1. Disconnected (4,15 stars, 562 notes)
2. Hard (2,81 stars, 433 notes)
3. Insane (3,35 stars, 553 notes)
4. Minao's Normal (1,92 stars, 335 notes)

What I think you should keep (because it's good)

1. The hitsounds are perfect, in my opinion. You did a very good job of making the player feel like they are playing the song, not just clicking circles that happen to land on beat.
2. Slider speed and distance snap fit really nicely.

The actual mod

1. Don't spam kiai time. This can be very distracting to the player. Minao's difficulty handled kiai time pretty well.
2. Holy mother of bookmarks; I understand you would want to pinpoint a couple of key areas in the song, but having bookmarks almost every second is not a very intuitive use of them.
3. Add some tags! They help people find maps they're looking for, and your map will gain some publicity as well.
4. Add Minao to the tags. When you have guest difficulties, it is required to tag them to make sure credit is given to the mappers accordingly.
5. The mp3's bitrate is labeled as 0kbps. I don't think that's actually possible, so your mp3 is probably corrupted in one way or another. You can try re-downloading it (or however you got hold of it) and use one of those online file converters, but if that doesn't work, just find another source for the mp3. I'm sure there are many.
6. Use or delete h.png, because currently, it's just sitting there and taking up space.
7. ^ k.png
8. ^ n2.png
9. Inherited points get kinda wacky sometimes (insane difficulty). I'll try to point out most of them, so you know what I mean.
10. Inherited point at 00:28:303 should be snapped to 00:28:288
11. 00:52:663 and 02:52:663 have inherited points that do nothing. Maybe this was unfinished, but if not, remove them.

1. 00:59:225 (9) This slider is absolutely insane. Consider making the beat snap divisor 1/8 instead of 1/16.
2. 00:59:225 The inherited points for this measure don't really serve a purpose. Consider removing them, or at least make the sound difference a little bit more noticeable, while changing beat snap from 1/16 to 1/8.
3. 02:35:319 (2) Slider end is unsnapped. Use 1/4 or 1/8 snap, whatever you prefer.
4. 02:35:319 Inherited points here aren't really needed, and they don't make a huge difference anyway. Either buff the effect of these or just remove them.
5. 02:59:225 (9) Everything I said about 00:59:225 (9) applies here too.
6. 02:59:225 Everything I said about 00:59:225 applies here too.
7. 01:06:139 (4) These 2 notes felt kinda awkward. I feel like spacing them apart would be an improvement.
8. 01:21:139 (4) ^
9. 01:54:303 (6) Make this a repeating slider or 3 notes to fit the rest of the melody.
10. 02:30:397 (10) This note can be very hard to hit because of the time gap after the stream. Not necessarily something that requires a change, however.
11. 02:37:897 (10) ^
12. 02:44:225 - 02:45:163 I think something should be here, but that's probably just my preference. Consider adding repeating slider or streams here, though.
13. 03:06:139 (4) and 03:21:139 (4) have the same feel as 01:06:139 (4) but I like it here better because it creates diversity between the first and second melody.
14. 00:51:725 (6) Off the grid.
15. 01:04:616 (7) ^
16. 01:11:413 (8) ^
17. 01:25:241 (5) ^
18. 01:36:256 (7) ^
19. 02:51:725 (6) ^
20. 03:04:616 (7) ^
21. 03:25:241 (5) ^
22. 03:36:256 (6) ^

AndreasHD wrote:

Hey! this song is so good omgomgomg!!

I need to mod just a little bit

[General]
* Soooooooooo many bookmarks, they are extremly overused. Im not sure if that takes any space, but you should remove them anyway, cuz why not.

* add Minao to tags, so that people can search up the name and find this map. Make sure to tag it in all difficulties.

* 00:52:663 Remove this inheriting section because it's for no use.

* 02:52:663 You have an un-used inheriting section here aswell, why not remove it:)

* It says that your mp3 file is 0 kbps ...never seen that before o.o it need's to be between 128 -192 kbps.

* I would love to see the title passing by at this point 00:31:569 try to make it happen!

* Your Insane difficulty also have "H" icon on website, try making it "I" for Insane.

* OD (Overall Difficulty) set to 8 Doesnt really call for OD 8



[Insane]

01:16:100 (1) - I didnt like your stack here, try to space it out instead.

01:41:413 (8) - NC

01:42:350 (1) - ^

01:54:303 (6) - Instead of just a slider, the music asks for 3 notes. do you hear it? ..No D:

02:30:397 (10) - Spare it out, looks better, and feels better to play.

02:37:897 (10) - ^

02:33:913 (7) - NC Nah

02:41:413 (7) -

02:47:038 (5) -

02:47:741 (3) - Remove NC

02:48:913 (6) - NC

02:49:616 (1) - Remove NC

02:50:788 (5) - And so on.

02:54:303 (1) - You dont need new combocolor here It's there to indicate new spacing

03:07:428 (1) - I would remove this NC and make it here instead -> 03:07:663 (2) -


Cool mapset, even though I wish your Insane diff was harder, since as it is, it's very close to Hard.. anyway, good luck with ranking and suff

Cl8n wrote:

I love the song and the direction this map is taking! Hope this will be useful~

What I think you should keep (because it's good)

1. The hitsounds are perfect, in my opinion. You did a very good job of making the player feel like they are playing the song, not just clicking circles that happen to land on beat.
2. Slider speed and distance snap fit really nicely.

The actual mod

[General]

1. Don't spam kiai time. This can be very distracting to the player. Minao's difficulty handled kiai time pretty well.
2. Holy mother of bookmarks; I understand you would want to pinpoint a couple of key areas in the song, but having bookmarks almost every second is not a very intuitive use of them.
3. Add some tags! They help people find maps they're looking for, and your map will gain some publicity as well.
4. Add Minao to the tags. When you have guest difficulties, it is required to tag them to make sure credit is given to the mappers accordingly.
5. The mp3's bitrate is labeled as 0kbps. I don't think that's actually possible, so your mp3 is probably corrupted in one way or another. You can try re-downloading it (or however you got hold of it) and use one of those online file converters, but if that doesn't work, just find another source for the mp3. I'm sure there are many.
6. Use or delete h.png, because currently, it's just sitting there and taking up space.
7. ^ k.png
8. ^ n2.png
9. Inherited points get kinda wacky sometimes (insane difficulty). I'll try to point out most of them, so you know what I mean.
10. Inherited point at 00:28:303 should be snapped to 00:28:288
11. 00:52:663 and 02:52:663 have inherited points that do nothing. Maybe this was unfinished, but if not, remove them.

[Insane]

1. 00:59:225 (9) This slider is absolutely insane. Consider making the beat snap divisor 1/8 instead of 1/16.
2. 00:59:225 The inherited points for this measure don't really serve a purpose. Consider removing them, or at least make the sound difference a little bit more noticeable, while changing beat snap from 1/16 to 1/8.
3. 02:35:319 (2) Slider end is unsnapped. Use 1/4 or 1/8 snap, whatever you prefer.
4. 02:35:319 Inherited points here aren't really needed, and they don't make a huge difference anyway. Either buff the effect of these or just remove them. Without the 5% volume one this'd sound like crap :L
5. 02:59:225 (9) Everything I said about 00:59:225 (9) applies here too.
6. 02:59:225 Everything I said about 00:59:225 applies here too.
7. 01:06:139 (4) These 2 notes felt kinda awkward. I feel like spacing them apart would be an improvement. Streams and triples have low spacing, so doubles do, too
8. 01:21:139 (4) ^ ^
9. 01:54:303 (6) Make this a repeating slider or 3 notes to fit the rest of the melody. What'd that change?
10. 02:30:397 (10) This note can be very hard to hit because of the time gap after the stream. Not necessarily something that requires a change, however.
11. 02:37:897 (10) ^
12. 02:44:225 - 02:45:163 I think something should be here, but that's probably just my preference. Consider adding repeating slider or streams here, though. I feel a short break is well needed here
13. 03:06:139 (4) and 03:21:139 (4) have the same feel as 01:06:139 (4) but I like it here better because it creates diversity between the first and second melody.
14. 00:51:725 (6) Off the grid. That's perfectly on grid o-o
15. 01:04:616 (7) ^ ^
16. 01:11:413 (8) ^ ^
17. 01:25:241 (5) ^ This isn't offscreen with 4:3 resolution so it's fine
18. 01:36:256 (7) ^ Not offgrid
19. 02:51:725 (6) ^ ^
20. 03:04:616 (7) ^ ^
21. 03:25:241 (5) ^ This isn't offscreen with 4:3 resolution either so it's fine too
22. 03:36:256 (6) ^ Not offgrid either

Best of luck with your map! I love it so far!

dinopwn wrote:

General
A Kiai time at 59:674 would be nice, same with 3:00:163

Normal
00:28:053 (3) - I dont' hear any rythym that matches this. I think that replacing it with a half note and a 1 and half slider would be better. I don't get it...
00:37:663 (2) - The slider end is somewhat out of the playfield. I don't think it's an important matter if it's the end of a reversed slider so I keep it
00:39:303 (4,5,6) - Pattern is confusing, #5 slider end is kind of out of playfield.^
00:42:584 (3) - Replacing the whistle with a clap would be better. Changed
00:42:584 (3) - Placing notes under sliders in low AR is confusing to new/intermediate players. I don't see how it is under a slider
01:24:538 (5) - Out of playfield
01:50:319 (1) - ^ Changed
01:50:319 (1,4,5) - slider is partially overlapping each other, consider rotating #5 Changed with previous change
02:19:850 (2) - Out of playfield
02:22:663 (1) - ^ Not that much...
02:38:600 (2) - ^
02:38:600 (2) - Slider shape is weird in a bad way, and kind of out of playfield too I like it!
02:56:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might be a little too difficult for a normal I think it's okay for a Normal, and it's a funny thing to do
03:43:991 (6) - flip horizontally please, #1 is covered. It's the same thing for 01:43:991 (5,1) ; I keep it beacause I like the movement made by the mouse/pencil to play this pattern.

ReallyFastCat wrote:

[Normal]
02:34:850 (3) - End is not snapped Fixed
00:26:413 to 00:29:694 - This part feels really weird to me, but I don't really know why I don't know either lol