 (97) - is not necessary, the song is intense indeed but you should add more breaks at certain places, for example, transitions. from 00:35:693 - to 00:37:281 - your pattern should be like dkkdkd ddk, after that, k could be added at 00:36:134 - sure
10. 00:37:810 (102) - 00:38:516 (106) - 00:38:869 (108) - are not necessary to follow song nicer, intensity is decreasing, your patterns should reflect that. eee no ?
11. 00:37:987 (103) - should be k following drums and 00:39:575 (112) - should be deleted to emphasize 00:39:752 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - great idea
12. from 00:40:105 - to 00:41:869 - you did calm part and then with the same sound you change your patterns from 00:42:222 - to 00:45:046 -, you should keep consistency with first pattern or make something similar, for example 00:42:399 (121) - and 00:43:105 (125) - could be deleted and 00:43:987 (130) - should be D to emphasize high pitch. ok deleted
13. 00:49:458 (159) - should be deleted, you need more breaks at certain places. ok deleted
14. 00:54:222 (175,176,177,178,179) - why stream at places like that? you are on the calmest part of the song, streams are not allowed imo, delete 00:54:310 (176,177,178) - sure deleted sorry im bad at streaming
15. 01:00:752 (194) - could be removed if you want to add more emphasis at 01:00:928 (195) - okay
16. 01:21:046 (253,254,255,256,257,258,259) - overmapped detected, 01:21:046 (253) - strong beat, 01:21:134 (254) - should be deleted. too much overmapped
17. I'm not sure about this: 01:24:222 (266,267,268,269,270,271,272) -, 01:24:222 (266) - strong beat here, so 01:24:399 (267) - should be removed, and 01:24:752 (269,270) - might sound nicer with k k okay
18. from 01:26:340 - we could start to add more triplets cuz Oni need more triplets, now is like an Hard Muzukashii, for example add d at 01:26:958 - and delete 01:28:634 - to keep balance with breaks hooo nice
19. add k at 01:31:193 - to add more triplets, it will more fun this diff :3 whoaaa nice such elite mapper
20. remenber that you should add more breaks as I said before, on this section: 01:31:810 (300) - and 01:32:869 (306) - should be deleted to add more variety keeping balance of breaks. okay~
21. I can hear a 5-plet from 01:34:458 - to 01:34:810 - try this pattern: kkddk whoa nice
22. a note should be added on 01:35:428 - d or k ?
23. Ok, 01:39:046 (1) - spin follow voice nicer but consider that you are mapping an Oni diff, should be replaced by notes imo, spin will be good from 01:42:222 - to 01:42:928 - okay okay T-T
24. if you applied my previous advice make sure to change 01:43:281 (5) - into [b]D, because I heared a cymbal sound. furthermore at 01:43:899 - a note should be added. okay
25. we need more breaks at kiai: 01:45:575 - 01:48:046 - i forget
26. 01:46:016 - 01:47:428 - you should add notes at these places too, furthemore at 01:50:252 - there is an important triplet that you can't ignore.
27. why you didn't add notes at 01:51:134 - 01:51:222 - 01:51:487 - 01:51:575 - bcause im newbie , okay added
28. 01:51:752 (49) - should be finish note, K will be good. you are evil
29. 01:52:722 - note here too and 01:53:516 (59,60,61,62,63) - works better at triplet than 5-plet, delete 01:53:605 (60) - okayyy
30. 01:54:222 (63,64,65,66,67) - song didn't decrease, keep consistency with previous patterns, add notes at 01:54:752 - 01:54:399 - 01:54:046 -
31. add notes at 01:58:193 - 01:58:546 - 01:58:899 - to follow piano. okay
32. 01:59:693 (77) - this note could be deleted to add one stream from 01:59:869 - to 02:00:222 -: kkkkd might sound nicer okay
33. add a note at 02:01:193 -
34. we need more breaks on kiai time as I said before, notes that should be deleted: 02:02:516 (94) - 02:04:987 - fine
35. a note could be added on 02:02:958 - 02:05:428 - 02:07:193 - 02:08:075 - 02:08:428 - 02:08:516 - okay
36. to avoid loooong mod try to keep consistency with my advices to the next part.

see you next time ?

Good Luck Shiroi :3

NlHIL wrote:

[Oni]
00:09:843 (14) - this is calm part and there are no sound... remove? y
00:11:961 (20) - ^ok

01:09:928 - why are you ignoring this kind of sounds? If ignore these...
remove 01:10:810 (216) - 01:11:869 (219) - 01:12:928 (222) - 01:13:987 (225) - 01:15:046 (227) - and many?
(ofcourse you can add 01:21:399 - 01:23:516 - 01:25:634 - 01:25:810 - 01:25:987 - and...) fix
01:40:987 - add here and start the slider from 01:41:163 - ?what if no .-. ?
01:55:987 (78) - end at 01:57:752 - ...bad isnt it ?
02:17:781 (186,187,188) - move 1/4 right and you can add 02:18:134 - as 02:20:252 (199) - fix and fix in other way

02:51:046 - to 03:23:869 - It has really little spacing... how about set it kiai time? hope qat not mad about alots kiai

03:41:869 - to 03:54:222 - what happened to you? remove some?okay okay

04:22:281 - 05:17:163 - add add what ?

Nanatsu wrote:

you should change source as beatmania IIDX 21 SPADA. not just beatmania IIDX.

and you can delete 21 on tag.

try to change 1365x768 BG size to 1366x768. according to this rule '1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9'

Oni

* the diff has so many unsnapped notes. you can check them from AiMOD.

* 00:09:990 - it has sound. i think you can add here or kind of re-arrange

* 00:12:108 - ^

* 00:28:810 (56) - k

* 00:30:399 (64,65,66) - change them to d to give distinction on song pitch with 00:30:222 (63,67) - those d

* 00:33:928 (79) - d

* 00:36:928 (96) - k

* 00:37:634 - 00:39:752 - you can add 1/4 triplets such as previous pattern

* 00:43:281 - 00:48:222 - ^

* 00:50:869 (161) - d

* 00:52:987 (167) - d

* 01:07:987 (203) - change to k because it goes high pitch

* 01:13:105 (224) - d for consistency

* 01:20:516 (253) - ^

* 01:39:046 - 01:41:163 - try to make pattern such as 01:26:340 - 01:28:458 - this kind of for consistency

* 01:53:869 (70) - k

* 01:44:781 - add d

* 01:58:105 - 01:58:987 - make them all triplets. i believe this would be great to follow music sound

* 02:00:840 - add d

* 02:04:546 - add d

* 02:09:840 - add

* 02:10:546 (168) - i think you dont need 5 notes for here. delete it

* 02:11:163 - 02:16:105 - add some triplets on here too

* 02:32:693 - add d

* 03:01:634 (382) - change to k for pitch

* 03:04:899 - add d

* 03:06:928 - 03:07:810 - try to use some pattern here

* 03:15:840 - add and 03:16:105 (459) - k

* 03:20:252 (485) - k

* 03:33:222 (548,549) - swap dk

* 03:33:752 - 03:36:222 - try to match k sound to vocal sound

* 03:40:987 - 03:41:693 - use some k on here

* 04:05:252 - add

* 04:07:369 - add

* 04:12:663 - add

* 04:20:075 - add

* 04:21:134 - add

* 04:22:546 - add

* 04:30:928 - 04:31:458 - as i said on 02:11:163 - 02:16:105 - here

* 04:33:840 - add

* 04:37:193 - add

* 04:39:134 - add

* 04:42:310 - aadd

* 04:43:634 - 04:48:575 - try to put triplets

* 04:53:958 - add

* 04:56:075 - add

* 04:59:252 - add

* 05:00:222 - 05:02:252 - add some notes on here

* 05:04:546 - 05:05:428 - why didnt you put notes here? try to put more

* 05:07:458 - add k

* 05:10:899 - add

* 05:16:193 - add

* 05:19:634 - 05:23:340 - try to use some tripplets

kind of fast modding because i have working for today sorry T.T I must have many missed parts to suggest and detail things.

and you should use more various patterns if you want to remain it as 'Oni' diff. the basic element on map was good though.

therefore, i believe you can improve this map further good luck!

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Dragon hah?
This is BG for you~


I think this picture cover used sword :> (similiar adventure :v)

gameuse wrote:

Hello there! I don't have a lot of experience with taiko beatmap modding, but I will do whatever I can to help you!

First I will suggest adding sliders here:
02:35:163 (339) - Add slider that ends 02:36:046 uhh no
02:38:340 (343) - ^ that ends 02:38:869 no
02:39:399 (344) - ^ that ends 02:40:281no ._.
02:42:575 (350) - ^ that ends 02:43:281
02:43:634 (351) - ^ that ends 02:44:340 ^ slider doesnt make sense at taiko diff
03:56:693 (760) - should be a spinner which ends 03:57:840i will think about it .-.
04:58:281 (170,171,172,173) - delete these and replace with a slider no
04:58:987 (174,175,176,177,178) - ^no
05:19:458 add a note here? sure
05:28:105 (13) - replace note with a spinner which ends 05:29:340 handbreak

General:
03:50:693 (733,734,735,736,737,738,739,740,741,742,743,744,745,746,747,748,749,750,751) - This part sounds weird. I think you should leave the background music alone and just focus on the lyrics. few note if just follow lyric , follow bg music kinda fine

Timing:
03:23:869 please end the fourth kiai mode here .will think about it
04:30:399 5th kiai should end heresame as above , kinda fine i guess

I hope this mod will help! Thanks for doing an m4m