1. Easy (1.81 stars, 84 notes)
2. Extra (4.01 stars, 216 notes)
3. Hard (2.46 stars, 164 notes)
4. Normal (2.33 stars, 132 notes)

Loli Master wrote:

Timing Mod

Timing Point/s:

00:01:797 - At 75 Bpm.

00:16:195 - At 180 Bpm.

Goodluck with the Beatmap!

-Dave Strider- wrote:

from my queue!

SPOILER

Normal

+you should have distance snap on to make sure your spacing is good and that there are no impossible jumps or there are notes that are too close to each other.
+00:06:597 (4) - this should end at 00:07:397
+00:10:397 (2) - should start at 00:10:597 and be a 1/2 slider
+00:16:195 (10) - you could remove this and add a spinner that ends at 00:18:861, remove 00:18:861 (1) and have the space in between the spinner and 00:21:444 (1) be a break time
+there should be more sliders, just having a million hitcircles is boring and doesn't go with the song sometimes
+00:24:111 (5,6,7,8) - these dont go with the song at all
+00:28:444 (4,5) - ^
+00:30:611 (3,4) - ^
+01:03:861 (10,11,12,13) - don't go with the song, 01:04:361 (11,12,13) are too far from each other distance wise, many other notes in this map do this too

Hard:
+AR 9 is too high for a Hard diff, turning it down to 7 should be good enough

i can give you a better mod when you fix the distance snap and the rhythm of the notes because a lot of them are off rhythm and it's hard to give a good mod when many notes are misplaced. my advice is to add more sliders, and listen closely so you make sure they start and end at the right time so they're along with the song (messing around with the playback rate at the bottom right of the editor can help you with this)

if you need me to elaborate more just tell me and i will, PM me in game or on here if you need to!

1. The Gaps between Hard and Insane is too big 2.57-4.01 , At least make the Hard diff be like 2.8-3.2
2. Hmm,This Mod will be too large ,,i would like to give u some suggestion on ur map not a really map , but a way to let u understand how to map . ovo

1. Reduce the volume ,u don't have to put em all to 100%
2. In an Easy diff , must use Distance Snap to map ,to keep the Distance for consistency .
3. Your map has no Hitsound , a map without Hitsound , is too boring to play , consider to learn to add hitsound ,the most common hitsound is 2/4 claps ,1/3 whistle and also 1 Finish . here is an example :
4. In an Easy Diff , u have to avoid to use this kind of rhythm , this kind of rhythm is too hard for newby to react .
5. 00:07:797 (5,6) - same as above , better use this kind of rhythm into a Normal Diff or something
6. 00:11:197 (3,1) - The jump is too big , as i consider above , u need to keep the same DS for consistency
7. 00:16:361 (1,1) - In an Easy diff , the note after a Spinner suppose to has 4 Gap of white tick , look at the picture
8. 00:21:861 (2,3) - Not recommend to overlap like this ,the view of it is bad
9. 00:25:444 (6) - This one , should be in here 00:25:528- not here 00:25:444

1. There is unnecessary to use cs5 neither ar10 for such an easy Insane. change it to ar 8 or 9 ,and cs 4

SoGa wrote:

[General]

SPOILER

1. The Gaps between Hard and Insane is too big 2.57-4.01 , At least make the Hard diff be like 2.8-3.2
2. Hmm,This Mod will be too large ,,i would like to give u some suggestion on ur map not a really map , but a way to let u understand how to map . ovo

[Easy]

1. Reduce the volume ,u don't have to put em all to 100%
2. In an Easy diff , must use Distance Snap to map ,to keep the Distance for consistency .
3. Your map has no Hitsound , a map without Hitsound , is too boring to play , consider to learn to add hitsound ,the most common hitsound is 2/4 claps ,1/3 whistle and also 1 Finish . here is an example :
4. In an Easy Diff , u have to avoid to use this kind of rhythm , this kind of rhythm is too hard for newby to react .
5. 00:07:797 (5,6) - same as above , better use this kind of rhythm into a Normal Diff or something
6. 00:11:197 (3,1) - The jump is too big , as i consider above , u need to keep the same DS for consistency
7. 00:16:361 (1,1) - In an Easy diff , the note after a Spinner suppose to has 4 Gap of white tick , look at the picture
8. 00:21:861 (2,3) - Not recommend to overlap like this ,the view of it is bad
9. 00:25:444 (6) - This one , should be in here 00:25:528- not here 00:25:444

[Insane]

1. There is unnecessary to use cs5 neither ar10 for such an easy Insane. change it to ar 8 or 9 ,and cs 4

End , if u don't understand what i've said , feel free to catch me in-game , i will teach u some basic skills ,even tho im a newb on mapping too .

• [General]

1. Audio Lead-in : There is only 1797 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
2. Timing : You need ask some BN / modder who know about timing .. And I think this song is ( 180.000 BPM ).
3. Audio : Using audio 100% is too loud .
4. Difficult Spread : Change ( Extra ) to ( Insane ).
5. Extra : Your map need hitsounds .

• [ Easy]

1. Easy mapset is using 1/1 beat snap ..
   same as Soga suggestion :
   

   SoGa wrote:

2. Reduce the volume ,u don't have to put em all to 100%
3. In an Easy diff , must use Distance Snap to map ,to keep the Distance for consistency .
4. Your map has no Hitsound , a map without Hitsound , is too boring to play , consider to learn to add hitsound ,the most common hitsound is 2/4 claps ,1/3 whistle and also 1 Finish . here is an example :
5. In an Easy Diff , u have to avoid to use this kind of rhythm , this kind of rhythm is too hard for newby to react .
   • [ Normal]
   1. Normal mapset is using 1/2 beat snap ..
   2. Same as easy, Soga suggestion . Please add some hitsounds & use Distance Snap to map ,to keep the Distance for consistency .
   • [ Hard]
   1. 00:16:445 (1,1) - double spinner is too boring to play. I think you can map on 00:18:861 - 00:20:861
6. follow the lyrics it is true, but try to follow the rhythm of the music beats.

• [ Insane]

1. follow the lyrics it is true, but try to follow the rhythm of the music beats.

• [General]

1. Audio Lead-in : There is only 1797 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
2. Timing : You need ask some BN / modder who know about timing .. And I think this song is ( 180.000 BPM ).
3. Audio : Using audio 100% is too loud .
4. Difficult Spread : Change ( Extra ) to ( Insane ).
5. Extra : Your map need hitsounds .

• [ Easy]

1. Easy mapset is using 1/1 beat snap ..
   same as Soga suggestion :

SoGa wrote:

1. Reduce the volume ,u don't have to put em all to 100%
2. In an Easy diff , must use Distance Snap to map ,to keep the Distance for consistency .
3. Your map has no Hitsound , a map without Hitsound , is too boring to play , consider to learn to add hitsound ,the most common hitsound is 2/4 claps ,1/3 whistle and also 1 Finish . here is an example :
4. In an Easy Diff , u have to avoid to use this kind of rhythm , this kind of rhythm is too hard for newby to react .

• [ Normal]

1. Normal mapset is using 1/2 beat snap ..
2. Same as easy, Soga suggestion . Please add some hitsounds & use Distance Snap to map ,to keep the Distance for consistency .

• [ Hard]

1. 00:16:445 (1,1) - double spinner is too boring to play. I think you can map on 00:18:861 - 00:20:861

• [ Insane]

1. follow the lyrics it is true, but try to follow the rhythm of the music beats.