1. Hard (2.79 stars, 287 notes)
2. Mako Sakata's Easy (1.26 stars, 114 notes)
3. Normal (1.72 stars, 179 notes)

ohad1881 wrote:

http://prntscr.com/6j1q9o-fix
hi!
from my m4m queue!
easy
00:02:198-if you tried blanket so move the gray curve left a little bit in this slider 00:03:093 I don't understand what are talking about, I'm sorry
00:05:780 1,2-fix blanket
00:11:600-3,4 ^^
00:16:526 1,2-^^
00:39:809-3,4 ^^ Prety much fine, and yes I'm bad at that thing
00:49:660-x421 stack Not much diffrent if I move that only one grid
01:06:675-why break?
01:21:227-^^ As for now I won't map that part, because I want to keep the star rating under 1.50 that posibly to have an Easy icon diff, yeah will consider to fill up that break later, thanks for your concern
01:51:899- 3,4 fix blanket
01:56:824-1,2 ^^ Prety much fine, and yes I'm bad at that thing

farsdewibs0n wrote:

Why there are 2 points woth same BPM, I think just delete one and you're good
The BPM is wrong, it's 135 BPM.
Something is buggy while I'm making a new diff
Note:
It's still okay if you don't change the BPM, I think it's more accurate

ohad1881 wrote:

normal
00:01:750-1/4 is not good in normal diff i followed according to the rhythm of the piano
00:03:765-^^ ^
00:05:556-^^ ^
and all the others...
00:21:899 DS? fix and remake
all your map is not in distance snap what the poop
00:33:989-triples is not good for normal switched to slider
and all the other triples i'd prefer stay on them
00:45:630 3,4,5,6 WTF M8 DS!! remake and done
anyway all dis diff is unrankable-normal and easy should be all in DS
so ill stop here-remake easy and normal with DS all f the circles
call me back when you done

farsdewibs0n wrote:

Why there are 2 points woth same BPM, I think just delete one and you're good
The BPM is wrong, it's 135 BPM.
Something is buggy while I'm making a new diff
Note:
It's still okay if you don't change the BPM, I think it's more accurate

ReFaller wrote:

Easy:
In my opinion is ok.
Normal:
You started with 1,4 distance snap. I think you use it in all notes.
00:33:093 (1) and 00:33:541 (2) - no jumps in normal
00:19:436 (3) - change direction on slider
00:50:108 (3) - ^^
00:48:541 (2) - ^^
01:26:377 (2) - circle is too far to the end on previous slider
01:49:212 (2) - change direction on slider

remaking all of them using 1.4 DS and 1.1 or 1.0 DS in Kiai

Hard:
I think you use distance snap 1,7
Add some interesting patterns: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques
Between 01:23:242 (1) and 01:29:511 (4) - It's too much circles. Try put sliders somewhere between them done
01:27:720 (4) - no sound for this circle. fix
01:27:048 - missed sound. i don't need this
02:07:795 - the same ^
02:08:242 - and same ^
02:15:183 (1) - no sound for circle keep, since this one is from the pluck of the guitar
Reduce overall difficulty to 6. done
That's all.

1. Disable letterboxes in all diffs, if possible. (Song Setup - Storyboarding)
2. Try to use something less bright instead of the toxic-yellow combo colour. IT does not match with the song and feels really forced. :c
3. Find someone to check your metadata, pretty sure Artist is 清水準一
   Note: Romanised ARtist should be cjhecked as well, perhaps it's Jyunichi Shimizu

1. Do you really need those two breaks? THe song is not really long and no any other diff has those breaks. Consider mapping them, please.
2. 00:21:003 (2,1) - it's better if you avoid stacks in Easy diffs. See info here.
3. 00:53:242 (2,3) - this pattern looks really nice, but it might be quite tricky for beginners. Can you try something less confusing here? Example
4. 00:59:511 (1,1) - sorry, the slider appears too soon after spinner. It's an Easy diff, so, according to the rules there should be something like 1500ms of recovery time after spinner.
   Note: 02:07:570 (1,1) - same
5. 01:35:332 (1,1) - can't say that I agree with those double-spinners. It feels rather forced at this part and it can be tricky for low-skilled players. Try to map at least one of them with hitobjects?
   
   Might need some more opinions/mods, but it's generally fine.

1. try to reduce OD. 4 will be more than enough for such a relaxing song.
2. 00:01:750 (2,1) - please, try not to place reverse-arrows like that. Players will expect the slider to have two repeats, and since its a short one it will kinda trouble them. If you want something linear and not so tricky, try this
   Note: 00:08:914 (2,1) - 00:16:078 (3,1) - and so on - same.
3. 00:19:436 (3,1) - spacing is obviously broken here. I don't recommend you to use any kind of jumps in Normals. Besides, this pattern does not really match with the music.
4. 00:27:272 (1,1) - try to leave more space between them, so players will clearly see that these are double spinners.
   Note: thoughI'd prefer to see one of the spinners removed and mapped with clickable objects :c
5. 00:50:556 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing change here is misleading and gives a wrong idea of your rhythm to the players. Try to keep it consistent here, if possible.
6. 01:04:884 (1,1) - can you give more time to recover after this spinner? To be completely safe, I'd try this.
   Note: 01:40:705 (1,1) - same.
7. 01:14:735 - 01:16:526 - why do you ignore beats here? Let's try to place circls here, so rhythm feels more natural.
8. 01:26:824 (3) - probably you don't need this circle. The beat here is like really weak and mapping it in a Normal is not necessary.
   Note: 01:59:063 (3) - same.
   
   Pretty simple diff. you can work on readability/patterns and it'll be fine.

1. 00:16:526 (3,1) - there is nothing wrong with the jump, but if you could reduce this one to make it more playable, that'd be awesome.
   Note: same happens in a few more patterns like 00:43:839 (1,2) - and 00:59:063 (3,1) - . Keep an eye on the numbers in the upper-rightcorner, when DS values go above x3.0 pprobably the jump is exaggerated. This song is calm, so fast\extreme jumps won't really fit here, I think. :c
2. 01:21:003 (1,2,3) - one more sudden spacing change, this time it gets lower and I can't see any reason why.
   
   Just the spacing in some parts.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Disable letterboxes in all diffs, if possible. (Song Setup - Storyboarding) all done for all diffs
2. Try to use something less bright instead of the toxic-yellow combo colour. IT does not match with the song and feels really forced. :c switched to brighter yellow for all diffs
3. Find someone to check your metadata, pretty sure Artist is 清水準一
   Note: Romanised ARtist should be cjhecked as well, perhaps it's Jyunichi Shimizu

changed that for all diffs, except for Jyunichi Shimizu since i took a peek at the other beatmap

[Mako Sakata's Easy]

1. Do you really need those two breaks? THe song is not really long and no any other diff has those breaks. Consider mapping them, please.
2. 00:21:003 (2,1) - it's better if you avoid stacks in Easy diffs. See info here.
3. 00:53:242 (2,3) - this pattern looks really nice, but it might be quite tricky for beginners. Can you try something less confusing here? Example
4. 00:59:511 (1,1) - sorry, the slider appears too soon after spinner. It's an Easy diff, so, according to the rules there should be something like 1500ms of recovery time after spinner.
   Note: 02:07:570 (1,1) - same
5. 01:35:332 (1,1) - can't say that I agree with those double-spinners. It feels rather forced at this part and it can be tricky for low-skilled players. Try to map at least one of them with hitobjects?
   
   Might need some more opinions/mods, but it's generally fine.

[Normal]

1. try to reduce OD. 4 will be more than enough for such a relaxing song. SET!
2. 00:01:750 (2,1) - please, try not to place reverse-arrows like that. Players will expect the slider to have two repeats, and since its a short one it will kinda trouble them. If you want something linear and not so tricky, try this ok
   Note: 00:08:914 (2,1) - 00:16:078 (3,1) - and so on - same. i'll just have to change that direction then...
3. 00:19:436 (3,1) - spacing is obviously broken here. I don't recommend you to use any kind of jumps in Normals. Besides, this pattern does not really match with the music. remade them until the spinner part
4. 00:27:272 (1,1) - try to leave more space between them, so players will clearly see that these are double spinners. i made a space only 00:31:078 (1) -
   Note: thoughI'd prefer to see one of the spinners removed and mapped with clickable objects :c meh...
5. 00:50:556 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing change here is misleading and gives a wrong idea of your rhythm to the players. Try to keep it consistent here, if possible. i think that i should remake them...
6. 01:04:884 (1,1) - can you give more time to recover after this spinner? To be completely safe, I'd try this. done
   Note: 01:40:705 (1,1) - same. ^
7. 01:14:735 - 01:16:526 - why do you ignore beats here? Let's try to place circls here, so rhythm feels more natural. k
8. 01:26:824 (3) - probably you don't need this circle. The beat here is like really weak and mapping it in a Normal is not necessary. ok then...
   Note: 01:59:063 (3) - same. ^
   
   Pretty simple diff. you can work on readability/patterns and it'll be fine.

this is why i can't map a Normal Diff properly ;w;

[Hard]

1. 00:16:526 (3,1) - there is nothing wrong with the jump, but if you could reduce this one to make it more playable, that'd be awesome.
   Note: same happens in a few more patterns like 00:43:839 (1,2) - and 00:59:063 (3,1) - . Keep an eye on the numbers in the upper-rightcorner, when DS values go above x3.0 pprobably the jump is exaggerated. This song is calm, so fast\extreme jumps won't really fit here, I think. :c remake some parts
2. 01:21:003 (1,2,3) - one more sudden spacing change, this time it gets lower and I can't see any reason why. someone suggested me to change that, but oh well...
   
   Just the spacing in some parts.

The claps during kiais were really out of place, in my opinion. Try to look for a custom set of hitsounds or use whistles. the rest might need some more mods, but if it's your 1st time - you're doing great! switched to whistles

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Best of luck!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[Mako Sakata's Easy]

1. Do you really need those two breaks? THe song is not really long and no any other diff has those breaks. Consider mapping them, please. Fixed reduce to one break, because I want to keep this Easy diff under 1.50 SR. I hope you're fine with that~
2. 00:21:003 (2,1) - it's better if you avoid stacks in Easy diffs. See info here. Fixed
3. 00:53:242 (2,3) - this pattern looks really nice, but it might be quite tricky for beginners. Can you try something less confusing here? Example Somehow I like that the most, well you can still see the slider (3)'s end so I guess it's fine imo
4. 00:59:511 (1,1) - sorry, the slider appears too soon after spinner. It's an Easy diff, so, according to the rules there should be something like 1500ms of recovery time after spinner. Fixed
   Note: 02:07:570 (1,1) - same Fixed
5. 01:35:332 (1,1) - can't say that I agree with those double-spinners. It feels rather forced at this part and it can be tricky for low-skilled players. Try to map at least one of them with hitobjects? Fixed
   
   Might need some more opinions/mods, but it's generally fine. Yeeeeyy XD

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Best of luck!

1. Artist himself uses 2 ways of romanization. None of them is Jun'ichi Shimizu but he is using Junichi Shimizu or Shimizu Junichi. (Yeah, you cannot always refer to previous maps) However, only source which actually is published by him and not any other person is his soundcloud, where he lists himself as Shimizu Junichi. Since he is sometimes listed as Junichi Shimizu, these two are in a conflict. If we consider only soundcloud site was made by him, it most probably says his prefered romanisation. That means, there is no official word about what is his only right romanisation, thus we should use 'surname firstname' form, which should be in this case used, because it firstly is ranking critera and secondly, artist uses both, so criteria must override it, so I am pretty sure it has to be Shimizu Junichi
2. Change tag 'key sound' to 'key sounds label', because key's music is listed like Key Sounds Label, not Key Sound.
3. You might want to add eroge to tags as most eroge has hentai or eroge in tags.
4. Move Kud Wafter to tags and use クドわふたー as a Source.
5. Combo colors might be more natural. I mean, your background is a picture from some grassland or forest, but you use this kind of blue color and that yellow color which are kind of mechanical, or these are not seen in nature really often. You might try these if you can agree.
   
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1. 01:06:675 - I don't really think it is good to not map quite significant part of a song, especially when the map is so short so it doesn't really need a pause.
2. There is kind of critical problem. Your slider velocity is almost 2x velocity of Normal and it is also higher than Hard diff. That's quite inappropriate, you should use like 0.8 - 1.2SV on this, but it uses 2.6 and that's not even decreased by velocity multiplier.
3. Normally I would suggest to decrease AR, because 3 for such a calm song is quite high, but the SV again ruins this..
4. 01:30:854 (3,4,1) - I'd get a rid of these patterns, because it is easy and it requires a player to react quite instantly all of sudden. It isn't appropriate for newbies, definitely.
5. 01:54:809 (2) - The rhythm is quite complicated. There's nothing that significant to be followed in a song, while it could be a nice rhythm if you put it on 01:54:586 - instead.
6. Your difficulty is only one which uses manual audio lead-in. It is not worth using because it already is automatic and in my opinion it gives you enough time. I suppose it wouldn't be removed from settings if it was supposed to be used, since then I feel it is pretty nice.

1. To make a more consistent gap between difficulties, I suggest to use circle size 3.5.
2. 00:11:600 (1) - You should maybe avoid 2-repeat sliders as they are not really good for easier diffs, as you might overlook one of the repeats and it is an instant miss and second reason is, it just seems lazy and gives no varitety to the map.
3. 01:17:421 (2) - Same as above.
4. 01:24:586 (1) - Same as above.
5. 01:20:556 (3,1,2) - You should change a way of how this pattern is mapped, because when it is overlapped and there are too many sliders of this type, it is easy to get lost in it for newbies.
6. 02:11:153 (1) - Avoid this finish-spam in the kiai, it sound very lound and annoying.

1. 00:19:436 (2,3,4,5) - This shape could be a bit more consistent and symmetrical. I can gave a little advice. If you don't really know how to make a smooth patterns. This is 1.4x distance snap, then take a slider and make a really nice shape with just one point, then select the slider, press CTRL+Shift+F, use 1,4x distance snap and yay! You don't really have to care about the shape now. This is nothing to be ashamed of, if you cannot do something nice, then do it other way. Result is just as symmetrical as possible.
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Wafu wrote:

Random mod

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

1. Artist himself uses 2 ways of romanization. None of them is Jun'ichi Shimizu but he is using Junichi Shimizu or Shimizu Junichi. (Yeah, you cannot always refer to previous maps) However, only source which actually is published by him and not any other person is his soundcloud, where he lists himself as Shimizu Junichi. Since he is sometimes listed as Junichi Shimizu, these two are in a conflict. If we consider only soundcloud site was made by him, it most probably says his prefered romanisation. That means, there is no official word about what is his only right romanisation, thus we should use 'surname firstname' form, which should be in this case used, because it firstly is ranking critera and secondly, artist uses both, so criteria must override it, so I am pretty sure it has to be Shimizu Junichi applied for all diffs, but Junichi Shimizu only
2. Change tag 'key sound' to 'key sounds label', because key's music is listed like Key Sounds Label, not Key Sound. applied for all diffs
3. You might want to add eroge to tags as most eroge has hentai or eroge in tags. oh well...
4. Move Kud Wafter to tags and use クドわふたー as a Source. applied
5. Combo colors might be more natural. I mean, your background is a picture from some grassland or forest, but you use this kind of blue color and that yellow color which are kind of mechanical, or these are not seen in nature really often. You might try these if you can agree. keep
   
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Normal

1. To make a more consistent gap between difficulties, I suggest to use circle size 3.5. done
2. 00:11:600 (1) - You should maybe avoid 2-repeat sliders as they are not really good for easier diffs, as you might overlook one of the repeats and it is an instant miss and second reason is, it just seems lazy and gives no varitety to the map. nope
3. 01:17:421 (2) - Same as above. ^
4. 01:24:586 (1) - Same as above. ^
5. 01:20:556 (3,1,2) - You should change a way of how this pattern is mapped, because when it is overlapped and there are too many sliders of this type, it is easy to get lost in it for newbies. remade them until the spinner part
6. 02:11:153 (1) - Avoid this finish-spam in the kiai, it sound very lound and annoying. k

Hard

1. 00:19:436 (2,3,4,5) - This shape could be a bit more consistent and symmetrical. I can gave a little advice. If you don't really know how to make a smooth patterns. This is 1.4x distance snap, then take a slider and make a really nice shape with just one point, then select the slider, press CTRL+Shift+F, use 1,4x distance snap and yay! You don't really have to care about the shape now. This is nothing to be ashamed of, if you cannot do something nice, then do it other way. Result is just as symmetrical as possible. changed something neat
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Conclusion: Unrankable (yet)

You maybe ask, why did I come here. I like Kud Wafter, so I was just, why not download that. I wouldn't normally mod it, but just saw some effort on Hard diff, so I am here to give you few suggestions. kud lover *runs

You might put more effort to hitsounds, they are fine apart from those loud finishes, but they might use variable volume. When these are all the same volume, it does not emphasize the piano the way it is supposed to. i'll try to handle that
Regarding the spread, you should make it consistent, not like Easy has higher SV than all other diffs and so on. About the patterns, some were fine, but the maps miss some shape. Easy patterns were okay, but unfortunatelly the setting was wrong. Normal should be different, not really so straight. Hard already had nicer shape, but still many things could be better. You should use some blanketing and improve the flow, try to make something look like a puzzle, everything should fit to everything. I suppose you can once rank a beatmap if you will be active, I hope you can improve. If you have any questions regarding mapping, feel free to ask me anything. This is not really a mod, but I just wanted to offer you a help, while pointing out some basic things. btw, about the normal diff, i'd prefer straight sliders for this map tbh

Also you might take a look at this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/71345
My Love diff is seriously great regarding the quality and simple patterns, try to inspire by something like this and when you get known to these basic patterns, you might start to experiment and make more complexed patterns. i have my different style though, but i'll see if i can do that

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Wafu wrote:

Random mod

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

Mako Sakata's Easy

1. 01:06:675 - I don't really think it is good to not map quite significant part of a song, especially when the map is so short so it doesn't really need a pause.
2. There is kind of critical problem. Your slider velocity is almost 2x velocity of Normal and it is also higher than Hard diff. That's quite inappropriate, you should use like 0.8 - 1.2SV on this, but it uses 2.6 and that's not even decreased by velocity multiplier.
3. Normally I would suggest to decrease AR, because 3 for such a calm song is quite high, but the SV again ruins this..
4. 01:30:854 (3,4,1) - I'd get a rid of these patterns, because it is easy and it requires a player to react quite instantly all of sudden. It isn't appropriate for newbies, definitely.
5. 01:54:809 (2) - The rhythm is quite complicated. There's nothing that significant to be followed in a song, while it could be a nice rhythm if you put it on 01:54:586 - instead.
6. Your difficulty is only one which uses manual audio lead-in. It is not worth using because it already is automatic and in my opinion it gives you enough time. I suppose it wouldn't be removed from settings if it was supposed to be used, since then I feel it is pretty nice.

1. Audio Lead-In raise to 2000 all difficult.
2. Remove 'junichi' on tags.
3. Mako Sakata's Easy : Consider to change name difficult to 'Mako's Easy' (if you want to keep the difficult name , consider to add : Mako_Sakata on tags)
4. Why the timing point's is 2? is the offset changing?
   

   855,895.522388059701,4,2,1,30,1,0
   2198,895.522388059701,4,2,1,30,1,0

5. Nice relaxing map , and song! ヾ(*´∇`)ﾉ★

1. HP.OD : +1 AR+1,5
2. 
   
   i don't think noob player can handle this.. but this sound ok , if you don't mind please ask BN / QAT about this.
   
3. all good , great job! ♥

1. new combo every stanza please .. don't use random new combo
2. 00:31:302 (1) - no need double spinner . So remove this
3. 00:43:168 (3) - remove ( normal use 1/2 )
4. 00:46:974 (6,1) - straighten ?
5. 01:14:511 (2) - remove
6. 01:16:302 (2) - ^
7. 01:20:332 (2) - ^
8. 
   
   it's really hard you know .
9. 01:51:227 (4) - remove
10. 01:56:600 (3) - ^

1. HP.OD : -1
2. same case in normal difficult. new combo every stanza please .. don't use random new combo
3. Snapping 01:42:496 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
4. There's unsnapped problem .. please fix this. :
   01:44:735 (1) - 01:45:630 (2) - 01:45:630 (2) - 01:47:421 (3) - 01:47:421 (3)
   01:49:660 (1) - 01:53:242 (1) - 01:55:481 (1) - 01:56:377 (2) - 01:56:377 (2)
   02:00:406 (1) - 02:01:302 (2) - 02:09:809 (2) - 02:14:287 (2)
5. are you placing the not / slider in random place? i don't feel flow on this mapset
6. 01:35:332 - 01:40:481 - it's .. very hard

Sky Trias wrote:

Heyoo lit o/
sorry sorry banget terlambat

[General]

1. Audio Lead-In raise to 2000 all difficult. done
2. Remove 'junichi' on tags. k
3. Mako Sakata's Easy : Consider to change name difficult to 'Mako's Easy' (if you want to keep the difficult name , consider to add : Mako_Sakata on tags) add as mako_sakata
4. Why the timing point's is 2? is the offset changing? i need that since i need to make the beat timing perfect according to the song
   

   855,895.522388059701,4,2,1,30,1,0
   2198,895.522388059701,4,2,1,30,1,0

5. Nice relaxing map , and song! ?(*´?`)??

[Normal]

1. new combo every stanza please .. don't use random new combo where should i even set NC and remove NC on it?
2. 00:31:302 (1) - no need double spinner . So remove this k
3. 00:43:168 (3) - remove ( normal use 1/2 ) k
4. 00:46:974 (6,1) - straighten ? didn't notice that. just remade them until straight
5. 01:14:511 (2) - remove k
6. 01:16:302 (2) - ^ k
7. 01:20:332 (2) - ^ k
8. 
   
   it's really hard you know . remade them
9. 01:51:227 (4) - remove less challenging though for chorus
10. 01:56:600 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. HP.OD : -1 done
2. same case in normal difficult. new combo every stanza please .. don't use random new combo where should i even set NC and remove NC on it?
3. Snapping 01:42:496 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). i did not expect this one coming
4. There's unsnapped problem .. please fix this. :
   01:44:735 (1) - 01:45:630 (2) - 01:45:630 (2) - 01:47:421 (3) - 01:47:421 (3)
   01:49:660 (1) - 01:53:242 (1) - 01:55:481 (1) - 01:56:377 (2) - 01:56:377 (2)
   02:00:406 (1) - 02:01:302 (2) - 02:09:809 (2) - 02:14:287 (2) i did not expect this one coming. changed the slider speed
5. are you placing the not / slider in random place? i don't feel flow on this mapset need to think about this
6. 01:35:332 - 01:40:481 - it's .. very hard hehehehe

Hey, I hope this help! GoodLuck lit120 ?

ReFaller wrote:

When i played Hard diff i noticed something wrong.
You must recalculate slider lenghts and next steps:
01:42:496 (1) - Set slider end in 01:42:944
01:53:242 (1) - Set slider end in 01:53:690
01:55:481 (1) - Set slider end in 01:55:929
01:58:615 (1) - - | | - in 01:59:511
02:03:989 (3) - - | | - in 02:04:884
02:11:153 (1) - Set reverse arrow to 02:11:824

PM me if you agree to do by me second Hard diff.

Alarido wrote:

Hi (:

[Hard]
00:28:168 (3) - Move a bit down, to x:244 y:228 - and also mov 00:28:615 (4) - to x:132 y:224 - so it'll give you a better curve line, more pleasant to follow through. done
00:32:645 (4) - Move to x:120 y:260 to get a better DS equality and flow in patterns. done
00:35:780 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These placements feel somewhat not so comfortable to flow through >< (¿how to define this?) ....

1. Place 00:35:780 (2) - at x:396 y:280 - as here > http://puu.sh/hlEXi/a4cb899865.jpg done
2. Place 00:36:675 (1) - at x:192 y:176 - as here > http://puu.sh/hlEYL/8b7e9887cb.jpg done
3. Change placement of 00:38:466 (2,3) - as here > http://puu.sh/hlF1I/814e81d677.jpg remade
4. Change placement of 00:40:257 (1) - as here > http://puu.sh/hlF2T/67e223443c.jpg

remade and not gonna go for curve slider

00:49:212 (2,3) - Change these to some placement like > http://puu.sh/hlF7q/85464f0203.jpg remade and not gonna go for curve slider
00:54:138 (4,1) - This DS here feels very misleading... because no antijump feels being suggested here by the song. This can be solved by moving it to x:76 y:244. ok
00:55:929 (3) - Move to x:184 y:204 - helps to avoid bad DS like the one pointed at latter line above. done
01:08:914 (1,2,3) - Place them like > http://puu.sh/hlFlj/9ba2bb55a7.jpg > i.e., 01:08:914 (1) - to x:196 y:292 and 01:09:362 (2) - to x:324 y:308 and 01:09:809 (3) - to x:440 y:256. Flows a lot better. done

01:33:541 (1) - Move to x:472 y:220 and remold it like > http://puu.sh/hlFsr/843da7f2df.jpg. And for further notes... done
01:34:660 (2,3,4,5) - Move them together to x:265 y:173 and remold the slider like > http://puu.sh/hlFxf/dd355587ab.jpg > by curving it a bit. done
01:36:003 (6,1,2) - Unstack them and place them like > http://puu.sh/hlFzj/45eb205793.jpg good idea!
01:44:063 (4) - Move to x:232 y:228, because it feels sufficient to give the intended feeling (higher DS may mislead with further notes) done
02:13:168 (5) - Move to x:448 y:2801, feels better flow. done
02:15:183 (1) - Move to x:96 y:240, better flow and less-misleading spacing too. done

[Normal]
00:19:212 (2,3) - Unrankable! Please adjust spacing. Or, alternatively, you can remove 1 repeat from 00:19:660 (3) - and place it by 1/4 further on Timeline. made it close and remade them since i want them straight
01:13:839 (1,2) - You should change this, very misleading (lead to combo loss). Suggestion > http://puu.sh/hlG3h/6d92e245bd.jpg done
01:15:630 (4,5) - ^. Suggestion > http://puu.sh/hlG4H/1be617891a.jpg ^
01:16:974 (6,7) - Better suggestion would be unstack them, and divide 01:17:421 (7) - in two 1/2 sliders (one with a repeat and another without). Scheme: > http://puu.sh/hlGhA/673f8feef1.jpg keep

[Easy by Mako Sakata]
♥ INDAH! ♥ INDAH MUDAH! ♥ nice indonesian

Good luck (:

Daniel Segura wrote:

Everything of this map is good. But I feel like hard should have some more notes. and probably the closer ones should be more farther apart

Alarido wrote:

Hi (:

[Easy by Mako Sakata]
♥ INDAH! ♥ INDAH MUDAH! ♥ Oh my, thankiess♥

Good luck (:

dististik wrote:

Hello~! I'm from my modding queue! Nice to see another Kud Wafter song trying to get ranked

Mako Sakata's Easy

1. 00:13:839 (2) - I suggest getting rid of the repeat in the slider and placing a circle at 00:15:183 to prevent the breaking of flow at this part The reverse is to make a flow chain between (2) and (3) so it will less awkward to play and I prefer to put reverse on that one instead placing a circle as you stated
2. 00:26:333 - I suggest putting a slider here to make the break less awkward Tbh I've been meassured the after and before the spinner, it should be have enough time to prepare and recovery, so the curent is probably fine

No need to discuss anything after the mod~ You're just about done with updating it! Good luck with getting approved!!

dististik wrote:

Hello~! I'm from my modding queue! Nice to see another Kud Wafter song trying to get ranked

[notice]Normal

1. 00:11:600 (4) - Get rid of the second repeat and place a circle where the slider used to end no
2. 00:25:481 (5) - This feels a bit awkward with the sharper notes going off in the middle of it well, i'm making it straight for this diff
3. 00:34:884 (4,5) - I would place these two sliders in better places so that the heads don't stack keep
4. 00:42:944 (5,6) - DS needs to be consistent on Normal i didn't notice that, thx. and remade them
5. 01:17:421 (1) - The multiple repeats in this slider make it feel a little awkward and breaks the flow of the map need to think about this
6. 01:27:272 (3) - NC i prefer stick on them
7. 01:58:392 (2) - Why's this a slider? there's a note there

Hard

1. I honestly can't find a problem with this difficulty. Good work.

No need to discuss anything after the mod~ You're just about done with updating it! Good luck with getting approved!!

LGV894 wrote:

Boring song. I would never map something like this. Normal diff was boring. Map Rating: 2.5/5 then don't map it and don't play it

Mako Sakata's Easy

- This is perfect. I like it.
- You might want to add some more 1/1 slider shapes.

Normal

- Inconsistent use of New Combo! Base it only on 1 factor. Either at every 2/1 or every chord change. i have to think about this
- It's too boring! Add some more slider shapes, use curved sliders, rotate patterns, curve out patterns. It looks like a 2009 map. sorry m8, i don't care whether it's boring or not. i want this diff straight
- Distance snap is fine, though. Keep it static.

Hard

- Inconsistent use of New Combo! Base it only on 1 factor. Either at every 2/1 or every chord change.
- 00:15:630 (4,1) - This jump isn't necessary. it's close, and i better keep it
- 00:26:824 (3,1) - ^ 00:27:272 (1,2) - Move jump here. no
- 00:31:750 (3,4) - Add jump. slow part, and no
- 00:44:287 (7) - This jump is unnecessary 00:44:287 (7,1) - Move jump here. no
- 00:53:690 (3,4) - ) - Add jump. i'd prefer that the note of the piano stops there
- 01:14:511 (2,3) - Reduce DS. no
- 01:33:541 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change to stream. are you kidding me? it's 67 BPM and 1/4. and i'd prefer stack
- 01:49:212 (6,7,1) - Increase DS. no
- 01:53:242 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce DS. i'd prefer a little challenge
- 01:54:809 (5,6,7,1) - Increase DS. i don't want to do that
- 01:58:168 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ why would i? i have no problem with that
- 02:08:914 (4,5) - ^ no

Leorda wrote:

Pie kabare? Aye mau ngemod nih ui

[Normal]
00:34:884 (4,5) - This slider was like having a repeating slider in (4)... how about remove (5) and add repeating slider or unstack together to prevent this confusion? well ok. i remade some of them
02:16:974 (4) - Move forward to white tick and remove one repeating slider to match the piano sound? it's fine for me

[Hard]
01:08:466 (4) - Make it straight, I mean allign from tail slider ok
01:36:227 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Any reason why you do this combo pattern? It seems doesn't make sense though well, there was a note for a piano though, so i did it on purpose for that. followed the notes anyway

Call me when you're done ohh i forgot from Alarido's mod (1 of them) in hard and took care of it before that

Leorda wrote:

Pie kabare? Aye mau ngemod nih

[Mako Sakata's Easy]
02:18:317 (1) - Spacing too far... you can't make it stack on purpose... Fixed spacing, sowwy my baaad. Tentang stack yang itu aku biarin, soalnya pas main cukup kebaca alur paternnya hihihi

Call me when you're done modありがとう！

lit120 wrote:

LGV894 wrote:

Boring song. I would never map something like this. Normal diff was boring. Map Rating: 2.5/5 then don't map it and don't play it

Mako Sakata's Easy

- This is perfect. I like it.
- You might want to add some more 1/1 slider shapes.

Normal

- Inconsistent use of New Combo! Base it only on 1 factor. Either at every 2/1 or every chord change. i have to think about this
- It's too boring! Add some more slider shapes, use curved sliders, rotate patterns, curve out patterns. It looks like a 2009 map. sorry m8, i don't care whether it's boring or not. i want this diff straight
- Distance snap is fine, though. Keep it static.

Hard

- Inconsistent use of New Combo! Base it only on 1 factor. Either at every 2/1 or every chord change.
- 00:15:630 (4,1) - This jump isn't necessary. it's close, and i better keep it
- 00:26:824 (3,1) - ^ 00:27:272 (1,2) - Move jump here. no
- 00:31:750 (3,4) - Add jump. slow part, and no
- 00:44:287 (7) - This jump is unnecessary 00:44:287 (7,1) - Move jump here. no
- 00:53:690 (3,4) - ) - Add jump. i'd prefer that the note of the piano stops there
- 01:14:511 (2,3) - Reduce DS. no
- 01:33:541 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change to stream. are you kidding me? it's 67 BPM and 1/4. and i'd prefer stack
- 01:49:212 (6,7,1) - Increase DS. no
- 01:53:242 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce DS. i'd prefer a little challenge
- 01:54:809 (5,6,7,1) - Increase DS. i don't want to do that
- 01:58:168 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ why would i? i have no problem with that
- 02:08:914 (4,5) - ^ no

you know, these mods are completely useless for me, but thx for mod anyway

farsdewibs0n wrote:

Actually LGV894 is right, you'll gonna get a reaaaally hard time to get ranked if you have a boring map
or, this mp will get a reeeaally low raiting

lit120 wrote:

farsdewibs0n wrote:

Actually LGV894 is right, you'll gonna get a reaaaally hard time to get ranked if you have a boring map
or, this mp will get a reeeaally low raiting

i don't care whether it's boring or not. i just want them to play and enjoy this map. i don't want to make it THAT hard ya know

EDIT: update for Normal Diff since i noticed that there's something is not straight and update for Normal + Hard diff since i think that the Kiai part needs whistle than finish ._.

Leorda wrote:

about enjoyment, every players has a different taste. It's enjoy or not, it's up to players to decided. Not all players think this map is boring, so yeah.

Bubbled

Alarido wrote:

Selamat siang Selamat padiii ；)

[Easy by Mako Sakata]
02:13:839 (1,1) - My only doubt here, because it feels done by purpose (by looking on the music). If not, could keep the same spacing (it's 1.0x instead of 1.5x which dominates through the diff) I'm sowwy my bad ;( fixed, been double check the other spacing, hope not miss anything

Menelepon saya kembali. (:

Alarido wrote:

Selamat siang pagi o/

[General]
Metadata feels right (imho). It may be necessary add these words to the tags: Kud Wafter Original SoundTrack applied for all diffs

[Normal]
01:12:048 (1) - Just a suggestion: keep it vertical, placing at (y:292). Don't worry, spacing will keep safe and flow too. that kinda reminds me with 01:11:600 (4) - . remade the location of 01:12:944 (2) - since it must be DS
01:13:839 (1) - Give it the same inclination as you have at 01:15:630 (4) - and place it on (x:204 y:52) for keeping spacing. asked a help from Kirizukato and it's done!

♥ I liked the SV change on kiai. Perfect ♥ ohh woww, thx

[Hard]
00:18:765 (1) - Suggestion: curve it a bit according to the curve that the further notes are forming. Image > http://puu.sh/hTCrU/53620cdb78.jpg set
00:20:556 (1) - At least, let's make this jump a bit more visually pleasing (: by curving it a bit. Image > http://puu.sh/hTCvW/1417527e63.jpg < Note that this change is a good compliment (imho) for the previous curve of notes. set
00:33:989 (7) - Let's make it show the next direction by curving it a bit, like this > http://puu.sh/hTCDJ/061203a3f3.jpg ok
01:22:347 (1) - Let's curve it a bit, for making this jump more pleasing (at least, visually) > http://puu.sh/hTCME/d5935447ba.jpg ok
02:13:168 (5) - There's a better spot for this: (x:496 y:184). Don't worry, it'll NOT get offscreen (it's just << 30% off for a 3:4 screen, and it's 0% off in 16:9 ratio). well, ok

Menelepon saya kembali. (:

10nya wrote:

grats~

Mako Sakata wrote:

I think the genre should be video game instrumental imo instead japanese
Anyway grats lit🎉

[ Mephisto ] wrote:

Congrats !