LiSA - No More Time Machine -TV ver.- · forum

Oyatsu

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2014-10-21T07:16:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, November 27, 2014 at 12:49:38 PM

Artist: LiSA
Title: No More Time Machine -TV ver.-
Source: ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags: sword art online sao II s2 ss ggo phantom bullet calibur mother's rosary aincrad ending momochikun habiholic kantokun
BPM: 137
Filesize: 13923kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.49 stars, 105 notes)
Habi's Normal (1.65 stars, 120 notes)
Insane (3.83 stars, 319 notes)
Kanto's Insane (3.44 stars, 291 notes)
Mochi's Hard (2.78 stars, 213 notes)

Download: LiSA - No More Time Machine -TV ver.-
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~ My 8th beatmap ~
ソードアート・オンライン Ⅱ ENDING 2~
LiSA - No More Time Machine <3
Mapset:

Easy: me
Normal: Habiholic
Hard: Momochikun
Insane: me and KantoKun

Check for >>Kinshara's version<<
Enjoy!~

Last edited by Oyatsu 2014-11-27T05:52:13+00:00, edited 25 times in total.

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-10-21T07:24:54+00:00

1st!!!

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-10-21T08:08:00+00:00

2nd :3

piano ver. --> very good <3

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-10-21T10:11:26+00:00

hihi~ quick check here, map seems pretty clean at the first sight tho :3

[Easy]
00:21:313 (1) - Isn't the clap at the start missplaced ? it sounds pretty weird along with the finish here
00:24:817 (1) - ^ at end
00:40:583 (3) - I think you can reduce the curve a bit here to fit the (2) that has a less curved stuff
00:45:839 (1,2) - This plays pretty weird during gameplay, i'd follow the vocal here. Ditch (1) into a 1/1 slider then start another 1/1 or 3/2 at 00:46:496 - to follow the pitch
00:48:467 (4) - I'll unstack this just for the safe side, since beginners may accidentally click this because this note are already appeared before (3)'s hitburst is completely gone
00:58:102 (1) - Drum sampleset on the reverse ?
01:15:620 (1) - ^
01:26:131 (4) - Delete this circle and start spinner from here instead, it seems harsh if Easy has more complex rhythm than Normal diff >_>

[Normal]
I would make the diff more hard here, it would be a spread problem since this diff has only 0.13 gap with Easy diff, try make the rhythm more complex and increase the diff settings
00:03:795 (1) - Idk why but the normal sampleset on tick seems pretty noisy, i'd reduce it a bit..
00:09:708 (4) - ^
00:05:547 (3) - Finish on the slider end to follow the cymbal on the music
00:10:802 (1) - How about delete the reverse and start a 1/2 slider from 00:11:459 - to follow the piano pitch ? it would make solid contact with 00:12:116 (2) - imo
00:17:810 (1,2) - These should be a 1/2 reverse slider instead to follow the music more properly ><
00:20:875 (6) - The drum whistle sounds weird here, remove it maybe ?
00:28:321 (1) - Missing Finish on the start
00:33:576 (2) - ^ at end
00:47:591 (1) - Normal sampleset at the spinner ?
00:58:102 (1,1) - Finish on them..

[Kanto]
The note density didn't fit with your AR and it feels too fast, reduce it to 8,5 ?
00:00:073 (1,2) - Delete them ? your diff is the only one which has objects before the redline o.o , you can replace the whistle into (3)
00:12:554 (1) - I'd rotate this around -5 degree to follow the circular flow from previous slider :3
00:30:073 (1) - Ditch this 3/4 slider ? would follow the vocal better since there is one at the red tick ~
00:31:824 (1) - Whistle to follow the piano pitch ?
I think you can add some whistles on the kiai part so it wouldn't be boring
Nice one.. didn't have some netpicky stuffs to pick lol

[Insane]
00:11:240 (4) - Drum sampleset on the end to follow the piano sound
00:59:635 (1) - ^ at start for vocal
00:21:313 (3) - Remove the clap pls.. it sounds pretty weird along with the finish
01:25:255 (7) - Nc here for neater pattern and warning for the jump ?
Fine ~

Good Luck then :3
oh wait.. here's my diff update

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TitleUnicode:No More Time Machine
Artist:LiSA
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Creator:Oyatsu
Version:Mochi's Hard
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags:sword art online sao II s2 ss ggo phantom bullet calibur mother's rosary aincrad ending momochikun habiholic kantokun
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KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-10-21T12:01:24+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
hihi~ quick check here, map seems pretty clean at the first sight tho :3

[Kanto]
The note density didn't fit with your AR and it feels too fast, reduce it to 8,5 ? OK
00:00:073 (1,2) - Delete them ? your diff is the only one which has objects before the redline o.o , you can replace the whistle into (3) that true , but it has a rhythm in song , i map follow song , not map follow other diff :3
00:12:554 (1) - I'd rotate this around -5 degree to follow the circular flow from previous slider :3 make a circle pattern with 00:12:116 (4) -
00:30:073 (1) - Ditch this 3/4 slider ? would follow the vocal better since there is one at the red tick ~ i think my own is good
00:31:824 (1) - Whistle to follow the piano pitch ? OK
I think you can add some whistles on the kiai part so it wouldn't be boring i try to add , and it's OK !!
Nice one.. didn't have some netpicky stuffs to pick lol XD

Good Luck then :3 thanks

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RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-10-21T12:09:01+00:00

M4M!

[General]

star2.png: skin-set isn't completed? http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning

[Easy]

00:07:299 (1) - I prefer to curve a little
00:10:802 (1) - ^
00:16:058 (3) - why not curve downward?
SPOILER
00:45:839 (1) - end at 00:46:277- . it is better to follow 00:46:277by clap
00:47:591 (3,4,5) - it is better not to stack. hard to find rhythm for beginner
00:49:343 (5) - NC?
00:50:437- clap?
01:01:605 (5) - i prefer to curve more
SPOILER
01:25:693 (3,4) - why not combine into 1 slider?

[Insane]

00:15:182 (3,4) - blanket correctly
00:17:372 (5,6) - increase spacing
00:20:437 (3,4) - ^
00:30:510 (3,4,5,6,7) - suggetion
00:51:970 (6) - I prefer to curve upward
01:04:014 (1,2,3) - I prefer not to stack at the same way as 01:03:138 (1,2,3) -
01:09:489 (3,4,5) - suggetion~

[Habi's Normal]

00:15:620 (4,5) - blanket correctly
00:33:576 (2,3) - suggetion
00:51:094 (1,2,3) - I prefer to follow vocal. how about this?
01:15:182 (6,1) - check blanketting
01:19:124~01:26:131- you make only 1/1 pattern. I recommend to add some 1/2 rhythm because I feel boring a little

[Mochi's Hard]

00:00:292 (1) - h~m, I prefer to curve upward
00:25:036 (2,3) - not good flow, imo...
00:51:094 (4,1) - swap NC?
01:08:175 (3) - why not rotate more?
SPOILER

[Kanto's Insane]

00:00:073 (1,2) - it is necessary?
00:36:642 (4,1) - this overlapping looks not good
00:50:219 (1,2) - reduce spacing.
00:54:598 (1,2) - it is better to make the same rhythm as 00:55:474 (4,5,6) - , imo

LiSA<3
~Good Luck~

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2014-10-21T13:42:55+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
hihi~ quick check here, map seems pretty clean at the first sight tho :3

[Easy]
00:21:313 (1) - Isn't the clap at the start missplaced ? it sounds pretty weird along with the finish here
00:24:817 (1) - ^ at end
00:40:583 (3) - I think you can reduce the curve a bit here to fit the (2) that has a less curved stuff I think this slider is nicer instead with current placement.
00:45:839 (1,2) - This plays pretty weird during gameplay, i'd follow the vocal here. Ditch (1) into a 1/1 slider then start another 1/1 or 3/2 at 00:46:496 - to follow the pitch I map this for a nice pattern, but will consider this.
00:48:467 (4) - I'll unstack this just for the safe side, since beginners may accidentally click this because this note are already appeared before (3)'s hitburst is completely gone Not sure if my fixed way works well
00:58:102 (1) - Drum sampleset on the reverse ?
01:15:620 (1) - ^
01:26:131 (4) - Delete this circle and start spinner from here instead, it seems harsh if Easy has more complex rhythm than Normal diff >_> I want to keep hitsound, and this is also a strong beat. I think it isn't too hard to relize the spinner afterward.

[Insane]
00:11:240 (4) - Drum sampleset on the end to follow the piano sound
00:59:635 (1) - ^ at start for vocal
00:21:313 (3) - Remove the clap pls.. it sounds pretty weird along with the finish
01:25:255 (7) - Nc here for neater pattern and warning for the jump ?
Fine ~

Good Luck then :3

RandomEffect wrote:
M4M!

[General]
star2.png: skin-set isn't completed? http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning It is accepted, no have anyproblems
[Easy]
00:07:299 (1) - I prefer to curve a little I prefer straight instead
00:10:802 (1) - ^ ^
00:16:058 (3) - why not curve downward? My style is so >w<
SPOILER
00:45:839 (1) - end at 00:46:277- . it is better to follow 00:46:277by clap as Mochi's mod, I will consider.
00:47:591 (3,4,5) - it is better not to stack. hard to find rhythm for beginner fixed something
00:49:343 (5) - NC?
00:50:437- clap? No, there isn't really at there.
01:01:605 (5) - i prefer to curve more no
SPOILER
01:25:693 (3,4) - why not combine into 1 slider? The slider isn't sensible with these strong beat imo.
[Insane]
00:15:182 (3,4) - blanket correctly
00:17:372 (5,6) - increase spacing it's enough
00:20:437 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:30:510 (3,4,5,6,7) - suggetion your is wrong rhythm, don't have drum at the first
00:51:970 (6) - I prefer to curve upward no
01:04:014 (1,2,3) - I prefer not to stack at the same way as 01:03:138 (1,2,3) - Change something make the diff feel better, instead of only 1 way.
01:09:489 (3,4,5) - suggetion~ I don't like that pattern although your work well, too
LiSA<3
~Good Luck~

No cmt = Fixed. Thank you guys!!~

@Updated Kanto's Insane, Mochi's Hard.

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2014-10-22T01:29:28+00:00

hi m4m from u q'

[General]

all the setting are fucked up. (there's almost no difference between easy and normal, a big difference normal and hard and no difference on both insanes)
will be a SB? cuz "star2.png"
habi normal needs to be harder or add another diff to fix the gap

[Insane]

00:00:073 - triple from the start would be nice or something
00:10:583 (1) - cancel NC and 00:10:802 (3) - add nc
00:14:306 (1) - this direction change doesnt make much sense to me. maybe -90° rotation is better
00:15:182 (3,4) - improve blanket
00:21:094 (1,3) - swap nc?
00:47:372 (1,3) - swap nc
00:47:591 (3) - it's a bit weird that you finish it on the blue tick since you mostly ignored those triples on the rest of the map... better finish it on the red tick?
00:49:562 (2) - follow the vocals with a slider as you did before?
00:50:875 (1,3) - swap nc?
01:04:014 (1) - this nc is unnecesarry imo. since you're not mapping vocals. anyways it should be on 01:04:233 (3) - instead
01:18:905 (1,3) - swap nc
01:24:160 (1,3) - ^^ new rhythm starts on (3) it doesnt on (1)
01:02:372 (4,5) - Don't do it pls. the way you mapped the song are mostly stack doing it is very weird (take as reference 00:25:255 (2,3,4) - 00:30:510 (3,4,5) -
01:26:240 (1) - for some reason i think that a long slider would fit the music much better. considering that the song suddenly ends 01:29:197 -
jumps and ds are too random to me -.- other than that it's fine (check your combos tho ><)

[Kanto]

00:06:861 (6,7,8,9) - make a little curve so it flow better with 00:07:299 (1) -
00:10:364 (4) - make it 2 circles instead? it loses the emphasis it should have using slider (same apply for some other like 00:16:934 (3,4) - etc)
00:13:649 (2) - and 00:29:416 (5) - move them a bit down, they almost touch the hp bar so ~~asdasdasdfuck~~ not have problems later
01:01:386 (1,3) - 01:06:751 (1,2) - 01:25:912 (1,3) - swap nc
01:06:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is almost unneed imo >< but i dunno. I couldn't understand some parts of your map like 01:20:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - which seems weird, you make me think you're mapping background music, but you aren't ;w;

[Mochi mochi]

AR 7 works fine imo (also would fix a bit the gap between normal and your hard ><)
00:04:233 (2) - ugly overlap. maybe stack wih (4) head
00:31:386 (1,2,3) - you can make it more gently aesthetically. The whole map looks cool and nice but not here
00:16:715 (6) - this direction change-jump is too random to me and the whole map. ctrl g or something?
00:34:890 (4) - very big jump o.o. i'd move it a bit more closer
your NCs are all fuck up >< check it carefully

[Habi]

this diff needs more ~~marewareeeeeeee~~ difficulty. It's too easy, almost similar to the actual easy except for some few parts and makes a high gap to Hard
you can use some 1/2 slider, and less 2/1 sliders
your diff is the only one that finish at 01:29:416 - . others finish at 01:29:197 - (althoug i liked more where you ended it ;w;)
also check 01:12:116 (1,2,3) - 01:16:277 (2,3,4) - distance snap. althoug the overall DS seems a bit unstable ><

[Easy]

00:06:861 (3) - maybe delete it to give some 2/1 space. since it's not really needed
00:45:839 (1,2) - maybe use reverse slider instead of adding another slider.
00:50:219 (2) - you can make it just a 1/1 slider with some red points for a drummy shape
01:03:357 (1,2,3) - here a 3/2 reverse slider would fit better imo
01:01:605 (5) - add NC and 01:03:357 (1) - cancel NC .
01:22:627 (5) - add . 01:24:379 (1) - cancel. I don't see the point of not use constancy
01:26:131 (4) - add nc
01:26:131 (4,1) - this is not allowed anymore i think. Start the spinner at 01:26:569 -

Gl , hope it helps a bit <3

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2014-10-22T04:52:47+00:00

Milan- wrote:
hi m4m from u q'

[General]
all the setting are fucked up. (there's almost no difference between easy and normal, a big difference normal and hard and no difference on both insanes) Normal is quite easy, i agree this, I will tal habi to map harder. ABout Hard with Insane, I don't see any problem. There are tons of map with like that.
will be a SB? cuz "star2.png" It is skin element, why you think it is SB? baka.
habi normal needs to be harder or add another diff to fix the gap ok
[Insane]
00:00:073 - triple from the start would be nice or something Idon't like to map over timing.
00:10:583 (1) - cancel NC and 00:10:802 (3) - add nc a NC style, it isn't an unrankble stuff.
00:14:306 (1) - this direction change doesnt make much sense to me. maybe -90° rotation is better I feel it's good, np.
00:15:182 (3,4) - improve blanket I think it was already.
00:21:094 (1,3) - swap nc? no
00:47:372 (1,3) - swap nc no
00:47:591 (3) - it's a bit weird that you finish it on the blue tick since you mostly ignored those triples on the rest of the map... better finish it on the red tick? There is anysound for ending at red tick, and like current blue tick, it looks more insteresting.
00:49:562 (2) - follow the vocals with a slider as you did before? A strong beat isn't sensible with slider.
00:50:875 (1,3) - swap nc? no
01:04:014 (1) - this nc is unnecesarry imo. since you're not mapping vocals. anyways it should be on 01:04:233 (3) - instead no
01:18:905 (1,3) - swap nc no
01:24:160 (1,3) - ^^ new rhythm starts on (3) it doesnt on (1) ^
01:02:372 (4,5) - Don't do it pls. the way you mapped the song are mostly stack doing it is very weird (take as reference 00:25:255 (2,3,4) - 00:30:510 (3,4,5) - You can't play with it?, then you are noob player. There isn't problem with it.
01:26:240 (1) - for some reason i think that a long slider would fit the music much better. considering that the song suddenly ends 01:29:197 - I don't have a habit to use like you said.
jumps and ds are too random to me -.- other than that it's fine (check your combos tho ><) It's my style. NO random => No jump => No Insane.
[Easy]
00:06:861 (3) - maybe delete it to give some 2/1 space. since it's not really needed I don't like to use that.
00:45:839 (1,2) - maybe use reverse slider instead of adding another slider. It fits better with the drum-sound.
00:50:219 (2) - you can make it just a 1/1 slider with some red points for a drummy shape fit the drum.
01:03:357 (1,2,3) - here a 3/2 reverse slider would fit better imo i don't think so. Eeach strong beat runs quite clearly.
01:01:605 (5) - add NC and 01:03:357 (1) - cancel NC . appear drum-sound. Your way is wrong for me
01:22:627 (5) - add . 01:24:379 (1) - cancel. I don't see the point of not use constancy ^
01:26:131 (4) - add nc ^
01:26:131 (4,1) - this is not allowed anymore i think. Start the spinner at 01:26:569 - See spinner after circle is easier to relize the circle after spinner, so ther isn't no problem. But if BAT will request this, i will fix.
Gl , hope it helps a bit <3

THank you for modding! I will mod for u soon.

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-10-22T05:38:00+00:00

almost Fixed

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Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Owntrolf 2014-10-22T05:48:31+00:00

Mochi's Hard
00:45:839 (1) - It actually starts at 00:45:620 where the "Ga" begins, just move the slider over there and place a circle on the white tick where it used to end
01:19:124 - Some of the hitsounds after this point dont sound right

Kanto's Insane
Feels like theres way too many triplets/slider+circle+slider :d
00:19:562 (1,2) - Could probably replace with something more interesting other than repeat sliders
00:21:970 (2,3,4,5,6) - Plays a bit strange, could probably switch 5 and 6 positions so its the triplets then circle and then slider
00:25:474 (2,3,4) - I dont really like triplets in a row
01:01:386 (1,2,3,4) - Quad in a 4 star ish insane is a bit hard
01:06:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I dont really think streams fit the song
01:10:255 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:12:773 (2,3,4,5) - More quads
01:14:744 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 2 triplets in a row
01:24:817 (1,2,3,4,5) - Dont you think the spacing for the triangle is a bit too big

All the other difficulties seem good, All I just know is that your Easy feels better than Habi's Normal

Momovely

Momovely 2014-10-22T05:59:41+00:00

hi moqreq from in game chat

[General]

'widscreen Support' Please tack the checks out of the check boxes.

There is not an SB case and is not necessary

Easy Normal　Kanton's INSANE That isn't a problem for now.　good !

[Mochi's Hard]

01:01:605 (1) - add finish to a head Because there is a piano sound, does finish match? I think of

[INSANE]

01:01:605 (1) - add finish to a head Because there is a piano sound, does finish match? I think of

01:18:248 (5,6,7,8) - 　There was some sense of incongruity.

How is such an introduction to the sound of a vocal and the back?

suggestion

01:22:080 (6,7) - 　It is hard to do the remote repeated blows

suggestion

really nice mapsete!

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-10-22T08:35:57+00:00

RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:
M4M!

[Kanto's Insane]
00:00:073 (1,2) - it is necessary? not -.-
00:36:642 (4,1) - this overlapping looks not good fix
00:50:219 (1,2) - reduce spacing. ??
00:54:598 (1,2) - it is better to make the same rhythm as 00:55:474 (4,5,6) - , imo rhythm in song like that 0.0

Milan-

Milan- wrote:
hi m4m from u q'

[Kanto]
00:06:861 (6,7,8,9) - make a little curve so it flow better with 00:07:299 (1) - i make flow with this 00:06:423 (5) -
00:10:364 (4) - make it 2 circles instead? it loses the emphasis it should have using slider (same apply for some other like 00:16:934 (3,4) - etc) follow drum rhythm only
00:13:649 (2) - and 00:29:416 (5) - move them a bit down, they almost touch the hp bar so ~~asdasdasdfuck~~ not have problems later OK
01:01:386 (1,3) - 01:06:751 (1,2) - 01:25:912 (1,3) - swap nc no , look very bad because the color in stream will look bad imo
01:06:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is almost unneed imo >< but i dunno. I couldn't understand some parts of your map like 01:20:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - which seems weird, you make me think you're mapping background music, but you aren't ;w; OK

Owntrolf

Owntrolf wrote:
Kanto's Insane
Feels like theres way too many triplets/slider+circle+slider :d the rhythm in song be like that :d
00:19:562 (1,2) - Could probably replace with something more interesting other than repeat sliders piano rhythm start here 00:20:219 (2) - 0.0 , it's OK , isn't it?
00:21:970 (2,3,4,5,6) - Plays a bit strange, could probably switch 5 and 6 positions so its the triplets then circle and then slider OK change
00:25:474 (2,3,4) - I dont really like triplets in a row but it like it *0*
01:01:386 (1,2,3,4) - Quad in a 4 star ish insane is a bit hard this is insane , it's OK for insane , it isn't hard diff
01:06:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I dont really think streams fit the song i make same the drum rhythm in song , not overmapped
01:10:255 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:12:773 (2,3,4,5) - More quads
01:14:744 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 2 triplets in a row 0.0!!
01:24:817 (1,2,3,4,5) - Dont you think the spacing for the triangle is a bit too big make a jump before ending

fix some and thanks all modding XD , i'm sry about my reply but i need to keep my style in this diff , but if have a issue it will make this map unrank , i will fix

code

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Title:No More Time Machine
TitleUnicode:No More Time Machine
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:Oyatsu
Version:Kanto's Insane
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags:sword art online sao II s2 ss ggo phantom bullet calibur mother's rosary aincrad ending momochikun habiholic kantokun
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ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-10-22T14:05:43+00:00

[Insane]
00:15:182 (3) - blanket
00:40:583 (1) - Ctrl+G?
00:45:401 (4,5) - swap? better flow to 1?
[Kanto's Insane]
00:22:408 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2159756
a little overmap?I'm not sure about this now
[Mochi's Hard]
00:44:087 (1) - looks no good
[Habi's Normal]
00:04:233 - 40%?
01:29:197 - End here
[Easy]
Nothing

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2014-10-22T14:54:27+00:00

Momovely wrote:
hi moqreq from in game chat

[General]

'widscreen Support' Please tack the checks out of the check boxes. ok

There is not an SB case and is not necessary

Easy Normal　Kanton's INSANE That isn't a problem for now.　good !

[INSANE]

01:01:605 (1) - add finish to a head Because there is a piano sound, does finish match? I think of added drum-sampleset.

01:18:248 (5,6,7,8) - 　There was some sense of incongruity. My way is more interesting.

How is such an introduction to the sound of a vocal and the back?

suggestion

01:22:080 (6,7) - 　It is hard to do the remote repeated blows will consider.

suggestion

really nice mapsete!

ts8zs wrote:
[Insane]
00:15:182 (3) - blanket it was already.
00:40:583 (1) - Ctrl+G? it's a pattern, i think it's nicer than.
00:45:401 (4,5) - swap? better flow to 1? i don't see any problem.

Thank you for modding.
@Updated Kanto's Insane & Habi's Normal.

Pappy

1,020 posts

Joined August 2013

Pappy 2014-10-22T18:50:46+00:00

Title: No More Time Machine -TV ver.-

From official LiSA website.

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Oyatsu 2014-10-23T04:32:52+00:00

Pappy wrote:
Title: No More Time Machine -TV ver.-

From official LiSA website.

OK, thank you

kakifly

940 posts

Joined April 2014

kakifly 2014-10-24T00:44:23+00:00

m4m from your queue :3

Easy

00:09:927 (4) - try 1/2 repeat slider here? to emphasize drum at 00:10:146 -
00:12:554 (3) - remove clap on repeat
00:47:591 (3,4) - maybe try a 2/1 slider here? stacking can be confusing for beginners
00:59:854 (2) - whistle on head?
01:03:357 (1,2) - rhythm here seems weird imo; the strong beat is at 01:04:233 -
01:24:817 (2) - put 1/1 slider here instead; because the drum sound plays almost half the measure but you only map it for 1 beat which sounds weird

Habi's Normal

maybe try using some of oyatsu's hitsounds; right now your hitsounds are very plain imo
00:01:824 (3) - im not sure what this is emphasizing, it also skips the really important downbeat
00:05:547 (3) - add finish on tail
00:14:306 (1) - add whistle?
00:15:182 (3,5) - stack is tiny bit off
00:16:715 (6) - whistle on head?
00:20:219 (5) - ^
00:24:817 (5,1) - swap NC's
00:27:226 (3) - add whistle on head
00:33:576 (2,1) - overlap looks a bit weird
00:33:576 (2) - strong beat is on the tail; ctrl+g the rhythm of 00:33:576 (2,3) -
00:46:496 (2) - whistle on head?
01:26:131 (1) - end spinner same as oyatsu's diff for consistency

Mochi's Hard

00:01:167 (3) - curve down for better flow?
SPOILER
00:16:496 (5,6) - imo this jump is too much; shorten it a bit
00:18:467 (5,6) - stack is off
00:20:219 (2) - add whistle
00:33:576 (1,2) - shorten jump a bit
00:35:985 (4) - make this a 1/2 slider and put a circle at 00:36:423 - to emphasize the beat better
00:42:554 - map this sound?

Kanto's Insane

00:28:321 (1) - add finish to head
01:04:890 (8) - just make this a circle so its consistent with rhythm such as 01:05:985 (3,4,5) -
01:10:255 (7,1,2,3,4) - i personally dislike how you arranged the stream; just do a simple curve

Insane

00:00:292 (1) - make this horizontal too; to match with 00:00:729 (2) - and have better flow
00:14:306 (1) - ctrl + g ? i think it flows better
00:18:467 (4) - ^
00:48:467 (1) - it would be cool if this slider had a unique shape too like 00:47:591 (3) - (maybe change sv to 0.75?)

thats all- hope to see this ranked~ good luck!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-10-25T20:04:13+00:00

Thanks a lot <3

SPOILER

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xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2014-10-26T04:41:52+00:00

Sorry for late. Been kinda busy.

[General]

Remove "ggo phantom bullet" from tags, that's the first arc which this song does not cover.
Change calibur to excalibur and rosary to rosario.

[Easy]

00:46:715 (2) - It sounds really weird to start at 00:46:715 instead of 00:46:934 which I think is a much better choice that follows the main vocal.

[Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]

00:45:620 - Why not stack circle on top of 00:45:839 (1) - slider head? It sounds really awkward to ignore the vocal.

[KantoKun's Insane]

00:06:861 (6,7,8,9,1) - It plays better to have the slider's curve line up with the stream.
00:57:226 (4) - ctrl-G this to be a little less awkward
01:01:824 - Why ignore this vocal? It's not easy to play a stream that has an even number of objects like 01:01:386 (8,9,1,2) -
01:12:773 (2,3,4,5) - ^

[Insane]

00:37:737 (2,3) - Maybe a bigger jump here would fit the music better.
00:50:656 (5,1) - Isn't this jump a bit too big for 1/4?
01:14:087 - I don't think you should ignore vocals in an insane.

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