1. HD - 4Key (2.57 stars, 780 notes)
2. MX - 4Key (3.64 stars, 1193 notes)
3. NM - 4Key (1.51 stars, 431 notes)
4. SHD - 4Key (4.84 stars, 1394 notes)

Raediaufar wrote:

Request from this queue

Column:
l1l2l3l4l

okay let's start

NM

00:06:933 (6933|3,7133|0) – how about making these notes to LN? - Good Idea~~ Done
00:06:933 (6933|3) – and this note starts here - 00:07:033 –
00:07:133 (7133|0) – and this one starts here - 00:07:233 -
00:07:333 (7333|1) – move to 3 for consistency - nope, its same sound as 00:07:533 (7533|1) -
00:08:133 (8133|3) – this LN starts here - 00:08:233 – - no, I have hitsound fits with music here -
00:14:533 (14533|1,14533|2) – remove one note
00:34:733 (34733|3) – move to 2 - Done -
01:31:533 (91533|3) – move to 1 - Done -
01:46:933 (106933|2) – move this note to 2 - It's higher pitch then 01:46:133 (106133|1) - -

I don't see much problem here

HD+

00:06:933 (6933|3,7133|0) – how about making these notes to LN? - Done -
00:06:933 (6933|3) – and this note starts here - 00:07:033 –
00:07:133 (7133|0) – and this one starts here - 00:07:233 -
00:07:333 (7333|1) – move to 3 for consistency- nope, its same sound as 00:07:533 (7533|1) -
00:10:933 (10933|0) - move to 4 for consistency- nope, its same sound as before
00:12:533 (12533|3) - move to 1 (same reason as above)- nope, its same sound as before
00:13:733 (13733|1) – move to 4- nope, its same sound as before
00:15:333 (15333|2) – move to 1- nope, its same sound as before
00:20:933 - to - 00:22:083 - I think these 1/8 stairs patten is too hard for HD diffs and even for MX as well. Plus, your drain rate is 8 so I think many “HD players” will failed at this section - I will consider about it, but actually I think it's not that hard Just let me have more modders' opinion~

00:36:633 (36633|2) – jack, move it to 4 and the next part maybe like this http://puu.sh/hqYeY/826ad4c990.jpg

00:38:233 (38233|2) – this too, jack, move it to 4. And the next LN, should be located in 1 or 2. I leave the rest LN pattern to you but remember to avoid jacks and hand balance (the picture above is a good example on how to make this section without having any jacks and also hand balancing)

00:39:833 (39833|2) - ^

- Actually, I think those jacks is not that hard, and fit the music. I'll consider about it if it really make players fail in this part. Thanks for advice -

00:41:333 (41333|3,41333|0) – make it 3 and 4 - sorry but that would break the hand balance
00:41:433 (41433|3) – move to 1
00:41:533 (41533|2) – move to 4
00:42:833 (42833|0) – delete?
00:44:433 (44433|0) - ^
00:46:033 (46033|0) - ^
00:47:633 (47633|1) - ^
- Thanks~ Good idea -
00:53:733 (53733|3) – move to 3 - I don't wanna cause it's same sound. and also, I'll consider if it's too hard -
00:57:033 (57033|3) - ^
00:57:133 (57133|2) – move to 4
01:00:533 (60533|2,60533|1) – make it 1 and 3
01:01:733 (61733|0,61733|1) - ^
01:03:333 (63333|3,63333|2) – make it 2 and 4
01:03:733 (63733|3,63733|2) - ^
01:33:933 (93933|3) – how about to make this note to LN? - Done -
01:35:533 (95533|1) - ^
01:37:133 (97133|0) - ^
01:37:533 (97533|0) – move to 3 - but that breaks the pitch -
01:40:333 (100333|3) - how about to make this note to LN?
01:41:933 (101933|2) - ^
01:43:533 (103533|1) - ^
01:45:033 (105033|3) – delete? - but there is a sound -
01:47:033 (107033|2) – same jack problem, make - 01:46:933 (106933|2,106933|1) – this 1 and 3 and move - 01:47:033 (107033|2) – to 2
01:48:633 (108633|2) – move this to 4
01:48:733 (108733|3) – move this LN to 1
01:50:233 (110233|2) – move to 4
01:50:333 (110333|3,110533|1) – ctrl + J
01:51:733 (111733|0,111733|3) – make it 1 and 3
01:53:233 (113233|0) – delete?
01:54:833 (114833|0) - ^
01:56:433 (116433|0) - ^

okay, that's all major problems I can find, good luck with your beatmap
Thanks for mod~~ There's a lot of good idea in HD+! and I'll continue consider about the jacks, 1/8, etc. thanks for your carefully mod~

ToifAmri wrote:

Hii.. Req From my forum..

SPOILER

EZ Make this 1 star..



00:16:133 (16133|2,16133|1) - make 1 note

00:17:733 (17733|2,17733|1) - make 1 note

00:19:333 (19333|3,19333|1) - make 1 note

00:22:533 (22533|2,22533|1,24133|2,24133|1) - make 1 note

00:25:733 (25733|0,25733|2) - make 1 note

00:27:333 (27333|1,27333|3) - make 1 note

00:28:933 (28933|0,28933|1) - make 1 note

00:30:533 (30533|2,30533|3) - make 1 note

00:32:133 (32133|0,32133|3) - make 1 note

00:33:733 (33733|0,33733|3,34133|2,34133|1,34533|0,34533|3,34933|1,34933|2) - make Line or simple Note

00:51:333 (51333|3,51333|2) - make 1 note

00:52:533 (52533|3,52633|2,52733|1,52833|0) - very extreme for EZ . make it easier again

00:54:533 (54533|0,54533|2) - make 1 note

01:00:933 (60933|1,60933|2) - make 1 note

01:07:333 (67333|2,67333|1) - make it 1 note

01:08:933 (68933|2,68933|3,69333|2,69333|0,69733|0,69733|1,70133|1,70133|3) - make it 1 note

01:13:333 (73333|0,73333|3,73733|1,73733|2) - make it 1 note

01:15:333 (75333|3,75333|2,75733|1,75733|3,76133|1,76133|0,76533|0,76533|2) - make it easier again

01:20:133 (80133|2,80133|3) - make 1 note

01:21:733 (81733|1,81733|2) - make 1 note

01:23:333 (83333|1,83333|2) - make 1 note

01:24:933 (84933|2,84933|1) - make 1 note

01:26:533 (86533|1,86533|2) - make 1 note

01:28:133 (88133|1,88133|2) - make 1 note

01:29:733 (89733|2,89733|1) - make 1 note

01:31:333 (91333|2,91333|1) - make 1 note

01:52:133 (112133|0,112133|1) - make 1 note

01:53:733 (113733|2,113733|0) - make 1 note

01:55:333 (115333|2,115333|0) - make 1 note

01:56:933 (116933|2,116933|0) - make 1 note

02:01:733 (121733|1,123333|0,123333|3) - Delete

NM

more similar to HD . change it to HD and make new NM - I'll do it.

00:06:933 (6933|2,7133|0,7333|1,7533|1) - delete. - no, I think it's good -

00:09:733 (9733|2,9733|3,9733|0) - make it 2 note. - sorry but I think the sound is loud enough for 3 notes -

HD+

more similar to the MX . change it to MX and make new HD+ - I'll do it.

finish up here..

thanks for mod~~ and I'll make the EZ diff these days..

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hey, Vocal Sync was my idea. lol. Plus, there is no vocal on that diff. and you do know what is "vocal" right?

FreeezeForward wrote:

Hi, here's my mod from your queue (M4M)

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NM

00:53:333 Add a note here, it's not hard enough for a NM diff - Done
01:12:933 (72933|2) - Move to 4
01:13:133 (73133|1) - Move to 3
01:13:333 (73333|0) - Move to 2
01:13:533 Add to 1
^The melody is tuning down, since you have pitch relevancy
↑Done in another way, thanks for advice~↑

HD

01:38:933 (98933|0) - Move to 3
01:39:033 (99033|1) - Move to 4
^Drum rolls here, so it must be thrills pattern - Maybe not, It may be too hard for 2.33stars, anyway I'll consider about it, thanks~~

HD+

00:35:333 (35333|3,35333|2) - Switch columns, listen to the pitch - Done
00:36:633 (36633|2) - Delete, the beat is not loud enough making minijacks useless (unless it's a ghost note)
00:38:233 (38233|2) - Delete, ^
00:39:833 (39833|2) - Delete, ^
00:41:433 (41433|3) - Delete, ^
00:41:833 (41833|2,42033|2,42233|2,42433|2,43433|2,43633|2,43833|2,44033|2,45033|2,45233|2,46633|2,46833|2,47033|2,47233|2) - Delete, no beat supported (unless it's a ghost note)
01:47:033 (107033|2) - Delete, beat is not loud enough (unless it's a ghost note)
01:48:633 (108633|2) - Delete, ^
01:50:233 (110233|2) - Delete, ^
01:51:833 (111833|3) - Delete, ^
↑About these delete advises, I don't really want to do that, and All these notes are not ghost note, they have music sounds. you can refer to 'Keysound(SHD)'. And whats more, I didn't want HD+ to be so easy, some minijacks and burst parts maybe good I think. But I'll consider it if most modders mentioned that and someone wants to make a MX GD.↑

SHD

00:09:733 (9733|2,9933|1) - Switch columns, listen to the pitch - Done
00:16:933 (16933|3) - Move to 1, columns 1 and 4 are alternating notes
00:18:533 (18533|0) - Move to 4, ^
00:20:133 (20133|3) - Move to 1, ^
↑nope, because 00:16:133 (16133|3,16533|3,16933|3,17333|3) - and 00:17:733 (17733|0,18133|0,18533|0,18933|0) - actually have same sounds↑

Hope it helps to you,
Don't forget to mod my map - DONE~~
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/307602

Thanks for mod~~

Rinzler wrote:

From Mod Queue
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

sorry for the delay

General

you use an .ogg file for hitsound ?, well as far as i know, .ogg file is now unrankable, discuss it with QAT or BN
and what is the different between SHD and Keysound SHD ? - There's no different between SHD and Keysound SHD but Keysound SHD is only for refering. It's All Keysounded. Actually I didn't know ogg is unrankable... Thanks a lot for remind, and I will consider to solve it these days.

NM

View > Volume > Change the sample volume to 0, so you can hear the music beat clearly

00:32:533 (32533|2) - move to 2 - Done

00:32:933 (32933|1) - move to 1 - Done

01:00:333 (60333|3) - move to 2, this note have lower pitch than the next note - no it doesn't, you can refer to the keysound, and since it's from o2jam SHK, I thin it's provable.

01:00:533 (60533|2) - move to 4 - ^

01:06:733 (66733|3) - move to 2 - ^

01:06:933 (66933|2) - move to 4 - ^

01:08:933 (68933|3,68933|2,69333|0,69333|2,69733|1,69733|0,70133|3,70133|1) - 1 note is enough, and those notes have same sound with 01:16:933 (76933|1,77333|3,77733|0,78133|2) - - Done, thanks~

01:15:333 (75333|3,75333|2,75733|3,75733|1,76133|1,76133|0,76533|2,76533|0) - ^ - Done

01:13:333 (73333|2) - remove - Done

01:53:733 (113733|0) - remove - Done

01:56:933 (116933|0) - remove - Done

HD

00:34:533 (34533|0,34633|3,34833|1) - if you hear carefully, there is no sound, so remove but there is drum sound..

from 01:20:133 - to 01:29:533 - , those patterns are kinda repetitive, try to make different pattern- Done

i'm sorry i just only mod 2 diffs - doesn't matter~~
good luck ~

thanks for mod

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi paperlens ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Ａｓｔｒａｌ Ｈｏｒｉｚｏｎ
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

Icon Bibliography

No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : o(≧v≦)o~~
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ hitsound for all diffs are too loud, to the point of obstructing the main song. please decrease them to 40% across the whole diffs. 已改
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~

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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

EZ

no grave issues detected~~~~ -w-谢谢检查~~

NM

no grave issues detected~~~~ -w-谢谢检查~~

HD

00:34:533 - add a note to 3, better emphasis. clear louder sound
00:34:933 - ^ 修好了，不过我目测以后又会有modder来和我说这里太难了
00:36:533 (36533|2) - move　ｔｏ　４　PR (pitch relevancy)
00:36:733 (36733|3) - move to 2 PR
00:36:933 (36933|1) - move to 4 PR
00:37:533 (37533|0) - move to 2 PR
00:37:733 (37733|1) - move to 4 PR

00:38:133 (38133|2) - move to 2 PR

00:38:333 - http://puu.sh/hxa3t/cafef29732.png PR

了解你的意思了 不过其实我不是很喜欢，但是有空（或许下次找你IRC的时候-w-）会再考虑一下的

00:39:933 (39933|3,40133|1,40333|0,40533|2,40733|0,40933|3,41133|1,41333|3,41533|2) - readjust this because you're not consistently following the pitch. earlier pattern suggest that you're following the pitch, please follow the pitch consistently while at the same time consider the hand balancing.

00:51:533 (51533|3,51633|2,51733|1) - drag 1x to the left
00:51:933 (51933|0,52033|1,52133|2) - drag 1x to the right, better hand balance OK很好

01:45:733 - 01:52:133 - same issues as above, remap taking PR into consideration. 同上

this is all for now i'm so sorry i'm so busy these days ;w;
we can do an IRC mod when you're online.

and also further note.
the hitsound seems to be a converted one which you obtained through using a certain application. hitsound似乎确实有问题的样子，也有其他modder提出来了，不过其实我不是很懂……再说吧
I personally, have never seen a ranked map which hitsound is taken from such apps.
please consult this with other ppl.

Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~谢谢~~ 很抱歉我回复的很仓促，闲下来会再回来修一遍的，如果能有空抓住你（误）再和你说-w-
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

Kagu-chan wrote:

1|2|3|4

Please reply soon and point out what rejected and why

Your Hitsounds seems to be wrong!
00:25:333 (25333|3) - for example - it produces doubled drum sound at most HS like this! Please fix this! - Actually, Those two drum sound is different. and provable

NM

00:18:133 (18133|1,18533|1,18933|1) - Should be on 3 for same pitch - no, should be on 2, for same pitch as 00:17:733 (17733|1) - .
01:31:533 (91533|3,91733|2,91933|0,92133|1,92333|3,92533|2,92733|0) - Maybe change a bit - 1/2 tick seems dont fit much here - changed,thanks -

HD

00:13:333 (13333|1,13733|1,14133|1) - Should be on 4 for same pitch (see NM) - no, should be on 2, for same pitch .
00:36:733 (36733|3) - Change this to SN for better fitting (LN is fitting too, but in pattern and sound difference SN would fit more i think)
00:38:333 (38333|3) - ^
00:39:933 (39933|3) - ^ - nope, you can refer to the keysound and harder diffs, it worth LN I think -
00:46:533 - until 00:48:133 - here a stair stream would be nice xD - but it's hard for me to find good stair patterns here... and it can be so hard for this diff -
01:32:933 - until KIAI: what have you done with double notes? i dont see any system there - you may make this like before - You may refer to the keysounds, I want to both express the melody and the drum sounds -
01:47:133 (107133|3) - See above
01:48:733 (108733|3) - ^
01:50:333 (110333|3) - ^ - ^

thanks for mod~~

1|2|3|4

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi~ mod for req via queue ~~Hi~~

1|2|3|4

[NM]
01:38:933 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3077624 ? - Done, thanks ~~~

Sorry but I can't find errors in this map ._. so, star... good luck

Sirade wrote:

From my queue
~Express Modding
i have to take this map as a high priority because of your selection, express modding. :3

HD+
00:20:933 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3093061 These streams are more fun compared to left to right 1/8 streams. - That's Really NICE!! thanks a lot~~
01:21:733 - 01:24:933 - 01:28:133 - 01:31:333 - These part seems to be missing one notes to representing one of these sounds, either kick sound, synth sound or cymbal (or finish) sound... fixed it both in HD+ and SHD~~Nice catch, thanks!

Well, nothing alot to mod since this is already well mapped (not because of express modding limitations :l) (and hitsounded, which ensures player to place all note with least chance of mistakes possible). Thanks

Good luck on getting ranked!

Column: 1|2|3|4

hokin1995 wrote:

Column: 1|2|3|4

[General]
GOD - GOD? god shit~~-w-
[NM]
太神 不會模 谢谢检查~~
[HD]
● 00:08:933 - 加一個在2 怎樣? - 好的
Nice
[HD+]
● 00:08:933 - 跟HD一樣 - 好的
● 00:37:733 (37733|1,37733|2) - 兩個都右向移 感覺舒服一點 - 不过这样就和pitch不符了，所以我只挪了一个键
● 00:47:333 (47333|3,47333|1,47433|3,47433|1,47533|2,47533|0,47633|1,47733|2,47733|3,47833|3,47833|2,47933|1,47933|0,48033|2) - 為啥到了這裡 固有的模式突然改變了;W; 變成這樣? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3107731 看看你怎樣想 - 很好的建议-w- 照你的repattern，但是依旧保留了00:47:633 - 00:48:033 - 的note，因为参照SHD我觉得这里属于burst的地方 所以加了note 不过似乎确实有点突然，如果再有modder提出这个问题我就改掉
● 01:48:133 (108133|1,108133|2) - 跟00:37:733 (37733|1,37733|2)一樣改法 - 同上
●01:57:733(117733|1,117733|3,117833|1,117833|3,117933|0,117933|2,118033|1,118133|2,118133|3,118233|3,118233|2,118333|0,118333|1,118433|2) - 這跟前面一樣改法w - 同上
[SHD]
●00:35:933 - 00:36:333 - 00:36:733 - 00:37:133 - 類似的地方 是不是應該多放一個note吧
因為00:41:933之後 這個音你卻放了note 例如00:41:933 (41933|1,42333|0,42733|2) 感覺統一點會好一些;w; -OK很好的建议，已改完
●01:20:433 (80433|1) - move to 4
●01:21:333 (81333|2) - move to 1
●01:23:633 (83633|2) - move to 4
●01:23:933 (83933|0,83933|1,83933|3,84233|3,84233|0,84233|2) - CTRL+H
●01:24:533 (84533|1) - move to 1 - 我自己照着这样的意思做了一点repattern，其实我最一开始都是这样做的 不过后来忘了为什么改掉了……
之後那兩段都差不多改法
●01:48:133 (108133|2,108133|1) - 兩個都右向移 感覺舒服一點 - 同上，三十几秒的那个也同上

前輩~ 我遲了2星期有多 抱歉啦 - 前辈！我是后生！！我也很懒所以完全没关系-w-
然而 圖太神啦 再加上 我不太會摸圖 所以以上未必有幫助哦w - 然而全都是神摸
先這樣:D 加油

谢谢摸图~~超赞的摸！