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senya - Kimi o Nosete

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-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
953 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
-Mo-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 October 2015 at 18:32:22

Artist: senya
Title: Kimi o Nosete
Source: 艦隊これくしょん～艦これ～
Tags: smsh150 Yuuhei Catharsis 幽閉カタルシス Kantai Collection~KanColle~ Collection KanColle 艦隊これくしょん 艦これ Kamase-tora かませ虎 Deitarabotchi でいたらぼっち 深海より愛を込めて 冬の抜錨！ 森永真由美 Mayumi Morinaga Korekushon Combined Fleet C86
BPM: 160
Filesize: 11079kb
Play Time: 02:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.37 stars, 300 notes)
  2. Catharsis (4.29 stars, 578 notes)
  3. Normal (1.96 stars, 187 notes)
  4. smsh150's Hard (3.39 stars, 421 notes)
Download: senya - Kimi o Nosete
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Last edited by -Mo- , edited 107 times in total.
Santtu
539 posts
Joined November 2012
Santtu
Have a star, because awesome music and my guess diff...

✰~
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy

smsh150 wrote:

Have a star, because awesome music and my guess diff...

✰~
your typo xDD

guess (guest?)

anyway, can I have a taiko GD?
-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
953 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
-Mo-

Prophecy wrote:

anyway, can I have a taiko GD?
Sorry, I think I'll stick with one gamemode for now >.<

Maybe another time.
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy

-Mo- wrote:

Prophecy wrote:

anyway, can I have a taiko GD?
Sorry, I think I'll stick with one gamemode for now >.<

Maybe another time.
ok ;)
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
4,225 posts
Joined July 2013
Ascendance
IRC
2015-08-11 20:32 -Mo-: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651596 senya - Kimi o Nosete]
2015-08-11 20:32 -Mo-: Storyboard lyrics could do with a proofread too
2015-08-11 20:32 -Mo-: Since I'm not an expert in Japanese yet
2015-08-11 20:32 Ascendance: :)
2015-08-11 20:32 Ascendance: irc or thread?
2015-08-11 20:33 -Mo-: Whichever you like better
2015-08-11 20:33 Ascendance: fuk i see kancolle and all i see is miiro flashbacks
2015-08-11 20:35 -Mo-: I mapped this before Kancolle anime even came out >.>
2015-08-11 20:35 Ascendance: 00:09:534 (1) - this slidershape seems boring ;;
2015-08-11 20:36 Ascendance: 01:36:534 (1) - dunno about this one either but dont take ym word for it, not a pro mapper
2015-08-11 20:36 -Mo-: Weird slider for a weird note
2015-08-11 20:43 Ascendance: 02:50:596 (4,1) -
2015-08-11 20:43 Ascendance: catharsis diff
2015-08-11 20:43 Ascendance: maybe lead the slider into the stream
2015-08-11 20:43 Ascendance: idk
2015-08-11 20:44 -Mo-: Should be fine, same kind of thing as 02:02:597 (4,1) -
2015-08-11 20:45 Ascendance: ya will probably be ok, just playtested and thats the only thing that stood out to me, but maybe its just me being tired
2015-08-11 20:45 -Mo-: Did you miss?
2015-08-11 20:46 Ascendance: sliderbreak
2015-08-11 20:46 Ascendance: T^T
2015-08-11 20:46 Ascendance: cause i saw the stream and let go too early
2015-08-11 20:47 Ascendance: idk it just feels like it could flow well into it
2015-08-11 20:47 -Mo-: Ah
2015-08-11 20:47 -Mo-: Yeah, I'll look at it
2015-08-11 20:49 Ascendance: advanced
2015-08-11 20:49 Ascendance: 00:39:534 (1) - would say NC here but it seems fine
2015-08-11 20:50 -Mo-: I was thinking the same thing when I made that part
2015-08-11 20:50 -Mo-: But consistency
2015-08-11 20:50 Ascendance: yeah it just feels the next 2 combos there are too long iirc it's like 8/7
2015-08-11 20:51 Ascendance: compared to the 4-5 you had before
2015-08-11 20:52 -Mo-: Well, I just put the new combos every two measures
2015-08-11 20:52 -Mo-: Instead of number of notes
2015-08-11 20:52 Ascendance: ah
2015-08-11 20:52 Ascendance: maybe its slider stuff then
2015-08-11 20:53 Ascendance: map seems good, will proofread your storyboard in a bit
2015-08-11 20:53 Ascendance: from when i skimmed it seemed fine but will thoroughly look
2015-08-11 20:53 -Mo-: Alright
2015-08-11 20:55 Ascendance: idk if this is even worth kds but I'll put it there anyways along with storyboard stuff
2015-08-11 20:55 -Mo-: Alright
2015-08-11 20:55 Ascendance: where does one go to check storyboard =3=
2015-08-11 20:56 -Mo-: Click Design
2015-08-11 20:56 -Mo-: On the top
2015-08-11 20:56 Ascendance: oic
2015-08-11 20:57 Ascendance: did you translate the lyrics yourself or did you get them from somewhere
2015-08-11 20:57 -Mo-: [http://genso.iza-yoi.net/kankore/yuhei/12.html Grabbed them from here]
2015-08-11 20:59 -Mo-: Are they bad? >.<
2015-08-11 20:59 Ascendance: no o:

then we had a small japanese lesson in which it took us 20 minutes to realize the "s" was just silent. from now on I will mod when I am awake.
iYiyo
1,107 posts
Joined January 2014
iYiyo
Hi! M4M we talked in-game.

[General]
Better to use grid lvl 3~2 on normals diff
Maybe change SV of smsh150's Hard to 1,6x since the advanced has already 1,4x
If you do so i would change Catharsis' SV to 1,7x or 1,8x since it feels very slow imo.
Consider adding a new combo colour, maybe this, just a suggestion. :D

[Normal]
00:05:034 (4) - Try to put this a little bit above, maybe near x:128y:156 (u may have to change the shape of the slider)
00:27:534 (3,4,1) - Maybe make a triangle between those 3? just put 00:29:034 (1) - in x:264 y:160
00:44:034 (1,2,3) - I would try something like this
00:57:346 - A note here? just like u did here 01:00:346 (4) -
01:03:534 (3,4,1) - Maybe try something like this
01:09:346 - Note here, same like before
01:23:034 (3,4,1) - Triagle shape
02:10:846 - Note here
02:15:534 (1) - change the shape, maybe something curve?
02:18:159 (4) - This note is almost touching with the default hp bar, idk consider moving this down a little bit
02:22:846 - Maybe u won't add the notes here, but still i'm mentioning them just in case xd
02:39:534 (1) - I don't know about SB but maybe u shouldn't use this "effect" there.
02:42:159 (4) - better blanket with slider 3
02:42:534 (1,2,3) - triangle between those 3
02:46:284 (3) - Try changing the shape of this slider and moving it a little bit down-right
02:46:846 - note
02:50:034 (1,1) - Maybe make the slider more curve so u can make a better blanket with the last note.

[Advanced]
00:11:034 - put a note here and then the spin
00:30:159 (4) - make this a linear slider
00:34:659 (8) - more curved looks better imo
00:38:034 (1) - ^
00:48:534 (1) - you can make this slider to look alot better. Also I would do this "curve" thing at the end of the slider tho.
00:58:471 - I would choose something like this.
01:07:284 (3) - Maybe this shape
01:16:096 (2) - delete middle grey node
01:22:096 (2) - ^
01:23:596 (6) - ^
01:35:596 (2) - ^
01:30:534 (1,2) - Maybe do a large slider just like in 01:18:534 (1) -
01:58:846 (4,6) - stack these 2
02:07:096 (2,1) - stack
02:18:534 (1) - Maybe a curved slider
02:41:784 (4) - same like 01:07:284 (3) -
02:49:096 (3,1) - stack

[smsh150's Hard]
00:06:534 (1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe do a shape like half hexagon or heptagon.
00:09:534 (1,2) - DS
00:11:784 (3,4) - maybe do these slider last longer so it feels like a stream.
00:31:284 (4,5,6) - do a tringle shape maybe, like this
00:35:596 - It just feels like here goes a note
00:35:784 (3,4) - DS
00:36:065 (3) - You can make this slider 1/4 shorter and place a note 00:36:346 - here
00:44:971 - place a note here.
00:57:159 (5) - I would delete de reverse and place a note 00:57:534 - here.
00:58:659 (4) - ^
00:59:409 - put note here.
01:01:846 (6,1) - ctrl+g
01:04:659 (5) - make it shorter
01:05:221 (1) - delete these and add a 1/2 slider 01:05:034 - here
01:05:784 (5,1) - better blanket
01:08:034 (1) - maybe divide this in 2 reverse sliders and then a single note.
01:11:409 - note here.
01:30:909 (2,4) - better with no reserve.
01:34:659 (6) - make it a 1/2 slider and
01:35:221 (1) - delete this and add a 1/2 slider 01:35:034 - here. sounds better imo.
01:53:971 (3,4) - better blanket
01:55:284 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try making a star/pentagon here, but keep the ds u were having before, cause I don't see a reason to do these "mini jumps"
02:00:534 (1,2,3,4) - unstack, it doesn't look good stacked.
02:11:784 (3,3) - maybe stack them
02:14:409 (2,3,4,5,1) - a pentagon shape would look better.
02:20:784 (4,5,6) - triangle here.
02:26:221 (2,3) - ds
02:48:721 (2,3) - maybe unstack them.

[Catharsis]
00:08:034 (3) - NC
00:41:784 (3,4) - I think these sliders are out of place, maybe try something like this movement, I did it fast, u can do it alot better lol.
00:43:659 (4) - ctrl + g and move the second grey dot a little bit down.
00:45:534 (4) - NC
00:48:534 (1,2,3,4) - nice here, but it would look better if you do kind of a "diamond" imo
00:53:784 (5,1) - DS
00:57:909 (2) - ctrl + g
00:58:284 (3) - ^
01:08:784 (2) - Maybe NC because of sliders.
01:18:159 (4,5,1) - I would reduce the distance here since after that u use slow sliders.
01:21:534 (1) - Mayve change into a curved slider?
01:23:034 (1) - ^
01:47:034 (1) - NC
01:50:034 (6) - ^
01:58:284 (2) - NC cause sliders
01:59:034 (3) - ^
01:59:034 (3,4,5,6) - DS
02:20:596 (5,6,7,8,9) - I would choose this pattern for the jumps.
02:22:284 (2) - NC
02:29:221 (2,3) - DS
02:33:909 (2,3) - ^
02:34:284 (3,4,5,6,1) - I would change this pattern into something better. just my opinion
02:43:659 (5,6,1) - DS between them, make a triangle.
02:46:284 (2) - NC

Nice song btw and good luck ranking it! :)
-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
953 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
-Mo-

iYiyo wrote:

Hi! M4M we talked in-game.

[General]
Better to use grid lvl 3~2 on normals diff I beg to differ, however, I don't use grid snapping anyway so it doesn't matter.
Maybe change SV of smsh150's Hard to 1,6x since the advanced has already 1,4x It's not my call to make, but I think it should be fine.
If you do so i would change Catharsis' SV to 1,7x or 1,8x since it feels very slow imo. Should be fine for now.
Consider adding a new combo colour, maybe this, just a suggestion. :D Sure, I like this colour. I'm keeping only 4 colours though.

[Normal]
00:05:034 (4) - Try to put this a little bit above, maybe near x:128y:156 (u may have to change the shape of the slider) Alright
00:27:534 (3,4,1) - Maybe make a triangle between those 3? just put 00:29:034 (1) - in x:264 y:160 Alright. I moved it to where I feel is better though.
00:44:034 (1,2,3) - I would try something like this Only changed 3 for flow reasons.
00:57:346 - A note here? just like u did here 01:00:346 (4) - I personally think chaining two red ticks so suddenly is asking for a bit much, I only added one here to ease into the two reds coming up in the next combo better.
01:03:534 (3,4,1) - Maybe try something like this I think I like it better how it is currently.
01:09:346 - Note here, same like before As before.
01:23:034 (3,4,1) - Triagle shape I think this is fine.
02:10:846 - Note here As before.
02:15:534 (1) - change the shape, maybe something curve? I don't see anything wrong with how it is currently.
02:18:159 (4) - This note is almost touching with the default hp bar, idk consider moving this down a little bit Almost, but it isn't ;)
02:22:846 - Maybe u won't add the notes here, but still i'm mentioning them just in case xd No problem, but nah :P
02:39:534 (1) - I don't know about SB but maybe u shouldn't use this "effect" there. Maybe. I'll get more feedback on this.
02:42:159 (4) - better blanket with slider 3 Fixed.
02:42:534 (1,2,3) - triangle between those 3 Alright.
02:46:284 (3) - Try changing the shape of this slider and moving it a little bit down-right I think this is fine.
02:46:846 - note As before.
02:50:034 (1,1) - Maybe make the slider more curve so u can make a better blanket with the last note. Fixed.

[Advanced]
00:11:034 - put a note here and then the spin I think it's fine how it is for now.
00:30:159 (4) - make this a linear slider I prefer a curve.
00:34:659 (8) - more curved looks better imo I did what I can.
00:38:034 (1) - ^ This seems fine for now.
00:48:534 (1) - you can make this slider to look alot better. Also I would do this "curve" thing at the end of the slider tho. Suggestions would be nice. I don't have anything to go off from this. For now though, it seems fine to me.
00:58:471 - I would choose something like this. I think I prefer the current rhythm.
01:07:284 (3) - Maybe this shape I don't like how this flows personally.
01:16:096 (2) - delete middle grey node
01:22:096 (2) - ^
01:23:596 (6) - ^
01:35:596 (2) - ^ I like these >.<
01:30:534 (1,2) - Maybe do a large slider just like in 01:18:534 (1) What it currently is now matches the vocals better.
01:58:846 (4,6) - stack these 2 Alright.
02:07:096 (2,1) - stack Maybe. I think what it is currently has a better flow, and I think the notes are far apart enough so that this doesn't matter.
02:18:534 (1) - Maybe a curved slider I think it's fine how it is for now.
02:41:784 (4) - same like 01:07:284 (3) Changed in my own way.
02:49:096 (3,1) - stack Alright.

[Catharsis]
00:08:034 (3) - NC Done.
00:41:784 (3,4) - I think these sliders are out of place, maybe try something like this movement, I did it fast, u can do it alot better lol. Rotated slightly.
00:43:659 (4) - ctrl + g and move the second grey dot a little bit down. I think it's fine for now.
00:45:534 (4) - NC Done.
00:48:534 (1,2,3,4) - nice here, but it would look better if you do kind of a "diamond" imo Seems fine for now. I'd rather not fix what isn't broken :P
00:53:784 (5,1) - DS Increased spacing slightly.
00:57:909 (2) - ctrl + g
00:58:284 (3) - ^ I prefer it how it is for now.
01:08:784 (2) - Maybe NC because of sliders. I'll leave it for now, but maybe.
01:18:159 (4,5,1) - I would reduce the distance here since after that u use slow sliders. Alright.
01:21:534 (1) - Mayve change into a curved slider?
01:23:034 (1) - ^ You don't like these sliders huh.
01:47:034 (1) - NC
01:50:034 (6) - ^ I'd rather keep 2/1 for NCs here for the softer part.
01:58:284 (2) - NC cause sliders For consistent NCs, I'll leave this.
01:59:034 (3) - ^ This is reasonable though.
01:59:034 (3,4,5,6) - DS Increasing spacing for increasing emphasis on these notes.
02:20:596 (5,6,7,8,9) - I would choose this pattern for the jumps. Maybe. I like it how it is, but I may change it later depending on feedback.
02:22:284 (2) - NC I'll leave it for consistency.
02:29:221 (2,3) - DS Fixed.
02:33:909 (2,3) - ^ Changed as per below.
02:34:284 (3,4,5,6,1) - I would change this pattern into something better. just my opinion Yeah, I agree, changed.
02:43:659 (5,6,1) - DS between them, make a triangle. Alright.
02:46:284 (2) - NC As before.

Nice song btw and good luck ranking it! :)
Thanks for modding :)
Santtu
539 posts
Joined November 2012
Santtu

iYiyo wrote:

Hi! M4M we talked in-game.

[General]
Better to use grid lvl 3~2 on normals diff
Maybe change SV of smsh150's Hard to 1,6x since the advanced has already 1,4x
If you do so i would change Catharsis' SV to 1,7x or 1,8x since it feels very slow imo.
Consider adding a new combo colour, maybe this, just a suggestion. :D

[smsh150's Hard]
00:06:534 (1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe do a shape like half hexagon or heptagon. yea something like that... changed
00:09:534 (1,2) - DS fixed
00:11:784 (3,4) - maybe do these slider last longer so it feels like a stream. for now on I'll keep those as they are, will consider later
00:31:284 (4,5,6) - do a tringle shape maybe, like this works, changed
00:35:596 - It just feels like here goes a note Will remember you opinion
00:35:784 (3,4) - DS fixed
00:36:065 (3) - You can make this slider 1/4 shorter and place a note 00:36:346 - here I prefer mine
00:44:971 - place a note here. alright
00:57:159 (5) - I would delete de reverse and place a note 00:57:534 - here. yes
00:58:659 (4) - ^ I'll keep that because I like that rhythm.
00:59:409 - put note here. Sorry, maybe not
01:01:846 (6,1) - ctrl+g changed otherway
01:04:659 (5) - make it shorter sorry but I don't see reason why...
01:05:221 (1) - delete these and add a 1/2 slider 01:05:034 - here ^
01:05:784 (5,1) - better blanket fixed
01:08:034 (1) - maybe divide this in 2 reverse sliders and then a single note. OH i see, that works! changed
01:11:409 - note here. ^ I don't feel like adding here note.
01:30:909 (2,4) - better with no reserve. I like it more with reverse, but I'll remember your opinion
01:34:659 (6) - make it a 1/2 slider and ▼
01:35:221 (1) - delete this and add a 1/2 slider 01:35:034 - here. sounds better imo. sorry maybe not
01:53:971 (3,4) - better blanket fixed
01:55:284 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try making a star/pentagon here, but keep the ds u were having before, cause I don't see a reason to do these "mini jumps" changed to something else
02:00:534 (1,2,3,4) - unstack, it doesn't look good stacked. fixed
02:11:784 (3,3) - maybe stack them well it doesn't make it any different if I stacked them... so no change
02:14:409 (2,3,4,5,1) - a pentagon shape would look better. will consider
02:20:784 (4,5,6) - triangle here. I'll keep them
02:26:221 (2,3) - ds fixed
02:48:721 (2,3) - maybe unstack them. okay

Nice song btw and good luck ranking it! :)
Thank you for modding!

Note -Mo-: I have changed 02:27:534 (1) - note's place so the SB effect should be changed also, someday, before ranking.

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Kimi o Nosete.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49944
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 99538,111538,171538,180538
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi o Nosete
TitleUnicode:キミを乗せて
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:-Mo-
Version:smsh150's Hard
Source:艦隊これくしょん～艦これ～
Tags:Yuuhei Catharsis 幽閉カタルシス smsh150 Kantai  Collection~KanColle~ Collection KanColle 艦隊これくしょん 艦これ Kamase-tora かませ虎 Deitarabotchi でいたらぼっち 深海より愛を込めて 冬の抜錨！ 森永真由美 Korekushon Combined Fleet C86
BeatmapID:672327
BeatmapSetID:288997

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
i will not metion other same problems in one diff.
neither will i suggest NC,because i don't care it.

[Normal]
00:29:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - these are all the same,too boring.

[Advanced]
02:51:909 - add a spinner?

[smsh150's Hard]
00:26:409 (3,4,5) - i think it's too hard in a hard diff.
01:09:534 (1,2,3) - not good.place like this or make them closer.(i suggest closer)
img

[Catharsis]
Overall this diff is pretty good.i like it.
img

00:08:034 (1) - make it closer to - 00:07:284 (2) - i means under it like this.


that's all.
-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
953 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
-Mo-

Lily Bread wrote:

[Normal]
00:29:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - these are all the same,too boring. Changed one slider. The other notes are on vocal notes which ar repetitive themselves, so they are reflected with a repeated rhythm in the map itself.

[Advanced]
02:51:909 - add a spinner? I'd rather keep the ending blank like this.

[Catharsis]
Overall this diff is pretty good.i like it.

00:08:034 (1) - make it closer to - 00:07:284 (2) - i means under it like this.I'd rather keep it as it is for now. I don't believe there is a major issue here.

that's all.
Thanks for the star :)
Santtu
539 posts
Joined November 2012
Santtu

Lily Bread wrote:

i will not metion other same problems in one diff.
neither will i suggest NC,because i don't care it.

[smsh150's Hard]
00:26:409 (3,4,5) - i think it's too hard in a hard diff. I will see what other mod will say about this thing.
01:09:534 (1,2,3) - not good.place like this or make them closer.(i suggest closer) ^
img

that's all.
Thank you for modding!

*note -mo-* Changed what you requested and changed also 02:15:534 (1) - 's place.
Update code <3
osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Kimi o Nosete.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49944
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 99538,111538,171538,180538
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Kimi o Nosete
TitleUnicode:キミを乗せて
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:-Mo-
Version:smsh150's Hard
Source:艦隊これくしょん～艦これ～
Tags:smsh150 Yuuhei Catharsis 幽閉カタルシス Kantai  Collection~KanColle~ Collection KanColle 艦隊これくしょん 艦これ Kamase-tora かませ虎 Deitarabotchi でいたらぼっち 深海より愛を込めて 冬の抜錨！ 森永真由美 Mayumi Morinaga Korekushon Combined Fleet C86
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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ItsLucas
14 posts
Joined March 2015
ItsLucas
Global:
Maybe you wanna add the 'rapid flashing color' warning.
The mapset is all pretty good. I can barely find issues.

Normal
Just a word: These sliders that twists a lot might let starters 'feel' it's tough (Mental pressure)
But since it's not fast, it's still ok. Just a hint :D
Advanced, Hard
Pretty good. No issues found. :D
Catharsis
01:50:409 (7) - Maybe a new combo?
Maybe you can add some jumps to make this diff more challenging. Just a piece of advice.
-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
953 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
-Mo-

ItsLucas wrote:

Global:
Maybe you wanna add the 'rapid flashing color' warning. It should already be on ;)
The mapset is all pretty good. I can barely find issues.

Normal
Just a word: These sliders that twists a lot might let starters 'feel' it's tough (Mental pressure)
But since it's not fast, it's still ok. Just a hint :D Kinda the theme of the map :P
Advanced, Hard
Pretty good. No issues found. :D
Catharsis
01:50:409 (7) - Maybe a new combo? This shouldn't be necessary; this isn't on a downbeat nor is it really a significant beat.
Maybe you can add some jumps to make this diff more challenging. Just a piece of advice. I don't see myself needing to change the difficulty right now.
No changes. Thanks for the feedback however. :)
-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
953 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
-Mo-
Just for reference's sake.

Internet Relay Chat
2015-08-27 14:36 -Mo-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672327 senya - Kimi o Nosete [smsh150's Hard]]
2015-08-27 14:36 -Mo-: Is it alright if I go through a couple of stuff in this with you?
2015-08-27 14:37 smsh150: yea wait a bit
2015-08-27 14:39 smsh150: Now I'm ready
2015-08-27 14:39 -Mo-: Alright
2015-08-27 14:39 -Mo-: Hope you don't mind me being a bit more nazi since this is for my mapset :P
2015-08-27 14:40 smsh150: not at all
2015-08-27 14:40 smsh150: tell me, what's wrong
2015-08-27 14:40 -Mo-: 00:29:034 (1) - Maybe turn this around slightly so it flows into the triple a little better
2015-08-27 14:41 -Mo-: [http://i.imgur.com/VVoUJED.png LIke that] only minor thing
2015-08-27 14:42 smsh150: Okay, fixed
2015-08-27 14:42 -Mo-: 00:32:034 (1,2) - Not sure about this flow, could be better but it works if you want to keep it
2015-08-27 14:42 -Mo-: 00:35:784 (2,3) - Poor polarity
2015-08-27 14:43 -Mo-: i.e. it's hard to see it's on the blue tick
2015-08-27 14:43 -Mo-: 00:39:159 (6) - Happens a couple of times so I'm not sure if you intended it, but
2015-08-27 14:43 -Mo-: You have slider ends mapped to the downbeats of the song
2015-08-27 14:44 -Mo-: 00:41:034 - It would be better if they were hard notes to hit since they are more significant beats in the song
2015-08-27 14:45 smsh150: some places I like that there is slider's end at downbeat
2015-08-27 14:45 -Mo-: Very well, I won't force you
2015-08-27 14:48 -Mo-: 01:25:284 (3) - Maybe improve this slider, since in my opinion doesn't look too good
2015-08-27 14:48 -Mo-: Just move the slider tail and it should be fine
2015-08-27 14:48 -Mo-: http://i.imgur.com/m5XIYso.png
2015-08-27 14:49 smsh150: I see, fixed
2015-08-27 14:49 -Mo-: 01:26:034 (4) - And then maybe improve the flow into this
2015-08-27 14:49 -Mo-: Just rotate it a bit
2015-08-27 14:49 -Mo-: I think this should be a NC too
2015-08-27 14:50 -Mo-: 01:37:284 - It's your choice, but in all of my other difficulties, I mapped this bit with a spinner
2015-08-27 14:51 smsh150: hmmm
2015-08-27 14:51 smsh150: I wouldn't but there spinner
2015-08-27 14:51 smsh150: since I follow rhythms more than voice
2015-08-27 14:51 -Mo-: That's fine, just pointing it out just in case
2015-08-27 14:52 smsh150: also I love 01:38:784 (3,4) - part
2015-08-27 14:52 smsh150: It's so nice :3
2015-08-27 14:52 -Mo-: 01:57:534 (1,1) - Split these for a better rhythm to play and for consistency
2015-08-27 14:52 -Mo-: Like you did with 01:08:034 (1,2,1,2) -
2015-08-27 14:53 -Mo-: 02:15:159 (5,1) - Flow could be improved
2015-08-27 14:54 -Mo-: I think that's most of the major points for now
2015-08-27 14:54 -Mo-: I can go through it again after you've had another look at it
2015-08-27 14:56 smsh150: I'll see what places I can change to better
2015-08-27 14:56 -Mo-: Alright :P
2015-08-27 14:59 smsh150: I changed few other places that you didn't meantion, I'll send you update file
2015-08-27 14:59 -Mo-: Alright
2015-08-27 15:00 smsh150: http://puu.sh/jQpSa/1c6fc329d5.osu
2015-08-27 15:00 smsh150: here
2015-08-27 15:03 -Mo-: 02:13:284 (5) - Blanket thing
2015-08-27 15:04 smsh150: you can fix it
2015-08-27 15:04 smsh150: D:
2015-08-27 15:04 smsh150: If it's only so small thing like blanket
2015-08-27 15:04 -Mo-: Fair enough :P
2015-08-27 15:06 -Mo-: Oh yeah, I did some stuff with drum hitsounds on 00:48:534 (1) - in my maps
2015-08-27 15:06 -Mo-: Not sure if you want to do the same in yours
2015-08-27 15:07 smsh150: Oh let me check it out
2015-08-27 15:09 smsh150: did you put additions or sampleset?
2015-08-27 15:10 -Mo-: On [Catharsis] I did sampleset
2015-08-27 15:10 -Mo-: On the other diffs I did Additions
2015-08-27 15:11 smsh150: I have almost never used those, so I can't say it's bad or anything
2015-08-27 15:11 smsh150: I'm fine with those :)
2015-08-27 15:11 -Mo-: I can add them in for you if you want
2015-08-27 15:11 smsh150: yea, you can do that
2015-08-27 15:11 smsh150: sorry for make you edit my map D:
2015-08-27 15:12 -Mo-: That's fine :P
2015-08-27 15:12 smsh150: sorry for making*
2015-08-27 15:12 smsh150: It would have been my job but...
2015-08-27 15:19 -Mo-: 02:50:784 (4) - Hm, this slider ruins what I was doing with the drums
2015-08-27 15:20 smsh150: eeh
2015-08-27 15:20 -Mo-: I can try to work around it but it's your call
2015-08-27 15:20 smsh150: hmm
2015-08-27 15:21 -Mo-: For consistency it would be nice to have it like you have before
2015-08-27 15:21 smsh150: so you can't put there drums? :o
2015-08-27 15:21 -Mo-: Drums in the way I want them to be
2015-08-27 15:22 smsh150: hmm
2015-08-27 15:23 smsh150: you can replace it with 2 1/2 sliders
2015-08-27 15:23 smsh150: or 1 reverse and 1 circle
2015-08-27 15:23 smsh150: maybe reverse and circle is better, imo
2015-08-27 15:23 -Mo-: Alright

kd pls
Graf
25 posts
Joined May 2014
Graf
Sup Mo.

Normal
01:36:534 (1) - Never seen a jutty slider on a Normal diff, could be deceiving to new players however I doubt this is a map-breaking issue as you can trace the slider normally and still combo through it without a problem.

Advanced
00:29:596 (2) - Centre of the slider (blue tick) has no sound to it that I can hear (the syllables of the vocals are on the red and white) therefore I don't see how it should be a reverse slider, I'd consider making it one slider from the red to the white tick without a reverse arrow. You likely have your reasons for it though.

smsh150's Hard
00:11:784 (3,4) - I found this awkward to read and play, though knowing life it's probably just me. I'd personally give one more reverse to the first slider and make it point into the second, but then again this doesn't fit the music. Perhaps rotate one of the sliders so they are still parallel but both have start circles on the same side and tuck them in closer to each other?
00:39:159 (6) - I felt this slider was a tick too long but that is likely me mishearing the song. I think it still could work if you shortened it to the blue tick and then had a reversing slider on the white tick and reverse in the timeframe where the current 00:39:721 (1) is as there is a both a vocal syllable and a note of the bass (strong beat) at 00:39:534 and for me it doesn't feel right to end a slider there, so hence I'd start one there instead.
00:57:159 (5) - Not parallel with 00:57:909 (3) - which I personally found a little annoying when playing the map with EZ. Rotating the former slider slightly wouldn't break the flow and would only be a few degrees difference so it wouldn't affect the jump onto (1).
01:08:034 (1,2),
01:09:534 (1,2),
01:57:534 (1,2),
01:59:034 (1,2) - Same as 00:11:784 it's likely just a personal preference of mine I'd put them closer to each other especially on a [Hard] diff.
02:41:596 (4,5),
02:42:534 (1,2,3) - I feel that a slider like 02:40:284 (4) is a better way to map this as it's the exact same sound and the current mapping doesn't really emphasise it.

Catharsis
00:40:096 (3,4) - There are two notes sung in the melody which are quite distinct, perhaps you could map a short slider for those instead of the quite bland 1/2 notes you have at the moment?
00:48:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Noticed this has become a signature thing of yours, I think it fits great!
00:57:534 (1,2,3,4) - Any reason why these aren't symmetrical around the centre of the map? Not something that I don't like, I didn't really notice it until the edit stage however just curious if maybe you overlooked it.
01:33:346 (6) - I don't think there is really a distinct sound to map this too and I can probably guess it's just a filler note, however you could probably remove it to give even the shortest of breaks? Down to personal preferrence really.
02:20:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Very clever, very fitting. Love it!
02:34:284 (3,4,5,6) - (5) and (6) aren't equidistant from (3). One is 1.02x while the other is 1.0x. (4) may need to be adjusted slightly to accomodate this fix if you choose to go ahead with it.

General Things
Love the song, love the storyboarding, love the mapping styles!
Looking forward to seeing this get rankerino'd hopefully.
More senya maps please -Mo-!

SPOILER
Shot you some kudosu <3
Santtu
539 posts
Joined November 2012
Santtu

Graf wrote:

smsh150's Hard
00:11:784 (3,4) - I found this awkward to read and play, though knowing life it's probably just me. I'd personally give one more reverse to the first slider and make it point into the second, but then again this doesn't fit the music. Perhaps rotate one of the sliders so they are still parallel but both have start circles on the same side and tuck them in closer to each other? yea fixed this
00:39:159 (6) - I felt this slider was a tick too long but that is likely me mishearing the song. I think it still could work if you shortened it to the blue tick and then had a reversing slider on the white tick and reverse in the timeframe where the current 00:39:721 (1) is as there is a both a vocal syllable and a note of the bass (strong beat) at 00:39:534 and for me it doesn't feel right to end a slider there, so hence I'd start one there instead. hmm... I'll just move notes' places to make it more clear to read. I won't change rhythm since I like as it is.
00:57:159 (5) - Not parallel with 00:57:909 (3) - which I personally found a little annoying when playing the map with EZ. Rotating the former slider slightly wouldn't break the flow and would only be a few degrees difference so it wouldn't affect the jump onto (1). fixed
01:08:034 (1,2),
01:09:534 (1,2),
01:57:534 (1,2),
01:59:034 (1,2) - Same as 00:11:784 it's likely just a personal preference of mine I'd put them closer to each other especially on a [Hard] diff. fixed all pointed out places
02:41:596 (4,5),
02:42:534 (1,2,3) - I feel that a slider like 02:40:284 (4) is a better way to map this as it's the exact same sound and the current mapping doesn't really emphasise it. I see, so nothing to change? :o
Thank you for modding! ^^

Update codeeee :sdadadwdwe:
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[Metadata]
Title:Kimi o Nosete
TitleUnicode:キミを乗せて
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:-Mo-
Version:smsh150's Hard
Source:艦隊これくしょん～艦これ～
Tags:smsh150 Yuuhei Catharsis 幽閉カタルシス Kantai  Collection~KanColle~ Collection KanColle 艦隊これくしょん 艦これ Kamase-tora かませ虎 Deitarabotchi でいたらぼっち 深海より愛を込めて 冬の抜錨！ 森永真由美 Mayumi Morinaga Korekushon Combined Fleet C86
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-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
953 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
-Mo-

Graf wrote:

Sup Mo.

Normal
01:36:534 (1) - Never seen a jutty slider on a Normal diff, could be deceiving to new players however I doubt this is a map-breaking issue as you can trace the slider normally and still combo through it without a problem. Weird slider for a weird note :P

Advanced
00:29:596 (2) - Centre of the slider (blue tick) has no sound to it that I can hear (the syllables of the vocals are on the red and white) therefore I don't see how it should be a reverse slider, I'd consider making it one slider from the red to the white tick without a reverse arrow. You likely have your reasons for it though. Personally I can hear a note on this tick, if not vocals. This slider is nice for consistency either way.

Catharsis
00:40:096 (3,4) - There are two notes sung in the melody which are quite distinct, perhaps you could map a short slider for those instead of the quite bland 1/2 notes you have at the moment? Yeah, I agree. Changed it in my own way however.
00:48:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Noticed this has become a signature thing of yours, I think it fits great!
00:57:534 (1,2,3,4) - Any reason why these aren't symmetrical around the centre of the map? Not something that I don't like, I didn't really notice it until the edit stage however just curious if maybe you overlooked it. Fixed.
01:33:346 (6) - I don't think there is really a distinct sound to map this too and I can probably guess it's just a filler note, however you could probably remove it to give even the shortest of breaks? Down to personal preferrence really. Fair enough.
02:20:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Very clever, very fitting. Love it!
02:34:284 (3,4,5,6) - (5) and (6) aren't equidistant from (3). One is 1.02x while the other is 1.0x. (4) may need to be adjusted slightly to accomodate this fix if you choose to go ahead with it. Changed the overall combo slightly.

General Things
Love the song, love the storyboarding, love the mapping styles!
Looking forward to seeing this get rankerino'd hopefully.
More senya maps please -Mo-! - https://osu.ppy.sh/s/347460

Shot you some kudosu <3
Thanks for modding and for the stars :)
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y
M4M request in your modding queue
total drain time for my map: 435 sec.
diff I need to mod: 2.54 -> 3
[Insane]
00:01:659 (5,1) - 00:02:596 (2,3) - I somehow hate this kind of pattern. just ignore it then
00:06:534 (1,2,1) - seperate more, too close for me
00:27:534 (1,2,3) - better not to skip red tick sound, use 1/2 beat instead
00:48:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - it is better to use stream first, then use 1/4 jump. it is easier to follow and you can use a jump for 00:49:940 (4,1) - to emphasis 00:50:034 -
00:56:034 (1) - jump here, increase ds
01:05:034 (1) - suggest use curve for flowing
01:08:034 (1,2,1) - increase ds for same reason
01:17:034 (1,2,3) - same, not suggest skipping 1/2 beat sound
01:18:534 (1,4) - Insane seldom use long slider. change or not change depend on your mood and time.
01:37:284 (1) - weird spinner for me
01:41:034 (6) - nc
01:44:034 (5) - again, long slider is not common in Insane diff
01:44:034 (5) - nc
01:47:034 (7) - ^
01:50:034 (6) - ^
01:52:284 (4,6) - weird overlapping
02:03:440 (4,1) - same? in fact you can use 4 circle - two 1/4 slider jump alternatively
becasue you ues same rhythm and similar pattern, it is okay for me.
[Hard]
00:00:534 (1) - curve more, looks weird
00:06:534 - Try this?

00:12:534 (5) - nc
00:26:034 (1,2) - I think slider is better
00:36:534 (1) - I don't know if you care blanketing or not
01:54:909 (2,3) - better seperate
01:58:284 (3,4) - better slider after 1/4 reverse slider
02:24:159 (3) - ctrl+g for flowing, seldom use same direction slider

[Normal]
As it is the easiest diff in the mapset, I think CS set to 2.5~3 is better. SV still think it is too high, 1.0~1.1 is better for me.
00:36:534 (3) - curving another side for 3 rd part?
SPOILER
00:57:534 (4) - becasue you are vocal mapping, skipped 00:57:909 - ?
01:09:534 (4) - ^ (01:09:909 - )
01:14:034 - adding a circle here?

This song repeat rhythm a lot, but mapper can still finish mapping, genius.
Becasue of this, then mapping and modding is quite simple.
If you use same rhythm, basically no problem then.
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Kyle Y wrote:

M4M request in your modding queue
[Insane]
00:01:659 (5,1) - 00:02:596 (2,3) - I somehow hate this kind of pattern. just ignore it then Nothing wrong with this.
00:06:534 (1,2,1) - seperate more, too close for me If anything they may be too far apart. The slider ends on the tail (as opposed to the head) and there is a 1/4 timing between each note, so this is fine.
00:27:534 (1,2,3) - better not to skip red tick sound, use 1/2 beat instead This follows the vocals better. I don't believe there is anything significant on the red ticks anyway.
00:48:534 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - it is better to use stream first, then use 1/4 jump. it is easier to follow and you can use a jump for 00:49:940 (4,1) - to emphasis 00:50:034 - I prefer it how it is now. Streams are more intense than kick sliders, and this section of the music starts of with a 'splashing' sound before more intense drums. I also think this build up is also a lot better at emphasizing the Kiai time.
00:56:034 (1) - jump here, increase ds I like this.
01:05:034 (1) - suggest use curve for flowing Alright.
01:08:034 (1,2,1) - increase ds for same reason As before.
01:17:034 (1,2,3) - same, not suggest skipping 1/2 beat sound As before.
01:18:534 (1,4) - Insane seldom use long slider. change or not change depend on your mood and time. This follows the vocals perfectly fine. This section of the music is also significantly calmer compared to the rest of this verse, so a long slider fits this well. I would not say that long sliders do not belong in Insane difficulties.
01:37:284 (1) - weird spinner for me I'd say this is fine.
01:41:034 (6) - nc
01:44:034 (5) - again, long slider is not common in Insane diff As before.
01:44:034 (5) - nc
01:47:034 (7) - ^
01:50:034 (6) - ^ You're not the first to comment on these so I went ahead and did this.
01:52:284 (4,6) - weird overlapping Fixed.
02:03:440 (4,1) - same? in fact you can use 4 circle - two 1/4 slider jump alternatively As before.
becasue you ues same rhythm and similar pattern, it is okay for me.

[Normal]
As it is the easiest diff in the mapset, I think CS set to 2.5~3 is better. SV still think it is too high, 1.0~1.1 is better for me. I think the SV is fine. The CS I may consider changing to 3, but definitely not 2.5.
00:36:534 (3) - curving another side for 3 rd part? Alright.
00:57:534 (4) - becasue you are vocal mapping, skipped 00:57:909 - ?
01:09:534 (4) - ^ (01:09:909 - ) Changed
01:14:034 - adding a circle here? I think a blank here is suitable since here is a drop in the percussion at this point.

This song repeat rhythm a lot, but mapper can still finish mapping, genius.
Becasue of this, then mapping and modding is quite simple.
If you use same rhythm, basically no problem then.
Thanks for modding :)
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