1. koreapenguin
2. Hard
3. Battle
4. Shana Yami *twice
5. Exa
6. Sc4v4ng3r *twice
7. Victorica
8. Kocari
9. haha5957
10. Ipas
11. Runa_Hime
12. T-Mac
13. Lexis
14. Xelasto
15. nya10
16. Underforest
17. FCL
18. MondoKuma
19. newyams99
20. Electoz
21. Kibbleru
22. BeatofIke

koreapenguin wrote:

From #modreqs - first mod by BN? lucky me~ xD

General

1. Disabled on Normal diff - done

Normal

1. 00:32:532 (3) - add newcombo here, same as other newcombos. ya for consistency, also it would be easier to gain HP - ok
2. 01:53:905 (3) - hear so this rhythm is sooo weird to me, actually some big sound is since being start here 01:53:709 - vocal with drum so if you followed vocal then http://puu.sh/hJslN/d46cc8fde2.jpg this rhythm is works better - keep it for now. I might come with new idea later
3. 01:58:807 (3,4) - i don't want recommend like some semi hide, seem still you can make more common, and it might be unnatural to play for beginners - this is fine. they can hit read this perfectly. also, I want to keep this for aesthetic sake.
4. 01:58:807 (3) - also you can add newcombo here same as first - ok
5. 02:05:865 (2,3) - it's error? seem make to same distance as 1.0x it would be better. some changing distance will big effect to beginners so it's not good - thanks for noticing this one. yes, it should be 1.0x
6. 03:28:218 (4) - add newcombo here? for consistency with 02:27:042 (1,2,3,4) - them - yup

Hard

1. if you worried about spread then how about use AR7.5 ? i think it would be better to spread with Normal or you can make just repeat slider for this 01:27:042 (5,6,7,8,9) - rest is good imo - AR 7.7
2. 01:27:630 (1) - this spinner is doesn't fit the mapping up to this point, feel so it just kind of comes out of nowhere to me - removed
3. 01:52:532 (7,1) - swap newcombo? - nice!
4. 02:31:748 (1,3) - wtf lol, i think this pattern is doesn't fit up with Hard diff... if it's Hard diff then you should make like Hard diff at least for patterns, rhythm something else etc but it's not Hard diff's pattern it over works little bit imo - tbh, I want to keep this. this pattern already tested with some players and they did fine here. I'll wait for another opinion for this. will be considered.
5. 04:06:846 (1) - add newcombo here, it will be help to read - okay

Mochi's Insane

1. No

that's all

Hard wrote:

hi there. let's mod this. - hi, thanks for coming

[Hard]

1. 01:16:846 (6,7) - this jump could be too much for a Hard - I disagree. if there is any jump that is too hard for Hard diff, it should be here 00:13:316 (7,1,2,3,4) - nevertheless, I won't change this. because I have tested this and all of the testers play this pattern nicely.
2. 01:27:042 (5,6,7,8,9) - how about you add some drum hitsounds here? drum-finish or clap? - okay~
3. 01:35:669 (6,7) - this is nazi-mod but how about you make 7 so it won't touch 6? - no, intended to do so. I like it.
4. 01:48:414 - for the loud... whistle in the background how about adding some finish? - added, in slider-end and 01:47:826 (4)
5. 02:30:179 (5,6) - again this jump could be a bit too much for a Hard - how come? no! they are fine
6. 04:01:552 (2,3,4) - maybe emphasize the chimes with soft hitfinishes? - no, hitwhistle already cover that very well.

[Normal]

1. 00:04:297 (1,2,3) - i think those three loud chimes should be tapped and also emphasized. so change this into circles maybe? also add soft finishes? - maybe no. this already good. well, (1) follows a long sound there and considering about the gameplay too, slider would be the best choice imo.
2. 03:28:610 (5,6,7) - to get the tension and emphasize how about using hitnormals instead of soft ones? - I'll consider this
3. 04:01:159 (1,2,3) - the same with the chimes as i said before. change somehow. so all of them are tippable - same reason as above. I honestly think this is a good suggestion tho.

this is a really nice mapset. take a star. - this is your second time. thank you very much!!

[-Deemo-] wrote:

I tried looking at the Normal difficulty to find something wrong only to be reminded I can't mod normal lol, this song is pretty lon - lol

[Hard]
00:02:728 (5) - NC? - no, one combo last for 2 downbeat.
00:10:179 (6) - NC - will consider this
00:44:297 (5) - My ears tell me that this sounds right, and not right at the same time so .3. - this is good imo. trust me
00:50:767 (8) - NC?
00:53:905 (8) - NC?
01:10:571 (4) - NC?
01:13:709 (4) - NC?
01:17:630 (1) - NC? NC cuz it's like the NC that's right after it
01:19:199 (1) - NC?
02:17:042 (8) - NC?
02:20:179 (10) - NC?
02:36:846 (4) - NC?
02:39:983 (4) - NC?
03:28:610 (5) - NC - yes for this.
03:38:022 (4) - NC
03:41:159 (4) - NC?

for the rest are nope because I use NC every 2 downbeat.

[Insane]
I didn't find a problem with Insane .3. inb4 someone better at modding finds a lot wrong .3. no kd btw - sorry for taking a long time to respond this. thank you very much for your mod.

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

I tried - hello Shana Yami, thanks for coming
[Normal]
00:18:414 (3) - Flip Horizontal it - sorry, no. It was intended to be like that. I think it's fun in its own way
00:26:061 (5) - should be at 00:25:865 - I'll think about this...no change for now
00:27:434 (3) - Wrong DS - this too ^
00:54:885 (1) - Shouldn't Clap here, also at 00:58:022 - why not? it fits the music very well. you can hear the drum there.
01:52:336 (6) - place at 01:52:140 - will be considered
01:53:905 (3) - place at 01:53:709 - ^
[Hard]
It's ok for me, so I won't mod it - lol
[]
thank you for your mod! I don't have an idea for your suggestion yet, so I put it on hold. I have a plan to change it tho. I'll tell you when I do.

Exa wrote:

[Easy New]
- on hold! because Easy is just an experiment as now
00:05:081 (2,3) - Avoid overlapping. Keep your map as clean as possible.
00:28:218 (4,1) - Same goes for this one.
00:57:630 (4,5) - Flow is not consistent here. I guess it is ok though.
01:15:669 - I suppose you are not ending the map here?

[Easy]
- and goes to this too.
- SV is too big for easy.
00:04:297 (1,2) - Are you trying to blanket?
00:05:865 (3,1) - Are you trying to blanket?
00:28:218 (8,1) - Avoid overlapping.
00:30:571 - Don't skip this beat.
01:03:120 - Again, ending it here?

[Normal]

00:07:434 (1) - Move one tick to the left. - ok
00:22:532 (5,6) - Avoid stacking. - sorry, no. I think this stack fits the song and it looks good too
00:24:297 - Don't skip that beat. - on hold for now, I planned to change this overall.
00:25:865 - Don't skip. - ^
00:47:434 - How about using an 1/4 reverse slider here? - I don't think it's appropriate for normal diff. I have tried this and I don't like how it plays.[color]
00:55:081 (2,3) - Are you trying to blanket? -
01:17:826 (6,1,2,3) - This part is too hard to read. - uh...oh, will consider changing this.
01:18:807 (3,4) - Not a perfect blanket. - fixed a bit. I hope it's perfect now
01:52:336 (6,1) - You do that a lot. It becomes boring after some time. - ikr. I'll try to come up with new ideas later
02:39:591 (1) - Remove new combo. - wait, I think this one is perfect for the song o.o
02:39:983 (2) - Add new combo. - no....
02:44:101 (6,1,2,3) - This part is too hard to read. - disagree, tested to some new players and they did fine here.
02:47:042 (6,1) - Don't do that. When you stack like that, it's usually with 1/2 ticks. Changing to 1/1 here decreases readability. - yup
03:05:277 (2) - Make the end facing the next slider. - fixed a bit. adding curve to make it looks more natural

[Hard]

00:02:728 (5) - New combo.
00:12:728 (6,7) - Not a perfect blanket. - fixed
00:29:983 (2,3) - Not a perfect blanket. - this too
00:30:963 (5,6) - Bad transition here. - not really, it goes well with the music and the vocal too
00:50:767 (8) - New combo.
01:02:336 (1,2) - Are you trying to blanket? - ah yes
01:05:473 (1,3) - Not a perfect bowl. - how come? I don't see it. where?
01:14:885 (1,2) - Too big of a jump here. - it's fine. trust me.
01:17:238 (7) - Ctrl+G. - no for this. I just don't like it
01:22:336 (3,4) - Not a perfect blanket. - fixed
01:32:532 - Don't skip that beat. - nah, I don't think this one need to be emphasized because it's already clear that I follows some instrument *idk the name tho. piano maybe?
01:38:414 (4,5) - Not a perfect blanket. - let it be~
02:36:846 (4,5) - Again, these two are 1/1 and you usually stack when it's 1/2; so this part is hard to read well. - disagree in this one. I already warn the player in the first kiai time 01:10:571. they should be fine here.
03:18:022 - Don't skip that. Following the vocals alongside with the instruments here is your best bet, since they are most noticeable. - I'll consider this
03:19:983 (8,1) - I suggest using reverse sliders here. - will be considered
03:20:571 (2,3) - Same goes for this. - no for this tho. no reason, really. sorry.
03:28:610 (1,2,3) - Try increasing DS here a bit. - I'm out of idea here. I tried to make (2) stacked with previous slider
03:50:375 - While playing, this vocal here is really noticeable. I would do something about it though. I can tell you are following the music though; so you can leave it be. - I'll leave it then

[General]

- All difficulties must end at the same time. Or else the mapset is unrankable.
- Nice normal difficulty.
- Nice insane difficulty.

I see great potential in this mapset. Keep developing it! - thank you.
I loved the Insane, so kds for you. - oh my, not only a mod but a star too? wow thanks!

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello~ NM as requested - hai hai, welcome!

Nice song~ Have a star in advance xD - whoa...thanks

[General]

1. You are not using this BG : "saekano-2", right? Remove it if so. - maybe later. still searching for a better BG that fits the song

[Normal]

1. 00:08:807 (3) - Pretty nitpicky, but you should move the last anchor point bit to the left for better flow. - ok
2. 00:16:846 (1,2) - Curving (1) even more would make the transition here better. - alright
3. 00:17:434 (2,3) - (3) is in a awkward position, why not try to blanket (2)'s tail with (3)? - in my opinion it is not that awkward. I intend to make the player move the mouse in such way. it's interesting for me.
4. 00:24:297 - Don't miss the snare here, it is quite strong. I suggest to 00:23:512 (1) - reduce this as a 1/1 slider for the clap here. OR you can go for a 1/2 slider and removing 00:24:493 (2) - to emphasize the vocals. - I am planning to remap this part but well, I'm not entirely convinced with your idea. I'll try to remap this later
5. 00:25:865 - ^^ - and this too~
6. 00:26:258 (1,2,3) - These doesn't seem to fit into the rhythm pretty well, how about this? : - great idea! thanks for your idea.
   
   
7. 01:10:963 (5) - To express the vocals here, you should use 2 1/2 sliders. - well, I do want to emphasize the vocal but one is enough. I don't think it's comfortable to play. sorry...
8. 01:35:081 (4) - I think a finish on the head of this slider fits. - hmm...I don't hear cymbal tho. I'll consider this
9. 01:36:454 (6) - Don't miss the clap here - nice one
10. 01:50:571 - Should use a 1/2 slider to express the vocals again. - same with 00:24:297
11. 01:52:140 - ^^ - this too.
12. 01:52:532 (1,2) - This doesn't fit into the rhythm again. Do the same thing like the picture above. - I know, right? xD
13. 01:58:807 (1,2) - Overlapping is fine, but this is just way too much... - fixed a bit
14. 02:21:356 (2,3) - (3) is again on a awkward spot. Try to blanket (2)'s tail with (3) again. - intended. I don't like using blanket too often.
15. 02:28:218 (4,1) - You may as well start (1) off the left, and possibly creating a blanket to create a smoother flow. - nah, I don't like it
16. 02:38:022 (6) - NC here and remove NC at 02:39:591 (1). - no, because I want it have a similar NC pattern with the first kiai
17. 03:09:395 (4,5) - Don't make traps like this, all your previous stacks had a 1/2 spacing. - I'll consider this but no change for now
18. 03:39:199 (6) - NC here and remove NC at 03:40:767 (1). - same with above
19. 03:50:963 (4,1) - Just my opinion, but I think it should look better with a blanket instead of a overlap. - booooo....overlap ftw! lol

thanks to you I've able to remap some part that I mentioned above and I think it turns out nice.
[Hard]

1. 00:19:983 (6,7) - Ugly overlap IMO, would be better with a blanket. - no change.
2. 00:21:160 (1) - Remove NC here. - ok
3. 00:21:552 (3) - Add NC here, and try a jump to express the strong note. - ok
4. 00:26:258 (8,5,6) - Again, ugly overlap IMO, this time use the similar slider shape as 00:30:963 (5). - no. this overlap is nice. it goes well with the song and give a fun flow. try to love overlap instead of blanket! fyi this map inspired by Loneight, that's why I use a lot of overlap.
5. 00:32:140 (7,1) - A jump here doesn't look necessary, I don't really hear any strong beats or instruments. - I don't always put jump in strong beats you know. sometimes, jump added for improving the flow so the map could be more fun. go play it and feel it. no change anyway
6. 00:46:846 (6) - Ctrl + H this and place back at the original position. This will improve the flow a lot. - nope. this is one of my favorite. I have my reason for this, catch me in-game or forum PM if you interested
7. 00:53:512 (7,8) - Flow is broken in this transition, I would rather ctrl + g (5) and (7). - still trying to figure this out
8. 00:55:669 (5,6) - Again an unnecessary jump. - and again with the same reason. no offense
9. 01:27:042 (5,6,7,8) - You used kick sliders for all triplets previously but for quadraplets you are not. You should make these a kick slider. - well, here's the idea of my map. I avoid triplet and using slider instead but for a 5-notes I didn't do that. I do this to make my map have more variation. you would bored if you play a map with most click in white and red line, don't you?
10. 01:35:669 (6,7) - Overlap on these can be avoided while keeping a good flow. - nah. intended to do so.
11. 01:49:395 (1,2) - Don't really know about this overlap... - no change
12. 01:58:414 (6,1) - Another unnecessary jump. - nope.
13. 02:26:846 (1,2,3,4) - For the previous part, you reduced the DS, but here you didn't. Do either 1 of them for the rest of the song. - will consider this. currently looking for ideas
14. 02:38:022 (1,2) - Perfect opportunity for a sliderbow here. - I prefer cross. sorry...
15. 03:28:414 (4,1,2,3) - Listen carefully, there is snares in the background. To show that, it is okay for a increasing volume of claps for all these notes. - ok
16. 03:54:493 (5,6,7,8) - Use a kick slider, since you did that for all triplets. - but not with this one tho.
17. 04:07:238 (3) - I'm hearing that this note should be snapped bit later, maybe even using the 1/24 snap divisor :/ - I will have someone to check this before I made a change

[Mochi's Insane]

1. I can't find anything here, difficulty is really nice

That will be all from me. I hope to see this getting ranked, I love this song
GL! - thank you very much for your support! I will get this ranked, don't worry.

Victorica wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue~ :3 - yo~ hi, welcome!

[Normal]

1. 00:12:728 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe a Pentagon/Star-shaped pattern would be better? Here's an example picture. >< - objectively speaking, yes your pattern is better but....I want to keep this for now. might change it sooner or later. depends on my mood.
   
2. 00:41:944 (1,2) - These two sliders looked awkward. x3 - but it plays fine. I already tested this to some player and they did fine in this part.
3. 01:00:767 (1,2,3,4,1) - The pentagon pattern here isn't very well made. x3 You can use Ctrl D and then Ctrl S to make the patterns. :3 Here's an example picture: - fixed, though it's different with your suggestion a bit.
   
4. 01:04:689 (5,6,1) - I think curving the sliders would make this look nicer~ - I prefer straight. sorry...
5. 01:54:101 (4,5) - On the other hand, these sliders feels a bit too curved. xD - lol. will consider this, no change for now
6. 02:52:140 (1) - Change this slider to a single note and add a spinner after it? (If so, end it at where the slider ended at~) - I like this slider. I would do that if this was easy diff.
7. 03:12:532 (3,4,5,6,1) - Ctrl D~ - umm...for what? I don't see anything changed when I press the button.
8. 03:32:140 (5,6,1) - Curving might make this look better~ - idk tho, still I prefer my current pattern.
9. 04:06:846 - Add something here since there's the piano that you could follow. - yup. thanks for reminding me.

Overall, the Normal difficulty is nice. ^^

[Hard]

1. 00:21:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part feels awkward. >< There's several was you can improve this part like for example for notes 3 to 7 can be turned into a more proper pentagon formation. - I'm not planning to deny this one. it does awkward for some people but that's what makes this map more challenging to play. the player would be more cautious with similar pattern in Insane diff. also, it already have a nice pentagon imo.
2. 00:55:081 (4,5,6) - This part also looks weird. - I guess you don't like stacked notes. this part is fine. they follow the music properly.
3. 01:17:630 (8,1,2) - These feel really far apart. xD - I'm out of ideas here. maybe change it later
4. 02:52:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can use Ctrl D and Ctrl S to fix the positions. :3 - how does Ctrl S help my map? it's a command to save. also, what is Ctrl D? I never used that command and when I try I don't see anything different
5. 03:56:061 (4,5) - Instead of putting the single note near the slider start, why not put it right after the end of it so the flow feels better? - actually, this is better. you can hear a loud piano sound in the last note so a jump should be better to emphasize the sound.

The Hard difficulty has potential~ It's really good but some parts needs a bit more polishing. ^^

[Mochi's Insane]

1. 00:38:022 (2,3,4,5,1) - The star pattern could use a little fixing. x3
2. 02:19:395 - There's a beat missing here. >< Unless you're mapping something else that I didn't pick up on this part.
3. 03:38:218 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'm just curious but the star pattern here looks elongated. xD Is this intentional?

This insane is pretty nice to play~ Relaxing~ :3 Good job~ ^^

I hope my mod helped. ^^ - you did a fine job. thank you for your help!

Kocari wrote:

Here from modding queue

[General Overview]

I think this is pretty good, I didn't find anything that was unrankable or that may cause of a big concern in the future. So far it looks great. Do turn off osb though as there isn't a storyboard and the file is just there causing junk. Other than that great job on one hell of a good map. Call me back when easy is done if you want to - pretty sure I have turned off the .osb. please check it (redownload). it may be still there or not.

[Hard]

1. I believe the hitsound pattern like this would benefit more, as the claps used during this section is a bit delayed because of notes (3-5)
   00:21:552 (3) - Add clap 00:21:944 (5) - Remove clap 00:22:140 (6) - Claps on all of them - This will benefit the hitsound more as it maintains the double claps before and at 00:22:728 (8,9) - and removing claps on 5 benefits with 00:22:532 (7) - added clap for 00:22:140 (4) - and that's all. for me, it sounds weird when I remove the clap in 00:21:552 (1) - and removing clap in 00:21:944 (3).
2. 00:29:395 (1) - Sorry gotta be nazi, move slightly down for better blanket - so nitpicky. fixed
3. 00:43:316 (4) - Maybe have more effect with the anchors http://puu.sh/j2emo/3a52bb428c.jpg - this is awesome dude!
4. 00:46:846 (6) - Keeping this as a regular straight slider will be better, the purpose of the red anchor was to move the slider up anyways, so having a regular slider going up would be more clean to the before slider and the repeats, I mean common does this not look good? http://puu.sh/j2eqA/bd85864da9.jpg - umm...no. it looks good but I want to make it slightly different from other map.
5. 01:35:669 (6,7) - ooo overlap here is a bit strange, maybe lean more on the side of this like you use to have before http://puu.sh/j2exn/0faa583356.jpg - nah, it's just my preference. strange is nice for sometimes xD
   like dis 01:48:218 (6,7) -
6. 02:16:061 (4,5,6,7) - This seems quite jumbled and doesn't really look good, cleaner like this http://puu.sh/j2eCY/81c1d8b0d6.jpg - okay~
7. 02:28:218 (4) - Clap to utilize the beat in the music? also to start off the kiai strongly with that clap, so these can dramatically increase the entry to it - oh wow. this part now feels a lot better then before.
8. 02:28:218 (4,1) -
9. 03:09:395 (6) - Can start a NC here to keep it short, and because the stringy guitar or something sound increases in volume, so you can use NC here to categorize that - alright. still not sure about this tho.
10. 03:28:610 (1,2,3) - You can emphasize these by using inheriting timing sections to increase the volume of each note to be played to its potential - yup
11. 03:42:924 (2,3) - I said the same thing in insane as well, you can have double finishes here to increase the vocal effect as having just one play the part she is singing and leaving the other out seems strange, fully commit to that vocal - umm...maybe? changed anyway. xD
    Nicely done - /o/

[Normal]

1. 00:03:512 (4) - Distance Snap please - okok
2. 00:04:101 (5) - Same as above here - k
3. 00:08:807 (3) - Claps here makes this stronger on head and tail for that beat in the music - whistle is good enough for this one. clap is too loud
4. 00:11:160 (2) - DS - ok
5. 00:12:728 (4) - Same ^
6. 00:14:885 (4,5) - Try something like this, the pattern itself is ok but keep it turned into a rectangle rather than a weird one http://puu.sh/j2f7w/45c35a6880.jpg - lol ok
7. 00:23:120 - The downbeat would be better utilized if it was a note rather than ending it with a slider as the next slider appears to be awkward or a slider can work into this http://puu.sh/j2fe7/798cd6a785.jpg - oh man, ily <3
8. 00:42:728 (2) - I'm not sure about this, but lets see what others have to say - this is fine.
   That's probably about it but be sure to check DS, to maintain 1.0 some are slightly off so give it a good lookthrough so you can fix and make cleaner - roger that

haha5957 wrote:

[Hard]
01:17:630 (8,1) - I expect something harder or dynamic pattern on this part of music, looks too simple for "the most kiaiest part" of a map...? - I don't have any ideas left for this one orz
02:37:042 (x) - I excpect a beat here, dont care it being circle or sliderend ovo - added a note for now. might change to original pattern later.
02:44:689 (1) - same as 01:17 - change to slider and a note

good map and good luck! - thanks for the star!

Ipas wrote:

Hello! M4M

[Normal]

1. AR 4.5 ? AR 5 kinda harsh for the easiest diff in this mapset - no, not yet. I'll change if I didn't add Easy diff
2. 00:20:571 (2) - The transition with 00:19:983 (1) - seems a bit off . Move 00:20:571 (2) - to 236|328 for better transition based what you made at those objects . It creates nicer flow here - it is nice but not my intention to do that. I just don't want it to be that neat.
3. 00:39:591 (2) - Same here, the transition might be more problem than above . Move it 388|288 to fix it - I think the cursor movement is better this way.
4. 00:41:944 (1,2) - These overlap kinda hard and tricky for the easiest diff at this mapset . Simply, just bend this out 00:41:944 (1) - to the opposite side to make it more playable on easiest diff - no. it looks bad imo
5. 00:48:218 (1) - The current slider direction made up a weird overlap with 00:48:807 (2) - . How about make it like this? It looks like the transition might be improved like these two tho - that's too common. I don't like it.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:17:238 (5) - Even this slider bent to this side to made up nice flow with 01:15:669 (3,4) - , but it flow a bit rough to 01:17:826 (6) - , so the better intuitive flow is bend it to the opposite side . It won't breaks the flow with the previous notes imo - yes for this
7. 01:27:042 (5) - Curve it to the left side? The current slider plays a bit rigid for me - ok
8. 01:58:807 (1,2) - This overlap might be kinda hard to read . Bending this one 01:58:807 (1) - to the opposite side is fine to do, so I recommend you to use it - the flow will be unnatural if I do that and it will looks weird too. current pattern is fits better.
9. 02:08:218 (1,2) - Same here, but not too much . Simply, just move 02:09:003 (2) - to 244|32 to avoid that overlap - no.
10. 02:55:277 - Extend the break into here . Looks even better than just put it and suddenly stop the music flow while it still have a connection to the beat that placed by this slider's 02:52:140 (1) - tail - yup
11. 03:09:395 (4,5) - I don't recommend this stack, because you stacked out 1/2 rhythm, example : 03:30:375 (2,3) - . For the easiest diff, there may be people who made up a misread here, even the distance when the stacked note played is far . I suggest you to change it into 1/1 slider like the previous one, or make them unstacked for sure - moved (5)
12. 03:54:493 (5,1) - Better not to overlap them . It made something plays awkward here, so I suggest you to curve this slider out to the left side03:54:493 (5) - , then move 03:54:885 (1) - somewhere else to make nice flow here, like this . Or you can make it curved to the upper side too like this - hmm...okay
    
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Good Luck! - thank you very much for mod!

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

Hi, from modding queue :3
[Normal]
00:24:493 (2) - move to 00:24:297 - ok
01:17:238 (5) - maybe an S shaped slider or this http://imgur.com/ZcjUQQI - fixed, but a bit different with your suggestion.
01:35:081 (4) - make it straight up a bit. - no it's fine
01:53:120 (2,3) - move to 01:53:316 - oh man, I love you for this!!!!
02:55:277 - Break start from here. - roger that
[Hard]
00:01:160 (1) - do this http://imgur.com/NnElz7V - ok
00:30:767 (4) - make this unstack from 2 a bit. - no
00:39:395 (2,3,4) - (My opinion) http://imgur.com/dlsuozp - sorry no, it will skip strong beat at (3). I want to emphasize that. nice arrange tho
01:27:042 (5,6,7,8) - I know you do this to balance the patterns but this shouldn't appear in Hard diff. change to a 1/4 slider instead - well, a bit "spice" is fine. I think the player can handle this stream, though some player having problem with DT. I will wait for another opinion about this.
03:54:493 (5,6,7,8) - ^ - this too
01:42:140 (6) - less shape http://imgur.com/50YBTbK - oh wow, I never thought of this pattern. nice one!
01:43:120 (1) - ^ - but not for this
02:01:748 (1) - maybe change this to a circle and a 1/1 slider, then remove 2. - nice
03:01:552 - from here to 03:07:630 - the music is not so strong, and you placed more jump than the strong part, which is from 03:07:826 - to 03:14:101. Maybe decrease the jump - to be honest I don't know how to answer this. your point makes sense but I want it that way. maybe I put jump because the music pitch goes higher there.
That's all, good luck on your map ;;w;; It's great. - I have to admit, this is an awesome mod! please mod more of my map in the future.

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Well this is just a recheck since you requested me.

1. Unrankable issues
2. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
3. Small suggestions/nazi

[General]

1. On Mochi's Insane, 01:36:454 (2,3) - these 2 notes' endings aren't snapped.
2. Disable widescreen support for Easy. - done

[Easy]

1. Ok OD 1 for this difficulty seems way too easy. Considering the pace of the song, maybe increase the OD on this difficulty to 2, and increase the OD on Normal to 4 so that OD has a better spread. - ok
2. Patterns are great, but some rhythm choices aren't the best. Some of them are listed below. Check for the similar issues in the difficulty, mentioning all of them is kinda tiring to do so ;-;
3. 00:11:748 - 00:13:316 - Leaving these 2 spaces blank plays out weird as it doesn't go well with 00:24:297 (2,4) - , as this breaks off the consistency in rhythm. Having consistency will definitely make the difficulty easy to play out for beginners, rather than having so much variety in rhythm. It also doesn't feel nice to play with the other combos such as 00:16:846 (1,2,3,4) - these, as the snares are emphasized here. - removed some notes
4. 00:27:826 (3,4) - This rhythm too, is a bit hard to follow compared to 00:15:277 (3) - this, as the downbeat isn't emphasized here, which may confuse beginners. - fixed
5. 00:37:238 (2,3,4) - This is pretty hard compared to others, and even when compared to Normal, as 3 consecutive hits even with 1/1 spacing is too fast for beginners to take up when notes before didn't have this. It doesn't matches the song at the same time, as this is the calm part of the song, and making hard patterns on calm parts doesn't really work. - fixed
6. 01:00:767 (1,2,3,4,1) - Well I am fine with above if you insist to keep it, but for this, I'm not positive. Beginners surely won't expect a 5 consecutive hits when the maximum consecutive hits previously used was only 3. And it is pretty much more tiring than the previous consecutive hits. - this too
7. 02:20:375 (4,1) - Avoid notes getting too close to each other, you would want to keep the difficulty clean and easier for beginners to read for the easiest difficulty in the set. Yes, I am aware you used slider overlaps, but notes which are overlapping just by a bit like these doesn't really look that good. - this is fine as is imo. I want to make a slightly stronger curve in this one.
8. 02:34:101 (3,1) - Should have mentioned this earlier, IMO the slider overlaps would be much more better if (3)'s tail was completely overlapped by (1). - nope imo. I just don't how it looks. kinda boring since many maps using it, especially in map with lots of blankets. I want to take different path.
9. 03:07:826 (1) - I would advise you to avoid this kind of slider shapes. The red anchor is barely readable for beginners as it is really close to the head of this slider. Try to make the red anchor clear to read like you did in 03:10:963 (1) - and for the other similar sliders. - true but that is what I'm aiming for. sometimes they can miss it because they thought the slider is slightly close to the previous note.
10. 03:57:238 (1) - Remove NC here as it will keep the consistency that you were having with those. - ok
11. Like mentioned at the first point, some issues are recurring in the difficulty, you would need to check for them. - yup, did some changes

That is all from me, GL! - thank you very much for your second mod!

Xelasto wrote:

Incoming mod from The Gentleman's Modding Queue! - greeting sir! thanks for coming.

[Easy]
Overall Difficulty: At least 2 - yep

00:05:081 (2,3) - IDK if this works well. Try not to overlap. - nope, this looks good and plays good. no problem.
00:16:846 (1) - This shape is Really weird. Fix it up a bit. - how does it weird? it's fine imo
00:21:552 (2) - ^ - curved a bit
00:38:807 (1) - Rotate this more so it leads you to the next better. - yep, 10 degrees
00:44:297 (4) - This ends on a really strong beat. I suggest you have someone starting something here, rather than ending something. - ok
00:49:787 (3) - Is there no other shape to do? - no, I try to add some unconventional slider.
01:01:159 (2,3) - Change into a slider so it's not such a big line of notes? - yes but (1,2)
01:27:434 (1,1) - This makes the player curve down once, then go back up and do it again. Kinda doesn't have good flow. - changed to another shape, still experimenting tho.
01:41:552 (4,1) - I don't know why you made such weird shapes. There is no note in the middle or anything 0-o - hm? why should it be a note in the middle to justify the slider? it's not as weird as you think. I am trying to be creative here, well my apologize if you don't like the slider.
01:49:395 (1,2) - I don't think these shapes really fit the music well. - but the slider fits the music, the shape is just for aesthetic sake. or if you have a suggestion for a new shape that fits well please share it.
02:20:375 (4,1) - Please don't let these touch - sorry.
02:20:767 (1,2) - Make these parallel - no, I prefer this way. it also has better flow than parallel imo
02:31:356 (4,1) - Don't let them touch - no, sorry. I like this kind of things.
03:04:297 - I suggest adding a beat here. Would really help the flow here. - um, maybe no. because it will make long combo.
03:42:336 (1) - I don't see a point in having a shape like this. - all for the sake of aesthetic. don't you feel bored if you play a map and it has the same kind of curved slider all time?
03:51:356 (3,1) - Please no overlap - no, just no.
04:05:669 (2) - Blanket better - no sorry, I try to avoid blanket.

Very solid easy mode. I could really only find little things. Good job. I hope this gets ranked ^.^ it's a nice song. - [/color]

Dono027 wrote:

Sorry, I will mod only the normal diff. :c - oh no, it's totally fine! no problem

Normal

00:13:709 (1,2) - Why not a slider ? - um, I'm trying to spice things a bit since I use a lot of slider in this difficulty and in Easy too. I do this to balance the spread.
01:43:120 (1,2) - Delete the second slider and make a reverse on the 1st. - sorry, the current rhythm is better
02:39:591 (1,2,3,4) - Slider ? - uh, no. sorry.
03:05:277 - Why not that ? - I already use that kind of rhythm a lot, mostly in kiai time. this part is quite calm so I think this rhythm fits better than that.


Sorry again. Good luck for your map - thank you very much for your support! but sorry, no kudosu since I didn't change anything. very sorry....

Runa_Hime wrote:

[Hard]
tolong digeser, senpai
00:06:454 (6) - geser ke x472 y244 - k
00:06:650 (7) - geser ke x436 y324 - k
00:27:042 (1) - geser ke x228 y70 - no
00:27:238 (2) - geser ke x260 y149 (biar mau bentuk segi enam) - no
00:49:983 (5) - geser ke x40 y292 - no
00:50:179 (6) - geser ke x30 y210 - no
00:50:375 (7) - geser ke x95 y160 - no
01:01:159 (2) - geser ke x251 y318 - k
01:01:552 (3) - geser ke x308 y380 - k
01:01:944 (4) - geser ke x384 y344 - k
01:34:493 (2) - geser ke x96 y48 - k
01:34:689 (3) - geser ke x172 y16 - k
01:47:826 (4,5,6,7) - ini saya gak tau gimana cara ngebentuk segi enamnya :v - it's fine as is.
02:19:199 (6) - geser ke x320 y194 - no
02:19:395 (7) - geser ke x365 y259 - no
02:19:591 (8) - geser ke x442 y252 - no
02:19:787 (9) - geser ke x476 y181 - no

- tbh I'm not fond of this kind of mod.

17:06 *nya10 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/802859 Sawai Miku - Colorful. [Easy]]
17:07 nya10: Lagi males deh `-`
17:07 nya10: Susah mod Easy
17:08 Rukaru: iya, apalagi mapnya udah bagus. awkawkawka
17:08 Rukaru: jk bro, jk.
17:09 nya10: Iya udah bagus :<
17:09 nya10: 00:54:493 (1,2) - Gatau sih ini kesannya kalo slider lurus disini
17:09 nya10: Jadi kaku begitu
17:09 nya10: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3883816
17:09 nya10: Gambaran kasarnya
17:09 Rukaru: kea style 2012 gitu ya?
17:10 nya10: idk lol
17:10 nya10: Cuma gw ngeliatnya kurang bagus aja sih
17:10 nya10: Preference aja sih
17:10 nya10: Itu slider 2 nya juga dilengkungin
17:10 nya10: Coba menurut lu gimana deh?
17:10 Rukaru: slider 1 nya aja deh
17:10 nya10: Sipsip
17:11 Rukaru: sumbang pattern buat 00:57:630 (1) - pls
17:11 Rukaru: 00:57:630 (1,2) - both
17:12 Rukaru: how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3883823
17:12 nya10: Better
17:12 nya10: Nah kan gw gabisa suggest begitu
17:12 nya10: Awakwakwakwk
17:12 Rukaru: ok then
17:12 Rukaru: inget ya nanti ngepost di thread
17:12 Rukaru: yok lanjut
17:13 nya10: Gw post savelog aja ya
17:13 nya10: Males `-`
17:13 Rukaru: iya itu dah
17:13 nya10: 01:24:297 (1,2) - Titik merahnya di ketengahin?
17:13 nya10: Sejajar sama slider 3 sebelumnya ofc
17:14 Rukaru: nope
17:14 nya10: Oke
17:14 Rukaru: kan mainstream jadinya....
17:14 nya10: Sipsip
17:14 Rukaru: 01:27:434 (1) - tolong...
17:15 nya10: Bingung itu gw
17:15 nya10: Gw bukan tipe orang yang bisa bikin art slider.....
17:17 nya10: Dibikin loop bisa ga ya? `-`
17:17 Rukaru: I'm trying....bentar nanti aku upload gambarnya
17:18 nya10: Kalo mau jahat, ribbon xDDDD *ngasal
17:18 nya10: 01:35:081 (2,3) - Somehow ini kalo gw, lebih enak slider 3 nya lurus aja deh
17:19 nya10: Point kedua slider 3 di (328/356)
17:20 Rukaru: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3883844
17:21 nya10: Lebih maksa `-`
17:21 nya10: Forget it , buat sekarang
17:21 nya10: 02:06:650 (2,3,1) - ini kalo gw preferencenya dibikin wavy sih, cuma at least imo dibikin simetri deh slider 2 sama slider 1 nya
17:22 Rukaru: 01:35:081 (2,3) - hmm...ngga deh. aku suka pattern seperti ini.
17:22 nya10: Sip
17:22 nya10: Preference aja semuanya, bebas diterima / ditolak kok ~
17:22 nya10: Gw juga gamau terlalu ngancurin style orz
17:23 Rukaru: iyaaaaa.....santai aja :)
17:24 Rukaru: 02:06:650 (2,3,1) - kalau ini dibuat simetri sepertinya akan kelihatan kaku imo. soalnya slider disini lurus, lurus banget. ga ada miringnya.
17:24 nya10: Makanya gw prefer wavy itu sih....
17:24 nya10: Dibikin 2 lengkung
17:24 nya10: Atas sama bawah
17:26 nya10: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3883862 begini, kurang lebih?
17:26 Rukaru: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3883861
17:27 Rukaru: wew 61/62
17:27 nya10: Wew
17:27 nya10: Itu gw bingung sih
17:27 nya10: Mending kaya awal aja dulu
17:27 nya10: Masih lebih prefer yang pertama
17:32 nya10: 02:34:101 (3,1) - Liat slider 3 nya deh, gimana? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3883875
17:32 nya10: My easy mod actually, won't be helpful
17:32 Rukaru: 02:06:650 (2,3,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3883878
17:32 nya10: Oh bisa juga
17:33 Rukaru: 02:34:101 (3,1) - umm...ngga deh. ga suka
17:34 nya10: Coba titik merah pertamanya lu ilangin
17:34 nya10: Di 2:06:650
17:34 nya10: Di slider 1 nya , bisa dibikin blanket gak? `-`
17:34 nya10: Eh gajadi deh
17:34 nya10: Gatau deh
17:34 Rukaru: 02:05:081 (1) - ini?
17:34 nya10: `Bukan
17:35 nya10: 02:08:218 (1) - 
17:35 Rukaru: nooo....aku berusaha menghindari blanket.
17:35 nya10: Okay
17:35 nya10: 02:44:297 (1,2) - Feels weird
17:35 nya10: But idk how to fix this one
17:36 nya10: Let me think a way
17:36 nya10: Lengkung slider 1 sama 2 nya dibalik
17:36 nya10: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3883891
17:37 nya10: Oh well..... Bisa kerja ga ya buat new combo itu......
17:38 Rukaru: gak aneh tuh pas dimainin? agak ngelawan flow dari (3) nya
17:38 nya10: Iya makanya
17:38 nya10: Digeser semuanya?
17:39 nya10: Biar ga ngelawan? Kan bentar lagi break itu
17:39 Rukaru: ke?
17:39 nya10: Eh susah di slider 1 terakhirnya
17:39 nya10: Bentar
17:40 nya10: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3883903
17:40 nya10: Digeser itu dari slider 1 ke belakang semuanya ke kiri
17:41 nya10: Sampe break
17:41 nya10: 02:52:140 (1) - Kalo ini bisa di adjust sih bisa digeser lagi
17:43 Rukaru: keep current pattern. menurutku ga enak mainin 02:44:297 (1) - kalo lengkungnya dibalik
17:43 nya10: Sip
17:43 nya10: 02:45:865 (2,1) - Gw actually lebih concern ke sini sih
17:43 nya10: Bingung juga
17:43 nya10: Cuma beneran itu somehow ada missing buat gw
17:43 Rukaru: kenapa? kan udah satu aliran...
17:44 nya10: Kenapa ya ? `0`
17:44 Rukaru: flow maksudku. xD
17:44 nya10: Continue
17:44 nya10: Iya flow ada kok
17:45 nya10: 03:04:689 (1,2) - 
17:45 nya10: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3883913
17:45 nya10: Ini gimana?
17:46 nya10: Ya lu tau lah bikin yang lebih bagus dari yang gw punya, itu cuma garis besar aja....
17:51 Rukaru: nooo.... soalnya aku pengen buat curved slider sama slider lurus terlihat seimbang dalam jumlah
17:51 Rukaru: biar keliatan lebih futuristik juga sih
17:51 nya10: Sip oke
17:51 nya10: Then nothing more to say
17:52 Rukaru: itu aja?
17:52 nya10: 03:54:885 (1) - Except this one
17:52 nya10: Ya
17:52 Rukaru: 01:27:434 (1) - please...
17:52 Rukaru: susah
17:52 Rukaru: 03:54:885 (1) - this is beautiful imo
17:52 nya10: xDDDD

AlejandroMedia wrote:

Hello, from the AlejandroMedia's standard queue!
- hi, I thought you already dropped this map o.o

General

1. Delete that "./。" in the title - no, it's the official title.
2. Easy's Circle Size must be "3" - nope. there is never an exact number about CS. as long as it make sense, it's fine. 3.5 is the perfect one for my current pattern.
3. Why Mochi's Insane haves a different BG? - because, why not? okay, here's my reason. in the anime, there are 5 heroine (kato, eriri, utaha, izumi, michiru). I already use one bg that contains 3 of 5 characters and I have one guest difficulty here. naturally other 2 will go there. it also common to find map with GD and has different BG in the GD.

Easy

00:05:865 (3,1) - Distanced, fix it - k
00:10:571 (1) - Indirect slider, fix it - did you mean indirect as straight or maybe as against the flow? if that so, no then. I never intended to make this like that. this is fine as is. just because this is easy difficulty it does not mean I have to go following the flow all times. I already give the player enough time to move the cursor to the next slider. it is fine.
00:12:140 (2) - Same - no
00:38:807 (1) - Same - no
01:30:571 (1,2,1,2,3) - Replace this with a break - sorry no. I want to map this.
01:44:689 (3) - (AiMod) Too far from the previous hit circle - meh. it won't make any difference but I fixed that anyway.
02:27:042 (1) - Slider isn't well accommodated - okay.

I'll recommend you use Distance Snap because some objects are distanced. - surely I already do. some of them has slightly different distance by 0.1-0.5 but it won't make any difference imo.

The rest of the mapset it's well. Good luck on rank! - well, thank you for mod.

FCL wrote:

NM from my queue -

• [Easy]

1. 00:24:689 (2) - move it by straight line the flow (182;25) - alright
2. 00:35:669 (1,2,3) - i don't like how you to follow a rhythm here. Maybe like this http://puu.sh/l4om7/8c6bc1d056.jpg - in my opinion, deleting (3) doesn't make any sense. sure the reverse slider is nice to emphasize the rhythm but I want to keep this. I think the cursor movement feels better this way.
3. 00:43:120 - you not should to miss circle here, imo - I do this to make it short enough for the player. adding a note here will make this 00:40:375 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - a very long combo for easy diff. it would be unbalanced from the rest of the map except in the very first part.
4. 00:47:434 (3,1) - blanket maybe? - clearly a nope. I try to avoid blanket too much.
5. 00:56:061 (2) - you should to make this slider of form, like 00:54:493 (1) - . Or vice versa - I actually was using straight slider for both but I ended up change it because lack of playfulness imo. this has been discussed with nya10 in the previous mod.
6. 01:46:258 (1,2) - ^, or do NC to 01:47:826 (2) - no for both. I think I have used enough symmetry slider in this map. as for NC, well...it does not make sense imo.
7. 03:06:258 (2) - make head to parallel with 03:04:689 (1) - sorry, nope.
8. 04:05:669 (2) - move it a bit down for create of blanket - this too. no reason, really.

Good quality diff, good luck! - thank you very much for mod! спасибо

MondoKuma wrote:

Ok All of the difficulties are fine other than some combos numbers. Lots of the combos went to only 4 or 5, this is fine for easy and normal but i don't know about insane and hard

Everything else is fine except for a few things in hard difficulty.
First of is 00:40:179 (4) - I see no reason for this slider to go back. Just make it a long one with a jump after it. - I think this one fits with the drum. no change.
01:12:924 (3) - Maybe put a circle after this slider - nope. I want to emphasize a certain instrument here idk what is it called.
01:44:297 (3) - This goes off the grid which is usually not Good for a map. - it's actually fine. go play it, you will notice it still in the playfield. it won't go off the screen. as long as it is not off the screen then it is fine. I also do this to make my map looks wider. I mean, if I map in the grid only it will look cramped imo.
01:45:865 (5) - 01:46:258 (6) - Same as ^^^ - same reason ^
01:49:199 (14) - Cut this combo in half, Fourteen combo is really long - oh, thanks.
01:49:003 (13) - Goes off the grid - same reason ^^
01:56:258 (2) - ^^^^^ - same reason ^ also this one is not touching hp bar so yeah. if this were touching hp bar, I will move it.
02:19:787 (9) - Cut this combo it goes to 11 - it's fine because my logic in adding new combo is - "adding new combo every 2 downbeats", not the number of notes. downbeats is that long white line in the timeline.
02:30:571 (6) - Off the Grid - yep, same reason as above.
02:31:356 (8) - ^^^^ - yep, same reason as above.
04:01:159 (1) - ^^^^ - yep, same reason as above.


Other than that it's a really good map! Good Job! - fast services o.o thank you very much for your time and your mod. I suggest you to play the map to confirm that those notes you pointed above which is off the grid, is actually fine when you play it.

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from queue~ hi, thanks for coming.
Also, I forgot to mention that I'm a noob at standard playing (372pp lol) and modding, so my mod might not be that good.
This song is so good <3 Just finished the anime yesterday too

[Easy]

1. 00:01:160 (1) - Add a finisher at the start of the slider? There is a cymbal sound in the instrumentals. - ah, yes. it's there.
2. 00:05:865 (3) - How about blanketing this slider around the end of 00:05:081 (2)? It would look nicer. - no. I prefer overlap rather than blanket.
3. 00:18:022 (2) - Remove this hit? Although it does matches the vocals, it's kind of inconsistent with the rest of the section. What I find is that in Easy difficulties, from my modding experience and playing standard maps, most of the song should be kind of matched with the beat, and rarely changes rhythm. If you need to match to the vocals, you should keep the rhythm consistent throughout the whole section. In the second verse after the first kiai, it is much better because you've used the 1/1 rhythms more frequently. idk, that's just my opinion. - I am sorry, no change here. I think it's consistent. imo you are right about that "rhythm rarely change" but it does not mean the map should not change the rhythm. we need it to bring more variation to the map and make it fun to play. you know, this is a 4 minutes map. playing same rhythm all along the song is boring, right?
4. 00:47:434 (3) - This slider kind of seems to be going at a smaller slope than 00:46:650 (2). Maybe bring up the end of the slider just a bit? Alternatively, you can just match this slider with the previous slider. - nah, I like my current pattern
5. 00:57:238 (3) - Remove this hit for the same reason as 00:18:022 (2). - nope. I don't see any reason to remove this. this also cover strong beats so it's fine to have it.
6. 00:59:199 (2) - The spacing is too large (1.15x) from the previous slider. - for aesthetic sake. it's just slightly far, not to the extreme point. I am sure the player will do fine in this part.
7. 01:11:748 (1,2,3) - This rhythm isn't the best imo. How about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3949672 Ignore the placements. I moved or changed all cicles/sliders highlighted. - this is nice actually. I planned to to this at first but I want to make some variation to the rhythm.
8. 01:30:571 (1) - How about a finisher at the start of this slider? - yes
9. 02:05:081 (1) - Make this a curved slider for a symmetrical pattern with the next slider. Alternatively, make 02:06:650 (2) a straight slider. - no, imo they does not deserve to be symmetrical.
10. 02:08:218 (1) - Maybe make this a slider that blankets 02:07:826 (3)? - no, I prefer overlap
11. 02:20:767 (1) - ^ - same
12. 02:22:336 (2) - Making this parallel to 02:20:767 (1) would look better imo. - uh, no. sorry.
13. 02:34:885 (1) - Blanket this slider around the end of 02:34:101 (3). - no
14. 03:15:767 - Maybe a spinner starting from here to 03:17:238? Just what I thought would be nice Same in Normal and Hard. - ah, I see you want to match the instrument but it would be bad to play. no then. xD
15. 03:28:218 (1) - Maybe make this a repeat slider? Like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3949719 This would just match the instrumentals better. - will be considered. if I didn't do it, probably because I don't want to add 1/2 rhythm in my map
16. 04:02:728 (3) - Blanket this slider around the end of 04:01:944 (2)? - sorry no.
17. 04:05:669 (2) - Ctrl + G, or move this slider down a bit. This slider goes far up compared to the rest of the song. - it's fine. it's still in playfield. this slider also emphasize the high pitch of the instrument.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:160 (1) - Add a finisher, as mentioned in the Easy. - ok
2. 00:13:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - If I were a normal-level player, I'd find this hard for the beginning portion. Maybe change some circles to sliders? - will consider this
3. 00:26:258 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change this rhythm to match 00:23:512 (1,2,3,4,5)? I liked the first rhythm better. - me too but I won't fit with the vocal. I try to follow the vocal in second rhythm.
4. 01:07:042 (4) - Move this slider to 01:06:846 and end it at 01:07:434. You've matched the vocals precisely here, so you should do that here too. - I do this to avoid too long combo. it already long enough in 01:04:689 (5,6,1,2,3) -
5. 01:18:610 (2) - Why is this the hit stacked here when the next rhythm like this isn't? This may confuse players so maybe rearrange the hits so that this isn't stacked with the next slider. - I don't want to spoil normal player too much. they must learn how to deal with stack. they might be confused at first, second, or maybe 5th try. but they will master it gradually.
6. 01:19:591 (4) - Same as 01:07:042 (4). Move to 01:19:395, end at 01:19:983. - nope, same reason.
7. 01:27:434 (1) - This slider is perfect <3 - oh really? I planned to change the shape tho. lets keep it then.
8. 01:46:061 (6) - Move to 01:45:865 and add a clap hit to this circle. This is the only rhythm that is inconsistent with the rest of this section. - yep.
9. 01:53:905 (3) - Unstack this like 01:18:610 (2). - I think this one fits well. sorry...
10. 02:31:552 (6) - ^ - I predict, by this time they already grasp my idea, they can read it fine since I do a lot in entire map. they will understand the rhythm. I am sure.
11. 02:33:316 (4) - Move back to 02:33:120, and end at 02:33:709. - nope, same reason with 01:07:042 (4) -
12. 03:34:493 (4) - ^ Move back to 03:34:297 and end at 03:34:885. - this too ^
13. 03:41:944 (4) - You had pentagonal, rectangular, or straight pattern with these 1/1 circles, so maybe place this circle so that you create a pentagonal pattern. - slightly changed but not pentagonal pattern. somehow I don't want to do that.
14. 03:43:120 (3) - Adding a finisher on the start of this slider would sound good, and would match the Hard. - alright then, might revert again later. still not sure.
15. 03:47:042 (4) - Move back to 03:46:846 and end at 03:47:434. - no
16. 03:51:748 (1) - If you can blanket this slider with the end of 03:50:963 (4), it would look nice. - but the flow is better this way. I prefer overlap rather than blanket.
17. 04:03:512 (5) - Make this slider straight; the rest of the repeat sliders in the ending section are straight. - that is why I make it curved.
18. 04:07:434 (1) - Move to 4:07:336? For consistency with Insane. Same thing for Hard if accept. - um...maybe no.

[Hard]

1. 00:01:160 (1) - Add a finisher? - yup
2. 00:02:728 (5) - Maybe adjust this slider so that the spacing is about 1.2x with the previous circle. - nope, it's intended to make a small jump.
3. 00:17:434 (2) - Blanket this slider with the previous slider? - noooo
4. 00:21:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is kind of confusing. Maybe change the placements or the rhythm. - imo this pattern is fine in hard. come challenge won't hurt and this one is not that extreme.
5. 00:23:709 (2) - Blanket with the previous slider? - definitely not. *no offense
6. 00:32:140 (7) - This jump to the next hit is rather large for a section at the start of the song and a non-kiai section imo. How about Ctrl + G or readjusting? - not really, this kind of jump is now common. there are even hard diff with harsher jump
7. 00:51:944 (2) - Make the second half of this slider more parallel to 00:51:356 (1) for aesthetic purposes. - hell yea! thanks.
8. 01:00:767 (1,2,3,4,1) - The spacing of this section is easier than the spacing in the Normal. Maybe space it out a bit wider. - nope. this is what we call an antijump.
9. 01:41:552 (5) - Replace with slider with a rhythm that matches more with the vocals, since the rest of this combo is matched to the vocals. Maybe something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3950215 - nice suggestion but no change. I can't put it in words tho, sorry I cannot explain my reason. really sorry.
10. 02:48:414 (2) - Place this circle so that the previous slider is blanketing it better. - it would make cursor movement a bit egdy. though player can handle it well, I don't want to make it as blanket. I know some people might expect it to be blanketed but still... no.
11. 03:06:258 (5,6,7) - The jump should be from 6 to 7, not from 5 to 6 imo. Change? - no change but you are right. I cannot explain why tho.... just can't. it's not don't want to.
12. 03:54:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - Generally, I prefer the last chorus to be harder than the rest. Maybe at least match the rhythm with 02:52:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)? - very nice idea actually but want to do "A-B-A" pattern in my map. you see... this 01:28:022 (2,3,4,5) - has same rhythm with 03:55:473 (2,3,4,5) - meanwhile 02:52:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is different. well I hope you get what did I mean. I also do this slightly awkward jump here 03:56:061 (4,5) - I think this is enough to make it more difficult.

[Mochi's Insane]

I'm not that good at modding at Insanes yet, so I don't have much. Sorry

1. 01:04:297 (2,3,4) - I just found this confusing when I first played through the map, probably because of the stacked notes. Change to make it a bit easier to read? It might just be me. You could also match the rhythm to be the same as 02:30:571 (2,3) too.
2. 01:53:120 (3) - You've been making sliders at the parts where vocals are present so maybe you should change the rhythm here like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3950433
3. 01:56:258 (5,6) - Kind of relating to the above, this is the only part where you don't use sliders and instead use circles to mark the start and the end of a quarter note in the vocals. Maybe change so that 5 and 6 to be a single slider that starts and ends where the two hits used to be.
4. 04:03:905 (4,5) - Idk, but I think you should keep the two repeat slider pattern consistent here. This is the only place where it's not a 1/4 4 hit repeat slider but instead two mini-sliders. Maybe change?

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That's all. I'm not good at standard, but hopefully my mod has helped. - you, sir. your mod is awesome! I like this mod. I think you can make it into BN if you have more experience. this mod is seriously awesome. no joke.

Good luck on rank~ - thank you very much!

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~ Sry, if my English is a little bit cramped.

[General]

1. Easy had "Widescreen Support" checked while other diffs hadn't. - thanks
2. I think you should put more breaks in the song(like mochi did) because if you have just 1 break for a 4 min song it really does tire out the player. Also, after 03:15:669 some players might misunderstood that the break would coming and might caught off guard completely. - idk... will consider this

[Easy]

1. Why CS 3.5? Isn't that too small for easy? it shouldn't have the same cs size with Normal imo. - not really. I feel more comfortable with 3.5 than 3. easy can have the same cs with normal. it's not an absolute thing to have smaller cs in easy.
2. 00:33:709 (2) - Just my opinion, but I think this slider should be a straight one, because it doesn't give a good symmetrical with 00:32:532 (1) kinda weird to put a curve slider next to the straight one, also the new stanza(not sure if I'm using the right word) is starting from 00:34:689 so it would make more sense for a transition here in terms of slider, since all sliders in previous stanza are straight ones. - fixed
3. 02:07:826 (3,1) - Overlaps kinda weird imo. Even you decided to keep this, it doesn't look same with 02:20:375 (4,1) because it doesn't look overlapped much as 02:07:826 (3,1) maybe you could at least make them more similar to each other than this? - it feels and looks rigid if I make it similar. no change.

[Normal]

1. 00:13:709 (1,2,3,4) - This part here, also 01:39:983 (1,2,3,4) I think they shouldn't be all circles, because in this diff you used to put continuous circles in some parts to emphasize the song, like 01:00:767 (1,2,3,4) - 01:13:316 (1,2,3,4) what I'm trying to say is, the circles I mentioned earlier didn't have anything to emphasize as much as 01:00:767 (1,2,3,4) - 01:13:316 (1,2,3,4) . - fixed
2. 01:03:120 (3,4,5) - The flow here's kinda...distrupted? I think 01:03:905 (4) should be removed and replace sth that can keep the flow here, even it has 1/1 beat spacing it doesn't feel right somehow. - no change. forced flow for pattern. hehe... I'm serious tho.

[Hard]

1. 01:03:709 (4,6) - They should be stacked imo, but I understand that if you stacked them it will make a weird spacing between 01:03:120 (3,4) , but I think there must be sth you can do about this since it really doesn't feel right when they're not stacked. - imo overlap fits best in this part. no change.
2. 01:35:669 (6,7) - In my opinion, you should either move them apart or make them overlapped. - ...*sigh. ok since many people complain about this
3. 01:56:258 (2,3) - For me, 01:56:846 (3) could be move a little bit to the right, because the spacing(visually) between 01:56:258 (2,3) isn't as much as spacing between sliders in that part. - it is intended. I want to make it looks uneven but in reality they are even.
4. 02:31:748 (1) - This part's quite creative, but can caught beginners off guard. - it is okay for hard diff. I even found some maps much more harder than this. also, beginner must learn. I did some overlaps before this so I think they know what happen in this part.
5. 03:15:669 (5) - Putting an NC here? Just a random suggestion. - umm.. no.

That's probably it, sry if my mod isn't useful. - don't be like that. I am grateful for this mod. thank you very much!

I didn't mod Insane because I can mod only 3.75 and it's 3.77 (lol, srsly?) Just PM me later if you need a mod for Insane. - alright, thanks!
Good luck! - \o\