1. Easy (1.36 stars, 102 notes)
2. Hard (2.94 stars, 199 notes)
3. Insane (3.88 stars, 276 notes)
4. Normal (1.75 stars, 139 notes)

[Map Set]

Easy by me : Done
Normal by me : Done
Hard by me : Done
Insane by me : Done

228,160,6633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,6820,2,0,L|192:352,1,68
98,259,7192,2,0,P|128:200|200:184,1,136,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,266,7751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
399,266,7938,6,0,L|431:186,1,68,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Del05 wrote:

Hi !
Thanks for the mod
For hard i didn't know what you mean so i not did it
and for insane all fixed

Suzuya Jyuzo wrote:

Hard
00:14:459 (7,8) - overlap
00:33:279 (6,7) - ^
00:42:596 (6,1) - ^
01:10:919 (3,4) - ^
Insane
00:26:385 (5) - Slide bar is not in the rhythm Fixed
00:26:757 (6) - ^ Fixed
00:27:130 (7) - ^ Fixed
00:50:981 (5,6,7) - Jump distance consistent（personal advice) Fixed
00:51:354 (7,8,9) - ^ Fixed
00:52:844 (4,5,6) - ^distance limit to 3,Jump higher than 00:51:354 (7,8,9) Fixed

Tenseki wrote:

DS means Distance
and if you have a question about my modding.
free to ask me in-game pm

Fort wrote:

hi from mod queue

Insane:

looks NC in here messy, consider NC every Finish hitsound or NC every 1 stanza (big white line in timeline) Will fixed later cause it means i must check it again
00:27:503 (8,9,10) - im sure this triplet is very not recommended in here (especially on AR8 because the previous slider is hiding this pattern and make this triplet hard to read, consider make this one clearly visible) AR change to 9
00:29:366 (5) - im not sure for this stacks, try this maybe http://puu.sh/gKkxG/6c129fabbc.jpg Fixed
01:21:726 (6,1) - this one very sudden i think, make circle or triplet better gameplay Fixed
01:23:031 (5,1) - antijump after highjump very awkward things i guess Fixed (and looks 01:23:217 (1) - this notes didnt sound off for any beat) I follow vocal
01:25:826 (5) - oh god this stacks AR change to 9

hope this helps

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:09:428 (1) - Avoid to reverse two times, it is not suitable for an Easy diff Still think for nice slider
2. 00:11:292 (3) - Start at 00:11:478 Fixed
3. 00:14:273 (6) - Start slider at 00:14:459, remove reverse, and then add a note at 00:15:391 Fixed
4. 00:30:298 (4,5) - Exchange in timezone Fixed
5. 00:34:770 (5,6) - Try this: Will consider it
6. 00:55:639 (2) - This slider is not really following the rhythm, reverse at 00:56:012 instead and add a note at 00:56:757 Fixed
7. 00:58:993 (6) - ^ same not suitable Fixed
8. 01:04:211 (5,6) - ^ Fixed for 5 but 6 nope

[Normal]

1. 00:12:782 (2) - Fix ds Fixed
2. 00:12:969 (3) - ^ Fixed
3. 01:24:149 (3) - note + slider instead Sorry i dont know what you mean

[Hard]

1. 00:26:385 (4,5,6) - Same ds Fixed
2. 01:24:149 (7,1) - Dont overlap this completely Will consider it
3. looks good Thanks

[Insane]

1. 00:40:733 (3,4,5,6,1) - Use create polygon circle I think my star is good
2. 00:46:695 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ I think my star is good
3. 00:56:012 (3) - Try curve slider? Fixed

good luck~

Adol Christin wrote:

No kudosu
There is no such a "TV Size" in the album and the "TV Size" is not published officially. Due to the Ranking Criteria, you have to remove "(TV Size)" from your title.
Good luck~

1. This is the only diff with slider tick 2. would be cool to be constant and change it to 1 :3.
2. Holy.. increase your overall hitsound volumen around 10-15% pls, i cant hear sht
3. 00:02:348 (2) - 00:05:329 (2) - drum finish on head sounds better imo
4. 00:03:838 (5) - ^drum clap here
5. 00:06:447 - 00:06:820 - 00:09:428 - 00:14:273 (9) - add clap or something pls
6. 00:07:192 (3) - finish on head, no tail
7. 00:07:938 (1) - ^, and cancel clap, sounds bad
8. 00:08:683 (3) - clap on head?
9. 00:10:546 (1) - 00:12:037 (1) - 00:13:528 (5) - add clap on head
10. 00:11:292 (3) - clap instead of whistle. and cancel whistle on 00:11:385 (4) - sounds really bad heh
11. 00:14:646 (1) - this beat doesnt really follow something, thus a 1/1 sliders between 00:14:459 (10,2) - feels/plays a lot better i think
12. 00:15:391 (5) - finish on head and whistle on tail sounds ok to me
13. 00:15:298 - there's a triple here, if you wanted to map this lol
14. 00:18:745 (4,1) - this rhythm doesnt follow anything here >< vocals start at 00:18:931 - , so start the slider from there instead, i guess(and also you should try to avoid mapping strong beat with slider tails, like you did here or 00:02:348 (2,5) - etc). 00:30:670 (8) - this is fine tho uhm.
15. 00:21:726 (5) - ^
16. 00:24:708 (4) - this should be 1/2, vocals are at 00:24:894 - , not on the blue tick.
17. 00:27:503 (8,9,10) - i'd use drum clap/finish here. Cuz how drummy this sounds, normal hit doesnt fit at all.
18. 00:37:752 (3) - finish cuz you added to 00:37:006 (1) -
19. 00:39:521 (5) - delete this note, cuz there's nothing here lol. Also 00:39:428 (4,5) - these shouldn't normalsampleset >< (5) should have whistle tho. Same goes to 01:18:186 (4,5,6) -
20. 00:41:105 (5,6) - whistles. Well this whole section is missing whistles.
21. 00:48:931 (1,2,3) - missing claps, you know where>w<
22. 00:53:217 (6) - finish sounds better than clap
23. 00:54:521 (3) - add normal sampleset on head or something(?
24. 01:03:466 (6) - 01:04:956 (5) - 01:06:074 (3) - add clap
25. 01:06:540 - 01:18:652 - there's a beat here too, if you want to map it lol
26. 01:15:764 (1) - 01:27:503 (5) - finish on head
27. 01:21:354 - 00:42:596 -drum finish sounds better
28. 01:21:820 (7) - there's nothing here... i'd delete this

Fort wrote:

looks NC in here messy, consider NC every Finish hitsound or NC every 1 stanza (big white line in timeline)

imaikiseta wrote:

• 
  01:27:689 (1) - All spinners should start here All spinner start at that time already

Insane

00:24:708 (4) - Slider ends here Sorry i dont know what you mean
00:41:851 (2) - Fix this properly if it's going behind 00:40:733 (3) Fixed
Before

After

00:42:596 (4) - ^^ Fixed
00:53:776 (1) - Remove for circle I think nope
00:54:149 (2) - ^^ I think nope
01:21:913 (2) - Remove Fixed
01:22:099 (3) - Slider should end here I think nope
^^01:22:472 - Add a circle
If you were to do this, I think it fits more with the singing.

Hard

00:04:956 (4) - Maybe put this under slider 5 I think nope

01:06:261 (2,3,4) - Replace for a slider I think nope

Normal

00:07:938 (4) - Ctrl+G and move it down here because it seems more easier for the player Fixed

Easy

00:14:273 (6) - Slider should end here Fixed
^^00:15:018 - Add a slider ending 00:15:391 with reverse
01:05:702 (3) - Slider should end here I think nope
^^01:06:820 - Add circle?

1. Fine.

1. OD-1 is better setting for this mapset. OD8 isn't match the diff.
2. 00:06:820 (3) - Add whistle to slider head
3. 00:07:938 (3) - Remove finish from slider end
4. 00:09:987 (5) - Add whistle to slider end instead of clap
5. 00:12:037 (6) - Remove whistle from slider head
6. 00:13:528 (2) - Remove finish
7. 00:48:934 - Please resnap the green line at 00:48:931 -
8. 00:53:031 (5) - Try to match the spacing of 00:52:844 (4,5,6) - this notes? Currently is looks not good tho.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:04:956 (5,1) - Rhythm suggstion. Try to add 1/1 slider from red tick. It would be nice to follow the vocal.
   
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:23:031 (5,1) - Rhythm is weird. Why not follow the vocal of here~
    
    
11. 01:25:826 (5) - Please make more clean slider. and perfectly stacking.
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:27:689 (1) - spinner end is 01:29:180 - here? like an Easy diff and Normal diff.

1. 00:09:987 (1) - Remove clap
2. 00:12:969 (1) - ^
3. 00:12:969 (1) - a bit difficult end for Hard diff. Remove 01:27:223 (3) - this note and replace 01:27:596 (4) - the slider.
4. 01:27:689 (1) - same suggest in Insane diff

1. 00:07:938 (4) - spacing 0.90x is better
2. 00:12:782 (2,3,4) - ^
3. 00:22:472 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:44:273 (4,5) - ^
5. 01:02:720 (3,4,1) - ^
6. 01:03:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
7. omg why is you use spacing 1.00x from here lol please consistent the spacing in Normal diff. You should be changed 0,90x spacing.

1. 00:06:447 (2) - Add whistle to slider head. Remove clap from slider end.
2. 00:07:938 (3) - Add finish
3. 00:09:428 (1) - finish end
4. 00:11:478 (3) - remove clap from slider head
5. 00:11:478 (3) - add clap to slider head
6. 00:12:410 (4) - remove clap end
7. 00:13:341 (5,6) - a little weird this rhythm. try this one.
   
   
8. 00:16:136 (1) - add clap to slider end.
9. 00:30:298 (4) - remove clap
10. 00:31:415 (5) - add clap remove whistle
11. 00:35:888 (4) - add clap to slider end
12. 00:37:751 (2,3) - rhythm suggstion.
    
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:55:639 (2) - add clap to slider repeat
14. 01:04:584 (2,3) - Try this rhythm
    
    
    SPOILER

    

Guy wrote:

as your request

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Fine.

[Insane]

1. OD-1 is better setting for this mapset. OD8 isn't match the diff. Fixed
2. 00:06:820 (3) - Add whistle to slider head Fixed
3. 00:07:938 (3) - Remove finish from slider end Fixed
4. 00:09:987 (5) - Add whistle to slider end instead of clap Fixed
5. 00:12:037 (6) - Remove whistle from slider head Fixed
6. 00:13:528 (2) - Remove finish Fixed
7. 00:48:934 - Please resnap the green line at 00:48:931 - Fixed
8. 00:53:031 (5) - Try to match the spacing of 00:52:844 (4,5,6) - this notes? Currently is looks not good tho. Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:04:956 (5,1) - Rhythm suggstion. Try to add 1/1 slider from red tick. It would be nice to follow the vocal. Fixed
   
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:23:031 (5,1) - Rhythm is weird. Why not follow the vocal of here~ Fixed
    
    
11. 01:25:826 (5) - Please make more clean slider. and perfectly stacking. Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:27:689 (1) - spinner end is 01:29:180 - here? like an Easy diff and Normal diff.

Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:09:987 (1) - Remove clap Fixed
2. 00:12:969 (1) - ^ Fixed
3. 00:12:969 (1) - a bit difficult end for Hard diff. Remove 01:27:223 (3) - this note and replace 01:27:596 (4) - the slider. Fixed
4. 01:27:689 (1) - same suggest in Insane diff

Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:07:938 (4) - spacing 0.90x is better Fixed
2. 00:12:782 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
3. 00:22:472 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:44:273 (4,5) - ^ Fixed
5. 01:02:720 (3,4,1) - ^ Fixed
6. 01:03:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
7. omg why is you use spacing 1.00x from here lol please consistent the spacing in Normal diff. You should be changed 0,90x spacing.

[Easy]

1. 00:06:447 (2) - Add whistle to slider head. Remove clap from slider end. Fixed
2. 00:07:938 (3) - Add finish Fixed
3. 00:09:428 (1) - finish end Fixed
4. 00:11:478 (3) - remove clap from slider head Fixed
5. 00:11:478 (3) - add clap to slider head Fixed
6. 00:12:410 (4) - remove clap end Fixed
7. 00:13:341 (5,6) - a little weird this rhythm. try this one. Fixed
   
   
8. 00:16:136 (1) - add clap to slider end. Fixed
9. 00:30:298 (4) - remove clap Fixed
10. 00:31:415 (5) - add clap remove whistle Fixed
11. 00:35:888 (4) - add clap to slider end Fixed
12. 00:37:751 (2,3) - rhythm suggstion. Fixed
    
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:55:639 (2) - add clap to slider repeat Fixed
14. 01:04:584 (2,3) - Try this rhythm Fixed
    
    
    SPOILER

    

Need more 2~3 mods i thought.　Good luck o/ Thanks

1. Have you double check the metadata?
2. Please add custom combo colors, to make the mapset more beautiful, mungkin bisa coba combo colors ini kak:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 187,103,229
   Combo2 : 255,213,128
   Combo3 : 242,121,97
   Combo4 : 255,140,179

3. Just a minor, but BG can be maximized to 1366x768
4. Unrankable issue, video on Normal and Hard diff is not played, you can copy pate this code to each of the diffs, open .osu in notepad and replace Events with code below:
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
   Video,0,"op.avi"
   //Break Periods
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   //Storyboard Sound Samples

1. Kalo AR sama OD nya dikurangin satu bgmn kak? kayanya masih terlalu tinggi kalo ar od 4 kasian yang pemula
2. Sejujurnya kak menurut aku kalo untuk easy diff diminimalisir nempatin beat di red tick, tapi berhubung lumayan appealable sama lagunya mungkin cukup mudah buat dimainin
3. 00:06:447 (2) - Tambah clap kak di bagian reversenya? ada suara drum deh di sana lumayan kedengeran
4. 00:16:136 (1) - Tambah clap di bagian skhir kak? kayanya lupa yah
5. 00:30:298 (4) - Delete clap yg di bagian akhir deh kak, kayanya kurang cocok gitu
6. 00:31:415 (5) - Kayanya whistle ganti clap deh kak kedengeran lebih pas
7. 00:44:459 (3) - Delete clap yang di bagian awal slider kak?
8. 00:51:167 (3,1) - Jarak antara spinner (1) sama slider (3) itu masih terlalu deket kak, dan setau aku minimal ada jeda waktu sekitar 1500ms antara sebelum dan sesudah spinner buat diff Easy, belum lagi itu spinnernya masih terlalu pendek deh, takutnya yang baru main malah miss karena kecepetan spinnernya haha XD
9. Kita kayanya ga perlu green line di sini deh kak 00:53:776 - kan ga ad notes di sana, jadi mungkin bisa didelete aja
10. 00:55:639 (2) - Lupa clap di bagian reverse ya kak?
11. 01:01:229 (1,2,3,4) - Menurut aku kak ritmenya diperbagus lagi deh, mungkin bisa dicoba ritme kaya gini http://puu.sh/h3tu0/b1c1c3f937.jpg kalo didengerin lebih cocok sama vokalnya
12. 01:04:584 (2) - Clapnya itu seharusnya ada di bagian reverse kak dari pada di bagian akhir malah ganjil kedengerannya
13. 01:05:702 (3) - ritme yang itu juga kak mungkin bisa diperhalus lagi jadi kaya gini http://puu.sh/h3tI3/73fd398710.jpg
14. Kak menurut aku green line yang ini 01:17:254 - harusnya volumenya masih 50% deh, soalnya kalo didengerin lagi suara lagunya baru mulai slow lagi pas di bagian ini 01:18:000 (1) - jadi mungkin bisa ditambah green line di 01:18:745 - dengan volume 30%
15. 01:26:944 (5,1) - Jarak antara slider (5) sama spinner (1) masih terlalu deket kak menurut aku, sama kaya 00:51:167 (3,1) -
16. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak

1. 00:20:422 (4) - Untuk ritme yang itu kayanya lebih baik kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/h961H/fa8d61905a.jpg soalnya sayang bgt ngelewatin suara vokal yang kuat di downbeat ini 00:20:608 -
2. 00:27:689 (4) - Kayanya tambah whistle deh biar lebih klop sama suara soft snare di lagunya
3. 00:39:242 (1) - 00:40:733 (3) - 00:42:223 (1) - Tambah whistle di bagian reverse kak?
4. 00:50:795 (4) - Lupa clap di akhir?
5. 00:54:335 (2) - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya
6. 01:24:149 (3) - Kedengerannya agak aneh kak, clap yang diakhir slider itu, lebih baik menurut aku sih didelete aja
7. 01:26:198 (3) - Kalo whistle di akhir didelete bgmn kak? soalnya lebih bagus kedengerannya kalo tanpa clap
8. 01:26:944 (4) - Kalo tambah whistle untuk bagian awal sama reverse bgmn kak? terus bisa ditambah juga clap di bagian akhirnya
9. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak

1. 00:06:820 (2) - Tambah whistle di awal sama finish di akhir kak? biar sama kaya 00:02:348 (2,3) -
2. 00:10:919 (3) - Tambah finish kak di awal slider? soalnya suara finish yang ini 00:10:546 (2,3) - biar sama kaya yang suara yang ini 00:13:528 (2) -
3. 00:12:037 (2) - Tambah whistle di akhir kak? biar lebih kuat suara drumnya
4. 00:15:018 (5) - Tambah whistle di akhir? ada suara soft drum soalnya di sana
5. 00:27:503 - Mungkin bisa ditambah green line di situ kak? terus voulumenya diturunin sekitar 5-10%, soalnya suara drum-hitfinish nya terlalu keras mungkin bisa dibuat lebih soft kalo volumenya diturunin dikit, terus tambah greenline lagi di sini 00:28:062 - buat balikin volumenya jadi 45%
6. 00:33:652 (7) - Agak minor kak, tapi mungkin itu (7) bisa digeser ke x:372 y:124 biar lebih rapih stack ditengahnya antara 00:33:279 (6,7) -
7. 00:39:615 (5) - Kalo clap di awal diganti whistle bgmn kak? soalnya menurut aku di sana kita lebih butuh suara yg lebih soft drpd suara clap
8. 00:54:335 - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya
9. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak

1. Kalo AR nya dikurangin 1 atau 0.5 bgmn kak? kayanya terlalu cepet deh menurut aku kalo 9
2. 00:27:689 (10) - Agak minor kak, tapi mungkin itu bisa digeser sedikit ke kanan x:188 y:352 biar lebih lurus sama circle (8,9) sebelumnya
3. 00:39:987 (1) - Clap di awal kurang bagus deh kak menurut aku
4. 00:48:931 (1) - Astaga apa itu kak? kok ada ritme 1/6 di sana? bukannya biasanya pake 1/4 yah, mungkin itu seharusnya 1/1 slider dengan reverse deh
5. 00:54:335 - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya
6. 01:26:944 (1) - Menurut aku sih seharusnya itu berhenti di red tick slidernya terus di kasih whistle di awal sama akhir slider
7. 01:27:316 (2) - Finishnya kan seharusnya ada di bagian akhir kak bukan di awal
8. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak

Del05 wrote:

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo kak dari #modreqs it's like from 4 days ago, pardon my busyness ;(
Some small sugestion from me,

[General]

1. Have you double check the metadata?
2. Please add custom combo colors, to make the mapset more beautiful, mungkin bisa coba combo colors ini kak:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 187,103,229
   Combo2 : 255,213,128
   Combo3 : 242,121,97
   Combo4 : 255,140,179

3. Just a minor, but BG can be maximized to 1366x768
4. Unrankable issue, video on Normal and Hard diff is not played, you can copy pate this code to each of the diffs, open .osu in notepad and replace Events with code below:
   

   [Events]
   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
   Video,0,"op.avi"
   //Break Periods
   //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
   //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
   //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
   //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
   //Storyboard Sound Samples

[Easy]

1. Kalo AR sama OD nya dikurangin satu bgmn kak? kayanya masih terlalu tinggi kalo ar od 4 kasian yang pemula AR nya ane -1
2. Sejujurnya kak menurut aku kalo untuk easy diff diminimalisir nempatin beat di red tick, tapi berhubung lumayan appealable sama lagunya mungkin cukup mudah buat dimainin
3. 00:06:447 (2) - Tambah clap kak di bagian reversenya? ada suara drum deh di sana lumayan kedengeran Fixed
4. 00:16:136 (1) - Tambah clap di bagian skhir kak? kayanya lupa yah Fixed
5. 00:30:298 (4) - Delete clap yg di bagian akhir deh kak, kayanya kurang cocok gitu Fixed
6. 00:31:415 (5) - Kayanya whistle ganti clap deh kak kedengeran lebih pas Fixed
7. 00:44:459 (3) - Delete clap yang di bagian awal slider kak? Fixed
8. 00:51:167 (3,1) - Jarak antara spinner (1) sama slider (3) itu masih terlalu deket kak, dan setau aku minimal ada jeda waktu sekitar 1500ms antara sebelum dan sesudah spinner buat diff Easy, belum lagi itu spinnernya masih terlalu pendek deh, takutnya yang baru main malah miss karena kecepetan spinnernya haha XD Ane tampung dulu
9. Kita kayanya ga perlu green line di sini deh kak 00:53:776 - kan ga ad notes di sana, jadi mungkin bisa didelete aja color=#80FF00]Fixed[/color]
10. 00:55:639 (2) - Lupa clap di bagian reverse ya kak? Fixed
11. 01:01:229 (1,2,3,4) - Menurut aku kak ritmenya diperbagus lagi deh, mungkin bisa dicoba ritme kaya gini http://puu.sh/h3tu0/b1c1c3f937.jpg kalo didengerin lebih cocok sama vokalnya Ane tampung dulu
12. 01:04:584 (2) - Clapnya itu seharusnya ada di bagian reverse kak dari pada di bagian akhir malah ganjil kedengerannya Fixed
13. 01:05:702 (3) - ritme yang itu juga kak mungkin bisa diperhalus lagi jadi kaya gini http://puu.sh/h3tI3/73fd398710.jpg Ane tampung dulu
14. Kak menurut aku green line yang ini 01:17:254 - harusnya volumenya masih 50% deh, soalnya kalo didengerin lagi suara lagunya baru mulai slow lagi pas di bagian ini 01:18:000 (1) - jadi mungkin bisa ditambah green line di 01:18:745 - dengan volume 30% Fixed
15. 01:26:944 (5,1) - Jarak antara slider (5) sama spinner (1) masih terlalu deket kak menurut aku, sama kaya 00:51:167 (3,1) - Ane tampung dulu
16. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:20:422 (4) - Untuk ritme yang itu kayanya lebih baik kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/h961H/fa8d61905a.jpg soalnya sayang bgt ngelewatin suara vokal yang kuat di downbeat ini 00:20:608 - Fixed
2. 00:27:689 (4) - Kayanya tambah whistle deh biar lebih klop sama suara soft snare di lagunya Fixed
3. 00:39:242 (1) - 00:40:733 (3) - 00:42:223 (1) - Tambah whistle di bagian reverse kak? Fixed
4. 00:50:795 (4) - Lupa clap di akhir? Fixed
5. 00:54:335 (2) - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya Fixed
6. 01:24:149 (3) - Kedengerannya agak aneh kak, clap yang diakhir slider itu, lebih baik menurut aku sih didelete aja Fixed
7. 01:26:198 (3) - Kalo whistle di akhir didelete bgmn kak? soalnya lebih bagus kedengerannya kalo tanpa clap Fixed
8. 01:26:944 (4) - Kalo tambah whistle untuk bagian awal sama reverse bgmn kak? terus bisa ditambah juga clap di bagian akhirnya Fixed
9. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak[ Fixed/*:m]

[Hard]

1. 00:06:820 (2) - Tambah whistle di awal sama finish di akhir kak? biar sama kaya 00:02:348 (2,3) - Fixed
2. 00:10:919 (3) - Tambah finish kak di awal slider? soalnya suara finish yang ini 00:10:546 (2,3) - biar sama kaya yang suara yang ini 00:13:528 (2) - Fixed
3. 00:12:037 (2) - Tambah whistle di akhir kak? biar lebih kuat suara drumnya Fixed
4. 00:15:018 (5) - Tambah whistle di akhir? ada suara soft drum soalnya di sana Fixed
5. 00:27:503 - Mungkin bisa ditambah green line di situ kak? terus voulumenya diturunin sekitar 5-10%, soalnya suara drum-hitfinish nya terlalu keras Fixedmungkin bisa dibuat lebih soft kalo volumenya diturunin dikit, terus tambah greenline lagi di sini 00:28:062 - buat balikin volumenya jadi 45% Fixed
6. 00:33:652 (7) - Agak minor kak, tapi mungkin itu (7) bisa digeser ke x:372 y:124 biar lebih rapih stack ditengahnya antara 00:33:279 (6,7) - Fixed
7. 00:39:615 (5) - Kalo clap di awal diganti whistle bgmn kak? soalnya menurut aku di sana kita lebih butuh suara yg lebih soft drpd suara clap Fixed
8. 00:54:335 - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya Fixed
9. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak Fixed

[Insane]

1. Kalo AR nya dikurangin 1 atau 0.5 bgmn kak? kayanya terlalu cepet deh menurut aku kalo 9 Fixed
2. 00:27:689 (10) - Agak minor kak, tapi mungkin itu bisa digeser sedikit ke kanan x:188 y:352 biar lebih lurus sama circle (8,9) sebelumnya Fixed
3. 00:39:987 (1) - Clap di awal kurang bagus deh kak menurut aku Fixed
4. 00:48:931 (1) - Astaga apa itu kak? kok ada ritme 1/6 di sana? bukannya biasanya pake 1/4 yah, mungkin itu seharusnya 1/1 slider dengan reverse deh Fixed
5. 00:54:335 - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya Fixed
6. 01:26:944 (1) - Menurut aku sih seharusnya itu berhenti di red tick slidernya terus di kasih whistle di awal sama akhir slider Fixed
7. 01:27:316 (2) - Finishnya kan seharusnya ada di bagian akhir kak bukan di awal Fixed
8. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak Fixed

[]
Struktur sih udah lumayan rapih kak terus gameplay juga cukup fun buat dimainin, tapi buat hitsoundnya kak beberapa ada yang ketuker antara nempatin whistle, finish, sama clap, mungkin bisa diperiksa sendiri deh biar lebih pastinya hihihi

Goodluck kak, see you on qulified section soon~

Mako Sakata wrote:

Iyaaaa maaf yg easy memang udah aku mod dari 4 hari yang lalu sebelum ada update yg baru :p
Your welcome, haha kamu banyak bgt ngepostnya XD

1. 00:18:745 (4) - You need to move this 1 grid to the right, it's hard to see slider path with current position.
2. 00:26:385 (5) - New combo? there a change in music, instruments suddenly stop.
3. 00:29:925 (6) - I'm really dubious about this stacking, perhaps you can put it like this : http://puu.sh/hdkal.jpg to relieve my worries? the repeat is hard to see here.
4. 01:05:143 (1) - You forgot a finish here.
5. 01:03:279 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also consider reducing spacing of this stream , its HUGE
6. 01:24:149 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^

1. 00:39:242 (1,2,3,4) - Center them?

Tari wrote:

Hi!

[Insane]

1. 00:18:745 (4) - You need to move this 1 grid to the right, it's hard to see slider path with current position. Fixed
2. 00:26:385 (5) - New combo? there a change in music, instruments suddenly stop. Fixed
3. 00:29:925 (6) - I'm really dubious about this stacking, perhaps you can put it like this : http://puu.sh/hdkal.jpg to relieve my worries? the repeat is hard to see here. Fixed
4. 01:05:143 (1) - You forgot a finish here. Fixed
5. 01:03:279 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also consider reducing spacing of this stream, its HUGE I think it is okay so nope
6. 01:24:149 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ I think it is okay so nope

[Hard]

OD +1 Fixed


[Normal]

1. 00:39:242 (1,2,3,4) - Center them? I think nope

Good job for a first map. Thank you very much

Guy wrote:

Edit2 :
Qualified :3

Adol Christin wrote:

4th ranked COLORFUL BOX. GJ~

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

gratz, akhirnya . . . .
berhasil jg perjuangan lu xD . . .

=w=)b

NolanM wrote:

Congrats for your first ranked

Tenseki wrote:

congratz for your first ranked map

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

okay gan . . yume no tobira bakalan ak remap . . .
biar berkembang mapnya . . .

hubungin aja ak klo mau mulai proses moddingnya =w=)b