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ISHIDA YOKO - COLORFUL BOX

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Suzuya Jyuzo
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Joined February 2014
Suzuya Jyuzo

Del05 wrote:

Hi !
Thanks for the mod
For hard i didn't know what you mean so i not did it
and for insane all fixed

Suzuya Jyuzo wrote:

Hard
00:14:459 (7,8) - overlap
00:33:279 (6,7) - ^
00:42:596 (6,1) - ^
01:10:919 (3,4) - ^
Insane
00:26:385 (5) - Slide bar is not in the rhythm Fixed
00:26:757 (6) - ^ Fixed
00:27:130 (7) - ^ Fixed
00:50:981 (5,6,7) - Jump distance consistent（personal advice) Fixed
00:51:354 (7,8,9) - ^ Fixed
00:52:844 (4,5,6) - ^distance limit to 3,Jump higher than 00:51:354 (7,8,9) Fixed
Hard
i mean ： Two slider overlap，without overlap them.Looks better，What do you think?
Insane
i mean ：Note and note keep same distance,about these three note 00:50:981 (5,6,7), these 00:51:354 (7,8,9),and these 00:52:844 (4,5,6)
I am poor at english， hope you can understand， :)
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mods and for hitsounding, i made some mistake sorry :cry: but i already fix it according to your mod :lol:
And for make it short i will just quote the main mod (if fixed the sub mod are fixed too)

Chocox wrote:

Red = Probably unrankable , - = sub mod (under one specific error)
mod
Insane
00:03:838 (5) - try this http://puu.sh/gGxG4/599145c7b1.png , just ctrl+c , ctrl+v 00:02:348 (2) and ctrl+g Fixed
00:41:478 (1,2,3,4) - this looks really messy , maybe try http://puu.sh/gGxXm/4281789830.png (the note might be out of play area but I think it's still rankable) I think it is okay but will consider your pattern flow
00:46:695 (3,4,5,6,1) - expand this star , try http://puu.sh/gGypw/6e6e2f9a83.png Will consider it cause i cant make the bigger and better star :P
00:51:540 (8,3) - stack Fixed
00:53:776 (1,2,3) - these is a little messy to me , try http://puu.sh/gGysy/dcc06a3385.png Fixed

Hitsounding
I'll just point the major mistakes
00:55:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - All these starting at the chorus is hitsounded wrongly Fixed
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
If that what you mean with overlap i think there are no problem so nope. But for insane i already fix it

Suzuya Jyuzo wrote:

Hard
i mean ： Two slider overlap，without overlap them.Looks better，What do you think?
Insane
i mean ：Note and note keep same distance,about these three note 00:50:981 (5,6,7), these 00:51:354 (7,8,9),and these 00:52:844 (4,5,6)
I am poor at english， hope you can understand， :)
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for mod
for general mod, thanks i forgot about it :D thank you for remind me

Tenseki wrote:

[Easy]
00:13:341 (5,6) - make blanket perfectly Fixed
00:22:472 (1,2) - nc swap Fixed
00:30:298 (4,5) - make blanket perfectly Fixed
01:05:702 (1,2) - nc swap Fixed
01:18:000 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:21:726 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:25:080 (9) - nc Fixed
01:25:080 (1) - make it 1/1, more better than imao Fixed
01:27:503 (1) - move to 01:27:689 cuz you must follow about spin guidelines. Fixed

[Normal]
00:12:782 (2,3) - ctrl +g, cuz rhythms, and you must change placements Fixed
00:14:459 (6,1) - nc swap Fixed
00:16:136 (3) - nc Fixed
00:17:627 (1) - del nc Fixed
00:19:118 (1) - nc Fixed
00:21:354 (1) - del nc Fixed
00:22:472 (3) - nc Fixed
00:23:962 (1) - del nc Fixed
00:25:080 (3) - nc Fixed
00:39:242 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:40:360 (1) - del nc Fixed
00:42:223 (4,1) - nc swap Fixed
00:45:205 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
00:47:813 (3,4) - one circle and slider Will consider it
and 00:49:304 (1) - move ot 00:48:931 and 00:49:770 (2) - move to 00:49:677 Will consider it
you must change Inherited time at 00:49:304 Sorry i dont know what you mean (still new mapper :cry: )
00:55:267 (4,1) - nc swap Fixed
00:58:248 (4,5) - rhythm error I think no. So, nope
change to
01:01:602 (4) - nc Fixed
01:13:528 (6,1) - nc swap Fixed
01:15:764 (4) - nc Fixed
01:17:627 (1,2) - nc swap Fixed
01:20:608 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:23:031 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:25:080 (1) - nc Fixed
01:27:503 (1) - move to 01:27:689 cuz you must follow about spin guidelines. Fixed

[Hard]
00:02:348 (2,3,4,1) - I think these parts should be based on vocals. feels empty Fixed
00:09:987 (3) - nc Fixed
00:11:478 (6,1) - nc swap Fixed
00:12:969 (4) - nc Fixed
00:15:018 (8) - ctrl +g and move to x77 y92 . Cuz flows are more better Fixed
00:15:018 (8,1) - and blanket plz with 1 slider Fixed
[img[http://puu.sh/gGNO4/42fc4f6d46.jpg[/img]
00:29:552 (4) - better rhythms Fixed

00:56:571 (4) - set a same DS plz Fixed
01:26:944 - add circle, i can hear a beat Fixed

[Insane]
00:03:838 (5) - make a slider body down.( Down beat ) Fixed
00:06:633 (4,5,6,7,1) - my suggestion Fixed
00:13:900 (8) - make it 1/2 sldier
and add circle at 00:14:273
00:16:882 (3) - make it body up ( upbeat )
00:24:708 (4) - make it 3/4 slider and add 1/2 slider at 00:25:080 Fixed
00:42:596 (4) - why dont you change to 3 circles? nope
00:42:969 (6,7) - move them to 00:42:969
and add circle at 00:43:714 cuz of rhythms nope
01:08:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - make it jumpy? Fixed
01:20:608 (2,3) - ctrl +g ? cuz rhytms Fixed
01:21:354 (5,6) - ^ and 01:21:726 (6) - change to 3/4 Fixed
01:22:844 (4) - change to 2 circle and make jump between 4,5 cuz accent@_@ Fixed
01:27:503 - add circle and spin? Fixed

Good Song and Good luck!
Last edited by Del05 , edited 2 times in total.
Tenseki
803 posts
Joined November 2013
Tenseki
DS means Distance
and if you have a question about my modding.
free to ask me in-game pm :)
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05

Tenseki wrote:

DS means Distance
and if you have a question about my modding.
free to ask me in-game pm :)
Oh... DS mean distance snap. okay i already change it
Ciyus Miapah
3,028 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
hi from mod queue

Insane:

looks NC in here messy, consider NC every Finish hitsound or NC every 1 stanza (big white line in timeline)
00:27:503 (8,9,10) - im sure this triplet is very not recommended in here (especially on AR8 because the previous slider is hiding this pattern and make this triplet hard to read, consider make this one clearly visible)
00:29:366 (5) - im not sure for this stacks, try this maybe http://puu.sh/gKkxG/6c129fabbc.jpg
01:21:726 (6,1) - this one very sudden i think, make circle or triplet better gameplay
01:23:031 (5,1) - antijump after highjump very awkward things i guess (and looks 01:23:217 (1) - this notes didnt sound off for any beat)
01:25:826 (5) - oh god this stacks

hope this helps
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,325 posts
Joined November 2013
Chaoslitz


[Easy]
  1. Not suggested to use 1/2 slider with reverse in Easy diff
  2. 00:09:428 (1) - Avoid to reverse two times, it is not suitable for an Easy diff
  3. 00:11:292 (3) - Start at 00:11:478
  4. 00:14:273 (6) - Start slider at 00:14:459, remove reverse, and then add a note at 00:15:391
  5. 00:30:298 (4,5) - Exchange in timezone
  6. 00:34:770 (5,6) - Try this:
  7. 00:55:639 (2) - This slider is not really following the rhythm, reverse at 00:56:012 instead and add a note at 00:56:757
  8. 00:58:993 (6) - ^ same not suitable
  9. 01:04:211 (5,6) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:782 (2) - Fix ds
  2. 00:12:969 (3) - ^
  3. 01:24:149 (3) - note + slider instead
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:385 (4,5,6) - Same ds
  2. 01:24:149 (7,1) - Dont overlap this completely
  3. looks good
[Insane]
  1. 00:40:733 (3,4,5,6,1) - Use create polygon circle
  2. 00:46:695 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
  3. 00:56:012 (3) - Try curve slider?

good luck~
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mods
And for any problem with stacking or overlap i decided to change AR to 9 so it can be more clearly to see now (in my opinion)
Hope you like it !

Fort wrote:

hi from mod queue

Insane:

looks NC in here messy, consider NC every Finish hitsound or NC every 1 stanza (big white line in timeline) Will fixed later cause it means i must check it again :P
00:27:503 (8,9,10) - im sure this triplet is very not recommended in here (especially on AR8 because the previous slider is hiding this pattern and make this triplet hard to read, consider make this one clearly visible) AR change to 9
00:29:366 (5) - im not sure for this stacks, try this maybe http://puu.sh/gKkxG/6c129fabbc.jpg Fixed
01:21:726 (6,1) - this one very sudden i think, make circle or triplet better gameplay Fixed
01:23:031 (5,1) - antijump after highjump very awkward things i guess Fixed (and looks 01:23:217 (1) - this notes didnt sound off for any beat) I follow vocal
01:25:826 (5) - oh god this stacks AR change to 9

hope this helps
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Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mods.
For easy i think i will remap it when i have time

Chaoslitz wrote:



[Easy]
  1. 00:09:428 (1) - Avoid to reverse two times, it is not suitable for an Easy diff Still think for nice slider
  2. 00:11:292 (3) - Start at 00:11:478 Fixed
  3. 00:14:273 (6) - Start slider at 00:14:459, remove reverse, and then add a note at 00:15:391 Fixed
  4. 00:30:298 (4,5) - Exchange in timezone Fixed
  5. 00:34:770 (5,6) - Try this: Will consider it
  6. 00:55:639 (2) - This slider is not really following the rhythm, reverse at 00:56:012 instead and add a note at 00:56:757 Fixed
  7. 00:58:993 (6) - ^ same not suitable Fixed
  8. 01:04:211 (5,6) - ^ Fixed for 5 but 6 nope
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:782 (2) - Fix ds Fixed
  2. 00:12:969 (3) - ^ Fixed
  3. 01:24:149 (3) - note + slider instead Sorry i dont know what you mean
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:385 (4,5,6) - Same ds Fixed
  2. 01:24:149 (7,1) - Dont overlap this completely Will consider it
  3. looks good Thanks
[Insane]
  1. 00:40:733 (3,4,5,6,1) - Use create polygon circle I think my star is good :D
  2. 00:46:695 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^ I think my star is good :D
  3. 00:56:012 (3) - Try curve slider? Fixed

good luck~
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
No kudosu
There is no such a "TV Size" in the album and the "TV Size" is not published officially. Due to the Ranking Criteria, you have to remove "(TV Size)" from your title.
Good luck~
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05

Adol Christin wrote:

No kudosu
There is no such a "TV Size" in the album and the "TV Size" is not published officially. Due to the Ranking Criteria, you have to remove "(TV Size)" from your title.
Good luck~
Okay
Removed

Thanks
Haruto
1,815 posts
Joined December 2013
Haruto
Hi! sorry for the Long Delay! ^^
Here's the mods :3
  1. RedMeans : Unrankable
  2. BlueMeans : Highly Recommended
  3. Black Means : Normal Mods

General


  1. Please dont Use any Bright Combo Color
  2. Make the Distance Spacing 1,1x
  3. you can make the AR 4 in Easy
  4. Also, The OD too

Easy


  1. 00:05:702 (1,3) - Ovelapped
  2. 00:20:608 (3,5) - Overlapped too
  3. 00:22:844 (1,3) - Overlapped o.o
  4. 00:34:397 (4) - NC also, (4) is overlapping (1)
  5. 00:35:515 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 01:04:211 (1) - NC ?
  7. 01:04:584 (1) - This Slider style can be Blanket with 01:03:093 (4) - Here's The Example http://puu.sh/gXoVa/ee1a4e4820.jpg
  8. 01:07:192 (1) - Could You make This Blanket with 01:05:702 (7) - ? Example : http://puu.sh/gXoYy/1bc244bff9.jpg
  9. 01:07:938 (2) - Make it Like This http://puu.sh/gXp0N/a8652b5cf0.jpg to Avoid Overlaps
  10. 01:08:683 (3,4) - Blanket?
  11. 01:10:174 (1) - Stack Blanket with 01:09:056 (4) -
  12. 01:12:037 (4,5) - Fix Blanket
  13. 01:13:528 (1,2) - Blanket this?
  14. 01:21:726 (2) - in the Playfield, this would be overlap the HP bar, Fix this Please
  15. 01:26:944 (5) - Can you Blanket this with (4) ?

Normal


  1. 00:26:385 (3) - Overlap
Err... I dont Find any Problems on this Diff :roll:

Hard


Seems Fine for me :)

Insane


  1. 00:27:503 (8,9,10) - DS is Too BIG X(
  2. 01:03:279 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  3. 01:21:726 (6,7,1) - ^ This Look Overmapped
  4. 01:24:149 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  5. 01:27:130 (2,3,4) - ^
  6. 01:27:596 (1) - Spinner Must Start Here 01:27:689 -
Those streams really looks Difficult, please make the stream easier, this map is a Slow Song :(, so please make those streams More Near ;)
GOOD LUCK! ^o^
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-
hiii

[insane]
  1. This is the only diff with slider tick 2. would be cool to be constant and change it to 1 :3.
  2. Holy.. increase your overall hitsound volumen around 10-15% pls, i cant hear sht
  3. 00:02:348 (2) - 00:05:329 (2) - drum finish on head sounds better imo
  4. 00:03:838 (5) - ^drum clap here
  5. 00:06:447 - 00:06:820 - 00:09:428 - 00:14:273 (9) - add clap or something pls
  6. 00:07:192 (3) - finish on head, no tail
  7. 00:07:938 (1) - ^, and cancel clap, sounds bad
  8. 00:08:683 (3) - clap on head?
  9. 00:10:546 (1) - 00:12:037 (1) - 00:13:528 (5) - add clap on head
  10. 00:11:292 (3) - clap instead of whistle. and cancel whistle on 00:11:385 (4) - sounds really bad heh
  11. 00:14:646 (1) - this beat doesnt really follow something, thus a 1/1 sliders between 00:14:459 (10,2) - feels/plays a lot better i think
  12. 00:15:391 (5) - finish on head and whistle on tail sounds ok to me
  13. 00:15:298 - there's a triple here, if you wanted to map this lol
  14. 00:18:745 (4,1) - this rhythm doesnt follow anything here >< vocals start at 00:18:931 - , so start the slider from there instead, i guess(and also you should try to avoid mapping strong beat with slider tails, like you did here or 00:02:348 (2,5) - etc). 00:30:670 (8) - this is fine tho uhm.
  15. 00:21:726 (5) - ^
  16. 00:24:708 (4) - this should be 1/2, vocals are at 00:24:894 - , not on the blue tick.
  17. 00:27:503 (8,9,10) - i'd use drum clap/finish here. Cuz how drummy this sounds, normal hit doesnt fit at all.
  18. 00:37:752 (3) - finish cuz you added to 00:37:006 (1) -
  19. 00:39:521 (5) - delete this note, cuz there's nothing here lol. Also 00:39:428 (4,5) - these shouldn't normalsampleset >< (5) should have whistle tho. Same goes to 01:18:186 (4,5,6) -
  20. 00:41:105 (5,6) - whistles. Well this whole section is missing whistles.
  21. 00:48:931 (1,2,3) - missing claps, you know where>w<
  22. 00:53:217 (6) - finish sounds better than clap
  23. 00:54:521 (3) - add normal sampleset on head or something(?
  24. 01:03:466 (6) - 01:04:956 (5) - 01:06:074 (3) - add clap
  25. 01:06:540 - 01:18:652 - there's a beat here too, if you want to map it lol
  26. 01:15:764 (1) - 01:27:503 (5) - finish on head
  27. 01:21:354 - 00:42:596 -drum finish sounds better
  28. 01:21:820 (7) - there's nothing here... i'd delete this

Fort wrote:

looks NC in here messy, consider NC every Finish hitsound or NC every 1 stanza (big white line in timeline)
gl <3
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mod
Mod

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

Hi! sorry for the Long Delay! ^^
Here's the mods :3
  1. RedMeans : Unrankable
  2. BlueMeans : Highly Recommended
  3. Black Means : Normal Mods

[box=]

General


  1. Please dont Use any Bright Combo Color
  2. Make the Distance Spacing 1,1x
  3. you can make the AR 4 in Easy Fixed
  4. Also, The OD too Fixed

Easy


  1. 00:05:702 (1,3) - Ovelapped Fixed
  2. 00:20:608 (3,5) - Overlapped too Fixed
  3. 00:22:844 (1,3) - Overlapped o.o Fixed
  4. 00:34:397 (4) - NC also, (4) is overlapping (1) Fixed
  5. 00:35:515 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
  6. 01:04:211 (1) - NC ? Fixed
  7. 01:04:584 (1) - This Slider style can be Blanket with 01:03:093 (4) - Here's The Example http://puu.sh/gXoVa/ee1a4e4820.jpg Fixed
  8. 01:07:192 (1) - Could You make This Blanket with 01:05:702 (7) - ? Example : http://puu.sh/gXoYy/1bc244bff9.jpg Will consider it
  9. 01:07:938 (2) - Make it Like This http://puu.sh/gXp0N/a8652b5cf0.jpg to Avoid Overlaps Will consider it
  10. 01:08:683 (3,4) - Blanket? It's already blanket
  11. 01:10:174 (1) - Stack Blanket with 01:09:056 (4) - Sorry i dont know what you mean
  12. 01:12:037 (4,5) - Fix Blanket Fixed
  13. 01:13:528 (1,2) - Blanket this? Will consider it
  14. 01:21:726 (2) - in the Playfield, this would be overlap the HP bar, Fix this Please In mine is not, so nope
  15. 01:26:944 (5) - Can you Blanket this with (4) ? Will consider it

Normal


  1. 00:26:385 (3) - Overlap Fixed
Err... I dont Find any Problems on this Diff :roll:

Hard


Seems Fine for me :)

Insane


  1. 00:27:503 (8,9,10) - DS is Too BIG X( I think it is fine
  2. 01:03:279 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ I think it is fine
  3. 01:21:726 (6,7,1) - ^ This Look Overmapped I think it is fine
  4. 01:24:149 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ I think it is fine
  5. 01:27:130 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
  6. 01:27:596 (1) - Spinner Must Start Here 01:27:689 - Fixed
Those streams really looks Difficult, please make the stream easier, this map is a Slow Song :(, so please make those streams More Near ;)
GOOD LUCK! ^o^
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mod
Mod

Milan- wrote:

hiii

[insane]
  1. This is the only diff with slider tick 2. would be cool to be constant and change it to 1 :3. Fixed
  2. Holy.. increase your overall hitsound volumen around 10-15% pls, i cant hear sht Fixed
  3. 00:02:348 (2) - 00:05:329 (2) - drum finish on head sounds better imo Fixed
  4. 00:03:838 (5) - ^drum clap here Fixed
  5. 00:06:447 - 00:06:820 - 00:09:428 - 00:14:273 (9) - add clap or something pls Some of it Fixed
  6. 00:07:192 (3) - finish on head, no tail Fixed
  7. 00:07:938 (1) - ^, and cancel clap, sounds bad Fixed
  8. 00:08:683 (3) - clap on head? Fixed
  9. 00:10:546 (1) - 00:12:037 (1) - 00:13:528 (5) - add clap on head Fixed
  10. 00:11:292 (3) - clap instead of whistle. and cancel whistle on 00:11:385 (4) - sounds really bad heh Fixed
  11. 00:14:646 (1) - this beat doesnt really follow something, thus a 1/1 sliders between 00:14:459 (10,2) - feels/plays a lot better i think Fixed
  12. 00:15:391 (5) - finish on head and whistle on tail sounds ok to me Fixed
  13. 00:15:298 - there's a triple here, if you wanted to map this lol Fixed
  14. 00:18:745 (4,1) - this rhythm doesnt follow anything here >< vocals start at 00:18:931 - , so start the slider from there instead, i guess(and also you should try to avoid mapping strong beat with slider tails, like you did here or 00:02:348 (2,5) - etc). 00:30:670 (8) - this is fine tho uhm. Will consider it for the rhythm and i will remember your message
  15. 00:21:726 (5) - ^ same
  16. 00:24:708 (4) - this should be 1/2, vocals are at 00:24:894 - , not on the blue tick. Will consider it
  17. 00:27:503 (8,9,10) - i'd use drum clap/finish here. Cuz how drummy this sounds, normal hit doesnt fit at all. Fixed
  18. 00:37:752 (3) - finish cuz you added to 00:37:006 (1) - Fixed
  19. 00:39:521 (5) - delete this note, cuz there's nothing here lol. Also 00:39:428 (4,5) - these shouldn't normalsampleset >< (5) should have whistle tho. Same goes to 01:18:186 (4,5,6) - Fixed
  20. 00:41:105 (5,6) - whistles. Well this whole section is missing whistles. Fixed
  21. 00:48:931 (1,2,3) - missing claps, you know where>w< Fixed
  22. 00:53:217 (6) - finish sounds better than clap Fixed
  23. 00:54:521 (3) - add normal sampleset on head or something(? Fixed. i add normal
  24. 01:03:466 (6) - 01:04:956 (5) - 01:06:074 (3) - add clap Fixed
  25. 01:06:540 - 01:18:652 - there's a beat here too, if you want to map it lol Some fixed
  26. 01:15:764 (1) - 01:27:503 (5) - finish on head Fixed
  27. 01:21:354 - 00:42:596 -drum finish sounds better Fixed
  28. 01:21:820 (7) - there's nothing here... i'd delete this Fixed

Fort wrote:

looks NC in here messy, consider NC every Finish hitsound or NC every 1 stanza (big white line in timeline) Fixed
gl <3
Bara-
11,978 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-


[Easy]
00:17:627 (3,4) - Try to improve blanket, you can move (3) to 183:257, then you need to change distance of the previous note (2), so the distance keeps 1.00
00:39:242 (4) - This shape can be improved to make the blanket better, move the red node a little down, and you'll see what to do
01:03:093 (4) - Move to 40:189 to improve blanket
01:07:192 (1,2) - They seem to go too high, so they hit the HPBar, which is unrankable, can you check if it happens for you as well. If it does, move it down a little

Solid diff

[Normal]
00:04:211 (3) - NC for consistency with Easy, also, it feels better having a few NC in the begin
00:38:869 (4,1) - Improve blanket, you need to change the slider shape to do this, set time to 00:38:683 to make a good blanket
00:43:341 (2,3) - Improve blanket, the slider needs to go down a little
01:19:490 (4) - Shape feels really weird, Try making it have just 1 grey point, to make it blanket the previous note

Also a solid diff

[Hard]
00:12:969 (1) - Move to 280:186 to improve the stack
00:23:590 (4,7) - Try stacking the end of (4) with the start of (7) (Move (7) to 339:165 to achieve this)
00:56:012 (3,4,5) - Try to keep the distance in this part the same, it'll make it look better
01:12:596 (8,1) - Improve blanket; Move (8) to 321:225 to achieve this
01:26:944 (2,3,4,5,6) - Have you gone inssane? This doesn't even belong in an extra difficulty, make it an even spaced stream

[Insane]
00:09:801 (4,5,1) - Improve blanket, move (5) to 164:172
00:33:652 (8) - Move to 296:151 to improve blanket (You might need to change some other parts to make the star look nice)


This mapset is really good
I think you can ask around for BN to mod it, to get the good quality mods in order to get it ranked
Good Luck!!!!
Star~~
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi baraatje123 !
Thanks for the mods
Mod

baraatje123 wrote:



[Easy]
00:17:627 (3,4) - Try to improve blanket, you can move (3) to 183:257, then you need to change distance of the previous note (2), so the distance keeps 1.00 Fixed
00:39:242 (4) - This shape can be improved to make the blanket better, move the red node a little down, and you'll see what to do Fixed
01:03:093 (4) - Move to 40:189 to improve blanket Fixed
01:07:192 (1,2) - They seem to go too high, so they hit the HPBar, which is unrankable, can you check if it happens for you as well. If it does, move it down a little Fixed

Solid diff Thanks

[Normal]
00:04:211 (3) - NC for consistency with Easy, also, it feels better having a few NC in the begin Fixed
00:38:869 (4,1) - Improve blanket, you need to change the slider shape to do this, set time to 00:38:683 to make a good blanket Fixed
00:43:341 (2,3) - Improve blanket, the slider needs to go down a little Fixed
01:19:490 (4) - Shape feels really weird, Try making it have just 1 grey point, to make it blanket the previous note Fixed

Also a solid diff Thanks

[Hard]
00:12:969 (1) - Move to 280:186 to improve the stack Fixed
00:23:590 (4,7) - Try stacking the end of (4) with the start of (7) (Move (7) to 339:165 to achieve this) Fixed
00:56:012 (3,4,5) - Try to keep the distance in this part the same, it'll make it look better Fixed
01:12:596 (8,1) - Improve blanket; Move (8) to 321:225 to achieve this Fixed
01:26:944 (2,3,4,5,6) - Have you gone inssane? This doesn't even belong in an extra difficulty, make it an even spaced stream Fixed

[Insane]
00:09:801 (4,5,1) - Improve blanket, move (5) to 164:172 Fixed
00:33:652 (8) - Move to 296:151 to improve blanket (You might need to change some other parts to make the star look nice) Fixed


This mapset is really good Thanks
I think you can ask around for BN to mod it, to get the good quality mods in order to get it ranked
Good Luck!!!!
Star~~ Thanks
h1b1k11
261 posts
Joined April 2014
h1b1k11



  • 01:27:689 (1) - All spinners should start here
Insane
00:24:708 (4) - Slider ends here
00:41:851 (2) - Fix this properly if it's going behind 00:40:733 (3)
Before

After

00:42:596 (4) - ^^
00:53:776 (1) - Remove for circle
00:54:149 (2) - ^^
01:21:913 (2) - Remove
01:22:099 (3) - Slider should end here
^^01:22:472 - Add a circle
If you were to do this, I think it fits more with the singing.

Hard
00:04:956 (4) - Maybe put this under slider 5

01:06:261 (2,3,4) - Replace for a slider

Normal
00:07:938 (4) - Ctrl+G and move it down here because it seems more easier for the player

Easy
00:14:273 (6) - Slider should end here
^^00:15:018 - Add a slider ending 00:15:391 with reverse
01:05:702 (3) - Slider should end here
^^01:06:820 - Add circle?
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for the mods

imaikiseta wrote:




  • 01:27:689 (1) - All spinners should start here All spinner start at that time already
Insane
00:24:708 (4) - Slider ends here Sorry i dont know what you mean
00:41:851 (2) - Fix this properly if it's going behind 00:40:733 (3) Fixed
Before

After

00:42:596 (4) - ^^ Fixed
00:53:776 (1) - Remove for circle I think nope
00:54:149 (2) - ^^ I think nope
01:21:913 (2) - Remove Fixed
01:22:099 (3) - Slider should end here I think nope
^^01:22:472 - Add a circle
If you were to do this, I think it fits more with the singing.

Hard
00:04:956 (4) - Maybe put this under slider 5 I think nope

01:06:261 (2,3,4) - Replace for a slider I think nope

Normal
00:07:938 (4) - Ctrl+G and move it down here because it seems more easier for the player Fixed

Easy
00:14:273 (6) - Slider should end here Fixed
^^00:15:018 - Add a slider ending 00:15:391 with reverse
01:05:702 (3) - Slider should end here I think nope
^^01:06:820 - Add circle?
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
as your request

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Fine.
[Insane]
  1. OD-1 is better setting for this mapset. OD8 isn't match the diff.
  2. 00:06:820 (3) - Add whistle to slider head
  3. 00:07:938 (3) - Remove finish from slider end
  4. 00:09:987 (5) - Add whistle to slider end instead of clap
  5. 00:12:037 (6) - Remove whistle from slider head
  6. 00:13:528 (2) - Remove finish
  7. 00:48:934 - Please resnap the green line at 00:48:931 -
  8. 00:53:031 (5) - Try to match the spacing of 00:52:844 (4,5,6) - this notes? Currently is looks not good tho.
    SPOILER
  9. 01:04:956 (5,1) - Rhythm suggstion. Try to add 1/1 slider from red tick. It would be nice to follow the vocal.

    SPOILER
  10. 01:23:031 (5,1) - Rhythm is weird. Why not follow the vocal of here~

  11. 01:25:826 (5) - Please make more clean slider. and perfectly stacking.
    SPOILER
  12. 01:27:689 (1) - spinner end is 01:29:180 - here? like an Easy diff and Normal diff.
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:987 (1) - Remove clap
  2. 00:12:969 (1) - ^
  3. 00:12:969 (1) - a bit difficult end for Hard diff. Remove 01:27:223 (3) - this note and replace 01:27:596 (4) - the slider.
  4. 01:27:689 (1) - same suggest in Insane diff
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:938 (4) - spacing 0.90x is better
  2. 00:12:782 (2,3,4) - ^
  3. 00:22:472 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:44:273 (4,5) - ^
  5. 01:02:720 (3,4,1) - ^
  6. 01:03:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  7. omg why is you use spacing 1.00x from here lol please consistent the spacing in Normal diff. You should be changed 0,90x spacing.
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:447 (2) - Add whistle to slider head. Remove clap from slider end.
  2. 00:07:938 (3) - Add finish
  3. 00:09:428 (1) - finish end
  4. 00:11:478 (3) - remove clap from slider head
  5. 00:11:478 (3) - add clap to slider head
  6. 00:12:410 (4) - remove clap end
  7. 00:13:341 (5,6) - a little weird this rhythm. try this one.

  8. 00:16:136 (1) - add clap to slider end.
  9. 00:30:298 (4) - remove clap
  10. 00:31:415 (5) - add clap remove whistle
  11. 00:35:888 (4) - add clap to slider end
  12. 00:37:751 (2,3) - rhythm suggstion.

    SPOILER
  13. 00:55:639 (2) - add clap to slider repeat
  14. 01:04:584 (2,3) - Try this rhythm

    SPOILER
Need more 2~3 mods i thought.　Good luck o/
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for the mods
Actually when i mapped normal, i got a accident (i accidentally change the DS and i forgot what i use 0.9x or 1.00x) and i will change the whole normal

Guy wrote:

as your request

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Fine.
[Insane]
  1. OD-1 is better setting for this mapset. OD8 isn't match the diff. Fixed
  2. 00:06:820 (3) - Add whistle to slider head Fixed
  3. 00:07:938 (3) - Remove finish from slider end Fixed
  4. 00:09:987 (5) - Add whistle to slider end instead of clap Fixed
  5. 00:12:037 (6) - Remove whistle from slider head Fixed
  6. 00:13:528 (2) - Remove finish Fixed
  7. 00:48:934 - Please resnap the green line at 00:48:931 - Fixed
  8. 00:53:031 (5) - Try to match the spacing of 00:52:844 (4,5,6) - this notes? Currently is looks not good tho. Fixed
    SPOILER
  9. 01:04:956 (5,1) - Rhythm suggstion. Try to add 1/1 slider from red tick. It would be nice to follow the vocal. Fixed

    SPOILER
  10. 01:23:031 (5,1) - Rhythm is weird. Why not follow the vocal of here~ Fixed

  11. 01:25:826 (5) - Please make more clean slider. and perfectly stacking. Fixed
    SPOILER
  12. 01:27:689 (1) - spinner end is 01:29:180 - here? like an Easy diff and Normal diff.
Fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:09:987 (1) - Remove clap Fixed
  2. 00:12:969 (1) - ^ Fixed
  3. 00:12:969 (1) - a bit difficult end for Hard diff. Remove 01:27:223 (3) - this note and replace 01:27:596 (4) - the slider. Fixed
  4. 01:27:689 (1) - same suggest in Insane diff
Fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:07:938 (4) - spacing 0.90x is better Fixed
  2. 00:12:782 (2,3,4) - ^ Fixed
  3. 00:22:472 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
  4. 00:44:273 (4,5) - ^ Fixed
  5. 01:02:720 (3,4,1) - ^ Fixed
  6. 01:03:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Fixed
  7. omg why is you use spacing 1.00x from here lol please consistent the spacing in Normal diff. You should be changed 0,90x spacing.
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:447 (2) - Add whistle to slider head. Remove clap from slider end. Fixed
  2. 00:07:938 (3) - Add finish Fixed
  3. 00:09:428 (1) - finish end Fixed
  4. 00:11:478 (3) - remove clap from slider head Fixed
  5. 00:11:478 (3) - add clap to slider head Fixed
  6. 00:12:410 (4) - remove clap end Fixed
  7. 00:13:341 (5,6) - a little weird this rhythm. try this one. Fixed

  8. 00:16:136 (1) - add clap to slider end. Fixed
  9. 00:30:298 (4) - remove clap Fixed
  10. 00:31:415 (5) - add clap remove whistle Fixed
  11. 00:35:888 (4) - add clap to slider end Fixed
  12. 00:37:751 (2,3) - rhythm suggstion. Fixed

    SPOILER
  13. 00:55:639 (2) - add clap to slider repeat Fixed
  14. 01:04:584 (2,3) - Try this rhythm Fixed

    SPOILER
Need more 2~3 mods i thought.　Good luck o/ Thanks
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Helloooo kak dari #modreqs it's like from 4 days ago, pardon my busyness ;(
Some small sugestion from me,

[General]
  1. Have you double check the metadata?
  2. Please add custom combo colors, to make the mapset more beautiful, mungkin bisa coba combo colors ini kak:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 187,103,229
    Combo2 : 255,213,128
    Combo3 : 242,121,97
    Combo4 : 255,140,179
  3. Just a minor, but BG can be maximized to 1366x768
  4. Unrankable issue, video on Normal and Hard diff is not played, you can copy pate this code to each of the diffs, open .osu in notepad and replace Events with code below:
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
    Video,0,"op.avi"
    //Break Periods
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    //Storyboard Sound Samples
[Easy]
  1. Kalo AR sama OD nya dikurangin satu bgmn kak? kayanya masih terlalu tinggi kalo ar od 4 kasian yang pemula
  2. Sejujurnya kak menurut aku kalo untuk easy diff diminimalisir nempatin beat di red tick, tapi berhubung lumayan appealable sama lagunya mungkin cukup mudah buat dimainin
  3. 00:06:447 (2) - Tambah clap kak di bagian reversenya? ada suara drum deh di sana lumayan kedengeran
  4. 00:16:136 (1) - Tambah clap di bagian skhir kak? kayanya lupa yah
  5. 00:30:298 (4) - Delete clap yg di bagian akhir deh kak, kayanya kurang cocok gitu
  6. 00:31:415 (5) - Kayanya whistle ganti clap deh kak kedengeran lebih pas
  7. 00:44:459 (3) - Delete clap yang di bagian awal slider kak?
  8. 00:51:167 (3,1) - Jarak antara spinner (1) sama slider (3) itu masih terlalu deket kak, dan setau aku minimal ada jeda waktu sekitar 1500ms antara sebelum dan sesudah spinner buat diff Easy, belum lagi itu spinnernya masih terlalu pendek deh, takutnya yang baru main malah miss karena kecepetan spinnernya haha XD
  9. Kita kayanya ga perlu green line di sini deh kak 00:53:776 - kan ga ad notes di sana, jadi mungkin bisa didelete aja
  10. 00:55:639 (2) - Lupa clap di bagian reverse ya kak?
  11. 01:01:229 (1,2,3,4) - Menurut aku kak ritmenya diperbagus lagi deh, mungkin bisa dicoba ritme kaya gini http://puu.sh/h3tu0/b1c1c3f937.jpg kalo didengerin lebih cocok sama vokalnya
  12. 01:04:584 (2) - Clapnya itu seharusnya ada di bagian reverse kak dari pada di bagian akhir malah ganjil kedengerannya
  13. 01:05:702 (3) - ritme yang itu juga kak mungkin bisa diperhalus lagi jadi kaya gini http://puu.sh/h3tI3/73fd398710.jpg
  14. Kak menurut aku green line yang ini 01:17:254 - harusnya volumenya masih 50% deh, soalnya kalo didengerin lagi suara lagunya baru mulai slow lagi pas di bagian ini 01:18:000 (1) - jadi mungkin bisa ditambah green line di 01:18:745 - dengan volume 30%
  15. 01:26:944 (5,1) - Jarak antara slider (5) sama spinner (1) masih terlalu deket kak menurut aku, sama kaya 00:51:167 (3,1) -
  16. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:422 (4) - Untuk ritme yang itu kayanya lebih baik kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/h961H/fa8d61905a.jpg soalnya sayang bgt ngelewatin suara vokal yang kuat di downbeat ini 00:20:608 -
  2. 00:27:689 (4) - Kayanya tambah whistle deh biar lebih klop sama suara soft snare di lagunya
  3. 00:39:242 (1) - 00:40:733 (3) - 00:42:223 (1) - Tambah whistle di bagian reverse kak?
  4. 00:50:795 (4) - Lupa clap di akhir?
  5. 00:54:335 (2) - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya
  6. 01:24:149 (3) - Kedengerannya agak aneh kak, clap yang diakhir slider itu, lebih baik menurut aku sih didelete aja
  7. 01:26:198 (3) - Kalo whistle di akhir didelete bgmn kak? soalnya lebih bagus kedengerannya kalo tanpa clap
  8. 01:26:944 (4) - Kalo tambah whistle untuk bagian awal sama reverse bgmn kak? terus bisa ditambah juga clap di bagian akhirnya
  9. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:820 (2) - Tambah whistle di awal sama finish di akhir kak? biar sama kaya 00:02:348 (2,3) -
  2. 00:10:919 (3) - Tambah finish kak di awal slider? soalnya suara finish yang ini 00:10:546 (2,3) - biar sama kaya yang suara yang ini 00:13:528 (2) -
  3. 00:12:037 (2) - Tambah whistle di akhir kak? biar lebih kuat suara drumnya
  4. 00:15:018 (5) - Tambah whistle di akhir? ada suara soft drum soalnya di sana
  5. 00:27:503 - Mungkin bisa ditambah green line di situ kak? terus voulumenya diturunin sekitar 5-10%, soalnya suara drum-hitfinish nya terlalu keras mungkin bisa dibuat lebih soft kalo volumenya diturunin dikit, terus tambah greenline lagi di sini 00:28:062 - buat balikin volumenya jadi 45%
  6. 00:33:652 (7) - Agak minor kak, tapi mungkin itu (7) bisa digeser ke x:372 y:124 biar lebih rapih stack ditengahnya antara 00:33:279 (6,7) -
  7. 00:39:615 (5) - Kalo clap di awal diganti whistle bgmn kak? soalnya menurut aku di sana kita lebih butuh suara yg lebih soft drpd suara clap
  8. 00:54:335 - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya
  9. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak
[Insane]
  1. Kalo AR nya dikurangin 1 atau 0.5 bgmn kak? kayanya terlalu cepet deh menurut aku kalo 9
  2. 00:27:689 (10) - Agak minor kak, tapi mungkin itu bisa digeser sedikit ke kanan x:188 y:352 biar lebih lurus sama circle (8,9) sebelumnya
  3. 00:39:987 (1) - Clap di awal kurang bagus deh kak menurut aku
  4. 00:48:931 (1) - Astaga apa itu kak? kok ada ritme 1/6 di sana? bukannya biasanya pake 1/4 yah, mungkin itu seharusnya 1/1 slider dengan reverse deh
  5. 00:54:335 - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya
  6. 01:26:944 (1) - Menurut aku sih seharusnya itu berhenti di red tick slidernya terus di kasih whistle di awal sama akhir slider
  7. 01:27:316 (2) - Finishnya kan seharusnya ada di bagian akhir kak bukan di awal
  8. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak
[]
Struktur sih udah lumayan rapih kak terus gameplay juga cukup fun buat dimainin, tapi buat hitsoundnya kak beberapa ada yang ketuker antara nempatin whistle, finish, sama clap, mungkin bisa diperiksa sendiri deh biar lebih pastinya hihihi :)

Goodluck kak, see you on qulified section soon~
Del05
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Topic Starter
Del05
Untuk Masalah hitsound beberapa udah ane ganti waktu apply modnya Guy jd mungkin blm kakak update
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Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Makasih Mako Sakata modnya
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Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi
Makasih modnya
Wah salah mencet edit jd quote lagi

Del05 wrote:

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo kak dari #modreqs it's like from 4 days ago, pardon my busyness ;(
Some small sugestion from me,

[General]
  1. Have you double check the metadata?
  2. Please add custom combo colors, to make the mapset more beautiful, mungkin bisa coba combo colors ini kak:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 187,103,229
    Combo2 : 255,213,128
    Combo3 : 242,121,97
    Combo4 : 255,140,179
  3. Just a minor, but BG can be maximized to 1366x768
  4. Unrankable issue, video on Normal and Hard diff is not played, you can copy pate this code to each of the diffs, open .osu in notepad and replace Events with code below:
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
    Video,0,"op.avi"
    //Break Periods
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    //Storyboard Sound Samples
[Easy]
  1. Kalo AR sama OD nya dikurangin satu bgmn kak? kayanya masih terlalu tinggi kalo ar od 4 kasian yang pemula AR nya ane -1
  2. Sejujurnya kak menurut aku kalo untuk easy diff diminimalisir nempatin beat di red tick, tapi berhubung lumayan appealable sama lagunya mungkin cukup mudah buat dimainin
  3. 00:06:447 (2) - Tambah clap kak di bagian reversenya? ada suara drum deh di sana lumayan kedengeran Fixed
  4. 00:16:136 (1) - Tambah clap di bagian skhir kak? kayanya lupa yah Fixed
  5. 00:30:298 (4) - Delete clap yg di bagian akhir deh kak, kayanya kurang cocok gitu Fixed
  6. 00:31:415 (5) - Kayanya whistle ganti clap deh kak kedengeran lebih pas Fixed
  7. 00:44:459 (3) - Delete clap yang di bagian awal slider kak? Fixed
  8. 00:51:167 (3,1) - Jarak antara spinner (1) sama slider (3) itu masih terlalu deket kak, dan setau aku minimal ada jeda waktu sekitar 1500ms antara sebelum dan sesudah spinner buat diff Easy, belum lagi itu spinnernya masih terlalu pendek deh, takutnya yang baru main malah miss karena kecepetan spinnernya haha XD Ane tampung dulu :D
  9. Kita kayanya ga perlu green line di sini deh kak 00:53:776 - kan ga ad notes di sana, jadi mungkin bisa didelete aja color=#80FF00]Fixed[/color]
  10. 00:55:639 (2) - Lupa clap di bagian reverse ya kak? Fixed
  11. 01:01:229 (1,2,3,4) - Menurut aku kak ritmenya diperbagus lagi deh, mungkin bisa dicoba ritme kaya gini http://puu.sh/h3tu0/b1c1c3f937.jpg kalo didengerin lebih cocok sama vokalnya Ane tampung dulu :D
  12. 01:04:584 (2) - Clapnya itu seharusnya ada di bagian reverse kak dari pada di bagian akhir malah ganjil kedengerannya Fixed
  13. 01:05:702 (3) - ritme yang itu juga kak mungkin bisa diperhalus lagi jadi kaya gini http://puu.sh/h3tI3/73fd398710.jpg Ane tampung dulu :D
  14. Kak menurut aku green line yang ini 01:17:254 - harusnya volumenya masih 50% deh, soalnya kalo didengerin lagi suara lagunya baru mulai slow lagi pas di bagian ini 01:18:000 (1) - jadi mungkin bisa ditambah green line di 01:18:745 - dengan volume 30% Fixed
  15. 01:26:944 (5,1) - Jarak antara slider (5) sama spinner (1) masih terlalu deket kak menurut aku, sama kaya 00:51:167 (3,1) - Ane tampung dulu :D
  16. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak Fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:422 (4) - Untuk ritme yang itu kayanya lebih baik kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/h961H/fa8d61905a.jpg soalnya sayang bgt ngelewatin suara vokal yang kuat di downbeat ini 00:20:608 - Fixed
  2. 00:27:689 (4) - Kayanya tambah whistle deh biar lebih klop sama suara soft snare di lagunya Fixed
  3. 00:39:242 (1) - 00:40:733 (3) - 00:42:223 (1) - Tambah whistle di bagian reverse kak? Fixed
  4. 00:50:795 (4) - Lupa clap di akhir? Fixed
  5. 00:54:335 (2) - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya Fixed
  6. 01:24:149 (3) - Kedengerannya agak aneh kak, clap yang diakhir slider itu, lebih baik menurut aku sih didelete aja Fixed
  7. 01:26:198 (3) - Kalo whistle di akhir didelete bgmn kak? soalnya lebih bagus kedengerannya kalo tanpa clap Fixed
  8. 01:26:944 (4) - Kalo tambah whistle untuk bagian awal sama reverse bgmn kak? terus bisa ditambah juga clap di bagian akhirnya Fixed
  9. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak[ Fixed/*:m]
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:820 (2) - Tambah whistle di awal sama finish di akhir kak? biar sama kaya 00:02:348 (2,3) - Fixed
  2. 00:10:919 (3) - Tambah finish kak di awal slider? soalnya suara finish yang ini 00:10:546 (2,3) - biar sama kaya yang suara yang ini 00:13:528 (2) - Fixed
  3. 00:12:037 (2) - Tambah whistle di akhir kak? biar lebih kuat suara drumnya Fixed
  4. 00:15:018 (5) - Tambah whistle di akhir? ada suara soft drum soalnya di sana Fixed
  5. 00:27:503 - Mungkin bisa ditambah green line di situ kak? terus voulumenya diturunin sekitar 5-10%, soalnya suara drum-hitfinish nya terlalu keras Fixedmungkin bisa dibuat lebih soft kalo volumenya diturunin dikit, terus tambah greenline lagi di sini 00:28:062 - buat balikin volumenya jadi 45% Fixed
  6. 00:33:652 (7) - Agak minor kak, tapi mungkin itu (7) bisa digeser ke x:372 y:124 biar lebih rapih stack ditengahnya antara 00:33:279 (6,7) - Fixed
  7. 00:39:615 (5) - Kalo clap di awal diganti whistle bgmn kak? soalnya menurut aku di sana kita lebih butuh suara yg lebih soft drpd suara clap Fixed
  8. 00:54:335 - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya Fixed
  9. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak Fixed
[Insane]
  1. Kalo AR nya dikurangin 1 atau 0.5 bgmn kak? kayanya terlalu cepet deh menurut aku kalo 9 Fixed
  2. 00:27:689 (10) - Agak minor kak, tapi mungkin itu bisa digeser sedikit ke kanan x:188 y:352 biar lebih lurus sama circle (8,9) sebelumnya Fixed
  3. 00:39:987 (1) - Clap di awal kurang bagus deh kak menurut aku Fixed
  4. 00:48:931 (1) - Astaga apa itu kak? kok ada ritme 1/6 di sana? bukannya biasanya pake 1/4 yah, mungkin itu seharusnya 1/1 slider dengan reverse deh Fixed
  5. 00:54:335 - sama 00:54:521 - Kalo tambah whistle bgmn kak? nyesuain sama suara bassnya Fixed
  6. 01:26:944 (1) - Menurut aku sih seharusnya itu berhenti di red tick slidernya terus di kasih whistle di awal sama akhir slider Fixed
  7. 01:27:316 (2) - Finishnya kan seharusnya ada di bagian akhir kak bukan di awal Fixed
  8. 01:29:180 - Tambah green line di sana? terus atur volumenya jadi mungkin 10% buat ngesilent suara spinner akhirnya, kayanya lebih cocok deh kak Fixed
[]
Struktur sih udah lumayan rapih kak terus gameplay juga cukup fun buat dimainin, tapi buat hitsoundnya kak beberapa ada yang ketuker antara nempatin whistle, finish, sama clap, mungkin bisa diperiksa sendiri deh biar lebih pastinya hihihi :)

Goodluck kak, see you on qulified section soon~
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Iyaaaa maaf yg easy memang udah aku mod dari 4 hari yang lalu sebelum ada update yg baru :p
Your welcome, haha kamu banyak bgt ngepostnya XD
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05

Mako Sakata wrote:

Iyaaaa maaf yg easy memang udah aku mod dari 4 hari yang lalu sebelum ada update yg baru :p
Your welcome, haha kamu banyak bgt ngepostnya XD
Iya salah mencet quote 2 kali jadi ada banyak
Jd aku edit sekalian aja :lol:
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Did a short irc mod and I think we can go ahead. Bubbled :3

log
2015-04-12 20:52 Flower: first insane
2015-04-12 20:52 Del05: ok
2015-04-12 20:52 Flower: 00:28:062 (1) - move to 191,137 to avoid stacking on 00:27:689 (10) -
2015-04-12 20:53 Del05: y : 137 ?
2015-04-12 20:53 Flower: yes
2015-04-12 20:54 Flower: 00:11:105 (2,3,4,5) - move more separate to avoid touch on 00:10:546 (1) -
2015-04-12 20:54 Del05: is that not to high
2015-04-12 20:54 Del05: or i must ctrl+g it first then move it
2015-04-12 20:54 Flower: no, no it's not that high, just a few more pixels away
2015-04-12 20:55 Flower: like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3004505
2015-04-12 20:56 Del05: no i confused about 28:062
2015-04-12 20:56 Del05: the 11:105 are done
2015-04-12 20:58 Flower: :)
2015-04-12 20:58 Flower: 00:32:348 (3) - blanket better
2015-04-12 20:59 Del05: okay fixed
2015-04-12 21:01 Flower: insane so far so good let's move to hard
2015-04-12 21:01 Del05: okay thanks
2015-04-12 21:01 Flower: 00:15:018 (5,1) - blanket better
2015-04-12 21:01 Del05: btw i'm still confused about move to 191,137 ? :C
2015-04-12 21:02 Flower: x:191, y:137, or so. turn stacking on in "view" menu for better result
2015-04-12 21:03 Del05: ah wait
2015-04-12 21:03 Flower: c:
2015-04-12 21:05 Flower: hard is fine. in normal
2015-04-12 21:05 Del05: o
2015-04-12 21:05 Del05: okay thanks
2015-04-12 21:05 Flower: 00:47:813 (4) - is this intended? I think stacking back with 00:46:323 (2) - is better
2015-04-12 21:06 Del05: okay fixed
2015-04-12 21:08 Flower: 01:19:118 (3) - it's an inconsistency in spacing
2015-04-12 21:09 Del05: fixed
2015-04-12 21:10 Flower: 01:19:490 (4) - this is bessel slider..? looks not so cool. suggest rebuild it
2015-04-12 21:10 Del05: bessel ? what is that ?
2015-04-12 21:11 Flower: the shape
2015-04-12 21:11 Flower: it was old slider calculation, so it's not symmetric. moving the middle node to the middle can fix it
2015-04-12 21:12 Del05: oh... old slider ?
2015-04-12 21:12 Del05: okay will rebuild it
2015-04-12 21:12 Flower: yeah
2015-04-12 21:12 Del05: fixed
2015-04-12 21:12 Flower: now easy
2015-04-12 21:13 Del05: okay
2015-04-12 21:14 Flower: 00:51:913 (1) - imo the spinner is too short in easy diff
2015-04-12 21:14 Del05: end at 00:53:590
2015-04-12 21:14 Del05: what do you think ?
2015-04-12 21:15 Flower: better change to notes imo.
2015-04-12 21:16 Del05: notes okay
2015-04-12 21:16 Flower: ok then, following are aibat check things
2015-04-12 21:17 Flower: Inconsistency in combo colours:
2015-04-12 21:17 Del05: combo colours ?
2015-04-12 21:18 Del05: i think i have used same combo colours for all diff
2015-04-12 21:18 Flower: forget that. it was a bug in the aibat
2015-04-12 21:18 Del05: okay then
2015-04-12 21:18 Flower: and please change audio-lead-in (in .osu file) to at least 800 to meat the criteria
2015-04-12 21:19 Del05: ok
2015-04-12 21:19 Del05: i will change it to 800
2015-04-12 21:19 Flower: that's all :) when you update the map I'll check
2015-04-12 21:19 Del05: okay thanks
2015-04-12 21:20 Del05: i will update in 1 hour
2015-04-12 21:20 Flower: ok
2015-04-12 21:37 Del05: hi i have update the map hope you like it
2015-04-12 21:45 Flower: let me check.. sorry I was taking a nap
2015-04-12 21:47 Del05: no prob
2015-04-12 21:48 Del05: taking a break is important to body
2015-04-12 21:48 Del05: lol
2015-04-12 21:49 Flower: blame on poor life schedule o/
2015-04-12 21:50 Del05: ha...ha...ha...
2015-04-12 21:51 Flower: insane: 00:28:062 (1) - umm, what i meant wat like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3004704
2015-04-12 21:52 Flower: another small thing: 00:33:279 (6,8) - blanket
2015-04-12 21:53 Flower: also normal: 00:47:813 (4,1) - these two should stack x.x
2015-04-12 21:54 Del05: both are fixed
2015-04-12 21:54 Flower: all right, when you have updated call me back
2015-04-12 21:55 Del05: okay
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari
Hi!

[Insane]

  1. 00:18:745 (4) - You need to move this 1 grid to the right, it's hard to see slider path with current position.
  2. 00:26:385 (5) - New combo? there a change in music, instruments suddenly stop.
  3. 00:29:925 (6) - I'm really dubious about this stacking, perhaps you can put it like this : http://puu.sh/hdkal.jpg to relieve my worries? the repeat is hard to see here.
  4. 01:05:143 (1) - You forgot a finish here.
  5. 01:03:279 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also consider reducing spacing of this stream , its HUGE
  6. 01:24:149 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
[Hard]

OD +1


[Normal]

  1. 00:39:242 (1,2,3,4) - Center them?
Good job for a first map.
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi !
Thanks for give me some mods

Tari wrote:

Hi!

[Insane]

  1. 00:18:745 (4) - You need to move this 1 grid to the right, it's hard to see slider path with current position. Fixed
  2. 00:26:385 (5) - New combo? there a change in music, instruments suddenly stop. Fixed
  3. 00:29:925 (6) - I'm really dubious about this stacking, perhaps you can put it like this : http://puu.sh/hdkal.jpg to relieve my worries? the repeat is hard to see here. Fixed
  4. 01:05:143 (1) - You forgot a finish here. Fixed
  5. 01:03:279 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also consider reducing spacing of this stream, its HUGE I think it is okay so nope
  6. 01:24:149 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ I think it is okay so nope
[Hard]

OD +1 Fixed


[Normal]

  1. 00:39:242 (1,2,3,4) - Center them? I think nope
Good job for a first map. Thank you very much
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
Qualified!

Edit :
lol already today is full. please wait till tomorrow!

Edit2 :
Qualified :3
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
4th ranked COLORFUL BOX. GJ~
[ A v a l o n ]
2,000 posts
Joined July 2014
[ A v a l o n ]
gratz, akhirnya . . . .
berhasil jg perjuangan lu xD . . .

=w=)b
Nuolong
1,032 posts
Joined August 2014
Nuolong
Congrats for your first ranked :D
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05

Guy wrote:

Edit2 :
Qualified :3
Thank you very much

Adol Christin wrote:

4th ranked COLORFUL BOX. GJ~
lol 4th ranked, Thank you very muc

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

gratz, akhirnya . . . .
berhasil jg perjuangan lu xD . . .

=w=)b
Makasih gan. Nanti yang yume no tobira bakal ane ranked juga kok. Semangat juga gan buat ranked mapnya

NolanM wrote:

Congrats for your first ranked :D
Thank you very much

I can't ranked this map without any mod and suggestion from other. So, thank you very much to all modders and to test player :lol: :)
Tenseki
803 posts
Joined November 2013
Tenseki
congratz for your first ranked map :)
[ A v a l o n ]
2,000 posts
Joined July 2014
[ A v a l o n ]
okay gan . . yume no tobira bakalan ak remap . . . :D
biar berkembang mapnya . . .

hubungin aja ak klo mau mulai proses moddingnya =w=)b
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05

Tenseki wrote:

congratz for your first ranked map :)
Thank you very much

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

okay gan . . yume no tobira bakalan ak remap . . . :D
biar berkembang mapnya . . .

hubungin aja ak klo mau mulai proses moddingnya =w=)b
Ok gan nanti saya hubungi lagi. Tapi mungkin masih lama soalnya ane mau rank 1 map lagi baru kerja yume no tobira
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
zj0924
wow,4th ranked colorful box and you only spend a month to get it ranked,very efficient~
I'm the 3rd XD
anyway,gratz for your first ranked map :)
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05

zj0924 wrote:

wow,4th ranked colorful box and you only spend a month to get it ranked,very efficient~
I'm the 3rd XD
anyway,gratz for your first ranked map :)
Ha....ha...ha.. :lol: i'm the 4th
Thank you very much.
kunka
1,570 posts
Joined July 2012
kunka
Del05-san Gratz!! :)
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

Del05-san Gratz!! :)
Thank you very much :) :D
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
After internal discussion, we decided to disqualify this map for the following reasons:

[Easy]

00:16:882 (2) - The short repeat slider is hard to read for newbies here. Due to the low SV, the repeat arrow is not easy to see when using the Original Skin, and since there are only two repeaters in this map they can throw newbies off easily. It's also difficult because an object follows directly afterwards, as it is hard for newbies to tell when a repeat slider will end.
00:32:534 (2) - ^

[Normal]

The Distance Spacing in this difficulty feels too low, combined with the low SV, so the placement feels very cramped and too touchy. Simply increasing the snapping from 0,9x to 1,2x would fix the entire issue.

[Insane]

01:24:149 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - shouldnt be spaced THAT much. The stream itself is fine, but we would highly recommend to decrease the spacing here, as it is quite a surprise when playing and the music doesn't call for such a difficulty spike here.

Solid mapset, good luck!
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05
Hi

Desperate-kun wrote:

After internal discussion, we decided to disqualify this map for the following reasons:

[Easy]

00:16:882 (2) - The short repeat slider is hard to read for newbies here. Due to the low SV, the repeat arrow is not easy to see when using the Original Skin, and since there are only two repeaters in this map they can throw newbies off easily. It's also difficult because an object follows directly afterwards, as it is hard for newbies to tell when a repeat slider will end. Fixed
00:32:534 (2) - ^ Fixed

[Normal]

The Distance Spacing in this difficulty feels too low, combined with the low SV, so the placement feels very cramped and too touchy. Simply increasing the snapping from 0,9x to 1,2x would fix the entire issue. Keep DS 0,9x but change normal CS to 3.5 and CS hard to 4 (like we discussed in IRC

[Insane]

01:24:149 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - shouldnt be spaced THAT much. The stream itself is fine, but we would highly recommend to decrease the spacing here, as it is quite a surprise when playing and the music doesn't call for such a difficulty spike here. Fixed

Solid mapset, good luck!
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
The dequalification reason really has an incomprehensible diversity...

Anyway, checked as all right. Rebubbled
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
~
DreaM117er
1,596 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
Gratz~ :) :)

Your first map :)
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Del05

Flower wrote:

The dequalification reason really has an incomprehensible diversity...

Anyway, checked as all right. Rebubbled
Thank you very much for re-bubble it

Guy wrote:

~
Thank you very much for re-qualified it

m1223961117 wrote:

Gratz~ :) :)

Your first map :)
Thanks
xxxafiqxxx
xxxafiqxxx
love the song
rhalp10
579 posts
Joined September 2013
rhalp10
Congrats Your Map Has Been Ranked !! :D
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