1. onidominator (4,6 stars, 2714 notes)

FlamingRok wrote:

Hello, from the modding queue. You were next on the priority list, so I'll be modding this map now.

d=don
k=kat
D=large don
K=large kat

[General]
Okay, before I can even get to work onto modding the map, I must request you to check your AiMod and fix almost everything. Re-snap all your un-snapped objects and re-snap the kiai end that is un-snapped. Disable the countdown and letterboxing in your beatmap as well, as these are not permitted in Taiko. Once these issues are fixed, I will edit this post and mod your map.

Genocide wrote:

[*]Marathon - Auto Accept

Genocide wrote:

jadi aku simple mod dulu yauuuwwww ( yang simple detect problem dlu )

Diffnamenya : OniDominator aja biar kerenz maz :v
[Overlap issue]
agak masih ragu sih, tp aku bisa maenin nya pas di HD
02:49:178 - SVnya tuh langung drop drastis coba di ganti kyk gini http://puu.sh/gkvGK/8e50f720d2.png
jngan diganti dlu, tunggu orng mod bagi ini dlu ya, cuma masih kasih saran dlu.

[Mod]
04:42:558 - Timing -> Set current preview point http://puu.sh/gj3CG/bfb1c367cc.png
04:44:319 - kiainya disini
05:09:698 - Hapus green line nya terus kasih 05:09:671 - 65% volumenya
04:44:319 - bagian sini sampai 05:07:769 - agak repetitive, jadi diffnya itu agak jelek imo, coba di inspirasikan lagi seperti kdk k dkd atau kkd d kdk ddk dan yang lain.
01:06:819 (54) - delete, gk ada suara disitu mw pun didpn maupun belakang, klo gk kuat lambaikan tangan
01:32:488 (1) - delete , masih ada suara loh disitu
05:04:178 - pasang 1/4 stream nonstop sampe 05:07:664 - buat mempercantik isi diffnya
08:58:685 - big kat disini, semenjak ada kelonceng itu
09:31:431 (236) - kat priority emphasis ?
10:09:670 (152,153) - kat?
10:28:473 (38) - kat buat ngebedain pattern biar gk terlalu repetitive imo

Patternnya cukup repetitive coba diselfmod nnti abis beres check modnya
jadi contoh yang ini 04:44:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ddk d k ddk d k -> ddk k d dkk k k buat empasis

well overall, diffnya bagus, dan sangat bagus! good job nishi-chan~
tapi, seperti yang tadi aku ksh tau patternya cukup repetitive jadinya pemain bisa tutup mata sambil maenin nya loh so, try to self-mod, cari pattern lain lagi yang enak buat lagu ini.

That's all!
Good luck

Genocide wrote:

tapi, seperti yang tadi aku ksh tau patternya cukup repetitive jadinya pemain bisa tutup mata sambil maenin nya loh so, try to self-mod, cari pattern lain lagi yang enak buat lagu ini.

Genocide wrote:

tapi, seperti yang tadi aku ksh tau patternya cukup repetitive jadinya pemain bisa tutup mata sambil maenin nya loh so, try to self-mod, cari pattern lain lagi yang enak buat lagu ini.

Genocide wrote:

"Cuma gk suka aja" orz klo mw repetitive yaudah klo gk yaudah, gw cuma ksh tau doang yang gw kurang suka.
Klo mw diganti silahkan kalau gk silahkan. balik lagi ke mapper.

sekali lagi. gw cuma ngeluarin pattern yang gw gk kurang suka.

"cari pattern lain lagi yang enak buat lagu ini." Kalau itu mau bagus, engga pun bagus, Mod gw gk ngeforce keMapper so dont bait.
klo lu bilng bukan termasuk bait yasudah, klo lu mw ngebait yasudah.

FlamingRok wrote:

mod

Hello, from my priority modding queue. First off, I'd like to apologize for the lateness of my mod, and the fact that I am not good at modding an Oni difficulty might've added to the lateness. Also, remember that the following are all suggestions, and don't have to be implemented if you don't want to do so. But with that stated, let us begin!

d=don
k=kat
D=large don
K=large kat

[onidominator]
00:56:783 (10) (11) (12) Change this run from kkk to ddd to match the piano.
01:09:037 (5) (6) (7) Change this run from kkd to dkd to match the piano.
01:23:826 (11) Change to a d.
01:28:474 (31) ^
01:29:741 (37) ^
01:55:940 (21) Change to a k.
01:57:207 (30) ^
02:23:616 (214) ^
02:30:799 (262) ^ to match the piano.
02:37:137 (298) Change to a k.
02:37:982 (303) Change to a d to match the piano.
02:28:404 (305) Change to a k.
02:50:869 (368) (369) (370) Change this run from kkd to kdk.
02:51:503 (371) Change to a k.
02:55:728 (382) (383) (384) Change this set from k k d to d d k.
03:06:292 (413) Change to a k.
03:21:925 (489) ^
03:23:193 (496) ^
03:28:686 (533) ^
03:35:447 (575) Change to a k (the "^" symbol gets tedious after a little, gotta have some actual text in between).
03:36:079 (580) ^
03:36:713 (584) ^
03:38:403 (596) (597) (598) (599) (600) Change this run from ddddk to ddkdd to hit the piano note in the middle.
03:42:207 (626) Change to a k.
03:42:840 (631) ^
03:43:475 (635) ^
03:50:657 (680) (681) (682) (683) (684) (685) (686)

I feel that this run fits the pitches of the violin better than the previous one.
03:58:052 (727) Change to a d.
03:58:369 (730) ^
04:04:320 (767) Change to a k to match the violin.
04:04:740 (770) ^
04:06:925 (784) Change to a d.
04:07:348 (786) Change to a k.
04:15:165 (816) (817) (818) Change this set from d k d to k d k.
04:18:756 (831) Change to a d.
04:21:925 (842) (843) (844) See 04:15:165 (816) (817) (818) .
04:27:418 (866) Change to a k.
04:31:855 (890) (891) (892) (893) Change this run from kddd to kkkd.
04:38:616 (926) Change to a k.
04:44:319 (969) Change to a D, to put emphasis onto the new section.
04:44:954 (4) Change to a k.
04:51:713 (44) ^
04:52:982 (51) ^
04:56:889 (75) Change to a d.
05:57:207 (77) ^
04:57:630 (80) ^
04:57:841 (81) Change to a k.
04:59:108 (89) ^
05:05:235 (127) ^
05:15:798 (26) ^
05:29:319 (102) (103) (104) (105) Change this run from kddk to kkdd.
06:53:403 (55) Change this to a d.
06:55:939 (65) ^
09:02:065 (1) Change to a k.
09:03:332 (13) ^
09:03:966 (17) ^
09:22:135 (167) ^
09:59:530 (530) ^ to match the violin.
10:11:361 (162) ^
10:19:881 (287) ^
10:50:023 (7) Change to a k.
10:50:128 Add a k here.

Overall, I really enjoy this map, and especially love how you handled the slow sections of the map. I hope this gets ranked in the future!

Senritsu wrote:

edit : nishi maaf tritmu jadi bahan diskusi gini D:

Lightning Wyvern wrote:

uhh I'm going to cry

irc mod

13:20 Nishizumi: hai beb..
13:20 Lightning Wyvern: .....hai
13:20 Nishizumi: kamu bisa ngemod kan ?
13:24 Lightning Wyvern: iya
13:24 Lightning Wyvern: kenapa emang ? ``
13:25 Nishizumi: mau mod map aku ga ?
13:25 *Nishizumi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/640739 Taishi - worldenddominator (VW3 Ending Edit)]
13:25 Nishizumi: marathon orz
13:30 Lightning Wyvern: irc mod ya beb ? ;;
13:32 Nishizumi: maksudnya ??
13:32 Lightning Wyvern: iya bukan mod yang di post di forum :<
13:33 *Lightning Wyvern is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/640739 Taishi - worldenddominator (VW3 Ending Edit)]
13:33 Nishizumi: maksudnya gimana ? belum paham :/
13:33 Lightning Wyvern: aku testplay dulu ya ? ``
13:33 Lightning Wyvern: irc mod itu mod langsung lewat chat
13:33 Nishizumi: oke
13:33 Nishizumi: ooh
13:33 Nishizumi: terserah kamu
13:39 Lightning Wyvern: bentar beb bentar
13:39 Nishizumi: oke
13:45 Lightning Wyvern: tbh mapnya bagus kok <3
13:45 Lightning Wyvern: tapi tadi aku ngerasa ada yang seharus nya kat karna pitch nya tinggi tapi kamu kasih don sih
13:45 Nishizumi: <3
13:46 Nishizumi: bagian mana
13:46 Lightning Wyvern: bentar aku cek dulu :<
13:46 *Lightning Wyvern is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/640739 Taishi - worldenddominator (VW3 Ending Edit) [onidominator]]
13:47 Nishizumi: oke
13:47 Nishizumi: btw kenapa ga mod di forum aja ? :/
13:47 Lightning Wyvern: ribet :<
13:47 Lightning Wyvern: enak gini ntar tinggal copas chatlognya ``
13:47 Nishizumi: trus abis di copas ?
13:48 Lightning Wyvern: ya di kasih kudosu kalo mod nya bermanfaat
13:48 Lightning Wyvern: kalo ngga yowes ``/
13:48 Lightning Wyvern: toh aku ngemod ga maksa minta kudos kok akwakwa
13:48 Nishizumi: tapi aku maksa kamu :3
13:48 Lightning Wyvern: :<
13:49 Lightning Wyvern: 00:47:910 - itu ganti kat deh
13:49 Lightning Wyvern: pitch nya ninggi gitu mending di ganti :<
13:50 Lightning Wyvern: beb ? :<
13:50 Nishizumi: kayaknya lebih pas don deh =_=
13:50 Nishizumi: apa ?
13:50 Lightning Wyvern: kamu latereply hiks
13:51 Lightning Wyvern: ya namanya mod itu kan tergantung pendapat masing2 :<
13:51 Lightning Wyvern: eh eh
13:51 Lightning Wyvern: salah akwkawa
13:51 Lightning Wyvern: 00:47:910 - disitu yang dikasih kat mendingan
13:51 Lightning Wyvern: 00:47:699 -
13:51 Lightning Wyvern: duh
13:51 Lightning Wyvern: yang bawah
13:52 Nishizumi: maaf
13:52 Nishizumi: iya aku tau
13:52 Lightning Wyvern: udah di ganti ? :<
13:52 Lightning Wyvern: kalo gamau diganti sih gapapa terserah kamu kok <3
13:52 Nishizumi: itu pas sih, tapi aku pengennya bervariasi aja `-`
13:52 Lightning Wyvern: iya makanya dikasih kat disitu :<
13:53 Nishizumi: post di forum dong :<
13:53 Lightning Wyvern: cape beb :<
13:53 Lightning Wyvern: enakan gini
13:53 Lightning Wyvern: 00:49:600 - k 00:49:812 - d ?
13:53 Lightning Wyvern: keknya lebih enak kek gitu nadanya imo
13:54 Nishizumi: biar SP map aku nambah juga lol *digebukin
13:54 Lightning Wyvern: lah mana ngaruh :<
13:54 Nishizumi: ngaruhhh
13:54 Lightning Wyvern: eh eh enakan gini deh
13:55 Nishizumi: duh 00:49:812- pas sih dikasih d, tapi circle 38nya juga harus d :<
13:55 Lightning Wyvern: 00:48:755 - d00:49:178 - k00:49:389 - d
13:57 Lightning Wyvern: ikutin yang di &+^ deh beb ``
13:57 Nishizumi: yang 00:48:755- aku ganti
13:58 Lightning Wyvern: okeh
13:58 Lightning Wyvern: lanjut ya
13:58 Nishizumi: trus 00:48:967- aku ganti kat
13:58 Nishizumi: lebih cocok gitu imo
13:58 Lightning Wyvern: 00:52:769 - itu mending diganti slider deh daripada spinner ? :<
14:00 Nishizumi: orz aku coba, malah ga cocok =_=
14:00 Nishizumi: soalnya lebih cocok ke "asal tekan" bagian situ
14:00 Lightning Wyvern: iya makanya dipakein slider (?) :<
14:01 Nishizumi: ga cocok :<
14:01 Lightning Wyvern: yaudah iya iya :<
14:02 Nishizumi: wkwkwk jangan marah ya beb :<
14:02 Nishizumi: ntar aku malah di ignore lagi
14:02 Lightning Wyvern: lah ngga ga marah kok :'<
14:02 Lightning Wyvern: 01:02:910 - itu ga d aja ? `
14:02 Lightning Wyvern: ``
14:03 Nishizumi: hem boleh juga
14:03 Nishizumi: changed
14:04 Lightning Wyvern: 01:06:079 - d ?
14:05 Lightning Wyvern: terus 01:06:291 - k
14:05 Lightning Wyvern: yang 01:06:291 - galau sih gajelas juga harus k ato d hiks
14:05 Nishizumi: malah ga nyambung kalo k di bagian 291
14:06 Nishizumi: soalnya suaranya kecil gitu, ga enak kalo pake :/
14:06 Lightning Wyvern: iya makanya aku sendiri juga gatau itu d ato k :<
14:06 Lightning Wyvern: 01:06:079 - tapi itu enakan dikasih d karna pitch nya rendah
14:08 Nishizumi: malah menurut aku disitu ada bagian sedikit naik gitu
14:08 Lightning Wyvern: 01:06:819 - delete ? :<
14:08 Lightning Wyvern: maksa banget tadi pas main harus neken itu hiks
14:09 Nishizumi: baru 2 orang aja yang bilang bagian situ harus dihapus wkwkwkw
14:09 Nishizumi: aku pasang dulu untuk sementara, buat surver lol
14:10 Nishizumi: *survey
14:10 Lightning Wyvern: lah memang seharusnya dihapus :<<<
14:10 Nishizumi: bagian situ nyambung tapi maksa :<
14:11 Lightning Wyvern: nah iya maksnya itu :<
14:11 Lightning Wyvern: kalo ngge dipindah ke 01:06:713 - situ
14:12 Nishizumi: malah aneh kalo dipindah kesitu wkwkkw
14:12 Lightning Wyvern: cocok deh beb perasaan :<
14:13 Nishizumi: malah kecepetan, ga pas sama lagunya :<
14:14 Lightning Wyvern: 01:09:037 (5,6,7) - ganti ke kdk ? :<
14:16 Nishizumi: hm bagian 5 sama 7 ga cocok kalo dikasih k =_=
14:16 Lightning Wyvern: 01:09:143 - itu aja dikasih d deh :<
14:18 Nishizumi: hem boleh juga
14:18 Nishizumi: tapi aku tahan dulu deh, pake k dulu di bagian (6)
14:18 Lightning Wyvern: okeh ``/
14:19 Lightning Wyvern: 01:10:410 - itu d :<
14:20 Nishizumi: masa ga pas menurutku :/
14:21 Lightning Wyvern: 01:10:305 (11,12,13) - ganti jadi dkd deh :<
14:21 Nishizumi: ga cocok juga menurut pendengaranku =_=
14:21 Nishizumi: aaaaa ;__;
14:22 Lightning Wyvern: idih :<
14:23 Lightning Wyvern: 01:23:192 - itu di delete ? :<
14:23 Nishizumi: masa kita ga cocok mulu ya :<
14:23 Nishizumi: keseringan
14:24 Nishizumi: ngga
14:24 Nishizumi: jadi begini
14:24 Nishizumi: awal" aku buat cuma setengah" doang
14:24 Lightning Wyvern: terus ? ``
14:24 Nishizumi: ada berenti"nya lebih banyak
14:25 Nishizumi: dibanding bagian 01:21:924
14:26 Lightning Wyvern: 01:23:403 - itu d ? :<
14:27 Nishizumi: jadi aku terinspirasi sama map ini :/
14:27 *Nishizumi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/326926 Taishi - goldenslaughterer(Taishi's VW2 Edit)]
14:27 Lightning Wyvern: :<
14:27 Lightning Wyvern: 01:31:854 - k ? :<
14:28 Nishizumi: ^nah pas
14:28 Lightning Wyvern: idih :<<<
14:29 Lightning Wyvern: AKU DAPET GUNGNIR DI VC AHAHAHAHAHAHA /plak
14:29 Nishizumi: 01:31:643- aku ganti don
14:29 Nishizumi: =_=
14:29 Nishizumi: btw add vc dong beb
14:29 Lightning Wyvern: 01:42:629 - d ? :<
14:29 Lightning Wyvern: add aku aja 8wxj2
14:31 Nishizumi: hmm pas...
14:31 Nishizumi: changed
14:31 Nishizumi: 01:43:051 aku ganti k
14:31 Nishizumi: lupa (-) =_=
14:32 Lightning Wyvern: kopas ulang gih :<
14:32 Nishizumi: 01:43:051-
14:32 Lightning Wyvern: ga keluar link nya--
14:32 Nishizumi: 01:43:051 -
14:33 Nishizumi: kopas apanya
14:33 Lightning Wyvern: okeh2
14:33 Lightning Wyvern: ctrl c + v loh beb
14:34 Lightning Wyvern: 01:55:093 - ini di kasih 1/6 kkkd keknya enak deh :<
14:34 Nishizumi: yang ku copas apa maksudnya =_=
14:34 Nishizumi: tadinya mau aku kasih 1/6, ntar takutnya kesusahan
14:34 Nishizumi: apalagi kalo di DT
14:35 Lightning Wyvern: gapapa kok, cocok itu
14:35 Lightning Wyvern: copastimingnya dih :<
14:36 Nishizumi: ok, aku coba
14:36 Nishizumi: timing bagian mana ? ga paham :/
14:37 Lightning Wyvern: lupain deh gajadi :<<<
14:38 Nishizumi: ..... okay :////////
14:38 Lightning Wyvern: 02:06:079 - k ? :<
14:39 Nishizumi: no, pengen bikin nada sendiri yang patternnya kaya begitu :3
14:40 Lightning Wyvern: :<
14:40 Nishizumi: ga mau ngikutin lagu mulu, sekali" bikin sendiri :]
14:41 Lightning Wyvern: 02:16:749 (172,173) - ganti kd ? :<
14:44 Lightning Wyvern: bb tadi dc hiks
14:44 Lightning Wyvern: 02:16:749 (172,173) - itu ganti ke kd ? :<
14:45 Nishizumi: bagian situ aku ganti ddkkkkd deh
14:46 Lightning Wyvern: okeh
14:46 Lightning Wyvern: 02:18:122 - d ?
14:47 Nishizumi: lebih cocok k menurutku :]
14:48 Lightning Wyvern: ih anjir beb jangan pake emot itu bikin serem :<
14:48 Nishizumi: :]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
14:48 Lightning Wyvern: :<<<<<<<<<<<<<
14:48 Lightning Wyvern: 02:19:813 (190,191,192,193,194) - ganti jadi dkddk lebih cocok deh ``
14:49 Nishizumi: ^bagus
14:51 Lightning Wyvern: 02:21:503 (201,202,203,204,205) - ganti jadi kkkdk deh ``
14:52 Nishizumi: ^changed
14:53 Lightning Wyvern: 02:26:362 (232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - jadi dddkddk ? :<
14:55 Nishizumi: pas sih
14:55 Nishizumi: bingung antara ddkdddk atau dddkddk =_=
14:55 Lightning Wyvern: terserah feeling kamu aja beb <3
14:57 Nishizumi: ;__;
15:01 Lightning Wyvern: sbb abis main vc ;;
15:02 Lightning Wyvern: 02:28:052 (244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - itu ddkdddk baru enaknya :<
15:02 Nishizumi: beb ntar post diforum ya :]]]]
15:03 Lightning Wyvern: iyalah pasti dipost kok :<
15:03 Lightning Wyvern: 02:30:587 (261,262) - diganti jadi d d aja ? :<
15:04 Nishizumi: oke :3
15:04 Nishizumi: ga cocok d d
15:05 Nishizumi: soalnya bagian situ kaya tinggi gitu
15:06 Lightning Wyvern: 03:00:799 (396,397,398) - itu d d k ? :<
15:06 Lightning Wyvern: pitch nya kedengeran dari rendah ke tinggi gitu
15:07 Nishizumi: aku malah kebalikannya wkwkwk
15:09 Lightning Wyvern: :<
15:09 Lightning Wyvern: <abis main vc
15:10 Nishizumi: <sambil main vc
15:11 Lightning Wyvern: dari 03:13:474 - sampe 03:13:474 - keknya enak dikasih stream dddddd terus deh ``
15:12 Nishizumi: sampe mana
15:12 Lightning Wyvern: eh iya awkakwakw
15:12 Lightning Wyvern: 03:16:537 -
15:13 Nishizumi: eh terlalu maksa menurutku =_=
15:13 Lightning Wyvern: ya terserah juga sih, tapi ga ada stream 1 warna jadi kurang imana gitu :<
15:14 Nishizumi: kayaknya yang kkkd 1/6 di bagian 01:55:402 - aku batalin deh
15:14 Nishizumi: terlalu susah imo
15:14 Lightning Wyvern: 03:14:953 - kalo ngga darisitu mulainya
15:14 Lightning Wyvern: lah ga susah kok :<
15:14 Nishizumi: bukannya udah banyak stream satu warna di map ini
15:14 Lightning Wyvern: ngga maksudnya stream ddddddddddddddddddddddddddk gitu
15:14 Nishizumi: kalo di DT in
15:15 Lightning Wyvern: kalo ngga 1/6nya jadi kkd aja
15:15 Lightning Wyvern: gausah kkkd
15:15 Nishizumi: ya emang kkd awalnya :/
15:15 Lightning Wyvern: lah--
15:16 Lightning Wyvern: 03:17:699 - itu
15:16 Lightning Wyvern: big kats
15:16 Lightning Wyvern: pls
15:16 Lightning Wyvern: ;;
15:17 Nishizumi: HAHAHAHA
15:17 Nishizumi: emang kenapa
15:17 Lightning Wyvern: MASA DARI AWAL SAMPE AKHIR GA ADA BIG NOTES NYA :<<<<<
15:17 Lightning Wyvern: KASIH 1 LAH DISITU
15:18 Nishizumi: btw kok susah ya cari modder marathon :/ tapi NM
15:18 Nishizumi: aku benci big note
15:18 Lightning Wyvern: NM ? ``
15:18 Nishizumi: ok lupakan
15:18 Nishizumi: normal mod
15:18 Lightning Wyvern: no mod ? akwkwawa
15:18 Nishizumi: ga mod for mod (saling mod)
15:18 Nishizumi: =_=
15:19 Lightning Wyvern: ntar kalo udah terkenal juga aku cuma mau nerima M4M ))))) /gak/
15:19 Lightning Wyvern: ya bayangin aja aku ngemod ini dari jam berapa tadi
15:19 Lightning Wyvern: baru 1/3 nya
15:19 Nishizumi: pasti :/
15:19 Lightning Wyvern: awkakwakwakwa
15:19 Nishizumi: wkwkwkw maap ya
15:19 Lightning Wyvern: iya gapapa kok emang lagi ga ada kerjaan di kampus juga ;;
15:20 Lightning Wyvern: eh iya kalo ngga
15:20 Lightning Wyvern: 03:17:699 - jadi kkk 1/6 gitu
15:20 Lightning Wyvern: pas deh
15:20 Lightning Wyvern: kalo ngga 1/6 kkd /ddk / kdk
15:20 Nishizumi: kalo ga cukup hari ini, simpen buat besoknya. trus setoran ke aku *ditampar
15:20 Lightning Wyvern: 1/6 cocok disitu keknya ``
15:21 Lightning Wyvern: lah selesaiin hari ini aja lah :<
15:21 Nishizumi: ah ga mau, bagian situ biar aja sampe situ....
15:21 Lightning Wyvern: yaudah ganti jadi big kats :'<
15:22 Nishizumi: buat penjeda aja
15:22 Nishizumi: aku ga mau yang terlalu susah, apalagi di DT in ;_;
15:22 Lightning Wyvern: idih
15:22 Lightning Wyvern: bilang aja kamu ngemap
15:22 Nishizumi: ini aja kalo di DT udah 6 stars ;_;
15:22 Lightning Wyvern: supaya star rating nya gede
15:22 Lightning Wyvern: terus bisa kamu farm ppnya
15:22 Lightning Wyvern: iya kan ?
15:22 Lightning Wyvern: :<
15:22 Nishizumi: ini mau aku kecilin starnya beb
15:22 Nishizumi: :[
15:23 Lightning Wyvern: SEPIK :<<<<<
15:23 Nishizumi: tapi kamu daritadi rekomendasi lebih susah
15:23 Lightning Wyvern: gapapa
15:23 Lightning Wyvern: biar star ratingnya naek
15:23 Lightning Wyvern: terus bisa aku farm
15:23 Lightning Wyvern: <3
15:23 Nishizumi: kayak tadi, di 01:55:093 - ditambahin stream 1/6
15:23 Nishizumi: kan kejam buat DT/NC player
15:23 Lightning Wyvern: KAN BIAR STAR RATINGNYA GEDE :<<<<
15:24 Lightning Wyvern: ITUMAH GA KEJEM
15:24 Nishizumi: jangan gede"
15:24 Lightning Wyvern: AKU YANG JARANG NGEDT AJA BISA (kayaknya)
15:24 Nishizumi: ntar renatus kalah *ditampar
15:24 Lightning Wyvern: renatus mah tae ODnya ;;
15:24 Nishizumi: bisa fc ?
15:24 Lightning Wyvern: bisa A doang awkawkawkakwa
15:24 Lightning Wyvern: aku mana pernah niat main map marathon
15:24 Nishizumi: coba aja dulu fc in map goldenslaughterer
15:25 Nishizumi: yang star ratingnya lebih kecil daripada aku
15:25 Nishizumi: lol
15:25 Lightning Wyvern: golden yang mana tuh
15:25 Nishizumi: ooh baru tau
15:25 *Nishizumi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/326926 Taishi - goldenslaughterer(Taishi's VW2 Edit)]
15:25 Nishizumi: pake DT
15:25 Lightning Wyvern: ntar deh ya ``
15:25 Nishizumi: itu aja HD NC bisa 400 pp
15:25 Nishizumi: gimana map ini =_=
15:26 Lightning Wyvern: yaudah lanjut2 :<
15:26 Lightning Wyvern: 03:19:390 (472,473,474,475,476) - jadi kdkdk aja deh lebih enak ``
15:27 Nishizumi: ^changed
15:28 Lightning Wyvern: 03:20:868 - k ? :<
15:30 Nishizumi: ^cocok sih, tapi aku ga mau ganti
15:30 Lightning Wyvern: lah kenapa ? :<
15:30 Nishizumi: bosan dengan pattern ddk/kdd mulu :/
15:30 Lightning Wyvern: 03:28:579 - itu jadi k juga ? ``
15:30 Nishizumi: ddd juga pas menurutku
15:30 Lightning Wyvern: ya mau gimanalagi lagunya datar gitu :<
15:31 Nishizumi: 03:28:579 - changed
15:32 Nishizumi: bisa macem" sih, bervariasi
15:33 Lightning Wyvern: 03:29:531 (539,540,541) - ganti jadi k d d ? ``
15:33 Lightning Wyvern: itu pitchnya dari tinggi ke rendah
15:33 Lightning Wyvern: kedengeraannya (?)
15:34 Nishizumi: aku malah dengernya d d k
15:34 Nishizumi: abis itu streamnya aku ganti jadi dkddk
15:36 Lightning Wyvern: 03:35:658 (576,577,578,579,580,581,582) - dijadiin dkddddk aja ? :<
15:37 Nishizumi: ah nggak nyambung menurutku
15:37 Nishizumi: =_=
15:38 Lightning Wyvern: yaudah :<
15:38 Lightning Wyvern: 03:38:404 (596,597,598,599,600) - itu kok aneh ya ;;
15:38 Nishizumi: aneh kenapa
15:39 Lightning Wyvern: iya terkesan maksa gitu (?)
15:40 Lightning Wyvern: 04:13:685 (812,813) - big don sama kats itu pls
15:40 Lightning Wyvern: pls
15:40 *Lightning Wyvern nangis*
15:40 Nishizumi: tapi aku ga merasa kaya terkesan terpaksa gitu :b
15:40 Nishizumi: cukup di 04:13:896 - aja :b
15:41 Lightning Wyvern: cukup ? :<
15:41 Nishizumi: di bagian itu aja big note nya, di kat
15:43 Lightning Wyvern: 04:38:616 (926,927,928,929) - enaknya dddk ato kkkd gitu ``
15:44 Nishizumi: ^oke
15:45 Lightning Wyvern: 04:40:094 (935,936,937,938) - ngga big kats semua aja ? ``
15:46 Nishizumi: ga mau
15:46 Nishizumi: demen banget big note ya =_=
15:46 Lightning Wyvern: tapi cocok disitu beb :<<<
15:47 Lightning Wyvern: 04:40:940 (939,940,941,942,943) - itu
15:47 Lightning Wyvern: di 1/8
15:47 Lightning Wyvern: ato 1/6
15:47 Lightning Wyvern: galau
15:47 Lightning Wyvern: hiks
15:47 Lightning Wyvern: 1/6 dddddddk aja
15:47 Nishizumi: 1/6 ga bisa
15:47 Nishizumi: pernah aku coba, ga kuat
15:48 Nishizumi: overmapping (?)
15:48 Lightning Wyvern: halah bilang aja nanti gabisa kamu fcin :<
15:48 Lightning Wyvern: kalo ngga 1/4 aja
15:48 Lightning Wyvern: 1/3 kek gitu bikin pusiing tadi ;;
15:48 Nishizumi: ini aja aku belom bisa fc in
15:48 Lightning Wyvern: lah--
15:48 Nishizumi: dan ini juga belum tentu approved :/
15:48 Nishizumi: itu emang udah 1/4 beb
15:49 Lightning Wyvern: eh
15:49 Lightning Wyvern: masa sih
15:49 Lightning Wyvern: duh
15:49 Nishizumi: 04:40:940 - udah 1/4
15:49 Lightning Wyvern: mata pusing ;;
15:49 Nishizumi: atau aku salah ? soalnya ada beberapa yang aku tambahin circlenya
15:50 Lightning Wyvern: ntah :<
15:50 Lightning Wyvern: keknya itu selanjutnya 1/3 tapi aku kira 1/4 hiks
15:50 Lightning Wyvern: 05:41:220 - sampe sini aku liat sih ga ada masalah (?)
15:51 Lightning Wyvern: 06:13:051 - itu big don ? :<
15:51 Nishizumi: ga mau big don
15:51 Nishizumi: banyak tekanan kaya begitu dilagunya
15:51 Nishizumi: masa aku isiin big don semua (?)
15:52 Lightning Wyvern: iya cuma 1 note doang ish :<
15:52 Lightning Wyvern: kalo ngga pas lagi renggang2 gitu kamu naikin SVnya beb
15:52 Lightning Wyvern: biar star ratingnya nambah <3
15:52 Nishizumi: 06:33:333 - nih aku kasih big don
15:52 Nishizumi: jangan lah, biar istirahatnya enak
15:52 Lightning Wyvern: yaudah disitu juga cocok
15:52 Nishizumi: kalo mau star rating tinggi ya pake DT !!!!!!!!!!!
15:53 Nishizumi: belom tentu approved ini map :/
15:53 Lightning Wyvern: IYA BIAR MAKIN TINGGI STAR RATINGNYA SETELAH DI DT NANTI
15:53 Nishizumi: minim modder yang rela normal mod map ini :/
15:53 Lightning Wyvern: nahitu
15:53 Lightning Wyvern: aku mintain ke melo deh nanti kalo orangnya bersedia
15:53 Lightning Wyvern: 06:40:093 - itu SVnya pelanin deh akwakwakwa
15:54 Nishizumi: kamu ga bakal bisa fc in ini map + DT :b
15:54 Lightning Wyvern: BISA
15:54 Lightning Wyvern: BISA NANGIS
15:54 Nishizumi: eh, aku udah bilangin ke senritsu kok
15:54 *Lightning Wyvern nangis beneran*
15:54 Lightning Wyvern: terus kata orangnya ? ``
15:54 Nishizumi: mau dia
15:54 Lightning Wyvern: "ntar" gitu ga
15:54 Nishizumi: cek aja reply di thread map ini
15:55 Lightning Wyvern: oh okeh aku cek nanti ``/
15:55 Nishizumi: bagian 06:40:093 - pelanin ? kenapaa ?
15:55 Lightning Wyvern: biar asik aja (?)
15:55 Lightning Wyvern: itu juga enaknya big don sebenernya
15:55 Lightning Wyvern: tapi pasti ga kamu setujuin :<
15:55 Nishizumi: sumpah kalo SVnya 0.50 HDNC ga kebaca :/
15:55 Nishizumi: mana yang mau di big don ?
15:56 Lightning Wyvern: nahitu yang bikin seru
15:56 Lightning Wyvern: 06:40:093 -
15:56 Lightning Wyvern: iya yang aku bilang lambatin itu
15:56 Nishizumi: ah ga seru kalo lambat
15:56 Lightning Wyvern: bilang aja kamu gabisa fc kalo lambat ntar :<
15:57 Nishizumi: HDNC/DT player bakal menderita ;_;
15:57 Nishizumi: NAH !!!!!!!!!
15:57 Lightning Wyvern: IYA ITU ALESAN KAMU DOANG KAN SEBENERNYA
15:57 Nishizumi: lagian, parah banget kalo 0.5 mulu
15:57 Nishizumi: padahal ini udah agak cepetan tempo lagunya
15:58 Nishizumi: dibanding sebelumnya, biola mulu
15:58 Lightning Wyvern: 07:07:241 - ga dikasih break ? ``
15:59 Nishizumi: kasih aja, biar istirahatnya enak
15:59 Nishizumi: persiapan buat disini 09:02:065
15:59 Nishizumi: 09:02:065 -
16:01 Lightning Wyvern: 08:21:290 - ganti k ? :<
16:02 Nishizumi: ga cocok, nadanya menurun
16:02 Nishizumi: dari yang aku denger
16:03 Nishizumi: "Overall, I really enjoy this map, and especially love how you handled the slow sections of the map. I hope this gets ranked in the future!" :b
16:04 Lightning Wyvern: 09:20:656 - itu ganti jadi d deh
16:04 Lightning Wyvern: k nya kepanjangan disitu
16:05 Nishizumi: ^ok changed
16:09 Lightning Wyvern: 10:07:558 (140) - itu jadi k ? :<
16:11 Nishizumi: ^hm oke changed
16:13 Lightning Wyvern: 10:46:642 (34) - itu ga dikasih d aja gitu ? :<
16:13 Nishizumi: oh iya, tapi ini sekedar aku save dulu ya. update setelah senritsu ngemod. * kalo dia inget lol
16:13 Lightning Wyvern: emang dia belom ngasih mod ? ``
16:13 Nishizumi: blom, baru genocide sama 1 orang luar ;__;
16:14 Lightning Wyvern: kalo sama senritsu mah udah dijamin pasti bagus hiks
16:14 Lightning Wyvern: ini juga savelognya bakal aku kasih ke dia
16:14 Nishizumi: sengaja aku kasih k, biar ga d d mulu
16:14 Lightning Wyvern: buat di evaluasi
16:14 Nishizumi: bosen juga kan
16:14 Lightning Wyvern: iyasih
16:14 Lightning Wyvern: tapi lebih cocok d d d d d gitu D:
16:14 Nishizumi: yaudah, makasih ya beb <3
16:15 Nishizumi: tapi ga enak, bosenin :/
16:15 Lightning Wyvern: oh iya beb lupa
16:15 Lightning Wyvern: mp3nya di cut gih :<
16:15 Lightning Wyvern: sayang kuota
16:15 Nishizumi: oh oke
16:16 Nishizumi: cutnya sampe mana
16:16 Lightning Wyvern: 10:56:149 - situ aja
16:16 Lightning Wyvern: cukup keknya
16:16 Lightning Wyvern: sambil di fade volume nya
16:16 Nishizumi: makin lama makin kecil gitu ?
16:16 Nishizumi: duh males banget ngeditnya =_=
16:17 Lightning Wyvern: mulai mod jam setengah 1 kelah jam setengah 5
16:17 Nishizumi: udah gitu laptop begini ;__;
16:17 Lightning Wyvern: hiks
16:17 Lightning Wyvern: 3 jam ngemod map 10 menit
16:17 *Lightning Wyvern nangis*
16:17 Lightning Wyvern: iya volumenya makin lama makin pelan
16:17 Lightning Wyvern: jadi gabakal ada yang tau kalo lagunya sebenernya masih panjang awkawkawka
16:18 Nishizumi: abis dipaksain sehari itu juga lol
16:18 Lightning Wyvern: hiks hiks hiks
16:18 Nishizumi: oke
16:19 Nishizumi: coba dah beb cek map goldenslaughterer
16:19 *Nishizumi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/326926 Taishi - goldenslaughterer(Taishi's VW2 Edit)]
16:19 Lightning Wyvern: mending kamu update sekarang dulu deh
16:19 Nishizumi: kebanyakan pattern 1/4nya kdkdk doang =_=
16:19 Lightning Wyvern: ya emang cocoknnya kek gitu :<
16:20 Nishizumi: kenapa emangnya ?
16:20 Lightning Wyvern: pengen aku cobaaaa
16:20 Lightning Wyvern: itu ga aku save soalnya hiks
16:21 Lightning Wyvern: aku post di thread ya ;-;

senpai melo tolong di evaluasi hasil mod aku ;;

1. 00:42:444 (7) - Move to 00:42:417. Sound is there.
2. 00:52:558 (48) - d? this is lower pitch than around.
3. 01:06:079 (52) - Same as above.
4. 01:19:600 (55) - ^
5. 01:48:334 (64,66) - I think it would fit more the melody to swap these.
6. 02:10:094 (125) - d for consistency.
7. 02:30:587 (261) - d?
8. 02:41:150 (320) - k would be better.
9. 03:15:586 (451,452) - Two notes at the same time. please remove one.
10. 03:20:869 (484) - I guess you forgot to add clap.
11. 03:24:248 (503) - Same as above. k that follow the music.
12. 03:25:200 (510) - k would be better feeling.
13. 03:35:658 (578,579,580,581) - It would fit more to apply reverse section.
14. 03:37:348 (590,591,592,593,594,595,596) - how about kkdkkkd?
15. 04:16:010 (821,822,823) - k would sound better.
16. 04:20:235 (839,840) - Swap these?
17. 04:21:925 (844,845,846) - k d k for consistency.
18. 04:22:770 (847,848,849) - Same reason as 04:16:010. How about k?
19. 04:29:953 - It sound empty. How about adding note?
20. 05:23:615 (71) - k?
21. 06:41:598 (7) - Same as 00:42:444. Move to 06:41:572.
22. 06:52:136 (49,50,51) - k d k would fit more the melody.
23. 07:54:459 (59) - k for consistency.
24. 08:09:459 (40,41,42,43) - Reverse section?
25. 08:11:149 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - k d k k d d d k?

Underflow wrote:

[onidominator]

1. 00:42:444 (7) - Move to 00:42:417. Sound is there.
2. 00:52:558 (48) - d? this is lower pitch than around.
3. 01:06:079 (52) - Same as above.
4. 01:19:600 (55) - ^
5. 01:48:334 (64,66) - I think it would fit more the melody to swap these.
6. 02:10:094 (125) - d for consistency.
7. 02:30:587 (261) - d?
8. 02:41:150 (320) - k would be better.
9. 03:15:586 (451,452) - Two notes at the same time. please remove one.
10. 03:20:869 (484) - I guess you forgot to add clap.
11. 03:24:248 (503) - Same as above. k that follow the music.
12. 03:25:200 (510) - k would be better feeling.
13. 03:35:658 (578,579,580,581) - It would fit more to apply reverse section.
14. 03:37:348 (590,591,592,593,594,595,596) - how about kkdkkkd?
15. 04:16:010 (821,822,823) - k would sound better.
16. 04:20:235 (839,840) - Swap these?
17. 04:21:925 (844,845,846) - k d k for consistency.
18. 04:22:770 (847,848,849) - Same reason as 04:16:010. How about k?
19. 04:29:953 - It sound empty. How about adding note?
20. 05:23:615 (71) - k?
21. 06:41:598 (7) - Same as 00:42:444. Move to 06:41:572.
22. 06:52:136 (49,50,51) - k d k would fit more the melody.
23. 07:54:459 (59) - k for consistency.
24. 08:09:459 (40,41,42,43) - Reverse section?
25. 08:11:149 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - k d k k d d d k?

Okoratu wrote:

http://codeztslabel.info/album/ztsl017

look at last track's title and change yours before someone unranks your life.
saw this because I want to map the same thing for standard so gl I know very little about taiko lol

Genocide wrote:

Sorry Oko, i have to played that link.
This song is different than yours.

maksud dia Artist nya jadi " Taishi(compellege) "

1. dem music just kill meh
2. 01:06:291 (53) - ini dihapus aja gapapa, kan gaada musik yang dominan di sana
3. 01:02:910 (38) - bisa diganti ke k, biar ritme tripletnya konsisten jadi ddk ddd ddk ddd :3
4. 01:09:037 (5,6,7) - mending diganti jadi kkk biar sama kaya 01:10:305 (11,12,13) - dan juga patternnya sama kaya 01:11:995 (19,20,21) - 01:13:262 (25,26,27) -
5. 01:14:953 (33) - ganti ke k, atau jadiin aja 01:09:037 (5,6,7) - kkk biar bisa jadi mirror 01:10:305 (11,12,13) -
6. 01:14:953 (33,34,35) - lalu ini bisa dijadiin kkd biar mirror 01:16:220 (39,40,41) - + biar gak bosenin patternnya
7. SRSLY 1 MENIT GINI DOANG LAGUNYA WTF
8. 01:32:065 actually spinner di sini rasanya yang paling aneh sendiri, karena yang part sebelum"nya pada ngikutin musiknya sampe 01:33:122, tapi ini doang yang spinnernya mulai awal. saran gw sih ganti spinnernya sama kkddd, terus spinner mulai di 01:33:333 ~ 01:34:600. preference sih
9. 01:48:545 (65,66) - diremove aja gapapa, kan musiknya end di situ, imo biar ambiencenya lebih terasa di sana
10. 01:55:094 (15,16) - di sini bukannya 1/6 ya? o_o
    alamak puyeng
11. Pattern selanjutnya (01:55:516 ~ 02:08:826 sementara sampe sini dulu) terserah nishi, tapi saran gw sih jangan xxx-xx-xxxx-xxx-xxx-xx-xxxx-xxx terus terusan. kalo mau repot sih, taruh d di musiknya yang kedengeran drumnya banget kaya 01:55:727 -, 01:56:150 -, 01:56:572 - ; every white tick). nah lalu dari situ, sekitarnya bisa diimprovisasi kaya gini http://puu.sh/gzCXR.jpg, lalu ganti beberapa yang sekiranya lebih cocok pake kat. xD itu sih cuma saran, biar drumnya lebih kerasa aja. bagian sesudahnya juga, tapi mungkin mau dibalik kalo don tadi diganti kat.. jadi terkesan mirroring, emphasize drumnya, dan terkesan lebih rapi imo o/
12. 02:22:348 (207) - add finish di sini gapapa kok, kan musiknya beda dan lebih nekan and ganti ke don. reasoning below this
13. Nah kalo part selanjutnya lagi 02:22:347 ~ 02:33:755 bisa ngikutin kat patternnya di 02:22:769, 02:23:615, dan don bisa juga ditaruh di 02:23:192, 02:24:037, dst. dengan gitu kan jadinya enak mainnya karena sesuai sama musiknya. preference kok
14. 02:50:869 (367,368,369) - oke gw paham kenapa lo pake kdk. tapi inget, 02:51:080 (369) - pitchnya lebih rendah dari 02:51:503 (370) - . so saran gw mending dibalik aja jadi dkd, lalu sisanya dijadiin kaya https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2886114. nah jadi enak kan sama musiknya? XD
15. 02:53:404 (375,382,387) - 02:56:573 (383) - 02:59:954 (393) - 03:01:010 (396) - 03:01:644 (398) - 03:02:489 (400) - semua bisa diremove buat emphasize biolanya. imo nada" di tengah gini gak penting karna gaada bunyinya. kalaupun kamu beranggapan ada, berarti kamu harus kasih not di setiap white + red tick karena mereka semua sama, cuma beda pitch. kecuali 02:55:940 (381) -
16. 02:54:883 (378) - mending ini diganti ke kat, biar turunnya lebih mulus
17. Gw bisa ngerti part selanjutnya diramein, tapi kalo yang gaada biolanya sama skali kaya 03:10:094 (423,424) - mending diremove aja karna mereka menuh"in
18. 03:13:157 kok gw malah ngerasa drumnya ada di sini ya, bukan di 03:13:579
19. 03:16:644 (456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463) - bagian ini lebih follow music kalo diubah jadi http://puu.sh/gzDXM.jpg
20. 03:18:122 hoo ini ga jadi kiai time? padahal part ini seru loh ovo oh ok nvm~
21. 03:41:785 (623,624,625,626,627) - bisa dibikin jadi dkddk biar 03:42:207 (627) - follow rhythm, dan sekaligus biar patternnya ngikutin musik?
22. 03:45:375 ~ 03:46:854 preference, bisa dibikin sesuatu kaya https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2895813, karena sama part yang sebelumnya, padahal yang ini lebih rame karena ada biolanya, sedangkan sebelumnya sepi" aja imo jadi kalo tiba" jadi sepi dan fokus ke biolanya jadi aneh. terserah sih, cuma saran aja
23. 03:56:362 (719) - 03:58:685 - gw saranin dijadiin 1/6 kaya gini http://puu.sh/gCEd7.jpg, karna 03:56:573 (721,722,723,724) - kamu follow biola dan pake 1/6, tapi sisanya pake 1/4, which is weird imo.
24. 04:02:066 (756) - change to k for following the pitch and better flow (sama kaya 04:02:278 (757) - , also kat rhythm)
25. 04:05:165 (776,777) - bisa diremove karna gaada musik di situ, dan buat kasih break
26. 04:20:024 (837,839) - , 04:26:785 (861,862) - ^
27. 04:57:841 (81) - kasih finish
28. 05:09:038 (159) - ganti ke d, 05:09:249 (161,162) - ctrl G, biar mainnya enak + follow music. yang sekarang keliatan out of place banget imo ``
29. 05:11:361 (1) - kasih finish
30. 05:14:319 (19) - 05:15:164 (23) - preference, ganti ke k buat ngikutin simbalnya
31. 05:17:488 (37) - remove buat kasih break, 05:17:699 (38,39) - ctrl G biar ngikutin musiknya, drum or whatever is there
32. 05:30:798 - sampe 05:31:643 - mending diganti streamnya sama KDK atau KKDDK buat emphasize lagunya di situ. kalo yang sekarang terkesan gak kuat musiknya
33. 05:33:333 (124) - bisa diganti ke k buat emphasize musiknya
34. 06:07:136 (2) - 06:10:516 (6) - 06:13:896 (10) - 06:17:277 (14) - 06:18:122 (15) - 06:20:657 (18) - diremove juga gapapa, kan gaada musiknya
35. 06:13:051 (9) - 06:19:812 (17) - kasih finish .w. konsistensi sama 06:06:291 (1) -
36. 06:23:192 (5,6,7,8,9) - kkddd for following the music. 5 sama 6 bisa dianggep mepet, karna 7 sama 8 kan beda jauh banget dari 5. btw kasih k di 06:26:150 karna ada suara biolanya, dan finish di 06:26:572 (9) -
37. 06:29:108 (11,12) - kayanya ctrl G lebih enak deh pitchnya
38. 06:31:643 (14) - lalu ini d karna pitchnya lebih rendah dari 13
39. 06:33:333 (16) - K for high pitch?
40. 07:01:431 (89) - bisa didelete karna gaada musik di situ
41. 07:41:361 (22) - ganti ke k, gapapa repetitive di sini, mau gamau lu harus ikutin musiknya atau bakal jadi awkward
42. 08:05:234 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - dddkdkd bisa tuh ngikutin musiknya
43. i can't mod stream
44. Part sesudah stream sebisa mungkin dikasih break, karna kalo konstan semua keisi not dan padat gitu, gak enak dimainin. ``

Senritsu wrote:

oh yeah you asked me to mod this

About the title and artist

so the artist should be Taishi（compllege）

also asked the source to Fycho and said that source is in kanji so...
source should be うみねこのなく頃に and move umineko no naku koro ni to tags
add ep2 to tags too, due to the link okoratu had given
damnit metadata is confusing

[onishizumidominatordesu]

1. dem music just kill meh
2. 01:06:291 (53) - ini dihapus aja gapapa, kan gaada musik yang dominan di sana changed
3. 01:02:910 (38) - bisa diganti ke k, biar ritme tripletnya konsisten jadi ddk ddd ddk ddd :3 changed
4. 01:09:037 (5,6,7) - mending diganti jadi kkk biar sama kaya 01:10:305 (11,12,13) - dan juga patternnya sama kaya 01:11:995 (19,20,21) - 01:13:262 (25,26,27) - menurutku ga pas
5. 01:14:953 (33) - ganti ke k, atau jadiin aja 01:09:037 (5,6,7) - kkk biar bisa jadi mirror 01:10:305 (11,12,13) - ini juga ga cocok menurutku
6. 01:14:953 (33,34,35) - lalu ini bisa dijadiin kkd biar mirror 01:16:220 (39,40,41) - + biar gak bosenin patternnya changed
7. SRSLY 1 MENIT GINI DOANG LAGUNYA WTF salahin yang buat lagu
8. 01:32:065 actually spinner di sini rasanya yang paling aneh sendiri, karena yang part sebelum"nya pada ngikutin musiknya sampe 01:33:122, tapi ini doang yang spinnernya mulai awal. saran gw sih ganti spinnernya sama kkddd, terus spinner mulai di 01:33:333 ~ 01:34:600. preference sih changed
9. 01:48:545 (65,66) - diremove aja gapapa, kan musiknya end di situ, imo biar ambiencenya lebih terasa di sana changed
10. 01:55:094 (15,16) - di sini bukannya 1/6 ya? o_o biar ga tambah susah imo
    alamak puyeng semangat~
11. Pattern selanjutnya (01:55:516 ~ 02:08:826 sementara sampe sini dulu) terserah nishi, tapi saran gw sih jangan xxx-xx-xxxx-xxx-xxx-xx-xxxx-xxx terus terusan. kalo mau repot sih, taruh d di musiknya yang kedengeran drumnya banget kaya 01:55:727 -, 01:56:150 -, 01:56:572 - ; every white tick). nah lalu dari situ, sekitarnya bisa diimprovisasi kaya gini http://puu.sh/gzCXR.jpg, lalu ganti beberapa yang sekiranya lebih cocok pake kat. xD itu sih cuma saran, biar drumnya lebih kerasa aja. bagian sesudahnya juga, tapi mungkin mau dibalik kalo don tadi diganti kat.. jadi terkesan mirroring, emphasize drumnya, dan terkesan lebih rapi imo o/ aku ga ganti, mau coba kayak bikin lagu sendiri hehe
12. 02:22:348 (207) - add finish di sini gapapa kok, kan musiknya beda dan lebih nekan and ganti ke don. reasoning below this changed. selain ngepas, map ini juga minim bignote
13. Nah kalo part selanjutnya lagi 02:22:347 ~ 02:33:755 bisa ngikutin kat patternnya di 02:22:769, 02:23:615, dan don bisa juga ditaruh di 02:23:192, 02:24:037, dst. dengan gitu kan jadinya enak mainnya karena sesuai sama musiknya. preference kok ga paham dengan yang ini @_@
14. 02:50:869 (367,368,369) - oke gw paham kenapa lo pake kdk. tapi inget, 02:51:080 (369) - pitchnya lebih rendah dari 02:51:503 (370) - . so saran gw mending dibalik aja jadi dkd, lalu sisanya dijadiin kaya https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2886114. nah jadi enak kan sama musiknya? XD changed
15. 02:53:404 (375,382,387) - 02:56:573 (383) - 02:59:954 (393) - 03:01:010 (396) - 03:01:644 (398) - 03:02:489 (400) - semua bisa diremove buat emphasize biolanya. imo nada" di tengah gini gak penting karna gaada bunyinya. kalaupun kamu beranggapan ada, berarti kamu harus kasih not di setiap white + red tick karena mereka semua sama, cuma beda pitch. kecuali 02:55:940 (381) - changed
16. 02:54:883 (378) - mending ini diganti ke kat, biar turunnya lebih mulus changed
17. Gw bisa ngerti part selanjutnya diramein, tapi kalo yang gaada biolanya sama skali kaya 03:10:094 (423,424) - mending diremove aja karna mereka menuh"in menurutku sedikit diramein masih ngepas kok. ngikutin
18. 03:13:157 kok gw malah ngerasa drumnya ada di sini ya, bukan di 03:13:579 changed
19. 03:16:644 (456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463) - bagian ini lebih follow music kalo diubah jadi http://puu.sh/gzDXM.jpg changed, kecuali bagian ddddd
20. 03:18:122 hoo ini ga jadi kiai time? padahal part ini seru loh ovo oh ok nvm~ :b
21. 03:41:785 (623,624,625,626,627) - bisa dibikin jadi dkddk biar 03:42:207 (627) - follow rhythm, dan sekaligus biar patternnya ngikutin musik? ga ngepas menurutku ;w;
22. 03:45:375 ~ 03:46:854 preference, bisa dibikin sesuatu kaya https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2895813, karena sama part yang sebelumnya, padahal yang ini lebih rame karena ada biolanya, sedangkan sebelumnya sepi" aja imo jadi kalo tiba" jadi sepi dan fokus ke biolanya jadi aneh. terserah sih, cuma saran aja ngga ah, abis banyak stream aku mau kurang"in. ga ditambahin gitu
23. 03:56:362 (719) - 03:58:685 - gw saranin dijadiin 1/6 kaya gini http://puu.sh/gCEd7.jpg, karna 03:56:573 (721,722,723,724) - kamu follow biola dan pake 1/6, tapi sisanya pake 1/4, which is weird imo. ga ngepas juga kalo abis 1/4 trus 1/3 mulu, makanya aku kasih spasi dikit trus strim 1/4 lebih cocok menurutku
24. 04:02:066 (756) - change to k for following the pitch and better flow (sama kaya 04:02:278 (757) - , also kat rhythm) changed
25. 04:05:165 (776,777) - bisa diremove karna gaada musik di situ, dan buat kasih break changed, tapi ga aku kasih break
26. 04:20:024 (837,839) - , 04:26:785 (861,862) - ^ changed
27. 04:57:841 (81) - kasih finish changed
28. 05:09:038 (159) - ganti ke d, 05:09:249 (161,162) - ctrl G, biar mainnya enak + follow music. yang sekarang keliatan out of place banget imo ``changed
29. 05:11:361 (1) - kasih finish changed
30. 05:14:319 (19) - 05:15:164 (23) - preference, ganti ke k buat ngikutin simbalnya (19) aku ganti, tapi (23) lebih cocok d imo
31. 05:17:488 (37) - remove buat kasih break, 05:17:699 (38,39) - ctrl G biar ngikutin musiknya, drum or whatever is there changed
32. 05:30:798 - sampe 05:31:643 - mending diganti streamnya sama KDK atau KKDDK buat emphasize lagunya di situ. kalo yang sekarang terkesan gak kuat musiknya yang ini aku ga ngerti maksudnya apa ;w;
33. 05:33:333 (124) - bisa diganti ke k buat emphasize musiknya aku dengernya malah rendah gitu di bagian situ
34. 06:07:136 (2) - 06:10:516 (6) - 06:13:896 (10) - 06:17:277 (14) - 06:18:122 (15) - 06:20:657 (18) - diremove juga gapapa, kan gaada musiknya changed
35. 06:13:051 (9) - 06:19:812 (17) - kasih finish .w. konsistensi sama 06:06:291 (1) - changed
36. 06:23:192 (5,6,7,8,9) - kkddd for following the music. 5 sama 6 bisa dianggep mepet, karna 7 sama 8 kan beda jauh banget dari 5. btw kasih k di 06:26:150 karna ada suara biolanya, dan finish di 06:26:572 (9) - aku ga ngerti ;w; tapi finish aku pasang, lebih cocok
37. 06:29:108 (11,12) - kayanya ctrl G lebih enak deh pitchnya changed
38. 06:31:643 (14) - lalu ini d karna pitchnya lebih rendah dari 13 changed
39. 06:33:333 (16) - K for high pitch? lebih cocok D, soalnya suara DUMnya lebih ke D. kalo ngikutin bola cuma k imo
40. 07:01:431 (89) - bisa didelete karna gaada musik di situ menurutku ada musiknya @_@
41. 07:41:361 (22) - ganti ke k, gapapa repetitive di sini, mau gamau lu harus ikutin musiknya atau bakal jadi awkward iya sih, niat mau bervariasi tapi terdengar gagal. changed
42. 08:05:234 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - dddkdkd bisa tuh ngikutin musiknya ga cocok imo, apalagi bagian situ aku maksud buat istirahat doang. bikin relax jari
43. i can't mod stream okay
44. Part sesudah stream sebisa mungkin dikasih break, karna kalo konstan semua keisi not dan padat gitu, gak enak dimainin. ``

aku emang bingung bagian akhirnya, makanya aku isi stream mulu ;w;

Bisa diimprove lagi, terutama beberapa part yang kurang emphasize, kaya kiai kedua itu gw ga terlalu yakin sih sama strimnya, tapi di bagian berikutnya kurang break di sana sini, jadi lagunya ga keemphasize dan serasa kaya kamu bikin map sendiri tanpa ngikutin lagu. Dan kasih break. Selama alasanmu irasional gaakan ada BN yang berani ngerank mapmu. Percaya deh `w`
Make sure you reply this mod properly or i will surely put you on my blacklist ww jk iya aku bingung mau isi apa, makanya jad padat begitu bagian akhir. anyway jangan blacklist aku ;w; i expect you wanna mod my map other

good luck!

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

oni

01:57:207 (30) - d

03:16:572 (454) - add d(1/6)

03:16:749 (456) - d
and
move to 03:16:784

03:17:171 (459) - move to 03:17:277


03:17:382 (460) - move to 03:17:417 (460) -

03:17:629 (462) - add d

03:18:685 (468) - add d

03:19:108 (471) - add d

03:20:375 (481) - add d

03:20:763 (484) - move to 03:20:798 (484) -

03:47:418 (665) - move to 03:47:382 (665) -

03:47:559 (666) - move to 03:47:488 (666) - and d

04:18:968 (835) - d

04:19:390 (836) - d

You superhypermegatonultimatelegendultrainfinitymust accumulate your experience

Backfire wrote:

onidominator -
00:46:431 - kat? sounds good, plays good in relation to all the other 1/2 thingys.
01:19:389 - kat here for sort of the same reason as above
01:55:093 - I want to encourage you to do kkkd 1/6 here but it's up to you.
02:35:129 - adding a don here gives it a good rhythm without stopping flow too much
02:54:460 - don ? sounds different
03:05:023 - kat, its similar flow to what you do before and after
04:37:347 - 1/6th kkkd ?
04:44:319 - d, like your last stream earlier in the map
06:20:657 - I think this note is unnecessary
06:45:586 - kat?
07:03:544 - ^ my reasons are same as the beginning
08:02:487 - kat should be here for sure because of the staticy noise
08:05:868 - ^ same here, repeat for any noises you see. they will be on white ticks.
09:27:523 - change to kat and add a don here 09:27:734 -
09:29:952 - starting here, since you change from streams to normal notes, let me suggest to you something that can make this map really fun.
1/6 doubles like 09:30:093 - dd 09:30:304 - dk 09:30:516 - dd 09:30:727 - dk
I think you can improve the ending so much if you did this, as it is now, I dont like it.

And that's all, it's a good map but needs some work.

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi, private m4m request


General

none

onidominator

01:55:199 (16) - here you could do 1/6 k? since you were using k for those sounds heard every 3 notes, I think it would make sense if you did use 1/6. :
02:54:038 (379) - if the notes before are "k" then this should definitely be k
04:52:558 (49) - I don't see why this should be k, because of inconsistency with other notes such as 04:50:868 (39,44) - . You probably did it some way that I can't tell though, lol
05:01:855 (105,106) - I think you should keep this consistent with the previous sections which are all kd (such as 05:01:009 (100,101) - ). But then again, I could be missing something.
07:10:305 - from here to 07:34:178 - I think you can have a gradually increasing SV from 7:10 (maybe change it to something below 1x, such as 0.8). Then at the start of each combo increase the SV by certain increments? I think it would fit the song well.
07:34:178 (1) - imo this should have a higher SV from here, especially if you followed ^ . but I don't know lol
07:41:572 (23) - k
07:43:051 (28) - k
10:04:811 (91,92,93) - kdd? like you did at 09:58:051 (54,55,56) -
10:16:642 (154,155,156) - ddk? like 10:11:572 (127,128,129) -

really nice map. Good luck!

Numbers 596108 wrote:

Mod request by Nishizumi (Modding Queue)

[onidominator]

Timing :

06:37:558 - Move this timing point to 06:40:093
07:34:178 - Remove this BPM Timing point. It's unnecessary.
08:43:473 - Remove it. It's unnecessary
08:45:163 - ^
08:46:854 - ^
08:48:544 - ^
08:50:234 - ^
08:51:924 - ^
08:53:614 - ^

Notes :

01:59:848 (49) - o
02:06:080 (94) - o
02:10:094 (125) - o
02:23:615 (214) - o
02:29:109 (252) - o
02:54:461 (379) - o
02:56:151 (384,385,386) - Slider is better?
02:59:531 (392,393,394) - ^
03:13:896 (439,440) - Too close.
03:14:742 (444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454) - Spinner is Better.
03:17:700 (462) - O
03:38:404 (595) - o
04:17:066 (821) - o
05:15:868 (27,28) - oo
07:39:459 (18) - o
07:40:727 (19) - o
07:52:980 (57) - o
07:54:248 (58) - o
08:02:487 (8) - o

That's all, Nice music :3

rhalp10 wrote:

HERES MY MOD

[worldenddominator (VW3 the Ending Edit)]

[onidominator]
01:55:306 (17) - E
01:55:728 (20) - E
01:56:150 (23) - E+R
01:56:573 (27) - E
02:06:924 (102) - E
02:07:348 (105) - E
02:07:348 (105) - E
02:07:770 (108) - E+R
02:24:461 (220) - E
02:26:151 (232) - E
02:27:841 (244) - E
02:29:531 (256,266) - E
02:49:813 (367) - E
03:02:911 (402) - E
03:03:334 (403) - E+R
03:18:545 (467) - E
03:34:813 (571,575) - E
03:35:658 (576,578) - E
03:35:869 (578) - R
03:35:658 (576) - R

Good Luck <3

[Ni-Sokkususu] wrote:

Onidominator

02:58:263 (389) - d not changed
03:53:299 (242) - delete deleted undeleted
03:53:404 (243) - d changed
03:55:306 (254) - k not changed
05:03:122 (112) - k? changed
05:10:940 (5,6,7,8) - dddk not changed
05:28:051 (95) - k? not changed
06:28:262 (11) - D? not changed
07:06:291 (1,2) - Ctrl + G not changed
07:29:530 (75) - d? not changed
10:49:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - kdkkdkk not changed
Sorry It's too short. no problem XD

because I can't play osu! anymore.
Bye.
If you don't like this mod, Don't give me kudosu

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

• 
  09:02:065 - unsnapped inherit point, snap to 09:02:067 - .09:41:783 - same here, snap to 09:41:785 -
  
  03:45:375 - parts like this i suggest you to use a inherit point of 1.00x, because the actual inherit is like use 1.50 sv and this is not recommended
  02:21:714 (203) - notes like this are unsnapped (AiMod can't detect these -1 ms notes) so i suggest you to do a autosnap in 1/16

• 
  00:59:319 (21) - change to d? is a low sound i think sounds better
  01:05:234 (47) - same as ^, change to d?
  01:53:615 - the transaction is a bit weird and will confuse lot of players, try to add more inherits for each note like 1.02, 1.03, 1.04.... or 1.02. 1.04. 1.06 etc..
  02:21:713 (203) - change to d this note? i think a kkddk works better
  02:35:447 (290,291) - control+g these notes? (k d) sounds better imo
  03:52:558 (238) - change to k? sounds good imo
  05:31:009 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - change this pattern to kdkdkdk? fits better imo
  07:06:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about change this pattern to kdddkdd? i think sounds better
  07:33:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same here, change this pattern to kdddkdd?
  09:08:405 (53,54) - control+g these notes? (kdkkdkddkdkdd) sounds good imo

Hanjamon wrote:

Hey Nishizumi, here m4m

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• 
  09:02:065 - unsnapped inherit point, snap to 09:02:067 - .09:41:783 - same here, snap to 09:41:785 - mistake orz, fixed
  
  03:45:375 - parts like this i suggest you to use a inherit point of 1.00x, because the actual inherit is like use 1.50 sv and this is not recommended maybe i'll change to 1.05 or i won't changes.i'm confused on the timing part ;w;
  02:21:714 (203) - notes like this are unsnapped (AiMod can't detect these -1 ms notes) so i suggest you to do a autosnap in 1/16

okay

[Taiko]

• 
  00:59:319 (21) - change to d? is a low sound i think sounds better sounds good, but i want to keep the consistency
  01:05:234 (47) - same as ^, change to d? same as ^
  01:53:615 - the transaction is a bit weird and will confuse lot of players, try to add more inherits for each note like 1.02, 1.03, 1.04.... or 1.02. 1.04. 1.06 etc.. i feel the same ;w; a bit regret to change to 1.03.1.06.1.09 etc. so changed to 1.02, 1.04, 1.06 etc
  02:21:713 (203) - change to d this note? i think a kkddk works better sounds good, changed
  02:35:447 (290,291) - control+g these notes? (k d) sounds better imo changed
  03:52:558 (238) - change to k? sounds good imo changed
  05:31:009 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - change this pattern to kdkdkdk? fits better imo changed but to kdkdddk
  07:06:291 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about change this pattern to kdddkdd? i think sounds better no changed
  07:33:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same here, change this pattern to kdddkdd? no changed
  09:08:405 (53,54) - control+g these notes? (kdkkdkddkdkdd) sounds good imo

nah, changed

That's all, i can't suggest nothing more, good luck :3

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi Nishizumi! From my M4M queue
Umineko and Taishi <3 i should revive goldenslaughterer

[onidominator]

1. 00:40:939 - conflict with timing point volume and inherited point volume (50% and 37%), change one of these? changed to 37%
2. 01:06:291 - why not add a spinner as you did before? there have no sound, so i won't add anything in there
3. 01:50:235 (1) - begin this spinner at 01:48:554 - ? it would fit the song better imo too long spinner isn't good, currently is better
4. 01:55:094 (15,16) - it's clearly 1/6 here, change them to kkk 1/6? in there, 1/6 is too hard for me
5. 02:02:910 - add a note here? to be consistent with the next patterns i'll think about it, probability i won't add it
6. 03:16:432 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about this pattern? fits the song better imo (it's 1/6 actually): sounds not good :/ no changed
7. 05:39:248 - add a timing point here to reset metronome and time signature no, that time is good enough
8. 07:34:180 - delete this timing point since it's not needed anymore because of ^ no, it's really needed how to explain this, i'm confused ;w;
9. 07:52:982 (57) - k? to be consistent with previous patterns it's k
10. 08:58:687 - add a spinner here to represent the wind chime? (only a suggestion) no, it looks like forced to add anything in there
11. Last kiai: if you listen carefully at 25% speed, you will notice that the synth is actually snapped in 1/6 (swing), so snap notes to 1/6?

it's inappropriate and too hard, i just wanna make it easily and enjoyable

And that's all. Awesome map and song, good luck for rank!

Nishizumi wrote:

[*]05:39:248 - add a timing point here to reset metronome and time signature no, that time is good enough
[*]07:34:180 - delete this timing point since it's not needed anymore because of ^ no, it's really needed how to explain this, i'm confused ;w;

1. Maybe, you should try to keep osz files under 10mb. check

1. 01:53:615 ~ 01:55:305 Unify scroll speed. these speed up is really need? If you think it's needed, pull the more green line.
2. 01:55:093 (15,16) Why did you ignore the sound? You don't have to be simplified in oni. I think it is the best to put 1/6 notes.
3. 04:39:248 ~ 04:44:319 It is very hard to see.
4. 06:04:600 (1,2,3,4,5) If you want to put note here, consider that to be more accurate the OFFSET. because these sound are littele late.
5. 08:28:475 Deceleration of from here is unnecessary. maybe, player gets confused.
6. 09:02:067~ Do you have deliberately ignored the Shuffle beats?

Sayaka- wrote:

Nishizumi wrote:

[*]05:39:248 - add a timing point here to reset metronome and time signature no, that time is good enough
[*]07:34:180 - delete this timing point since it's not needed anymore because of ^ no, it's really needed how to explain this, i'm confused ;w;

Actually, this timing point was really needed to reset the timing signature as you did in 07:34:180 - and since the one at 07:34:180 - is on a 1st beat when adding the timing point I told you, it's not needed anymore (I hope I'm understandable orz) oh, sorry i don't understand before. changed ;w;

also I'm baka I wanted to say d for 07:52:982 (57) - lol okay changed

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. from your request in PM.
[ General]

1. Maybe, you should try to keep osz files under 10mb. check

[ onidominator]

1. 01:53:615 ~ 01:55:305 Unify scroll speed. these speed up is really need? If you think it's needed, pull the more green line.
2. 01:55:093 (15,16) Why did you ignore the sound? You don't have to be simplified in oni. I think it is the best to put 1/6 notes. i'll think about it why so many people suggest me to change 1/6 ;w;
3. 04:39:248 ~ 04:44:319 It is very hard to see. it's fine, not hard
4. 06:04:600 (1,2,3,4,5) If you want to put note here, consider that to be more accurate the OFFSET. because these sound are littele late. okay i feel the same, but i'm confused about timing offset in that part
5. 08:28:475 Deceleration of from here is unnecessary. maybe, player gets confused. This is one part that I like, and i deliberate to do it.
6. 09:02:067~ Do you have deliberately ignored the Shuffle beats?

so i must change to 1/6 stream ? it's too hard

Good luck.

Nishizumi wrote:

should i give kd again ?

Sayaka- wrote:

No need to, I just explained some points of my mod a bit more

Raiden wrote:

Hi, here from PM M4M :3

onidominator

Notes aren't correctly snapped D: http://puu.sh/hadiR.png
Resnap them :3 OMG

1. 01:12:206 (21) - Change to k?no, low pitch here
   
2. 01:43:579 - Add d? no, i only want to make one triplet in one long note (?)
   
3. 02:26:045 (231) - change to k? sound good, changed
   
4. 02:34:496 (286) - ^ no
   
5. 02:43:052 (333) - ^ no, low pitch
   
6. 02:43:686 (337) - ^ ^
   
7. 02:56:995 (387) - ^ d is better
   
8. 02:57:418 (388) - Change to d? no
   
9. 03:37:031 (132) - Change to k? changed
   
10. 03:42:840 (177) - Change to d? no
    
11. 03:52:241 (236) - Change to k? sounds good
    
12. 03:53:510 (244,245) - Ctrl+g? no
    
13. 04:31:116 (430) - Change to k? it's weird
    
14. 04:36:185 (457) - ^ ^
    
15. 05:26:889 (88) - ^ ^
    
16. 06:25:726 (8,9,10) - Change to d k k instead of k d d (the music is low, high, high pitched) change to d k D
    
17. 06:33:332 (17) - Change to K? no

PS. Awesome song and the streams at the end are very well made :3

GL With the approval/ranking (and why not both?)

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, M4M from PM~ :3/

[> General <]

1. - Uhmm.. You have an .osb file, are you using it?
2. - Timing Check: BPM is fine, but i prefer offset should be on 375 because the beat starts there. okay
3. - Everything seems fine! thanks

[> onidominator <]

1. 00:42:840 (8,9,10) - kkd? no
2. 00:47:065 (25) - k? sounds nicer. no, i want to keep the consistency pattern
3. 00:47:488 (27) - Remove this note? a bit long imo. same reason as above
4. 00:55:093 (3) - k no
5. 00:59:319 (21) - d no, for consistency
6. 01:10:305 (11,12,13) - ddk? no, but i change it to kkd
7. 01:23:403 (9,10) - dk? sounds nicer. yeah
8. 01:26:361 (22) - d no
9. 01:38:615 (17,18) - Ctrl + G no
10. 01:41:995 (33,34,35) - ddk is much better here imo. no, i feel it will be weird
11. 01:43:262 (40) - d okay
12. 01:45:165 (49,50) - Ctrl + G no
13. 02:01:116 (59,60) - ^, maybe? no,
14. 02:09:249 (119) - k no, there is low pitch
15. 02:17:910 (179) - ^ ^
16. 02:23:615 (214,215) - Ctrl + G no
17. 02:29:320 (253,254,255) - dkk no
18. 02:37:137 (299,300) - Ctrl + G no
19. 02:54:883 (380,381) - ^ no
20. 02:58:263 (389) - d no
21. 03:06:714 (412,413,414) - d k k here sounds better. no, i change it to dkd
22. 03:14:531 (441) - d good
23. 03:21:714 (32,33,34) - kdk? I will consider it later
24. 03:31:432 (95) - k no
25. 03:35:235 (119,120,121) - kdk? i want to keep it consistent
26. 03:36:291 (127) - d? sounds nicer. it's d
27. 03:42:946 (178,179) - Ctrl + G no
28. 03:48:756 (215,216,217) - ddk? no, kkk is match to follow the violin
29. 03:55:094 (253,254) - Ctrl + G okay
30. 04:03:334 (307,308,309) - ^ no
31. 04:06:714 (328) - k low pitch in the violin sound
32. 04:21:925 (385) - ^ ^
33. 04:29:531 (421,422) - Ctrl + G, sounds better imo. yes, but i don't want to change it :/
34. 04:35:447 (453) - k no
35. 04:39:249 (475) - d ^
36. 04:48:756 (26) - ^ ^
37. 04:51:396 (42) - ^ ^
38. 04:59:847 (93) - ^ ^
39. 05:04:389 (120) - k ^
40. - Ehh... There are so many of them further more, uggh. I don't like repeating the same issues just to make my mod big. So try finding them, ouch... I deliberately to do it
41. - I think it's a really cool diff, but i might think you should add some small breaks a bit. But since it's for app, i don't think it's a big deal :p yea i think so

I guess that's it for now... Good luck!

chaica wrote:

Hi,from M4M Req~

onidominator

01:01:220 - change d? - I think the sound is heard better. oops changed
01:18:333 - ^ no, for consistency
04:06:502 - change k? - I think the sound is heard better. yes, also 04:06:608 - change it to k
05:15:586 - change d? - ^ no, i feel the pitch same as 05:15:798 -
05:22:347 - ^ ^
05:29:108 - ^ ^
10:18:122 - change k? - I felt as ringing sound is higher than the other. i'll consider it

I'm sorry too slow ;w; I think it's a good MAP!　Good Luck!