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Orange Heart(cv:Honda Mariko) Neptune(cv:Tanaka Rie) - Mouso

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blissfulyoshi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年7月17日 at 22:46:20

Artist: Orange Heart(cv:Honda Mariko) Neptune(cv:Tanaka Rie)
Title: Mousou Katharsis
Source: 新次元ゲイム ネプテューヌVⅡ
Tags: Shin Jigen Game Hyperdimension Neptunia Victory 2 VII 7 Dimension H ED
BPM: 82
Filesize: 13505kb
Play Time: 00:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.24 stars, 38 notes)
  2. Normal (1.94 stars, 73 notes)
Download: Orange Heart(cv:Honda Mariko) Neptune(cv:Tanaka Rie) - Mousou Katharsis
Download: Orange Heart(cv:Honda Mariko) Neptune(cv:Tanaka Rie) - Mousou Katharsis (no video)
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In loving memory of Orange Heart.

Artist and Title Information: http://www.compileheart.com/neptune/v2/ ... page=dream

No slider art or challenges for anyone, sorry.
Crimmi
IRC Mod.
2015-07-11 13:23 blissfulyoshi: mod request: [https://osu.ppy.sh/s/331697 Orange Heart(CV.Mariko Honda), Neptune(CV.Tanaka Rie) - Mousou Katharsis] (2 diffs 44s) Thanks in advance
2015-07-11 13:23 blissfulyoshi: HAI Crimmi xD
2015-07-11 13:23 Crimmi: Ah~ ok i'll mod right now.
2015-07-11 13:31 Crimmi: Ok, normal, there is one thing bugging me and that's 00:18:538 (2) - This is touching the HP bar, now mind you I checked this on full screen on 1366x768 resolution, so reconsider checking on that.
2015-07-11 13:31 blissfulyoshi: problem is that there is no room
2015-07-11 13:32 blissfulyoshi: but yeah, it looks worse in 4:3
2015-07-11 13:32 Crimmi: I know but part of the slider on the top is touching the HP bar.
2015-07-11 13:33 blissfulyoshi: okay, fixed sort of
2015-07-11 13:33 Crimmi: Now your BG, you already know the dimensions it's supposed to be by now.
2015-07-11 13:33 blissfulyoshi: smaller is fine
2015-07-11 13:34 blissfulyoshi: and that is the most fitting pic I found
2015-07-11 13:34 Crimmi: Yeah but people will find some reason other wise.
2015-07-11 13:34 Crimmi: It looked a bit stretched when playing it in 4:3
2015-07-11 13:34 blissfulyoshi: well I'll just tell them to find a better bg
2015-07-11 13:35 blissfulyoshi: I'll add black bars if that is srsly what they want
2015-07-11 13:35 Crimmi: Hmm, try asking someone who is experienced in GFX's in the forums, they'll whip up a good BG for you without hurting the quality
2015-07-11 13:36 Crimmi: Or I could find one if you wish.
2015-07-11 13:36 blissfulyoshi: no need
2015-07-11 13:36 blissfulyoshi: I already searched all of pixiv
2015-07-11 13:37 blissfulyoshi: oh well, slider issue fixed
2015-07-11 13:39 Crimmi: How about this http://s1.dmcdn.net/CXu1S/1280x720-8RA.jpg
2015-07-11 13:39 blissfulyoshi: no
2015-07-11 13:40 blissfulyoshi: wrong game pic, and doesn't even involve the character the song is fr
2015-07-11 13:40 blissfulyoshi: that is promotional art for V
2015-07-11 13:40 blissfulyoshi: and not VII
2015-07-11 13:40 Crimmi: Hmm, ill dig deeper then.
2015-07-11 13:40 blissfulyoshi: the game is relatively new
2015-07-11 13:40 blissfulyoshi: and only released in japan
2015-07-11 13:41 blissfulyoshi: oh well, thx for trying
2015-07-11 13:41 blissfulyoshi: and best of luck

Checked Easy as well and I don't find any of error, just find a better BG or a japanese Osu! member who could get one for you~ /me runs >.<
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
Thanks so much Crimmi, and sorry if I sounded like I gave you a hard time.

Changes made from irc mod:
Normal: 00:18:538 (2) - made not hit hp bar by rearranging nearby patterns.

Probably not going to change bg unless I find another fitting one. This is the best one I found that fits.
Shohei Ohtani
MOM GET OUT OF MY ROOM IM WATCHING ANIME YOU'RE EMBARRASSING ME IN FRONT OF MY WAIFU

Normal:
00:03:172 (7) - NC?

Easy:
lmfao this drain tho

you're draining the life out of me

pls change

that's literally it lmfao thanks for being a not shit mapper.
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

Reditum wrote:

MOM GET OUT OF MY ROOM IM WATCHING ANIME YOU'RE EMBARRASSING ME IN FRONT OF MY WAIFU

Normal:
00:03:172 (7) - NC? Since I have a pattern of a new combo every 2 measures, I would rather not add a nc here.

Easy:
lmfao this drain tho

you're draining the life out of me

pls change lol kk (was talking with Reditumabout drain and decided to lower it by 1)

that's literally it lmfao thanks for being a not shit mapper.
Thanks for the mod Reditum.
Gaia
HAI Blissy!

[general]
aimod in easy 2 DS things

[easy]
00:03:172 (3) - move right like 2 grids to match (2) better? /kinda nazi haha
00:11:953 (1) - missing finish
00:22:928 (5) - and maybe on the head of this too?
00:24:392 (1) - maybe ctrl+J would flow nicer into the next note o3o
00:35:367 (1) - maybe a low volume finish here? //at the very least add a whistle?

[normal]
00:05:367 (10) - blanket 8? /runs again
00:11:953 (1) - finish
00:18:538 (2) - imo this would flow better if it was ctrl+g'd . felt the jerk backwards a little unnatural during my tp
00:25:855 (3) - same here actually, the slider points up but this circle is below it
00:33:904 (7) - i think there'd be a lot less confusion if you expanded that dot in the middle, right now its so small i barely noticed it
00:35:367 (1) - same as ez, maybe finish?

GLGLGLGL HF :D
Lanturn
Heya!~

[General]
Minor things:
Add 1500-2000 audio lead-in.
Set your preview point to something better. Like 00:11:038 - BLAME GAIA
You have a lot of tags that are duplicated in the artist/title/source field.

Major things:

[Easy]

  • Minor Things:
  1. 00:00:246 (1) - Maybe make a fancier slider that sort of flows into the (2)? IDK. the current one just bugs me XD
  2. 00:11:221 - Whistle in both diffs?
  3. 00:22:928 - Finish? You can definitely hear the cymbal here. This applies to Normal as well.
  4. 00:33:904 (6,1) - Nudge this over x+1 for a better blanket.

    Major Things:
  5. 00:36:831 (2) - To be honest, It's better to have the overlap and keep DS rather than make the DS as big as you currently have it. Having 0.20 of a gap is more confusing for those who are DS reading. So http://puu.sh/iVOX2.jpg please :)
  6. 00:44:239 (1) - Please start this at least at 00:44:514 - Causing the spinner to appear as early as it does can actually cause confusion to newer players, and they might not react in time to what's happening on the screen.
[Normal]
k.. back to normal modding.
  1. 00:02:441 (5) - DS with (4)
  2. 00:33:904 (7) - dsabfadbfba you fixed this too.
  3. 00:36:099 (2,3) - more DS
Call me back?
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

Gaia wrote:

HAI Blissy!

[general]
aimod in easy 2 DS things

[easy]
00:03:172 (3) - move right like 2 grids to match (2) better? /kinda nazi haha They were supposed to be misaligned, 3 was supposed to make an oval-ish shape with 2, moved to make more distinct.
00:11:953 (1) - missing finish Done.
00:22:928 (5) - and maybe on the head of this too? Done. Done in normal as well
00:24:392 (1) - maybe ctrl+J would flow nicer into the next note o3o I don't want to do this because I want this to be in the center of my heart shape.
00:35:367 (1) - maybe a low volume finish here? //at the very least add a whistle? Finish like in normal.

[normal]
00:05:367 (10) - blanket 8? /runs again Done.
00:11:953 (1) - finish Done.
00:18:538 (2) - imo this would flow better if it was ctrl+g'd . felt the jerk backwards a little unnatural during my tp Distance snap wise, this doesn't play that well imo. I would like to keep as is.
00:25:855 (3) - same here actually, the slider points up but this circle is below it Done.
00:33:904 (7) - i think there'd be a lot less confusion if you expanded that dot in the middle, right now its so small i barely noticed it
00:35:367 (1) - same as ez, maybe finish? Done.

GLGLGLGL HF :D
Thanks so much for the mod Gaia

Lanturn wrote:

Heya!~

[General]
Minor things:
Add 1500-2000 audio lead-in. I thought this was supposed to be automatic, and while I know it is bugged for some, I rather not follow an older standard of overwriting but osu! is supposed to do unless necessary.
Set your preview point to something better. Like 00:11:038 - BLAME GAIA We should all blame Gaia
You have a lot of tags that are duplicated in the artist/title/source field. Fixed... I think

Major things:

[Easy]

  • Minor Things:
  1. 00:00:246 (1) - Maybe make a fancier slider that sort of flows into the (2)? IDK. the current one just bugs me XD
  2. 00:11:221 - Whistle in both diffs? Done.
  3. 00:22:928 - Finish? You can definitely hear the cymbal here. This applies to Normal as well.
  4. 00:33:904 (6,1) - Nudge this over x+1 for a better blanket. I think I fixed this.

    Major Things:
  5. 00:36:831 (2) - To be honest, It's better to have the overlap and keep DS rather than make the DS as big as you currently have it. Having 0.20 of a gap is more confusing for those who are DS reading. So http://puu.sh/iVOX2.jpg please :)
  6. 00:44:239 (1) - Please start this at least at 00:44:514 - Causing the spinner to appear as early as it does can actually cause confusion to newer players, and they might not react in time to what's happening on the screen.
[Normal]
k.. back to normal modding.
  1. 00:02:441 (5) - DS with (4) Done.
  2. 00:33:904 (7) - dsabfadbfba you fixed this too.
  3. 00:36:099 (2,3) - more DS Done.
Call me back?
Thanks so much for the mod Lanturn
Lanturn
After taking over #nominators for an hour. It should be fine to go.

Bubbled ~
Shohei Ohtani
>SPEEDRANK DRAMA SHIELD (c) 2015
Gaia
GO!!!!





fixed a spacing and flow in easy
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
Gaia's IRC mod:

2015-07-11 22:35 Gaia: 00:41:220 (1,2) - easy fix spacing here
2015-07-11 22:35 blissfulyoshi: oh wow, fail on my part
2015-07-11 22:36 Gaia: also about 00:17:075 (5) -
2015-07-11 22:37 Gaia: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4098919
2015-07-11 22:37 Gaia: i think its the same thing here ?
2015-07-11 22:38 blissfulyoshi: that one is intentional
2015-07-11 22:38 blissfulyoshi: let me see what I can do about it
2015-07-11 22:39 Gaia: okay
2015-07-11 22:41 Gaia: 00:26:587 (2,3,4) - how about this for better flow http://puu.sh/iW3S0/f8a17ca655.jpg
2015-07-11 22:41 Gaia: still easy
2015-07-11 22:43 blissfulyoshi: kk 1 moment
2015-07-11 22:43 blissfulyoshi: just fixed that slider
2015-07-11 22:43 Gaia: ok
2015-07-11 22:44 blissfulyoshi: done
2015-07-11 22:46 Gaia: ok normal looks goood
BeatofIke
Nice 8-)
Lanturn
SpeedQualified~
Cancel that...

That feeling when I get blocked from speedranking things. Thanks 6 map limit!
Lanturn
Qualified for real now~
Shohei Ohtani
Meow2
Really?
DJPop
Too short D:
Kibbleru
^ rekt
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi
Lol.....

Oh well thanks for your support everyone (Special thanks to Lanturn and Gaia for doing longer than expected irc mods. )

Also, sorry Lanturn, I was more tired than expected and fell asleep with my PC and lights on....
Nomination Assessment Team

Disqualification Notice



Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

(B) Metadata

Wrong title
  1. Official web site used ":" after cv. not "." and "CV" is using lower case in official web site. http://www.compileheart.com/neptune/v2/ ... page=dream
    so Title/Romanised title must be changed as follows;
    Title : オレンジハート(cv:本多真梨子)・ネプテューヌ(cv:田中理恵)
    Romanised title : Orange Heart(cv:Honda Mariko) Neptune(cv:Tanaka Rie)

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###B
Topic Starter
blissfulyoshi

Quality Assurance Team wrote:

(B) Metadata

Wrong title
  1. Official web site used ":" after cv. not "." and "CV" is using lower case in official web site. http://www.compileheart.com/neptune/v2/ ... page=dream
    so Title/Romanised title must be changed as follows;
    Title : オレンジハート(cv:本多真梨子)・ネプテューヌ(cv:田中理恵)
    Romanised title : Orange Heart(cv:Honda Mariko) Neptune(cv:Tanaka Rie)
I really hope you meant artist, so I changed the artist field.
Gaia
awwightss
Lanturn
Waiting on 6 per 24 cap
Lanturn
And we're good

Requalified.
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