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Duca - Shiawase no Otoshimono

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Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 06 Tháng Sáu 2014 at 10:04:33 SA

Artist: Duca
Title: Shiawase no Otoshimono
Source: your diary+
Tags: opening cube hentai eroge alchemist visual novel mao xinely wafu laurier plus yua ayase sayuki minagawa yuhi hirosaki kanade enomoto kaho fujimura natsuki
BPM: 163
Filesize: 19554kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,91 stars, 224 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 323 notes)
  3. Laurier's Insane (5 stars, 289 notes)
  4. Wafu's Easy (2,68 stars, 96 notes)
  5. Xinely's Normal (4,19 stars, 136 notes)
Download: Duca - Shiawase no Otoshimono
Download: Duca - Shiawase no Otoshimono (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~My 7th beatmap for my birthday. This birthday is also my first time in Osu! :D~
Mapset:
-- Easy: Done~ by Wafu
-- Normal: Done~ by Xinely
-- Hard: Done~
-- Insane: Done~
-- Insane: Done~ by Laurier
Thanks so much to all GDer for you guys made nice GD. I thank you very much!! <3
Thanks jonathanlfj for Video <3 :D
Check out Lust's Ver!!!~

Last edited by Oyatsu , edited 36 times in total.
BigWilly
214 posts
Joined October 2013
BigWilly
Nice Map!

I dont see much to Mod.

Remember the hitsounds though ;P
BeatofIke
4,172 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Duca <3
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu
Thanks you guy for Support!! :D
I will finish this soonest I can :D
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/6fmpW.osu
done
Sekai
6,376 posts
Joined February 2011
Sekai
gogo Oyatsu <3
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu
Thanks Sekai-senpai!!!~ =w=
Updated Laurier's Insane, really Nice diff, Thank you so much!! <3 ^^
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
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Oyatsu
Sorry for late, you guys. Move to pending now :D
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
From in-game request

[Wufu's Easy]

00:15:213 (1,2,3) - slider 1 end at 00:15:949 better

00:18:158 (1) - ^same way

00:28:465 (3) -
SPOILER

01:33:066 (2) - spinner here will better for newplayer

00:16:685 (4) - can end at 00:17:238

01:22:943 (1) - end at 01:24:416

01:30:673 (2) - move to 01:31:041

00:26:624 (4) - delete

[Xinely's Normal]

00:18:526 (2) - copy the 00:17:238 (4)to here,reverse also

00:24:047 (1) - end point move x|52y|176

00:37:299 (3,1) - do it better

01:15:581 (3,4) - ^

[hard]

good mapset

play
final 3notes get 50 300 50 it better to add a note at 01:32:514

here you can do like this
SPOILER

[insane]

00:18:526 (2,3,4,5) - try
SPOILER

00:48:710 note x|220 y|152

00:49:262 (2) - don't hidden this

00:50:550 (1) - reverse put 00:51:103 (2) at x|376y|216

00:58:833 (5) - q

00:58:925 note

01:09:323 (5,1) - stack

01:24:231 (4,5) - map same as 01:23:495 (2,3)

01:26:808 (4,5,6,7) -
SPOILER
you can try to make them more beautiful

01:29:753 (4,5,6,7) -
SPOILER
make them more beautiful this is the way to show you

01:32:514 note x|400y|208

for sorry i am very hungry , so i mod here , go for lunch , btw , nice map , good luck ^^/
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao
AAAAAA sorry I forgot to mod your map orz

mod incoming soon~
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

moonlightleaf wrote:

From in-game request
[hard]

good mapset

play
final 3notes get 50 300 50 it better to add a note at 01:32:514

here you can do like this :arrow: same as Insane
SPOILER

[insane]

00:18:526 (2,3,4,5) - try
SPOILER
:arrow: I think I keep it =w=

00:48:710 note x|220 y|152 :arrow: ?

00:49:262 (2) - don't hidden this :arrow: ok

00:50:550 (1) - reverse put 00:51:103 (2) at x|376y|216 :arrow: no I follow drum in instrumental

00:58:833 (5) - q :arrow: ?

00:58:925 note :arrow: ah yea but i think keep my pattern will be better

01:09:323 (5,1) - stack :arrow: fixed

01:24:231 (4,5) - map same as 01:23:495 (2,3) :arrow: no

01:26:808 (4,5,6,7) - :arrow: no sorry
SPOILER
you can try to make them more beautiful

01:29:753 (4,5,6,7) - :arrow: ^
SPOILER
make them more beautiful this is the way to show you

01:32:514 note x|400y|208 :arrow: follow instrument

for sorry i am very hungry , so i mod here , go for lunch , btw , nice map , good luck ^^/
Thank you for modding! :)
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao
hello, requested via in-game
nothing particular to fix, all just my suggestion

[General]
you might want to delete op and vn coz they're not searchable
01:33:158 (1) - expand by 1/4 snap forward? `-`

[Easy]
00:09:324 (1) - remake this slider? so it will blanket with (2) *0.3x more distance is no problem, i guess*
92,52,9324,2,0,P|96:132|168:184,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:24:047 (1) - this too
362,248,24047,6,0,P|304:308|216:300,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:25:520 (3) - why no stack?
00:26:992 (1) - 2nd node to 108,176
00:54:968 (3) - rotate around 30 degrees clockwise *selection as center ofc* so you can move (4) so (2,4) aren't equals height

[Normal]
aw well mapped from well mapper >.>
01:12:636 (1) - why NC here?
01:23:035 (1) - move 1/4 beat forward, reduce the duration by 1/4 too

[Hard]
you did it well here
00:38:035 (3,4,1) - how about this
SPOILER

100,188,38035,2,0,P|73:164|51:119,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,221,38403,2,0,P|163:255|134:297,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,144,38771,6,0,P|197:133|248:136,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:51:471 (3) - last node to 372,112
01:09:692 (1,2,3) - woob woob
SPOILER

106,185,69692,6,0,P|72:211|52:246,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,148,70060,2,0,P|189:105|169:70,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,244,70428,2,0,P|224:260|264:260,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:32:698 (5,6) - how about revert? *Ctrl + G*

Not Recommended
01:17:054 (1,2,3) - hello *look picture*
SPOILER

152,160,77054,6,8,P|141:196|151:230,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,124,77422,2,8,P|193:96|159:87,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,199,77790,2,0,P|256:189|281:164,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]
00:13:741 (1,2,3) - make a proper triangle? *(3) move to 280,128*
00:16:870 (2,6) - stack to 00:15:581 (2)
00:17:054 (3,4) - how about liek this *distance from (1) to (3) and (2) to (4) are same*
SPOILER
=>00:17:606 (5) - you can move this along with above mod
00:27:360 (2) - 2nd node to 216,204 so you can stack 00:28:097 (5) - properly with (2)'s slider
00:28:833 (2,3,4) - triangle? *(4) move to 256,80*
00:29:569 (5) - delete this, copy from (4), then rotate 240 degrees clockwise, and re-stack to (3), that's better
00:31:225 (6) - move to 188,256 for equal jump
00:31:777 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about make a proper pentagon here?
00:35:827 (1) - stack with 00:31:962 (4)? *move 1 grid up and right*
=>00:35:458 (5,6,1) - *do it after above mod* make a triangle pattern here, (6) move to 148,288
00:40:060 (4) - how about stack with 00:38:035 (4)
00:44:293 (6,7,1) - woah, this quite trappy here, i prefer 1.0x multiplier at 00:44:661 (1) - and 0.8 multiplier start from 00:45:029 (2)
00:50:182 (5,6) - i prefer revert the notes (Ctrl + G)
00:55:888 (4) - stack with previous (4)'s slider head
=>00:56:072 (5) - move to 276,324
==>00:56:440 (1) - move to 380,192
===>tada, you have done a proper triangle pattern for 00:56:072 (5,6,1)
====>00:56:808 (2,3,4,5,6) - move this as you want
00:59:017 (6) - New Combo here?
01:05:274 (1,2) - how about this
SPOILER
01:09:692 (1) - stack here
01:10:428 (1,2,3,4) - how about proper square pattern here? *delete (3,4). Copy from (1,2), then rotate 90 degrees clockwise with selection as center*
SPOILER
01:15:029 (5) - 3rd node 1 grid down
01:16:501 (4,5,6) - need more triangle stuff!!! *(4) move to 120,152*
01:19:630 (5,6,1) - even more triangle!! *(6) move to 332,128
01:20:735 (1) - stack
01:23:495 (2) - NC
01:24:231 (4) - NC here too
01:26:440 (2) - even hereeeee too
01:27:176 (5) - woob woob, here too
01:30:121 (5) - bang!
01:32:698 (6) - dub dub
01:32:882 (7) - finally, here!

[Laurier's Insane]
looks fine
01:20:366 (3,6) - unsnapped end

good luck >///<
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
Fixed few details from last two mods. Thanks.
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

wendao2000 wrote:

hello, requested via in-game
nothing particular to fix, all just my suggestion

[General]
you might want to delete op and vn coz they're not searchable :arrow: yea I didn't relize this. Deleted!
01:33:158 (1) - expand by 1/4 snap forward? `-` :arrow: yea?

[Hard]
you did it well here
00:38:035 (3,4,1) - how about this :arrow: I prefer blanket instead
SPOILER

100,188,38035,2,0,P|73:164|51:119,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,221,38403,2,0,P|163:255|134:297,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,144,38771,6,0,P|197:133|248:136,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:51:471 (3) - last node to 372,112 :arrow: ok
01:09:692 (1,2,3) - woob woob :arrow: I still feel it didn't change anything =w=
SPOILER

106,185,69692,6,0,P|72:211|52:246,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,148,70060,2,0,P|189:105|169:70,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,244,70428,2,0,P|224:260|264:260,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:32:698 (5,6) - how about revert? *Ctrl + G* :arrow: I changed some rhythms

Not Recommended
01:17:054 (1,2,3) - hello *look picture* :arrow: fixed
SPOILER

152,160,77054,6,8,P|141:196|151:230,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,124,77422,2,8,P|193:96|159:87,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,199,77790,2,0,P|256:189|281:164,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]
00:13:741 (1,2,3) - make a proper triangle? *(3) move to 280,128* :arrow: No, mine works better
00:16:870 (2,6) - stack to 00:15:581 (2) :arrow: ok
00:17:054 (3,4) - how about liek this *distance from (1) to (3) and (2) to (4) are same* :arrow: I like random jump =w=
SPOILER
=>00:17:606 (5) - you can move this along with above mod
00:27:360 (2) - 2nd node to 216,204 so you can stack 00:28:097 (5) - properly with (2)'s slider :arrow: No, I think overlap here is better, like you isn't a nice pattern
00:28:833 (2,3,4) - triangle? *(4) move to 256,80* :arrow: nope
00:29:569 (5) - delete this, copy from (4), then rotate 240 degrees clockwise, and re-stack to (3), that's better :arrow: ^
00:31:225 (6) - move to 188,256 for equal jump :arrow: ok
00:31:777 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about make a proper pentagon here? :arrow: no
00:35:827 (1) - stack with 00:31:962 (4)? *move 1 grid up and right* :arrow: ok
=>00:35:458 (5,6,1) - *do it after above mod* make a triangle pattern here, (6) move to 148,288 :arrow:
00:40:060 (4) - how about stack with 00:38:035 (4)
00:44:293 (6,7,1) - woah, this quite trappy here, i prefer 1.0x multiplier at 00:44:661 (1) - and 0.8 multiplier start from 00:45:029 (2)
00:50:182 (5,6) - i prefer revert the notes (Ctrl + G)
00:55:888 (4) - stack with previous (4)'s slider head :arrow: fixed
=>00:56:072 (5) - move to 276,324
==>00:56:440 (1) - move to 380,192
===>tada, you have done a proper triangle pattern for 00:56:072 (5,6,1)
====>00:56:808 (2,3,4,5,6) - move this as you want
00:59:017 (6) - New Combo here?
01:05:274 (1,2) - how about this
SPOILER
01:09:692 (1) - stack here
01:10:428 (1,2,3,4) - how about proper square pattern here? *delete (3,4). Copy from (1,2), then rotate 90 degrees clockwise with selection as center*
SPOILER
01:15:029 (5) - 3rd node 1 grid down
01:16:501 (4,5,6) - need more triangle stuff!!! *(4) move to 120,152*
01:19:630 (5,6,1) - even more triangle!! *(6) move to 332,128
01:20:735 (1) - stack
01:23:495 (2) - NC
01:24:231 (4) - NC here too
01:26:440 (2) - even hereeeee too
01:27:176 (5) - woob woob, here too
01:30:121 (5) - bang!
01:32:698 (6) - dub dub
01:32:882 (7) - finally, here!
Fixed something. I really am appreciate it just some thing isn't similar to my opinion
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-
Hay là đổi tên diff Insane của Oyatsu thành Extra, tại có diff Insane rồi!
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hay là đổi tên diff Insane của Oyatsu thành Extra, tại có diff Insane rồi!
tuy theo * ma extra hay ko, vs lai oyatsu ko thik cai do
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
From your queue
Cut the mp3 from 00:08:587 -
Your diary + H
:3
[Laurier's Insane]
00:22:575 (1) - Ctrl+G better flow
00:24:047 (1,1) - 336,56
00:36:931 (4,5) - swap
01:02:514 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526922 this rhythme will be better
GJ
[Insane]
00:11:900 (6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526935
00:17:974 (6) - 256,156
00:19:262 (6) - 128,196
00:29:937 (1,2) - 332,136
00:37:115 (5) - 372,280
00:45:949 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:54:231 (4) - Ctrl+G
>00:54:784 (5) - 236,68
00:56:992 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526945 better flow
01:11:716 (3) - Ctrl+G
>01:12:084 (4,6) - swap
01:15:029 (5) - 512,116
01:18:526 (1) - 260,208
GJ
[Hard]
00:28:465 (1) - 2nd point 104,88
00:29:937 (1) - 1st point 404,256 2nd point 428,200
[Xinely's Normal]
Hi~
drum really get not much using except map contest,sounds strange here._.
01:16:317 (4) - not blanked well
Nothing found:3
[Wafu's Easy]
Hi~wafu :3
00:19:630 (4) - 156,248
00:22:575 (2,2) - overlap?
00:22:943 (3,3) - ^
01:02:330 (1) - 2nd point 120,208 last point 100,200
01:32:698 - 1/1 slider
Editing finished:3
Last edited by ts8zs , edited 2 times in total.
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle
M4M


Disable widescreen support because you didn't have storyboard

[Easy]
00:10:428 (2) - would probably nice if you remove whistle?
00:13:373 (2) - ^
00:15:213 (1) - remove whistle at the end of the slider
00:16:317 (3) - would probably nice if you remove whistle?
00:16:685 (4) - would probably nice if you add whistle into the reverse arrow part?

00:18:158 (1) - remove whistle at the end of the slider
00:19:262 (3) - would probably nice if you add whistle


[normal]
01:21:471 (3) - did you actually forget to add NC?

[hard]
00:17:054 (2) - add whistle at the end of the slider?
00:18:158 (1) - add whistle at the beginning of the slider?

[Laurier's Insane]
I suck at modding insane diffs
00:13:741 (1) - add whistle?
00:16:685 (1) - ^
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

ts8zs wrote:

From your queue
Cut the mp3 from 00:08:587 - :arrow: no, song is a full locked, if you change the order of song, I'm sure composer will really not like it :3
Your diary + H
[Insane]
00:11:900 (6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526935
00:17:974 (6) - 256,156
00:19:262 (6) - 128,196 :arrow: what? @@
00:29:937 (1,2) - 332,136 :arrow: fixed my way
00:37:115 (5) - 372,280
00:45:949 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:54:231 (4) - Ctrl+G :arrow: no
>00:54:784 (5) - 236,68
00:56:992 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526945 better flow :arrow:
01:11:716 (3) - Ctrl+G
>01:12:084 (4,6) - swap :arrow: no
01:15:029 (5) - 512,116
01:18:526 (1) - 260,208
GJ
[Hard]
00:28:465 (1) - 2nd point 104,88
00:29:937 (1) - 1st point 404,256 2nd point 428,200 :arrow: no

vahn10 wrote:

M4M
Disable widescreen support because you didn't have storyboard :arrow: ok
[hard]
00:17:054 (2) - add whistle at the end of the slider? :arrow:
00:18:158 (1) - add whistle at the beginning of the slider?
No cmt= fixed. Thank you for modding! :)
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
No change. The hitsounds are just supposed to be consistent with Oyatsu's difficulty. If they stay on his diff like this, I will keep them, and I think they should stay, they sound well. Sorry.
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu
Updated all! Only wait Xinely!
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,192 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
As your request! Sorry for late T^T

[General]

Fine~

[Easy]

Nice Work <3

I suggest, 00:09:324 - Why added Inherbited Point lol..

[Normal]

Nice Work, too

But 01:09:692 - That part adds some notes is better, It's little bit unexpected spinner.

[Hard]

00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.

00:42:820 (4) - Spacing is better >3< like 00:32:514 (4,5) -

00:57:912 (1) - I suggest to far away from (4) slider.

01:27:728 (4) - Remove NC

Pro~

[Insane]

00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.

00:20:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - little bit weird curve shape.

00:24:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - These parts make like [img=http://puu.sh/8SsS9.jpg]this[/img] is better.

00:53:863 - Add Note here, Feels Empty :/

[Laurier's Insane]

00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.

00:59:753 (2) - 1 grid up.

<3<3<3
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

W h i t e wrote:

As your request! Sorry for late T^T

[General]

Fine~

[Easy]

Nice Work <3

I suggest, 00:09:324 - Why added Inherbited Point lol..

[Normal]

Nice Work, too

But 01:09:692 - That part adds some notes is better, It's little bit unexpected spinner. :arrow: I think I keep

[Hard]

00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff. :arrow: no you didn't know I use it for 0,75x?

00:42:820 (4) - Spacing is better >3< like 00:32:514 (4,5) -

00:57:912 (1) - I suggest to far away from (4) slider. :arrow: I think it is normal

01:27:728 (4) - Remove NC

Pro~

[Insane]

00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff. :arrow: as hard

00:20:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - little bit weird curve shape. :arrow: maybe =w=

00:24:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - These parts make like [img=http://puu.sh/8SsS9.jpg]this[/img] is better. :arrow:

00:53:863 - Add Note here, Feels Empty :/ :arrow: I follow drum sound

[Laurier's Insane]

00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff. :arrow: as hard

00:59:753 (2) - 1 grid up.

<3<3<3
Thank you for modding! Nocmt = fixed :)
waxman
467 posts
Joined February 2012
waxman
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[Laurier's Insane]
00:26:992 (1,2,3) - スライダーの頭同士でスペーシングを考えたほうが様さそうです。　そちらの方が私としてはきれいにみえます。
00:31:409 (1) - 00:32:146 (3)のblanket使うのはどうでしょう？
00:39:508 (4) - x:447 y:160 00:39:508 (4,6,1)のスペーシングだけを考えると・・・　00:40:980 (3)はどっかに持っていってくださいｗｗｗｗｗ
00:47:054 (4,5) - spacingが気になります
00:46:501 (2,3,4) - 00:47:238 (5)のblanket使うのもwelcome
00:50:550 (1) - 直感的に00:50:735 (2)の頭に重ねたほうがいいと思った　重ねたら00:49:446 (2)の頭に重ねてみては？
01:10:612 (7) - 1/2の休みがありますのでこれをｗ
bad image
01:17:422 (3) - Add Clap なんで鈴の音でないのなぁ? 直し方わからな～い　
01:29:937 (4,1,2) - 頭のspacingのずれてる？


[Insane]
00:18:526 (2,5) - I don't feel good at this section. x:29 :180
00:44:661 (1,2) - Spacing miss. change to like 00:45:213 (3,4,5).
00:48:526 (3,1) - Stack perfectly for the flow. According to 00:50:550 (1,2) , 01:07:851 (5,1)
00:59:753 (2,3) - Ctrl+ G

01:20:366 (1) - Delete NC. because 01:19:998 (1,1)'s spacing is shorter than 01:20:366 (1,1).
01:21:103 (1) - ^
01:24:231 (4) - NC?


[Hard]
00:50:550 (1,2,3) - use 00:50:182 (3)'s blanket?
00:52:391 (2) - Change it to 1/2 slider and circle?
01:32:514 (5,6) - these hit sounds too low.


[Xinely's Normal]
00:21:839 (1) - change it to slider? why don't you do that? This slider would be far from spin, right?
00:55:336 (5) - Change it to reverse slider?
01:04:354 - delete Whistle. because you always Whistle on every the begining of slider.
01:26:733 - bass sound too loud. 50% is better imo.


[Wafu's Easy]
00:22:575 (2,2) - stack perfectly

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GOOD LUCK!
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
no change
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ
[Insane]
00:18:526 (2,5) - I don't feel good at this section. x:29 :180
00:44:661 (1,2) - Spacing miss. change to like 00:45:213 (3,4,5). :arrow: no
00:48:526 (3,1) - Stack perfectly for the flow. According to 00:50:550 (1,2) , 01:07:851 (5,1)
00:59:753 (2,3) - Ctrl+ G

01:20:366 (1) - Delete NC. because 01:19:998 (1,1)'s spacing is shorter than 01:20:366 (1,1). :arrow: I think it is point to player can understand it changed speed
01:21:103 (1) - ^ :arrow: ^
01:24:231 (4) - NC? :arrow: no need


[Hard]
00:50:550 (1,2,3) - use 00:50:182 (3)'s blanket? :arrow: no
00:52:391 (2) - Change it to 1/2 slider and circle? :arrow: I don't think so
01:32:514 (5,6) - these hit sounds too low. :arrow: I think it is enough to hear


[Xinely's Normal]
00:21:839 (1) - change it to slider? why don't you do that? This slider would be far from spin, right? :arrow: Need empty, that is time to noob can realize it
00:55:336 (5) - Change it to reverse slider? :arrow: follow vocal
01:04:354 - delete Whistle. because you always Whistle on every the begining of slider. :arrow: no
01:26:733 - bass sound too loud. 50% is better imo. :arrow: What?


[Wafu's Easy]
00:22:575 (2,2) - stack perfectly

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GOOD LUCK!
No cmt=fixed, thank you for modding and star!! =w=
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
About the stack, I think Oyatsu fixed it, but I don't think it was sensible, when there was 3 secs gap. It was invisible when playing. Just saying. :)
Asphyxia
Beatmap Nominator
2,001 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia


M4M

[Wafu's Easy]
  1. Mm, so many ignored blankets it makes me sad :/ It'd be nice of you to fix them, like 00:09:324 (1,2) - , 00:19:262 (3,4) - , 00:24:047 (1,2) - and 00:26:992 (1,2) - for example.
  2. 00:10:796 (3) - While I do think this slider is fine, you can curve it more to create a better effect with 00:09:324 (1) - and it'd fit better with the next slider too.
  3. 00:13:741 (3) - To be consistent, do it here too.
  4. 00:16:685 (4) - An optional place for this slider could be x:332 y:84, this way it allows 00:15:949 (2,3) - to have a better triangle!
  5. 00:26:624 (4) - I somehow prefer downcurve instead of an upcurve here, so that being said, you can move the note to x:256 y:200 if you want to.
  6. 00:29:937 (1) - End point could be moved to x:132 y:116 for a smoother curve
  7. 00:38:403 (4) - As I stated few suggestions back, a downcurve would fit really well here, although if you didn't apply the other one, don't bother to apply this.
  8. This difficulty is fine although it could have been a lot better if you wouldn't ignore all of your blankets
[Xinely's Normal]
  1. 00:15:213 (1,2) - Blanket
  2. 00:25:520 (2,3) - Since the slider 00:24:047 (1) - was curved, curved sliders could work better in this combo and flow would be cute >w< might wanna try to rearranging them like this; http://puu.sh/8TLm3.jpg Just a personal preference here
  3. 00:38:035 (4,1) - MmMMmM blanket
  4. 00:55:704 - This gap here seems awkwardly odd, you could add a note to prevent this, would follow the vocals fairly well too.
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:152 (3,1,2,3) - I don't like this for few reasons. Because you're overlapping, either make it more noticeable or don't overlap things, mainly because now 00:25:520 (1,3) - looks very unclean. So what you do here is 00:25:520 (1) - move to x:244 y:296 because then the overlap is totally focused in the sliders middle of body > move 00:26:072 (2,3) - further away so it wont overlap. Pic here: http://puu.sh/8TLDa.jpg
  2. 00:32:514 (4,5) - The sudden inconsistent jump makes it awkward to play, there's really not a intense part here so doing this doesn't make sense imo, consider using normal spacing
  3. 00:42:820 (4) - ^
  4. 00:57:912 (1) - Okay so here I get the spacing increase, but this note should have the higher spacing too due to the strong part of the music, not only 00:58:097 (2,3,4,5) - , so move 1 to x:432 y:256 for a nice triangle and equal spacing? http://puu.sh/8TLML.jpg
  5. 01:03:802 (1) - Curve this more so it'd fit better with your current pattern while also making the overlap going to the middle of this slider's body, then move 01:04:354 (2) - a bit so it gets overlapped perfectly in the middle xD -> picture http://puu.sh/8TLVP.jpg
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:692 (3) - Red point makes it unfitting with the mapset itself, kinda awkward now, a basic curved slider would work better imo
  2. 00:35:827 (1,2) - Due to your high spacing sometimes, this is really confusing and I think always that 2 starts 1/4 earlier, so because of this, give it more spacing between those two?
  3. 00:44:661 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange them like this? http://puu.sh/8TMd4.jpg Would make a nice square while improving the flow there
  4. 00:49:446 (3,4) - As said earlier, adding more spacing wouldn't hurt due to the confusion it might give
  5. 01:05:643 (2,3) - Blanket
  6. I guess it's cool
Other Insane is nicely done, played really well. GL with your mapset~
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu

Asphyxia wrote:

[Wafu's Easy]
  1. Mm, so many ignored blankets it makes me sad :/ It'd be nice of you to fix them, like 00:09:324 (1,2) - , 00:19:262 (3,4) - , 00:24:047 (1,2) - and 00:26:992 (1,2) - for example. Not sure if I understood 100% well.. some blankets were unsymmetrical, so I made them all to be the same distance from start and end point, what basically means it is exactly in center of that slider. Applied to all blankets, so they should be more polished. If you meant adding more blankets, then sorry, but I didn't want to spam them that much.
  2. 00:10:796 (3) - While I do think this slider is fine, you can curve it more to create a better effect with 00:09:324 (1) - and it'd fit better with the next slider too. Fixed
  3. 00:13:741 (3) - To be consistent, do it here too. Fixed
  4. 00:16:685 (4) - An optional place for this slider could be x:332 y:84, this way it allows 00:15:949 (2,3) - to have a better triangle! Fixed
  5. 00:26:624 (4) - I somehow prefer downcurve instead of an upcurve here, so that being said, you can move the note to x:256 y:200 if you want to. I didn't fix this exactly as you recommended, but I think I know what was the point, so I changed it as I thought you might like it, we'll see.
  6. 00:29:937 (1) - End point could be moved to x:132 y:116 for a smoother curve Minor, but yeah, fixed
  7. 00:38:403 (4) - As I stated few suggestions back, a downcurve would fit really well here, although if you didn't apply the other one, don't bother to apply this. This is same as I answered before. I think I know what do you mean, so I changed it so it should be fine.
  8. This difficulty is fine although it could have been a lot better if you wouldn't ignore all of your blankets
Thanks for your mod.
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

Asphyxia wrote:



M4M
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:152 (3,1,2,3) - I don't like this for few reasons. Because you're overlapping, either make it more noticeable or don't overlap things, mainly because now 00:25:520 (1,3) - looks very unclean. So what you do here is 00:25:520 (1) - move to x:244 y:296 because then the overlap is totally focused in the sliders middle of body > move 00:26:072 (2,3) - further away so it wont overlap. Pic here: http://puu.sh/8TLDa.jpg :arrow: It is a stack pattern, my plan is so, no change
  2. 00:32:514 (4,5) - The sudden inconsistent jump makes it awkward to play, there's really not a intense part here so doing this doesn't make sense imo, consider using normal spacing
  3. 00:42:820 (4) - ^ :arrow: Next it is a very strong beat, so I think jump will be sensible
  4. 00:57:912 (1) - Okay so here I get the spacing increase, but this note should have the higher spacing too due to the strong part of the music, not only 00:58:097 (2,3,4,5) - , so move 1 to x:432 y:256 for a nice triangle and equal spacing? http://puu.sh/8TLML.jpg
  5. 01:03:802 (1) - Curve this more so it'd fit better with your current pattern while also making the overlap going to the middle of this slider's body, then move 01:04:354 (2) - a bit so it gets overlapped perfectly in the middle xD -> picture http://puu.sh/8TLVP.jpg
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:692 (3) - Red point makes it unfitting with the mapset itself, kinda awkward now, a basic curved slider would work better imo
  2. 00:35:827 (1,2) - Due to your high spacing sometimes, this is really confusing and I think always that 2 starts 1/4 earlier, so because of this, give it more spacing between those two?
  3. 00:44:661 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange them like this? http://puu.sh/8TMd4.jpg Would make a nice square while improving the flow there :arrow: No I keep current
  4. 00:49:446 (3,4) - As said earlier, adding more spacing wouldn't hurt due to the confusion it might give
  5. 01:05:643 (2,3) - Blanket
  6. I guess it's cool
Other Insane is nicely done, played really well. GL with your mapset~
No cmt=fixed, thank you for modding! Updated Wafu's Easy too
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
From your M4M queue ~
[Wafu's Easy]
  1. 00:28:097 (2) - Move to x:212 y:348
  2. 00:29:569 (4) - I think its better to start NC from here ~
  3. 00:32:882 (1) - Whistle but keep the finish ~
  4. 00:35:090 (4) - Clap but keep the whistle ~ ?
  5. 01:33:066 (2) - Move to x:288 y:144
[Xinely's Normal]
  1. 00:14:845 (7) - Whistle ~ ?
Sorry for short mod ~ :c Good luck though ~ :D
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Modding as requested in-game (:
Sorry for the late.... let's go

[Laurier's Insane]
♥ 00:54:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Loved this flow (: it reminds me some lfj's style
♥ This diff looks fine (:

[Insane]
00:31:777 (2,3,4,5,6) - Cosmetics: here, perhaps you could make a pentagon here, but I dunno how to do it without unstacking some notes like 00:30:673 (3,4) - or without messing with local spacings like 00:31:041 (4,5,1,2) - . Whatever you keep or not, the flow remains good (:
00:36:931 (4) - Flow: why not move it to x:468 y:220 ? And, as a complement, moving the 00:36:563 (3)'s tail node by two grids right to became the new flow more evident.
♥ Looks fine too.

[Hard]
♥ 00:37:851 (2,3,4,1) - AMAZING FLOW :3
00:51:471 (3) - Nazi: move the last anchor by 1 grid down, so this slider will get more parallel with the next one.
01:16:501 (2) - Nazi: Disable Grid Snap and move the 1st anchor ro x:287 y:236. Or... get the code: 
287,236,76501,2,0,P|292:196|280:160,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
♥ Nice diff (:

[Xinely's Normal]
♥ Feels good (:

[Wafu's Easy]
♥ Very nice C:

That's all (: Good luck and let's rank (:

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Unusual-bot
Unusual-bot
M4M from your queue.
Well, how should i say this.......errrr, all what i say here are only suggestion, so it's up to you to follow it or not, but please reply my mod (to improve my modding style :) ).
Ok, let's start then

Wafu's Easy
Well, it's good, i can't really find anything wrong here

Xinely's Normal
00:43:925 (3) - 316|196 for better flow
00:47:606 (1) - 260|332 ^
00:54:231 (2,3,4,5) - how about making it into something like this or something like that?
01:05:274 (1,2) - 448|192 for better flow
01:06:747 (3) - 188|24 ^
01:17:054 (1) - 264|236 ^

Hard
00:36:379 (2,3) - 120|292 for better flow
00:45:397 (3,4,1) - 240|96, 140|76, 152|248 ^
00:50:919 (2) - 200|220 ^ and i usually "slider break" there if you make it like that

ok, that's all from me, sorry for the short mod, because i can't really find anything wrong here. oh yeah, i can't really mod insanes, so i won't mod that :)
Good luck~
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
Hi there I'm still improving my modding skill

Hard
00:25:152 (3,1,2,3) - It's overlap problem but if it look OK for you then it's OK but I think it maybe bad for hard difficult (for insane it OK)
00:28:465 (1,2) - ^
01:03:434 (4,1,2) - ^
01:07:851 (3,1) - ^
01:09:692 (1,2,3) - Bad flow for me
01:33:066 (1) - Pardon me but why you put new combo here?
01:33:158 (1) - Change to 01:33:250 - to 01:36:195 - you should start a slider at white tick instead of blue tick because starting and/or ending spinner on a blue tick is bad

Insane
00:26:624 (5) - Moved this closer to (4) and (3) a little bit because it looks a little too far for me
00:48:710 - Add note here because the vocal haven't ended yet
00:58:281 (3) - This note is too far from (2) for me
01:11:716 (3,4) - Bad flow for me
01:33:158 (1) - Change to 01:33:250 - to 01:36:195 -

Please give me some feedback because I want to improve my modding skill
Good luck
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hi there I'm still improving my modding skill

Hard
00:25:152 (3,1,2,3) - It's overlap problem but if it look OK for you then it's OK but I think it maybe bad for hard difficult (for insane it OK) :arrow: it's ok
00:28:465 (1,2) - ^
01:03:434 (4,1,2) - ^
01:07:851 (3,1) - ^
01:09:692 (1,2,3) - Bad flow for me :arrow: good for me, less
01:33:066 (1) - Pardon me but why you put new combo here? :arrow: a strong beat needs NC
01:33:158 (1) - Change to 01:33:250 - to 01:36:195 - you should start a slider at white tick instead of blue tick because starting and/or ending spinner on a blue tick is bad :arrow: no

Insane
00:26:624 (5) - Moved this closer to (4) and (3) a little bit because it looks a little too far for me :arrow: this is Insane diff, you understand? @@
00:48:710 - Add note here because the vocal haven't ended yet :arrow: Follow drum in instrumental
00:58:281 (3) - This note is too far from (2) for me :arrow: Insane diff
01:11:716 (3,4) - Bad flow for me :arrow: good for me
01:33:158 (1) - Change to 01:33:250 - to 01:36:195 - :arrow: wrong end

Please give me some feedback because I want to improve my modding skill
Good luck
:arrow: I don't fix anything it means sorry but I willnot mod your map, but give kds not to waste your time

K4zuya K wrote:

M4M from your queue.
Hard
00:36:379 (2,3) - 120|292 for better flow :arrow: wrong DS
00:45:397 (3,4,1) - 240|96, 140|76, 152|248 ^ :arrow: no
00:50:919 (2) - 200|220 ^ and i usually "slider break" there if you make it like that :arrow: mine works well

ok, that's all from me, sorry for the short mod, because i can't really find anything wrong here. oh yeah, i can't really mod insanes, so i won't mod that :)
Good luck~

Alarido wrote:

Modding as requested in-game (:
[Insane]
00:31:777 (2,3,4,5,6) - Cosmetics: here, perhaps you could make a pentagon here, but I dunno how to do it without unstacking some notes like 00:30:673 (3,4) - or without messing with local spacings like 00:31:041 (4,5,1,2) - . Whatever you keep or not, the flow remains good (: :arrow: I think I will wait BAT's idea
00:36:931 (4) - Flow: why not move it to x:468 y:220 ? And, as a complement, moving the 00:36:563 (3)'s tail node by two grids right to became the new flow more evident. :arrow: Fixed
♥ Looks fine too.

[Hard]
♥ 00:37:851 (2,3,4,1) - AMAZING FLOW :3
00:51:471 (3) - Nazi: move the last anchor by 1 grid down, so this slider will get more parallel with the next one. :arrow: I think it was
01:16:501 (2) - Nazi: Disable Grid Snap and move the 1st anchor ro x:287 y:236. Or... get the code: :arrow: Mine still works well i think
287,236,76501,2,0,P|292:196|280:160,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
Oyatsu? Could you also check mods for my diff and eventually fix them, if they fit? Thanks :3
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

Wafu wrote:

Oyatsu? Could you also check mods for my diff and eventually fix them, if they fit? Thanks :3
OK, lemme :)

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From your M4M queue ~
[Wafu's Easy]
  1. 00:28:097 (2) - Move to x:212 y:348
  2. 00:29:569 (4) - I think its better to start NC from here ~ :arrow: no
  3. 00:32:882 (1) - Whistle but keep the finish ~ :arrow: can't use whistle S1
  4. 00:35:090 (4) - Clap but keep the whistle ~ ? :arrow: no
  5. 01:33:066 (2) - Move to x:288 y:144 :arrow: no anything changed
[Xinely's Normal]
  1. 00:14:845 (7) - Whistle ~ ? :arrow: no
Sorry for short mod ~ :c Good luck though ~ :D
Tks for modding
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
from Google docs! =w= This song is so cute, it makes me happy listening to it :D

[General]

Add guest diff people to tags~

[Laurier's Insane]

00:36:563 (3) - i feel like ctrl+G this slider would improve the circular flow for this pattern, and there would still be a jump to (4)
01:06:747 (1,2) - i know this song is quite relaxing, but consider turning these sliders into circle jumps to better match the vocals
01:17:422 (3) - add clap on head for consistency
01:18:158 (1,2) - move NC to (2) for new combo consistency?
01:22:575 (5) - i feel like the music here is undermapped with this slider :( the music has a stream and 1/4 beats here, and i think it would be cool to map it, since you mapped streams before, and it'd be a nice way to end kiai time. It's okay if you don't want to map it though :P

[Insane]

00:37:851 (3,4,5,6) - these jumps are pretty big for this section and seem a bit random to me because the music doesn't get stronger/more exciting... personally, I think you should make these jumps similar to 00:35:458 (5,6) and 00:36:931 (4,5) for consistency :P
00:44:477 (7) - clap on slider head for the snare!
00:48:158 (2,3) - this rhythm sounds odd to me, like you're trying to emphasize something that's not there D: maybe arrange like this? http://puu.sh/94sR2/c8b377fd38.jpg (or you could turn (3) and (4) in the screenshot into 1/1 slider)
00:51:839 (5,1) - this rhythm sounds weird to me too, since there is no strong sound on the head of (1), and the long vocal starts where (5) is... maybe try this? http://puu.sh/94sY2/2d41206a7d.jpg
00:55:704 (3,4,5,6) - flows a bit weirdly for me D: how about this? http://puu.sh/94t5L/b3f05e23c4.jpg
01:32:514 - add a note here and at 01:32:606 for the drums? pretty epic way to end the map :D

[Hard]

01:08:771 (2,3,4) - i think having the circle and then 2 sliders would fit the vocals a bit better

[Xinely's Normal]

00:15:213 (1) - the tail of this slider has a pretty strong sound in the music, maybe add a whistle
00:30:673 (2) - clap on slider tail~
00:36:747 (2) - clap on repeat
00:43:189 (2) - clap (custom or drum) on repeat?
01:16:317 (4) - eh fix blanket i guess, it's kinda noticable since it's the only blanket that's off
01:30:121 (4) - don't really see a need for this note D: there's no heavy beat or anything behind it

[Wafu's Easy]

00:16:685 (4) - add whistle to repeat? seems like a strong sound here

that's all~ nice set overall! :D good luck on your map
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

Raose wrote:

from Google docs! =w= This song is so cute, it makes me happy listening to it :D

[General]

Add guest diff people to tags~ :arrow: it was

[Insane]

00:37:851 (3,4,5,6) - these jumps are pretty big for this section and seem a bit random to me because the music doesn't get stronger/more exciting... personally, I think you should make these jumps similar to 00:35:458 (5,6) and 00:36:931 (4,5) for consistency :P :arrow: nope, i keep pattern :3
00:44:477 (7) - clap on slider head for the snare!
00:48:158 (2,3) - this rhythm sounds odd to me, like you're trying to emphasize something that's not there D: maybe arrange like this? http://puu.sh/94sR2/c8b377fd38.jpg (or you could turn (3) and (4) in the screenshot into 1/1 slider) :arrow: fixed first one
00:51:839 (5,1) - this rhythm sounds weird to me too, since there is no strong sound on the head of (1), and the long vocal starts where (5) is... maybe try this? http://puu.sh/94sY2/2d41206a7d.jpg :arrow: follow instrumental instead
00:55:704 (3,4,5,6) - flows a bit weirdly for me D: how about this? http://puu.sh/94t5L/b3f05e23c4.jpg :arrow: random jump :3
01:32:514 - add a note here and at 01:32:606 for the drums? pretty epic way to end the map :D :arrow: it is so small i think

[Hard]

01:08:771 (2,3,4) - i think having the circle and then 2 sliders would fit the vocals a bit better

[Wafu's Easy]

00:16:685 (4) - add whistle to repeat? seems like a strong sound here :arrow: it isn't blanket

that's all~ nice set overall! :D good luck on your map
No cmt=fixed, Thank you!~
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
sorry i can't reply every mod but i would say mostly fixed from Asphyxia and Raose mods
thanks ~

baka rank this
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: duca-chan!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59293
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9324,15213,21103,32882,44661
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Shiawase no Otoshimono
TitleUnicode:幸せのオトシモノ
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Oyatsu
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:your diary+
Tags:opening cube hentai eroge alchemist visual novel mao xinely wafu laurier plus yua ayase sayuki minagawa yuhi hirosaki kanade enomoto kaho fujimura natsuki
BeatmapID:347113
BeatmapSetID:137967

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Insane:
00:18:526 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern feels really weird to play. The stack made by 3 and 4 doesn't really fit with the jumpy-flowing movement you did previously. If you change the pattern to back and forth stacks it feels more natural to play. 2 and 3 stay the same, then 4 and 5 are stacked under.

Hard:
01:33:066 (1) - Bring this circle closer to the end of 01:32:698 (6) - ? I think it is a little too difficult because there was a 1/4 stack right before this and there was only 1 other 1/4 stack before at 01:22:391 (5) - . So that makes 1/4 stacks more of a challenge for this map because the player wasn't really expecting them. So making the jump closer is a lot more fair for the difficulty of this map.

Normal:
00:13:741 (4,5,6) - These notes are not in the rhythm of the song like 00:10:796 (3,4) - and 00:16:685 (3,4) - are. They should have rhythms like this so the rhythm is accurate for the new players.

This in red need to be fixed. Everything else is just a suggestion!
Call me for a recheck when you are done with the mod.
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

MMzz wrote:

Insane:
00:18:526 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern feels really weird to play. The stack made by 3 and 4 doesn't really fit with the jumpy-flowing movement you did previously. If you change the pattern to back and forth stacks it feels more natural to play. 2 and 3 stay the same, then 4 and 5 are stacked under. :arrow: fixed

Hard:
01:33:066 (1) - Bring this circle closer to the end of 01:32:698 (6) - ? I think it is a little too difficult because there was a 1/4 stack right before this and there was only 1 other 1/4 stack before at 01:22:391 (5) - . So that makes 1/4 stacks more of a challenge for this map because the player wasn't really expecting them. So making the jump closer is a lot more fair for the difficulty of this map. :arrow: Fixed to 1,78x. Still fine?
Wait for Xinely, Thank you for modding, MMzz-san :)
EDIT: Xinely fixed and updated too!!
MMzz
Elite Mapper
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MMzz
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Oyatsu
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Topic Starter
Oyatsu

MMzz wrote:

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Thank you, MMzz-san
To anyone, give me some amazing presents on 6 June plz >w< :)
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
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Akasha-
Wow, finally, congrats sensei >w<
Good luck on ranking in 6/6 >w< pls pls pls~
Nichiyouki
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Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki
I will wait this until this get to ranked

Go Oyatsu :3
Atrue
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Atrue
Hello~
From googledocs.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.


[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
[Wafu's Easy]
General
Well done~
Hitsound
00:17:238 - I guess you forgot to put a whistle here.
[Xinely's Normal]
General
Good job! I know the hitsound is your style and it's quite well~
Placement
01:21:471 (3) - Touching the HP bar.. Try to lean the slider more to avoid it... Example:
SPOILER
[Hard]
General
Good diff, but if you can make patterns more expanded, currently your notes are centralized in the middle of the screen~ Just saying it.. Nothing more than that~
[Insane]
General
Yes, also well done~
Beats
00:52:023 (1) - Hmm.. The 3/4 slider is not reasonable, the drum is at 00:52:207 , and there is no sign in vocal here to show it is a 3/4.. So I suggest using 1/2 slider instead. Example:
SPOILER
Placement
00:29:937 (1) - It's touching the HP bar.. See my example:
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Hitsound
00:17:238 - You need a whistle here imo..
00:20:366 - Add volume here to about 40% to better fit the music?
00:43:557 - Not sure but quite good when you put a clap here, and here is a suitable position for a clap.
00:48:526 - Not suitable for a clap. The drum is in the same weight with 00:48:158 , and adding a clap only on it is not reasonable, when adding on both of it is also not good to hear.
[Laurier's Insane]
General
Well done. Some little thing to say.
Placement
00:25:520 (1) - It's touching the HP bar.. Move it a bit down to avoid it. Example:
SPOILER
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Hitsound
00:20:366 - Add volume here to about 40% to better fit the music? Not bad imo.
00:58:465 - Yes, the triplet needs more hit feeling on it, the vocal and music is becoming stronger and soft-hitnormal is not enough here.. So I think a clap is needed here.
00:59:017 - Here is the same reason as above, but I'm not quite sure about here, maybe the 2 kick sliders need equal hit feeling. But personally I'd prefer adding weight to the 2 sliders. So you can either add clap here, or both the head of the 2 sliders.
01:17:422 - I'm not sure.. But maybe you missed a clap here.
(01:20:366 - here the clap is really weak, and I noticed you lowered the volume here on purpose, maybe the volume is related with the whistle here, but imo claps are better to be more obvious to be symbol of beats.. I don't know what do you think of it.. Just saying it here.)
NCs
01:21:103 (6) - For the slider, I think it has a acceleration on it and the pattern is quite obvious here, so you can add an NC at 01:20:735 (4) - to emphasize the pattern and the acceleration.
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.:)

Call me back when you are ready~ :3
Xinely
5,014 posts
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Xinely

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From googledocs.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.


[Xinely's Normal]
General
Good job! I know the hitsound is your style and it's quite well~ \:D/
Placement
01:21:471 (3) - Touching the HP bar.. Try to lean the slider more to avoid it... Example: fixed in other way
SPOILER

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.:)

Call me back when you are ready~ :3

thank you Atrue :3

~
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Oyatsu
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Topic Starter
Oyatsu

Atrue wrote:

Hello~ :arrow: hi!
From googledocs.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
:arrow: What colors? =w=


[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
[Wafu's Easy]
General
Well done~
Hitsound
00:17:238 - I guess you forgot to put a whistle here. :arrow: fixed

[Hard]
General
Good diff, but if you can make patterns more expanded, currently your notes are centralized in the middle of the screen~ Just saying it.. Nothing more than that~ :arrow: idk but it is eroor I often meet, maybe my style is like that, I will try some more interesting pattern in next maps :3

[Insane]
General
Yes, also well done~
Beats
00:52:023 (1) - Hmm.. The 3/4 slider is not reasonable, the drum is at 00:52:207 , and there is no sign in vocal here to show it is a 3/4.. So I suggest using 1/2 slider instead. Example: :arrow: Fixed
SPOILER
Placement
00:29:937 (1) - It's touching the HP bar.. See my example: :arrow: I want to blanket with (2) =w=
SPOILER
368,128,29937,6,0,P|324:36|236:24,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Hitsound
00:17:238 - You need a whistle here imo.. :arrow: fixed
00:20:366 - Add volume here to about 40% to better fit the music? :arrow: ok
00:43:557 - Not sure but quite good when you put a clap here, and here is a suitable position for a clap. :arrow: not i think, I added whistle maybe it is better
00:48:526 - Not suitable for a clap. The drum is in the same weight with 00:48:158 , and adding a clap only on it is not reasonable, when adding on both of it is also not good to hear. :arrow: fixed to whistle
Wait for Laurier!! Thank you for modding, Atrue >w<
Laurier
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Laurier
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