Fixed few details from last two mods. Thanks.
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Topic Starter
Fixed something. I really am appreciate it just some thing isn't similar to my opinionwendao2000 wrote:
hello, requested via in-game
nothing particular to fix, all just my suggestion
[General]
you might want to delete op and vn coz they're not searchableyea I didn't relize this. Deleted!
01:33:158 (1) - expand by 1/4 snap forward? `-`
[Hard]
you did it well here
00:38:035 (3,4,1) - how about thisSPOILER00:51:471 (3) - last node to 372,112100,188,38035,2,0,P|73:164|51:119,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,221,38403,2,0,P|163:255|134:297,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,144,38771,6,0,P|197:133|248:136,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:09:692 (1,2,3) - woob woobSPOILER01:32:698 (5,6) - how about revert? *Ctrl + G*106,185,69692,6,0,P|72:211|52:246,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,148,70060,2,0,P|189:105|169:70,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,244,70428,2,0,P|224:260|264:260,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Not Recommended
01:17:054 (1,2,3) - hello *look picture*SPOILER152,160,77054,6,8,P|141:196|151:230,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,124,77422,2,8,P|193:96|159:87,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,199,77790,2,0,P|256:189|281:164,2,70,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Insane]
00:13:741 (1,2,3) - make a proper triangle? *(3) move to 280,128*
00:16:870 (2,6) - stack to 00:15:581 (2)
00:17:054 (3,4) - how about liek this *distance from (1) to (3) and (2) to (4) are same*
=>00:17:606 (5) - you can move this along with above mod
00:27:360 (2) - 2nd node to 216,204 so you can stack 00:28:097 (5) - properly with (2)'s slider
00:28:833 (2,3,4) - triangle? *(4) move to 256,80*
00:29:569 (5) - delete this, copy from (4), then rotate 240 degrees clockwise, and re-stack to (3), that's better
00:31:225 (6) - move to 188,256 for equal jump
00:31:777 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about make a proper pentagon here?
00:35:827 (1) - stack with 00:31:962 (4)? *move 1 grid up and right*
=>00:35:458 (5,6,1) - *do it after above mod* make a triangle pattern here, (6) move to 148,288
00:40:060 (4) - how about stack with 00:38:035 (4)
00:44:293 (6,7,1) - woah, this quite trappy here, i prefer 1.0x multiplier at 00:44:661 (1) - and 0.8 multiplier start from 00:45:029 (2)
00:50:182 (5,6) - i prefer revert the notes (Ctrl + G)
00:55:888 (4) - stack with previous (4)'s slider head
=>00:56:072 (5) - move to 276,324
==>00:56:440 (1) - move to 380,192
===>tada, you have done a proper triangle pattern for 00:56:072 (5,6,1)
====>00:56:808 (2,3,4,5,6) - move this as you want
00:59:017 (6) - New Combo here?
01:05:274 (1,2) - how about this
01:09:692 (1) - stack here
01:10:428 (1,2,3,4) - how about proper square pattern here? *delete (3,4). Copy from (1,2), then rotate 90 degrees clockwise with selection as center*
01:15:029 (5) - 3rd node 1 grid down
01:16:501 (4,5,6) - need more triangle stuff!!! *(4) move to 120,152*
01:19:630 (5,6,1) - even more triangle!! *(6) move to 332,128
01:20:735 (1) - stack
01:23:495 (2) - NC
01:24:231 (4) - NC here too
01:26:440 (2) - even hereeeee too
01:27:176 (5) - woob woob, here too
01:30:121 (5) - bang!
01:32:698 (6) - dub dub
01:32:882 (7) - finally, here!
Hay là đổi tên diff Insane của Oyatsu thành Extra, tại có diff Insane rồi!
Topic Starter
tuy theo * ma extra hay ko, vs lai oyatsu ko thik cai doKuo Kyoka wrote:
Hay là đổi tên diff Insane của Oyatsu thành Extra, tại có diff Insane rồi!
From your queue
Cut the mp3 from 00:08:587 -
Your diary + H
:3
[Laurier's Insane]
00:22:575 (1) - Ctrl+G better flow
00:24:047 (1,1) - 336,56
00:36:931 (4,5) - swap
01:02:514 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526922 this rhythme will be better
GJ
[Insane]
00:11:900 (6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526935
00:17:974 (6) - 256,156
00:19:262 (6) - 128,196
00:29:937 (1,2) - 332,136
00:37:115 (5) - 372,280
00:45:949 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:54:231 (4) - Ctrl+G
>00:54:784 (5) - 236,68
00:56:992 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526945 better flow
01:11:716 (3) - Ctrl+G
>01:12:084 (4,6) - swap
01:15:029 (5) - 512,116
01:18:526 (1) - 260,208
GJ
[Hard]
00:28:465 (1) - 2nd point 104,88
00:29:937 (1) - 1st point 404,256 2nd point 428,200
[Xinely's Normal]
Hi~
drum really get not much using except map contest,sounds strange here._.
01:16:317 (4) - not blanked well
Nothing found:3
[Wafu's Easy]
Hi~wafu :3
00:19:630 (4) - 156,248
00:22:575 (2,2) - overlap?
00:22:943 (3,3) - ^
01:02:330 (1) - 2nd point 120,208 last point 100,200
01:32:698 - 1/1 slider
Editing finished:3
Cut the mp3 from 00:08:587 -
Your diary + H
:3
[Laurier's Insane]
00:22:575 (1) - Ctrl+G better flow
00:24:047 (1,1) - 336,56
00:36:931 (4,5) - swap
01:02:514 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526922 this rhythme will be better
GJ
[Insane]
00:11:900 (6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526935
00:17:974 (6) - 256,156
00:19:262 (6) - 128,196
00:29:937 (1,2) - 332,136
00:37:115 (5) - 372,280
00:45:949 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:54:231 (4) - Ctrl+G
>00:54:784 (5) - 236,68
00:56:992 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526945 better flow
01:11:716 (3) - Ctrl+G
>01:12:084 (4,6) - swap
01:15:029 (5) - 512,116
01:18:526 (1) - 260,208
GJ
[Hard]
00:28:465 (1) - 2nd point 104,88
00:29:937 (1) - 1st point 404,256 2nd point 428,200
[Xinely's Normal]
Hi~
drum really get not much using except map contest,sounds strange here._.
01:16:317 (4) - not blanked well
Nothing found:3
[Wafu's Easy]
Hi~wafu :3
00:19:630 (4) - 156,248
00:22:575 (2,2) - overlap?
00:22:943 (3,3) - ^
01:02:330 (1) - 2nd point 120,208 last point 100,200
01:32:698 - 1/1 slider
Editing finished:3
M4M
Disable widescreen support because you didn't have storyboard
[Easy]
00:10:428 (2) - would probably nice if you remove whistle?
00:13:373 (2) - ^
00:15:213 (1) - remove whistle at the end of the slider
00:16:317 (3) - would probably nice if you remove whistle?
00:16:685 (4) - would probably nice if you add whistle into the reverse arrow part?
00:18:158 (1) - remove whistle at the end of the slider
00:19:262 (3) - would probably nice if you add whistle
[normal]
01:21:471 (3) - did you actually forget to add NC?
[hard]
00:17:054 (2) - add whistle at the end of the slider?
00:18:158 (1) - add whistle at the beginning of the slider?
[Laurier's Insane]
I suck at modding insane diffs
00:13:741 (1) - add whistle?
00:16:685 (1) - ^
Disable widescreen support because you didn't have storyboard
[Easy]
00:10:428 (2) - would probably nice if you remove whistle?
00:13:373 (2) - ^
00:15:213 (1) - remove whistle at the end of the slider
00:16:317 (3) - would probably nice if you remove whistle?
00:16:685 (4) - would probably nice if you add whistle into the reverse arrow part?
00:18:158 (1) - remove whistle at the end of the slider
00:19:262 (3) - would probably nice if you add whistle
[normal]
01:21:471 (3) - did you actually forget to add NC?
[hard]
00:17:054 (2) - add whistle at the end of the slider?
00:18:158 (1) - add whistle at the beginning of the slider?
[Laurier's Insane]
I suck at modding insane diffs
00:13:741 (1) - add whistle?
00:16:685 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
ts8zs wrote:
From your queue
Cut the mp3 from 00:08:587 -
Your diary + H
[Insane]
00:11:900 (6,7) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526935
00:17:974 (6) - 256,156
00:19:262 (6) - 128,196
00:29:937 (1,2) - 332,136
00:37:115 (5) - 372,280
00:45:949 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:54:231 (4) - Ctrl+G
>00:54:784 (5) - 236,68
00:56:992 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1526945 better flow
01:11:716 (3) - Ctrl+G
>01:12:084 (4,6) - swap
01:15:029 (5) - 512,116
01:18:526 (1) - 260,208
GJ
[Hard]
00:28:465 (1) - 2nd point 104,88
00:29:937 (1) - 1st point 404,256 2nd point 428,200
No cmt= fixed. Thank you for modding!vahn10 wrote:
M4M
Disable widescreen support because you didn't have storyboard
[hard]
00:17:054 (2) - add whistle at the end of the slider?
00:18:158 (1) - add whistle at the beginning of the slider?
No change. The hitsounds are just supposed to be consistent with Oyatsu's difficulty. If they stay on his diff like this, I will keep them, and I think they should stay, they sound well. Sorry.
Topic Starter
Updated all! Only wait Xinely!
As your request! Sorry for late T^T
<3<3<3
[General]
Fine~
[Easy]
Nice Work <3
I suggest, 00:09:324 - Why added Inherbited Point lol..
[Normal]
Nice Work, too
But 01:09:692 - That part adds some notes is better, It's little bit unexpected spinner.
[Hard]
00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.
00:42:820 (4) - Spacing is better >3< like 00:32:514 (4,5) -
00:57:912 (1) - I suggest to far away from (4) slider.
01:27:728 (4) - Remove NC
Pro~
[Insane]
00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.
00:20:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - little bit weird curve shape.
00:24:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - These parts make like [img=http://puu.sh/8SsS9.jpg]this[/img] is better.
00:53:863 - Add Note here, Feels Empty :/
[Laurier's Insane]
00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.
00:59:753 (2) - 1 grid up.
Fine~
[Easy]
Nice Work <3
I suggest, 00:09:324 - Why added Inherbited Point lol..
[Normal]
Nice Work, too
But 01:09:692 - That part adds some notes is better, It's little bit unexpected spinner.
[Hard]
00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.
00:42:820 (4) - Spacing is better >3< like 00:32:514 (4,5) -
00:57:912 (1) - I suggest to far away from (4) slider.
01:27:728 (4) - Remove NC
Pro~
[Insane]
00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.
00:20:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - little bit weird curve shape.
00:24:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - These parts make like [img=http://puu.sh/8SsS9.jpg]this[/img] is better.
00:53:863 - Add Note here, Feels Empty :/
[Laurier's Insane]
00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.
00:59:753 (2) - 1 grid up.
<3<3<3
Topic Starter
Thank you for modding! Nocmt = fixedW h i t e wrote:
As your request! Sorry for late T^T[General]
Fine~
[Easy]
Nice Work <3
I suggest, 00:09:324 - Why added Inherbited Point lol..
[Normal]
Nice Work, too
But 01:09:692 - That part adds some notes is better, It's little bit unexpected spinner.
[Hard]
00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.
00:42:820 (4) - Spacing is better >3< like 00:32:514 (4,5) -
00:57:912 (1) - I suggest to far away from (4) slider.
01:27:728 (4) - Remove NC
Pro~
[Insane]
00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.
00:20:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - little bit weird curve shape.
00:24:047 (1,2,3,4,5) - These parts make like [img=http://puu.sh/8SsS9.jpg]this[/img] is better.
00:53:863 - Add Note here, Feels Empty :/
[Laurier's Insane]
00:09:324 - Same as Easy diff.
00:59:753 (2) - 1 grid up.
<3<3<3
QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ
[Laurier's Insane]
00:26:992 (1,2,3) - スライダーの頭同士でスペーシングを考えたほうが様さそうです。 そちらの方が私としてはきれいにみえます。
00:31:409 (1) - 00:32:146 (3)のblanket使うのはどうでしょう？
00:39:508 (4) - x:447 y:160 00:39:508 (4,6,1)のスペーシングだけを考えると・・・ 00:40:980 (3)はどっかに持っていってくださいｗｗｗｗｗ
00:47:054 (4,5) - spacingが気になります
00:46:501 (2,3,4) - 00:47:238 (5)のblanket使うのもwelcome
00:50:550 (1) - 直感的に00:50:735 (2)の頭に重ねたほうがいいと思った 重ねたら00:49:446 (2)の頭に重ねてみては？
01:10:612 (7) - 1/2の休みがありますのでこれをｗ
01:17:422 (3) - Add Clap なんで鈴の音でないのなぁ? 直し方わからな～い
01:29:937 (4,1,2) - 頭のspacingのずれてる？
[Insane]
00:18:526 (2,5) - I don't feel good at this section. x:29 :180
00:44:661 (1,2) - Spacing miss. change to like 00:45:213 (3,4,5).
00:48:526 (3,1) - Stack perfectly for the flow. According to 00:50:550 (1,2) , 01:07:851 (5,1)
00:59:753 (2,3) - Ctrl+ G
01:20:366 (1) - Delete NC. because 01:19:998 (1,1)'s spacing is shorter than 01:20:366 (1,1).
01:21:103 (1) - ^
01:24:231 (4) - NC?
[Hard]
00:50:550 (1,2,3) - use 00:50:182 (3)'s blanket?
00:52:391 (2) - Change it to 1/2 slider and circle?
01:32:514 (5,6) - these hit sounds too low.
[Xinely's Normal]
00:21:839 (1) - change it to slider? why don't you do that? This slider would be far from spin, right?
00:55:336 (5) - Change it to reverse slider?
01:04:354 - delete Whistle. because you always Whistle on every the begining of slider.
01:26:733 - bass sound too loud. 50% is better imo.
[Wafu's Easy]
00:22:575 (2,2) - stack perfectly
(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ
GOOD LUCK!
[Laurier's Insane]
00:26:992 (1,2,3) - スライダーの頭同士でスペーシングを考えたほうが様さそうです。 そちらの方が私としてはきれいにみえます。
00:31:409 (1) - 00:32:146 (3)のblanket使うのはどうでしょう？
00:39:508 (4) - x:447 y:160 00:39:508 (4,6,1)のスペーシングだけを考えると・・・ 00:40:980 (3)はどっかに持っていってくださいｗｗｗｗｗ
00:47:054 (4,5) - spacingが気になります
00:46:501 (2,3,4) - 00:47:238 (5)のblanket使うのもwelcome
00:50:550 (1) - 直感的に00:50:735 (2)の頭に重ねたほうがいいと思った 重ねたら00:49:446 (2)の頭に重ねてみては？
01:10:612 (7) - 1/2の休みがありますのでこれをｗ
01:17:422 (3) - Add Clap なんで鈴の音でないのなぁ? 直し方わからな～い
01:29:937 (4,1,2) - 頭のspacingのずれてる？
[Insane]
00:18:526 (2,5) - I don't feel good at this section. x:29 :180
00:44:661 (1,2) - Spacing miss. change to like 00:45:213 (3,4,5).
00:48:526 (3,1) - Stack perfectly for the flow. According to 00:50:550 (1,2) , 01:07:851 (5,1)
00:59:753 (2,3) - Ctrl+ G
01:20:366 (1) - Delete NC. because 01:19:998 (1,1)'s spacing is shorter than 01:20:366 (1,1).
01:21:103 (1) - ^
01:24:231 (4) - NC?
[Hard]
00:50:550 (1,2,3) - use 00:50:182 (3)'s blanket?
00:52:391 (2) - Change it to 1/2 slider and circle?
01:32:514 (5,6) - these hit sounds too low.
[Xinely's Normal]
00:21:839 (1) - change it to slider? why don't you do that? This slider would be far from spin, right?
00:55:336 (5) - Change it to reverse slider?
01:04:354 - delete Whistle. because you always Whistle on every the begining of slider.
01:26:733 - bass sound too loud. 50% is better imo.
[Wafu's Easy]
00:22:575 (2,2) - stack perfectly
(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ
GOOD LUCK!
no change
Topic Starter
No cmt=fixed, thank you for modding and star!! =w=waxman wrote:
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[Insane]
00:18:526 (2,5) - I don't feel good at this section. x:29 :180
00:44:661 (1,2) - Spacing miss. change to like 00:45:213 (3,4,5).
00:48:526 (3,1) - Stack perfectly for the flow. According to 00:50:550 (1,2) , 01:07:851 (5,1)
00:59:753 (2,3) - Ctrl+ G
01:20:366 (1) - Delete NC. because 01:19:998 (1,1)'s spacing is shorter than 01:20:366 (1,1).
01:21:103 (1) - ^
01:24:231 (4) - NC?
[Hard]
00:50:550 (1,2,3) - use 00:50:182 (3)'s blanket?
00:52:391 (2) - Change it to 1/2 slider and circle?
01:32:514 (5,6) - these hit sounds too low.
[Xinely's Normal]
00:21:839 (1) - change it to slider? why don't you do that? This slider would be far from spin, right?
00:55:336 (5) - Change it to reverse slider?
01:04:354 - delete Whistle. because you always Whistle on every the begining of slider.
01:26:733 - bass sound too loud. 50% is better imo.
[Wafu's Easy]
00:22:575 (2,2) - stack perfectly
(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ
GOOD LUCK!
About the stack, I think Oyatsu fixed it, but I don't think it was sensible, when there was 3 secs gap. It was invisible when playing. Just saying.
M4M
[Wafu's Easy]
- Mm, so many ignored blankets it makes me sad :/ It'd be nice of you to fix them, like 00:09:324 (1,2) - , 00:19:262 (3,4) - , 00:24:047 (1,2) - and 00:26:992 (1,2) - for example.
- 00:10:796 (3) - While I do think this slider is fine, you can curve it more to create a better effect with 00:09:324 (1) - and it'd fit better with the next slider too.
- 00:13:741 (3) - To be consistent, do it here too.
- 00:16:685 (4) - An optional place for this slider could be x:332 y:84, this way it allows 00:15:949 (2,3) - to have a better triangle!
- 00:26:624 (4) - I somehow prefer downcurve instead of an upcurve here, so that being said, you can move the note to x:256 y:200 if you want to.
- 00:29:937 (1) - End point could be moved to x:132 y:116 for a smoother curve
- 00:38:403 (4) - As I stated few suggestions back, a downcurve would fit really well here, although if you didn't apply the other one, don't bother to apply this.
- This difficulty is fine although it could have been a lot better if you wouldn't ignore all of your blankets
- 00:15:213 (1,2) - Blanket
- 00:25:520 (2,3) - Since the slider 00:24:047 (1) - was curved, curved sliders could work better in this combo and flow would be cute >w< might wanna try to rearranging them like this; http://puu.sh/8TLm3.jpg Just a personal preference here
- 00:38:035 (4,1) - MmMMmM blanket
- 00:55:704 - This gap here seems awkwardly odd, you could add a note to prevent this, would follow the vocals fairly well too.
- 00:25:152 (3,1,2,3) - I don't like this for few reasons. Because you're overlapping, either make it more noticeable or don't overlap things, mainly because now 00:25:520 (1,3) - looks very unclean. So what you do here is 00:25:520 (1) - move to x:244 y:296 because then the overlap is totally focused in the sliders middle of body > move 00:26:072 (2,3) - further away so it wont overlap. Pic here: http://puu.sh/8TLDa.jpg
- 00:32:514 (4,5) - The sudden inconsistent jump makes it awkward to play, there's really not a intense part here so doing this doesn't make sense imo, consider using normal spacing
- 00:42:820 (4) - ^
- 00:57:912 (1) - Okay so here I get the spacing increase, but this note should have the higher spacing too due to the strong part of the music, not only 00:58:097 (2,3,4,5) - , so move 1 to x:432 y:256 for a nice triangle and equal spacing? http://puu.sh/8TLML.jpg
- 01:03:802 (1) - Curve this more so it'd fit better with your current pattern while also making the overlap going to the middle of this slider's body, then move 01:04:354 (2) - a bit so it gets overlapped perfectly in the middle xD -> picture http://puu.sh/8TLVP.jpg
- 00:09:692 (3) - Red point makes it unfitting with the mapset itself, kinda awkward now, a basic curved slider would work better imo
- 00:35:827 (1,2) - Due to your high spacing sometimes, this is really confusing and I think always that 2 starts 1/4 earlier, so because of this, give it more spacing between those two?
- 00:44:661 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange them like this? http://puu.sh/8TMd4.jpg Would make a nice square while improving the flow there
- 00:49:446 (3,4) - As said earlier, adding more spacing wouldn't hurt due to the confusion it might give
- 01:05:643 (2,3) - Blanket
- I guess it's cool
Thanks for your mod.Asphyxia wrote:
[Wafu's Easy]
- Mm, so many ignored blankets it makes me sad :/ It'd be nice of you to fix them, like 00:09:324 (1,2) - , 00:19:262 (3,4) - , 00:24:047 (1,2) - and 00:26:992 (1,2) - for example. Not sure if I understood 100% well.. some blankets were unsymmetrical, so I made them all to be the same distance from start and end point, what basically means it is exactly in center of that slider. Applied to all blankets, so they should be more polished. If you meant adding more blankets, then sorry, but I didn't want to spam them that much.
- 00:10:796 (3) - While I do think this slider is fine, you can curve it more to create a better effect with 00:09:324 (1) - and it'd fit better with the next slider too. Fixed
- 00:13:741 (3) - To be consistent, do it here too. Fixed
- 00:16:685 (4) - An optional place for this slider could be x:332 y:84, this way it allows 00:15:949 (2,3) - to have a better triangle! Fixed
- 00:26:624 (4) - I somehow prefer downcurve instead of an upcurve here, so that being said, you can move the note to x:256 y:200 if you want to. I didn't fix this exactly as you recommended, but I think I know what was the point, so I changed it as I thought you might like it, we'll see.
- 00:29:937 (1) - End point could be moved to x:132 y:116 for a smoother curve Minor, but yeah, fixed
- 00:38:403 (4) - As I stated few suggestions back, a downcurve would fit really well here, although if you didn't apply the other one, don't bother to apply this. This is same as I answered before. I think I know what do you mean, so I changed it so it should be fine.
- This difficulty is fine although it could have been a lot better if you wouldn't ignore all of your blankets
Topic Starter
No cmt=fixed, thank you for modding! Updated Wafu's Easy tooAsphyxia wrote:
M4M
[Hard][Insane]
- 00:25:152 (3,1,2,3) - I don't like this for few reasons. Because you're overlapping, either make it more noticeable or don't overlap things, mainly because now 00:25:520 (1,3) - looks very unclean. So what you do here is 00:25:520 (1) - move to x:244 y:296 because then the overlap is totally focused in the sliders middle of body > move 00:26:072 (2,3) - further away so it wont overlap. Pic here: http://puu.sh/8TLDa.jpg
- 00:32:514 (4,5) - The sudden inconsistent jump makes it awkward to play, there's really not a intense part here so doing this doesn't make sense imo, consider using normal spacing
- 00:42:820 (4) - ^
- 00:57:912 (1) - Okay so here I get the spacing increase, but this note should have the higher spacing too due to the strong part of the music, not only 00:58:097 (2,3,4,5) - , so move 1 to x:432 y:256 for a nice triangle and equal spacing? http://puu.sh/8TLML.jpg
- 01:03:802 (1) - Curve this more so it'd fit better with your current pattern while also making the overlap going to the middle of this slider's body, then move 01:04:354 (2) - a bit so it gets overlapped perfectly in the middle xD -> picture http://puu.sh/8TLVP.jpg
Other Insane is nicely done, played really well. GL with your mapset~
- 00:09:692 (3) - Red point makes it unfitting with the mapset itself, kinda awkward now, a basic curved slider would work better imo
- 00:35:827 (1,2) - Due to your high spacing sometimes, this is really confusing and I think always that 2 starts 1/4 earlier, so because of this, give it more spacing between those two?
- 00:44:661 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange them like this? http://puu.sh/8TMd4.jpg Would make a nice square while improving the flow there
- 00:49:446 (3,4) - As said earlier, adding more spacing wouldn't hurt due to the confusion it might give
- 01:05:643 (2,3) - Blanket
- I guess it's cool
From your M4M queue ~
[Wafu's Easy]
[Wafu's Easy]
- 00:28:097 (2) - Move to x:212 y:348
- 00:29:569 (4) - I think its better to start NC from here ~
- 00:32:882 (1) - Whistle but keep the finish ~
- 00:35:090 (4) - Clap but keep the whistle ~ ?
- 01:33:066 (2) - Move to x:288 y:144
- 00:14:845 (7) - Whistle ~ ?
Modding as requested in-game (:
Sorry for the late.... let's go
That's all (: Good luck and let's rank (:
Att.
Sorry for the late.... let's go
[Laurier's Insane]
♥ 00:54:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Loved this flow (: it reminds me some lfj's style
♥ This diff looks fine (:
[Insane]
00:31:777 (2,3,4,5,6) - Cosmetics: here, perhaps you could make a pentagon here, but I dunno how to do it without unstacking some notes like 00:30:673 (3,4) - or without messing with local spacings like 00:31:041 (4,5,1,2) - . Whatever you keep or not, the flow remains good (:
00:36:931 (4) - Flow: why not move it to x:468 y:220 ? And, as a complement, moving the 00:36:563 (3)'s tail node by two grids right to became the new flow more evident.
♥ Looks fine too.
[Hard]
♥ 00:37:851 (2,3,4,1) - AMAZING FLOW :3
00:51:471 (3) - Nazi: move the last anchor by 1 grid down, so this slider will get more parallel with the next one.
01:16:501 (2) - Nazi: Disable Grid Snap and move the 1st anchor ro x:287 y:236. Or... get the code:
[Xinely's Normal]
♥ Feels good (:
[Wafu's Easy]
♥ Very nice C:
♥ 00:54:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Loved this flow (: it reminds me some lfj's style
♥ This diff looks fine (:
[Insane]
00:31:777 (2,3,4,5,6) - Cosmetics: here, perhaps you could make a pentagon here, but I dunno how to do it without unstacking some notes like 00:30:673 (3,4) - or without messing with local spacings like 00:31:041 (4,5,1,2) - . Whatever you keep or not, the flow remains good (:
00:36:931 (4) - Flow: why not move it to x:468 y:220 ? And, as a complement, moving the 00:36:563 (3)'s tail node by two grids right to became the new flow more evident.
♥ Looks fine too.
[Hard]
♥ 00:37:851 (2,3,4,1) - AMAZING FLOW :3
00:51:471 (3) - Nazi: move the last anchor by 1 grid down, so this slider will get more parallel with the next one.
01:16:501 (2) - Nazi: Disable Grid Snap and move the 1st anchor ro x:287 y:236. Or... get the code:
287,236,76501,2,0,P|292:196|280:160,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:♥ Nice diff (:
[Xinely's Normal]
♥ Feels good (:
[Wafu's Easy]
♥ Very nice C:
That's all (: Good luck and let's rank (:
Att.
Unusual-bot
M4M from your queue.
Well, how should i say this.......errrr, all what i say here are only suggestion, so it's up to you to follow it or not, but please reply my mod (to improve my modding style ).
Ok, let's start then
Wafu's Easy
Well, it's good, i can't really find anything wrong here
Xinely's Normal
00:43:925 (3) - 316|196 for better flow
00:47:606 (1) - 260|332 ^
00:54:231 (2,3,4,5) - how about making it into something like this or something like that?
01:05:274 (1,2) - 448|192 for better flow
01:06:747 (3) - 188|24 ^
01:17:054 (1) - 264|236 ^
Hard
00:36:379 (2,3) - 120|292 for better flow
00:45:397 (3,4,1) - 240|96, 140|76, 152|248 ^
00:50:919 (2) - 200|220 ^ and i usually "slider break" there if you make it like that
ok, that's all from me, sorry for the short mod, because i can't really find anything wrong here. oh yeah, i can't really mod insanes, so i won't mod that
Good luck~
Well, how should i say this.......errrr, all what i say here are only suggestion, so it's up to you to follow it or not, but please reply my mod (to improve my modding style
).Ok, let's start then
Wafu's Easy
Well, it's good, i can't really find anything wrong here
Xinely's Normal
00:43:925 (3) - 316|196 for better flow
00:47:606 (1) - 260|332 ^
00:54:231 (2,3,4,5) - how about making it into something like this or something like that?
01:05:274 (1,2) - 448|192 for better flow
01:06:747 (3) - 188|24 ^
01:17:054 (1) - 264|236 ^
Hard
00:36:379 (2,3) - 120|292 for better flow
00:45:397 (3,4,1) - 240|96, 140|76, 152|248 ^
00:50:919 (2) - 200|220 ^ and i usually "slider break" there if you make it like that
ok, that's all from me, sorry for the short mod, because i can't really find anything wrong here. oh yeah, i can't really mod insanes, so i won't mod that
Good luck~
Hi there I'm still improving my modding skill
Hard
00:25:152 (3,1,2,3) - It's overlap problem but if it look OK for you then it's OK but I think it maybe bad for hard difficult (for insane it OK)
00:28:465 (1,2) - ^
01:03:434 (4,1,2) - ^
01:07:851 (3,1) - ^
01:09:692 (1,2,3) - Bad flow for me
01:33:066 (1) - Pardon me but why you put new combo here?
01:33:158 (1) - Change to 01:33:250 - to 01:36:195 - you should start a slider at white tick instead of blue tick because starting and/or ending spinner on a blue tick is bad
Insane
00:26:624 (5) - Moved this closer to (4) and (3) a little bit because it looks a little too far for me
00:48:710 - Add note here because the vocal haven't ended yet
00:58:281 (3) - This note is too far from (2) for me
01:11:716 (3,4) - Bad flow for me
01:33:158 (1) - Change to 01:33:250 - to 01:36:195 -
Please give me some feedback because I want to improve my modding skill
Good luck
Hard
00:25:152 (3,1,2,3) - It's overlap problem but if it look OK for you then it's OK but I think it maybe bad for hard difficult (for insane it OK)
00:28:465 (1,2) - ^
01:03:434 (4,1,2) - ^
01:07:851 (3,1) - ^
01:09:692 (1,2,3) - Bad flow for me
01:33:066 (1) - Pardon me but why you put new combo here?
01:33:158 (1) - Change to 01:33:250 - to 01:36:195 - you should start a slider at white tick instead of blue tick because starting and/or ending spinner on a blue tick is bad
Insane
00:26:624 (5) - Moved this closer to (4) and (3) a little bit because it looks a little too far for me
00:48:710 - Add note here because the vocal haven't ended yet
00:58:281 (3) - This note is too far from (2) for me
01:11:716 (3,4) - Bad flow for me
01:33:158 (1) - Change to 01:33:250 - to 01:36:195 -
Please give me some feedback because I want to improve my modding skill
Good luck
Topic Starter
CelsiusLK wrote:
Hi there I'm still improving my modding skill
Hard
00:25:152 (3,1,2,3) - It's overlap problem but if it look OK for you then it's OK but I think it maybe bad for hard difficult (for insane it OK)
00:28:465 (1,2) - ^
01:03:434 (4,1,2) - ^
01:07:851 (3,1) - ^
01:09:692 (1,2,3) - Bad flow for me
01:33:066 (1) - Pardon me but why you put new combo here?
01:33:158 (1) - Change to 01:33:250 - to 01:36:195 - you should start a slider at white tick instead of blue tick because starting and/or ending spinner on a blue tick is bad
Insane
00:26:624 (5) - Moved this closer to (4) and (3) a little bit because it looks a little too far for me
00:48:710 - Add note here because the vocal haven't ended yet
00:58:281 (3) - This note is too far from (2) for me
01:11:716 (3,4) - Bad flow for me
01:33:158 (1) - Change to 01:33:250 - to 01:36:195 -
Please give me some feedback because I want to improve my modding skill
Good luck
K4zuya K wrote:
M4M from your queue.
Hard
00:36:379 (2,3) - 120|292 for better flow
00:45:397 (3,4,1) - 240|96, 140|76, 152|248 ^
00:50:919 (2) - 200|220 ^ and i usually "slider break" there if you make it like that
ok, that's all from me, sorry for the short mod, because i can't really find anything wrong here. oh yeah, i can't really mod insanes, so i won't mod that
Good luck~
Alarido wrote:
Modding as requested in-game (:
[Insane]
00:31:777 (2,3,4,5,6) - Cosmetics: here, perhaps you could make a pentagon here, but I dunno how to do it without unstacking some notes like 00:30:673 (3,4) - or without messing with local spacings like 00:31:041 (4,5,1,2) - . Whatever you keep or not, the flow remains good (:
00:36:931 (4) - Flow: why not move it to x:468 y:220 ? And, as a complement, moving the 00:36:563 (3)'s tail node by two grids right to became the new flow more evident.
♥ Looks fine too.
[Hard]
♥ 00:37:851 (2,3,4,1) - AMAZING FLOW :3
00:51:471 (3) - Nazi: move the last anchor by 1 grid down, so this slider will get more parallel with the next one.
01:16:501 (2) - Nazi: Disable Grid Snap and move the 1st anchor ro x:287 y:236. Or... get the code:287,236,76501,2,0,P|292:196|280:160,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:Att.
Oyatsu? Could you also check mods for my diff and eventually fix them, if they fit? Thanks :3
Topic Starter
OK, lemmeWafu wrote:
Oyatsu? Could you also check mods for my diff and eventually fix them, if they fit? Thanks :3
Tks for moddingLapis Aoki wrote:
From your M4M queue ~
[Wafu's Easy][Xinely's Normal]
- 00:28:097 (2) - Move to x:212 y:348
- 00:29:569 (4) - I think its better to start NC from here ~
- 00:32:882 (1) - Whistle but keep the finish ~
- 00:35:090 (4) - Clap but keep the whistle ~ ?
- 01:33:066 (2) - Move to x:288 y:144
Sorry for short mod ~ :c Good luck though ~
- 00:14:845 (7) - Whistle ~ ?
from Google docs! =w= This song is so cute, it makes me happy listening to it
[General]
Add guest diff people to tags~
[Laurier's Insane]
00:36:563 (3) - i feel like ctrl+G this slider would improve the circular flow for this pattern, and there would still be a jump to (4)
01:06:747 (1,2) - i know this song is quite relaxing, but consider turning these sliders into circle jumps to better match the vocals
01:17:422 (3) - add clap on head for consistency
01:18:158 (1,2) - move NC to (2) for new combo consistency?
01:22:575 (5) - i feel like the music here is undermapped with this slider
the music has a stream and 1/4 beats here, and i think it would be cool to map it, since you mapped streams before, and it'd be a nice way to end kiai time. It's okay if you don't want to map it though 
[Insane]
00:37:851 (3,4,5,6) - these jumps are pretty big for this section and seem a bit random to me because the music doesn't get stronger/more exciting... personally, I think you should make these jumps similar to 00:35:458 (5,6) and 00:36:931 (4,5) for consistency
00:44:477 (7) - clap on slider head for the snare!
00:48:158 (2,3) - this rhythm sounds odd to me, like you're trying to emphasize something that's not there D: maybe arrange like this? http://puu.sh/94sR2/c8b377fd38.jpg (or you could turn (3) and (4) in the screenshot into 1/1 slider)
00:51:839 (5,1) - this rhythm sounds weird to me too, since there is no strong sound on the head of (1), and the long vocal starts where (5) is... maybe try this? http://puu.sh/94sY2/2d41206a7d.jpg
00:55:704 (3,4,5,6) - flows a bit weirdly for me D: how about this? http://puu.sh/94t5L/b3f05e23c4.jpg
01:32:514 - add a note here and at 01:32:606 for the drums? pretty epic way to end the map
[Hard]
01:08:771 (2,3,4) - i think having the circle and then 2 sliders would fit the vocals a bit better
[Xinely's Normal]
00:15:213 (1) - the tail of this slider has a pretty strong sound in the music, maybe add a whistle
00:30:673 (2) - clap on slider tail~
00:36:747 (2) - clap on repeat
00:43:189 (2) - clap (custom or drum) on repeat?
01:16:317 (4) - eh fix blanket i guess, it's kinda noticable since it's the only blanket that's off
01:30:121 (4) - don't really see a need for this note D: there's no heavy beat or anything behind it
[Wafu's Easy]
00:16:685 (4) - add whistle to repeat? seems like a strong sound here
that's all~ nice set overall! good luck on your map
[General]
Add guest diff people to tags~
[Laurier's Insane]
00:36:563 (3) - i feel like ctrl+G this slider would improve the circular flow for this pattern, and there would still be a jump to (4)
01:06:747 (1,2) - i know this song is quite relaxing, but consider turning these sliders into circle jumps to better match the vocals
01:17:422 (3) - add clap on head for consistency
01:18:158 (1,2) - move NC to (2) for new combo consistency?
01:22:575 (5) - i feel like the music here is undermapped with this slider
the music has a stream and 1/4 beats here, and i think it would be cool to map it, since you mapped streams before, and it'd be a nice way to end kiai time. It's okay if you don't want to map it though [Insane]
00:37:851 (3,4,5,6) - these jumps are pretty big for this section and seem a bit random to me because the music doesn't get stronger/more exciting... personally, I think you should make these jumps similar to 00:35:458 (5,6) and 00:36:931 (4,5) for consistency
00:44:477 (7) - clap on slider head for the snare!
00:48:158 (2,3) - this rhythm sounds odd to me, like you're trying to emphasize something that's not there D: maybe arrange like this? http://puu.sh/94sR2/c8b377fd38.jpg (or you could turn (3) and (4) in the screenshot into 1/1 slider)
00:51:839 (5,1) - this rhythm sounds weird to me too, since there is no strong sound on the head of (1), and the long vocal starts where (5) is... maybe try this? http://puu.sh/94sY2/2d41206a7d.jpg
00:55:704 (3,4,5,6) - flows a bit weirdly for me D: how about this? http://puu.sh/94t5L/b3f05e23c4.jpg
01:32:514 - add a note here and at 01:32:606 for the drums? pretty epic way to end the map
[Hard]
01:08:771 (2,3,4) - i think having the circle and then 2 sliders would fit the vocals a bit better
[Xinely's Normal]
00:15:213 (1) - the tail of this slider has a pretty strong sound in the music, maybe add a whistle
00:30:673 (2) - clap on slider tail~
00:36:747 (2) - clap on repeat
00:43:189 (2) - clap (custom or drum) on repeat?
01:16:317 (4) - eh fix blanket i guess, it's kinda noticable since it's the only blanket that's off
01:30:121 (4) - don't really see a need for this note D: there's no heavy beat or anything behind it
[Wafu's Easy]
00:16:685 (4) - add whistle to repeat? seems like a strong sound here
that's all~ nice set overall!
good luck on your map
Topic Starter
No cmt=fixed, Thank you!~Raose wrote:
from Google docs! =w= This song is so cute, it makes me happy listening to it
[General]
Add guest diff people to tags~
[Insane]
00:37:851 (3,4,5,6) - these jumps are pretty big for this section and seem a bit random to me because the music doesn't get stronger/more exciting... personally, I think you should make these jumps similar to 00:35:458 (5,6) and 00:36:931 (4,5) for consistency
00:44:477 (7) - clap on slider head for the snare!
00:48:158 (2,3) - this rhythm sounds odd to me, like you're trying to emphasize something that's not there D: maybe arrange like this? http://puu.sh/94sR2/c8b377fd38.jpg (or you could turn (3) and (4) in the screenshot into 1/1 slider)
00:51:839 (5,1) - this rhythm sounds weird to me too, since there is no strong sound on the head of (1), and the long vocal starts where (5) is... maybe try this? http://puu.sh/94sY2/2d41206a7d.jpg
00:55:704 (3,4,5,6) - flows a bit weirdly for me D: how about this? http://puu.sh/94t5L/b3f05e23c4.jpg
01:32:514 - add a note here and at 01:32:606 for the drums? pretty epic way to end the map
[Hard]
01:08:771 (2,3,4) - i think having the circle and then 2 sliders would fit the vocals a bit better
[Wafu's Easy]
00:16:685 (4) - add whistle to repeat? seems like a strong sound here
that's all~ nice set overall!
sorry i can't reply every mod but i would say mostly fixed from Asphyxia and Raose mods
thanks ~
thanks ~
baka rank this
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Insane:
00:18:526 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern feels really weird to play. The stack made by 3 and 4 doesn't really fit with the jumpy-flowing movement you did previously. If you change the pattern to back and forth stacks it feels more natural to play. 2 and 3 stay the same, then 4 and 5 are stacked under.
Hard:
01:33:066 (1) - Bring this circle closer to the end of 01:32:698 (6) - ? I think it is a little too difficult because there was a 1/4 stack right before this and there was only 1 other 1/4 stack before at 01:22:391 (5) - . So that makes 1/4 stacks more of a challenge for this map because the player wasn't really expecting them. So making the jump closer is a lot more fair for the difficulty of this map.
Normal:
00:13:741 (4,5,6) - These notes are not in the rhythm of the song like 00:10:796 (3,4) - and 00:16:685 (3,4) - are. They should have rhythms like this so the rhythm is accurate for the new players.
This in red need to be fixed. Everything else is just a suggestion!
Call me for a recheck when you are done with the mod.
00:18:526 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern feels really weird to play. The stack made by 3 and 4 doesn't really fit with the jumpy-flowing movement you did previously. If you change the pattern to back and forth stacks it feels more natural to play. 2 and 3 stay the same, then 4 and 5 are stacked under.
Hard:
01:33:066 (1) - Bring this circle closer to the end of 01:32:698 (6) - ? I think it is a little too difficult because there was a 1/4 stack right before this and there was only 1 other 1/4 stack before at 01:22:391 (5) - . So that makes 1/4 stacks more of a challenge for this map because the player wasn't really expecting them. So making the jump closer is a lot more fair for the difficulty of this map.
Normal:
00:13:741 (4,5,6) - These notes are not in the rhythm of the song like 00:10:796 (3,4) - and 00:16:685 (3,4) - are. They should have rhythms like this so the rhythm is accurate for the new players.
This in red need to be fixed. Everything else is just a suggestion!
Call me for a recheck when you are done with the mod.
Topic Starter
Wait for Xinely, Thank you for modding, MMzz-sanMMzz wrote:
Insane:
00:18:526 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern feels really weird to play. The stack made by 3 and 4 doesn't really fit with the jumpy-flowing movement you did previously. If you change the pattern to back and forth stacks it feels more natural to play. 2 and 3 stay the same, then 4 and 5 are stacked under.
Hard:
01:33:066 (1) - Bring this circle closer to the end of 01:32:698 (6) - ? I think it is a little too difficult because there was a 1/4 stack right before this and there was only 1 other 1/4 stack before at 01:22:391 (5) - . So that makes 1/4 stacks more of a challenge for this map because the player wasn't really expecting them. So making the jump closer is a lot more fair for the difficulty of this map.
EDIT: Xinely fixed and updated too!!
Bubbled! 
Topic Starter
Thank you, MMzz-sanMMzz wrote:
Bubbled!
To anyone, give me some amazing presents on 6 June plz >w<
Wow, finally, congrats sensei >w<
Good luck on ranking in 6/6 >w< pls pls pls~
Good luck on ranking in 6/6 >w< pls pls pls~
I will wait this until this get to ranked
Go Oyatsu :3
Go Oyatsu :3
Hello~
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[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Call me back when you are ready~ :3
From googledocs.
[Notion]
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
[Wafu's Easy]
General
Well done~
Hitsound
00:17:238 - I guess you forgot to put a whistle here.
General
Well done~
Hitsound
00:17:238 - I guess you forgot to put a whistle here.
[Xinely's Normal]
General
Good job! I know the hitsound is your style and it's quite well~
Placement
01:21:471 (3) - Touching the HP bar.. Try to lean the slider more to avoid it... Example:
General
Good job! I know the hitsound is your style and it's quite well~
Placement
01:21:471 (3) - Touching the HP bar.. Try to lean the slider more to avoid it... Example:
[Hard]
General
Good diff, but if you can make patterns more expanded, currently your notes are centralized in the middle of the screen~ Just saying it.. Nothing more than that~
General
Good diff, but if you can make patterns more expanded, currently your notes are centralized in the middle of the screen~ Just saying it.. Nothing more than that~
[Insane]
General
Yes, also well done~
Beats
00:52:023 (1) - Hmm.. The 3/4 slider is not reasonable, the drum is at 00:52:207 , and there is no sign in vocal here to show it is a 3/4.. So I suggest using 1/2 slider instead. Example:Placement
00:29:937 (1) - It's touching the HP bar.. See my example:
00:17:238 - You need a whistle here imo..
00:20:366 - Add volume here to about 40% to better fit the music?
00:43:557 - Not sure but quite good when you put a clap here, and here is a suitable position for a clap.
00:48:526 - Not suitable for a clap. The drum is in the same weight with 00:48:158 , and adding a clap only on it is not reasonable, when adding on both of it is also not good to hear.
General
Yes, also well done~
Beats
00:52:023 (1) - Hmm.. The 3/4 slider is not reasonable, the drum is at 00:52:207 , and there is no sign in vocal here to show it is a 3/4.. So I suggest using 1/2 slider instead. Example:Placement
00:29:937 (1) - It's touching the HP bar.. See my example:
SPOILER
Hitsound368,128,29937,6,0,P|324:36|236:24,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:17:238 - You need a whistle here imo..
00:20:366 - Add volume here to about 40% to better fit the music?
00:43:557 - Not sure but quite good when you put a clap here, and here is a suitable position for a clap.
00:48:526 - Not suitable for a clap. The drum is in the same weight with 00:48:158 , and adding a clap only on it is not reasonable, when adding on both of it is also not good to hear.
[Laurier's Insane]
General
Well done. Some little thing to say.
Placement
00:25:520 (1) - It's touching the HP bar.. Move it a bit down to avoid it. Example:
00:20:366 - Add volume here to about 40% to better fit the music? Not bad imo.
00:58:465 - Yes, the triplet needs more hit feeling on it, the vocal and music is becoming stronger and soft-hitnormal is not enough here.. So I think a clap is needed here.
00:59:017 - Here is the same reason as above, but I'm not quite sure about here, maybe the 2 kick sliders need equal hit feeling. But personally I'd prefer adding weight to the 2 sliders. So you can either add clap here, or both the head of the 2 sliders.
01:17:422 - I'm not sure.. But maybe you missed a clap here.
(01:20:366 - here the clap is really weak, and I noticed you lowered the volume here on purpose, maybe the volume is related with the whistle here, but imo claps are better to be more obvious to be symbol of beats.. I don't know what do you think of it.. Just saying it here.)
NCs
01:21:103 (6) - For the slider, I think it has a acceleration on it and the pattern is quite obvious here, so you can add an NC at 01:20:735 (4) - to emphasize the pattern and the acceleration.
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.General
Well done. Some little thing to say.
Placement
00:25:520 (1) - It's touching the HP bar.. Move it a bit down to avoid it. Example:
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00:20:366 - Add volume here to about 40% to better fit the music? Not bad imo.
00:58:465 - Yes, the triplet needs more hit feeling on it, the vocal and music is becoming stronger and soft-hitnormal is not enough here.. So I think a clap is needed here.
00:59:017 - Here is the same reason as above, but I'm not quite sure about here, maybe the 2 kick sliders need equal hit feeling. But personally I'd prefer adding weight to the 2 sliders. So you can either add clap here, or both the head of the 2 sliders.
01:17:422 - I'm not sure.. But maybe you missed a clap here.
(01:20:366 - here the clap is really weak, and I noticed you lowered the volume here on purpose, maybe the volume is related with the whistle here, but imo claps are better to be more obvious to be symbol of beats.. I don't know what do you think of it.. Just saying it here.)
NCs
01:21:103 (6) - For the slider, I think it has a acceleration on it and the pattern is quite obvious here, so you can add an NC at 01:20:735 (4) - to emphasize the pattern and the acceleration.
Call me back when you are ready~ :3
Atrue wrote:
Hello~
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[Notion]This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.[Xinely's Normal]
General
Good job! I know the hitsound is your style and it's quite well~ \:D/
Placement
01:21:471 (3) - Touching the HP bar.. Try to lean the slider more to avoid it... Example: fixed in other way
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.
Call me back when you are ready~ :3
thank you Atrue :3
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428,104,78158,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Wait for Laurier!! Thank you for modding, Atrue >w<Atrue wrote:
Hello~
From googledocs.
[Notion]This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.[Wafu's Easy]
General
Well done~
Hitsound
00:17:238 - I guess you forgot to put a whistle here.[Hard]
General
Good diff, but if you can make patterns more expanded, currently your notes are centralized in the middle of the screen~ Just saying it.. Nothing more than that~[Insane]
General
Yes, also well done~
Beats
00:52:023 (1) - Hmm.. The 3/4 slider is not reasonable, the drum is at 00:52:207 , and there is no sign in vocal here to show it is a 3/4.. So I suggest using 1/2 slider instead. Example:
00:29:937 (1) - It's touching the HP bar.. See my example:SPOILERHitsound368,128,29937,6,0,P|324:36|236:24,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:17:238 - You need a whistle here imo..
00:20:366 - Add volume here to about 40% to better fit the music?
00:43:557 - Not sure but quite good when you put a clap here, and here is a suitable position for a clap.
00:48:526 - Not suitable for a clap. The drum is in the same weight with 00:48:158 , and adding a clap only on it is not reasonable, when adding on both of it is also not good to hear.
Topic Starter
Ok, All updated!!
[Xinely's Normal]
Hitsound
01:17:790 (2) - Soft-hitwistle is suitable.. maybe you just made it by mistake.....
Really sorry for the inconvenience.... Call me back when you are ready..Hitsound
01:17:790 (2) - Soft-hitwistle is suitable.. maybe you just made it by mistake.....
Topic Starter
I will fix this for xinely, maybe she will be also okAtrue wrote:
[Xinely's Normal]Really sorry for the inconvenience.... Call me back when you are ready..
Hitsound
01:17:790 (2) - Soft-hitwistle is suitable.. maybe you just made it by mistake.....
Rechecked and.. Ok~ Time to get it qualified.
Congratulations!
Ranked~
Happy Birthday, Oyatsu! XD
Congratulations!
Ranked~
Happy Birthday, Oyatsu! XD
congratz oyaduca
and Happy Birthday ?!
and Happy Birthday ?!
Congrats and HAPPY BIRTHDAY to Oyatsu >w<
First post after 85 hours I lived in jail =w=
Congratulations for ranked map and Happy birthday! <3
Topic Starter
Thank you guys, Atrue and everyone
happy birthday baka
Congratz and happy birthday, Oyatsu :3
I hope that this is a nice gift one
I hope that this is a nice gift one
Congrats Oyatsu! Happy Birthday as well! /late orz