jloughman14 wrote:

Clumsy

00:01:987 (6) - Move this to the right instead of stacking it. Done.
00:10:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Make these jumps a bit more even, maybe a star jump? I kind of like these jumps. If I get another request to change them then I will.
00:24:536 (2,3,4) - These don't really match the song, a single slider would work here.Done.
00:31:889 (6) - Move this from covering the slider. I don't understand.
00:35:320 (2,3,4) - More triples that could be turned into a slider.Done.
00:36:301 (6,1) - Move one of these to even it out. Done.
00:58:065 (6,7) - Spread these out some. But it fits with the distance spacing.
01:33:948 (5,6,7,8) - Why is a stream here? It fits.
01:53:360 (1,2) - Instead of sliders you could make it follow the bass drum. If you could include a picture of how I should fix this, I'd be happy.
01:54:732 (4,1) - Delete 1 and have 4 end where 1 was. Done.
01:55:320 Through 02:21:484 could be edited. It leaves no time for a break. Especially if the player is DT.
02:42:575 and 02:42:967 - Add a circle. Done.
03:02:477 (4) - Delete this perhaps. Done.
03:09:438 Through 03:10:222 - Add sliders or circles to go along with the vocals. I want there to be a break before the chorus. There is also a break before the 1st chorus, so making it different doesn't really flow.
03:16:399 (6,8) - These don't need to be here. I see what you mean, but again, there was a stream this position previous chorus and I am deciding to keep it there. If I get another request however, I will change it.
03:27:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Doesn't really fit the song. ^
03:47:085 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
04:08:262 - Add a circle Done.
04:27:477 (2) - Change this into a single slider and not a reverse. Done.
04:28:164 (5) - Delete this circle Done.
04:28:262 (6,7,8) - Edit this in 1/6 and you can make it match the song. Done.

General

Some spots you should look over to see if you should turn the slider tick rate up in that area.
I'm thinking HP Drain at 6.5 and AR at 8.8 but thats up to you. Changed HP. AR stays the same.
Different combo colors please. I think I did this >.>
I dont know anything about hitsounds, sorry. All good
You showed me a song I am starting to like so thanks for that! Hooray

Hopefully this helps you out a bit! If you need a future mod hmu, ill do my best to help!

bigfrog wrote:

hihi, from queue
M4M :3

General
seems like not finish yet, so just take a look these 2 error Took me two hours to fix these omg ;_; Done.

Clumsy
00:05:909 (3) - prefer to make a jump between 00:05:713 (2,3) Nah.
00:59:438 (3,4,1) - really don't know whether it is rankable or not, but still not suggest Done.
01:06:497 (1) - maybe can put more object here instead a 1/1 slider, it's a little pity to ignore these sound Not sure where to put it. Also, my slider follows the vocals and goes with the other parts like this, so I'm keeping it.
01:14:928 - add a circle? It doesn't flow.
01:30:222 (1,2) - can be stack perfect Done.
02:21:791 (1) - this pattern looks more neat i think Done.

02:35:516 (4) - ctrl+g? since there is a big sound on slider start Done.
03:13:164 (4) - ahh...just really don't like the pattern of this slider, maybe delete red point?? but still only a suggest Done.

overall, nice mapset :>
Good Luck~~~ Thank you.

Anxient wrote:

Priority mod~~ thanks for m4m >w<

00:06:889 (1) - can be better looking imo Done.

SPOILER

00:11:693 - 00:12:575 - breaktime? Nah. No point having break time for 1 second when the HP drain isn't even that high anyways.
00:31:889 (6) - place ontop of 00:31:987 (1) - sliderstart? Nope. It flows better currently.
00:42:967 (1) - curve can be less sharp (for better looking) Done.
00:53:948 (1) - NC There already is one here.
00:59:438 (3,4) - pretty sure this is unrankable Already fixed from previous mod.
00:58:654 (1,2,3,4) - also really hard to read ^
01:06:497 (1) - ctrl+g? Not needed. Instead I changed the shape and positioning.
01:15:909 (4) - no NC = hype lost ;A; Done.
01:19:046 (1) - ctrl g for flow I want it to be symmetrical with the previous slider.
01:11:203 (1) - ctrl+g Changed pattern instead.
01:11:987 (3) - ^ ^
01:15:909 (4) - NCAlready mentioned. Already fixed.
01:19:046 (1) - ctrl+g ^
01:30:615 (2) - sliderend can stack better with 01:30:222 (1) - sliderend. disable gridsnap to help you do this Already mentioned in previous mod.
01:33:948 (5) - NC Done.
01:36:301 (1) - ctrl+g Done.
01:47:281 (1) - can be better looking Done.
01:51:987 (1) - ctrl+g to complete the star jump This was intentional.
01:54:732 (4) - stack with 01:54:340 (3) - sliderend Nope.
02:21:791 (1) - wait what why NC Done.
02:24:144 (3) - ctrl+g Intentional.
02:28:850 (3) - ^ Done.
02:47:281 (2) - ctrl+g Done.
02:56:203 (3,1) - bad idea. make these two stack under 02:55:713 (2) - sliderend Done.
02:59:830 (2) - ctrl+g Done.
03:01:007 (1) - omg what is this. change it. either that or make it more pretty Done.
03:11:791 (1) - I like this, but it could be better looking. Straight up changed it. Done.
03:15:124 (1) - ctrl+g Done.
03:17:085 (2) - rightclick the second red sliderpoint from slidestart Done.
03:21:399 (1) - needs more sliderpoints. this slider is too jagged Changed it. Done.
03:32:379 (1) - ctrl+g Done.
03:45:320 (2) - oh what. I know what youre trying to do but please. make it better looking Done.
04:05:320 (1) - ctrl+g. this is not cool you know. and so is the similar sliders that are like this This is very common in 4-5 star maps.
04:08:850 (2) - ctrl+g No
04:20:418 (4) - ctrl+g Done.
04:26:301 (2) - ^ Nope.

Welp. That's it for me! Good luck! Thank you. This one took me a while>.<

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From mod queues～^^

General:

※Song setup → Design → "Letterbox duringbreaks" unavailable. Done.
※Ai mod:error (Background & Aoudio) Already fixed these.

Clumsy:

00:59:438 (3,4,1) - This is a very difficult to see.Was puzzled.please move. Already fixed in previous mod. Done.

01:26:399 (7) - circle? Nope. Awkward gap if I do that.

01:27:673 (3) - This next Circle 01:28:065 (4) - It is it is difficult to understand the connect.
Please connect the end of the 01:27:673 (3) - and 01:28:065 (4).You can do this for example with the following command. But it looks cool I will change if another request.


01:33:752 (4) - This overlaps with the stream.Is hard to hit.please move. That was the point...

01:33:948 (5) - NC Done.

01:41:693 (3) - circle No for the same reason as before.

01:44:046 (7) - ^ ^ By the way if you meant have 2 circles and no gap, there would be a minimal difference and a bad impact on the pattern.

01:45:320 (5,1,2) - Would you like to change the rhythm? You can do this for example with the following command. Nope. It follows the same as the other ones and makes sense.


01:46:301 (3,4) - ^ ^


01:52:575 (2,3,1,2) - ^ ^


03:01:007 (1) - This is hard to see.Please change to easily viewable slider. Already changed in previous mod.

03:26:693 (2,3) - ctrl + G Done.

03:28:752 (8,1) - This is better to connect.(Is in the stream.) Intentional.

03:31:497 (3) - circle No.

03:36:595 (5) - ^ It already is a circle.

03:38:065 (4) - Would you like to change the rhythm? You can do this for example with the following command. Doesn't follow rhythm.


03:39:830 (5,1,2) - ^ ^


03:40:811 (3,4,5) - ^ ^


03:42:379 (2) - circle Already is.

03:42:869 (5) - ^ No.

03:44:438 (6) - ^ Already is.

03:47:183 (3,5) - remove Fixed as per duo request.

04:03:752 (1,2,3) - DS is not correct.04:03:752 (1) - Please move. Moved 2,3

04:15:026 (2) - circle Done.

04:17:085 (3) - Please change to 2 circle. Done.

04:20:418 (4) - Please change to stream. Doesn't flow.

04:21:595 (2) - circle Done.

04:21:791 (3) - Would you like to change the rhythm? You can do this for example with the following command. No thx.


04:22:477 (4) - circle ^

04:26:301 (2) - 1/2 beat change,and 04:26:693 (3) - circle. No.

04:26:301 (2,3,1,2) - Would you like to change the rhythm? You can do this for example with the following command. ^



I think monotonic overall.I think it still be able to pick up the sound. Still working on hitsounds and hopefully getting mods. Thank you.
Good luck

jloughman14 wrote:

You wanted a picture of what to do at 01:53:556 so here it is. Nah. It will change the patterns of all of these types of combos and it doesn't really flow as well.

ohad1881 wrote:

from my m4m reverse queue!
hi!
00:29:242-fix blanket
00:32:771-3,4 ^^
00:39:830-^^
00:44:340-^^
01:12:771-^^
01:28:458-^^ Done all
01:32:183 2,3,4 -the flow here is not really good put 4 x116 y166 it will look got with 4(01:33:752) also Nope.
01:55:124-why so long break?????!!!!! Because this part, if mapped, will just be more difficult than fun.
02:31:203-fix blanket Done
02:34:928-x172 for stack and then 02:35:516 x404 y258 for stack What?
02:56:203 3,1- x290 y104 for both 3 and 1 Changed 02:55:713 (2) - instead.
02:58:458-x207 No.
03:07:673 - -fix blanket! Done
03:16:399-delete No.
04:10:222-x320 y256 Fixed
04:26:889-x135 Done.
i will send you my map that you should mod in PM
gl!
nice map!LOL I FAILED AT THE BEFORE LAST CIRCLE HAHAHAHAHA
http://prntscr.com/6g86nz

1. I think this should be considered a marathon map, right? In this case I have to say that with such a short drain time you can't make this a marathon map. You need a drain time (not total time) of at least 300seconds (5 minutes) to call it a marathon (Your current drain time: 230 seconds - almost 4 minutes)
2. What about a little change of colors? That blue looks like is too strong amogn the others and some of them could be improved, so... :
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 252,124,39
   Combo2 : 233,180,56
   Combo3 : 128,128,255

   I hope you like them :3

1. 00:01:203 (3,4) - I think you don't need such a wide spacing when the rhythm is constant like here. My suggestion is to use the same DS for thi first combo
2. 00:02:967 (5) - You clearly need a NC here
3. 00:02:967 (5,6,7,8) - I'd suggest a little thing here, see picture below :3
   
   SPOILER

   
   I had to move the last slider (the one highlighted in the pic, because the last note I linked ended up making a bad overlap
4. 00:04:928 (5) - I think you should move this more on the right of the next slider:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:06:497 (4,5,1) - I suggest increasing the spacing between these notes. The music suggests it
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:07:869 (2,3,4) - How about using a triangle pattern here?
7. 00:09:242 (3) - Seeing your sliders' shapes I suggest putting a NC here
8. 00:10:811 (5) - Another NC here too. You change also orientation of your pattern, so...
9. 00:11:595 (1,1) - I can bet you're able to map this part too, but you didn't want to xD
10. 00:13:948 (3,4) - I think these sliders are misplaced :/ Try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:16:693 (2,3) - This pattern is really misleading because you expect another 1/2 slider at 00:16:693 - (due to hitsounds). Try to remove a repet from 3 and convert 2 into a 1/2 slider
12. 00:18:654 (4) - From here I suggest a little stream, like this:
    
13. 00:25:713 (1) - Remove NC from here and add it to 00:26:301 (2) - this note
14. 00:28:556 - Add a note here, otherwise 00:28:654 (4) - looks strange due to the next jump you used
15. 00:31:595 (5,6,1) - Absolutely no. Please, this pattern is extreme compared to the rest of you pattern. See below
    
    Option

    
16. 00:35:320 - 00:35:713 - Remove these notes and change pattern (I won't suggest once a gain a new pattern because you need to find your own way of mapping)
17. 00:42:183 (5,6,7,8) - NC on 5 and from 5 you should change pattern because so does the song
18. 00:43:948 (2,3,4) - What about a zig-zag movement?
19. 00:48:654 (2) - NC here
20. 01:07:281 (2) - Use 2 circles instead of this slider and place them far away from each other and from the other next circle of the combo
21. 01:14:340 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle pattern here
22. 01:23:752 (1,2) - NC should be on the second note
23. 01:27:673 (3,4) - Fix this spacing :<
24. 01:33:752 (4) - Move this note around 228:156
25. 01:36:889 (2,3) - This slider gives a strange feeling because of its shape. It gives the impression that the note above it is placed where the sldier has that little "hill". I suggest changing shape here
26. 01:39:046 (7) - Maybe a Ctrl + G ?
27. 02:27:281 (4) - NC
28. 02:39:438 (2) - It has a clear opposite sound of 02:39:046 (1) - , so make 2 go the other way (Ctrl + G on it)
29. 02:39:830 (3,4) - Why this asimmetry? :<
30. 02:42:183 (1,2) - NC goes on the second note
31. 02:45:320 (1,2,3,4) - Ok, here's another pattern suggestion, because it will take too long to explain it:
    
    SPOILER

    
32. 02:49:438 (2) - NC
33. 02:53:948 (5) - ^
34. 03:27:281 (4) - Ctrl + G, because the sound it covers is graving
35. 03:28:458 (5) - NC
36. 03:36:301 (3,4,5,6) - Was this meant to be a square maybe? .-.
37. 04:12:379 (3,5) - NC on both

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Here's my mod for your mod on my map :3

[General]

1. I think this should be considered a marathon map, right? In this case I have to say that with such a short drain time you can't make this a marathon map. You need a drain time (not total time) of at least 300seconds (5 minutes) to call it a marathon (Your current drain time: 230 seconds - almost 4 minutes) What...? I didn't intend for it to ever be a marathon, so I don't think changes need to be made regarding this.
2. What about a little change of colors? That blue looks like is too strong amogn the others and some of them could be improved, so... :
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 252,124,39
   Combo2 : 233,180,56
   Combo3 : 128,128,255

   Done!
   I hope you like them :3
   Thank you!

[Clumsy]

1. 00:01:203 (3,4) - I think you don't need such a wide spacing when the rhythm is constant like here. My suggestion is to use the same DS for thi first combo Moved 00:01:203 (3) -
2. 00:02:967 (5) - You clearly need a NC here Whoops. Fixed!
3. 00:02:967 (5,6,7,8) - I'd suggest a little thing here, see picture below :3 Image didn't load ;_;
   
   SPOILER

   
   I had to move the last slider (the one highlighted in the pic, because the last note I linked ended up making a bad overlap
4. 00:04:928 (5) - I think you should move this more on the right of the next slider: Done!
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:06:497 (4,5,1) - I suggest increasing the spacing between these notes. The music suggests it Indeed it does
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:07:869 (2,3,4) - How about using a triangle pattern here? Nah, I wanted it to follow how the music sort of goes down-ish
7. 00:09:242 (3) - Seeing your sliders' shapes I suggest putting a NC here Not needed
8. 00:10:811 (5) - Another NC here too. You change also orientation of your pattern, so...
9. 00:11:595 (1,1) - I can bet you're able to map this part too, but you didn't want to xD Not really, there's not enough sound
10. 00:13:948 (3,4) - I think these sliders are misplaced :/ Try this: Yay, another error
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:16:693 (2,3) - This pattern is really misleading because you expect another 1/2 slider at 00:16:693 - (due to hitsounds). Try to remove a repet from 3 and convert 2 into a 1/2 slider Changed, but not in the way you said
12. 00:18:654 (4) - From here I suggest a little stream, like this: No
    
13. 00:25:713 (1) - Remove NC from here and add it to 00:26:301 (2) - this note Nope
14. 00:28:556 - Add a note here, otherwise 00:28:654 (4) - looks strange due to the next jump you used Putting a note there doesn't even make sense.
15. 00:31:595 (5,6,1) - Absolutely no. Please, this pattern is extreme compared to the rest of you pattern. See below Couldn't see pic, but I changed it.
    
    Option

    
16. 00:35:320 - 00:35:713 - Remove these notes and change pattern (I won't suggest once a gain a new pattern because you need to find your own way of mapping) no?
17. 00:42:183 (5,6,7,8) - NC on 5 and from 5 you should change pattern because so does the song But the whole thing is the pattern
18. 00:43:948 (2,3,4) - What about a zig-zag movement? It goes from a high to low, hence the pattern matches (that's what I meant about the other thing before)
19. 00:48:654 (2) - NC here Nope
20. 01:07:281 (2) - Use 2 circles instead of this slider and place them far away from each other and from the other next circle of the combo What, no. That doesn't make sense and there will be too many blanks.
21. 01:14:340 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle pattern here Done
22. 01:23:752 (1,2) - NC should be on the second note no
23. 01:27:673 (3,4) - Fix this spacing :< intentional
24. 01:33:752 (4) - Move this note around 228:156 moved to different spot
25. 01:36:889 (2,3) - This slider gives a strange feeling because of its shape. It gives the impression that the note above it is placed where the sldier has that little "hill". I suggest changing shape here changed
26. 01:39:046 (7) - Maybe a Ctrl + G ? maybe not
27. 02:27:281 (4) - NC no
28. 02:39:438 (2) - It has a clear opposite sound of 02:39:046 (1) - , so make 2 go the other way (Ctrl + G on it) Yep
29. 02:39:830 (3,4) - Why this asimmetry? :< I don't know what made you think this was going to be slightly symmetric
30. 02:42:183 (1,2) - NC goes on the second note
31. 02:45:320 (1,2,3,4) - Ok, here's another pattern suggestion, because it will take too long to explain it: pic didn't load
    
    SPOILER

    
32. 02:49:438 (2) - NC
33. 02:53:948 (5) - ^
34. 03:27:281 (4) - Ctrl + G, because the sound it covers is graving yes
35. 03:28:458 (5) - NC yup
36. 03:36:301 (3,4,5,6) - Was this meant to be a square maybe? .-. no
37. 04:12:379 (3,5) - NC on both

That's all from me. I hope I helped you with my mod.
Remeber to make the other diffs, because you really need them :3 yeah maybe >.< too lazy
Bye~

TheBronyGames wrote:

For the NM request in my modding queue (Jesus, i just made the thing and already got 2 requests)


Clumsy

This is actually a really good map, so it was hard to find things to mod, well done man!

00:06:889 (1) - Try Shortening this slider to where it ends at 00:07:085 with no reversearrow, then add 2 reversearrows in it, i think that'd fit better with the music Umm, I did fix this part, but not the way you said

00:11:693 - you should insert a break time from here to 00:12:967, just so no one gets screwed by healthdrains, OR, try adding some more hitobjects in this space Not needed, the HP drain is already low and it shouldn't be that hard to hit all the notes before to keep full health

00:27:281 - Since this is a point where more instruments join in, i feel you should add some Kiai Time from here to about 00:36:301
No. If anything this is meant to be a slower part compared to the last part

00:47:967 - i feel a hitcircle's missing here On the blue tick? I know where you want it, but it's already been suggested and I don't want circles there

00:48:360 - ^^^ ^

00:49:242 - Kiai Time seems like it should be added here to about 01:07:281 - I've only added Kiai times to chorus

Litharrale wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
I really love the background image but it doesn't fit the song at all. I'd strongly recommend changing it to something...softer. Thanks for the desktop wallpaper though. Ok let's try this one. Done

[Clumsy]
00:00:418 - Consider adding a note here? Ok
00:02:183 (1,2,3,4) - delete and ctrl-shift-D to create more symmetrical ones. Squares by hand are hard I already used that, it's just I had to move them around a bit. I tried fixing the DS
00:05:713 (1) - NC But the NC is on the one before
00:11:595 (1) - delete NC Nope. It's not rare to see NC on a finish
00:28:654 (4) - Change to a circle. the slipslide feels out of place My perfectly blanketed mini slider ;~; Done
01:19:046 (1) - Split up or change into a different shape (feel free to ignore this one) That's meant to be symmetrical with the other slider, but I fixed it to make it more straight (probably not noticeable)
01:32:575 (3,4) - Blanket better Not meant to be a blanket
01:55:418 - AIBAT says this break is too long and I think I agree, it's a lot of downtime Can't change this, but I added a spinner at the end to make it less downtime Fix
02:32:771 (1,3) - stack Intentional
02:38:458 (2,2) - stack ^
02:53:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - WOW THAT TECHNIQUE! The sort of jumping half stream whatever that is...holy cow I'm so impressed, that might be the coolest thing I've ever seen in a map. Shooting a star to you just for that :) ty. It's actually not that uncommon, I saw it once and it worked really well and was very unique so I thought I'd try it.
02:53:752 (4,8) - Consider dropping these two down a bit though so it flows better
03:16:399 (6,8) - delete these two and move 7 down. The stream doesn't really fit Only moved the first once because the other one is blanketed
03:28:752 (4,1) - That space is brutal. It's not wrong. But jesus. It's only 1.42x
03:35:516 (1,2) - Blanket Done!
04:07:477 (3,5) - stack Intentional, I think it adds good variety.

Hi Im Nathan wrote:

Hi from my m4m queue

Clumsy
00:15:909 (5) - Fixed! >.<
01:05:516 (3) - I dont think a jump this big fits the flow of this part of the song. Maybe make the gap smaller? Fixed
01:23:752 (1) - Move this to (355x, 76y) ish. What, this is meant to be part of the pentagon
02:23:360 (1) - How about shortening both sliders by 1/4 and adding a note on the end? Something like this Triples don't fit here.

I wouldnt normally shoot a kudosu if theres only 1 diff complete but this is so well made its amazing. GL getting ranked once you've finished your other diffs. Hope this mod was helpful Thanks for the star + mod (wow getting stars makes me really happy)

mion_6GKM wrote:

from queue!

Clumsy

00:07:281 (2) make it blanket Fixed

00:31:987 (7) NC Fixed

00:56:791 add note In my opinion a triple doesn't fit here

03:28:752 (4) it must close to 03:28:850 (1) Fixed this part

Hope this mod was helpful. good luck!

• 00:04:110 (7) - maybe just make this normally curving slider.
  01:00:580 (108) - ^ it fits better here
  01:03:326 (112,113,114) - try this: http://puu.sh/h4ZYo/b974a825e7.jpg
  01:11:953 (128) - blanket would be improved
  01:41:757 (180) - blanket would be improved

• 00:20:384 (6,5) - meant to be stacked?
  03:03:752 (5) - why not just normal curvy slider?
  03:29:242 (13) - NC

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
Came from my queue.
Indeed, M4M, well I think this practice my modding skills

[General]
*Are you going to do more diffs? Easiest diff must be lower than 2.00 stars. It is rule. Dammit...now I have to make an easy diff ;_;
*I think you should do Hard diff too. Gap between Normal and Clumsy is too big. It's a WIP
*Is offset wrong, because I get only 100 points in every object? Try 581 Just forget! xD I had audio offset ;_;
[Normal]

• 00:04:110 (7) - maybe just make this normally curving slider.
  01:00:580 (108) - ^ it fits better here
  01:03:326 (112,113,114) - try this: http://puu.sh/h4ZYo/b974a825e7.jpg
  01:11:953 (128) - blanket would be improved
  01:41:757 (180) - blanket would be improved

Also found from AiMod:
This object is too far from the previous object. 02:24:698
Not sure about this one: This object is too close to the previous object. 03:09:796

Fixed all except last one, because there is nothing there >.>
[Clumsy]

• 00:20:384 (6,5) - meant to be stacked?
  03:03:752 (5) - why not just normal curvy slider?
  03:29:242 (13) - NC

Fixed all

Sorry for short mod, but that's all what I found. Good Luck~

1. I would put OD 3 and AR 4
2. 00:08:458 (14,15) - pls fix the DS here.
3. 00:13:164 (20) - I would move this to 00:13:360 - and ad a circle at 00:13:164 - , because it feels like there's something missing at 00:13:752 -
4. 00:19:438 (31,32) - fix DS, you should use DS at all times in normal and easy.
5. 00:51:987 (86,87) - imo I would unstack this.
6. 01:18:262 (129,130) - imo would be nicer if you blanket this.
7. 01:53:556 (197,198) - make this into a slider.
8. 02:34:144 (22) - either move this to 02:33:948 - or just add another note there, there's a loud beat there... Also for future reference, I highly recommend you to map more to the music, mostly drums, than the vocals... A lot of people like those maps more and ikd how to say but I think it's much better to do that... Though it's ok if you want to keep mapping to the vocals, it's just that sometimes your map could get ugly (at least for me) and people will always suggest you to map to the music when they mod your maps.
9. 02:35:516 - another strong beat that feels weird if it's just empty there, I suggest you put a note there ( or shift
10. 02:35:713 (25) - to that place) first and listen to it a few times and see for yourself if it's better or not.
11. 02:41:987 (36,37) - imo I would make this into a slider
12. 02:43:164 (38) - imo i would make this into two circles stack on each other
13. 02:43:556 - I would delete this.
14. 02:46:889 (45) - get rid of reverse, and make the slider still end at 02:47:281 -
15. 02:55:516 (62) - end this at 02:55:713 -
16. 03:24:928 - add note.
17. 03:34:732 (131) - either make this into a 1/2 slider and start at 03:34:928 - or make it into 1/2 slider with reverse.
18. 04:04:144 (4) - delete this and start 04:04:340 (5) - at where (4) was.
19. also I'm just guessing you haven't put it there because you're not finished, but you still need to add NCs.

1. 00:57:869 (5,6,7,8) - I think you should also make this into a square shape
2. 01:01:791 (1,2,3) - how about blanketing these
3. 02:23:654 - just my opinion, but you could add a note here, it would fit with the rest of the map and there is actually a soft sound there in the music.
4. 03:22:183 (3,4,5,6) - I think you should unstack this...
5. 03:42:379 - add note?

Lasoki wrote:

hi, M4M from my queue.
Sry... I'm a bit late. Btw I'm not that good at modding Insane, so I probably won't be able to point out a lot of stuff.

I'll mark things blue which I highly recommend you change/fix. Now I have to use a different colour :3

[Normal:]

1. I would put OD 3 and AR 4 Fixed to AR 4 and OD 3.5 (for just a little bit of challenge)
2. 00:08:458 (14,15) - pls fix the DS here. Fixed
3. 00:13:164 (20) - I would move this to 00:13:360 - and ad a circle at 00:13:164 - , because it feels like there's something missing at 00:13:752 - Done
4. 00:19:438 (31,32) - fix DS, you should use DS at all times in normal and easy. Done (I know about DS in Normals, but that was stacked previously which I forgot to change)
5. 00:51:987 (86,87) - imo I would unstack this. Yep
6. 01:18:262 (129,130) - imo would be nicer if you blanket this. Ok
7. 01:53:556 (197,198) - make this into a slider. Nah, that part will just then be 3 1/2 sliders. I wanted to add variety there.
8. 02:34:144 (22) - either move this to 02:33:948 - or just add another note there, there's a loud beat there... Also for future reference, I highly recommend you to map more to the music, mostly drums, than the vocals... A lot of people like those maps more and ikd how to say but I think it's much better to do that... Though it's ok if you want to keep mapping to the vocals, it's just that sometimes your map could get ugly (at least for me) and people will always suggest you to map to the music when they mod your maps. Oh I get what you mean. That part was just deleted when I tried to make the map easier in terms of star difficulty (which failed). I understand what you mean about mapping to the music as well. But like I said, the note that should've been there was deleted. Generally in Harder difficulties this wouldn't be a problem, but since I am mapping Normal for first time, you could say that my placement of notes is still rigged. In short, fixed
9. 02:35:516 - another strong beat that feels weird if it's just empty there, I suggest you put a note there ( or shift 02:35:713 (25) - to that place) first and listen to it a few times and see for yourself if it's better or not. Fix (also I assume that dot point was a typo)
10. 02:41:987 (36,37) - imo I would make this into a slider Nah. The map is already so slider heavy.
11. 02:43:164 (38) - imo i would make this into two circles stack on each other I couldn't stack it because then the 3rd circle there would be out of place. I also followed the previous pattern in 00:48:654 (80) -
12. 02:43:556 - I would delete this. Ok
13. 02:46:889 (45) - get rid of reverse, and make the slider still end at 02:47:281 - Fixed, but with 2 circles rather than a 1/1 slider
14. 02:55:516 (62) - end this at 02:55:713 - Yep
15. 03:24:928 - add note. Done
16. 03:34:732 (131) - either make this into a 1/2 slider and start at 03:34:928 - or make it into 1/2 slider with reverse. I don't see how a 1/2 fits here
17. 04:04:144 (4) - delete this and start 04:04:340 (5) - at where (4) was. No change
18. also I'm just guessing you haven't put it there because you're not finished, but you still need to add NCs. Yeah, still WIP

[Insane:]

1. 00:57:869 (5,6,7,8) - I think you should also make this into a square shape Nope. I don't want double squares there
2. 01:01:791 (1,2,3) - how about blanketing these No. They go off the DS.
3. 02:23:654 - just my opinion, but you could add a note here, it would fit with the rest of the map and there is actually a soft sound there in the music. Nope. I think it flows just fine with that current pattern.
4. 03:22:183 (3,4,5,6) - I think you should unstack this... Ok
5. 03:42:379 - add note? Nope

Well that's it from me, good luck with your map!
Feel free to forum PM or PM me in game if you have questions to this mod or your beatmap in general Great mod, especially helpful with the Normal. Thanks a lot

Infevo wrote:

Hey Dahpla!

Imma take a look at your map as well because I love nekomata!

[Insane]

click for mod

• -This might be a general thing for the whole map set. I dont like you only have 3 combo colors and two of these since consecutive are similar. I made the orange colour more red. That will be all for now. I don't think having more combo colours is necessary
  -You are using a total of 5 different SVs. Ask yourself if it is necessary and reduce to max 3 if not. more so because some of the svs are fairly close to each other. It's allowed to be more than 3 SVs if it's appropriate enough. In my opinion, I've placed them in appropriate places so that it can either build up or slow down from kiai.
  -Consider increasing hitsound volume during kiai/chorus a little. the song is quite stable in terms of different volumes but nonetheless it is noticable that during chorus the overall volume slightly increases. try keep a balance with your hitsounds. maybe 10-15% more during these signature parts? Ok
  -00:08:458 (1,2) - the time between the cursor's position of second slider's head and first slider's tail is real short for such an overlap. even for an insane. keep in mind you perfectly stack and the second slider could suggest to go on along the former slider's path.
  -02:51:595 (1,2) - similar as above
  -03:33:948 (1,2) - same. dont be mad. I actually like the idea. but others will hate you for this because they dont want to bother learning to read. they rather blame the mapper. and this is why as mappers we have to go for high readablity now... =/ i mean it is up to you if you keep it. but i am almost certain that this kind of stuff is like a privilege only skystar has earned so far^^ I have no idea what you mean...but ok. I'll change these parts up
  -02:10:516 is this break intentionally that long? i know it is work in progress. but i hope you plan something for this part. because this is one of those which make nekomata so enjoyable. I believe the placement of breaks and how long they go for is the mapper's decision. Whilst I have been told numerous times to put notes in that place, the sound doesn't inspire me enough to map that part to a good enough standard.
  
  Not to shame on anyone, but I'd like to point out this map: t/247827 (specifically G's Insane by Evil_Twilight). Included within his difficulty are very long breaks that could be mapped out as well (in my opinion at least, easier than my song), but he chooses not to. So basically what I'm trying to say in tl;dr is I don't want to map that part for specific reasons. Hopefully you understand

Short mod but I can't really spot anything I'd like improved. Even during playing several times. Seems like good work. i might have to take another look later.

1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: You're not using a SB, so Widescreen support and the Epilepsy warning can be disabled for all diffs
3. Metadata: Consider adding the album name, "Crevice" to tags
4. Timing: No issues
5. Hitsounds: No issues
6. AImod: Normal at 00:47:281 (3,4) -: AImod doesn't like these being too close together, though there's a 5/2 timeline space so it's not that big of a deal IMO, just thought I'd point it out

Normal

00:04:928 (3,4) - Stacking is usually frowned upon in Normal diffs, since you should try and maintain constant DS throughout. Try something like this (tail of (2) is in the top right):

00:29:242 (4,5) - Stacking again, I'd turn these into a 1/2 repeating slider
00:34:928 (3,4) - Not gonna mention stacking anymore, but for each of the following examples you can do one of the two suggestions listed above, or space stacked single circles, such as at 00:37:477 (2,3)
00:43:752 (2) - I'd move this to [x-80,y-312] since it creates a nice equilateral triangle pattern with 00:42:967 (1,2,3)
00:52:379 (1) - Slider is so squashed, doesn't look all that nice to me. Try moving the slider head up and creating a shallower curve towards 00:52:967 (2)
01:28:065 (6) - Make this into a 1/2 slider starting 1/2 further back for the clap sounds
01:36:301 (4) - You could curve this more to create a blanket around the head of 01:37:085 (5) if you wanted to
03:01:399 (4) - This circle overlaps with the health bar during play, so you'll need to move it further down. I would move 03:01:007 (3,4) - to [x-208,y-210] and then rotate (5) about 150 degrees clockwise, Ctrl+G and move to [x-80,y-48]
03:16:301 (6,1) - This overlap looks quite messy to me, almost the entire slider body of (1) is covered by the tail of (6). I'd move (6) to [x-112,y-24] and rotate the tail 20 degrees clockwise

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Re-mod on this since I modded only the Clumsy diff before :3 (from my modding queue)

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~ Legend ~

1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this

Please reply with:

1. Green = Fixed
2. Red = Didn't fix
3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

[General]

1. Unless you have a storyboard, disable the "Display epilepsy warning" option from the song setup ^_^ forgot to change this

[Clumsy]

1. 00:00:418 (1) - Having this stacked on the next slider is a bit too "still" imo, so why don't you move it around 64;192? It is the starting note, I don't want it to go too fast immediately
2. 00:00:615 (1,2) - Maybe you can make a blanket with these 2 okee
3. 00:01:399 (3,4,5,6) - I have a great pattern for this passage *^* nice
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4. 00:02:967 (3,4) - I think that a 1/2 slider with a repeat would fit a lot better. It would keep also the movement created previously with the pattern I suggested true
5. 00:04:928 (4) - I'd like to enphasize the next slider, so maybe move this to 440;168 (more or less) I moved it close to there
6. 00:10:811 (2) - It would be better to stack this properly under the slider. If not, add a NC here There was a bug with stacking a note there. Anyways I just decided to add reverse to the 1/1 slider and reposition the circles.
7. 00:11:203 (4) - Move this half way between (3) and (5) maybe Repositioned stuff, so I can't change this anymore
8. 00:14:242 - There is a note here so why don't you add a repeat to the slider?
9. 00:14:634 - Same ^ Those are 1/6 sliders. The part you've told me had notes are on the blue tick (1/4).
10. 00:15:713 (3,4,5) - Maybe this is too finicky, but the distance from 3 to 4 and from 3 to 5 isn't simmetrical Fix
11. 00:26:301 (2) - Same as for 00:10:811 (2) - NC
12. 00:32:575 (3) - Stacking this note under 00:31:987 (1) - 's tale would fit really nice imo Nah, I don't want that back and forth stack movement.
13. 00:34:340 (3,4,5,6) - What about a square for this passage? ok, but it's not a perfectly generated square (intentional)
14. 00:35:124 (1) - A straight, parallel slider to 00:35:516 (2) - would give a better feeling about consistency and polishness :D
15. 00:40:615 (4,5) - Ctrl + G? yep
16. 00:48:654 (2,3) - I think that stacking them and putting a NC on 2 will give a better feeling and a great starting point for the following pattern (stacking them where 2 actually is it's fine) nah
17. 00:50:222 (3,4,5,1) - What about this: I like it
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18. 00:56:105 (3) - This slider is really unneccesary :/ Split it up into 2 circles and rearrange the pattern True, I just thought putting sliders on red ticks would...idk
19. 01:48:850 (1) - Can you make it simmetrical? This shape is a bit ugly :/ 02:30:418 (2) <--- This shape would be a lot better Changed it to something else altogether
20. 02:43:164 (2,3) - Same thing I said for 00:48:654 (2,3) - I kinda don't want to just have the mouse linger around one spot for too long, so having it non stacked just feels better for me.
21. 02:46:497 (2,1) - Move the NC on 2 I just removed that NC completely
22. 03:09:046 (2) - Putting this under the slider makes it less readable, so try to move it more to the upper-right corner Moved
23. 03:13:556 (1) - Ctrl + G maybe? maybe not
24. 03:38:065 (4) - Same ? ^ maybe not again
25. 03:40:026 (1) - This shape isn't really nice imo :/ What about this: ooh ^_^
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26. 03:44:144 (1,2,3,4) - Looks a bit random as it is now. Maybe try to make a square? Sort of a square
27. 04:02:183 (1,2) - The general consistency will benefit if both these sliders would have the same shape I was thinking about that, but I guess at the time I wanted extra variety >.>
28. 04:07:477 (3,4,5) - Ctrl + G on all of these 3 objects. Then fix the spacing since it will be screwed after you do so, but that's the correct objects' order Note to self: red tick 1/2s are not a good idea
29. 04:15:713 (4) - This slider is unneccessary, since the song suggests a more spaced movement. Split it into 2 circles and rearrange the pattern to make them fit. Like this: You really do love squares don't you :3 changed, to square, but different shape and order
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30. 04:16:889 (2,3,4,5,6) - You used a great zigzag spacing until now and here you use a linear flow like this one... D: Like 04:18:262 (2,3,4,5,6) - or 04:21:595 (2,3,4,5,6) - okay

[Hard]

1. 00:19:438 (1,2) - It would increase your beatmap lookings if these 2 sliders would have the same shape
2. 00:23:164 - Missing note?
3. 00:26:301 (2) - NC, like for th Insane diff
4. 00:41:399 (1,2,3) - Ugly spacing :/ Can you make 2 to be half way between those 2 sliders?
5. 01:21:595 (4) - Maybe split in into 2 circles
6. 04:13:948 (1,2,3,4) - For this pattern can you use the same one as for 04:13:164 (1,2,3,4) - ? The curve you created around 3 is a bit too much imo :/
7. 04:28:262 (4) - Use the pattern you used for Clumsy diff I might just re-do this instead of being lazy (I mapped this before I got good)

[Normal]

1. Slider Velocity and AR for this diff are conflicting, since the AR is too low for the actual slider velocity. Yeah. When mapping this I didn't realise the SV was way too high until I already mapped a lot of it. Looks like I might have to re-do this as well ;_;
2. 00:26:301 - Missing note here?
3. 00:52:967 (2,3) - These sliders should be moved by 2 ticks later (add the missing note in the whole created by moving these sldiers)
4. 01:27:869 - Maybe add a 1/2 slider here?
5. 02:43:164 (5) - NC here? You added it before xD
6. 03:45:124 (2,3) - Move them by 2 ticks later and add a note where the whole is created

[Easy]

1. The AR can be increased up to 3 imo ok
2. 02:20:222 (1,1) - You need at least 4 full beats of rest after very spinner on Easy diffs (see https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019&start=0 for clarifications) Fixed
3. 02:28:065 (1,2) - You must keep your DS constant on Easy diffs
   

Generally speaking, tehre is a lot of work to do on this mapset yet and I'll tell you why.
The basic problem is regarding "consistency". Consistency is made up by using same patterns/passagges where the music requires it. It also includes using same slider shapes during the same combo (this one in particular makes your consistency drop low), so try to focus on these things.
I know that changing shapes gives more "creativity" to the map, but if you change slider shape every time a slider comes it gives the exact opposite feeling.

yeah...i still suck >.>

With all of that said, good luck with your mapset :3

JBHyperion wrote:

Yo, M4M request from Wild and Hyper's Modding Queue

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: No issues
2. Song Setup: You're not using a SB, so Widescreen support and the Epilepsy warning can be disabled for all diffs fixed already
3. Metadata: Consider adding the album name, "Crevice" to tags ok
4. Timing: No issues
5. Hitsounds: No issues
6. AImod: Normal at 00:47:281 (3,4) -: AImod doesn't like these being too close together, though there's a 5/2 timeline space so it's not that big of a deal IMO, just thought I'd point it out

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Easy

00:00:615 (1) - I would Ctrl+J this and rotate about 75 degrees anticlockwise - it just brings the first object a little closer to the centre of the playfield, making it slightly easier for newer players to react to I changed this whole slider, but I did move it closer to middle
00:09:634 - This feels a little weird to me without a note here, considering you've mapped 00:08:065 (2) which is of equal strength, as well as 00:09:242 (4) which is weaker. I'd add a circle here Ok
00:48:458 - You could add a slider here to map the clap sounds, in the same ways as you did at 00:26:497 (2) The problem of this would be having to start the slider on a white note (since can only map 1/1) and there is no note there to map it on.
01:00:222 (3) - I think the blanket looks better if you revert the red anchor point to a grey one and drag it to [x-88,y-268] Gonna change this differently
01:44:144 (1) - Maybe try adding a bit more curve or sharpen the bend here? It looks like it's stuck halfway between a linear slider and a curvy one? Since it's a repeat you can do pretty much whatever you want regarding flow, since it will just end up where it started, but might I suggest to place the anchor point at 01:44:536 since the change of direction will ft nicely with the snare drum sound of the slidertick IMO (If you like this, there are plenty of other places where you could consider doing it, such as 01:50:418 (1) Gonna fix these sliders >.>
01:53:948 - I feel this section is a little empty, and since you're about to hit a large break, you can afford to make this a little more active, even if you just add circles on the 1/1 here and at 01:54:732 for the snare drum claps got lazy here (stupid me)
02:20:222 (1) - I think a 1.5 second spinner is a little short for new players to respond to, though it IS after a large break... Just a suggestion, but you could remove the spinner and put a new one from 02:17:085 to 02:20:222 and then put a circle at 02:21:791 - this beat is pretty prominent, and could easily be clickable... But it's up to you, I don't mind it how it is now. If you like it, you can do it on the other diffs too for consistency Nothing I change it to really suits it
02:42:967 - Same as at 00:48:458 - maybe a 1/1 slider here for the claps? above
03:13:556 (1,2) - Flow is a little weird here, I would curve (1) to make a backwards "C" shape, so that the tail is pointing more towards (2)
03:33:948 (2) - Remove the second red anchor points and drag the remaining grey point to [x-420,y-160] to better blanket the tail of (1)
04:03:360 (2) - Missing a clap here? and actually throughout this last section, there don't seem to be any hitsounds xD - I'll let you go through this yourself rather than pointing everything out ...shit
04:24:144 (1) - This slider looks a bit ugly to me I'm afraid - I'd keep it simple to fit better with the rest of the map, and maybe try reusing the suggestion from 01:44:144 (1)

Normal

00:04:928 (3,4) - Stacking is usually frowned upon in Normal diffs, since you should try and maintain constant DS throughout. Try something like this (tail of (2) is in the top right): Just a heads up, I re-mapped this but I can still respond (since a kept a lot of things same to reduce work) This I fixed

00:29:242 (4,5) - Stacking again, I'd turn these into a 1/2 repeating slider Fixed all the stacking, except 1/1 gap stacks
00:34:928 (3,4) - Not gonna mention stacking anymore, but for each of the following examples you can do one of the two suggestions listed above, or space stacked single circles, such as at 00:37:477 (2,3)
00:43:752 (2) - I'd move this to [x-80,y-312] since it creates a nice equilateral triangle pattern with 00:42:967 (1,2,3)
00:52:379 (1) - Slider is so squashed, doesn't look all that nice to me. Try moving the slider head up and creating a shallower curve towards 00:52:967 (2) Fixed this already
01:28:065 (6) - Make this into a 1/2 slider starting 1/2 further back for the clap sounds
01:36:301 (4) - You could curve this more to create a blanket around the head of 01:37:085 (5) if you wanted to
03:01:399 (4) - This circle overlaps with the health bar during play, so you'll need to move it further down. I would move 03:01:007 (3,4) - to [x-208,y-210] and then rotate (5) about 150 degrees clockwise, Ctrl+G and move to [x-80,y-48]
03:16:301 (6,1) - This overlap looks quite messy to me, almost the entire slider body of (1) is covered by the tail of (6). I'd move (6) to [x-112,y-24] and rotate the tail 20 degrees clockwise

Hard

Remapping this, but again I'll see what I can respond to.

AR7.8 is quite a step up from AR5 in the Normal, and Clumsy (Insane) is AR9 - I'd reduce the AR on this diff to 7 for a more even spread I'll do this

00:26:497 (3) - Consider splitting this up into circles, or a 1/2 slider and circle, as it will allow you to emphasise the claps in the music better (clickable, increased spacing, w/e you want to do here)
01:36:497 (2) - Move this to [x-171,y-328] for an equilateral triangle shape
01:37:477 (6,1) - This blanket is pretty ugly IMO. It would be better as a smooth curve with fewer anchor points Gonna fix all of these shit sliders
01:54:732 (4,1) - Maybe increase the spacing a little here since it's the last note before the break, it's NCed and you're emphasising it with whistle and finish hitsounds
02:21:791 (1) - Blanket is slightly off here, move each of the last two grey anchor points up one grid space (on Grid size 4)
03:24:340 (3,1) - I don't feel there's a strong enough beat on (1) to justify the jump here, I'd reduce it
04:08:262 - Feels awkward not to have a note here for the vocal, considering every other 1/2 vocal in this section is mapped Ok
04:13:752 (4,1) - Flow change is really awkward here - I'd Ctrl+H 04:13:948 (1,2,3,4) and move to [x-160,y-164]

Clumsy

00:26:693 (3,4) - Given the emphasis these notes have with the clap, I feel there should be slightly more of a jump between them, and less of a jump between 00:26:889 (4,5) Ok
00:47:673 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:654 (5) - I'd move this down to avoid the overlap with 01:19:046 (1) yep
01:21:889 (5) - I can't hear a beat or vocal note here, so I'd remove this (though I can hear one at 01:22:085 (7) so it might be there, but particularly faint) Hmm, can't change one and keep the other, so this will stay for now
01:40:026 (2,3) - Swap these on the timeline so that the strong beat (with a clap) at 01:40:418 is clickable Think I already fixed this in previous mod
03:18:458 - the 1/1 pause feels quite awkward here, especially considering 03:18:262 (1,2) are stacked, making it really easy to click too early. I'd add a note here, enforce DS (so unstack and move it further away), or if you really want to keep this, NC on (2) fix by adding
03:20:026 (2,3) - (3) is a strong beat, so I would increase the spacing between these tow and decrease it between 03:20:222 (3,4) like you've done for 03:20:811 (2,3,4) Repositioned everything slightly (except for 3, which I moved more)
03:22:183 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This stream really doesn't fit the music to my ears. The 1/4 notes just aren't justified. At most, I would argue that 03:22:379 (3,1) could be 1/2 sliders for the strong cymbal sounds, but otherwise this feels overmapped to me ): I don't like hearing the word overmapped Fixed
03:28:556 (2) - Same as at 01:21:889 (5) - I'd remove this
04:28:654 (6) - Missing a clap (or finish) here?

That's all from me - give me a shout if you need anything else and I'll do my best to help (:

Best of luck!

Euny wrote:

M4M as your request!♥

• General

1. check-out that. cause there is no story board. already fixed ^_^
   
2. offset bit early imo. add audio-lead-in. i recommend +1000 I did this, but I don't notice any difference (the offset stays the same for now, since I didn't get a number)
   
3. for metadata : correct imo. I don't think I need to change anything, it's all therehere is i found some from remywiki to googling
   

• Hard

1. 01:27:869 (2) - move it on x193y189 for better place with 01:26:889 (1,1) - them Remapping all this, sorry. I will however take these all into consideration when doing it again
2. 01:41:007 (1,2) - how about this flow?? if you agree, take my code:)
   

   96,184,101007,6,0,B|72:128|96:72|96:72|112:104,1,150,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   176,230,101595,1,0,0:0:0:0:

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3. 02:35:320 (4) - move it on x351y74 for better ds with other stuffs and makes better square flow

• Clumsy

1. i dont understand where is clap?... i think clap gives better nice tempo for your map. I've put claps in >.>
2. 00:00:615 (1) - finish should be fit for this head. cause there is cymbals sound. ^_^
3. 00:13:164 (2) - i think its NC spot. I think you're right
4. 00:13:948 (1,2) - im not sure this 1/6 bit. i heard this on 50%and 25%. hmm.. i recomend that just 1/2 slider. :D
   
5. 00:43:948 (2) - hope you move it on x328y264 for makes same tempo with ds perfect .

that's it
hope this is helpful...

Frey wrote:

Why not the short version ;w; Wanted to do long version, because short is already ranked >.>

• General

1. For safety, you'd better remove ‘REFLEC BEAT colette -Winter-’ from Source. Because it's an extended ver, which doesn't exist in arcade Ok, moved source to tags
   
   Normal
   
2. 00:17:869 (1) - move it to x204 y336 to unify the ds
3. 00:20:222 (5) - unify the ds
4. 00:23:360 (5) - ↑
5. 00:29:438 (5) - ↑
6. 00:41:791 (4) - ↑
7. 00:50:418 (4) - ↑
8. 00:55:516 (1) - ↑
9. 00:59:830 (4) - ↑
10. 01:01:399 (8) - ↑
11. 01:10:026 (5) - ↑ I get what you mean. I'll turn grid snap off and snap everything perfectly done...finally
    ....Stop there, I want to make sure that you are not on purpose to do things as above. If you are not, plz check your note one by one with DS 0.9 on.
12. 03:46:497 (5) - DS to avoid confusing stack There is nothing stacked here?
    
    Hard
    
13. 00:34:928 (4,1) - stack would be better Yep
14. 02:33:948 (5) - Ctrl+g? I know what you're getting at here. I didn't Ctrl+G, but I moved it away so its less awkward

Sorry for short mod, take my star

salinqi wrote:

Hi~ Some personal suggestions,feel free to fix it or not

[Hard]
01:17:477 (1,2,3,4) - imo it would look better if you adjust the location and angle of 2 slightly. like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3146848 and 2,3,4 will be in ds consistency then Personally I don't like cramped 1/2 slider shapes like that. However, I did fix the inconsistent DS
02:57:477 (5,1) - improve blanket Fix
03:00:222 (3,4,5) - ds inconsistency .also 03:00:614 (4,5,1) - ew. fixed
03:24:536 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? ok, nice zig zag there
03:28:458 (3,4,5,6) - not a perfect square derp
03:31:791 (4) - I would prefer stack it to 3 Ok.
03:32:379 (1,3) - I'm afraid this overlap looks bad,try to space them out? I think I was drugged when I did that >.>
03:37:869 (3,1) - improve blanket yep
04:11:203 (5) - too close to 3 and 4 >.> thanks

[Clumsy]
00:32:575 (3,4) - not so good-looking..this overlap .00:51:399 (2,3) - this is way better ok
00:36:693 (1,2) - why not blanket here That part is meant to be just distance spaced from end (it also forms triangle ^_^)
01:04:144 (3,4) - ^ same reasons
01:27:281 (3) - move it further from 2 ok
02:37:477 (1,3) - blanket? nah
02:57:869 (1,4) - ^ damn that's disgraceful >.> thank you
04:07:085 (1,2,3) - ds inconsistency fix
04:11:595 (1) - I would suggest Ctrl+G as it starts at a strong beat but it's too close to 04:11:399 (4) - .increase distance to stress it yep
04:25:124 (2,3) - blanket? no. wasn't going for blanket there


I love this song very much!Thanks for making a full version Good luck!Hope it rank soon~ Thank you so much ^_^

Frey wrote:

Based on example of http://osu.ppy.sh/s/173288

I recommend you to add REFLEC BEAT as source (Do not add colette -Winter-, cuz this song doesn't exist in arcade, but it's relative)

1. 00:08:458 (1) - This NC strikes me as odd. To keep the NC consistent with the rest of the difficulty it wouldn't be needed.
2. 00:38:262 (4) - Ctrl + J unless your trying to avoid something that'd be more common, which you probably are.
3. 01:21:399 (5,6,1) - nit-picky stuff but bending #5 like you did #6 would like neater as a group.

Gleipnir wrote:

No KDs

Normal

1. 00:08:458 (1) - This NC strikes me as odd. To keep the NC consistent with the rest of the difficulty it wouldn't be needed. Indeed I put one here without being needed.
2. 00:38:262 (4) - Ctrl + J unless your trying to avoid something that'd be more common, which you probably are. No reason not too I guess >.>
3. 01:21:399 (5,6,1) - nit-picky stuff but bending #5 like you did #6 would like neater as a group. Fix

Sorry. So I can't really test an insane that well at the moment because I recently discovered I have Tendonitis in my left hand. I was trying to mod it but I definitely couldn't spot many things without actually being able to play the map.

Please message me back whenever you remap the hard and easy, hopefully by then I can mod the entire mapset with a hand that doesn't kill (It's gotten a bit better so I may just comeback even before that) Ok

btw on Clumsy
02:58:164 (3,4) - Um ._. Don't ask...was blanketing...

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, M4M as we discussed ^w^

[> General <]

1. - The custom hitsound soft-hitclap2 and soft-slidetick2 has some weird soundings on the near end... sth like a hi-hat idk, but makes it sound a little weird when using to hit objects. I can't fix this without ruining the audio. I can't find a good replacement clap sound either. I used it from another mapset, so it should be fine
2. - The breaktime on 01:56:203 - is REAAALLY long, approx 20 seconds... players might not be able to wait that long. I suggest you could continue mapping on 02:07:673 - . Will fix
3. - Inconsistent hitsounding through all diffs, or is it WIP? If you could tell me where exactly these are, I can fix them
4. - Fine!

[> Easy <]

1. 00:11:203 (2) - I prefer this circle should be above than here to smoothen the flow, somewhere on x:376|y:132 or nearby.
2. 00:13:164 (1) - Maybe you could remake this slider as 1/1 slider and adding a circle next to it for emphasize much more to the song track. Might improve rhythm~
3. 00:21:007 (1,2) - I feel this flow broke a little bit, since the circle is behind where the slider is positioned. It's not broken much, it's just a little... There's no overlap on my end
4. 00:35:909 (4) - Well, i prefer this slider should be curved. Just to improve some aesthetics on sliders. not needed, also next slider is curved, so variation
5. 00:42:967 (1) - Kinda minor, but try curving the slider's second curve for some symmetry. Tried my best
6. 00:53:948 (3) - Almost the same as 00:35:909 (4) - Same reasons (here it goes curved, straight, curved)
7. 00:58:262 (4) - I think you can improve the flow much here than the current one you have. Try moving this circle, for example, nearby x:104|y:352 to flow the pattern smoother. Instead of stack in easy diff, might be a little unnoticeable to beginners. Watch the spacing too.
8. 01:29:242 (2,3) - What kind of flow is this?! Probably slider (3)'s red anchor doesn't follow any of the song tracks, or either a simple rhythm imo. lol idek
9. 01:32:379 (2,3) - Try to even out the spacing here, since circle (3) is a little close to slider (2)'s border, would be a tiny overlap in my view...again fine on my end. maybe the skin or something...
10. 01:50:418 (1,2) - Same as above. Definitely that one
11. 01:55:124 - Err on this part, you've added an NC on Hard and Clumsy diff. Why not on Easy and Normal as well? Kinda inconsistent throughout every diffs. Ahh, because on Easy and Normal I do NCs less. Forgot about this one
12. 02:39:830 (4,1) - Hmm recorrect blanket?
13. 02:48:458 (3) - Ctrl + J this slider? The flow is almost the same as on 00:21:007 (1,2) -. So yeah, think about it... why not
14. 03:11:595 (2) - Move somewhere to x:48|y:248 or nearby? Try to summarize the flow for a bit on some of your patterns.
15. 03:36:301 (2,3) - Replace these as one slider? The rhythm would sound better imo. not necessary. I like having circles there
16. 04:20:222 (4,5) - Same as above.
17. - The diff is fine, but you'll just need some checking over your flows. Few are kinda breaking because of circles behind slider tails/almost tiny-overlapping or w/e... But i think, it's not a big deal ;p okee

[> Normal <]

1. 00:04:144 (2) - Ehh, same as previous diff, i prefer this slider curved. But hey, you could've made a good blanket here.
2. 00:16:301 (4) - How about moving this slider's tail to x:384|y:132 or nearby? Might improve the flow really huge~ the slider is already sitting on that
3. 00:20:222 (5,1) - How about a parallel here with (5)'s tail and (1)? DS issue. I got lazy and just made it curve
4. 00:25:713 (3) - I guess you added NC on this part over other diffs, why not here as well? ofc, for consistency.
5. 00:32:379 (5,6) - Uhhh why this overlap... ? There are overlaps in other spots. I don't see this one as being a problem, considering it overlapping very little of the next slider
6. 00:49:634 (2) - I wonder if you could curve this slider below instead of above, like Ctrl + G>H>J e.g.
7. 00:55:516 (1,2) - Likely minor, but maybe a little blanket here, at least? it already almost is lol
8. 01:01:791 (1,2) - Idk, but recorrect blanket lol
9. 01:30:811 (7,1) - ^
10. 01:38:262 (1) - Maybe, this should be stacked on the slider tail instead of head... just my opinion. not really gamechanging
11. 01:44:536 (2,3) - Wow, this blanket...
12. 01:49:242 (5,6) - Replace this to 1/2 slider, alike 01:48:850 (4) - ?
13. 02:21:744 - Why doul you ignore the intense beat here? You've added notes/downbeat notes here, but why not in this diff? quite inconsistent.
14. 02:26:497 (3,4) - This overlap is a little off, try rearrange slider (3) curved on the right.
15. 02:37:477 (1,2,3) - This pattern is kinda odd to me, but idk... looks ok
16. 03:05:713 (1) - I highly recommend that this kind of slider is NOT allowed on Easy/Normal diffs. Because the self-overlapping tail on it's own body might be very complex for new players to notice. Probably they might not be able to play very well with this. So ehh, reconsider this.
17. 03:11:595 (3,4) - The rhythm feels a little off-beat to me, so maybe you could Ctrl + G the rhythm instead of downbeat.
18. 04:14:495 - This Inherited point is unused, remove it? If you're talking about the nearest one, it's for the hitsounds
19. - Err same comment as previous diff, but likely more than that.

[> Hard <]

1. 00:01:399 (3) - Curve this above?
2. 00:18:556 - I think this part is kinda worth a circle, because that little whistle sound on the song track can probably be heard.
3. 00:22:183 (5,1,2) - I prefer a jump should be between (5) and (1), not (1) and (2).
4. 00:38:654 (2,3) - Idk, but recorrect blanket here.
5. 00:41:399 (1) - The vocal here sounds pretty worth for 1/2 repeated slider, so fill out that rhythm?
6. 00:50:222 (6,7,8) - Pattern is fine, but what's with the spacing coming out so sudden? The song track may didn't ask for it.
7. 00:52:379 (1,2) - Hey, how about a symmetry here? might improve flow/slider aesthetics imo.
8. 00:57:673 (2,3) - Recorrect blanket, or sth else?
9. 01:07:673 (2,3,1) - I can see very close that the notes isn't perfectly stacked yet. Maybe try to check that out? auto stack, should be good
10. 01:18:065 (2,3,4) - Almost the same as 00:50:222 (6,7,8) -, how about balancing them for consistency?
11. 01:44:144 (1,3) - If it's really true you're overlapping (1) and (3) on purpose, then what's the case?
12. - Ehh, there are more similar issues as above mods. I guess you could find them on your own(to avoid huge mods).
13. 02:44:928 (6,7,1) - Same as 00:22:183 (5,1,2) -
14. 02:45:713 (2,3,4) - Try a triangle formation here ;A;
15. 03:39:438 (3,1) - Recorrect blanket? idk
16. 03:47:876 - Unused inherited point, remove? no it's used
17. 04:05:320 (1,2,3) - Why a sudden jump here? You should probably balance the DS here...
18. 04:11:399 (6,1) - Move to x:44|y:268 or closer for one, perfect, diamond formation? Watch the spacing too.
19. - Good diff, but some DS and few patterns need a small-time check. But still, seems fine to me gg.

Sorry if my mod is kinda... big, lol

Uhmm, i guess it's enough for me, i'm tired e_e
Anyway, nice song~ Good Luck with it :3/

1. 00:10:026 (1) - Might be in the Timing Setup Panel instead of S:C3 put S:C5,to in the middle of the slider was clap?
2. 00:11:203 (2) - Here, too, try to put the clap
3. 00:24:144 (1,2) - 2 the circle a little bit to push from the slider 1,because the distance is too small.
4. 01:09:634 (3,4) - 4 the circle a little bit to push from the slider 3,because the distance is too small.
5. 02:33:556 (3,1) - 1 slider a little bit to push from the slider 3,because the distance is too small.

1. 00:50:222 (6,7) - try ctrl+G,just a suggestion
2. 04:03:752 (1,2) - 2 slider a little bit to push from the slider 1,because the distance is too small.
3. 04:08:262 (6,1) - 1 slider a little bit to push from the circle 6,because the distance is too small.
4. 04:08:458 (1,2) - 2 the circle a little bit to push from the slider 1,because the distance is too small.

1. 03:21:987 (2) put on x:400 y:104,to was a blanket

Chamue wrote:

From M4M

Easy

1. 00:10:026 (1) - Might be in the Timing Setup Panel instead of S:C3 put S:C5,to in the middle of the slider was clap?
2. 00:11:203 (2) - Here, too, try to put the clap Forgot about these. Thanks
3. 00:24:144 (1,2) - 2 the circle a little bit to push from the slider 1,because the distance is too small.
4. 01:09:634 (3,4) - 4 the circle a little bit to push from the slider 3,because the distance is too small.
5. 02:33:556 (3,1) - 1 slider a little bit to push from the slider 3,because the distance is too small. Fixed all

Hard

1. 00:50:222 (6,7) - try ctrl+G,just a suggestion I don't think it needs to be jump here
2. 04:03:752 (1,2) - 2 slider a little bit to push from the slider 1,because the distance is too small.
3. 04:08:262 (6,1) - 1 slider a little bit to push from the circle 6,because the distance is too small.
4. 04:08:458 (1,2) - 2 the circle a little bit to push from the slider 1,because the distance is too small. Fixed all

Insane

1. 03:21:987 (2) put on x:400 y:104,to was a blanket Done

Awesome map! I give a star.Waiting for Ranking <3