1. Easy (2.31 stars, 191 notes)
2. Hard (4.84 stars, 407 notes)
3. Normal (4 stars, 291 notes)

• 으어 성흔의 퀘이서!! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
  그래도 노래는 좋네요~
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 00:06:830 (2,1) - 슬라이더 안 겹치게 해주세요
    00:07:830 (4) - (412,256)으로 옮기심이?
    00:39:080 (2,4) - 슬라이더 겹친거 떼어주시면 더 나을 것 같은데..
    00:50:330 (3) - 곡선을 조금만 줄여주세요
    00:51:080 (4,6) - 약간 겹친거 떼주세요
    01:40:580 (4) - 뉴콤보
    03:14:330 (1) ~ 03:27:330 (4) - 지루한 감이 약간 있는 듯 하네요..
    
    [Hard]
    
    • 00:27:580 (6) - (268,228)로 이동시켜주세요
      00:27:830 (7) - 위의 것을 하실거라면 이 슬라를 (164,204)로 이동시켜주세요 (00:26:080 (2) 와 겹치게)
      00:45:580 (1,2) - 이 부분 변속은 딱히 필요없어도 될 것 같은데요..
      00:48:580 (1) - ^
      00:48:580 (1,1) - 모양을 비슷하게 만들어보세요~
      01:17:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 간격 더 넓게 하셔도 될 듯 한데...
      01:39:830 (5) - 를 01:39:705 - 로 이동시키시고 01:40:080 - 여기서 끝나게 하는 리듬은 어떠신가요?
      02:56:080 - 서클 추가
      
      [Insane]
      
      • 01:17:330 (1) - 다른 슬라이더 모양을 사용해보시는 건 어떠실지..
        02:09:330 (1) ~ 02:10:830 (9) - 약간 어색한 듯 하네요
        
        모딩은 허접이라 도움이 될 지 모르겠네요;;
        그나저나 처음 만드신 맵 맞으신지 ㄷㄷㄷㄷ
        잘 만드셨어요!
        
        (여담으로 성흔의 퀘이서 짱짱맨!)

-Srui- wrote:

안녕하세요~ 오스 팬카페에서 왔습니다 ㅇㅂㅇ!

[General]

• 으어 성흔의 퀘이서!! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
  그래도 노래는 좋네요~
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 00:06:830 (2,1) - 슬라이더 안 겹치게 해주세요
    00:07:830 (4) - (412,256)으로 옮기심이? - 패턴이 이상하게 되더군요 ㅠㅠ 죄송합니다.
    00:39:080 (2,4) - 슬라이더 겹친거 떼어주시면 더 나을 것 같은데.. - 죄송합니다.
    00:50:330 (3) - 곡선을 조금만 줄여주세요
    00:51:080 (4,6) - 약간 겹친거 떼주세요
    01:40:580 (4) - 뉴콤보
    03:14:330 (1) ~ 03:27:330 (4) - 지루한 감이 약간 있는 듯 하네요.. - 좋은 리듬이 떠오르질 않아서..;w;
    
    [Hard]
    
    • 00:27:580 (6) - (268,228)로 이동시켜주세요
      00:27:830 (7) - 위의 것을 하실거라면 이 슬라를 (164,204)로 이동시켜주세요 (00:26:080 (2) 와 겹치게)
      00:45:580 (1,2) - 이 부분 변속은 딱히 필요없어도 될 것 같은데요..
      00:48:580 (1) - ^ - 일부러 노래에 맞춘 패턴이라서요..ㅎ
      00:48:580 (1,1) - 모양을 비슷하게 만들어보세요~
      01:17:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 간격 더 넓게 하셔도 될 듯 한데... - 넓게하면 배치가 이상하게 되더라구요 ㅠㅠ
      01:39:830 (5) - 를 01:39:705 - 로 이동시키시고 01:40:080 - 여기서 끝나게 하는 리듬은 어떠신가요?
      02:56:080 - 서클 추가
      
      [Insane]
      
      • 01:17:330 (1) - 다른 슬라이더 모양을 사용해보시는 건 어떠실지..
        02:09:330 (1) ~ 02:10:830 (9) - 약간 어색한 듯 하네요
        
        모딩은 허접이라 도움이 될 지 모르겠네요;;
        그나저나 처음 만드신 맵 맞으신지 ㄷㄷㄷㄷ
        잘 만드셨어요!
        
        (여담으로 성흔의 퀘이서 짱짱맨!)

tellertheworld wrote:

For M4M:
[BG]

open

http://upload.pmp4.net/view/g/20131207123352jmfb6.jpeg.html

Use this

[Insane]

open

^This is main rhythm.
00:13:705 (1) - before 1/4 to start slider and end at the same. - Sorry, don't know what you mean
00:21:330 (2) - misreading - Umm.. I think it's okay..
00:23:830 (3) - delete
00:23:955 (4) - before 1/4 to start slider and end at the same.
00:27:955 (2,3,4,1) - before 1/4 to start and end at the same. - Sorry, don't know what you mean
00:44:330 (5,6,7) - something wrong in the rhythm - I think it's ok
00:50:080 (3) - reduction 1/4
00:50:455 (4) - before 1/4 to start and end at the same.
01:10:080 (3,4) - uncoordinated in angle - It is overlap with 01:11:705 (2) end
01:11:330 (1) - move note X:376 Y:70

^Try to use this package
01:19:955 - circle here
01:20:080 - slider here 3/4
01:25:330 - slider here 2/4
01:25:705 - spinner start here
01:35:330 (1) - delete
01:35:455 - circle here
01:35:580 - slider here
01:35:830 - circle here
01:36:080 - circle here
01:36:705 - circle here
01:36:830 - slider stat here
01:44:080 (3) - reduction 1/4
01:44:330 - circle here
01:44:455 - slider here 2/4
01:44:830 - circle here
01:45:080 (7) - start at 01:45:205 -

^Try to use this package
02:04:205 (2) - 1/4 later

^Try to use this package
02:16:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - move note X:+60
02:18:705 (6) - detele
02:18:705 - slider start here
02:50:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - uncoordinated of rhythm - I think it's ok..
03:24:080 (3) - end at 03:24:205 -
03:24:330 - circle here
03:24:705 - slider start here

[General]

open

write later~

tellertheworld wrote:

Sorry, my English is poor...

00:13:705 (1) - start 00:13:830 - and end 00:14:080 - - Sorry, I like mine.
00:27:955 (2) - delete
00:28:080 - 00:28:205 - 00:28:330 - circle here
00:28:455 - spinner here - I like mine.

AlexaBM wrote:

hi~ M4M

[Normal]
That diff is too hard for normal. Let's see..
00:08:080 (5) - Delete - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:09:330 (3) - Make one circle instead of slider - Sry, i keep mine
01:10:330 (5) - Delete - Why?
02:00:830 (3,4) - Make better blanket
03:20:330 (1,2,3,4,1) - Don't make jumps in Normal diff - I will fix this when it is mentioned again

[Hard]
00:18:580 (3,5) - Better blanket
01:06:830 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
Sry, can't say anything

Nice map. GL~

[ Karen ] wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩 잘하시는 않지만..
열시미 했습니다!

[Normal]

00:51:580 (5) - 뉴콤
00:56:330 (5) - ^
01:04:330 (4) - ^
01:40:580 (4) - ^
01:48:830 (5) - ^
03:08:580 (5) - ^
00:15:580 - 이부분 박자 수정이요

00:19:080 (5) - 박자 수정 이요 - 다음에도 같은 내용이 나오면 수정해보도록 하겠습니다! 죄송합니다.

00:20:330 - 박자 수정이요 - ^

00:38:330 ~ 00:42:080 - 까지 박자 수정이요

01:25:330 (1) - 이부분 스핀으로 바꿔보시는게? - 노말 난이도에는 일부러 스핀을 많이 안넣으려고 생각하서 이렇게 만든거라.. 죄송합니다.
02:05:830 (5) ~02:08:080 (5) - 까지 박자 수정해보시는게..?


[Hard]
02:05:830 (5) - NC
02:09:830 (7) - ^
02:15:830 (7) - NC 하고 02:16:330 - 여기있는 슬라이드도 NC 그뒤 02:17:580 - 여기있는 반복슬라이드 에서 NC
03:04:330 (1) - 여기서 부터 03:06:080 - 여기까지 같은색으로 해주세요

[Insane]
00:21:580 (3) 랑 00:21:830 (4) 이거 거리가 너무 머네요..
X:72 Y:144 ////// X:280 Y: 44 로 해보세요
00:27:080 - 00:27:330 - 여기 서클 겹쳐보시는게?.. - 다음에도 같은 내용이 나오면 수정하겠습니다 ㅎㅎ
01:04:455 (6) - NC
01:23:080 ~ 01:24:830 - 다시 생각해보시는게..
02:01:455 (6) - NC
02:09:330 ~ 02:09:830 - 여기도 다시 생각해보시는게 어떠세요..?
02:46:330 ~ 02:54:080 - 여기 스트림 부분.. 조절해보심이..? - 음.. 괜찮다고 생각되는데 ㅇㅁㅇ; 이것도 역시 다음에 같은 내용이 나오면 수정하겠습니다 ㅎㅎ


킁킁..
이지랑 노멀밖에 안건들여봐서
하드나 인센은 박자를 잘 못잡겠네요..

음.. 처음 매핑이신데 잘하신..
그리고 노래하나는 좋네요 ㅋ.ㅋ

captin1 wrote:

hi

try offset 6324 (-6), sounds a bit better to me

good luck!

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
Pretty sure you need a easy diff that's below 3.5 stars.

Really need hitsounds... current hitsounding is way too random and lacking.. Will suggest that you start experimenting with the basics: clap on 2/4 white line and whistles on the red lines. Try soft hitsounds when following the vocals.

And you really need to follow the rhythm more... Slow the music down to 50% and listen might be a good idea.

[Insane]
00:07:949 (8) - this should start at the previous white line to follow the guitar - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:08:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pretty sure this stream follows nothing. Suggest that you rework this part. - ^
00:10:949 (4) - somewhere around (232,112) for better flow. Current one plays kinda awkward.
00:11:199 (5) - well don't like this slider. To long and the whistle sound it's following isn't even that noticeable - i keep mine
00:12:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - well this also doesn't follow the drums, which are mainly on the blue line - This diff is Insane. i think it is ok
00:13:699 (1) - vocal strarts at the previous red line so imo if you are following the vocal later on you'd better follow it here too
00:16:324 (1) - make this curved or move to somewhere around (424,268) for better flow - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:17:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - here the vocal is clearly repeating the same thing for three times so I guess your can do similar things with the patterns. Current pattern is a bit random - ^
00:38:324 (1,2) -
00:40:824 (1) - Cool, but I think this is probably unrankable as the speed is been manipulated too much by the anchors. - Ok, i consider it.
00:44:324 (5,6,7) - ctrl+G for 6? Anyway don't really like this pattern - i think it is ok.
00:48:574 (1) - certainly unrankable as it's impossible to tell the direction of the slider - Ok, i consider it.
01:09:824 (2) - strong beat is on the blue line so I guess replacing this with a circle? - i keep mine. sorry.
01:11:199 - missing circle - I think that it becomes even without
01:13:449 (2) - nothing strong here so delete this?
01:13:574 (3) - again vocal emphasizes on the blue line so this slider does not fit well
01:16:574 (2,3) - ctrl+G to follow the previous pattern?
01:45:824 (1) - unrankable I guess - consider it. thx :3
01:56:074 (2,3,4) - using slider end for vocal doesn't fit that well I guess. Strong beats should be clickable
02:06:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stream doesn't fit - i think it is ok. but, i will fix this when it is mentioned again
02:17:574 (1,2,3) - such arrangements with a triangle in the middle is...meh... really akward to play... - ^
02:46:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - guess you should improve this stream...
02:50:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ And I feel that the guitar solo part needs rework..

Skipping hard and normal.

Good luck ^ ^

• 1. Consider adding 'Toyosaki Aki, Chihara Minori, Hirano Aya & Hisaka Youko' to Artist since they also sing the song. Some maps nowadays have multiple names in Artist, so i suppose it's fine (like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122658) . If you follow my suggestions, here's the kanji (i hope it's correct) '豊崎 愛生, 茅原 実里, 平野 綾 & 日笠 陽子
  
  2. Remove 'anime' from Tags, it will be added to Genre. And i still don't know the meaning of breast milk in Tags ._.
  
  3. Your easiest diff has 4.06 stars, while the rule said that the easiest diff must have star difficulty around 2.5-3 stars, see this https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset . You should make your normal easier or make a new Easy diff
  
  4. It would be better if you spice the map more with hitsounds like http://puu.sh/5LWEj.wav or http://puu.sh/5LWKI.wav, or you can find another hitsound which suit your preference, it's up to you

• 00:06:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - it's really hard to read. Please use distance snap and rearrange the positions
  00:13:574 (1,2) - switch nc
  00:16:324 (4) - with the relatively slow AR, this hidden circle might really hard to see for beginners. Consider placing it somewhere else as long as it's not hidden
  00:19:074 (5) - the rhythm and vocal is quite familiar with 00:17:574 (1,2,3) - , making it a long slider is kinda awkward to me. My suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:28:324 (1) - add finish
  01:11:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:16:074 (5) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  01:25:324 (1) - there's no particular beat in 01:25:824 - 01:26:324 - 01:26:824 - so it sounds really awkward. i suggest to change it into spinner which starts from 01:25:324 - end at 01:27:324 -
  01:35:324 (1) - add finish
  02:12:574 (3) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:17:574 (3) - how about making it a reversed slider? fits the vocal more. and also rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:21:324 (2) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:56:324 (5) - only suggestion. make sure the slider's tail won't touch previous slider's body
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:58:324 (1) - finish at slider's head?
  03:00:074 (3) - same like 02:56:324 (5) -
  03:10:574 (4) - nc?
  03:30:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of the kiai/chorus
  03:34:574 (4) - same like 00:19:074 (5) -
  03:43:074 (1) - finish at slider's tail
  03:44:324 (1) - finish

• 00:08:074 - add a note?
  00:12:324 (1) - add one more reversed slider, so it will end at 00:12:699 - and make it easier to read 00:12:949 (2) -
  00:17:324 - add a note here? it feels empty
  00:18:574 (3) - only rhythm suggestion, since it's actually awkward to have a long slider when the vocal urge you to click on the beat, not to hold the slider
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:324 (1) - add a note?
  00:27:324 (5) - add finish
  00:28:324 (1) - ^
  00:56:074 (5) - add a note here would be great, keep the flow running
  01:00:324 (5) - nc this? try not to make the combo too long here
  01:11:324 (4) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:11:324 (4) - add a note?
  01:15:324 (3) - add finish
  01:16:074 (1) - add finish at slider's tail
  01:20:324 - add a note. even though you're following the vocal, but there's a beat here
  01:22:324 - ^
  01:26:074 - while there's no beat here, the reversed slider sounds really awkward. Consider changing it into spinner
  01:37:824 (1) - i'm not really good at making slider, but try to lower the slider's head point a little bit (one grid), both ends will be balanced
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:56:824 (4) - really hard to read. consider making it visible like 01:58:824 (3,4) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:58:824 (3,4) - add a note. i hear a drum here
  02:08:324 (3) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  02:08:324 (3) - add a note?
  02:15:824 (1,2) - switch nc
  02:19:324 - add a note?
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:57:574 (7) - add finish at slider's tail
  03:02:824 (2,3,4) - nazi, not stacked properly
  03:10:574 (3,4,5) - ^
  03:30:324 (1) - add a note?
  03:40:324 (1,2,3) - also nazi, not stacked properly
  03:44:324 (1) - add finish

• 00:28:324 (1) - only suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:324 (3) - add finish at slider's head
  00:40:824 (1) - usually slider like this is the cause of unrank, since it's categorized as Burai Sliders. maybe you should ask a BAT about this slider
  00:48:574 (1) - ^, this one is more confusing though lol
  00:51:324 (1,2,3,4) - imo, the pattern is a bit loose to me when most of the other patterns are really dense like 00:49:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . consider adding notes 00:52:199 - 00:51:949 -
  01:45:824 (1) - same like 00:40:824 (1) -
  02:08:324 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  02:22:449 (1) - add finish
  03:04:324 (1,2,3,4) - why not make the combo like 02:56:324 (1,1,1,1) - ?
  03:20:324 (4,1,2,3,4) - really hard to read x.x
  03:44:449 (1) - add finish

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi~ trying to m4m. haven't mod for more than a month, i hope it's still fine. and sorry for grammar error -.-

[General]

• 1. Consider adding 'Toyosaki Aki, Chihara Minori, Hirano Aya & Hisaka Youko' to Artist since they also sing the song. Some maps nowadays have multiple names in Artist, so i suppose it's fine (like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122658) . If you follow my suggestions, here's the kanji (i hope it's correct) '豊崎 愛生, 茅原 実里, 平野 綾 & 日笠 陽子
  
  2. Remove 'anime' from Tags, it will be added to Genre. And i still don't know the meaning of breast milk in Tags ._.
  
  3. Your easiest diff has 4.06 stars, while the rule said that the easiest diff must have star difficulty around 2.5-3 stars, see this https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset . You should make your normal easier or make a new Easy diff
  
  4. It would be better if you spice the map more with hitsounds like http://puu.sh/5LWEj.wav or http://puu.sh/5LWKI.wav, or you can find another hitsound which suit your preference, it's up to you

[Normal]

• 00:06:324 (1,2,3,4,5) - rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - it's really hard to read. Please use distance snap and rearrange the positions - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
  00:13:574 (1,2) - switch nc
  00:16:324 (4) - with the relatively slow AR, this hidden circle might really hard to see for beginners. Consider placing it somewhere else as long as it's not hidden
  00:19:074 (5) - the rhythm and vocal is quite familiar with 00:17:574 (1,2,3) - , making it a long slider is kinda awkward to me. My suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:28:324 (1) - add finish
  01:11:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:16:074 (5) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  01:25:324 (1) - there's no particular beat in 01:25:824 - 01:26:324 - 01:26:824 - so it sounds really awkward. i suggest to change it into spinner which starts from 01:25:324 - end at 01:27:324 -
  01:35:324 (1) - add finish
  02:12:574 (3) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:17:574 (3) - how about making it a reversed slider? fits the vocal more. and also rhythm suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:21:324 (2) - same suggestion like 00:19:074 (5) -
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:56:324 (5) - only suggestion. make sure the slider's tail won't touch previous slider's body
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:58:324 (1) - finish at slider's head?
  03:00:074 (3) - same like 02:56:324 (5) -
  03:10:574 (4) - nc?
  03:30:324 (3) - nc this, it's the beginning of the kiai/chorus
  03:34:574 (4) - same like 00:19:074 (5) -
  03:43:074 (1) - finish at slider's tail
  03:44:324 (1) - finish

[Hard]

• 00:08:074 - add a note?
  00:12:324 (1) - add one more reversed slider, so it will end at 00:12:699 - and make it easier to read 00:12:949 (2) -
  00:17:324 - add a note here? it feels empty
  00:18:574 (3) - only rhythm suggestion, since it's actually awkward to have a long slider when the vocal urge you to click on the beat, not to hold the slider
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:324 (1) - add a note? - hmm.. why?
  00:27:324 (5) - add finish
  00:28:324 (1) - ^
  00:56:074 (5) - add a note here would be great, keep the flow running
  01:00:324 (5) - nc this? try not to make the combo too long here
  01:11:324 (4) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  01:11:324 (4) - add a note? - Sorry...
  01:15:324 (3) - add finish
  01:16:074 (1) - add finish at slider's tail
  01:20:324 - add a note. even though you're following the vocal, but there's a beat here
  01:22:324 - ^
  01:26:074 - while there's no beat here, the reversed slider sounds really awkward. Consider changing it into spinner
  01:37:824 (1) - i'm not really good at making slider, but try to lower the slider's head point a little bit (one grid), both ends will be balanced
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:56:824 (4) - really hard to read. consider making it visible like 01:58:824 (3,4) -
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:58:824 (3,4) - add a note. i hear a drum here - Sorry.
  02:08:324 (3) - nc, it's the beginning of a new kiai
  02:08:324 (3) - add a note? - Sorry.
  02:15:824 (1,2) - switch nc
  02:19:324 - add a note?
  02:22:324 (1) - add finish
  02:57:574 (7) - add finish at slider's tail
  03:02:824 (2,3,4) - nazi, not stacked properly
  03:10:574 (3,4,5) - ^
  03:30:324 (1) - add a note? - Sorry.
  03:40:324 (1,2,3) - also nazi, not stacked properly
  03:44:324 (1) - add finish

[Insane]

• 00:28:324 (1) - only suggestion - Sorry, I don't know what you mean ;w;
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:324 (3) - add finish at slider's head
  00:40:824 (1) - usually slider like this is the cause of unrank, since it's categorized as Burai Sliders. maybe you should ask a BAT about this slider
  00:48:574 (1) - ^, this one is more confusing though lol
  00:51:324 (1,2,3,4) - imo, the pattern is a bit loose to me when most of the other patterns are really dense like
  00:49:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . consider adding notes 00:52:199 - 00:51:949 - - fix something
  01:45:824 (1) - same like 00:40:824 (1) -
  02:08:324 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  02:22:449 (1) - add finish
  03:04:324 (1,2,3,4) - why not make the combo like 02:56:324 (1,1,1,1) - ?
  03:20:324 (4,1,2,3,4) - really hard to read x.x - I keep mine :3
  03:44:449 (1) - add finish

ok i hope it helps
good luck~

OstrichSupreme wrote:

Hello! M4M here!

Normal

00:06:824 (2) - I would shorten this note by a tick...
00:07:574 (3) - and bring this slider back a tick!
00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is nice, but in a normal diff? You may want to make it easier for the not as adept players
00:20:074 (8) - new combo
01:48:574 (4) - ^
02:15:407 (4) - I would move this to x300 and y76 to be symmetrical with 02:15:824 (5) - - Sorry, i keep mine
02:20:074 (3) - Make this one symmetrical also - ^
03:06:324 (1) - fix the nodes on this slider to look more appealing - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
03:10:574 (1) - ^ - ^

Hard

00:11:949 - New combo
00:12:199 (1) - remove new combo
01:10:574 (1,2,3) - Give these clap - it seems a little awkward
01:16:574 (2) - shorten this note to half of what it currently is, and make it repeat back. Adjust rest of this area for flow - Ok, i consider it.
01:25:449 (1) - give this finish - Umm.. why?
01:45:824 (1) - fix these nodes up a bit - I will fix this when it is mentioned again

That's all I got, couldn't find much in insane. Anyways, good luck with your map!

[ Raphael ] wrote:

[Insane]

00:28:324 (1) - only suggestion - Sorry, I don't know what you mean ;w;

SPOILER

Spudgy wrote:

Hello, m4m here!

Easy
00:24:324 (4) - Try to match the same shape as 00:22:324 (1) -
00:39:324 (2,3) - I wouldn't overlap these - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
00:41:574 (5) - Start a new combo here to match the vocals
00:54:824 (1,2,3) - Blanket better
01:02:324 (1) - and 01:02:824 (2) - should be same distance as 01:02:824 (2) - and 01:03:824 (3) -. And try to make same shape. Here is a pic to show you what I mean:

pic

It's a really small detail. And I might be wrong.
01:09:074 (4) - Slider matches vocals better here? - I will fix this when it is mentioned again
02:06:074 (3) - ^ - ^
02:44:324 (1,2) - Started these sliders on red ticks sounds funny here. Consider moving them back a tick to start on white ticks. - OK, i consider it.
03:16:324 - Finish hitsound - no, sorry.
03:24:324 (2) - ^ - ^
03:26:324 (3,4,5) - Don't overlap
03:31:574 (2) - Better blanket if you move to x:259 y:77

Normal
00:12:949 (3,4) - Two hit circles next to each other on blue ticks is weird. Try this instead: - i consider it.

pic

00:23:324 - Hit circle here - sorry.
01:24:574 (3) - ctrl + g this and move 01:25:074 (4) - to x:276 y:188. Makes it flow better.
02:54:324 (1,2,3,4) - If you put all of these at an angle, it would look cool. - consider it.
03:14:324 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping all these is kinda boring =/
03:22:324 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:29:574 (1,2) - Combo too short? - it's the beginning of a new kiai

Hard
00:49:949 (2) - Remove
01:10:574 (1,2,3) - Its more fun if you spread these out, maybe at like a 1.5x distance snap?
01:47:324 (4) - Slider shouldn't end on a blue tick. Shorten this slider by a tick and then move 01:47:699 (5) - back to the blue tick here 01:47:699 (5) -
02:08:699 (2) - Remove this hit circle. Move this slider02:08:824 (3) - back to the blue tick, and also lengthen the slider by a tick. So it looks like this:

pic

02:46:574 (1) - Shouldn't end on blue tick.
03:16:324 (1) - Finish hitsound - no

Insane
Sorry, I won't be too helpful at modding this one, because it is above my skill level.
00:28:199 (3) - Remove - Why?
00:44:324 (5,6,7) - These don't go well with the vocals.Try putting a 1/2 slider here 00:44:324 - , here 00:44:699 -, and here 00:45:074 - - Sorry, i keep mine
01:37:824 (1) - Make this a 1/1 slider, so it ends on a white tick
03:20:324 (4) - Slider maybe? to match vocals
Sorry, that's all I see with this difficulty.

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As a side note, there are areas where your hitsounds are too quiet, and I can barely hear them. Look for that and fix it.
Anyways, I hope my mod helps. Good luck, and message me anytime if you have any questions!!

vahn10 wrote:

Dear, Modders
Read This before posting something here in this thread!. The beatmap title is too long. As you save it, rename it to random ones but shorter than the one stated in the osz file like 012345 or abcdef etc.. If you do not read this, you will end up this beatmap not loaded into osu! just like in this map. OR extract this one manually using 7-zip or WinRar
I made the text larger so everybody can see it

1. 이지에 태그 ending breast milk 추가해주세요, 이지만 빠져있네요
2. 그리고 제목에 squall은 대문자로 S가 들어가야 되지 않나요? 대부분의 노래가 그래서 ㅋㅋ 저도 잘은 모르겠네요

1. 대체로 뉴콤보가 좀 정신없이 들어가있는거 같은데, 00:38:324 (1) - 이파트나 01:35:324 (1) - 이파트에서는 뉴콤보를 긴 흰색 틱에만 넣으셔서 일관성 지켜주시는게 좋을꺼같아요
2. 00:07:949 (8) - 이부분은 리듬에 안맞는거 같은데 이것처럼 바꿔보시는게 어때요?
3. 00:11:199 (5) - 이 슬라이더도 좀 뜬금없는거 같은데, 슬라이더 지우시고 음에 맞게 오브젝트 재배치 해보심이
4. 00:13:574 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요,
5. 00:24:324 (1) - 역시 뉴콤보 지워주세요, 쓸모없어 보이네요
6. 00:27:074 (1) - 이 뉴콤보도 지워주세요
7. 00:28:324 (1) - 피니시 빼먹으신듯 하네요
8. 00:54:324 - 여긴 샘플셋 소프트로 해두시는게 음악과 어울려보여요 00:54:824 - 여기나 00:55:824 - 이런곳에는 샘플셋 노말로 직접 설정해주시구요
9. 01:12:324 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요 역시 불필요해요.
10. 01:23:074 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보도 지워주시고 01:24:074 (4) - 여기에다 뉴콤보 넣어주세요
11. 01:51:324 - 이전 파트하고 같은 의견이에요, 소프트 샘플셋 추천드려요
12. 02:07:574 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요, 일관성 지켜주시는게 나을듯
13. 03:15:574 (2) - 여긴 강조때문에도 그렇고 리듬도 좀 바껴서 뉴콤보 넣으시는게 좋을꺼같아요
14. 03:18:074 (1) - 이건 어울리지 않으니 뉴콤보 지워주시구요

HelloSCV wrote:

쿠도스 안주셔도 돼요

[General]

1. 이지에 태그 ending breast milk 추가해주세요, 이지만 빠져있네요
2. 그리고 제목에 squall은 대문자로 S가 들어가야 되지 않나요? 대부분의 노래가 그래서 ㅋㅋ 저도 잘은 모르겠네요

[Insane]

1. 대체로 뉴콤보가 좀 정신없이 들어가있는거 같은데, 00:38:324 (1) - 이파트나 01:35:324 (1) - 이파트에서는 뉴콤보를 긴 흰색 틱에만 넣으셔서 일관성 지켜주시는게 좋을꺼같아요
2. 00:07:949 (8) - 이부분은 리듬에 안맞는거 같은데 이것처럼 바꿔보시는게 어때요?
3. 00:11:199 (5) - 이 슬라이더도 좀 뜬금없는거 같은데, 슬라이더 지우시고 음에 맞게 오브젝트 재배치 해보심이
4. 00:13:574 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요,
5. 00:24:324 (1) - 역시 뉴콤보 지워주세요, 쓸모없어 보이네요
6. 00:27:074 (1) - 이 뉴콤보도 지워주세요
7. 00:28:324 (1) - 피니시 빼먹으신듯 하네요
8. 00:54:324 - 여긴 샘플셋 소프트로 해두시는게 음악과 어울려보여요 00:54:824 - 여기나 00:55:824 - 이런곳에는 샘플셋 노말로 직접 설정해주시구요
9. 01:12:324 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요 역시 불필요해요.
10. 01:23:074 (1) - 여기 뉴콤보도 지워주시고 01:24:074 (4) - 여기에다 뉴콤보 넣어주세요
11. 01:51:324 - 이전 파트하고 같은 의견이에요, 소프트 샘플셋 추천드려요
12. 02:07:574 (1) - 뉴콤보 지워주세요, 일관성 지켜주시는게 나을듯
13. 03:15:574 (2) - 여긴 강조때문에도 그렇고 리듬도 좀 바껴서 뉴콤보 넣으시는게 좋을꺼같아요
14. 03:18:074 (1) - 이건 어울리지 않으니 뉴콤보 지워주시구요

아직까진 더 많은 경험이 필요하신듯하네요, 그래도 이정도면 꽤 나쁘지 않으니 힘내세요!

Avishay wrote:

Hey, M4M!

[General]
Tags are not the same in all of the diffs.
Also, how breast milk is related here? o.O Is it the name of the anime?
You use more than 3 Slider Velocities and it makes the map unrankable, if you aren't sure that it is true, read it here:
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

[Insane]
00:15:574 (5,6) - I think making those sliders curvier will flow better and will look much better - sorry, i'll keep mine
00:22:949 (5) - Intead of stacking it on 6 put it between 4 and 6
00:24:324 (4) - CTRL + G flows better in my opinion
00:44:324 (5,6,7) - I am not sure if you're trying to follow the vocal or the rhytm here, it just felt weird to me in a testplay
01:14:324 (5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't fit at all, there's no vocal and it feels realllly wierd. My suggestion is adding a 1/2 beat slider at 01:14:574
01:53:324 (5,6) - Make better flow here, one of the possible things is this:

SPOILER

02:00:949 (4) - I don't think it fits, I like this part more when this circle is removed
02:56:699 (2,2) - Make both of those 1/2 beat repeated slider, it fits with the drum in the background - sorry
03:16:324 (3) - Add finish here as well (on other diffs as well)
03:22:949 (3,4) - Be more creative and don't stak them on 2, try placing them like that:

SPOILER

03:35:574 (3) - Why is the pattern different from 03:35:074 (1,2) ? You didn't ignore the drum in the previous pattern, so why you do in this one?

[Hard]
00:25:074 (4) - Change it to a slider and extend it until 00:25:324
00:45:574 (1) - The slider starts on a red line (mid beat) and it doesn't fit that good, make it longer and start it at 00:45:324
01:04:574 (4) - Remove it, create a slider at 01:04:449 and extend it until 01:04:574 - sorry.
01:10:074 (4) - Change it to 1/4 beat reversed slider, there's a drum there
01:54:324 (6) - Try moving this slider to X:396 Y:176 - no
02:14:074 (4) - The slider doesn't fit neither with the vocal / rhytm, put a circle in his place then start the slider at 02:14:324
02:46:074 (6) - There's a drum in the middle of the slider, change it to a 1/4 beat reversed slider
02:50:324 (1,2,3,4) - It is hard to know when the sliders 1 and 3 will stop, so don't make them reversed and just add an other slider, like this:

SPOILER

and here's the pattern I did:

SPOILER

(it is the same on both)
03:04:324 (1,2) - The flow is bad with the timing, either make their metting closer or make them curvier - ok, i consider it. thx

[Normal]
00:12:324 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is really confusing betwen 2 and 3, consider changing it
00:13:574 (5) - Add a clap here? The vocal starts but it sounds rather weird without a proper hitsounds there
Just a note, this diff is sometimes confusing with the spacing and since it is a Normal diff I'm asking you to go over the diff and think if it is good for beginners - fix, but not your suggestion

[Easy]
Seems good to me (I suck at modding Easy / Normal mostly ._.)


Good luck!

Park-Hyun wrote:

Hi, M4M. Here are a few suggestions:

Easy
00:06:324 - You should start mapping here like in the other difficulties. - ok, i consider it. thx
00:23:824 (3) - Move slider end to x:452, y:96
00:24:324 (4) - Move slider start to x:476, y:148
=> http://puu.sh/6nmxV
00:25:574 (1) - Move start to x:336, y:248
00:27:074 (2) - Move start to x:432, y:312
00:28:074 (3) - Move to x:328, y:360
=> http://puu.sh/6nnfi
01:09:074 (4,5) - Here's my suggestion: http://puu.sh/6nnOm
03:22:324 - Remove Kiai - Why?

Normal
01:25:074 (4) - Move to x:324, y:256
03:12:324 (1,2,3,4,1) - Inconsistent spacing. Set beat snap divisor to 1/2, then create a pentagon with 1.4 distance snap and change the circles order so to have something like this:
=> http://puu.sh/6npye
03:14:324 - Remove Kiai - Why??
03:20:324 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as above. Create pentagon with 1.4 distance snap and rotate by 54°, then change the order:
=> http://puu.sh/6np6W
03:22:324 - Remove Kiai

Hard
00:48:199 (5) - This is not very smooth. Try this http://puu.sh/6nq0b
01:17:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I find it a bit weird. Here's my suggestion: - sorry, i keep mine
=> http://puu.sh/6nsmo
=> http://puu.sh/6nsq6
03:14:324 - Remove Kiai
03:22:324 - ^
03:28:324 (1) - I'd make it end at 03:29:824 - - Sorry.

Insane
00:28:324 (1) - Add a circle and make spinner start at 00:28:574 - like this: - Sorry.
=> http://puu.sh/6nqJV
03:14:324 - Remove Kiai
03:22:324 - ^

I hope this helps and don't hesitate to contact me if anything's not clear.
Good luck!