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Petrarca Ann Erudanto III - Watashi no Housekibako [Taiko]

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Dilectus
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 13 september 2017 at 22:34:13

Artist: Petrarca Ann Erudanto III
Title: Watashi no Housekibako
Source: アウトブレイク・カンパニー
Tags: Outbreak Company ed ending
BPM: 151
Filesize: 3104kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,29 stars, 185 notes)
  2. Kantan (1,56 stars, 91 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2,46 stars, 298 notes)
  4. Oni (3,36 stars, 403 notes)
Download: Petrarca Ann Erudanto III - Watashi no Housekibako
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ending from Outbreak Company

Aiming for ranked!

All difficulties mapped by me.

Background Image: http://puu.sh/gB9KI/779f108ff9.png
Link to ending: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhHPXZX1KGg
If you want to play the standard version of this song: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/125954

I'd recommend you'd watch this anime at least once before you die
Topic Starter
Dilectus
Modding from in-game. Thanks Luna

21:06 Luna: why the super high SV? fixed
21:06 Luna: that just makes HR/DT impossible
21:08 Luna: please don't use 1/8 without treason, and don't use big notes in stream patterns fixed
21:08 Luna: also, use the real (halved bpm) at SV 1.4
21:08 Luna: or maybe SV 1.6 if you prefer that
Neku Okazaki
[General]
- Taiko maps can't have video, please delete it.
- Title: Watashi no Houseibako (Tv Size)
- Your BG is unrankeable, use this: http://puu.sh/aZlct/0c1917809a.png or another.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
[Kantan]
00:18:110 - d
00:20:891 (11) - Delete
00:39:567 (38) - ^

Im not good modding Tv size, but, i see it good.

[Futsuu]
00:07:580 (20) - k
00:08:176 (22) - Delete
00:25:858 (72) - k
00:38:574 (108) - k
00:45:328 (119,120) - d d
01:18:309 (61) - k

[Muzukashii]
00:03:607 (13) - k
00:06:885 (27,28) - dd
00:25:660 (99) - k
00:26:852 (105,111) - k
00:29:931 (120) - d
00:33:110 (133) - d
00:36:289 (147) - d
00:44:931 (183) - d
00:52:282 (212) - d
00:52:878 (216) - k
00:57:845 (19) - k
01:03:507 (43) - d
01:04:997 (51) - d
01:13:540 (84,85) - dd
01:16:223 (100) - d

[Oni]
Try to make more small the streams
Mystyk
[General]
Remove 00:00:627 - this inherited point, because it's the same as the timing point, and you can't have them at the same point (except if it's for slider velocity change)

[Kantan]
00:48:309 (49,50) - make both of them don, so many kats are too boring (even for kantan) and those dons emphasize the kat here 00:49:898 (51) - with the higher voice better

[Futsuu]
use OD4 HP4
01:00:825 (8) - remove this because even before the slider you had a little hard pattern and right after the slider it's hard to play d D
01:19:898 (65) - remove this too, it comes quite suddenly right after the slider, it's good to have some break between the slider and the hit circles

[Muzukashii]
use OD5 and HP5 - I really don't understand why you used OD7 >.<
00:00:428 (1,2,3) - it feels a little weird to play this actually, why not make them all k or all d maybe?
00:43:541 (176) - add finish, the music sounds a little louder here so I think it would fit
00:48:110 (192,193,194,195,196,197,198) - I think there are too many dons here, try to very both the rhythm and pattern a bit, just a suggestion: http://puu.sh/b98Ky/acb71b6dc1.jpg
00:54:865 (2) - remove, I think it's a little hard to play and also because if you remove it the big don will emphasize the chorus beginning better in my opinion
01:01:223 (30) - this also feel kind of unnecessary because there is nothing loud there and t will feel good to have a little break after the slider, so I would remove it
01:13:143 (82) - same as above ^ and the upcoming pattern is also quite long so it would be better to remove this
01:13:938 (87) - same ^

[Petrarca's Oni]
HP6 and OD5/OD6
00:00:428 (1,2,3) - ddk would fit better because it would emphasize the higher piano at 00:00:627 (3) - better
00:03:706 (16) - d because of the previous reason
00:07:977 (35,36) - ctrl + G? because when I play 00:08:176 (36) - it sounds like it's late because the higher note is at 00:07:977 (35) -
00:10:163 (49) - k because the voice is higher and because of that soft "finish" sound in the background, I think it will fit better
00:43:540 (242) - add finish (K) because the background is a little louder so a big kat would fit better than a small imo

Good luck! (I'm still not good at modding taiko but I'm trying >.<)
MidSoul
hello :3/ Taiko mod request from queue, really sorry for this late.

[Kantan]
・nothing to say for sound but its not kantan, like a converted-easy..

//really good 00:00:627 (1,,,20) - but after, its a bit bore.

[Futsuu]
・as I said kantan, its like converted.
00:08:176 (22,24) - maybe these slider is not good for taiko.

01:12:547 (45) - same as ^
01:19:103 (63) - ^
01:05:593 (24) - rem finisher
01:06:388 (27) - rem finisher

[Muzukashii]
00:09:766 (42) - this slider not recommended
00:39:368 (163) - ^
00:59:633 (28,29) - ^
01:06:785 (57) - ^
01:12:150 (80) - ^
01:18:905 (110) - ^

00:10:560 (44,45) - kd

00:14:136 (59) - spinner ? (for taiko map)

00:20:693 (79) - del
-1 00:20:891 (80) - k

00:33:110 (133) - move to 00:33:314 -

00:45:328 (184,185) - d
・because 00:44:931 (183) - is d.

[Petrarca's Oni]
01:18:805 (470) - move 1/4 <
・for drums.

00:58:739 - add d or k ?
00:58:938 - add d or k ?
・for drums.

00:59:534 (340) - del ?
01:12:249 (424) - del ?
・here's no sound, or put 1/6?
Tuxxy_old
d = don
k = kat
D = finish don
K = finish kat

kan

00:08:176 d
00:24:468 add a d
00:24:865 k
00:30:825 d
00:46:719 d
00:47:514 k
01:11:554 add k

fut

00:16:918 kdd
00:20:097 kdd
00:21:686 ddk
00:38:574 K
01:11:951 D
01:21:885 (26,28) K

muzu

00:03:607 ddk
00:06:785 ddk
00:26:852 kdd
00:27:448 ddk
00:33:805 kkd
00:44:732 kdk
00:57:646 kkd
00:58:838 (25,26,27) k-d-k
01:06:984 kkd
01:21:885 (143,145) K
01:22:878 does not sound right having either note because of the subtle drum
NeviltiS
Hi~ from my queue

[Kantan]
00:40:362 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - As one suggestion. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2064392

[Futsuu]
00:04:799 - add d?
01:02:812 (14) - remove?
01:05:395 (22) - remove?
01:13:342 (46) - k?
01:18:110 (14) - remove?

[Muzukashii]
00:49:898 (142) - k?
01:04:997 (57) - d?

[Petrarca's Oni]
00:15:130 (77) - remove?
01:08:176 (396,397) - Ctrl+G?
01:19:699 (478) - k?

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Dilectus
Thanks for the mods NeviltiS, Tuxxy, MidSoul, Mystyk and Neku okazaki!
rew0825
Hi! :) from my request

Sorry I'm late T^T :(

[Kantan]
00:10:759 (16) - D
00:55:064 (2) - move to 00:55:461
00:55:858 (3) - move to 00:56:057
00:58:242 (6) - move to 00:57:845

[Futsuu]
00:39:368 (116) - I think Delete this slider and add note from this >>> 00:39:368 , 00:39:766 , 00:39:964 , 00:40:163
00:58:640 (3) - move to 00:58:441
01:11:355 (38) - move to 01:11:156

[Muzukashii]
00:01:024 (5,6) - ctrl+g
00:26:951 (46) - k
00:44:832 (126) - k

[Petrarca's Oni]
01:03:507 (369,370) - ctrl+g
01:09:865 (408,409) - ^

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Dilectus

rew0825 wrote:

Hi! :) from my request

Sorry I'm late T^T :(

[Kantan]
00:10:759 (16) - D
00:55:064 (2) - move to 00:55:461
00:55:858 (3) - move to 00:56:057
00:58:242 (6) - move to 00:57:845

[Futsuu]
00:39:368 (116) - I think Delete this slider and add note from this >>> 00:39:368 , 00:39:766 , 00:39:964 , 00:40:163
00:58:640 (3) - move to 00:58:441
01:11:355 (38) - move to 01:11:156

[Muzukashii]
00:01:024 (5,6) - ctrl+g
00:26:951 (46) - k
00:44:832 (126) - k

[Petrarca's Oni]
01:03:507 (369,370) - ctrl+g
01:09:865 (408,409) - ^

Good luck :)
Np, appreciated that you didnt ignore it :)

Thanks for the mod!
Charlotte
Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Gene

Widescreen Support (uncheck)

Kantan

00:48:712 - add d.because,follow the vocal

Futsuu

00:20:891 (60,61) - delete.because,add break time & no need.
00:49:511 - delete.becuase,add break time.

Muzukashii

good~.

Petrarca's Oni

00:15:336 - 00:25:870 - add break time.
00:26:255 - 00:40:368 - ^
01:12:845 (429,430) - ctrl + G

Very good~ :) nice map. Good luck
Topic Starter
Dilectus

Charlotte wrote:

Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Gene

Widescreen Support (uncheck) accept

Kantan

00:48:712 - add d.because,follow the vocal accept

Futsuu

00:20:891 (60,61) - delete.because,add break time & no need. huh?
00:49:511 - delete.becuase,add break time. ^

Muzukashii

good~.

Petrarca's Oni

00:15:336 - 00:25:870 - add break time. huh?
00:26:255 - 00:40:368 - ^ huh?
01:12:845 (429,430) - ctrl + G denied, liked it the way it was

Very good~ :) nice map. Good luck
appreciate the modding ;3
xtrem3x
Request via Simple Taiko Modding Queue >w< !

____________________________________________________________

General:
don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

____________________________________________________________

Kantan:

00:02:812 - k
00:09:170 - d

00:26:454 - move to 00:26:653

00:39:964 - d (?)

____________________________________________________________

Futsuu:

00:10:560 (30,31) - (1):Change for d D // (2): k K

00:13:342 - Change to k
00:13:739 - ^

01:11:554 (40,41) - Invert colors

____________________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

00:08:971 (38,39) - Change to k
00:13:342 - ^
00:13:739 - ^

00:38:574 - Change to k
00:38:872 - delete
00:39:666 - delete
various triples in a row is .. hard (?)

00:44:732 (123,124) - Change to d

00:56:355 - delete (?)
01:09:070 - ^


____________________________________________________________

Petrarca's Oni:

00:08:971 (41,42) - Change to k
00:13:342 - ^
00:13:739 - ^

00:46:521 - Change to k

00:56:355 - delete (?)
01:15:428 - ^

____________________________________________________________


SasakiSayaka
Hi~from my queue~
please remove tags and add tags:アウトブレイク・カンパニー and title:私の宝石箱
Kantan
00:01:223 (2) - del?
00:02:812 (5) - ^
00:30:825 (26) - k?
00:39:964 (39) - 00:40:759 (41) - del?
00:43:143 (41) - ^
Futsuu
00:00:428 (1) - del
00:04:799 (13) - move 00:04:997 -
00:13:938 (40) - del?
00:20:494 (59) - k
00:26:653 (79) - del?
00:41:355 (120) - move 00:41:554 - and 00:42:944 (122) - move 00:43:143 -
00:44:335 - add d and 00:43:938 (123) - move 00:44:136 -
01:04:997 (21) - del?
01:12:547 (44) - ^
Muzukashii
00:00:428 (1,2,3) - if can...please remove
00:29:931 (60) - try move here 00:30:130 - ?
00:36:289 (87) - ^
00:38:176 (96) - k ?
00:41:951 (114,115,116,117,118) - try to change http://puu.sh/c50Nx/4475a742f9.jpg
00:44:534 (123) - k ?
00:52:183 (151) - del?
00:58:540 (23) - k ?
01:05:395 (59) - d ?
Petrarca's Oni
00:00:428 (1,2,3) - same muzukashii
00:14:534 (73) - k and del 00:14:633 (74) - 00:14:732 (75) - d
00:39:766 (221) - try d ?
only these
nice map~good luck :)
SasakiSayaka
this~
Racoon-
Hello~ From My Queue~

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat

Kantan
00:03:209 Add Note ?
00:06:388 Add Note ?
00:22:481 d ?
00:33:209(29,30,31) k d k ?
00:38:574 k ?
00:43:540 D ?

Futsuu
00:11:355 k ?
00:17:315 k ?
00:23:673 k ?
00:39:170 k ?
00:45:726 D ?
00:52:679 d ?
00:59:037(5,6) Ctrl+G ?
01:14:534 k ?

Muzukashii
00:07:183 k ?
00:08:574 d ?
00:33:408 k ?
00:52:679(151,152,153) d ?
00:58:540(23,24) Ctrl+G ?
01:12:944(95,96) k ?

Good Luck ~ :D
Topic Starter
Dilectus

-S o r a- wrote:

Hi~from my queue~
please remove tags and add tags:アウトブレイク・カンパニー and title:私の宝石箱
Kantan
00:01:223 (2) - del?
00:02:812 (5) - ^
00:30:825 (26) - k?
00:39:964 (39) - 00:40:759 (41) - del?
00:43:143 (41) - ^
Futsuu
00:00:428 (1) - del
00:04:799 (13) - move 00:04:997 -
00:13:938 (40) - del?
00:20:494 (59) - k
00:26:653 (79) - del?
00:41:355 (120) - move 00:41:554 - and 00:42:944 (122) - move 00:43:143 -
00:44:335 - add d and 00:43:938 (123) - move 00:44:136 -
01:04:997 (21) - del?
01:12:547 (44) - ^
Muzukashii
00:00:428 (1,2,3) - if can...please remove
00:29:931 (60) - try move here 00:30:130 - ?
00:36:289 (87) - ^
00:38:176 (96) - k ?
00:41:951 (114,115,116,117,118) - try to change http://puu.sh/c50Nx/4475a742f9.jpg
00:44:534 (123) - k ?
00:52:183 (151) - del?
00:58:540 (23) - k ?
01:05:395 (59) - d ?
Petrarca's Oni
00:00:428 (1,2,3) - same muzukashii
00:14:534 (73) - k and del 00:14:633 (74) - 00:14:732 (75) - d
00:39:766 (221) - try d ?
only these
nice map~good luck :)
Thanks for the mod!

- Racoon - wrote:

Hello~ From My Queue~

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat

Kantan
00:03:209 Add Note ?
00:06:388 Add Note ?
00:22:481 d ?
00:33:209(29,30,31) k d k ?
00:38:574 k ?
00:43:540 D ?

Futsuu
00:11:355 k ?
00:17:315 k ?
00:23:673 k ?
00:39:170 k ?
00:45:726 D ?
00:52:679 d ?
00:59:037(5,6) Ctrl+G ?
01:14:534 k ?

Muzukashii
00:07:183 k ?
00:08:574 d ?
00:33:408 k ?
00:52:679(151,152,153) d ?
00:58:540(23,24) Ctrl+G ?
01:12:944(95,96) k ?

Good Luck ~ :D
Thanks for the mod!
PatZar
hi
i will mod the general first
and then i will mod it later when i got the times

[general for Petrarca's Oni]
00:54:053 - current timing points
00:54:648 - start kiai
01:20:070 - end kiai

don't KD me first
Topic Starter
Dilectus

Genocide wrote:

hi
i will mod the general first
and then i will mod it later when i got the times

[general for Petrarca's Oni]
00:54:053 - current timing points
00:54:648 - start kiai
01:20:070 - end kiai

don't KD me first
It's been along time since you posted this you know xD
ghm12
Hi ~
From Tarrasky's Queue
General
Oni have Audio Preview Time conflict / Unherited Timing Points conflict with all other diffs
Use this code for a better bg (If you don't know what to do with this, pm me ingame)
//Background and Video events
0,0,"backgroundobc.png",0,95
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

Oni
Nice diff godtier
  1. 00:01:818 - k? because the next notes have a different sound
  2. 00:02:613 - k?
  3. 00:07:379 - k?
  4. 00:08:372 - dkk? First note don't have a strong sound for me
  5. 00:10:358 - k?
  6. 00:39:355 - dkkkdkd? Probably will be recused, but follows the rhythm better for me
  7. 00:46:505 - d?
  8. 00:52:464 - k?
  9. 01:13:020 - stream finishing with kd?
  10. 01:22:851 - ddk?

Muzukashii
I can't say it's hard for a muzukashii, but a lot of kkd and ddk at the start can be hard for muzu starters
  1. 00:11:951 - Why not a note here? 1/1 break is good enough for muzukashii
  2. 00:39:567 - kkk?
  3. 00:44:732 - dkk maybe looks a bit impossible for muzu players, make it kkk
  4. 00:45:328 - Why not K K?

Futsuu
asdf
  1. 00:26:256 - k d k?

Can't mod kantan orz
Nice map, good luck!
Topic Starter
Dilectus

ghm12 wrote:

Hi ~
From Tarrasky's Queue
General
Oni have Audio Preview Time conflict / Unherited Timing Points conflict with all other diffs could be glitch as you said
Use this code for a better bg (If you don't know what to do with this, pm me ingame)Looks really good. Thanks!
//Background and Video events
0,0,"backgroundobc.png",0,95
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

Oni
Nice diff godtier
  1. 00:01:818 - k? because the next notes have a different sound fix
  2. 00:02:613 - k? fix
  3. 00:07:379 - k? fix
  4. 00:08:372 - dkk? First note don't have a strong sound for me
  5. 00:10:358 - k?
  6. 00:39:355 - dkkkdkd? Probably will be recused, but follows the rhythm better for me fix
  7. 00:46:505 - d? fix
  8. 00:52:464 - k? fix
  9. 01:13:020 - stream finishing with kd?
  10. 01:22:851 - ddk?

Muzukashii
I can't say it's hard for a muzukashii, but a lot of kkd and ddk at the start can be hard for muzu starters
  1. 00:11:951 - Why not a note here? 1/1 break is good enough for muzukashii fix
  2. 00:39:567 - kkk? fix
  3. 00:44:732 - dkk maybe looks a bit impossible for muzu players, make it kkk fix
  4. 00:45:328 - Why not K K? fix

Futsuu
asdf
  1. 00:26:256 - k d k? fix

Can't mod kantan orz
Nice map, good luck!
Thanks for the mod!
Sylphi
[General]
  1. Refer to official site, metadata should be the following.
    Artist: ペトラルカ・アン・エルダント三世(CV:渕上舞)
    Romanised Artist: Petrarca Ann Erudanto III (CV:Fuchigami Mai)
    Title: 私の宝石箱
    Romanised Title: Watashi no Housekibako
  2. Timing points and preview time are inconsistent.
  3. Set audio lead-in to same value for consistency.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:02:812 (4,5) - It would fit more the melody to swap these.
  2. 00:04:997 (8,9) - It is a bit weird. How about this rhythm?
  3. 00:11:355 (9) - Wrong emphasis. it would be natural that moving to 00:11:554
  4. 00:38:574 (49) - I think this finish is not necessary.
  5. 00:52:679 (1) - Reduce by 1 / 2 that follow vocal.
  6. 00:56:653 (4) - Move to 00:57:050. it would be better flow.
  7. 00:58:242 (7) - Same reason as above. remove this.
  8. 00:59:832 (9) - I don't know what to follow. How about changing to this?
  9. 01:10:958 (27) - Remove this. i think it would be not bad that making little break.
  10. 01:12:348 (30) - Same as 00:59:832. How about this?
  11. 01:19:302 (40) - Same as above. I think it would be better that changing to this.
[Fuutsu]
  1. 00:34:004 (97,98) - Swap these for consistency.
  2. 00:37:580 (108) - Add finish that follow cymbal sound?
  3. 00:48:706 (132) - k would be better flow.
  4. 00:59:633 (7) - This slider is a bit weird. Try to this rhythm.
  5. 01:01:818 (11,12,13,14) - How about this?
  6. 01:06:189 (25) - d that follow vocal.
  7. 01:08:176 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - Although it is not weird. but i think it would fit more the music that changing to this.
  8. 01:14:534 (2,3,4,5) - How about this?
[Muzukashii]
  1. I think 1 / 4 triplet is a bit many. try to reduce some 1 / 4 triplet.
  2. 00:08:772 (37) - k that follow melody.
  3. 00:09:070 (39) - Remove this. It would be eaiser to play!
  4. 00:14:136 (1) - I think the slider would be better than the spinner.
  5. 00:27:845 (52) - Remove this. I think it need little break.
  6. 00:41:951 (114,115,116,117) - How about this rhythm that follow vocal? it would be natural to play.
  7. 00:53:077 (1) - It would be better to map imo. Try to this rhythm.
[Oni]
  1. 00:07:578 (33) - Remove finish for consistency.
  2. 00:10:557 (51) - k that follow the melody.
  3. 00:23:864 (122,123,124,125,126) - k d kkd would fit more the music imo.
  4. 00:24:857 (128) - d that follow vocal.
  5. 00:38:263 (209) - Same as above.
  6. 00:43:526 (240) - Remove finish for consistency.
  7. 00:41:044 (228) - This triplet is not matched. Remove this.
  8. 00:41:739 (231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - How about this rhythm?
  9. 00:53:059 (294,295,296,297,298) - k dk dk would fit more the music imo.
Sorry for poor mod.
Topic Starter
Dilectus

Underflow wrote:

[General]
  1. Refer to official site, metadata should be the following. Fix
    Artist: ペトラルカ・アン・エルダント三世(CV:渕上舞)
    Romanised Artist: Petrarca Ann Erudanto III (CV:Fuchigami Mai)
    Title: 私の宝石箱
    Romanised Title: Watashi no Housekibako
  2. Timing points and preview time are inconsistent. Fixed the preview time but I couldnt fix the timing points.
  3. Set audio lead-in to same value for consistency. fix


Sorry for poor mod. Was a good mod, fixed alot of things you mentioned. Thanks!
Numbers 596108
Mod request by DavidEd (Modding Queue)

[Kantan]

Notes :

00:19:302 (20) - o
00:20:494 (22) - o
00:38:574 (49) - o
01:06:785 (21) - slider begin at 01:06:587 is more suitable
01:11:554 (29) - o

[Futsuu]

Notes :

00:05:792 (16) - o
00:39:964 (116) - o
00:59:236 (6) - o
01:06:388 (27) - o

[Muzukashii]

Notes :

00:17:315 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - oooooo is better maybe?
00:23:276 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - ^
00:33:805 (75,76) - oo
00:56:355 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - this pattern are too long, a little difficult in this difficulty.
01:18:607 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143) - ^

[Oni]

Notes :

00:02:613 (12) - o
00:14:926 (75) - o
00:17:310 (86) - o
00:41:739 (230) - o

That's all :3
Topic Starter
Dilectus

Numbers 596108 wrote:

Mod request by DavidEd (Modding Queue)

[Kantan]

Notes :

00:19:302 (20) - o
00:20:494 (22) - o fix
00:38:574 (49) - o fix
01:06:785 (21) - slider begin at 01:06:587 is more suitable fix
01:11:554 (29) - o fix

[Futsuu]

Notes :

00:05:792 (16) - o
00:39:964 (116) - o fix
00:59:236 (6) - o fix
01:06:388 (27) - o

[Muzukashii]

Notes :

00:17:315 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - oooooo is better maybe?
00:23:276 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - ^
00:33:805 (75,76) - oo fix
00:56:355 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - this pattern are too long, a little difficult in this difficulty. fix
01:18:607 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143) - ^ fix

[Oni]

Notes :

00:02:613 (12) - o fix
00:14:926 (75) - o fix
00:17:310 (86) - o
00:41:739 (230) - o fix

That's all :3
Ty for mod! ;3
Cerulean Veyron
Hello there! Requested via form~

[> General <]
  1. - Ehh.. I think you should remove "anime" from the tags, since it'll be added on the Song Genre later on.
  2. - Well, the spread looks a bit odd, between Futsuu and Muzukashii are okay, but the others look meh.
  3. - I may think the "アウトブレイク・カンパニー" on tags should be swapped with the source. That's just my opinion...
  4. - Others seems fine.
[> Kantan <]
  1. 00:07:566 (2,3) - DK?
  2. 00:20:480 (22) - d
  3. 00:26:639 (31) - I might think you'll need to move this to 00:26:440 - , sounds better imo
  4. 00:30:016 (36,37) - dk?
  5. 00:33:195 (41,42) - ^
  6. 00:52:665 (1) - Well, i think this might be a little hard for Kntns, you could possibly replace it into a note or sth.
  7. 01:01:010 - I can hear this tick has a strong beat, so mind you add a note?
  8. 01:10:546 (28) - d
  9. 01:13:725 - Same as 01:01:010 -
  10. 01:19:884 (43) - D?
  11. - Seems fine, some empty spaces, but maybe it's not a big deal.
[> Futsuu <]
  1. - The background shift is inconsistent with the other diffs, so check it?
  2. 00:04:387 (12,13) - dk
  3. 00:07:367 (20,21,22,23) - dK kD?
  4. 00:18:494 (51,52) - kd
  5. 00:23:262 (66,67) - ^
  6. 00:34:983 (100) - Move this on 00:35:381 - ? fits better with the rhythm
  7. 00:52:665 (143) - d? just my suggestion...
  8. 00:58:825 (4,5,6) - kdk? K here doesn't fit imo.
  9. 01:06:175 (26) - k
  10. 01:11:540 (41,42,43) - Same as 00:58:825 (4,5,6) -
  11. - Fine diff..
[> Muzukashii <]
  1. 00:00:414 (1,2,3) - dkk?
  2. 00:08:361 (34) - Remove note?
  3. 00:17:897 (11) - ^
  4. 00:27:235 (47) - k
  5. 00:33:791 (75) - ^
  6. 00:38:361 (95) - d
  7. 00:38:758 (97) - Remove note?
  8. 00:39:652 (102) - Move to 00:39:851 - ? sounds better with the song track.
  9. 00:49:685 (136) - Remove note?
  10. 00:50:877 (141) - ^
  11. 00:53:659 (155) - K?
  12. 00:55:348 (5) - Move to 00:55:546 - ?
  13. 01:06:970 (64) - k
  14. 01:07:069 (65) - Remove note?
  15. 01:11:242 (85) - Move to 01:11:639 - ?
  16. - Some rhythm changes, with some triplets being moved to the right place.
[> Oni <]
  1. - There are some issues alike muzu, so to keep this a little short, gonna get a few major.
  2. 00:00:513 (2) - k, just as muzu.
  3. 00:05:778 (25) - d
  4. 00:08:162 (36,37,38,39,40) - Oppose this? preferred kdddd
  5. 00:14:122 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - ddddkkk?
  6. 00:18:295 (94) - Remove note? give a little space for some tiny break.
  7. 00:21:473 (111) - ^
  8. 00:27:831 (148) - ^
  9. 00:28:427 (151) - k
  10. 00:31:010 (167) - Remove note...
  11. 00:32:401 (175) - k
  12. 00:39:454 (220) - Remove note.
  13. 00:43:526 (240) - k
  14. 00:49:685 (274,275,276) - ddk?
  15. 00:59:917 (342) - Remove note
  16. 01:05:381 (379) - k
  17. 01:12:136 (421) - Remove note
  18. 01:16:010 (447,448,449) - dkd
  19. 01:20:877 (484) - k.. maybe
  20. 01:22:864 (494,495,496) - ddk
  21. - It's a good diff, not without those overadding notes. Might be similar to Ura..

I'm kinda beginner at taiko, so every mods you're seeing are just suggestions. Well, i'm just trying to improve :p
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Dilectus

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello there! Requested via form~

[> General <]
  1. - Ehh.. I think you should remove "anime" from the tags, since it'll be added on the Song Genre later on. removed, added ed and ending to tags instead
  2. - Well, the spread looks a bit odd, between Futsuu and Muzukashii are okay, but the others look meh.
  3. - I may think the "アウトブレイク・カンパニー" on tags should be swapped with the source. That's just my opinion... ...and I agree
  4. - Others seems fine.
[> Kantan <]
  1. 00:07:566 (2,3) - DK?
  2. 00:20:480 (22) - d following vocals
  3. 00:26:639 (31) - I might think you'll need to move this to 00:26:440 - , sounds better imo fix
  4. 00:30:016 (36,37) - dk? fix
  5. 00:33:195 (41,42) - ^ fix
  6. 00:52:665 (1) - Well, i think this might be a little hard for Kntns, you could possibly replace it into a note or sth. added 2 notes
  7. 01:01:010 - I can hear this tick has a strong beat, so mind you add a note? fix
  8. 01:10:546 (28) - d fix
  9. 01:13:725 - Same as 01:01:010 - fix
  10. 01:19:884 (43) - D? fix
  11. - Seems fine, some empty spaces, but maybe it's not a big deal.
[> Futsuu <]
  1. - The background shift is inconsistent with the other diffs, so check it? did not notice
  2. 00:04:387 (12,13) - dk fix
  3. 00:07:367 (20,21,22,23) - dK kD?
  4. 00:18:494 (51,52) - kd fix
  5. 00:23:262 (66,67) - ^ fix
  6. 00:34:983 (100) - Move this on 00:35:381 - ? fits better with the rhythm fix
  7. 00:52:665 (143) - d? just my suggestion... following vocals :)
  8. 00:58:825 (4,5,6) - kdk? K here doesn't fit imo. fix
  9. 01:06:175 (26) - k fix
  10. 01:11:540 (41,42,43) - Same as 00:58:825 (4,5,6) - fix
  11. - Fine diff..
[> Muzukashii <]
  1. 00:00:414 (1,2,3) - dkk? fix
  2. 00:08:361 (34) - Remove note? fix
  3. 00:17:897 (11) - ^ fix
  4. 00:27:235 (47) - k fix
  5. 00:33:791 (75) - ^ fix
  6. 00:38:361 (95) - d fix
  7. 00:38:758 (97) - Remove note? fix
  8. 00:39:652 (102) - Move to 00:39:851 - ? sounds better with the song track. drum roll starts at 00:39:652
  9. 00:49:685 (136) - Remove note? fix
  10. 00:50:877 (141) - ^
  11. 00:53:659 (155) - K? fix
  12. 00:55:348 (5) - Move to 00:55:546 - ? sure
  13. 01:06:970 (64) - k fix
  14. 01:07:069 (65) - Remove note? fix
  15. 01:11:242 (85) - Move to 01:11:639 - ? fix
  16. - Some rhythm changes, with some triplets being moved to the right place.
[> Oni <]
  1. - There are some issues alike muzu, so to keep this a little short, gonna get a few major.
  2. 00:00:513 (2) - k, just as muzu. fix
  3. 00:05:778 (25) - d
  4. 00:08:162 (36,37,38,39,40) - Oppose this? preferred kdddd fix
  5. 00:14:122 (70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - ddddkkk? fix
  6. 00:18:295 (94) - Remove note? give a little space for some tiny break. fix
  7. 00:21:473 (111) - ^ fix
  8. 00:27:831 (148) - ^ fix
  9. 00:28:427 (151) - k fix
  10. 00:31:010 (167) - Remove note... fix
  11. 00:32:401 (175) - k
  12. 00:39:454 (220) - Remove note. fix
  13. 00:43:526 (240) - k fix
  14. 00:49:685 (274,275,276) - ddk? fix
  15. 00:59:917 (342) - Remove note fix
  16. 01:05:381 (379) - k
  17. 01:12:136 (421) - Remove note fix
  18. 01:16:010 (447,448,449) - dkd
  19. 01:20:877 (484) - k.. maybe
  20. 01:22:864 (494,495,496) - ddk
  21. - It's a good diff, not without those overadding notes. Might be similar to Ura..

I'm kinda beginner at taiko, so every mods you're seeing are just suggestions. Well, i'm just trying to improve :p
Good luck!
Thanks for the mod man! Was helpful. Appreciated!
Nitrousdragon
Looks good to me imo, great job :)
[R]
from queue

[Muzukashi]
00:56:341 - delete ?
01:02:699 - delete ?
[Oni]
00:09:851 (47,48,49) - ctrl+G
01:12:831 (418,419) - ctrl+G
01:13:129 - d
01:15:911 - 01:16:308 - ddkdk
still noob xD
Topic Starter
Dilectus

[R] wrote:

from queue

[Muzukashi]
00:56:341 - delete ? its ok as it already is
01:02:699 - delete ?
^

[Oni]
00:09:851 (47,48,49) - ctrl+G fix
01:12:831 (418,419) - ctrl+G kind of threw me off guard
01:13:129 - d
01:15:911 - 01:16:308 - ddkdk fix
still noob xD
Appreciate the modding :)
Prophecy
[★ Introduction]
➞ From Prophecy's Quick Check Modding Queue
➞ Thank you for your request >w< , Hope you have a great day :3

[★ General]
➞ Good Beatmap :D

[Muzukashii]
● Check the ranking rules please , but nice mapping
➞ 00:00:513 - Must be ddk d / ddd / kkk , It is not rankable!
➞ 00:00:811 - d
➞ 00:03:692 - Must be ddk d / ddd / kkk , It is not rankable!
➞ 00:07:169 - Should be ddk d , It is not rankable!
➞ 00:11:937 - 00:13:924 - too long 1/2 stream. Should be some rest here!
➞ 00:33:593 - Should be ddk d , It is not rankable!
➞ 00:33:791 - I don't know it is rankable or not, But I don't prefer using that 1/4.
➞ 00:57:732 - Must be ddk d / ddd / kkk , It is not rankable!
Topic Starter
Dilectus

Prophecy wrote:

[★ Introduction]
➞ From Prophecy's Quick Check Modding Queue
➞ Thank you for your request >w< , Hope you have a great day :3

[★ General]
➞ Good Beatmap :D

[Muzukashii]
● Check the ranking rules please , but nice mapping
➞ 00:00:513 - Must be ddk d / ddd / kkk , It is not rankable! did not know this before, thanks!
➞ 00:00:811 - d fix
➞ 00:03:692 - Must be ddk d / ddd / kkk , It is not rankable! fix
➞ 00:07:169 - Should be ddk d , It is not rankable! fix
➞ 00:11:937 - 00:13:924 - too long 1/2 stream. Should be some rest here! added break here aswell 00:12:732
➞ 00:33:593 - Should be ddk d , It is not rankable! ddd k d D
➞ 00:33:791 - I don't know it is rankable or not, But I don't prefer using that 1/4. removed 00:33:891 just to be sure
➞ 00:57:732 - Must be ddk d / ddd / kkk , It is not rankable! fix
Useful mod! Appreciated!
tasuke912
Hi, from my queue.
[ Kantan]
  1. Overall there are many awkward rhythm to play. main snap should be 1/1 on kantan, so you need to reconsider about up-beats.
  2. 00:02:401 (3,4,5) - This up-beat rhythm is so hard on Kantan. I recommend to change to easier pattern.
  3. 00:08:758 (4,5,6) - ^ etc.
[ Futsuu]
  1. Breaks are missing. you have to make more 2/1 breaks.
  2. 00:26:838 (79) -, 00:45:911 (137) -, I recommend to delete these sliders to make break. (and put normal notes on the bar.)
  3. 01:21:871 (24,25,26,27) - 1/2 double big is bit hard on Futsuu. recommending 1 color.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:45:911 (121) - delete to clarify the boundary of each part. and put note on the bar line.
  2. 01:09:056 (73) - kd is so hard on Muzu. Delete.
  3. 01:12:334 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) - This 1/4+1/2 pattern is too hard. you have to delete some notes.
  4. 01:15:414 (105) - See above.
  5. Overall 1/4 patterns are hard of Muzu, please consider to delete of few notes.
[ Oni]
  1. 00:49:089 (262,263,264,265,266) - kddkk looks bit weird. it has room for improvement.
  2. 01:12:930 (419,420,421) - ddk doesn't follow the drum properly. dkd is better imo.
Good luck. :)
Topic Starter
Dilectus

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi, from my queue.
[ Kantan]
  1. Overall there are many awkward rhythm to play. main snap should be 1/1 on kantan, so you need to reconsider about up-beats. Moved/deleted some beats. Same goes for the suggestions below
  2. 00:02:401 (3,4,5) - This up-beat rhythm is so hard on Kantan. I recommend to change to easier pattern.
  3. 00:08:758 (4,5,6) - ^ etc.
[ Futsuu]
  1. Breaks are missing. you have to make more 2/1 breaks. deleted few beats
  2. 00:26:838 (79) -, 00:45:911 (137) -, I recommend to delete these sliders to make break. (and put normal notes on the bar.) fix
  3. 01:21:871 (24,25,26,27) - 1/2 double big is bit hard on Futsuu. recommending 1 color. KK KK
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:45:911 (121) - delete to clarify the boundary of each part. and put note on the bar line. fix
  2. 01:09:056 (73) - kd is so hard on Muzu. Delete. deleted
  3. 01:12:334 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95) - This 1/4+1/2 pattern is too hard. you have to delete some notes. fix
  4. 01:15:414 (105) - See above. fix
  5. Overall 1/4 patterns are hard of Muzu, please consider to delete of few notes.
[ Oni]
  1. 00:49:089 (262,263,264,265,266) - kddkk looks bit weird. it has room for improvement. fix
  2. 01:12:930 (419,420,421) - ddk doesn't follow the drum properly. dkd is better imo. fix
Good luck. :)
Thanks for your mod. :)
Volta
hello, from my queue. here's your order~

[Kantan]
feels many weird rhytm. and there are many notes in red tick. need more break also.

00:01:805 (2) - move to 00:02:202 - to give more simple rhytm because it really awkward if placed there.
00:04:586 (5) - delete to give break, because the 2/1 notes are too long.
00:07:566 (2) - delete, this note is in red line, and also a finisher. the notes before this is also a finisher, it's too hard for kantan.
00:10:944 (6) - delete, too hard.
00:12:136 (6,7) - move 1 white line to the right
00:15:314 (10) - delete, give break after sliding
00:18:493 (14) - delete for consistency
00:20:480 (16) - move to 00:20:877 -
00:21:672 (18) - delete
00:24:851 (22) - move to 00:25:248 -
00:26:440 (28) - move to 00:26:838 -
00:39:156 (48) - move to 00:39:553 -
00:45:314 (55) - delete. too hard

00:51:473 (58,59,60) - you can change these to a slider that following the long vocal so it's not too boring with all that monoton hit

00:55:447 (2) - delete
00:56:043 (3) - move to 00:56:242 - notes in red tick is no good for newbie. use it only when reallllyyyy needed.
00:59:222 (7) - move to 00:59:420 -
01:01:805 (10) - delete
01:02:401 () - move to 01:02:599 -
01:02:997 () - move to 01:03:394 -

01:06:175 (16) - delete and start the slider at 01:06:374 - and end at 01:07:367 -

01:08:758 (18,19) - this is not recommended for kantan
01:08:758 (18) - move to 01:08:957 -
01:09:156 (19) - move to 01:10:149 -

01:14:520 (26) - delete, give break

for kantan, sometimes you must ignore the song and give more simple pattern.


[Futsuu]
still need more 2/1 break...... :o

00:00:414 (1) - delete, not for break but for better start.
00:15:314 (40) - ^ for break
00:18:494 (49) - ^
00:21:672 (58) - ^
00:24:851 (68,69) - ^
00:28:030 (77) - ^
00:40:745 (118) - ^
00:43:924 (126) - ^
00:44:321 (126) - ^
00:47:897 (134) - ^
00:50:281 (140) - ^
00:51:871 (143) - ^
00:55:050 (2) - ^
01:01:407 (12) - ^
01:07:765 (28) - ^
01:12:334 - add d, consistency

01:14:122 (1) - delete


[Muzukashii]
00:06:374 (25) - change to d because there is a bass with pitch going down
00:27:632 (46) - d

[Oni]
00:01:805 (8) - change to d, low pitch
00:04:387 (20) - d
00:06:374 (25) - change to d
00:22:765 (116) - delete for consistency
00:23:560 (121) - ^


that's all from my. sorry i only focused on the low diffs on your map because it really needs improvement. GL!
Topic Starter
Dilectus
Flying Pan

Flying Pan wrote:

hello, from my queue. here's your order~

[Kantan]
feels many weird rhytm. and there are many notes in red tick. need more break also.

00:01:805 (2) - move to 00:02:202 - to give more simple rhytm because it really awkward if placed there.
00:04:586 (5) - delete to give break, because the 2/1 notes are too long.
00:07:566 (2) - delete, this note is in red line, and also a finisher. the notes before this is also a finisher, it's too hard for kantan.
00:10:944 (6) - delete, too hard.
00:12:136 (6,7) - move 1 white line to the right
00:15:314 (10) - delete, give break after sliding
00:18:493 (14) - delete for consistency
00:20:480 (16) - move to 00:20:877 -
00:21:672 (18) - delete
00:24:851 (22) - move to 00:25:248 -
00:26:440 (28) - move to 00:26:838 -
00:39:156 (48) - move to 00:39:553 -
00:45:314 (55) - delete. too hard

00:51:473 (58,59,60) - you can change these to a slider that following the long vocal so it's not too boring with all that monoton hit

00:55:447 (2) - delete
00:56:043 (3) - move to 00:56:242 - notes in red tick is no good for newbie. use it only when reallllyyyy needed.
00:59:222 (7) - move to 00:59:420 -
01:01:805 (10) - delete
01:02:401 () - move to 01:02:599 -
01:02:997 () - move to 01:03:394 -

01:06:175 (16) - delete and start the slider at 01:06:374 - and end at 01:07:367 -

01:08:758 (18,19) - this is not recommended for kantan
01:08:758 (18) - move to 01:08:957 -
01:09:156 (19) - move to 01:10:149 -

01:14:520 (26) - delete, give break

for kantan, sometimes you must ignore the song and give more simple pattern.


[Futsuu]
still need more 2/1 break...... :o

00:00:414 (1) - delete, not for break but for better start.
00:15:314 (40) - ^ for break
00:18:494 (49) - ^
00:21:672 (58) - ^
00:24:851 (68,69) - ^
00:28:030 (77) - ^
00:40:745 (118) - ^
00:43:924 (126) - ^
00:44:321 (126) - ^
00:47:897 (134) - ^
00:50:281 (140) - ^
00:51:871 (143) - ^
00:55:050 (2) - ^
01:01:407 (12) - ^
01:07:765 (28) - ^
01:12:334 - add d, consistency

01:14:122 (1) - delete


[Muzukashii]
00:06:374 (25) - change to d because there is a bass with pitch going down
00:27:632 (46) - d

[Oni]
00:01:805 (8) - change to d, low pitch
00:04:387 (20) - d
00:06:374 (25) - change to d
00:22:765 (116) - delete for consistency
00:23:560 (121) - ^


that's all from my. sorry i only focused on the low diffs on your map because it really needs improvement. GL!

I don't really know much about Taiko Mapping yet. So I fixed most of the suggestions you mentioned :lol:

Thanks for the mod!
Nyan
[General]

You can make a difficulty between Kantan and Futsuu. Futsuu is absolute Muzukashii difficulty and Muzukashii is absolute Oni diff now.
Kantan / Futsuu(new) / Muzukashii(Futsuu) / Oni(Muzukashii) / Inner Oni(Oni)

This song (十面相 colorful ver.) on Taiko no Tatsujin can be reference for this difficulty spread suggestion.
Kantan Youtube
Futsuu Youtube
Muzukashii Youtube
Oni Youtube
Inner Oni Youtube

[Kantan]

is fine.

[Futsuu]

00:59:222 (6) - can add Finish

01:06:374 (26) - add Finish

01:15:116 (48) - can add Finish

01:19:089 (60) - can add Finish

[Muzukashii]

00:08:162 (33) - add Finish

00:14:122 (57) - reduce the length, and add a don or kat on 00:14:917 -

01:19:089 (112,113,114,115) - ddd d instead of d ddd

[Oni]

00:44:520 (233,234,235,236) - kkk K instead of k kkk

00:59:420 (328) - delete
Topic Starter
Dilectus

Nyan wrote:

[General]

You can make a difficulty between Kantan and Futsuu. Futsuu is absolute Muzukashii difficulty and Muzukashii is absolute Oni diff now.
Kantan / Futsuu(new) / Muzukashii(Futsuu) / Oni(Muzukashii) / Inner Oni(Oni) Nah, it's ok the way it is now.

This song (十面相 colorful ver.) on Taiko no Tatsujin can be reference for this difficulty spread suggestion.
Kantan Youtube
Futsuu Youtube
Muzukashii Youtube
Oni Youtube
Inner Oni Youtube

[Futsuu]

00:59:222 (6) - can add Finish too hard for futsuu

01:06:374 (26) - add Finish ^

01:15:116 (48) - can add Finish fix

01:19:089 (60) - can add Finish same reason as above

[Muzukashii]

00:08:162 (33) - add Finish fix

00:14:122 (57) - reduce the length, and add a don or kat on 00:14:917 - mapped it properly instead

01:19:089 (112,113,114,115) - ddd d instead of d ddd fix

[Oni]
remapped this difficulty entierly.
thanks for mod!
Prophecy
Sorry, I've modded your map before, Please re-submit your mapset to "Pending" to get one more mod from me!
Topic Starter
Dilectus

Prophecy wrote:

Sorry, I've modded your map before, Please re-submit your mapset to "Pending" to get one more mod from me!
Ah I'm sorry.

Then you don't have to mod it.
Aisha
Hi! From the M4M request

General

  1. OD and HP spread: Even it could break a little current spread I'd like to see HP 5 on Oni cause low bpm song doesn't require too much hp drain :p
  2. Metadata suggestions:
  3. Preview timing point: Well it's most up to you but 00:53:858 - could be fine if you want to make it hearing the drums before the voice or 00:54:056 - if you want to focus in the voice
  4. Volumes:
    1. 00:00:613 - starting with 50 maybe
    2. 00:06:970 - something like 70 could be fine here
    3. 00:14:917 - hmmm 65 could be great
    4. Holding 80 on Kiai is good
    5. 01:27:632 - 5% so you make the spinner end smooth
[Kantan]
  1. 00:00:613 - I think this section could use some redlines considering the low bpm. Should not be that hard to aim for a Kantan diff and trying to use some breaks (maybe 3/1 is enough according to metalophone pitch) could be helpful
  2. 00:02:997 (3) - ^may I suggest for example: 00:03:195 - moving here and making it don (so if you get my point try to make this section consistent :'))
  3. 00:14:126 - I think a note here is pretty neccesary to follow the drum. If you feel it too dense then 00:12:334 (6) - deleting it could be fine (dw about the giant break xd)
  4. 00:19:685 (12) - try a kat on here so you emphatise better descendant rhythm
  5. 00:23:659 (16) - I think this as don feels better, kat is a little strong for that pitch
  6. 00:36:374 (28) - ^maybe same but if you want variation is fine. I'd pref something smooth anyways
  7. 00:52:268 - what about adding a note (or even two?) here? d could be fine since three 4/1 breaks in a row feels so empty
  8. I think you could make Kiai more interesting, using some triple (1/1) simple like d d d / k k k could be fine :p
[Futsuu]
  1. It's a little strange not to see any 2/1 break until 00:12:533 - . Try to use at least one before
  2. 00:04:983 - what about k here and the break after it? Metalophone is pretty soundful here
  3. 00:07:367 (19) - try moving this to 00:07:963 - and making it kat. Emphatises very good the next D
  4. 00:14:917 - same about breaks, I think notes like 00:15:314 (36) - could be a good way to make them
    ^also this section is the same as muzu o.o
  5. 00:39:156 (108,111) - try ctrl+g'ing these, looks great
    Overall talking about composition and pitches follow is nice, but I think it's way dense specially if you compare the Kiai of the rest of the song the density is way the same so I think you should distribute some breaks better and maybe avoid some voice sounds (not the strongest of course xD)
Did you just copied Oni and Muzu? They're the same on so much parts (the whole beggining is the same!) try to make the spread more balanced and call me back after it :P (so I do my 2nd part of the mod xD)
Topic Starter
Dilectus

xfraczynho wrote:

General

  1. OD and HP spread: Even it could break a little current spread I'd like to see HP 5 on Oni cause low bpm song doesn't require too much hp drain :p oh oki
  2. Metadata suggestions:
  3. Preview timing point: Well it's most up to you but 00:53:858 - could be fine if you want to make it hearing the drums before the voice or 00:54:056 - if you want to focus in the voice current preview point is fine because it starts exactly on the lyrics
  4. Volumes:
    1. 00:00:613 - starting with 50 maybe
    2. 00:06:970 - something like 70 could be fine here
    3. 00:14:917 - hmmm 65 could be great
    4. Holding 80 on Kiai is good
    5. 01:27:632 - 5% so you make the spinner end smooth forgot about this. did something simular
[Kantan]

  • fixed all
  1. I think you could make Kiai more interesting, using some triple (1/1) simple like d d d / k k k could be fine :p added and deleted some notes
[Futsuu]

  • fixed all
    Overall talking about composition and pitches follow is nice, but I think it's way dense specially if you compare the Kiai of the rest of the song the density is way the same so I think you should distribute some breaks better and maybe avoid some voice sounds (not the strongest of course xD) made it less dense by removing a few notes here and there.
Did you just copied Oni and Muzu? They're the same on so much parts (the whole beggining is the same!) try to make the spread more balanced and call me back after it :P (so I do my 2nd part of the mod xD) removed some notes so its less dense than oni for a better contrast between the difficulties
Thanks for the feedback!

I'll edit this post when you've done muzu and oni.
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