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Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-06T22:51:04+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on September-21-14 at 11:14:46 PM

Artist: Kuribayashi Minami
Title: Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line
Source: クロノクルセイド
Tags: chrno crusade opening fycho wings kurono kuruseido chrono
BPM: 180
Filesize: 9025kb
Play Time: 04:10
Difficulties Available:

Fycho's Hard (3.43 stars, 605 notes)
Normal (1.95 stars, 340 notes)
Tsubasa (4.9 stars, 911 notes)

Download: Kuribayashi Minami - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal (Me)- Done (This hitsound Copier is Amazing)
Hard (Fycho)- Done
Insane (Me)- Done

I would too
I need the Farking Chestnuts!

Ty CDFA for bubble
Ty Raiku for rank

Kinshara found BG for me <3

Kibbleru inc.™

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guineaQ

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guineaQ 2014-06-09T16:59:46+00:00

I-I didn't throw a star because Fycho is doing hard diff for this b-baka!

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-10T02:29:50+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
I-I didn't throw a star because Fycho is doing hard diff for this b-baka!

fycho <3

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-06-10T21:06:21+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
guineaQ wrote:
I-I didn't throw a star because Fycho is doing hard diff for this b-baka!
fycho <3

#FychoFangirls

Neil Watts

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Neil Watts 2014-06-29T22:00:36+00:00

Hi !
"Random" mod

Kuribayashi Minami - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line
I think all diffs of this map needs a drum hitsound, like this one, to every upbeat.
Edit: Nevermind. The song has already a custom hitsound, but I haven't heard it, I was sure this sound came from the song. ._. (Too low volume?)

-Normal-
- 02:13:345 (4) - move this slider to the previous red tick
- 02:14:012 (1) - ^ and make it longer
- 02:29:928 - try this http://puu.sh/9PLuH/a9b5ad24f9.png
- 02:30:512 (2,3) - too near

-Fycho's Hard-
AR8 for a Hard diff ?
Your map looks more like a Hard+, or an Insane with all these jumps.
- 00:07:345 (2) - move it to the previous red tick?
- 01:17:678 (4) - move it to x292 y104 for more visibility
- 02:28:512 (1,2,3) - sadistic for a hard diff!
- 03:57:678 (4) - ^ try to move it ?
- 04:10:012 (1) - you have so much imagination!

-Insane-
- 02:03:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - hm, to avoid?
- 04:10:012 (1) - imaginatioooon

I can't really mod this insane diff, maybe because I haven't enough experience, but I think your jumps are often random, try to replace them with some known shapes (squares, triangles, circles, stars,...)

Please take the time to comment my mod if you can, I need to improve myself in modding. Thanks!

Good luck !

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Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-29T22:06:17+00:00

Neil Watts wrote:
Hi !
"Random" mod

Kuribayashi Minami - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line
I think all diffs of this map needs a drum hitsound, like this one, to every upbeat. i have one xD

-Normal-
- 02:13:345 (4) - move this slider to the previous red tick for these i'm not really mapping the vocals. listen to the drums and harmony line
- 02:14:012 (1) - ^ and make it longer
- 02:29:928 - try this http://puu.sh/9PLuH/a9b5ad24f9.png but then i'd be missing a strong sound
- 02:30:512 (2,3) - too near what? o-o its distance snapped fine

-Insane-
- 02:03:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - hm, to avoid? hm yeah i know its a bit hard to play but i think it fits the song and it works . besides, its an insane xD
- 04:10:012 (1) - imaginatioooon imaagginnattioonnn!
I can't really mod this insane diff, maybe because I haven't enough experience, but I think your jumps are often random, try to replace them with some known shapes (squares, triangles, circles, stars,...) hm i don't really like using any of those "known shapes" they're just too... boring to me. the jumps should play fine though because of the high approach rate

Please take the time to comment my mod if you can, I need to improve myself in modding. Thanks!

Good luck !

thank you for modding

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DeletedUser_3044645 2014-06-30T19:37:12+00:00

Offset +4 better for me

also just 1 thing cuz too lazy to look at everything

Normal, 00:21:516 - make this a 1/2 slider. 00:21:682 - this drum is too strong to be ignored

Edit : did a little IRC mod on insane

SPOILER

15:37 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3204193
15:37 No Dap: kds pls
15:38 No Dap: did you even check
15:38 No Dap: I really think +4 is better lol
15:40 Kibbleru: yeah
15:41 No Dap: also pointed 1 thing on normal
15:41 No Dap: too lazy to continue
15:42 No Dap: is this mp3 good?
15:43 Kibbleru: idunno?
15:43 No Dap: I can't tell but to me it kinda sounds scattered
15:43 Kibbleru: i don't think its bad at least
15:43 Kibbleru: well
15:44 Kibbleru: now i only have 13 circles and 303 sliders
15:44 No Dap: wow your normal is so good
15:45 Kibbleru: its just slider spam =w=
15:45 No Dap: tech me how to
15:45 No Dap: 14 circles and 302 slidrs
15:45 No Dap: or 13 303
15:45 Kibbleru: 13 303
15:47 Kibbleru: 02:28:849 - every circle is here
15:47 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/446346 Kuribayashi Minami - Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line [Insane]]
15:47 No Dap: 00:15:516 -  don't you think this gap is a bit awkward
15:47 No Dap: considering the distance here
15:48 Kibbleru: its 1/1 gap?
15:48 No Dap: yeah
15:48 No Dap: they are too close
15:48 Kibbleru: nope not rly o-o
15:48 No Dap: but I would just map it :3
15:49 Kibbleru: oh insane diff..
15:49 No Dap: baka
15:50 Kibbleru: yeah maybe bleh ill htink of something later
15:50 No Dap: but though
15:50 No Dap: wasn't Garven mapping easy for this?
15:50 No Dap: or was that rising hope
15:51 Kibbleru: rising hope
15:51 No Dap: oh ok
15:52 No Dap: 02:48:599 - this flow tho
15:53 Kibbleru: meh
15:53 Kibbleru: emphasis
15:53 No Dap: also
15:53 No Dap: 03:06:794 -  this part is wrong
15:53 No Dap: http://puu.sh/9R6EO/cb12837ce2.png
15:53 No Dap: should be 1/6 + 1/3
15:54 No Dap: 03:07:682 - also NC because SV change 
15:54 Kibbleru: k
15:55 No Dap: 03:46:682 - nc for easier anti jump read?
15:56 No Dap: 03:48:516 - you should map this drum too

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Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-30T19:43:04+00:00

yay even less circles.

No Dap wrote:
15:44 No Dap: wow your normal is so good

i can die in peace

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Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-06-30T20:29:29+00:00

lol m4m

hopefully this helps ;_;

General

Normal

00:16:012 (4) - this slider is weird because it doesn't really have any instrumental music to back it up like the previous ones.
00:18:678 (4) - same here; also you are mapping instruments at one instance and drums at another...that may be confusing
00:33:178 (2,3) - this sort of breaks flow
01:02:012 (1,2) - fix flow
01:08:512 (3,4) - ^
02:58:678 - consider ending spinner here
03:27:345 (1) - passive slider, ne?

Fycho's Hard

03:42:682 (2,1) - blanket 2 around 1's tail
03:57:182 (3,4) - this is confusing and breaks flow

Insane

00:09:849 (1) - fix flow
00:15:682 (1) - ^
03:43:349 (1) - ^
03:51:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looking over the map, some of your jumps don't make sense and don't fit the music o: Like over here, 2, 4, 5 shouldn't really be jumps imo.
04:09:349 - you can add some reverse sliders over here to fit the music

Ok, sorry I have to go! Sorry for shitty mod q.q

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-30T20:55:34+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
lol m4m

hopefully this helps ;_;

General

Normal

00:16:012 (4) - this slider is weird because it doesn't really have any instrumental music to back it up like the previous ones. drums o-o
00:18:678 (4) - same here; also you are mapping instruments at one instance and drums at another...that may be confusing yeah but the insturment is just a held note so what else should i map lol.
00:33:178 (2,3) - this sort of breaks flow they're kinda like. circular flow
01:02:012 (1,2) - fix flow
01:08:512 (3,4) - ^
02:58:678 - consider ending spinner here i want some more time for newbs to react
03:27:345 (1) - passive slider, ne? on purpose. gives a nice effect

Insane

00:09:849 (1) - fix flow same as normal
00:15:682 (1) - ^
03:43:349 (1) - ^
03:51:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looking over the map, some of your jumps don't make sense and don't fit the music o: Like over here, 2, 4, 5 shouldn't really be jumps imo. i kinda just like >_> spam jumps soo..
04:09:349 - you can add some reverse sliders over here to fit the music mm nah i may or may not change my mind tho

Ok, sorry I have to go! Sorry for shitty mod q.q

thx for mod

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-06-30T21:00:41+00:00

oops double post

Frostings

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Frostings 2014-07-01T00:14:22+00:00

[Insaneuuuuuuuuuuu]

OD -1 ... your map contains streams that are waaaay too hard

Your guitar solo is a huuuuuge spike in difficulty, maybe try to make it less intensive

00:10:516 (2,1) - nice flow. Maybe either move (2) to the right to line it up, or unstack (1) and move it to the left
00:15:182 (6,1) - swap NC (like this 00:17:849 (1,3) - )
00:16:349 (3,1) - blankets
00:27:682 (2) - why not put this on the path of (1) so that it flows (square pattern isn't even noticeable in testplay because your AR is so high)
00:46:682 (2) - NC consistency with 01:53:349 (1) -
01:11:182 (6,1) - NC swap
02:04:682 (1,2) - just a suggestion, the back-and-forth thing is ok, but maybe make these different for emphasis, otherwise they get muddled with the rest of the combo
02:17:016 (2) - move down a little to flow with (1) slider
02:20:682 (1,2) - better blanket (maybe move (2) one or two grids right)
02:39:016 (4) - move left for flow with (3) slider
02:44:516 - this section i don't know
03:23:682 (3,5) - this overlap actually looks bad, i suggest move (5) to the right so they're not touching... it doesn't ruin the flow or change the playing at all
03:25:349 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - i think this stream starts too early. Maybe delete (4)
03:42:682 (2,1) - i think it'll look better if you blanket, but your choice
04:04:682 (1,4) - better blanket o3o
04:10:016 (1) - wow jonathangel reported

[Hardddd o3o]

02:42:474 (4) - uh, i think this is unsnapped

01:17:016 (2) - blanket this? doesn't ruin flow at all (~ -7 rotation from center)
01:49:516 (2) - maybe normal clap here
03:27:349 (1,2) - not gonna lie, this caught me off guard. maybe move (1) closer to (2) so that they overlap, in order to distinguish the rhythm better (like this 03:48:682 (1,1) - )

[Normallllll]

slidertick rate 1? It's over 1000 combo for a normal.......

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Kibbleru 2014-07-01T18:22:45+00:00

Frostings wrote:
[Insaneuuuuuuuuuuu]

OD -1 ... your map contains streams that are waaaay too hard od 7.5

Your guitar solo is a huuuuuge spike in difficulty, maybe try to make it less intensive it gets easier imo owo but idk

00:10:516 (2,1) - nice flow. Maybe either move (2) to the right to line it up, or unstack (1) and move it to the left no change
00:15:182 (6,1) - swap NC (like this 00:17:849 (1,3) - )
00:16:349 (3,1) - blankets
00:27:682 (2) - why not put this on the path of (1) so that it flows (square pattern isn't even noticeable in testplay because your AR is so high) idk this is like my style or something so didnt change any of these :/
00:46:682 (2) - NC consistency with 01:53:349 (1) - deleted the latter NC
01:11:182 (6,1) - NC swap
02:04:682 (1,2) - just a suggestion, the back-and-forth thing is ok, but maybe make these different for emphasis, otherwise they get muddled with the rest of the combo nice
02:17:016 (2) - move down a little to flow with (1) slider
02:20:682 (1,2) - better blanket (maybe move (2) one or two grids right)
02:39:016 (4) - move left for flow with (3) slider
02:44:516 - this section i don't know
03:23:682 (3,5) - this overlap actually looks bad, i suggest move (5) to the right so they're not touching... it doesn't ruin the flow or change the playing at alli like it though. adjusted it a bit hopefully looks a bit better now?
03:25:349 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - i think this stream starts too early. Maybe delete (4) i don't think so owo
03:42:682 (2,1) - i think it'll look better if you blanket, but your choice nah intended
04:04:682 (1,4) - better blanket o3o
04:10:016 (1) - wow jonathangel reported lol

[Normallllll]

slidertick rate 1? It's over 1000 combo for a normal....... i'd like to keep int consistent for now... if a bat mentions, ill change

No comment = fixed

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Seijiro 2014-07-05T02:00:13+00:00

Alright, here's your mod requested trough #modreqs

[Insane]

00:46:099 (2) - Maybe this slider should be converted into a stream....
01:10:016 (1) - This isn't stacked on 01:08:849 (1) . Is it intentional?
03:55:016 (5,1) - These aren't stacked properly
04:10:016 (1) - You're a genius, man

[Fycho's Hard]

01:13:182 (2) and 01:14:016 (1) aren't stacked properly
01:13:349 (3) and 01:14:682 (2) Same ^
01:17:016 (2) and 01:17:682 (4) Same ^
02:13:016 (2) and 02:14:016 (1) Same ^
02:24:349 (4) and 02:25:016 (2) Same ^
02:36:349 (3) and 02:37:182 (3) Same ^
03:23:682 (2) and 03:24:349 (4) Same ^
04:10:016 (1) - Tell me the truth: you did on purpose this awesomeness

[Normal]

02:31:349 (3,4) - Stack them properly
03:25:349 (4,1) - Same ^ (but they are far in the timeline, maybe that 0.01 difference doesn't matter at all)
04:10:016 (1) - Nuoooo, you ruined the awesomeness' chain xD (I don't really care: it was just a personal note xD)

I think I should explain all of those "stacks" xD
If all of those notes were to be more distant, both in timeline and playfield, I wouldn't bother pointing them out, but since it looks like you guys tried to put those notes on the same spot a wrote down everything it was subjected to this case.
Final note: I wonder why the hell not a single BAT it's around here...
Here, take one of my star

: this song MUST be ranked

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Kibbleru 2014-07-05T05:24:02+00:00

[-MrSergio-] wrote:
Alright, here's your mod requested trough #modreqs

[Insane]

00:46:099 (2) - Maybe this slider should be converted into a stream....
01:10:016 (1) - This isn't stacked on 01:08:849 (1) . Is it intentional?
03:55:016 (5,1) - These aren't stacked properly
04:10:016 (1) - You're a genius, man

[Fycho's Hard]

01:13:182 (2) and 01:14:016 (1) aren't stacked properly
01:13:349 (3) and 01:14:682 (2) Same ^
01:17:016 (2) and 01:17:682 (4) Same ^
02:13:016 (2) and 02:14:016 (1) Same ^
02:24:349 (4) and 02:25:016 (2) Same ^
02:36:349 (3) and 02:37:182 (3) Same ^
03:23:682 (2) and 03:24:349 (4) Same ^
04:10:016 (1) - Tell me the truth: you did on purpose this awesomeness i think he followed me up on dis slider art stuff

[Normal]

02:31:349 (3,4) - Stack them properly
03:25:349 (4,1) - Same ^ (but they are far in the timeline, maybe that 0.01 difference doesn't matter at all)
04:10:016 (1) - Nuoooo, you ruined the awesomeness' chain xD (I don't really care: it was just a personal note xD) i tried to do something here x_x but i couldn't with this low ass SV and CS BUT if you do manage to find a nice shape or something please tell me and i'll use it!

I think I should explain all of those "stacks" xD bleh all these stacking errors are caused by an editor bug which unstacked them x.x it wouldn't be noticeable in game though, however due to stack leniency. thanks for the mod and star! but no changes sry
If all of those notes were to be more distant, both in timeline and playfield, I wouldn't bother pointing them out, but since it looks like you guys tried to put those notes on the same spot a wrote down everything it was subjected to this case.
Final note: I wonder why the hell not a single BAT it's around here...
Here, take one of my star : this song MUST be ranked

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[-Sophie-]_old 2014-07-05T05:27:42+00:00

[General]
A lot of your sliders are "odd"
[Normal]
00:03:349 (1) - Sound odd
00:08:682 (1) - Make this shorter
00:19:349 (1) - ^
00:24:682 (1) - ^
00:56:682 - Spinner sounds off
01:14:682 (3) - Sounds off leading to the note #4
02:06:016 (1,2) - Overlapping
02:32:182 (5) - Dosen't lead well into 02:32:682 (1)
02:55:849 - Goes into the spinner
03:09:849 - Remove note here
03:18:682 (2) - Too long
03:24:849 (3) - Maybe just 2 or 1 note would be fine instead of a slider
03:31:516 (3) - Reverse arrow is off beat
03:52:849 (3) - Overlapping
04:04:016 (4) - I don't know what to do with this, but it sounds off
[Fycho's Hard]
02:42:696 - Object end not snapped ~AIMod
00:06:016 - Normal Slider is fine +1 Note
04:10:016 (1) - u ok?
[Insane]
00:06:016 - Ends too early
00:07:349 (1) - Confused on if this should be here?
Enjoy!

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Kibbleru 2014-07-05T05:42:24+00:00

[-Sophie-] wrote:
[General]
A lot of your sliders are "odd" odd owo? hmm maybe xP
[Normal]
00:03:349 (1) - Sound odd sounds fine to me o-o
00:08:682 (1) - Make this shorter for these, i wanted to get the guitar or piano sound
00:19:349 (1) - ^
00:24:682 (1) - ^
00:56:682 - Spinner sounds off huh? why? i think it fits as its a gradual increase in intensity
01:14:682 (3) - Sounds off leading to the note #4 seems fine to me o-o
02:06:016 (1,2) - Overlapping these overlaps are fine, they're readable and they look nice c:
02:32:182 (5) - Dosen't lead well into 02:32:682 (1) its like. ah idk a rly tight circular flow thing
02:55:849 - Goes into the spinner hmm ill think about this a bit for now it seems fine though since at the start of the slider the spinner isn't there.. i dont think
03:09:849 - Remove note here it's quite strong to be removed
03:18:682 (2) - Too long
03:24:849 (3) - Maybe just 2 or 1 note would be fine instead of a slider a slider works tho x.x
03:31:516 (3) - Reverse arrow is off beat o-o its on a white tick and its at the start of the descending piano part or w/e
03:52:849 (3) - Overlapping
04:04:016 (4) - I don't know what to do with this, but it sounds off sounds fine to me x_x

[Insane]
00:06:016 - Ends too early yeah both these cases play on a piano thing
00:07:349 (1) - Confused on if this should be here?
Enjoy!

@Fycho, i fixed the unsnapped slider for u. i think it may have been my fk up when messing around with the offset xP

tyvm for mod!

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Gaia 2014-07-05T21:05:48+00:00

Because senpai noticed me in his team queue and in my queue

[Normal]
tick rate 1? I just notice a bunch of slider ticks on those long ones lol.
00:10:849 (4) - curve to left instead of right?
00:19:349 (1) - curve up instead?
02:45:349 (4,1) - curve these 2 more?

QQ senpai's map too good no defects

[Fycho's Hard]
00:12:516 (3) - too short imo, or add something following up to this
00:22:682 (3) - stack?
02:02:516 (3) - weird jump
02:24:516 (1) - Ctrl + G
02:28:516 (1,2,3) - i'd spread out more
02:36:349 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - really hard to follow
02:53:682 (4,1) - add another note in between?
03:17:682 (3) - ctrl + g?
03:21:682 (4) - ^
03:34:682 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:09:849 (1) - unnecessary overlap
00:15:682 (3) - ctrl + g
00:36:682 (1,2,3,4) - spread them to have more of a shape?
01:40:849 (1,2,3,1,2) - have same time interval yet different distances (why not make them all jumps lol.)
01:43:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a better looking shape?
02:01:016 (2,2,2) - aren't stacked properly
02:09:516 (5,7) - Ctrl + G
02:35:849 (2) - blanket?
02:41:349 (2) - ^
02:47:182 (1) - ^
03:07:682 (1,2) - looks off with the overlap
03:19:849 (3) - stack on 6? idk your shapes are weird to me lol
03:22:849 (6,7) - wider apart? (keeping distance constant)
03:35:682 (3) - (84, 272) to be more triangluar?
04:10:016 (1) - i slider broke on this so many times lol. no problem but just saying :p
Much jump so excite wow

I-I'll allow you to tell me the next time you want to ~~spam~~ msg my mom.. But don't get the wrong idea!! B-baka
I-it's not like I like your map or anything!! I-it's not like your jumps are fun or something

Hmph!
I-I didn't get this star for just for you!! I-I just had too much!!
J-just take it, gosh!

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Kibbleru 2014-07-06T01:12:27+00:00

Gaia wrote:
Because senpai noticed me in his team queue and in my queue

[Normal]
tick rate 1? I just notice a bunch of slider ticks on those long ones lol.
00:10:849 (4) - curve to left instead of right? im not really a big fan of curcing something the same way twice. looks better to me if i cuve it the opposite way of the previous one. it doesn't flow badly anyways so i dont see a problem
00:19:349 (1) - curve up instead? ^
02:45:349 (4,1) - curve these 2 more? hmm they seem fine as it is o-o

QQ senpai's map too good no defects ty xD

[Insane]
Hmm o-o well i guess my shapes are quite weird but i quite like the overlaps and shapes. Triangles and squares etc are just so boring imo. random polygon jumps are nice . also about the DS, it doesn't really have to be perfectly DS'ed out. you should decide distance by how it play's/ feels rather than looking at the numbers. if its close enough the it should play well. I understand some of ur ctrl g is for better flow but i want to break flow for emphasis so they're intended :X

00:09:849 (1) - unnecessary overlap
00:15:682 (3) - ctrl + g
00:36:682 (1,2,3,4) - spread them to have more of a shape?
01:40:849 (1,2,3,1,2) - have same time interval yet different distances (why not make them all jumps lol.)
01:43:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a better looking shape?
02:01:016 (2,2,2) - aren't stacked properly
02:09:516 (5,7) - Ctrl + G mmm i changed the shape SLIGHTLY idk lol
02:35:849 (2) - blanket?
02:41:349 (2) - ^
02:47:182 (1) - ^ these do blanket tho owo
03:07:682 (1,2) - looks off with the overlap
03:19:849 (3) - stack on 6? idk your shapes are weird to me lol
03:22:849 (6,7) - wider apart? (keeping distance constant)
03:35:682 (3) - (84, 272) to be more triangluar?
04:10:016 (1) - i slider broke on this so many times lol. no problem but just saying :p lol sorry x.x i like the shape tho ;w;
Much jump so excite wow

but yeah sry not many changes changes ;w

im picky as firetruck though so don't be discouraged lol.

I-I'll allow you to tell me the next time you want to ~~spam~~ msg my mom.. But don't get the wrong idea!! B-baka
I-it's not like I like your map or anything!! I-it's not like your jumps are fun or something Hmph!
I-I didn't get this star for just for you!! I-I just had too much!!
J-just take it, gosh!
so tsundere >w<
kawaii mutual pls

tyvm for mod!

Venellys

154 posts

Joined March 2013

Venellys 2014-07-06T12:15:40+00:00

Hi, from V&V Modding queue~

[Normal]

00:15:182 (3) - make this slider same as 00:14:016 (1) - for sym. its a bit uncomfortable.
00:44:182 (2,3) - make (2) blanket (3)
00:45:349 (4,1) - is this a jump? what distance you use here?
00:58:516 - remove this inherit point, you dont use it. but there is more of them in other parts, find it yourself.
02:31:349 (3,4) - a little unstacked, restack.

[Fycho's Hard]

00:21:849 (1,3) - stack?
00:52:682 (1,4) - ^, it looks a bad overlap to me.
00:58:516 - same in normal diff
02:18:682 (4,5) - make (5) smooth like (4) for sym.

Insane is perfect, sorry if my mod not help much, but nice song! ^^

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Kibbleru 2014-07-06T17:08:43+00:00

VeeLaHee104 wrote:
Hi, from V&V Modding queue~

[Normal]
00:15:182 (3) - make this slider same as 00:14:016 (1) - for sym. its a bit uncomfortable. i like this sry
00:44:182 (2,3) - make (2) blanket (3) nah
00:45:349 (4,1) - is this a jump? what distance you use here? whoops LOL nice catch can't believe nobody else realized that xD
00:58:516 - remove this inherit point, you dont use it. but there is more of them in other parts, find it yourself. ahh was lazy alright removed all the others
02:31:349 (3,4) - a little unstacked, restack. this is caused by an editor bug, would be unnoticeable in game though, however since stack leniency

Insane is perfect, sorry if my mod not help much, but nice song! ^^

tyvm for mod!

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2014-07-07T06:20:15+00:00

Add fycho, chrno crusade, and kurono kuruseido to tags pls

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,486 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-07-07T09:23:38+00:00

Neil Watts wrote:
Hi !
"Random" mod

-Fycho's Hard-
AR8 for a Hard diff ?
Your map looks more like a Hard+, or an Insane with all these jumps.
- 00:07:345 (2) - move it to the previous red tick? I follow piano
- 01:17:678 (4) - move it to x292 y104 for more visibility fine when playing
- 02:28:512 (1,2,3) - sadistic for a hard diff! keep it, fine paying too
- 03:57:678 (4) - ^ try to move it ? no, I set it intentionally
- 04:10:012 (1) - you have so much imagination!

Kinshara wrote:
lol m4m

Fycho's Hard

03:42:682 (2,1) - blanket 2 around 1's tailfixed
03:57:182 (3,4) - this is confusing and breaks flow flow is fine

Frostings wrote:
[Hardddd o3o]

02:42:474 (4) - uh, i think this is unsnapped fixed....
01:17:016 (2) - blanket this? doesn't ruin flow at all (~ -7 rotation from center) blanket and flow both fine, dont need to change
01:49:516 (2) - maybe normal clap here added
03:27:349 (1,2) - not gonna lie, this caught me off guard. maybe move (1) closer to (2) so that they overlap, in order to distinguish the rhythm better (like this 03:48:682 (1,1) - )Fine play imo
]

@[-MrSergio-], I am not going to fix that stacks, they are all fine when playing, and some unstack is intentionally set.

[-Sophie-] wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
02:42:696 - Object end not snapped ~AIMod fixed
00:06:016 - Normal Slider is fine +1 Notefine
04:10:016 (1) - u ok? why not ok
]

@Gaia,VeeLaHee104, too lazy to reply each stuff, no changed, for reasons please pm me.

KSHR is not moe, he is a gay

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455,215,227182,6,0,P|466:141|472:47,1,150,12|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,34,227682,2,0,L|315:38,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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324,118,228349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,118,228516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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140,136,229516,1,8,0:1:0:0:
55,117,229682,1,8,0:1:0:0:
31,197,229849,6,0,L|18:364,1,150,12|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
109,299,230349,1,10,0:0:0:0:
188,324,230516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,285,230682,2,0,P|265:323|275:365,1,75,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
422,343,231016,2,0,P|385:334|349:324,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,216,231349,6,0,P|270:198|198:212,1,150,10|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,184,231849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,215,232016,2,0,L|51:128,1,75,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
112,84,232349,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,109,232516,6,0,P|241:116|349:113,1,150,4|10,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
416,59,233016,1,10,0:0:0:0:
477,107,233182,1,2,0:0:0:0:
474,192,233349,2,0,L|452:272,1,75,10|10,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
382,334,233682,2,0,L|363:251,1,75,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,170,234016,6,0,P|323:179|244:157,1,150,10|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,64,234516,2,0,L|296:72,1,75,0|10,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
150,141,234849,2,0,L|151:223,1,75,8|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,184,235182,6,0,P|250:288|235:360,1,150,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
158,371,235682,2,0,P|122:350|98:319,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,234,236016,2,0,L|154:229,1,75,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
235,204,236349,2,0,L|227:281,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,227,236682,6,0,L|323:147,1,75,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,61,237016,1,10,0:0:0:0:
208,61,237182,2,0,P|153:63|92:136,1,150,12|12,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
208,61,237682,1,8,0:0:0:0:
23,20,237849,6,0,L|19:174,1,150,12|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
77,235,238349,1,10,0:0:0:0:
150,186,238516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,193,238682,2,0,L|290:193,3,37.5,8|0|8|0,0:1|0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,219,239016,2,0,L|353:219,3,37.5,0|10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,205,239349,6,0,P|420:192|493:267,1,150,12|10,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
415,354,239849,2,0,P|412:303|412:275,1,75,0|10,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
329,313,240182,2,0,P|278:316|250:316,1,75,8|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,352,240516,6,0,P|133:302|137:199,1,150,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
176,157,241016,1,10,0:0:0:0:
153,77,241182,2,0,P|233:88|303:94,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
380,51,241682,2,0,L|390:141,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,212,242016,6,0,B|460:200|460:200|508:173,1,150,10|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,93,242516,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,34,242682,2,0,L|352:33,2,50,8|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,112,243016,2,0,L|269:111,2,50,8|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,50,243349,6,0,P|167:37|106:44,2,112.5,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,21,244016,2,0,P|367:11|418:26,2,112.5,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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220,152,245682,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-07-07T21:11:25+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
Add fycho, chrno crusade, and kurono kuruseido to tags pls

whoops k. uhh idk about last one, where is that from?

@ fycho: 1234th p ost

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Kinshara 2014-07-07T22:33:01+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
Kinshara wrote:
Add fycho, chrno crusade, and kurono kuruseido to tags pls
whoops k. uhh idk about last one, where is that from?

@ fycho: 1234th p ost

kurono kuruseido is romaji for chrno crusade (also add chrono because i saw it spelled like that somewhere)

why no kds q.q

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Kibbleru 2014-07-08T06:38:29+00:00

i wish they would let me put "chestnuts" into the tags

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Julie 2014-07-09T20:18:50+00:00

From mod queue~

[Normal]

<= whoops~ too hard for me what how to not miss QAQ
00:10:016 (3) - sightly better blanket >,<
00:26:016 (3) - ^
00:45:849 (1) - ^ end point at x : 271 y : 279
01:05:849 (3) - ^
02:16:682 (1) - ^ (if you were actually trying to blanket it)
02:18:682 (4) - ^
02:33:349 (2) - ^
02:48:016 (4) - ^
03:25:349 (4) - ^
04:00:516 (3) - ^

[Fycho's Hard]
02:55:682 (2) - 1/6
02:42:460 (4) - object not snap

[Insane]
00:21:016 (2) - the end of slider should be having the same hitsound as 00:21:516 (4)
00:21:349 (3) - remove whistle
00:21:682 (5) - add whistle
00:24:016 (1,2) - add claps? so is a bit different from 00:23:682 (2)
00:28:349 (5) - add whistle
00:29:682 (4) - ^
01:33:016 (3) - add finish or whistle since you added whistle on the head of 01:34:016 (1)
01:46:682 - it kinda feel empty >,<
02:55:766 (3,4,5) - sorry but this is kinda 1/6 D:...since the guitar go supah fast here
a note should be here 02:55:738 , 02:55:794 , 02:55:849 and 02:55:905 .
04:10:016 (1) - woah nice pattern, even if is not challenging on insane..I DON'T MIND

!!! love ittt

*FLY AWAYYY*~~ bye bye and gl

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Kibbleru 2014-07-09T21:00:22+00:00

Julie wrote:
From mod queue~

[Normal]
<= whoops~ too hard for me what how to not miss QAQ this was a stack.
00:10:016 (3) - sightly better blanket >,< blahh fixed some and left some
00:26:016 (3) - ^
00:45:849 (1) - ^ end point at x : 271 y : 279
01:05:849 (3) - ^
02:16:682 (1) - ^ (if you were actually trying to blanket it)
02:18:682 (4) - ^
02:33:349 (2) - ^
02:48:016 (4) - ^
03:25:349 (4) - ^
04:00:516 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:21:016 (2) - the end of slider should be having the same hitsound as 00:21:516 (4) umm lol i kinda forgot why i did this but i think it sounds cool as it is o-o
00:21:349 (3) - remove whistle
00:21:682 (5) - add whistle
00:24:016 (1,2) - add claps? so is a bit different from 00:23:682 (2) oh nice catch
00:28:349 (5) - add whistle sorry these don't follow my whistle pattern
00:29:682 (4) - ^
01:33:016 (3) - add finish or whistle since you added whistle on the head of 01:34:016 (1)
01:46:682 - it kinda feel empty >,< hmm i thought about fixing this b4. but okay fixed now!
02:55:766 (3,4,5) - sorry but this is kinda 1/6 D:...since the guitar go supah fast here ooh nice catch owo, lol ppl are gunna hate this 1/6 pattern
a note should be here 02:55:738 , 02:55:794 , 02:55:849 and 02:55:905 .
04:10:016 (1) - woah nice pattern, even if is not challenging on insane..I DON'T MIND !!! love ittt ty :3

*FLY AWAYYY*~~ bye bye and gl

thank you for the mod!

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Mystyk 2014-07-11T20:22:16+00:00

why doesn't this have chrno crusade BG????

(or do I just not recognize the character?)

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Kibbleru 2014-07-11T20:53:13+00:00

Mystyk wrote:
why doesn't this have chrno crusade BG???? (or do I just not recognize the character?)

cuz all of them suck lol.

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Kinshara 2014-07-12T05:20:21+00:00

Mystyk wrote:
why doesn't this have chrno crusade BG???? (or do I just not recognize the character?)

Kibbleru is anal about the nun hats.

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Kibbleru 2014-07-12T22:38:09+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
Mystyk wrote:
why doesn't this have chrno crusade BG???? (or do I just not recognize the character?)
Kibbleru is anal about the nun hats.

LOL

i don't like them okay ;w;

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Kinshara 2014-07-13T03:23:33+00:00

Okay, so I started not liking this bg, so I found a new one.

open for better bg

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Kibbleru 2014-07-13T21:27:11+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
Okay, so I started not liking this bg, so I found a new one.

open for better bg

perfect! now just Photoshop some muscular arms on it!

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Rirakusu 2014-07-17T07:47:39+00:00

Oh yeah...from my queue. Sorry to keep you waiting - I'm quite busy these days TT

Nice map. I don't see much for changing and editing here. Blue text = my opinions. Purple text = I'm not sure.

First of all...
02:43:182 I think this is suitable for a Kiai burst?

Normal

Okay I have to say that I don't like the idea of changing SVs in a Normal diff, but it is okay here...
1. 00:11:349 (1) - This spinner is rather short...passable but I think a slider is better.
2. 02:56:682 (1) - Another one...but this fits so well.
3. 03:52:849 (3,1,2) - Tons of overlaps here...two overlaps is okay but three?

Fycho's Hard

1. 00:13:349 (1,2) - About this, I recommend you to map all the violin here (yeah just reverse the slider one more), and put these two sliders closer so that it isn't a quick jump. Yep I'm not sure whether the violin is there or not...perhaps my ears are kidding me?
2. 04:09:349 (1,2) - Just like the above...still unsure.

Maybe that's all my modding skills can bring...I need your suggestion

P/s: Please go back to my queue (well it's down there at page...erm...3 or 4 I think because of inactivity) to edit your request post, saying that this request is done! Thanks!

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Kibbleru 2014-07-17T16:21:03+00:00

jinhang_ang wrote:
Oh yeah...from my queue. Sorry to keep you waiting - I'm quite busy these days TT

Nice map. I don't see much for changing and editing here. Blue text = my opinions. Purple text = I'm not sure.

First of all...
02:43:182 I think this is suitable for a Kiai burst? i will consider

Normal
Okay I have to say that I don't like the idea of changing SVs in a Normal diff, but it is okay here...
1. 00:11:349 (1) - This spinner is rather short...passable but I think a slider is better. These spinners are long enough.
2. 02:56:682 (1) - Another one...but this fits so well.
3. 03:52:849 (3,1,2) - Tons of overlaps here...two overlaps is okay but three? its fine, perfectly readable

Maybe that's all my modding skills can bring...I need your suggestion

P/s: Please go back to my queue (well it's down there at page...erm...3 or 4 I think because of inactivity) to edit your request post, saying that this request is done! Thanks!

tyvm for mod!

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Mystyk 2014-07-21T21:22:48+00:00

Hi! Mod from my queue, sorry to make you wait so much >.<

[General]
I would try to make the orange color a little lighter, because the reverse arrow has a white color like this, and in the kiai, when the sliders flash, the sliderbody will also become lighter, so it might be a little difficult to see the reverse arrow properly.
maybe this would work

Combo3 : 248,223,139

[Normal]
00:14:016 (1) - add a finish maybe to the slider beginning? that beat is big so it would be good if it was emphasized
00:24:682 (1) - same ^
01:08:516 (3,4) - this might be confusing, because the end of both sliders are too close, try this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842180
01:11:849 (4,1) - this might be confusing too because of the overlap, maybe try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842192
01:55:849 (2,3) - same here ^ - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842200
01:58:682 (2,3) - ^ maybe this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842204
02:13:349 (4,1) - same ^
02:55:182 (3) - I would place this a little up because both the slider beginning and slider end are too close to 02:54:516 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842215
03:09:849 (4,1) - same ^
03:23:516 (1,2) - ^
03:32:682 (1,2) - ^....etc. I think you should try to look for similar things (if you agree

)

This is a nice diff in my opinion, but it would be nice if you tried to make it easier to read, because there is no Easy difficulty in the mapset, and it's actually not too much work in my opinion.
Also, I wouldn't use slider velocity change on the easiest difficulty of the map, even though it fits, but beginners are not used to things like this.

[Fycho's Hard]
00:05:682 - add hit circle, it felt really empty while playing
00:14:016 (1) - same as on easy, add finish to the beginning of the slider to emphasize the big beat
00:24:682 (1) - same as above ^
00:46:349 (1) - same ^
00:51:849 (2,1) - small thing but you could make this look nicer (because of the overlap and the upcoming distance change) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842306
01:53:016 (1) - add finish because of the big beat
02:01:849 (1) - same ^ I can even hear it in the music
02:14:516 (2,1) - small thing but I personally don't like how this looks, try to stack them properly - http://puu.sh/aladb/d7d634e592.jpg
02:31:516 (2,4) - add finish to both slider (the beginning) because of the big beat
02:48:849 (2) - I think this would be better because starting the slider on the white tick sounds better - http://puu.sh/alaxt/056b45852d.jpg (also I wonder why you used 3 anchor points for a straight slider xD)
03:24:516 (1) - add finish again because of the big beat

Check AiMod because it says there is an unsnapped object end. Also AR7 might be better for the difficulty spread, since jumping from 4 to 8 is quite a lot in my opinion.

[Insane]
00:14:016 (1) - as mentioned on the previous difficulties, add finish
00:24:682 (1) - ^
01:42:016 (1) - ^
02:36:349 (1,2) - small thing but this would look nicer imo - http://puu.sh/alg1u/75af02646b.jpg
03:07:682 (1,2) - similar suggestion to the previous just to make it look nicer (and at least the sliderend won't be hidden) - http://puu.sh/algo6/32fa6162ad.jpg
03:24:516 (7) - add finish because the song also has this kind of finish sound

Tbh AR9 felt a bit fast to me, but it's just my opinion.

Nice mapset, so I couldn't really point out too many things, good luck! :3

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Kibbleru 2014-07-21T22:54:15+00:00

Mystyk wrote:
Hi! Mod from my queue, sorry to make you wait so much >.<

[General]
I would try to make the orange color a little lighter, because the reverse arrow has a white color like this, and in the kiai, when the sliders flash, the sliderbody will also become lighter, so it might be a little difficult to see the reverse arrow properly.
maybe this would work ok fix
Combo3 : 248,223,139
[Normal]
00:14:016 (1) - add a finish maybe to the slider beginning? that beat is big so it would be good if it was emphasized lol whoops i can't believe i missed these finishes xP fixed both
00:24:682 (1) - same ^
01:08:516 (3,4) - this might be confusing, because the end of both sliders are too close, try this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842180 hmm imo, these overlaps are fine x_x i like how they look and it doesn't cover the slider head which is the important part for readability so they should be completely fine to read, no change for any of these, sry
01:11:849 (4,1) - this might be confusing too because of the overlap, maybe try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842192
01:55:849 (2,3) - same here ^ - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842200
01:58:682 (2,3) - ^ maybe this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842204
02:13:349 (4,1) - same ^
02:55:182 (3) - I would place this a little up because both the slider beginning and slider end are too close to 02:54:516 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842215
03:09:849 (4,1) - same ^
03:23:516 (1,2) - ^
03:32:682 (1,2) - ^....etc. I think you should try to look for similar things (if you agree )

This is a nice diff in my opinion, but it would be nice if you tried to make it easier to read, because there is no Easy difficulty in the mapset, and it's actually not too much work in my opinion.
Also, I wouldn't use slider velocity change on the easiest difficulty of the map, even though it fits, but beginners are not used to things like this. ill keep that in mind

[Insane]
00:14:016 (1) - as mentioned on the previous difficulties, add finish yeah haha done
00:24:682 (1) - ^
01:42:016 (1) - ^
02:36:349 (1,2) - small thing but this would look nicer imo - http://puu.sh/alg1u/75af02646b.jpg hmm ok
03:07:682 (1,2) - similar suggestion to the previous just to make it look nicer (and at least the sliderend won't be hidden) - http://puu.sh/algo6/32fa6162ad.jpg i actually like this pattern alot idk why xP so no change ;w;
03:24:516 (7) - add finish because the song also has this kind of finish sound yeah haha whoops q:

Tbh AR9 felt a bit fast to me, but it's just my opinion. ill keep that in mind too

Nice mapset, so I couldn't really point out too many things, good luck! :3

tyvm for the mod!

changed combo colour for fycho's diff too btw

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Fycho 2014-07-30T01:13:45+00:00

@Julie, all fixed.
@jinhang_ang, that's not violin, and I prefer 1/3 slider there to make it easier to hit.

Mystyk wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
00:05:682 - add hit circle, it felt really empty while playing I like the feeling of blank, this is intentional
00:14:016 (1) - same as on easy, add finish to the beginning of the slider to emphasize the big beat
00:24:682 (1) - same as above ^
00:46:349 (1) - same ^
00:51:849 (2,1) - small thing but you could make this look nicer (because of the overlap and the upcoming distance change) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1842306 I like the half-stack, maybe your ds is a bit big?
01:53:016 (1) - add finish because of the big beat
02:01:849 (1) - same ^ I can even hear it in the music
02:14:516 (2,1) - small thing but I personally don't like how this looks, try to stack them properly - http://puu.sh/aladb/d7d634e592.jpg same^
02:31:516 (2,4) - add finish to both slider (the beginning) because of the big beat
02:48:849 (2) - I think this would be better because starting the slider on the white tick sounds better - http://puu.sh/alaxt/056b45852d.jpg (also I wonder why you used 3 anchor points for a straight slider xD) I mapped the guiter and this is 1/2 reverse, so I think it's good to play
03:24:516 (1) - add finish again because of the big beat

Check AiMod because it says there is an unsnapped object end. Also AR7 might be better for the difficulty spread, since jumping from 4 to 8 is quite a lot in my opinion.

no comment = fixed

Thank you for modding.

SPOILER

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Title:Tsubasa wa Pleasure Line
TitleUnicode:翼はPleasure Line
Artist:Kuribayashi Minami
ArtistUnicode:栗林みな実
Creator:Kibbleru
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:クロノクルセイド
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178,352,240516,6,0,P|133:302|137:199,1,150,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
176,157,241016,1,10,0:0:0:0:
153,77,241182,2,0,P|233:88|303:94,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
380,51,241682,2,0,L|390:141,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,212,242016,6,0,B|460:200|460:200|508:173,1,150,10|10,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,93,242516,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-07-30T19:10:30+00:00

updated

how 2 rank maps

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Kibbleru 2014-09-01T02:53:57+00:00

lmao rip it was graved

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Shohei Ohtani 2014-09-05T04:43:51+00:00

lmao rip

Insane:
00:03:349 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - tbh when people tell me that I need to lower my SV or something I usually tell them to go sit on their face or something but uh the current SV feels WAY too fast here.
00:28:682 (1) - Would be cool if this has a curve to it like (2) does
00:56:682 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - tbh it would be cool if this had like an actual pattern
01:43:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I've been lax about the jumps but these are just a little too confusing for me
02:43:182 (1) - Remove NC
02:51:432 (2,3,4) - it's confusing because you're starting on a blue tick
02:55:516 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is too complex to play normally.

Hard:
00:11:182 (1,2,3) - This rhythm isn't solid enough for me to where i feel comfortable to play it. Possibly make it a long slider or something
03:27:349 (1,2) - Not feeling this tbh, the slider just sounds off

Normal:
00:19:349 (1) - Add a hitsound at the end of this so it doesn't seem so off
As a reference, even though I don't personally agree, many feel that the lowest diff of a map should not have stacks. Keep that in mind

03:52:849 (3,1,2) - Stuff like this can get cluttered easily

Starring this mapset, but there's a few issues that should be given some time before it's bibble bubble time

. At least for me, and I'm a hard-ass when it comes to bubbles.

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Kibbleru 2014-09-05T20:38:45+00:00

CDFA wrote:
lmao rip

Insane:
00:03:349 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - tbh when people tell me that I need to lower my SV or something I usually tell them to go sit on their face or something but uh the current SV feels WAY too fast here. k i lowered it to 0.65
00:28:682 (1) - Would be cool if this has a curve to it like (2) does k
00:56:682 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - tbh it would be cool if this had like an actual pattern err i kinda tried idk what to do tho lol
01:43:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I've been lax about the jumps but these are just a little too confusing for me i unstacked the 2 middle circles hopefully it helps?
02:43:182 (1) - Remove NC removed it from previous circle instead
02:51:432 (2,3,4) - it's confusing because you're starting on a blue tick now that i listened to it closely, i just deleted the blue tick circle q:
02:55:516 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is too complex to play normally. hmm i just made one reversed slider, but can't rly do much than that since this is 1/6

Normal:
00:19:349 (1) - Add a hitsound at the end of this so it doesn't seem so off added whistle
As a reference, even though I don't personally agree, many feel that the lowest diff of a map should not have stacks. Keep that in mind noted
03:52:849 (3,1,2) - Stuff like this can get cluttered easily k spaced it out a bit better

Starring this mapset, but there's a few issues that should be given some time before it's bibble bubble time . At least for me, and I'm a hard-ass when it comes to bubbles. can u tell me the main issues tho D:?

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pkk 2014-09-06T13:53:06+00:00

main issue: background missing nun hat

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Kibbleru 2014-09-06T16:38:12+00:00

pkk wrote:
main issue: background missing nun hat

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fk u ;w;

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wa_ 2014-09-09T23:23:05+00:00

From my queue as requested. Will mod Normal and Hard tomorrow... now it's too late

Mostly personal suggestions (there's nothing really major to change, it's actually nice map).

[Tsubasa]

00:09:849 (1,2) - Maybe try to blanket these?
00:16:682 (1) - I don't understand why do you make shape like this, yeah, there's nice blanket, but it doesn't flow with previous notes, try to make something like 00:15:682 (3) but vertical and stack with 00:16:182 (4).
00:23:182 (6,1) - This spacing would be better if you stack these notes or reverse 00:23:516 (1,2).
00:24:016 (1,2) - I'd suggest to make it non-stacked - just like 00:23:516 (1,2).
00:30:016 (1) - Same issue as 00:16:682 (1). Also, placement of 00:30:849 (4) looks a bit random, try to arrange whole pattern like this? (btw sorry for removing that bg ;_;)
00:44:516 (1,2) - There's no reason to make this slider 3/4. If you want to keep it, try to reduce spacing between these notes. 0.6-0.7 should be fine.
00:45:849 (1,2,1) - This pattern is confusing for me D: Maybe try to circle at 00:45:849, 1/4 slider with 2 reverses at 00:46:016 and circle (or 1/2 slider) at 00:46:349.
01:02:516 (2,3,4) - Make better triangle? (Move 01:02:849 (4) to x384 y8)
01:08:182 (5) - I suggest to move it down for better spacing. (About x168 y268)
01:31:016 - Try to add circle here to follow vocals and make next slider less "surprising".
01:57:682 (5) - Reverse? Should flow better...
01:59:016 (4,1) - Better blanket would be really nice c:
01:59:849 (2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm, this shape doesn't look good...
02:00:849 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try to make better triangle
02:03:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - To be honest, I don't like this pattern, it looks plain imo. Why don't you try to make it better? Just one of my ideas: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2019326
02:31:516 (2,2) - Move to x172 y304 for better flow?
02:33:182 (3,1) - I'm not sure if it's needed, but try to blanket
02:34:682 (4,5) - Make same curve in both sliders?
02:40:682 (1) - Horizontal slider should be better here, now you have broken movement with this shape...
02:44:516 (1) - Why you skipped that important white tick and made it as slider-tail. This should be replaced to 2 circles. Also, this stream is really uncomfortable and hard to sightread with 1st note placed at blue tick... Same thing is at 02:45:849 (1).
02:47:849 (3,4,5,6,7) - Again, not really good pattern. These notes look placed randomly here...
02:48:682 (1) - Why don't you make same pattern (but reversed) like 02:49:016 (2)?
02:53:099 (4,1) - I hate this ;_; This is the only thing why I can't fc this map, haha
03:13:516 (4,5) - Why don't you use copied and moved 03:13:182 (2,3) to about x420 y72? Parallel pattern is way better than current one! (Of course, this is personal aesthetic thing, you don't have to accept)
03:17:349 (3) - Make this slider curved like 03:17:682 (4) to make this pattern more consistent.
03:26:016 (1) - Just personal suggestion anbout NCs in streams like this: I would remove this NC cause it breaks this nice pattern... I'm sure I saw this earlier in map, hmm
03:29:016 (1) - See thing at 02:44:516 (1). Besides, try to fix spacing between 03:29:016 (1,2)
04:08:682 (1) - Check 03:26:016 (1). If you want to this, add NC at 04:09:349.

This diff is really fun to play, maybe it need some pattern polishing... some circles formations need more logical placement, parallelism, regularity... or it's just my different vision of mapping?
btw nice song

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Kibbleru 2014-09-10T00:02:18+00:00

wa_ wrote:
From my queue as requested. Will mod Normal and Hard tomorrow... now it's too late

Mostly personal suggestions (there's nothing really major to change, it's actually nice map).

[Tsubasa]
00:09:849 (1,2) - Maybe try to blanket these? not intended
00:16:682 (1) - I don't understand why do you make shape like this, yeah, there's nice blanket, but it doesn't flow with previous notes, try to make something like 00:15:682 (3) but vertical and stack with 00:16:182 (4). mm, sure it doens't flow PERFECTLY, but i think it flows good enough, i just like the pattern
00:23:182 (6,1) - This spacing would be better if you stack these notes or reverse 00:23:516 (1,2). nah
00:24:016 (1,2) - I'd suggest to make it non-stacked - just like 00:23:516 (1,2). ^
00:30:016 (1) - Same issue as 00:16:682 (1). Also, placement of 00:30:849 (4) looks a bit random, try to arrange whole pattern like this? (btw sorry for removing that bg ;_;) as above
00:44:516 (1,2) - There's no reason to make this slider 3/4. If you want to keep it, try to reduce spacing between these notes. 0.6-0.7 should be fine. i'm aware, but i think having a 3/4 emphasizes the weird sounds better
00:45:849 (1,2,1) - This pattern is confusing for me D: Maybe try to circle at 00:45:849, 1/4 slider with 2 reverses at 00:46:016 and circle (or 1/2 slider) at 00:46:349. i think it matches the music imo
01:02:516 (2,3,4) - Make better triangle? (Move 01:02:849 (4) to x384 y8) i don't like perfect triangles. Jumps don't have to be perfect geometric patterns, in fact, if they are, it would just seem boring.
01:08:182 (5) - I suggest to move it down for better spacing. (About x168 y268) this is spaced enough
01:31:016 - Try to add circle here to follow vocals and make next slider less "surprising". ok fix
01:57:682 (5) - Reverse? Should flow better... ahh changed this pattern before i read the mod
01:59:016 (4,1) - Better blanket would be really nice c: k
01:59:849 (2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm, this shape doesn't look good...
02:00:849 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try to make better triangle
02:03:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - To be honest, I don't like this pattern, it looks plain imo. Why don't you try to make it better? Just one of my ideas: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2019326 i disagree, i think it's unique since it's different than the others
02:31:516 (2,2) - Move to x172 y304 for better flow?
02:33:182 (3,1) - I'm not sure if it's needed, but try to blanket k fix
02:34:682 (4,5) - Make same curve in both sliders?
02:40:682 (1) - Horizontal slider should be better here, now you have broken movement with this shape... not rly..
02:44:516 (1) - Why you skipped that important white tick and made it as slider-tail. This should be replaced to 2 circles. Also, this stream is really uncomfortable and hard to sightread with 1st note placed at blue tick... Same thing is at 02:45:849 (1). uh... well i have the slider head on where the finish is, which is the true important sound. not all downbeats need to be mapped, MOST of the time, yes, but you have to listen to the music.
02:47:849 (3,4,5,6,7) - Again, not really good pattern. These notes look placed randomly here...
02:48:682 (1) - Why don't you make same pattern (but reversed) like 02:49:016 (2)?
02:53:099 (4,1) - I hate this ;_; This is the only thing why I can't fc this map, haha remapped this pattern a bit
03:13:516 (4,5) - Why don't you use copied and moved 03:13:182 (2,3) to about x420 y72? Parallel pattern is way better than current one! (Of course, this is personal aesthetic thing, you don't have to accept)
03:17:349 (3) - Make this slider curved like 03:17:682 (4) to make this pattern more consistent.
03:26:016 (1) - Just personal suggestion anbout NCs in streams like this: I would remove this NC cause it breaks this nice pattern... I'm sure I saw this earlier in map, hmm i honestly prefer this kind of stuff q:
03:29:016 (1) - See thing at 02:44:516 (1). Besides, try to fix spacing between 03:29:016 (1,2)
04:08:682 (1) - Check 03:26:016 (1). If you want to this, add NC at 04:09:349. ^
This diff is really fun to play, maybe it need some pattern polishing... some circles formations need more logical placement, parallelism, regularity... or it's just my different vision of mapping? it might be just u, or i just have weird tastes
btw nice song

ty for mod!

wa_

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wa_ 2014-09-10T20:06:33+00:00

hai again, no kd for this post :^)

[Normal]

Consider changing AR to 5? This is 180BPM with many red ticks, so it would be easier to read (but I'm not sure if Approach Rate for easiest diff isn't too high)
The only important problem are (in my opinion) tons of circles and sliders placed on red ticks (yeah, though they're fitting to the rhythm and actually seem to be OK). This is the easiest diff in mapset and AR is quite low here, so some notes can be hard to read! The best thing to make it more clean would be making additional Easy difficulty without any questionable patterns (like overlaps, stacks, "complex" rhythm, etc), but it seems to be almost impossible due to length of song D: You can also clean up some things like 00:25:516 (2) - it's actually OK, but I see slider like this everywhere in this map (especially at verses) and it may be considered as repetitive. For example you can try to change some of these short slider into circle at white tick, this way you can avoid gaps that aren't really good imo especially with used many red ticks.
Another example: You can try to change rhythm like here 02:59:349 (1,2) - into something like this. This way you can get smoother movement (and it better fits to Normal difficulty, yeah).
01:32:849 (1) - According to "red ticks" I suggest to start this slider at 01:32:682 - it's easier to read this and it better follow vocals what is more important here imo.
01:49:016 (4) - Aesthethics and spacing: move it to x312 for better spacing and look
02:08:682 (1) - This slider was intentional? I'm not sure if blue ticks with high BPM are even rankable in normal diffs, also, it doesn't fit to music and you do it another way in previous chorus.
02:50:849 (3) - Instead of hard to click circle (red tick, yea), try to change it to slider like this? By the way: I suggest to change 02:51:182 (1,2,3,4) - to 2 long sliders. Currently these sliders are pretty weird (to be honest, I think that second part of guitar solo is mapped with weird rhythm... I could map this part with long sliders with interesting shapes - 2/1, 3/1 and even longer)
02:55:849 (4,5,6) - Again, probably hard to read circles. Hm, it's actually hard to make anything better than this...
03:41:682 (3) - Another nazi-spacing :p
03:48:682 (1) - I'm not sure if it may be too hard here but it wouldn't be better if you add reverse to this slider? (And obviously, move it to right place for spacing consistency)
04:10:016 (1) - This slider shouldn't be mirrored with CTRL+J to make better Tsubasa?

[Hard]

00:20:849 - Add circle here? Or it's just my problem with sightreading...
00:50:682 (3,1) - Try to make better blanket.
00:57:182 (2,3,4,5) - Don't you think star like this is too hard for this difficulty at 180BPM? It seems this is hardest part of this diff, maybe consider changing it to something easier?
01:14:016 (1,2) - I don't really understand flow here, also: 01:13:182 (2,1) - make perfect stack here.
01:39:849 (2,3,1) - I suggest manual stacking, in game it doesn't look good... move 01:40:349 (3,1) to x158 y93.
01:57:682 (4) - Make spacing more consistent? Also, maybe make this slider parallel to 01:57:349 (3)...
02:00:516 (1,3) - What about to nice blanket here?
03:27:349 (1,2) - Uhh... This thing is a free 100 at first play. It's because this is first(?) 3/4 slider + circle in that diff and it doesn't really follow rhythm. Try to decrease spacing between these notes (less than 0.8, but even stack would be good) or change it into 1/1 slider without circle.
03:59:349 (1,2) - Again, fix blanket?

Wow, Fycho's diff is pretty good! I like this style

I hope you rank this soon~

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Kibbleru 2014-09-11T19:31:53+00:00

wa_ wrote:
hai again, no kd for this post :^)

[Normal]
Consider changing AR to 5? This is 180BPM with many red ticks, so it would be easier to read (but I'm not sure if Approach Rate for easiest diff isn't too high)
The only important problem are (in my opinion) tons of circles and sliders placed on red ticks (yeah, though they're fitting to the rhythm and actually seem to be OK). This is the easiest diff in mapset and AR is quite low here, so some notes can be hard to read! The best thing to make it more clean would be making additional Easy difficulty without any questionable patterns (like overlaps, stacks, "complex" rhythm, etc), but it seems to be almost impossible due to length of song D: You can also clean up some things like 00:25:516 (2) - it's actually OK, but I see slider like this everywhere in this map (especially at verses) and it may be considered as repetitive. For example you can try to change some of these short slider into circle at white tick, this way you can avoid gaps that aren't really good imo especially with used many red ticks. well tbh i think red ticks are fine
Another example: You can try to change rhythm like here 02:59:349 (1,2) - into something like this. This way you can get smoother movement (and it better fits to Normal difficulty, yeah).
01:32:849 (1) - According to "red ticks" I suggest to start this slider at 01:32:682 - it's easier to read this and it better follow vocals what is more important here imo. but im trying to follow the drums and insturment
01:49:016 (4) - Aesthethics and spacing: move it to x312 for better spacing and look changed this part a bit
02:08:682 (1) - This slider was intentional? I'm not sure if blue ticks with high BPM are even rankable in normal diffs, also, it doesn't fit to music and you do it another way in previous chorus. holy shet how did i not notice this. yeah this was NOT intentional LOL
02:50:849 (3) - Instead of hard to click circle (red tick, yea), try to change it to slider like this? By the way: I suggest to change 02:51:182 (1,2,3,4) - to 2 long sliders. Currently these sliders are pretty weird (to be honest, I think that second part of guitar solo is mapped with weird rhythm... I could map this part with long sliders with interesting shapes - 2/1, 3/1 and even longer) ehh i think this is fine
02:55:849 (4,5,6) - Again, probably hard to read circles. Hm, it's actually hard to make anything better than this... i agree, but i think this is the best u can rly make it
03:41:682 (3) - Another nazi-spacing :p fix
03:48:682 (1) - I'm not sure if it may be too hard here but it wouldn't be better if you add reverse to this slider? (And obviously, move it to right place for spacing consistency) that wouldn't rly have the same effect though :/
04:10:016 (1) - This slider shouldn't be mirrored with CTRL+J to make better Tsubasa? genius! i like it! applied
Wow, Fycho's diff is pretty good! I like this style Fycho is love, Fycho is life ♥
I hope you rank this soon~ me too @_@

tyvm! was alot of help

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Nozhomi 2014-09-14T00:03:07+00:00

Hi Kibbleru. You ask me so here I am <3.

- General :

Looks like you don't use any SB, so remove osb file.
Disable Widescreen Support too.

- Tsubasa :

00:39:016 (4,1) - Maybe you can fix this overlap ?
01:08:849 (1,1) - Bad stacking.
01:56:349 (3,1) - Bad blanket.
02:27:349 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why you didn't make a real star here ?

- Fycho's Hard :

00:21:849 (1,3) - Stack them ?
00:52:682 (1,4) - ^
02:02:349 (2,3) - Why a jump so suddenly ? I don't understand because this the same rhythm than 02:01:682 (4,1) - but the intensity of it does not justify a jump now.
02:23:182 (1,3) - Stack them correctly.
03:08:682 (3,1) - I don't think this overlap looks good here.
03:19:849 (3) - This slider is on life bar !
03:42:682 (2,1) - Blanket maybe ?

- Normal :

00:11:182 (5) - Break your curve like this looks bad imo. Move it to something like 384:92.
00:29:516 (4) - CTRL+H, for the flow.
01:11:849 (4) - I would curve it a little more.
03:12:682 (1) - I would prefer if he finish like this http://puu.sh/bxT6E/eec46ad127.jpg.
03:35:016 (5,1) - Can be improve just a little ^^ (blanket).
03:38:016 (1) - Curve it a little more no ?
04:05:849 (3,4) - Bad blanket.

That's all.
Good luck <3 Mukyu~ It you want to mod one of my map come ask me in-game

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