Hopeless00:14:122 - 00:24:053 - this part just confuses because the notes don't really match up to the rhythm of the music, which honestly, very vague and not very clear to hear. Simply put, it's not really a part that can be mapped to very well
00:29:018 (4,1,2,3) - I would have thought you would group these together, because it seemed like the new phase would start at 00:29:018 - maintaining the 4 beat segments this part of the music seems to show, the first beat of the 1st segment being 00:27:363 where the spinner ends. You would then separate 00:30:673 (4) from the previous pattern and space it away instead of it being with the other objects
00:50:431 (8,1) - with the lack of curve in the stream, this transition looks badly out of place, what I am trying to say is 00:50:328 (7,8,1) - in relation to themselves, aren't really looking too good
00:53:846 onwards - lacking hitsounds?
00:59:639 (5,6,7,8) - major increase in DS doesn't relate well, because the rest either don't increase spacing at all, or don't change so much or as often as this
01:29:018 (2,1) - spacing should be bigger between them, the movement between them is underwhelming
01:46:811 (1) - adjust last segment:
02:00:673 (4,7,3) - eh, if you wanna drag these out, at least end it with the music, which imo, ends earlier than the red line
02:09:156 (1) - spaced out the red nodes, this is unrankable as it is right now, too much distortion in it's slider path
03:41:225 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - looks more messy than artistic, could use smoother curves, at least in some areas
03:49:708 (3,1) - blanket properly
03:53:225 (3,4) - spaced too far, totally unlike the previous few similarly made parts in the music, that did not have such a drastic change
04:12:053 (2) - align it with the other circles, it will look so much better
Remember to hitsound the map
I have to say I feel there is an excessive amount of spaced streams used, which don't really work well
you used extreme jumps very suddenly, not really expected, in a way, not needed in those sections
what kind of weird slider shapes people like to use, it's their own choice, but it would be nice if they blended with each other better, or related to each other better
Overall I feel a lot of work still needs to be done here, but there are signs of progress around to be seen
Good Luck