1. Easy (2.31 stars, 191 notes)
2. Hard (4.84 stars, 407 notes)
3. Normal (4 stars, 291 notes)

• 으어 성흔의 퀘이서!! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
  그래도 노래는 좋네요~
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 00:06:830 (2,1) - 슬라이더 안 겹치게 해주세요
    00:07:830 (4) - (412,256)으로 옮기심이?
    00:39:080 (2,4) - 슬라이더 겹친거 떼어주시면 더 나을 것 같은데..
    00:50:330 (3) - 곡선을 조금만 줄여주세요
    00:51:080 (4,6) - 약간 겹친거 떼주세요
    01:40:580 (4) - 뉴콤보
    03:14:330 (1) ~ 03:27:330 (4) - 지루한 감이 약간 있는 듯 하네요..
    
    [Hard]
    
    • 00:27:580 (6) - (268,228)로 이동시켜주세요
      00:27:830 (7) - 위의 것을 하실거라면 이 슬라를 (164,204)로 이동시켜주세요 (00:26:080 (2) 와 겹치게)
      00:45:580 (1,2) - 이 부분 변속은 딱히 필요없어도 될 것 같은데요..
      00:48:580 (1) - ^
      00:48:580 (1,1) - 모양을 비슷하게 만들어보세요~
      01:17:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 간격 더 넓게 하셔도 될 듯 한데...
      01:39:830 (5) - 를 01:39:705 - 로 이동시키시고 01:40:080 - 여기서 끝나게 하는 리듬은 어떠신가요?
      02:56:080 - 서클 추가
      
      [Insane]
      
      • 01:17:330 (1) - 다른 슬라이더 모양을 사용해보시는 건 어떠실지..
        02:09:330 (1) ~ 02:10:830 (9) - 약간 어색한 듯 하네요
        
        모딩은 허접이라 도움이 될 지 모르겠네요;;
        그나저나 처음 만드신 맵 맞으신지 ㄷㄷㄷㄷ
        잘 만드셨어요!
        
        (여담으로 성흔의 퀘이서 짱짱맨!)

-Srui- wrote:

안녕하세요~ 오스 팬카페에서 왔습니다 ㅇㅂㅇ!

[General]

• 으어 성흔의 퀘이서!! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
  그래도 노래는 좋네요~
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 00:06:830 (2,1) - 슬라이더 안 겹치게 해주세요
    00:07:830 (4) - (412,256)으로 옮기심이? - 패턴이 이상하게 되더군요 ㅠㅠ 죄송합니다.
    00:39:080 (2,4) - 슬라이더 겹친거 떼어주시면 더 나을 것 같은데.. - 죄송합니다.
    00:50:330 (3) - 곡선을 조금만 줄여주세요
    00:51:080 (4,6) - 약간 겹친거 떼주세요
    01:40:580 (4) - 뉴콤보
    03:14:330 (1) ~ 03:27:330 (4) - 지루한 감이 약간 있는 듯 하네요.. - 좋은 리듬이 떠오르질 않아서..;w;
    
    [Hard]
    
    • 00:27:580 (6) - (268,228)로 이동시켜주세요
      00:27:830 (7) - 위의 것을 하실거라면 이 슬라를 (164,204)로 이동시켜주세요 (00:26:080 (2) 와 겹치게)
      00:45:580 (1,2) - 이 부분 변속은 딱히 필요없어도 될 것 같은데요..
      00:48:580 (1) - ^ - 일부러 노래에 맞춘 패턴이라서요..ㅎ
      00:48:580 (1,1) - 모양을 비슷하게 만들어보세요~
      01:17:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 간격 더 넓게 하셔도 될 듯 한데... - 넓게하면 배치가 이상하게 되더라구요 ㅠㅠ
      01:39:830 (5) - 를 01:39:705 - 로 이동시키시고 01:40:080 - 여기서 끝나게 하는 리듬은 어떠신가요?
      02:56:080 - 서클 추가
      
      [Insane]
      
      • 01:17:330 (1) - 다른 슬라이더 모양을 사용해보시는 건 어떠실지..
        02:09:330 (1) ~ 02:10:830 (9) - 약간 어색한 듯 하네요
        
        모딩은 허접이라 도움이 될 지 모르겠네요;;
        그나저나 처음 만드신 맵 맞으신지 ㄷㄷㄷㄷ
        잘 만드셨어요!
        
        (여담으로 성흔의 퀘이서 짱짱맨!)

tellertheworld wrote:

For M4M:
[BG]

open

http://upload.pmp4.net/view/g/20131207123352jmfb6.jpeg.html

Use this

[Insane]

open

^This is main rhythm.
00:13:705 (1) - before 1/4 to start slider and end at the same. - Sorry, don't know what you mean
00:21:330 (2) - misreading - Umm.. I think it's okay..
00:23:830 (3) - delete
00:23:955 (4) - before 1/4 to start slider and end at the same.
00:27:955 (2,3,4,1) - before 1/4 to start and end at the same. - Sorry, don't know what you mean
00:44:330 (5,6,7) - something wrong in the rhythm - I think it's ok
00:50:080 (3) - reduction 1/4
00:50:455 (4) - before 1/4 to start and end at the same.
01:10:080 (3,4) - uncoordinated in angle - It is overlap with 01:11:705 (2) end
01:11:330 (1) - move note X:376 Y:70

^Try to use this package
01:19:955 - circle here
01:20:080 - slider here 3/4
01:25:330 - slider here 2/4
01:25:705 - spinner start here
01:35:330 (1) - delete
01:35:455 - circle here
01:35:580 - slider here
01:35:830 - circle here
01:36:080 - circle here
01:36:705 - circle here
01:36:830 - slider stat here
01:44:080 (3) - reduction 1/4
01:44:330 - circle here
01:44:455 - slider here 2/4
01:44:830 - circle here
01:45:080 (7) - start at 01:45:205 -

^Try to use this package
02:04:205 (2) - 1/4 later

^Try to use this package
02:16:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - move note X:+60
02:18:705 (6) - detele
02:18:705 - slider start here
02:50:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - uncoordinated of rhythm - I think it's ok..
03:24:080 (3) - end at 03:24:205 -
03:24:330 - circle here
03:24:705 - slider start here

[General]

open

write later~

tellertheworld wrote:

Sorry, my English is poor...

00:13:705 (1) - start 00:13:830 - and end 00:14:080 - - Sorry, I like mine.
00:27:955 (2) - delete
00:28:080 - 00:28:205 - 00:28:330 - circle here
00:28:455 - spinner here - I like mine.

AlexaBM wrote:

hi~ M4M

[Normal]
That diff is too hard for normal. Let's see..
00:08:080 (5) - Delete - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:09:330 (3) - Make one circle instead of slider - Sry, i keep mine
01:10:330 (5) - Delete - Why?
02:00:830 (3,4) - Make better blanket
03:20:330 (1,2,3,4,1) - Don't make jumps in Normal diff - I will fix this when it is mentioned again

[Hard]
00:18:580 (3,5) - Better blanket
01:06:830 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
Sry, can't say anything

Nice map. GL~

[ Karen ] wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩 잘하시는 않지만..
열시미 했습니다!

[Normal]

00:51:580 (5) - 뉴콤
00:56:330 (5) - ^
01:04:330 (4) - ^
01:40:580 (4) - ^
01:48:830 (5) - ^
03:08:580 (5) - ^
00:15:580 - 이부분 박자 수정이요

00:19:080 (5) - 박자 수정 이요 - 다음에도 같은 내용이 나오면 수정해보도록 하겠습니다! 죄송합니다.

00:20:330 - 박자 수정이요 - ^

00:38:330 ~ 00:42:080 - 까지 박자 수정이요

01:25:330 (1) - 이부분 스핀으로 바꿔보시는게? - 노말 난이도에는 일부러 스핀을 많이 안넣으려고 생각하서 이렇게 만든거라.. 죄송합니다.
02:05:830 (5) ~02:08:080 (5) - 까지 박자 수정해보시는게..?


[Hard]
02:05:830 (5) - NC
02:09:830 (7) - ^
02:15:830 (7) - NC 하고 02:16:330 - 여기있는 슬라이드도 NC 그뒤 02:17:580 - 여기있는 반복슬라이드 에서 NC
03:04:330 (1) - 여기서 부터 03:06:080 - 여기까지 같은색으로 해주세요

[Insane]
00:21:580 (3) 랑 00:21:830 (4) 이거 거리가 너무 머네요..
X:72 Y:144 ////// X:280 Y: 44 로 해보세요
00:27:080 - 00:27:330 - 여기 서클 겹쳐보시는게?.. - 다음에도 같은 내용이 나오면 수정하겠습니다 ㅎㅎ
01:04:455 (6) - NC
01:23:080 ~ 01:24:830 - 다시 생각해보시는게..
02:01:455 (6) - NC
02:09:330 ~ 02:09:830 - 여기도 다시 생각해보시는게 어떠세요..?
02:46:330 ~ 02:54:080 - 여기 스트림 부분.. 조절해보심이..? - 음.. 괜찮다고 생각되는데 ㅇㅁㅇ; 이것도 역시 다음에 같은 내용이 나오면 수정하겠습니다 ㅎㅎ


킁킁..
이지랑 노멀밖에 안건들여봐서
하드나 인센은 박자를 잘 못잡겠네요..

음.. 처음 매핑이신데 잘하신..
그리고 노래하나는 좋네요 ㅋ.ㅋ

captin1 wrote:

hi

try offset 6324 (-6), sounds a bit better to me

good luck!

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
Pretty sure you need a easy diff that's below 3.5 stars.

Really need hitsounds... current hitsounding is way too random and lacking.. Will suggest that you start experimenting with the basics: clap on 2/4 white line and whistles on the red lines. Try soft hitsounds when following the vocals.

And you really need to follow the rhythm more... Slow the music down to 50% and listen might be a good idea.

[Insane]
00:07:949 (8) - this should start at the previous white line to follow the guitar - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:08:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pretty sure this stream follows nothing. Suggest that you rework this part. - ^
00:10:949 (4) - somewhere around (232,112) for better flow. Current one plays kinda awkward.
00:11:199 (5) - well don't like this slider. To long and the whistle sound it's following isn't even that noticeable - i keep mine
00:12:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - well this also doesn't follow the drums, which are mainly on the blue line - This diff is Insane. i think it is ok
00:13:699 (1) - vocal strarts at the previous red line so imo if you are following the vocal later on you'd better follow it here too
00:16:324 (1) - make this curved or move to somewhere around (424,268) for better flow - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:17:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - here the vocal is clearly repeating the same thing for three times so I guess your can do similar things with the patterns. Current pattern is a bit random - ^
00:38:324 (1,2) -
00:40:824 (1) - Cool, but I think this is probably unrankable as the speed is been manipulated too much by the anchors. - Ok, i consider it.
00:44:324 (5,6,7) - ctrl+G for 6? Anyway don't really like this pattern - i think it is ok.
00:48:574 (1) - certainly unrankable as it's impossible to tell the direction of the slider - Ok, i consider it.
01:09:824 (2) - strong beat is on the blue line so I guess replacing this with a circle? - i keep mine. sorry.
01:11:199 - missing circle - I think that it becomes even without
01:13:449 (2) - nothing strong here so delete this?
01:13:574 (3) - again vocal emphasizes on the blue line so this slider does not fit well
01:16:574 (2,3) - ctrl+G to follow the previous pattern?
01:45:824 (1) - unrankable I guess - consider it. thx :3
01:56:074 (2,3,4) - using slider end for vocal doesn't fit that well I guess. Strong beats should be clickable
02:06:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stream doesn't fit - i think it is ok. but, i will fix this when it is mentioned again
02:17:574 (1,2,3) - such arrangements with a triangle in the middle is...meh... really akward to play... - ^
02:46:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - guess you should improve this stream...
02:50:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ And I feel that the guitar solo part needs rework..

Skipping hard and normal.

Good luck ^ ^

• 1. Consider adding 'Toyosaki Aki, Chihara Minori, Hirano Aya & Hisaka Youko' to Artist since they also sing the song. Some maps nowadays have multiple names in Artist, so i suppose it's fine (like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122658) . If you follow my suggestions, here's the kanji (i hope it's correct) '豊崎 愛生, 茅原 実里, 平野 綾 & 日笠 陽子
  
  2. Remove 'anime' from Tags, it will be added to Genre. And i still don't know the meaning of breast milk in Tags ._.
  
  3. Your easiest diff has 4.06 stars, while the rule said that the easiest diff must have star difficulty around 2.5-3 stars, see this https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset . You should make your normal easier or make a new Easy diff
  
  4. It would be better if you spice the map more with hitsounds like http://puu.sh/5LWEj.wav or http://puu.sh/5LWKI.wav, or you can find another hitsound which suit your preference, it's up to you

• 00:06:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - it's really hard to read. Please use distance snap and rearrange the positions
  00:13:574 (1,2) - switch nc
  00:16:324 (4) - with the relatively slow AR, this hidden circle might really hard to see for beginners. Consider placing it somewhere else as long as it's not hidden
  00:19:074 (5) - the rhythm and vocal is quite familiar with 00:17:574 (1,2,3) - , making it a long slider is kinda awkward to me. My suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:28:324 (1) - add finish
  01:11:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:16:074 (5) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  01:25:324 (1) - there's no particular beat in 01:25:824 - 01:26:324 - 01:26:824 - so it sounds really awkward. i suggest to change it into spinner which starts from 01:25:324 - end at 01:27:324 -
  01:35:324 (1) - add finish
  02:12:574 (3) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:17:574 (3) - how about making it a reversed slider? fits the vocal more. and also rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:21:324 (2) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:56:324 (5) - only suggestion. make sure the slider's tail won't touch previous slider's body
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:58:324 (1) - finish at slider's head?
  03:00:074 (3) - same like 02:56:324 (5) -
  03:10:574 (4) - nc?
  03:30:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of the kiai/chorus
  03:34:574 (4) - same like 00:19:074 (5) -
  03:43:074 (1) - finish at slider's tail
  03:44:324 (1) - finish

• 00:08:074 - add a note?
  00:12:324 (1) - add one more reversed slider, so it will end at 00:12:699 - and make it easier to read 00:12:949 (2) -
  00:17:324 - add a note here? it feels empty
  00:18:574 (3) - only rhythm suggestion, since it's actually awkward to have a long slider when the vocal urge you to click on the beat, not to hold the slider
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:324 (1) - add a note?
  00:27:324 (5) - add finish
  00:28:324 (1) - ^
  00:56:074 (5) - add a note here would be great, keep the flow running
  01:00:324 (5) - nc this? try not to make the combo too long here
  01:11:324 (4) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:11:324 (4) - add a note?
  01:15:324 (3) - add finish
  01:16:074 (1) - add finish at slider's tail
  01:20:324 - add a note. even though you're following the vocal, but there's a beat here
  01:22:324 - ^
  01:26:074 - while there's no beat here, the reversed slider sounds really awkward. Consider changing it into spinner
  01:37:824 (1) - i'm not really good at making slider, but try to lower the slider's head point a little bit (one grid), both ends will be balanced
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:56:824 (4) - really hard to read. consider making it visible like 01:58:824 (3,4) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:58:824 (3,4) - add a note. i hear a drum here
  02:08:324 (3) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  02:08:324 (3) - add a note?
  02:15:824 (1,2) - switch nc
  02:19:324 - add a note?
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:57:574 (7) - add finish at slider's tail
  03:02:824 (2,3,4) - nazi, not stacked properly
  03:10:574 (3,4,5) - ^
  03:30:324 (1) - add a note?
  03:40:324 (1,2,3) - also nazi, not stacked properly
  03:44:324 (1) - add finish

• 00:28:324 (1) - only suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:324 (3) - add finish at slider's head
  00:40:824 (1) - usually slider like this is the cause of unrank, since it's categorized as Burai Sliders. maybe you should ask a BAT about this slider
  00:48:574 (1) - ^, this one is more confusing though lol
  00:51:324 (1,2,3,4) - imo, the pattern is a bit loose to me when most of the other patterns are really dense like 00:49:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . consider adding notes 00:52:199 - 00:51:949 -
  01:45:824 (1) - same like 00:40:824 (1) -
  02:08:324 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  02:22:449 (1) - add finish
  03:04:324 (1,2,3,4) - why not make the combo like 02:56:324 (1,1,1,1) - ?
  03:20:324 (4,1,2,3,4) - really hard to read x.x
  03:44:449 (1) - add finish

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi~ trying to m4m. haven't mod for more than a month, i hope it's still fine. and sorry for grammar error -.-

[General]

• 1. Consider adding 'Toyosaki Aki, Chihara Minori, Hirano Aya & Hisaka Youko' to Artist since they also sing the song. Some maps nowadays have multiple names in Artist, so i suppose it's fine (like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122658) . If you follow my suggestions, here's the kanji (i hope it's correct) '豊崎 愛生, 茅原 実里, 平野 綾 & 日笠 陽子
  
  2. Remove 'anime' from Tags, it will be added to Genre. And i still don't know the meaning of breast milk in Tags ._.
  
  3. Your easiest diff has 4.06 stars, while the rule said that the easiest diff must have star difficulty around 2.5-3 stars, see this https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset . You should make your normal easier or make a new Easy diff
  
  4. It would be better if you spice the map more with hitsounds like http://puu.sh/5LWEj.wav or http://puu.sh/5LWKI.wav, or you can find another hitsound which suit your preference, it's up to you

[Normal]

• 00:06:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - it's really hard to read. Please use distance snap and rearrange the positions - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
  00:13:574 (1,2) - switch nc
  00:16:324 (4) - with the relatively slow AR, this hidden circle might really hard to see for beginners. Consider placing it somewhere else as long as it's not hidden
  00:19:074 (5) - the rhythm and vocal is quite familiar with 00:17:574 (1,2,3) - , making it a long slider is kinda awkward to me. My suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:28:324 (1) - add finish
  01:11:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:16:074 (5) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  01:25:324 (1) - there's no particular beat in 01:25:824 - 01:26:324 - 01:26:824 - so it sounds really awkward. i suggest to change it into spinner which starts from 01:25:324 - end at 01:27:324 -
  01:35:324 (1) - add finish
  02:12:574 (3) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:17:574 (3) - how about making it a reversed slider? fits the vocal more. and also rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:21:324 (2) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:56:324 (5) - only suggestion. make sure the slider's tail won't touch previous slider's body
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:58:324 (1) - finish at slider's head?
  03:00:074 (3) - same like 02:56:324 (5) -
  03:10:574 (4) - nc?
  03:30:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of the kiai/chorus
  03:34:574 (4) - same like 00:19:074 (5) -
  03:43:074 (1) - finish at slider's tail
  03:44:324 (1) - finish

[Hard]

• 00:08:074 - add a note?
  00:12:324 (1) - add one more reversed slider, so it will end at 00:12:699 - and make it easier to read 00:12:949 (2) -
  00:17:324 - add a note here? it feels empty
  00:18:574 (3) - only rhythm suggestion, since it's actually awkward to have a long slider when the vocal urge you to click on the beat, not to hold the slider
  
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  00:22:324 (1) - add a note? - hmm.. why?
  00:27:324 (5) - add finish
  00:28:324 (1) - ^
  00:56:074 (5) - add a note here would be great, keep the flow running
  01:00:324 (5) - nc this? try not to make the combo too long here
  01:11:324 (4) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:11:324 (4) - add a note? - Sorry...
  01:15:324 (3) - add finish
  01:16:074 (1) - add finish at slider's tail
  01:20:324 - add a note. even though you're following the vocal, but there's a beat here
  01:22:324 - ^
  01:26:074 - while there's no beat here, the reversed slider sounds really awkward. Consider changing it into spinner
  01:37:824 (1) - i'm not really good at making slider, but try to lower the slider's head point a little bit (one grid), both ends will be balanced
  
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  01:56:824 (4) - really hard to read. consider making it visible like 01:58:824 (3,4) -
  
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  01:58:824 (3,4) - add a note. i hear a drum here - Sorry.
  02:08:324 (3) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  02:08:324 (3) - add a note? - Sorry.
  02:15:824 (1,2) - switch nc
  02:19:324 - add a note?
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:57:574 (7) - add finish at slider's tail
  03:02:824 (2,3,4) - nazi, not stacked properly
  03:10:574 (3,4,5) - ^
  03:30:324 (1) - add a note? - Sorry.
  03:40:324 (1,2,3) - also nazi, not stacked properly
  03:44:324 (1) - add finish

[Insane]

• 00:28:324 (1) - only suggestion - Sorry, I don't know what you mean ;w;
  
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  00:22:324 (3) - add finish at slider's head
  00:40:824 (1) - usually slider like this is the cause of unrank, since it's categorized as Burai Sliders. maybe you should ask a BAT about this slider
  00:48:574 (1) - ^, this one is more confusing though lol
  00:51:324 (1,2,3,4) - imo, the pattern is a bit loose to me when most of the other patterns are really dense like
  00:49:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . consider adding notes 00:52:199 - 00:51:949 - - fix something
  01:45:824 (1) - same like 00:40:824 (1) -
  02:08:324 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  02:22:449 (1) - add finish
  03:04:324 (1,2,3,4) - why not make the combo like 02:56:324 (1,1,1,1) - ?
  03:20:324 (4,1,2,3,4) - really hard to read x.x - I keep mine :3
  03:44:449 (1) - add finish

ok i hope it helps
good luck~

OstrichSupreme wrote:

Hello! M4M here!

Normal

00:06:824 (2) - I would shorten this note by a tick...
00:07:574 (3) - and bring this slider back a tick!
00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is nice, but in a normal diff? You may want to make it easier for the not as adept players
00:20:074 (8) - new combo
01:48:574 (4) - ^
02:15:407 (4) - I would move this to x300 and y76 to be symmetrical with 02:15:824 (5) - - Sorry, i keep mine
02:20:074 (3) - Make this one symmetrical also - ^
03:06:324 (1) - fix the nodes on this slider to look more appealing - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
03:10:574 (1) - ^ - ^

Hard

00:11:949 - New combo
00:12:199 (1) - remove new combo
01:10:574 (1,2,3) - Give these clap - it seems a little awkward
01:16:574 (2) - shorten this note to half of what it currently is, and make it repeat back. Adjust rest of this area for flow - Ok, i consider it.
01:25:449 (1) - give this finish - Umm.. why?
01:45:824 (1) - fix these nodes up a bit - I will fix this when it is mentioned again

That's all I got, couldn't find much in insane. Anyways, good luck with your map!

[ Raphael ] wrote:

[Insane]

00:28:324 (1) - only suggestion - Sorry, I don't know what you mean ;w;

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