1. burai (2,96 stars, 158 notes)
2. Challenging (2,38 stars, 171 notes)
3. Gordon's Simple (1,17 stars, 66 notes)
4. tutuhara's Advanced (1,83 stars, 117 notes)

Unreal's Advanced

1. CS : 3.5 ? I guess It will fits a bit better than 5 - I decided that CS5 will suit best for this are diff. Therefore, the names are diff not just a normal"
2. 00:00:800 (1,2,3) - Move up this three to the center to make this symmetry looks more better - ok
3. 00:20:167 (6) - Give New Combo at here? - ok
4. 00:33:837 (6,1) - It will be looks more better with blanket at here -
5. 00:53:205 (3) - Clap? - ok
6. 01:13:711 (1) - This slider head will better with finish on it - ok add finish
   Thanks for mod ) From _Unreality_

_Unreality_ wrote:

Unreal's Advanced

1. CS : 3.5 ? I guess It will fits a bit better than 5 - I decided that CS5 will suit best for this are diff. Therefore, the names are diff not just a normal"
2. 00:00:800 (1,2,3) - Move up this three to the center to make this symmetry looks more better - ok
3. 00:20:167 (6) - Give New Combo at here? - ok
4. 00:33:837 (6,1) - It will be looks more better with blanket at here - ok thanks
5. 00:53:205 (3) - Clap? - ok
6. 01:13:711 (1) - This slider head will better with finish on it - ok add finish
   Thanks for mod ) From _Unreality_

Thanks for mod

NewIpas wrote:

Hello~ Hello~
From my Queue~
I'm sorry for the delay :3

Let's start~ Okay~

General

1. Since drum-hitnormal that you used at this map fits for the clap hitsound, I prefer you to change your clap with it . So, you must fix your hitsounding if you applied this I do not understand this. However, I do notice the drum1 and drum2 sounds are the same. I'm not sure why that is.
2. Remove kiai time on 00:25:103 - and start kiai from 00:49:407 - and end it on 01:13:711 - . This applied to all diff

burai

1. Why does this diff have a different hitsound with another diff Because I wanted to. :3 and doesn't have any kiai time? I would have, except I thought that it would be awkward with a copy/paste section. I think that maybe I should remap that section. Anyway, well-mapped :3 Thank you~! :3

That's all
Good Luck~

NewIpas wrote:

Hello~

Gordon's Simple

1. 00:06:875 (3) - I think clap on this note is doesn't fits since the sound like a finish though . But, prefer to remove all hit on this note hmm,good idea ok<Finish
2. For consistency, add clap on 00:31:939 (1) - no, 00:38:015 (1) - no, 00:51:686 (2) - yes ^^, 01:02:318 (1) - yes >^^<
3. 01:13:711 - Prefer to end up the kiai from 00:49:407 - at here why? ~idk~
4. 01:17:888 - What is this Timing Points supposed to? I thought If the BPM doesn't take any changes, it will be fine . Prefer to remove this on all Diff . Also, why this BPM change only applied on this diff? I'm very prefer you to since it will be rather weird yep i fix that
5. 01:18:999 - Same as above, I think its fine with the first timing . You don't have to start any timing anymore since its fine ^

Good Luck~

chaee wrote:

[Gordon's Simple]

00:06:875 (3) - For a soft song like this, finishes aren't really necessary. I would remove finish for this note as it sounds awkward. Add a whistle maybe? ok
00:04:597 (1) - Remove whistle, it sounds funny imo ^
00:09:154 (6) - ^ oh,no i like it,there is a strike of the bell
00:22:825 (5) - This part here feels really empty. Why not add a note and stack onto 00:23:584 (1) - ? no ><
00:23:584 (1) - Remove finish and clap. These hitsounds on this specific note sounds too overpowering. The song is soft, so keep your hitsounding soft. Make sense? this note open Kiai Tike + there is an increase, as a fanfare
00:31:939 (1) - Add clap nope
00:38:015 (1) - ^ ^
00:40:293 (4) - ^ ^ I didn't hear the beat!
00:42:572 (5,1) - Blanket these notes why?
00:43:331 (1) - Clap hmm..no,sorry ><
00:45:610 (4) - I would strongly suggest putting a note here. It sounds really awkward, and doesn't flow very well. Also, if you decide to do this, add clap hitsound as well ^
00:47:129 (6) - Why the drum clap hitsound here? Doesn't sound good at all. Please consider sticking to only soft hitsounds for this difficulty oh,yes,i forget about it<fix
00:49:407 (1) - Remove whistle and add finish instead okay
00:51:686 (2,3) - Replace these notes with 1/4 sliders for a little variety instead. Too many single notes, and few sliders calls for a painful easy difficulty to play. Please consider it ^^ okay~ ^_^
00:53:205 (4) - Add a note here, feels empty ^ i make it > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3054450
00:57:762 (2,3) - These notes are too close together. Move 3 away from 2 a bit ㅇㅅㅇ....?
01:04:597 (1) - Whistle ok
01:05:356 (2) - Clap ^
01:06:116 (3) - Remove whistle and clap instead no
01:08:394 (2) - Clap ok
01:12:951 (4) - Whistle no
01:17:129 (2) - Clap ^
01:17:888 (3) - 1/4 slider. Sounds better no,i kike it

Comments: Difficulty's fine but hitsounding needs some serious work. Thanks >//<

1. Some wav files are a lot longer than needed, consider cutting the silent part of the files.
2. The snowflake in the background rotates but it's barely noticeable. Consider letting it rotate a little faster
3. Sound quality is "meh" but okay I guess. However the sudden cut at the end is really not okay. I don't know where you got the mp3 from, but I'm sure there is a longer fade out here than the sudden end.
4. Hitsounds are also "meh", because I don't think they represent things of the song itself. Like these 00:05:736 (1,2,3) - , they represent the piano (I think it's a piano) but it doesn't seem like the right hitsound to use.

1. Please keep the hitsounds consistent throughout your diffs in this set
2. I don't really like this diff, was there a difference in time period between the diffs you mapped?

1. The hitsound volume changes do not make sense. The first part is 50%, while the kiai is 30%, while it is a lot louder than the soft intro. Also the 50% volume near the end is unnecessary and again, no reason to make it louder. Lower the volume there as well.

Too be honest there still is a lot of work, especially if you want to keep your style. But I really wish you the best of luck with this set, I hope you will get it ranked.

A Mystery wrote:

Hello! Returning a favor for all the hard work you already have done for me

General

1. Some wav files are a lot longer than needed, consider cutting the silent part of the files.
2. The snowflake in the background rotates but it's barely noticeable. Consider letting it rotate a little faster
3. Sound quality is "meh" but okay I guess. However the sudden cut at the end is really not okay. I don't know where you got the mp3 from, but I'm sure there is a longer fade out here than the sudden end.
4. Hitsounds are also "meh", because I don't think they represent things of the song itself. Like these 00:05:736 (1,2,3) - , they represent the piano (I think it's a piano) but it doesn't seem like the right hitsound to use. No, it doesn't?

burai

00:00:800 (1,2) - I feel like you should map the vocals here instead of using 2 long sliders like that, because it feels quite empty. This is what I'm talking about (the slider between the brackets is optional) http://puu.sh/hrscp/1e4a587d94.jpg Eh, I don't know. I see your point, but I want to avoid just mapping to vocals for the sake of mapping to vocals. It can also be overdone I know. Maybe I'll wait to see what others think? Sorry, but I'm not really sure about this.
00:05:736 (1,2,3) - These sounds are very soft and calm, so I think the distance between the circle should be small instead of large, otherwise you'll create a forced diffiulty. I see your point. Fixed.
00:09:913 (7) - Start NC here instead of on the next circle I suppose that is fine.
00:11:432 (1) - (Optional) you could make a 1/12 return slider starting on the blue tick and ending here to represent the piano (it gives a nice touch in my opinion) Eh, I have never been a fan of really short sliders. I see what you mean, but I fear that this will overdo it. I want to keep this difficulty more relaxed.
00:12:951 (1,2) - Same as the start, but if you don't change it, consider rotating this or something because this is 2 times exactly the same Eh, I think that the whole thing against copy/paste is so overly criticized. Sure this is different as it is exactly the same, but still. I did this on purpose purely for the sake of structure. I'll consider changing this one to fit vocals and leaving the first one alone.
00:21:875 (8) - The vocals you are trying to map actually is meant to be on the downbeat, not the blue tick. there is a delay she uses to reach that note. Either map a circle on the downbeat or make the previous circle a slider so it will end on the downbeat (that will represent the voice better, but it won't give emphasizes on the downbeat) I see what you mean, but the only thing reasonable that I can think of at this moment is to add a circle in-between 7 and 8, but I actually prefer what I already have over this.
00:29:281 (2) - Consider positioning it somewhere closer to the previous slider and further away from the next one. The jump feels forced and there isn't really a very strong beat in the music to have such a large jump mapped to it. Yeah, I kind of thought it was a little awkward too. Thanks for reinforcing my thoughts on this. Moved to center of playfield.
00:33:837 (8) - place it closer to the previous circle and further away from the next slider to emphasize the downbeat. I'm sorry, but I fail to see the issue here. In any case, I'll have to think about what I could do there for you.
00:40:293 (1,2,3) - A rhythm lik this would represent the voice better http://puu.sh/hrsIQ/deb771d4ef.jpg Mmm... I don't know. Let's see if what I did works better than before.
00:43:331 (1,2,3) - Visually this is not very good, even though it's a personal preference. Consider making the slider blankets instead Visually not appealing? I cannot comprehend, sorry. Also, aren't these already "slider blankets," or do I perhaps have the wrong idea.
00:53:585 (2) - Same as the other one Fixed. See earlier comment.
00:58:141 (9) - See earlier comment.
01:04:407 (7) - Remove this circle as it seems to be overmapped /me cannot comprehend.
01:11:812 (5) - Maybe make this a return slider to map the voice as well. I want to see what others think first if that's okay with you.

Too be honest there still is a lot of work, especially if you want to keep your style. But I really wish you the best of luck with this set, I hope you will get it ranked.

A Mystery wrote:

Gordon's Simple

00:03:837 (3,1) - Switch the rhythms why? i like it !
00:06:875 (3) - NC no,NC doesn't sound
00:15:230 (3) - Don't make a return slider, instead start with a circle, and then make the slider, so you can emphasize the downbeat. maybe..but at that moment i don't like it(I don't hear the rhythm)
00:20:926 (4) - Add a circle and then the slider, that will represent the vocals better ^
00:44:850 (2,3,4) - Consider using this rhythm instead (the current one really feels weird) http://puu.sh/hruiC/a8fdeb0bc2.jpg i correct,but how i think!
01:19:027 (1) - Same as all the other diffs, first map a circle, and THEN the spinner. no

A Mystery wrote:

Hello! Returning a favor for all the hard work you already have done for me

General

1. Some wav files are a lot longer than needed, consider cutting the silent part of the files.
2. The snowflake in the background rotates but it's barely noticeable. Consider letting it rotate a little faster
   
   slow rotation was the idea from the start/ so it dont distract people.
   
3. Sound quality is "meh" but okay I guess. However the sudden cut at the end is really not okay. I don't know where you got the mp3 from, but I'm sure there is a longer fade out here than the sudden end.
   
   i know it alitle silent/about ending - if we all end last spinner earler it woudnt be problem.
   
4. Hitsounds are also "meh", because I don't think they represent things of the song itself. Like these 00:05:736 (1,2,3) - , they represent the piano (I think it's a piano) but it doesn't seem like the right hitsound to use.

Challenging

1. Please keep the hitsounds consistent throughout your diffs in this set
2. I don't really like this diff, was there a difference in time period between the diffs you mapped?

00:02:698 (5) - Move this down so the previous circles will "blanket" it. moved
00:08:774 (5) - The slider end is a strong beat, thus an offbeat slider like this feels very wrong. Consider switching the slider and next circle (on the timeline)
i changed slider to 2 circles
00:03:837 (8) - NC instead of the next slider not the first time.. why NC on big white tick is so necessary? i prefer follow lurics here
00:14:281 (3) - I recommend just using circles. Also there is a whistle on the slider body, remove that one if you are going to keep the slider used circles
00:23:584 (4) - Make this a slider or add an extra circle to represent the voice. Also spacing might be confusing here because of the distance and gap on the timeline (I know you like old maps, but it should be readable) i realy like this one... but ok remaped )
00:25:473 (2,3) - Barely hitting objects like these look pretty bad to me, but it's up to you i changed this one and some other to circles//
01:08:764 (1) - This circle seems out of place. It doesn't make such a nice-looking overlap and the distance is quite small from the previous and next object. Consider moving it distance is constant but i see why you pointed it - remaped alitle
01:10:283 - please map this sound ok
01:19:027 (1) - please do the same as the burai diff, make a circle here and THEN map the spinner hm let it be


Too be honest there still is a lot of work, especially if you want to keep your style. But I really wish you the best of luck with this set, I hope you will get it ranked.

• - the new combo at 00:04:597(1) isn't necessary
  - start a new combo at 00:06:875(3)
  I know it isn't always possible to have a new combo on the downbeat such as when you have a slider end on a downbeat, and at other times, it does make sense to start a new combo on a beat that isn't the downbeat (an example of this is at 01:11:432). However, try to keep your combo count similar to each other, and put new combos where they make sense.

• Try something like this, maybe?

  

• Something you can try out

  
  - Note: if you decide to do this one, you're probably going to want to move 00:45:610(3) to (x348,y252)

Doormat wrote:

General

- I think your offsets are a little off. Try adjusting all timing points by -14, e.g. your red timing point should be 786 instead of 800.

first beat realy sounds off a little// but after this it sound nice for me// i think about that to do...

Challenging

- I think having a 1/2 slider at 00:18:648(2,3) will make more sense than having two notes - i dont think its good idea - cos slider will end on downbeat
- Missing a beat at 01:16:369. Consider adding in a note here? i changed this place - added reverse slider
- The hitsounds (hitnormal)at 01:17:129 are a little quiet in my opinion. Consider boosting the volume up to 50%? i think its becose song is a litlle quiet.. no changes.



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That's about all I can do, hope this helps you out. Good luck with your map any mod is step forwand )

Doormat wrote:

Gordon's Simple

- Try to have your combos start on the downbeat (big white tick). For example:

• - the new combo at 00:04:597(1) isn't necessary okay
  - start a new combo at 00:06:875(3) no,because i not think what that plase neen in new combo(+ 00:07:635 (1) - here "she" sing *mu-ne-ga* < nc)
  I know it isn't always possible to have a new combo on the downbeat such as when you have a slider end on a downbeat, and at other times, it does make sense to start a new combo on a beat that isn't the downbeat (an example of this is at 01:11:432). However, try to keep your combo count similar to each other, and put new combos where they make sense.

- I think a clap at 00:29:660(4) makes more sense than a whistle. Try it out for yourself and see if you like it no,for that plase better heard Whistle
- ^ at 00:35:736(4) yeah,fix it(thx)
- ^ at 00:54:724 ^
- The slider at 00:33:444(3) and slider at 00:34:217(4) overlap each other in a way that it looks a little weird. Maybe try positioning it like this? okay!~

• Try something like this, maybe?

  

- The whistle at 00:57:002(1) doesn't make sense in my opinion. Consider removing the hitsound.no,its for me good)
- Add a clap hitsound at 01:00:040(3) I do not hear it hit - clap

Doormat wrote:

Unreal's Advanced

- Please change the CS from 5 to 4. Having the circle size go from 3 (in Gordon's Simple) to 5 can be pretty jarring
- Delete the slider you have at 00:02:304(3). Then copy/paste the slider from 00:00:800(1) here, then flip it horizontally (Ctrl + H) and reverse it (Ctrl + G_
- Start a new combo at 00:03:828(5) instead of at 00:04:583(1)
- Maybe you can redesign the sliders at 00:43:331(1,2) so they blanket each other?

• Something you can try out

  
  - Note: if you decide to do this one, you're probably going to want to move 00:45:610(3) to (x348,y252)

Overall, I like the flow and feel of this difficulty, but it's not exactly the prettiest, in my opinion. You could turn try and some of your sliders into blankets, like the example I gave you

Hiyori wrote:

~

Gordon's Simple:

1. 00:20:167 (2,3,4) - There's a nice beat between here might want to try this: click me idk i like that,sorry
2. 00:36:875 - map this beat < owo? maybe you mean that plase 00:36:496 - but 00:36:875 - here i not hear beat really
3. 00:42:572 (5,1) - blanket better yes i hear "wa-tashi-mo* but that plase needn;t in that
4. 01:01:179 - map this ㅜ/ㅜ
5. 01:07:255 - try this

>< no,i like that!!

Hiyori wrote:

Hello there from my Queue! Don't forget to vote on my poll. Thank you!

Challenging:

1. 00:08:774 (5,6,7) - triangle better well i didnt understand, but edited this place a litle
2. 00:58:521 (1) - move upwards ok
   

burai:

• 
  i dont want to change this diff a lot// so..

1. 00:32:698 - great downbeat, don't leave this unmapped i think summetry is better there
2. 00:36:875 (7,8) - remove this and replace with a slider instead, end tail at 00:37:065
3. 00:39:913 (6,7) - ^ same
4. 00:43:331 (1,2,3) - blanket better it was itentional i think
5. 00:44:850 (4,5,6) - ^^
6. 00:50:926 (4,5,6,7) - square this
   01:07:634 (1,2,3) - blanket better to make it cleaner
   01:09:154 (4,5,6) - ^^

Goodluck!

HappyRocket88 wrote:

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Hi from my queue. (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧

Challenging

1. 00:15:989 (1,2) Oh Please, don't make a jumpy pattern here, use same DS, please. n.n

but i did this to empase lyrics

I didn't find anything wrong with this diff. Everything is neat, clean and readable for players. Good job. º3º)/

burai

1. 00:43:331 (1,2,3) Improve this blanket. its intentional
2. 00:44:850 (4,5,6) ^
3. 01:07:635 (1,2,3) ^ (Dat copy - paste) lol burai told about copypasting.. we decided that its okay )
4. 01:09:154 (4,5,6) ^
5. 00:26:622 (4,5,6,7) Fix this square pattern. At least make it look like a "square" xD not a first time modders told me this, so moved a litle 5 and 6

As I love the anime and the bg so much:

Have a star ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ thanks a lot

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HappyRocket88 wrote:

Gordon's Simple

1. I'm here to mess up you're (3,3,3,3) in HP, OD, CS and AR respectively. Why? because this diff isn't that hard to have a OD 3 which means that the diff manage more difficult patterns. As you know, you mapped this song into 1/1 sliders and circles and the star rating is almost 1.20 stars. So for that reason, I'd suggest you to set the OD rather in 2 than 3. and same goes with the AR. I didn't suggest you the HP drain because that item it's up to you. not need in EASY
2. 00:00:800 (1) I don't know but the shape of this slider isn't 100% symmetric, please. What's the problem? Oo i like that slider~
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3. Also, I need to point out an issue that it's really important on Easy diff. As you know, it's unlike seen combos higher than 8 in this easiest diffs because it might confused beginner players because of the playability and the AR. So, in that order of ideas, I'd suggest you to put NC every two measures which means add NC and remove NC in this parts:
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4. 00:06:875 (6) Add NC. no
5. 00:07:635 (1) Remove NC. n/n she sing "mu-ne-ga* and i think what its new combo
6. 00:09:913 (4) Add NC. why?
7. 00:47:129 (4) Add NC. okay ㅁ.ㅁ
8. 00:09:913 (4,3) They overlap each other. Fix this, please. why ?
9. 00:14:470 (2,4) ^ ^
10. 00:20:926 (4) Add whistle to this slider. ºuº)/ very loud but i add whistle on second part slider (so little fix thx~) x)
11. 00:25:103 (1,4) They almost touch each other. >< consider separate them a bit. ㅇㅅㅇ...?
12. 00:28:141 (4) Add finish at the end of the slider. no
13. 00:42:572 (5,1) You can make blanket in this part to make a cleaner flow. okay
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:44:850 (2,3,4) The rthymn here isn't good though, I'd suggest you to use a 1/2 slider rather than three circles. no
    
15. 00:52:445 (3) Same shape at the beginning, what about this? and add whistle at the head of the slider. oO
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 00:55:483 (1) Add whistle at the head. no
17. 00:54:724 (4,2) They're not properly stacked. >< for beginners it will be difficult to play

Hiyori wrote:

Unreal's Advanced:

1. 00:00:800 (1,2) - blanket this to make it look clean
2. 00:02:318 (3,4) - ^^
3. 00:09:913 (1,2) - ^^
4. 00:25:103 (1) - maybe make this into a reverse slider instead?
5. 00:56:053 (2) - try this instead?
6. 01:03:458 (3) - i don't think this is map to something the beat starts here - 01:03:078
   01:14:850 (2) - put in between 1 and 3, blanket

HappyRocket88 wrote:

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Unreal's Advanced

1. 00:05:736 (2) Set it here to make a cleaner flow x=280 | y=172. - fix
2. RIP (5,5,5,5) This doesn't make any sense is the star rating show the icon of a normal diff. Also the patterns and the flow aren't that hard to set a OD in 5, so for that I suggest you to set the OD rather in 4 than 5. - nope
3. 00:14:091 (2,3,4) Very lineal flow, pretty predecible... what about this? - fix
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:17:129 (2,3) I dislke this overuse of the same curve flow. what about a lineal or sharpening slider then? - nope
5. 00:21:686 (4) Put it here x=368 | y=56 to make it symmetric with this 00:20:926 (2) . - nope
6. 00:29:281 (2) What about this slider shape for changing this curve oversuse? - nope
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:40:293 (1,2,3) You can make a better blanket between these objects.

-nope

jyu wrote:

Hi are you still continuing this map? if yes then i'll mod it

1. why don't you use the kanji of the series for Source in Song Setup? its most recommendable that way. use this '長門有希ちゃんの消失'

1. 00:06:875 (6,1) - switch nc, because 00:06:875 - is the downbeat
2. 00:18:268 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm suggestion, sort of http://puu.sh/mhLay/d019e9c54d.jpg
3. 00:25:103 (1) - i suggest to add finish hitsound at slider's head to emphasize the start of kiai
4. 01:00:040 - add clap at slider's reverse, for hitsound consistency
5. 01:06:116 (3) - i think it would be better to switch whistle to clap at slider's tail for your own hitsound pattern consistency
   
   seems that your whistle pattern is still not consistent at some parts. idk if you did that on purpose or not but try to be consistent with your hitsound pattern

1. 00:24:724 (5) - kinda weird when you put finish hitsound here, because there's nothing to be emphasized here. would be better if you add finish at 00:25:103 (1) - 's slider head instead, because its the start of kiai
2. 00:33:837 (6,1) - i hate being a blanket nazi but you can improve the blanket here. just move the slider to the left a bit, then tweak the nodes a bit and the blanket will be better http://puu.sh/mhLuc/dbae0d653b.jpg
3. 00:38:394 (2) - move this slider a bit to the left. idk the flow will be better that way http://puu.sh/mhLz8/019e1c14e5.jpg
4. 00:40:293 (1,2) - only suggestion http://puu.sh/mhLCZ/9000a62fac.jpg
5. 00:44:470 (2) - move to 60|160? the symmetry looks better that way http://puu.sh/mhLH6/3e6c878324.jpg
6. 00:46:369 (1,2) - would be better if both shapes are identical but seems that you did this on purpose so yea
7. 00:49:977 (2,3) - only suggestion http://puu.sh/mhLM7/11d5375ff7.jpg
8. 01:01:559 (1,2) - also only suggestion http://puu.sh/mhLRP/2123bd60b5.jpg
9. 01:08:205 (2,1) - why is the ds between them suddenly gets bigger lmao i suggest to make it like this http://puu.sh/mhLVI/28d7a898a9.jpg

1. 00:06:875 (5) - how about nc-ing this like what you did at 00:00:800 (1,1) - ?
2. 00:25:103 (1) - i suggest to add finish here to emphasize the start of kiai
3. 00:45:610 (2) - add whistle? same hitsound pattern like 00:44:091 -
4. 00:49:217 - i suggest to add a circle here to make a continuous beat with 00:48:648 (1,2,3,1) - it fits the song better
5. 01:03:078 (4) - only suggestion http://puu.sh/mhMg0/193311c47e.jpg

1. 00:12:951 (1,2,3) - bruh i'd ctrl+H this pattern so it wont be exactly the same like 00:00:800 (1,2,3) - like srsly even the combo colour's the same http://puu.sh/mhMsd/352b6886ce.jpg
   
   did you seriously copied the whole pattern from 00:25:103 - to 00:49:027 - and just pasted and ctrl+H them at 00:49:407 -
   wow
   seriously
   the map is like, less than 2 minutes so i really suggest to make something new from 00:49:407 - ok. its hella boring playing a map with the same patterns in different verses
   
2. 00:28:141 (1) - i'd lower the red node a bit to make a better blanket for the next circle http://puu.sh/mhMLM/4ac6bfd69f.jpg if you follow, you have to change 00:29:660 (3) -
3. 00:43:331 (1,2,3) - seems that you did this on purpose lmao but anyway my suggestion http://puu.sh/mhN7C/3c98f15c98.jpg

jyu wrote:

you posted this map in my queue, like, 6 months ago lmao. if youre still continuing this map then i'll mod it in near future :3

EDIT : here's the mod lmao

[General]

1. why don't you use the kanji of the series for Source in Song Setup? its most recommendable that way. use this '長門有希ちゃんの消失'

ok i add them


[Challenging]

1. 00:06:875 (5) - how about nc-ing this like what you did at 00:00:800 (1,1) - ? why not - added
2. 00:25:103 (1) - i suggest to add finish here to emphasize the start of kiai added normal finish for both kiai starts
3. 00:45:610 (2) - add whistle? same hitsound pattern like 00:44:091 - nah )
4. 00:49:217 - i suggest to add a circle here to make a continuous beat with 00:48:648 (1,2,3,1) - it fits the song better added
5. 01:03:078 (4) - only suggestion http://puu.sh/mhMg0/193311c47e.jpg

visible only in redactor - no changes here

[burai]

burai diffs is all about copypasting - for me its ok cos its well structured, also i think this "not good blankets" made on purpose - so there is no changes too

1. 00:12:951 (1,2,3) - bruh i'd ctrl+H this pattern so it wont be exactly the same like 00:00:800 (1,2,3) - like srsly even the combo colour's the same http://puu.sh/mhMsd/352b6886ce.jpg
   
   did you seriously copied the whole pattern from 00:25:103 - to 00:49:027 - and just pasted and ctrl+H them at 00:49:407 -
   wow
   seriously
   the map is like, less than 2 minutes so i really suggest to make something new from 00:49:407 - ok. its hella boring playing a map with the same patterns in different verses
   
2. 00:28:141 (1) - i'd lower the red node a bit to make a better blanket for the next circle http://puu.sh/mhMLM/4ac6bfd69f.jpg if you follow, you have to change 00:29:660 (3) -
3. 00:43:331 (1,2,3) - seems that you did this on purpose lmao but anyway my suggestion http://puu.sh/mhN7C/3c98f15c98.jpg

goodluck~

jyu wrote:

[Gordon's Simple]

1. 00:06:875 (6,1) - switch nc, because 00:06:875 - is the downbeat you are right, but I put NC on lyrics
2. 00:18:268 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm suggestion, sort of http://puu.sh/mhLay/d019e9c54d.jpg sorry, but i like it
3. 00:25:103 (1) - i suggest to add finish hitsound at slider's head to emphasize the start of kiai yes.)
4. 01:00:040 - add clap at slider's reverse, for hitsound consistency sure
5. 01:06:116 (3) - i think it would be better to switch whistle to clap at slider's tail for your own hitsound pattern consistency sorry,but i hear in the end slider a bell
   
   seems that your whistle pattern is still not consistent at some parts. idk if you did that on purpose or not but try to be consistent with your hitsound pattern owo

jyu wrote:

you posted this map in my queue, like, 6 months ago lmao. if youre still continuing this map then i'll mod it in near future :3

[tutuhara's Advanced]

dat name - Thanks man )

1. 00:24:724 (5) - kinda weird when you put finish hitsound here, because there's nothing to be emphasized here. would be better if you add finish at 00:25:103 (1) - 's slider head instead, because its the start of kiai - ok
2. 00:33:837 (6,1) - i hate being a blanket nazi but you can improve the blanket here. just move the slider to the left a bit, then tweak the nodes a bit and the blanket will be better http://puu.sh/mhLuc/dbae0d653b.jpg ok
3. 00:38:394 (2) - move this slider a bit to the left. idk the flow will be better that way http://puu.sh/mhLz8/019e1c14e5.jpg ok
4. 00:40:293 (1,2) - only suggestion http://puu.sh/mhLCZ/9000a62fac.jpg ok
5. 00:44:470 (2) - move to 60|160? the symmetry looks better that way http://puu.sh/mhLH6/3e6c878324.jpg
6. 00:46:369 (1,2) - would be better if both shapes are identical but seems that you did this on purpose so yea - ok
7. 00:49:977 (2,3) - only suggestion http://puu.sh/mhLM7/11d5375ff7.jpg - no
8. 01:01:559 (1,2) - also only suggestion http://puu.sh/mhLRP/2123bd60b5.jpg - no
9. 01:08:205 (2,1) - why is the ds between them suddenly gets bigger lmao i suggest to make it like this http://puu.sh/mhLVI/28d7a898a9.jpg - no

goodluck~

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