1. Yuki (3.48 stars, 849 notes)

Fort wrote:

hi, im here because this:
nice bg.
this is dubstep song
your ava cute
1st trit replies

there is no rock in this song, i think should remove rock as tags (but idk if this rock, kinda like "soft rock") i checked that one on somewhere. i'll think about this

and at overall this map have good structure but on some new combo its like decent i guess (but i dont know your style xD)
00:41:518 (6) - new combo disini lebih baik dari pada di 00:42:222 (1) - (sebelumnya kamu pakai combo pattern vocal, jadi gk ada salahnya menggunakan combo pattern vokal lagi) ok
00:42:456 (2) - ini bisa di NC y sdh
00:49:253 (3,5) - overlap ini ckckck fix
01:03:315 (1) - jangan spam NC k
01:35:190 (1) - oh come on D:
01:53:472 - wai skip dis? (ok i know what you mean) huh?
02:00:972 (6) - NC dis done
02:29:565 (1) - oke sip (i mean remove NC) done
ah screw NC (aduh tapi ini banyaknya problem NC toh, ah nanti aja lah ane males ngemod nya wkwkwkwk) ya elah elu

03:03:784 (3) - ini blanket saja nope
03:04:722 (1) - ini juga overlap nope
00:56:284 (5,6) - sebenarnya ini distancenya kurang konsisten (sama flow nya juga lumayan tajem, tapi entahlah gimana fix nya ini) nti w pkirkan itu
01:01:440 (3,6) - stack dis k
01:10:347 (1) - 384,152 pls (tapi......... ah squares, oke nvm) squares for me
01:53:706 (1) - sebenranya ini single NC memalukan sekali untuk diliat (ini kesan spam combo nya jelas bingits) y sudah
02:00:034 (4,7) - stack bro g perlu
02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - strim ini keliatannya kagok kalau dibikin lurus kaya gini, mungkin bisa di modif jadi lengkungan gitu lintasan stream nya udah ok tu mnurut w
02:38:002 (7,2) - ayolah (ini style gue jadi jangan dipake :v) ckup untk w. dan ngapain w perlu ikuti style elu?
02:44:097 (1,2,3,4) - pattern jajar genjang ini flownya kurang berkesan gitu (Ctrl+> 2 kali lalu pindahin aja ke x384y240 biar ada sedikit flow ditambah jumpnya enak toh) boleh juga
02:53:354 (9) - hitsounding disini aneh, kok bisa" nya ada suara finish disini simbal cuy
03:23:237 - ini delay break time nya kagok bgt, udah lah hapus aja ini tserh
03:41:518 (7) - overmapped terlalu keras ini (2 cara buat perbaiki ini 1. Kecilin volume 2. bikin pattern baru yang lebih fokus ke suara piano. ane prefer no. 2 sih) lebih baik w ambil no. 1 aj deh
ane rasa kiai ending nya dah bagus yep
04:27:222 (1) - slidernya perbaiki lagi, bikin eceng (slider ♥) kayanya bagus perlu tungu opini mreka
04:37:065 (1) - oke good (if you know what i mean) NC, ya lah
04:40:347 (1,2,3) - spacing incosistancy (sebaiknya nya spacing disini lebih konsisten lagi) nope
04:46:909 (1,2) - overlap nya berjin ini nope, masih ok
04:48:784 (4,2) - imperfect stacking fix

untuk masalah kombo konsultasikan ke dokter terdekat ya, jangan lupa baca aturan pakai agar enggak spam combo
oke sip
good luck dad
i love you anjrit

Kibbleru wrote:

koi yuki <3
good song

Euny wrote:

as your request!♥ came from my queue thanks for nice mod!!

• General

1. ballad , pop , rock these are need to tag? i dont think so... there is already in osu! genre. i think your map dont need to this. removed
2. add tag ' サイレント サイレン ' seems artist japanese pronouncing. also, i found that tag in latest ranked map (by gaia's) >> https://osu.ppy.sh/b/537887 ok
3. start bit early to me. seems you need to add audio lead in +1000ms ok
4. Found unused .wav files: remove it
   - drum-sliderslide.wav done

• Yuki

1. 00:04:539 (1) - add whistle for here. cause you already did that 00:01:539 (4) - and 00:02:630 (2) - this tail for piano sound. done
2. 00:07:266 (2) - ^ same as above. done
3. 00:17:613 - duplicate timing point removed
4. 00:17:847 (3) - i think its need to nc for here. cause downbeat start. ok
5. and.. 00:17:847 - remove this timing point too. its duplicate removed
6. 00:40:347 (3) - sometimes, straight flow looks bit old and feels boring. how about move it on 286l223 288|224 will do since i use DS
7. 00:45:034 (7) - rotate this slider with 26 degrees(with selection centre) probably it will be looks better. oooohhh
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:49:253 (3,4,5) - lets makes looks better for them. try it. nice
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:14:097 (6) - nc for here. ok
10. 03:15:503 (1) - remove nc for here. ok
11. 03:15:972 (3) - and this is nc part. done

that's it
hope this is helpful...

1. 00:00:994 (2) - imo would be cool to stack this on 00:00:721 (1) - since they have the same pitch and then it would give kind of a buildup effect with the spacing as well unless u really want to keep the pentagon or something..
2. 00:05:357 (4) - imo the heart could be better :X I tried to make a better one, just copy the code in (anywhere, doesn't have to be in order)
   

   220,252,5357,2,0,B|196:204|196:168|232:140|268:168|268:168|320:144|340:176|336:220|300:268,1,272.000005187988,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:22:534 - 00:22:768 - I don't think its very practical to skip these beats since you mapped the drums previously
4. 00:29:097 - I don't understand why you would want the slider slide sound lol..
   03:27:222 - ^whats with the sliderslide sounds man they don't sound good with the song =w=
5. 00:36:362 (3,1) - this needs more spacing since (1) is a fairly strong sound
6. 00:37:534 (5) - I would try to map those two drums since they are fairly strong sounds
   
   SPOILER

   [/sp
7. oilerbox]
8. 00:52:886 - extended slider doesn't fit here imo, the vocal isn't really strong enough to warrant an extended slider
   01:00:034 (8) - ^same here, you're also skipping a drum beat too with this :C
   01:00:503 (9) - ^
   01:56:753 (8) - ^ill stop pointing these out. but I personally recommend against it..
9. 01:12:222 (1,2,3) - just my taste, something like this might look better?
   [spoilerbox]
10. 01:15:972 (1,2,3,4) - imo this pattern doesn't really fit the music. sure it works if you really want to keep it but I don't hear the music as a consistent group of 4 beats. that type of thing would fit here 01:23:472 - where its 4 beats of constant vocals
11. 01:23:472 (1,2,3,4) - ehh this pattern just doesn't look that great to me lol. could try something like this if u want (note I only moved 3 and 4)
    
    SPOILER

    
    01:30:972 (1,2,3,4) - ^similar
12. 01:36:128 (6,1) - I would give this a bit of a jump since 1 is on a strong beat
    02:08:003 (6,1) - ^
    02:40:347 (1) - ^
    02:47:612 (1) - etc,, u get the idea
13. 01:36:597 - well I think this ending part of the kiai could be more jumpy in general, you start using normal spacing which doesn't really fit with the pace you've built up at the very least I would at least put jumps on the downbeats 01:38:472 (1) - since they are strong sounds
14. 01:45:972 (1) - try making this smoother
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:53:472 - I wouldn't skip this downbeat :/

1. 00:00:721 (2) - remove note and change the pattern, i think it sounds better
2. 00:04:539 - Is it just me, or it supposed to be heart shape slider?
3. 00:15:943 - Add a spinner here to 00:17:348 ?
4. 00:23:472 (3,4,5,6) - Judging the star rating, it's too much jumps
5. 00:25:347 (3,4,5,6) - ^
6. 01:02:847 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^
7. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders
8. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Give me free pp /slapped

My skills are terrible haha

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m

I think ur offset is late by like 15-20ms i better wait for someone about this

diff

1. 00:00:994 (2) - imo would be cool to stack this on 00:00:721 (1) - since they have the same pitch and then it would give kind of a buildup effect with the spacing as well unless u really want to keep the pentagon or something.. aye, ok
2. 00:05:357 (4) - imo the heart could be better :X I tried to make a better one, just copy the code in (anywhere, doesn't have to be in order) thx for the fix
   

   220,252,5357,2,0,B|196:204|196:168|232:140|268:168|268:168|320:144|340:176|336:220|300:268,1,272.000005187988,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:22:534 - 00:22:768 - I don't think its very practical to skip these beats since you mapped the drums previously well, i'm fine with that
4. 00:29:097 - I don't understand why you would want the slider slide sound lol.. ohhh shit
   03:27:222 - ^whats with the sliderslide sounds man they don't sound good with the song =w= that should do
5. 00:36:362 (3,1) - this needs more spacing since (1) is a fairly strong sound fix
6. 00:37:534 (5) - I would try to map those two drums since they are fairly strong sounds done
   [spoilerbox][/sp
7. oilerbox]
8. 00:52:886 - extended slider doesn't fit here imo, the vocal isn't really strong enough to warrant an extended slider ok
   01:00:034 (8) - ^same here, you're also skipping a drum beat too with this :C fix
   01:00:503 (9) - ^ ^
   01:56:753 (8) - ^ill stop pointing these out. but I personally recommend against it.. ^
9. 01:12:222 (1,2,3) - just my taste, something like this might look better? ok
   
   
10. 01:15:972 (1,2,3,4) - imo this pattern doesn't really fit the music. sure it works if you really want to keep it but I don't hear the music as a consistent group of 4 beats. that type of thing would fit here 01:23:472 - where its 4 beats of constant vocals instrument + vocal
11. 01:23:472 (1,2,3,4) - ehh this pattern just doesn't look that great to me lol. could try something like this if u want (note I only moved 3 and 4) ok
    
    
    01:30:972 (1,2,3,4) - ^similar no
12. 01:36:128 (6,1) - I would give this a bit of a jump since 1 is on a strong beat nahh
    02:08:003 (6,1) - ^ ^
    02:40:347 (1) - ^ ^
    02:47:612 (1) - etc,, u get the idea ^
13. 01:36:597 - well I think this ending part of the kiai could be more jumpy in general, you start using normal spacing which doesn't really fit with the pace you've built up at the very least I would at least put jumps on the downbeats 01:38:472 (1) - since they are strong sounds fine...
14. 01:45:972 (1) - try making this smoother done
    
    
15. 01:53:472 - I wouldn't skip this downbeat :/ done

you definitely want to get the timing checked out lol i just asked someone for that LOL

KuranteMelodii wrote:

Yuki:

1. 00:00:721 (2) - remove note and change the pattern, i think it sounds better i changed that already from previous mod
2. 00:04:539 - Is it just me, or it supposed to be heart shape slider? heart
3. 00:15:943 - Add a spinner here to 00:17:348 ? i don't feel like spinner will be fitable for this
4. 00:23:472 (3,4,5,6) - Judging the star rating, it's too much jumps i don't mind about that hehehe
5. 00:25:347 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
6. 01:02:847 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^ ^
7. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders nope, since it's a violin part
8. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ nope, drum parts

Since i can't find anything, so i give you my DT testplay (even you don't asked for it) XD

Give me free pp /slapped

My skills are terrible haha

Euny wrote:

i really love this songs sweet lyrics. take my stars haku ^^

-Hakurei- wrote:

1. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders nope, since it's a violin part
2. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ nope, drum parts

KuranteMelodii wrote:

-Hakurei- wrote:

1. 02:15:972 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - ^ The stream is too long for beginners who plays hard diff, consider shorten it, or use sliders nope, since it's a violin part
2. 02:19:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ nope, drum parts

I actually mean to use 1/4 return slider to replace streams, so it's easier to play

Momochikun wrote:

A small timing fix and fixed NC via irc
mapper should have the log or something :#

00:30 Momochikun: 00:17:634 -
00:30 -Hakurei-: yep
00:30 Momochikun: 128 bpm hrusnya kyk timing selanjutnya. lbih pas
00:32 -Hakurei-: fix
00:32 Momochikun: gl ~
00:32 -Hakurei-: wait
00:33 -Hakurei-: 00:17:836 - tu gimana?
00:33 Momochikun: udh pas kok itu
00:34 -Hakurei-: [http://puu.sh/insye/bd1c6d0c0b.jpg approach ny]
00:37 Momochikun: apanya yg salah ?
00:37 -Hakurei-: nahh, g ad
00:37 -Hakurei-: cuma w takut saja tentang tu
00:37 -Hakurei-: nti w cari tau dri mod lain
00:37 Momochikun: mending hapus nc nya 00:17:836 (1) -  aja sih menurutku biar kliatan rapi
00:38 -Hakurei-: done
00:40 Momochikun: k gl
00:40 -Hakurei-: sip trims. btw, post ke thread
00:42 Momochikun: hmm.. ok
00:43 Momochikun: posted

1. 00:04:812 (2) - add whistle?
2. 00:08:903 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:11:357 (2) - ^ from slider head?
4. 00:17:836 (3) - ^ from slider head?
5. 00:19:711 (1) - ^ from slider head?
6. 00:21:586 (1) - ^
7. 00:23:461 (1) - ^ from slider head?
8. 00:25:336 (1) - ^ from slider head?
9. 00:27:211 (1) - ^ from slider head?
10. 00:30:492 (3) - ^ from slider tail?
11. 00:45:023 (7) - ^ from slider tail?
12. 01:00:961 (1) - ^
13. 01:03:539 (4) - ^ from slider tail
14. 01:04:476 (6) - ^
15. 01:05:414 (4) - ^ from slider tail
16. 01:08:461 (1) - ^ from slider head
17. 01:12:211 (1) - ^ from slider head
18. 01:45:961 (1,2) - ^ from slider head
19. 02:04:711 (1) - ^
20. 02:49:242 (5,6,1) - ^ from slider head

Homura- wrote:

hi -Hakurei- M4M

[Yuki]

1. 00:04:812 (2) - add whistle? ok
2. 00:08:903 (2,3) - ^ ^
3. 00:11:357 (2) - ^ from slider head? ^
4. 00:17:836 (3) - ^ from slider head? ^
5. 00:19:711 (1) - ^ from slider head? ^
6. 00:21:586 (1) - ^ ^
7. 00:23:461 (1) - ^ from slider head? ^
8. 00:25:336 (1) - ^ from slider head? ^
9. 00:27:211 (1) - ^ from slider head? ^
10. 00:30:492 (3) - ^ from slider tail? ^
11. 00:45:023 (7) - ^ from slider tail? ^
12. 01:00:961 (1) - ^ ^
13. 01:03:539 (4) - ^ from slider tail ^
14. 01:04:476 (6) - ^ ^
15. 01:05:414 (4) - ^ from slider tail ^
16. 01:08:461 (1) - ^ from slider head ^
17. 01:12:211 (1) - ^ from slider head ^
18. 01:45:961 (1,2) - ^ from slider head ^
19. 02:04:711 (1) - ^ ^
20. 02:49:242 (5,6,1) - ^ from slider head ^

good luck~

Mentional wrote:

hi, for m4m

• 
  

  Yuki

1. 00:05:357 (4) - I would try and improve the look of this slider a bit more, since it doesn't look that good at the moment. that's fine for me
2. 00:24:398 (3,4,5,6) - This seems a bit weird to me, because of the sudden huge gap between 00:24:632 (4) - and 00:24:867 (5) - i'll wait for other opinion from mods
3. 00:51:351 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would move this pattern so 00:51:820 (2) - would look nicer with 00:49:711 (5) - reverse point ^
4. 01:00:492 (9) - NC? and remove NC from 01:00:961 (1) - no. 01:00:961 (1) - tells me that it's a perfect one for NC
5. 01:15:961 (1,2,3,4) - I would try to make this a bit nicer looking, like this it looks kind of boring. uhmm, kinda OK for me
6. 01:15:961 (1,2) - How about changing these like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3254958 ^
7. 01:16:898 (3,4,5) - And then these like this to fit the above: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3254961 ^
8. 01:25:336 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think a square pattern fits here at all for me, it is
9. 02:02:836 (4,5) - How about changing the second slider to single notes and make them look like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3254976 no
10. 02:03:773 (6,7) - And then these two to something like this to fit the above: 02:03:773 (6,7) - no
11. 02:33:773 (4) - On this I would just simply remove the slider curve, to me it looks better that way. ok
12. 03:15:492 (6) - NC, and remove NC from 03:15:961 (1) - sound change and stuff like that
13. 03:17:367 (4) - NC, and remove NC from 03:17:836 (1) - ^
14. 03:43:617 (6) - NC, and remove NC from 03:44:086 (1) - need more opinion about this
15. 04:12:211 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern here looks really boring to play, I would try and change it to something more interesting. not really
16. 04:27:211 (1) - I think this slider can be improved to make it look nicer. not that sure about it. better wait for someone about this
17. 05:00:961 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Okay, now you just got lazy.. I would definitely change this pattern to something more interesting hehehehe

That's all, hope you found it helpful.

Snepif wrote:

Okay here it is!

00:06:721 (1) - This slider shouldn't start on the red tick because that's the opposite of what the music suggests. Try this http://puu.sh/ioD5h/e186e02cfc.jpg done
00:17:634 (1,2) - A triplet with BPM changes would cause some confusion while playing don't you think? Try to change these 2 notes into a slider like this, it also fits the music a lot better: http://puu.sh/ioDe7/216d38b602.jpg (they can be closer than that obviously) aye, ok
00:20:648 (3) - (nazi) move to x268 y116 so it's equally distant to 1 and 2, for the looks of it only. ok
00:24:632 (4,5) - CTRL+G plays better in my opinion no
00:30:492 (3) - You should really remove the repeat and add a note at the big white tick, so the player actually clicks there where the beat lands. done
00:31:429 (1) - I don't like this shape since it's so excessively curved, try to make it smoother like this: http://puu.sh/ioDwi/dab9ab02d2.jpg and then copypaste for the other slider. I also moved (3) 2 grids down for a better curve, since it looks like a sharp pattern, I thought it would be better if it actually felt like a curve. fix
00:34:242 (7,8) - Fails to fit the music because the slider starts on a red tick without any particular reason, and also you have the main downbeat of the music on a slider end (remember the player doesn't click the slider's end so it isn't appropiate to put a slider's end in the main downbeat). Try to do this instead: http://puu.sh/ioDGv/9749f21a73.jpg ok
00:45:023 (7) - Same as last suggestion. From a mapper's perspective this doesn't change much but from a player's perspective, putting an actual note at the big white tick would fit the song a lot better. no
00:49:242 (3,4,5) - This pattern is not bad but do you think it fits the rest of the map's patterns? (legit question, you can keep it or change as you please) yep, i'll keep that
00:53:929 (1) - I don't like how you skipped a snare beat here. Maybe shorten this slider so you don't skip the snare beat? nope
01:07:054 (2,3,4) - This curve feels awkward, look: http://puu.sh/ioDY3/6a6114595f.jpg . Why don't you try this instead: http://puu.sh/ioDZk/0c75fd92a5.jpg fix
01:13:851 (1,2) - Would flow a lot better if you CTRL+G these two ok
01:24:866 (4,1) - Uhmm these are too close and don't flow at all x.x Move (1) somewhere else. done
01:31:429 (2) - I'd move this one a bit farther away from (1) so you have more space to put 3, like this: http://puu.sh/ioEjd/df075f49d5.jpg (then move (4) too) done
01:42:211 (1,2,3) - Maybe should make the spacing more consistent in these 3 sliders? not really
01:52:523 (5,6) - This would fit the music a lot better if you did this: http://puu.sh/ioEED/d18b13203b.jpg nope. btw, i did that on previous mod
01:58:617 (5) - Remove repeat and add a note in the main white tick,. no
02:03:304 (5,6) - Awkward flow with these two http://puu.sh/ioEJB/e650e2abe6.jpg . Try this: http://puu.sh/ioEMx/0241255ab5.jpg and then rearrange the following sliders and notes obviously. done
02:14:086 (1,2) - Should CTRL+G for more flow with the previous slider. too jumpy, but ok
02:44:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - Feels really awkward to play this! Try http://puu.sh/ioEVn/1fd68fc087.jpg ohh shit. done
02:47:132 (6) - It would fit the music better if this were jumping notes and not a simple slider D: nope
03:07:523 (4) - Too close to the slider? i'd prefer it like that
03:09:398 (4,5,6,7) - Move this whole pattern farther away from (3) for more consistent spacing x.x done
03:11:976 (6) - Again it is bad to have the end of a slider in a big white tick. Try this. http://puu.sh/ioFbf/17c46797f5.jpg nope
03:21:468 - I hear a note on this blue tick done
03:22:289 - Here too done
03:22:406 - And here done
03:28:851 (6) - Slider end big tick thing no
03:36:585 (4) - NC? ok
03:43:617 (6) - Should move farther away from (5) because it looks like a 1/2 jump part of the star. need to think about this
04:23:226 (3) - Slider end big white tick thing. Try this: http://puu.sh/ioFpj/6b7b1cb32e.jpg no
04:37:289 (4) - Move to x332 y196 so it's equally spaced to the previous and next note ok
05:00:023 (3) - Too close to (2) no
05:07:992 (4) - Would fit the song a lot better if you made this a single note and not a slider. from previous mod

Relaxing~

Muya wrote:

[Yuki]
00:05:357 (4) - try this? http://puu.sh/ipUSi/fd515d5b0a.jpg nahh, the current one is ok for me
00:21:586 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/ipVe8/8a8106c5af.jpg nope. that's fine for me
00:45:023 (7) - ^ http://puu.sh/ipVoQ/f52dbc98a8.jpg or http://puu.sh/ipVwb/d3e5c655e9.jpg that should do
00:48:070 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ http://puu.sh/ipWmv/5b334c12e2.jpg http://puu.sh/ipWoh/2e511a0524.jpg quite ok for me
00:58:382 (3) - rotate 00:57:445 (2) - 's 180°? nope
01:11:507 - add note here if follow drum i don't need to add a note there tbh. vocal is enough for me
01:23:461 (1,2,3,4) - fix blanket? http://puu.sh/ipXdJ/74a65e3c84.jpg that'll do
02:07:523 (5,6) - use 02:06:117 (5) - 's copy? no need
02:15:257 - add note here if follow drum vocal is enough for me
02:16:429 (3) - move to x:307 y:129 ummm... i know that this is ok for me, but i'll think about this
02:22:054 (2,3) - change rhythm? http://puu.sh/ipYvc/71581ab408.jpg no
02:26:273 (5,6) - blanket to 02:25:570 (2) - ? umm... i think that i don't need blanket for this
02:28:617 (6) - blanket to 02:27:211 (1,3) - 's (1) or (3) i'll go for (3)
02:38:929 (2) - stack end to 02:37:991 (7) - done
02:43:617 (6,3) - this overlap 02:44:320 (2,3) - stack to 02:43:148 (5,6) - 's start and end? ok, but still unsure about this
03:57:679 (2,3) - same as 02:22:054 - nope. i'd prefer square something like that

good luck~

Ultr4persona wrote:

(First time modding, so i hope that this will work)
00:05:357 (4) - entah kenapa gua ngerasa kalo ini enaknya disamain ujungnya. kan ada suara piano (lagi hold tu)
00:24:632 (4,5) - agak terlalu jauh (?) untuk yang baru main hard, agak deketin dikit circle 5-nya. nope
00:26:742 (5,6) - sama disini. w mw ad jumps ny tu
01:00:492 (9,10,1) - agak dideketin circle-nya. dh ckup sih untk tu
01:29:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kayaknya lebih bagus kalo dijadiin slider aja ini aj dh ckup
02:36:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - isn't that a bit too cruel (?) kinda, but i'm fine with that tbh
03:21:116 (4,5,1,2) - 5 sama 1 deketin sama slider, dan bukannya itu agak jahat juga? dikecilin jaraknya mungkin lebih bagus. g perlu lah dan w butuh opini dari mod slanjut ny
04:09:165 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - streamnya kecepetan imo, mulai-nya dari 7, sebelumnya jadiin slider. kan memang. w ikuti suara biola sihhh. dan maaf, w g mw pke slider untk tu

I think it's done, inb4 sorry if it doesn't match your style

Taeyang wrote:

• General
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• Yuki

1. 00:05:357 (4) - like this? no
   
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2. 00:17:634 (1) - here head and tail add hitsound i don't need to add hitsound for that anyway
3. 00:23:929 (2,3,4,5,6) - flow nope
   
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4. 00:27:211 (1,2,3) - suggest no
   
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5. 00:30:961 (4,1) - NC change here is downbeat ok
6. 00:33:304 (5) - NC nahh
7. 00:33:304 (5,6,7,8) - rhythm,00:34:476 - 00:34:711 - here drum sound strong ok
   
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8. 00:40:804 (5,1) - NC change no
9. 00:41:742 (2,3) - ctrl+g flow better umm, no
10. 00:43:148 - i know you followed vocal but i think need note circle in here done
11. 00:44:086 (3) - NC done
12. 00:45:961 - clickable add note circle nah
13. 00:53:461 (7,1) - NC change ohh ok
14. 00:58:148 - add note circle done
15. 00:59:086 (4) - NC done
16. 01:31:898 (3,4) - sugest done
    
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17. 02:00:023 (4,2) - try stack done
18. 02:02:132 (1,4) - NC change ok
19. 03:15:023 (5,6) - stack and make like this? i don't want to change that since it's a symmetrical from 03:17:367 (4,5,1,2,3) -
    
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20. 03:18:070 - here drum sound no
21. 03:40:336 (5) - NC ok
22. 04:43:617 (6,7,1) - readable ok. trapezoid one is ok for me
    
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Good luck~!

nadapan wrote:

Hello! From Chaoslitz modding queue

1. 01:31:429 (2,3) - Blanket done
2. 01:45:961 (1) - this slider goes suddenly slow. A slider break will happen for sure. And it happens a bit too sudden. Try to make it a little bit faster (You can let the 2 other sliders be as it is. need an opinion from the next mod or BN
3. 02:16:664 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I'm not that sure if this is a hard diff or an insane diff... or between them. If it's supposed to be an insane then ignore this. If it's supposed to be between Hard and Insane read this and think about it. If it's hard then remove the stream since it's a bit too hard for Hard it could be insane, it could be hard. even though, i'd prefer this one into stream
4. 02:19:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
5. 02:19:711 (1,2) - these two notes are too low it's fine
6. 02:49:711 (1) - same as 01:45:961 (1) same thing like i said
7. 03:03:773 (3) - blanket? no need

This was all I could find good luck with ranking

1. 00:00:721 (1,2) - i suggest to avoid stack. stack at play starting is a little confusing...
2. 00:22:289 (4) - follow the drum sound at 00:22:757-
   just a suggetion~
   
3. 00:34:007 (6,7) - I recommed to make the same pattern as 00:34:945 (1,2,3) - for following vocal
   especially, the spacing change of 00:34:476 (7,8,1,2,3) - is so confusing
4. 01:52:523 (5,6,7,1) - ^
5. 01:07:054 (2,3,4,5,6) - too sudden spacing change. I suggest to decrease spacing of 01:07:054 (2,3) -
6. 01:39:867 (4,1) - ^
7. 01:45:961 (1) - set red anchor on the slider tick correctly. suit to rhythm, imo
   
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8. 02:49:711 (1) - ^
9. 01:47:836 (2) - rotate 2degrees clockwise for good looking (vertical symmetry)
10. 01:49:945 (1) - I prefer to delete
11. 02:03:304- remove whistle
12. 02:04:242 (4) - end red line and follow drum by use of whistle(soft)
13. 03:02:836 (1,2,3,4) - you can blanket correctly
14. 03:15:257- add a note. in this part, vocal follow is strange
15. 03:22:289 (4,5) - very hard to paly
16. 03:37:523 (1,2,3) - clockwise pattern is better flow not anti-clockwise
17. 03:45:961 (1,2) - why not exchange positions? that's better flow, imo
18. 04:20:179 (3,5) - I suggest to blanket
19. 04:47:836 (1,2,3) - hard to find rhythm. I suggest to make 1/2 rhthm or use reverse like 04:46:898 (2) -
20. 04:56:273 (5,1) - u~m, not good flow...

RandomEffect wrote:

From your queue, M4M!

[Yuki]

1. 00:00:721 (1,2) - i suggest to avoid stack. stack at play starting is a little confusing... there is a same note, so i have to stack that
2. 00:22:289 (4) - follow the drum sound at 00:22:757- done
   just a suggetion~
   
3. 00:34:007 (6,7) - I recommed to make the same pattern as 00:34:945 (1,2,3) - for following vocal
   especially, the spacing change of 00:34:476 (7,8,1,2,3) - is so confusing changed the position
4. 01:52:523 (5,6,7,1) - ^ nah
5. 01:07:054 (2,3,4,5,6) - too sudden spacing change. I suggest to decrease spacing of 01:07:054 (2,3) - that's fine for me
6. 01:39:867 (4,1) - ^ ^
7. 01:45:961 (1) - set red anchor on the slider tick correctly. suit to rhythm, imo it's fine
   
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8. 02:49:711 (1) - ^ no
9. 01:47:836 (2) - rotate 2degrees clockwise for good looking (vertical symmetry) done
10. 01:49:945 (1) - I prefer to delete ohh, didn't hear any notes there. removed
11. 02:03:304- remove whistle ohh shit
12. 02:04:242 (4) - end red line and follow drum by use of whistle(soft) done
13. 03:02:836 (1,2,3,4) - you can blanket correctly no need
14. 03:15:257- add a note. in this part, vocal follow is strange no need
15. 03:22:289 (4,5) - very hard to paly i made (4) close with (5)
16. 03:37:523 (1,2,3) - clockwise pattern is better flow not anti-clockwise done
17. 03:45:961 (1,2) - why not exchange positions? that's better flow, imo ohhh that will help
18. 04:20:179 (3,5) - I suggest to blanket no need
19. 04:47:836 (1,2,3) - hard to find rhythm. I suggest to make 1/2 rhthm or use reverse like 04:46:898 (2) - i need more opinion about this
20. 04:56:273 (5,1) - u~m, not good flow... done

i like this song<3 thanks
~Good Luck~

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~! sup kitty neko
M4M from #modreqs.

General:

1. Please change your audio lead-in to 2000ms. Not really a requirement for ranking but I feel it’s better to be safe than sorry. done

Yuki:

1. 00:17:634 – The volume here may be too low since you didn’t use any whistle sounds to emphasize the soft volume. So it’s hard to hear the slider. I suggest you rather raise the volume till the slider is heard just to prevent any issues that might arise while trying to approve this. i'm not pretty sure about this, but ok
2. 00:21:820 (2,6) – Stack? I don’t really see a reason not to. i don't feel like want to stack them
3. 00:32:836 (3,7) – Hm, can’t you try to make a perfect stack here? I understand you’re trying to use the correct spacing, but perhaps you can try and manipulate previous notes till you can stack those two perfectly. done
4. 00:34:711 (8,1) – Make the distance between these two notes similar to the distance between these notes: 00:34:945 (1,2,3) – The reason is because (1) hints a jump imo and also since you placed a jump here: 00:36:351 (3,1) - dome
5. 00:36:351 (3,5) – Uhh, please try to avoid this overlap. It may not be visible during gameplay, but unnecessary overlaps can still be improved though for even better gameplay. made something new
6. 00:43:148 (2,3) – Stack, again? no
7. 00:47:601 (4,1,2) – Make the distance between these notes similar to the distance between these: 00:48:070 (2,3,4,5) – It’s just weird that that distance is smaller than the rest for the same rhythm.
8. 00:47:836 (1) – I think it would be better if you remove the new combo here and add new combo here instead: 00:48:070 (2) – Sounds more effective. there we go
9. 00:49:711 (5,2) – Hm, stack on tail of the slider. i guess not
10. 00:53:929 (2) – New combo here instead where the vocals start again since you followed this combo pattern at the previous part of the map. So remove new combo here: 00:53:461 (1) – and add new combo here: 00:53:929 (2) – done
11. 00:55:336 (4) – Try to place this slider somewhere else where it wouldn’t overlap 00:53:226 (6,1) – since it looks a bit crammed. done
    
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12. 00:57:445 (2) – Add new combo here where the vocals start. not really sure about that
13. 01:00:375 – Perhaps place a note here? I think it sounds cool. not really
14. 01:03:539 (4,5) – Rather try this rhythm here: i didn't plan to follow the vocal for that, so no
    
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    The reason is because the long sound actually starts here: 01:03:773 – so remember to remove 01:04:242 (5) – so the tail of the slider ends there.
15. 01:04:946 (2,5) – Stack? no
16. 01:15:961 (1) – Why not stack the head of that slider on 01:14:788 (3) -? It will look much better imo. not really
17. 01:19:711 (1) – Rather place a finish on this note? I think it fits in better with the vocals/music. no cymbal sound means no finish
18. 01:23:461 (1) - ^, on the head. ^
19. 01:27:211 (1) - ^ ^
20. 01:34:711 (1) - ^ ^
21. 01:38:461 (1) - ^. The same finish-hitsound advice applies to all the other kiai times. ^
22. 01:40:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – The placement of these notes are pretty boring since there’s no interesting small jumps or anything. I can’t really think of a good example now but I believe you can come up with something more interesting like a small star shape again. i'll think about this
23. 01:42:211 (1,2) – Make the distance between these two notes similar to the distance between these: 01:42:914 (2,3,1) – I know you tried to stack there but I think it will be more effective if you try to maintain the same distance. well oke
24. 02:34:242 (1) – Remove new combo here since you didn’t add new combo here: 01:30:492 (7) – done
25. 02:45:023 (5) – Maybe stack the head of this slider on 02:44:320 (2) -? no need
26. 02:54:398 (3,2) – Stack? done
27. 03:03:304 (2,3) – Please improve this blanket. It looks pretty bad. done for (3)
28. 03:18:539 (2,4) – Stack? no
29. 03:38:695 (2) – The tail of this slider is a bit too high. It’s touching the HP bar a bit. Please just lower the tail a bit. done
30. 03:38:461 (1,3) – Hmmm, stack again. done with different DS
31. 03:44:789 (4) – Hm, this circle looks so high. Just to be safe I suggest lowering the circle a bit. done for the star pattern
32. 03:49:711 (1) – Same thing here about the tail being too high. For safety just lower it a bit please. ok, lowered the tail
33. 03:57:211 (1) – If I were you, I’d try stacking the head of the slider on 03:55:336 (1) – no need to stack
34. 04:05:648 (3) – Can’t you try to stack this circle on any one of these: 04:04:359 (7,8,9) – ok
35. 04:47:836 (1,2,3,4) – Rather try this rhythm? done
    
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    Reason is the current rhythm might be a bit misleading for players since you didn’t use it anywhere else and also you used that rhythm that I suggested above here as well: 04:51:586 (1,2,3,4,5) –
36. 04:56:039 (4,1) – Hmm, stack? i just need to rotate the star pattern, and it's done

Not a bad map at all. It can still do with a bit of polishing though.
You can call me back after getting at least like 5 more mods.
Good Luck~!

1. 00:03:994 (4) - I suggest you part this slider because the sounds are both really strong. sometimes a slider on a red tick is a good thing but this is not.
2. 00:04:812 (2,3) - turn these into a slider to support movement
3. 00:05:357 (4) - make this symmetrical please. like this:
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4. 00:07:266 - this strong note should not be on a sliderend. make 2 circles instead
5. 00:26:039 - the emphasize should be here becasue the bass is so loud here. again make 2 circles and maybe add a jump here. you could also use a slider from here to 00:26:273 -
6. 00:28:148 (3,4,5,6) - i think you should add something jumpy here the music suggests ist
7. 00:34:476 (7,8,1,3) - change the pattern so this becomes a perfect square. it'd fit the music
8. 01:09:867 (5,6,1) - this line is too straight. to make the flow a bit better you should put 01:10:336 (1) - a bit more to the left so you get a better angle. maybe 30° would fit
9. 01:10:336 (7,8) - the distance is a bit too low. for 1/1 it's nearly the same as the 1/2 jumps you used before and so it'll be difficult to read. you could make the distance higher or stack 01:10:336 (1,2) -
10. 02:53:461 (1) - to 03:08:343 - I think you should remapp this part because it's really boring. you somehow only spam 1/2's but the strings are the interesting stuff going on. I suggest you map them to get a bit diversity and interest in your map.
11. 03:15:023 (5,6) - again the same I said at 01:10:336
12. 03:18:539 (2,4) - avoid this overlap
13. 03:27:914 (4,5) - to support the vocals and make your pattern a bit more interesting i suggest you stack those 2.
14. 03:28:851 (6) - again i think this shouldn't be slider. make 2 circles instead because it fits the music and else feels weird to play
15. 03:29:554 (2,3) - change those 2 into a slider to support the vocals. there's this waiting sound and you could show that.
16. 03:59:554 (3,4) - again make this into a slider to support vocals
17. 04:27:211 (1) - make this slider symmetrical. i showed you an example before make it like this (but rotated)
    

Hard wrote:

Yo M4M from my queue

[Yuki]

1. 00:03:994 (4) - I suggest you part this slider because the sounds are both really strong. sometimes a slider on a red tick is a good thing but this is not. done
2. 00:04:812 (2,3) - turn these into a slider to support movement done
3. 00:05:357 (4) - make this symmetrical please. like this i don't think so:
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4. 00:07:266 - this strong note should not be on a sliderend. make 2 circles instead ok
5. 00:26:039 - the emphasize should be here becasue the bass is so loud here. again make 2 circles and maybe add a jump here. you could also use a slider from here to 00:26:273 - don't feel like want to do that, sorry
6. 00:28:148 (3,4,5,6) - i think you should add something jumpy here the music suggests ist done
7. 00:34:476 (7,8,1,3) - change the pattern so this becomes a perfect square. it'd fit the music done
8. 01:09:867 (5,6,1) - this line is too straight. to make the flow a bit better you should put 01:10:336 (1) - a bit more to the left so you get a better angle. maybe 30° would fit i don't want to move (1) since it's a square, so no
9. 01:10:336 (7,8) - the distance is a bit too low. for 1/1 it's nearly the same as the 1/2 jumps you used before and so it'll be difficult to read. you could make the distance higher or stack 01:10:336 (1,2) - no
10. 02:53:461 (1) - to 03:08:343 - I think you should remapp this part because it's really boring. you somehow only spam 1/2's but the strings are the interesting stuff going on. I suggest you map them to get a bit diversity and interest in your map. i'd prefer like this, but i need more opinions from other mods
11. 03:15:023 (5,6) - again the same I said at 01:10:336 no
12. 03:18:539 (2,4) - avoid this overlap now someone suggested me to stack those 2, but whatever
13. 03:27:914 (4,5) - to support the vocals and make your pattern a bit more interesting i suggest you stack those 2. no
14. 03:28:851 (6) - again i think this shouldn't be slider. make 2 circles instead because it fits the music and else feels weird to play done
15. 03:29:554 (2,3) - change those 2 into a slider to support the vocals. there's this waiting sound and you could show that. done
16. 03:59:554 (3,4) - again make this into a slider to support vocals i'm not gonna go for slider
17. 04:27:211 (1) - make this slider symmetrical. i showed you an example before make it like this (but rotated) no
    

All in all I think you could make this map a lot more interesting if you sometimes stop mapping the drums and go with vocals. try to feel the music a bit more i guess. also it becomes a bit monotone because you're using the same patterns the whole time. Try to fix that. need more help from more mods tbh. every mapper has their own style for that. also, i did a vocal some of them

1. delete osb file there ? I don't see any sb thing here
2. 05:00:961 - from here on I feel like the guitar sound is a bit sound off , have you got any timing check ? lol idk rip zzz

1. 00:26:976 (6,1) - a low spacing on cymbal sound here while you use high spacing for drum here 00:26:742 (5,6) - is kinda make the flow here a bit weird imo , try move (6) to around x336 y220 ? , spacing here 00:26:742 (5,6) - should be smaller than 00:26:976 (6,1) - imo
2. 00:35:882 (1,2,3) - try place these notes like this ? I think that would make flow here 00:35:414 (3,1,2,3,1) - a bit better
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3. 00:52:523 (5,6,7) - hmm why suddenly lower spacing here ? I think it better to make spacing here looks like what you did previously 00:52:054 (3,4,5) -
4. 00:55:336 (3,4) - I think flow here can be improved a bit , try move (4) to around x240 y328
5. 01:10:101 (6,1) - spacing here should be bigger than 01:09:867 (5,6) - so it would make sense with music more , this 01:10:336 - sound more emphasized than this 01:10:101 - imo so try move (1) to around x68 y192 ? ( need to fix next note too if you make change )
6. 01:33:304 (3,4,5) - try make spacing here a bit more consistent so it would make flow here better imo
7. 01:35:414 (4,5) - spacing here should be bigger than 01:35:179 (3,4) - so it would make sense with music more imo , this 01:35:648 - sound more emphasized than 01:35:414 - so try move (4) to around x336 y192 ?
8. 02:23:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - try place like this ? I think it would make flow a bit better imo
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9. 02:27:680 (3,6) - blanket can be improved a bit
10. 02:54:398 (3) - I think if you move this to around x244 y136 it will make flow here 02:53:929 (2,3,4) - better
11. 03:21:586 (1,2,3) - try make spacing here consistent so it would make flow here a bit better imo
12. 03:22:524 (5,6,7,8,9) - same ^
13. 04:23:226 (3) - mapping emphasized cymbal sound as sliderend is not that good imo , it make rhythm sound a bit weird and might give awkward feeling ,I would use this rhythm instead
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14. 04:39:867 (6,1) - why suddenly low spacing here ? it make the flow here weird imo , 04:40:336 - sound emphasized and should use higher spacing imo
    ,try move 04:39:867 (6) - to around x156 y164 ?
15. 04:40:804 (2,3) - similiar to what I said above , I think spacing can be increased a bit so it would make flow here better, try move 04:41:273 (3) - to around x228 y232 ( might need to fix next notes too if you make change )

1. 00:00:993 (2) - hmm i'd found it more attractive to stack this with 00:01:539 (4) - instead of (1)
2. 00:30:492 (3,1) - this kind of uncomfortable to play as the direction and the placement of the note doesn't make a good transition. you could either move the note upside, or i'd got another recommendation pattern for you as the ss below
   
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3. 00:37:523 (5,6,7) - why dont you space them out ? that's was pretty weird to get 1/2 stacked notes on the end.. which could be missread as triplet
4. 00:55:336 (3,4,5) - it doesn't looks pretty neat isn't ? well i kind help it if it's rather mapping style or something
5. 01:43:851 (1) - clap on the start ? there's drum played at there besides the cymbal
6. 02:47:601 (1) - ^ and 04:25:101 (1) - too
7. 01:45:961 (1,2) - their contact does seems suit, i'd curve (2) on the opposite way
8. 02:01:195 (2,1) - idk if you're trying to make anti jump for this, why dont you 02:02:132 (1,2) - ctrl g them instead ?
9. 02:20:648 (3,4,5,6) - jump pattern play a bit too sharp with make it became pretty awkward, move (6) ?
   
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10. 04:29:554 (2) - you could add NC here to make to stabilize the hp drain and make the anti jump easier to notice

CelsiusLK wrote:

[general]

1. delete osb file there ? I don't see any sb thing here why does this keep appearing?
2. 05:00:961 - from here on I feel like the guitar sound is a bit sound off , have you got any timing check ? lol idk rip zzz finding someone now ok it's good to go

[yuki]

1. 00:26:976 (6,1) - a low spacing on cymbal sound here while you use high spacing for drum here 00:26:742 (5,6) - is kinda make the flow here a bit weird imo , try move (6) to around x336 y220 ? , spacing here 00:26:742 (5,6) - should be smaller than 00:26:976 (6,1) - imodone
2. 00:35:882 (1,2,3) - try place these notes like this ? I think that would make flow here 00:35:414 (3,1,2,3,1) - a bit better done
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3. 00:52:523 (5,6,7) - hmm why suddenly lower spacing here ? I think it better to make spacing here looks like what you did previously 00:52:054 (3,4,5) - using triangle pattern now
4. 00:55:336 (3,4) - I think flow here can be improved a bit , try move (4) to around x240 y328 done
5. 01:10:101 (6,1) - spacing here should be bigger than 01:09:867 (5,6) - so it would make sense with music more , this 01:10:336 - sound more emphasized than this 01:10:101 - imo so try move (1) to around x68 y192 ? ( need to fix next note too if you make change ) fix for square pattern. i'm not pretty sure about (2) at above, so i have to decrease the scale a little (4 of them)
6. 01:33:304 (3,4,5) - try make spacing here a bit more consistent so it would make flow here better imo i moved (5) only
7. 01:35:414 (4,5) - spacing here should be bigger than 01:35:179 (3,4) - so it would make sense with music more imo , this 01:35:648 - sound more emphasized than 01:35:414 - so try move (4) to around x336 y192 ? there we go
8. 02:23:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - try place like this ? I think it would make flow a bit better imo fine
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9. 02:27:680 (3,6) - blanket can be improved a bit done
10. 02:54:398 (3) - I think if you move this to around x244 y136 it will make flow here 02:53:929 (2,3,4) - better well this should do
11. 03:21:586 (1,2,3) - try make spacing here consistent so it would make flow here a bit better imo made something new
12. 03:22:524 (5,6,7,8,9) - same ^ ^
13. 04:23:226 (3) - mapping emphasized cymbal sound as sliderend is not that good imo , it make rhythm sound a bit weird and might give awkward feeling ,I would use this rhythm instead remade
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14. 04:39:867 (6,1) - why suddenly low spacing here ? it make the flow here weird imo , 04:40:336 - sound emphasized and should use higher spacing imo
    ,try move 04:39:867 (6) - to around x156 y164 ? ok
15. 04:40:804 (2,3) - similiar to what I said above , I think spacing can be increased a bit so it would make flow here better, try move 04:41:273 (3) - to around x228 y232 ( might need to fix next notes too if you make change ) done and no need to change for other notes

hmm I think flow and spacing can be improved a bit

good luck , have fun mapping

Momochikun wrote:

as requested you forgot to say about M4M in chat

[Yuki]

1. 00:00:993 (2) - hmm i'd found it more attractive to stack this with 00:01:539 (4) - instead of (1) not that sure, but whatever
2. 00:30:492 (3,1) - this kind of uncomfortable to play as the direction and the placement of the note doesn't make a good transition. you could either move the note upside, or i'd got another recommendation pattern for you as the ss below that'll do
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:37:523 (5,6,7) - why dont you space them out ? that's was pretty weird to get 1/2 stacked notes on the end.. which could be missread as triplet changed
4. 00:55:336 (3,4,5) - it doesn't looks pretty neat isn't ? well i kind help it if it's rather mapping style or something from previous mod
5. 01:43:851 (1) - clap on the start ? there's drum played at there besides the cymbal added
6. 02:47:601 (1) - ^ and 04:25:101 (1) - too added
7. 01:45:961 (1,2) - their contact does seems suit, i'd curve (2) on the opposite way nope
8. 02:01:195 (2,1) - idk if you're trying to make anti jump for this, why dont you 02:02:132 (1,2) - ctrl g them instead ? ok
9. 02:20:648 (3,4,5,6) - jump pattern play a bit too sharp with make it became pretty awkward, move (6) ? done
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 04:29:554 (2) - you could add NC here to make to stabilize the hp drain and make the anti jump easier to notice ok

slow and cute song, the map itself could be polished a bit.. at least for me :c
good luck !

T-Mac wrote:

[Yuki]

So much pentagons and five-pointed stars but i think snowflakes are more like hexagonals XD not really. it supposed to be like 6 notes for snowflakes like that :/

And you can add "あいにゃん" and "クボナオキ" to tags because these two are lyricist and composer, and "サイサイ" because this is Silent Siren's abbreviation done

BG as same as capsule - dreamin dreamin, but just ignore that plz but i got the BG from google like randomly D:

00:02:085 (1,3) - What about blanket ? 00:03:175 (3) - blanket 00:02:085 (1) - 's slider end no thanks

00:29:086 (1,2,3) - Volume may a little too loud, reduce the volume to 50% ? Only piano here. 00:30:961 (1) - Volume is lighter than 00:29:086 (1,2,3) - so I think a little unreasonable, because a strong finish here, stronger than 00:29:086 (1,2,3) - , but you use 55% volume and 00:29:086 (1,2,3) - is 70% you need to listen to the song on that part

01:35:414 (4) - Move to (344,185)? Spacing between 01:34:711 (1,4) - and 01:34:945 (2,4) - will be the same, looking better than before ok

01:45:961 (1) - I think you can consider this to instead this bad timing note. sorry

02:16:664 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - This stream's volume should be louder and louder because of background violin sound no

03:09:398 (4,5,6,7) - Why spacing changed ? :O hue. that's trapezoid, but it looks fine

03:15:492 (6,4) - I think NCshould be here not 03:15:961 (1,1) - here, because a new lyric start 03:15:492 (6,4) - here no. i used the beat one as the perfect one to set as NC

03:23:461 - Break more should start at here, start at the long white line no

03:41:507 (3) - More like 1/6 not 1/8 that's 1/8 for me

05:08:283 (4) - I think it's unnecessary because nothing here not really sure, but i need an opinion about this

Good luck !

1. Tambah satu custom color lagi? tambahin pink deh kan lagunya tentang galau cinta, terlebih ada slider hati di dalamnya
2. Menurut aku ya, kayanya butuh satu red timing lagi di sini 00:01:811 - soalnya butuh reset untuk metronomenya karena bagian awal downbeatnya agak aneh, selebihnya ok

• Gameplay:

1. 00:05:357 (4) - Bentuk hatinya kurang menarik karena kurang rapih, mungkin kaya gini lebih bagus http://puu.sh/iyZJx/a13f007a44.jpg, in case kalo butuh kodenya:
   

   210,243,5357,2,0,B|171:185|211:141|255:161|255:161|299:141|343:185|296:245,1,272.000005187988,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:06:721 (1) - Mengikuti mod di atas, yang itu bisa dipindah sedikit ke x:320 y:324
3. 02:33:304 (3,4) - Menurut aku ritmenya agak maksa, dimana (3) diminta berhenti di blue tick. Karena di kiai 1 sama 3 ga ada ritme yang kaya gitu
   02:52:523 (5) - Menurut aku mending slider yang itu berhenti di red tick aja, berhubung ini mirip kaya build up suaranya, jadi agak aneh kalo sampe miss drum di bagian ini 02:52:757 -
4. Terus yang ini 03:07:054 (3,4) - agak aneh ritmenya menurut aku, karena pas transisi perpindahan kursor dari (3,4,5) kurang enak di mainin, mungkin ritmenya bisa dicoba kaya gini ngikutin suara drumnya http://puu.sh/iz220/ad116c1a0f.jpg, terus yang ini juga 03:07:406 - bisa diganti clapnya sama whistle biar suaranya kedenger lebih bagus?
5. 03:18:773 (3) - Cuma minor sih, tapi kayanya kalo itu cuma straight slider kayanya terlalu kaku, mungkin dibuat agak curve lebih bagus flownya http://puu.sh/iz2rM/bfe5f5683a.jpg
6. 03:23:343 - Tambah circle clap di sana? soalnya kalo cuma berhenti dengan triplet masih kurang pas, menurut aku sih suara drumnya masih ada sampe blue tick di sana
7. 04:11:859 - Tambah circle clap di sana? soalnya nanggung bgt kalo mau stream sekalian aja, soalnya flownya agak putus di sana terus di dua kiai lain juga ga ada ritme kaya gitu
8. 04:27:211 (1) - Bentuk hatinya kurang menarik karena kurang rapih, terus sayang bgt posisinya harus vertikal, kurang kerasa kalo itu bentuk hati, mungkin kaya gini lebih bagus http://puu.sh/iz3PX/5cedeee74c.jpg, kalo butuh kodenya:
   

   232,164,267211,6,0,B|184:108|112:156|148:216|148:216|112:272|184:320|232:260,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   Hitsound:
9. 00:12:448 - 00:12:721 - Bgmn kalo keduanya di bagian itu ditambah whistle? pianonya lumayan noticeable soalnya
10. 00:28:382 (4,5) - Berhubung bagian itu masih ada suara bass sama drumnya mending diisi aja deh kaya yang lain, jadi (4) pake sampleset Drum:clap, terus (5) pake sampleset Auto:clap. Karena bagian yang softnya baru mlai di bagian ini 00:29:086 -
11. 00:49:476 (3) - Lupa whistle?
12. 01:30:492 (7,8,9,10) - Untuk stream yang itu kenapa suaranya ga disamain aja pake clap semua kaya yang ini 02:19:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ?
13. 01:42:914 - Tambah whistle di sana deh, terus coba pake sampleset Drum aja untuk yang ini 01:44:554 - sama ini 01:45:492 - bakal lebih klop sama drumnya menurut aku
14. 02:46:664 - Tambah whistle di sana deh, terus yang ini 02:49:242 - pake sampleset Drum aja bakal lebih klop sama drumnya menurut aku
15. 03:07:054 - Tambah clap?
16. 03:41:742 - Coba tambah whistle deh di sana, soalnya ada suara simbal sedikit dari 1/8 di sana
17. 04:24:164 - Tambah whistle di sana deh, terus yang ini 04:26:742 - finishnya diganti pake clap aja, terus sampleset Drumnya didelete, menurut aku bakal lebih bagus suaranya
18. 05:00:257 - Lupa clap?
    
    Misc:
19. Cek nc deh lit, kayanya ada yang combonya panjang bgt ada yang terlalu pendek. Untuk gampangnya coba ikutin white big tick antara 1 atau 2 terus nc

Mako Sakata wrote:

Halloooo lit maaf telat modnya kemarin aku uas sama ada kegiatan amal
A small check from me as requested,

[General]

1. Tambah satu custom color lagi? tambahin pink deh kan lagunya tentang galau cinta, terlebih ada slider hati di dalamnya coba w pkirkan ini dlu
2. Menurut aku ya, kayanya butuh satu red timing lagi di sini 00:01:811 - soalnya butuh reset untuk metronomenya karena bagian awal downbeatnya agak aneh, selebihnya ok kek ny g perlu lah

[Yuki]

• Gameplay:

1. 00:05:357 (4) - Bentuk hatinya kurang menarik karena kurang rapih, mungkin kaya gini lebih bagus http://puu.sh/iyZJx/a13f007a44.jpg, in case kalo butuh kodenya: ok
   

   210,243,5357,2,0,B|171:185|211:141|255:161|255:161|299:141|343:185|296:245,1,272.000005187988,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:06:721 (1) - Mengikuti mod di atas, yang itu bisa dipindah sedikit ke x:320 y:324 done
3. 02:33:304 (3,4) - Menurut aku ritmenya agak maksa, dimana (3) diminta berhenti di blue tick. Karena di kiai 1 sama 3 ga ada ritme yang kaya gitu
   02:52:523 (5) - itu beda lagi dari KIAI 1 dan 3. coba kamu dengarkan musiknya dulu di KIAI 1 dan 3
4. Menurut aku mending slider yang itu berhenti di red tick aja, berhubung ini mirip kaya build up suaranya, jadi agak aneh kalo sampe miss drum di bagian ini 02:52:757 - g pas amat note ny
5. Terus yang ini 03:07:054 (3,4) - agak aneh ritmenya menurut aku, karena pas transisi perpindahan kursor dari (3,4,5) kurang enak di mainin, mungkin ritmenya bisa dicoba kaya gini ngikutin suara drumnya http://puu.sh/iz220/ad116c1a0f.jpg, terus yang ini juga 03:07:406 - bisa diganti clapnya sama whistle biar suaranya kedenger lebih bagus? w cuma ikuti drum ny aja. dan red tick tu g ad note untk drum ny sih
6. 03:18:773 (3) - Cuma minor sih, tapi kayanya kalo itu cuma straight slider kayanya terlalu kaku, mungkin dibuat agak curve lebih bagus flownya http://puu.sh/iz2rM/bfe5f5683a.jpg done
7. 03:23:343 - Tambah circle clap di sana? soalnya kalo cuma berhenti dengan triplet masih kurang pas, menurut aku sih suara drumnya masih ada sampe blue tick di sana tu g ada note untk drum sihh
8. 04:11:859 - Tambah circle clap di sana? soalnya nanggung bgt kalo mau stream sekalian aja, soalnya flownya agak putus di sana terus di dua kiai lain juga ga ada ritme kaya gitu tu beda lagi dari kiai
9. 04:27:211 (1) - Bentuk hatinya kurang menarik karena kurang rapih, terus sayang bgt posisinya harus vertikal, kurang kerasa kalo itu bentuk hati, mungkin kaya gini lebih bagus http://puu.sh/iz3PX/5cedeee74c.jpg, kalo butuh kodenya: sip sip
   

   232,164,267211,6,0,B|184:108|112:156|148:216|148:216|112:272|184:320|232:260,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   Hitsound:
10. 00:12:448 - 00:12:721 - Bgmn kalo keduanya di bagian itu ditambah whistle? pianonya lumayan noticeable soalnya ok
11. 00:28:382 (4,5) - Berhubung bagian itu masih ada suara bass sama drumnya mending diisi aja deh kaya yang lain, jadi (4) pake sampleset Drum:clap, terus (5) pake sampleset Auto:clap. Karena bagian yang softnya baru mlai di bagian ini 00:29:086 -
12. 00:49:476 (3) - Lupa whistle?
13. 01:30:492 (7,8,9,10) - Untuk stream yang itu kenapa suaranya ga disamain aja pake clap semua kaya yang ini 02:19:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ? done
14. 01:42:914 - Tambah whistle di sana deh, terus coba pake sampleset Drum aja untuk yang ini 01:44:554 - sama ini 01:45:492 - bakal lebih klop sama drumnya menurut aku w ambil whistle aja, kcuali drum ny
15. 02:46:664 - Tambah whistle di sana deh, terus yang ini 02:49:242 - pake sampleset Drum aja bakal lebih klop sama drumnya menurut aku ^
16. 03:07:054 - Tambah clap? blh juga
17. 03:41:742 - Coba tambah whistle deh di sana, soalnya ada suara simbal sedikit dari 1/8 di sana dah
18. 04:24:164 - Tambah whistle di sana deh, terus yang ini 04:26:742 - finishnya diganti pake clap aja, terus sampleset Drumnya didelete, menurut aku bakal lebih bagus suaranya ambil whistle aja. drum ny g w ganti jadi sampleset dan finish ny g w gantikan
19. 05:00:257 - Lupa clap? suara ny agk beda dari drum untk soft-hitclap
    
    Misc:
20. Cek nc deh lit, kayanya ada yang combonya panjang bgt ada yang terlalu pendek. Untuk gampangnya coba ikutin white big tick antara 1 atau 2 terus nc stiap note ato finish ato beat ny y w buatkan NC aja. tingal w tungu aja tentang ini di mod slanjutny

[]
Goodluck, aku seneng kalo ngemod lagunya galau

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Silent Siren, way to get into my good books ^_^

Yuki

1. 00:05:357 (4) - I know this is an extended note, but I think it would be better if you had a hittable downbeat instead of sliderend no, i don't think so. there is a long note for the piano (soft), so i have to make it as a slider
2. 00:34:007 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - For this, I think you should use the same arrangement of notes for the repeated vocals. For example, you used slider into circle for first one, so it should be used for all of the repeated vocals here. I also recommend this because the pattern of 7,8,1,2,3 doesn't look particularly special, and just distance spaced notes (couple of instances where this occurs) no
3. 00:41:507 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same note here, first you use circles, then reverse sliders ok, so the reverse sliders are for the vocal (3 notes)
4. 00:45:023 (5) - Remove reverse in favour of a hittable downbeat and finish done
5. 01:25:336 (1,2) - Does this stack represent anything? Because it doesn't get followed up upon (by any other stacks). I think you should either remove it, or stack 01:25:805 (3,4) - to be consistent option B of yours will do
6. 01:42:914 (2,3) - If the claps are on the whites, why have the sliders on reds and the sliderends on the heavier note might need an opinion from next mod
7. 01:58:617 (5) - Remove reverse in favour of a hittable downbeat no
8. 04:30:961 Kiai? It's a pretty heavy part is that a chorus part? no, i don't think so

Hmm...while I know there aren't many specific errors, I feel like there weren't many interesting patterns going on. Mostly shapes (pentagons, squares, triangles) or circles going around the map in a circular motion. Might want to keep that in mind. Nonetheless, amazing song so enjoy some stars. i prefer a star and other patterns like that. and thx for stars XD