1. Easy (1,37 stars, 221 notes)
2. Hard (3,27 stars, 595 notes)
3. Normal (1,81 stars, 341 notes)

Hollow Wings
Leorda

Call Me

Call Me is Kakihara Tetsuya's third mini album and it was released 13/03/2013

Chaoslitz wrote:

Hi,it's me :3/

00:43:177 (1) - Change the shape of the slider
Example: http://puu.sh/blgv5/b12c58c8ed.jpg Changed
01:25:715 (1) - Spinner
Start from 01:26:162 (1) with a stronger rhythm in my opinion Changed
02:03:327 (2) - Not really following the rhythm
Suggest: http://puu.sh/blgPx/abe87d436e.jpg Is it better now?

I hope this is helpful :3

1. 00:07:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Might want to make sliders align with the circles for it to look better
2. 00:14:521 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This area is a bit cramped and confusing to read
3. 00:21:909 - Could probably have a circle here for better flow or replace 00:21:685 (1) with a slider to the red tick
4. 00:22:133 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Could probably look nicer by spacing them a little bit more since they're overlapping the edge a little bit
5. 00:36:013 (1,2,3,1) - Same thing here
6. 00:51:013 - Might need a circle here
7. 01:52:133 (3,4) - Has some edge overlap
8. 01:53:028 (1,2,3,1) - More edge overlap
9. 01:55:491 (3,4) - Edge overlap
10. 01:56:274 (5,6) - Feels awkward wan played, 5 isnt needed
11. 02:10:491 (4) - End earlier on the red tick and have a circle on the white tick
12. 02:16:983 (2,3,4) - Could remove 2,3 and move 4 to the red tick and have circles placed on the white and red tick after it
13. 02:52:133 - This section feels like theres too many triplets

Owntrolf wrote:

Le Modformod

I might do the GD when I have the time

Hard

1. 00:07:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Might want to make sliders align with the circles for it to look better Is this better?
2. 00:14:521 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This area is a bit cramped and confusing to read Changed
3. 00:21:909 - Could probably have a circle here for better flow or replace 00:21:685 (1) with a slider to the red tick Changed
4. 00:22:133 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Could probably look nicer by spacing them a little bit more since they're overlapping the edge a little bit Changed
5. 00:36:013 (1,2,3,1) - Same thing here Changed
6. 00:51:013 - Might need a circle here Added
7. 01:52:133 (3,4) - Has some edge overlap Changed
8. 01:53:028 (1,2,3,1) - More edge overlap Changed
9. 01:55:491 (3,4) - Edge overlap Changed
10. 01:56:274 (5,6) - Feels awkward wan played, 5 isnt needed Changed it
11. 02:10:491 (4) - End earlier on the red tick and have a circle on the white tick Changed. It's a lot better now
12. 02:16:983 (2,3,4) - Could remove 2,3 and move 4 to the red tick and have circles placed on the white and red tick after it Changed
13. 02:52:133 - This section feels like theres too many triplets Changed

CreepyguyinsexyposeasBG

• 00:20:342 (3) - end slider, i don't feel clap fit this, remove it
  00:25:267 (1) - end slider, the sampleset you missing change soft to drum

• 00:08:700 (5) - Overlay with 00:09:371 (2,3) is kindy bad nad hard read, try avoid this overlay
  00:09:371 (2,3) - inconsistency spacing
  00:20:789 (4,1) - inconsistency spacing
  00:53:924 (1) - New combo color, The lyrics and drum start high, still fit if new combo
  01:44:073 (1,2,1) - Swap new combo I mean this http://puu.sh/bwpyE/3883decba9.jpg
  01:57:282 (2,3) - this spacing is confuse, this timing (01:57:394) should remove and fix spacing, this just confuse
  02:55:715 (7) - New combo

• 00:12:282 (4) - Stack with 00:10:491 (3) ? if you do carefully spacing
  00:32:879 (2) - Need improve blanket with 00:34:222 (1)
  01:18:998 (1,2) - that note stack in end sldier is kindy lot hard for this normal, could be unstack, don't forget spacing
  01:40:939 (2,3) - the (2) in start is hidden that repeat slider in 01:41:834 (3), this is too later read, and nobody know this slider have repeat or not, is not good in normal, change place or remap this part.
  02:00:640 (2) - need improve blanket with 02:01:983 (1)
  02:22:133 (3,4,5) - too hard this stack, should be unstack
  03:31:759 - 03:34:894 add something, HP is dying a lot

• 00:13:177 (3,1) - Swap new combo and put new combo color in 00:14:968 (3) http://puu.sh/bwsQj/b883e13c96.jpg
  00:34:222 (3,4,1) - kindy lot overlay and hard read
  00:34:222 (3,4) - Is not fine stack in end slider, this is easy, so should be unstack
  01:47:655 (1,2) - inconsistency spacing
  02:30:640 (1,2) - is hard stack, unstack
  03:46:312 (1,2) - ^ same

1. i think there is something wrong with your bpm, consider asking a bat or someone experienced to solve this
2. i think the "ocean" diff should be just named Hard, what does Ocean stands for :v

1. CS 3 please, imo CS 2 is too big and doesnt look really pretty
2. from 00:09:595(1) until 00:12:730
3. 00:17:654(2) blanket better
4. 00:36:461(2) ^
5. 01:20:789(1,2)
6. 02:08:700 add a note?
7. 02:32:431(1) overlap, please place this to somewhere else
8. 02:42:730 add a note
9. 02:43:177(1) remove NC

1. at 00:27:506, u can clearly see that the slider (2) and the circle (5) are overlapped in a bad way, plase fix this
2. overlapped issues, u can see it at 01:22:804
3. please dont make a awkward break at 01:24:819
4. the spinner should starts at 02:17:879
5. the spinner should ended at 02:34:222
6. 02:40:043(3) this spinner breaks the flow, maybe this? http://puu.sh/byrvU/0cdab77343.jpg

• 
  overall this diff has already got the rhtym, but the placement isnt nearly great, i suggest u make some consistent DS and some jumps at the kiai

FlobuFlobs wrote:

From mah queue
i dont know too much about hard diffs and even less about normal/easy so i let them out

[General]Are there more tags like album or such things? AddedDat Mp3 cut lol, do you another version of this song? I searched for another mp3 file but didn't find any.

[Ocean]00:08:700 (5,3) - this overlapp looks ugly lol, move 00:08:700 (5,1,2) - lower?

SPOILER

00:12:058 (4) - stack this one behind 00:11:162 (2) - ? and snap 00:12:282 (5) - ? just for the look00:15:640 (4) - this one is extremly bad to play because 00:15:416 - here's the loud beat but the repeat stops here
so remove reapeat, and add slider at the following 2 white ticks instead

SPOILER

00:16:759 (3,4,5) - ^00:19:222 (5,6,1,2,3) - fix the blanket lol00:32:207 (7,1,2) - this is not really readable, the spacing 00:32:431 (1,2) - here looks exactly like 00:32:207 (7,1) -
space 00:32:879 (2) - more00:32:879 (2,4) - copy pasta one of them, looks better (ctrl+c - copy) (ctrl + v - paste)00:58:849 (1) - short this repeat by 1 and let the next slider start here 00:59:297 -
follow the rhythm better01:04:670 (1,2,3) - 01:04:670 (1,2,3) - ctrl g , flows better01:22:133 (4,2) - again copy pasta one of them 02:07:357 (1) - ctrl+g here for a circle flow?02:07:804 (2) - stack better02:25:267 (1) - this one should look to the next slider, flows better

SPOILER

02:34:670 - a slider should start here to emphasize the vocals better02:57:506 (1) - Unrankable I didn't actually want to delete it but since it's unrankable so do I have no other choises Q _ Q03:08:588 (2) - move to X244 Y148 for smoother transition?03:09:371 (5) - let the one look at 03:09:819 (6) -

SPOILER

03:12:954 (3,4,5) - move them a bit lower to avoid overlapping03:53:924 (4,5,6,1) - copy pasta one of them again

Kazamastar11 wrote:

EDIT : After i take a look on your beatmap,
Your beatmap was terrible ..