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Autumn
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Autumn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月27日 at 00:44:33

Artist: Diana Vickers
Title: The Boy Who Murdered Love
Tags: Songs from the Tainted Cherry Tree Indie pop rock synthpop Latte caffe_[Latte] ONEWAYS AMV AKROSSCON Hyouka
BPM: 127
Filesize: 14300kb
Play Time: 02:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (3.54 stars, 376 notes)
  2. Latte's Hard (2.36 stars, 284 notes)
  3. Normal (1.56 stars, 154 notes)
Download: Diana Vickers - The Boy Who Murdered Love
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Have U ever murdered one's love?



-The Boy Who Murdered Love
-#3 of the AKROSS CON 2013
-Hard by Caffe_[Latte]
-BG designed by meiikyuu.
Last edited by Autumn , edited 54 times in total.
Azmato
Azmato
http://puu.sh/5sByZ.zip

Added hitsound and changed some pattern.


:)
Last edited by Azmato , edited 1 time in total.
Meisle
158 posts
Joined June 2012
Meisle
在B站看到过
曲子很好听. .
是要approved还是ranked?
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
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Autumn

KevinKang wrote:

在B站看到过
曲子很好听. .
是要approved还是ranked?
For rank :D
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

Changelog for Azmato's Hard

Added hitsounds，mostly whistle

00:44:967 (4) - Add a slider to replace 2 circles
00:45:912 (1,2,3) - Re-arrange the sliders to be more clear for reading
01:03:156 (1,2,4,6) - Symmetric
02:01:502 (1,2) - ^
01:04:573 (3,5,7) - Add for downbeats
01:08:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Symmetric, lower the spacing
01:17:802 (1) - Use lower SV instead reverse slider
01:44:731 (3) - Use a slider instead 3/4
02:03:628 (1,2,4,6) - Lower the spacing
02:05:046 (3,5,7) - Add for downbeats
02:12:605 (3,5,7) - ^

12/9/2013

Added some whistle on SC2
OD-1 to even the diffspread
Last edited by Autumn , edited 2 times in total.
HendersonR
1 post
Joined October 2013
HendersonR
I liked ;)
Meisle
158 posts
Joined June 2012
Meisle
等normal做完一定会献上自己的一枚渣mod :)
Autumn
501 posts
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Topic Starter
Autumn

HendersonR wrote:

I liked ;)
Me too :D

KevinKang wrote:

等normal做完一定会献上自己的一枚渣mod :)
谢谢你 ^^
我会尽快完成
Meisle
158 posts
Joined June 2012
Meisle
[Normal]
01:55:124 (4) - slidertick忘记加音效了?
[Azmato's Hard]
00:44:258 (2) - 这个梗是HD玩家最讨厌的XD(只是吐槽一下)
01:06:699 (1) - 不太希望用转盘,打起来有种意犹未尽的感觉
01:17:802 (1) - 减到0.5可能排版上美观,但是我觉的有点太突然了,0.75?
02:07:172 (1) - 跟上面的转盘一样的感觉
01:57:959 (4) - finish音效?不太确定好不好
02:14:731 (1) - 不喜欢转盘啊→_→
02:16:621 (1) - 有个重音,加个whistle
[Insane]
点32个赞啊orz
各种跳各种喜欢（认真打了好多遍,也看了几遍,除了有些地方HD可能抓不到节奏3连完全没问题的感觉）
穷的没星星了等有了来射星
Autumn
501 posts
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Topic Starter
Autumn

KevinKang wrote:

[Normal]
01:55:124 (4) - slidertick忘记加音效了? √

[Insane]
点32个赞啊orz
各种跳各种喜欢（认真打了好多遍,也看了几遍,除了有些地方HD可能抓不到节奏3连完全没问题的感觉）
穷的没星星了等有了来射星谢谢 ^^
Translation for Azmato:

KevinKang wrote:

[Azmato's Hard]
00:44:258 (2) - Little hard for Hidden players (Joking ;p) Keep, one miss and U'll come across
01:06:699 (1) - Better to remove the spinner Nope for now but if it's referred to by more modders I'll consider
02:07:172 (1) - ^ ^
02:14:731 (1) - ^ ^
01:17:802 (1) - Try 0.75? 0.5 is a little too abrupt OK, I'm responsible for it
01:57:959 (4) - Try finish? Nope it's a little bit noisy
02:16:621 (1) - Add a whistle on the downbeat OK
Mostly tiny things so not going to call Azmato.
Thank you for modding and stars! Updated
Damnae
Elite Storyboarder
640 posts
Joined July 2011
Damnae
Hello,

Normal

Looks fine

Azmato's Hard

00:48:038 (1,1,1,1,1) - this and the other similar parts are way too simple imo. you should reuse what you made for the second kiai here instead.
01:06:699 (1) - I think it would be better if you kept going with these 01:05:754 (6) - instead of putting a spinner here.
01:10:715 (6) - would feel better around x376 y132 (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161735)
01:41:896 (5) - ctrl-g?
02:02:211 - you should add a circle here
02:07:172 (1) - as in the previous kiai I think you should map this instead of having a spinner.

Edit: the video is missing from this diff

Insane

00:05:518 (1) - feels to close to 00:05:282 (9) - , and from the previous movements it's expected to be more on the right side. I suggest to ctrl-h + ctrl-g it so it looks like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161361
if you do this ^, you should 00:06:699 (5) - move to x232 y304 (on top of 00:04:101 (5) - )

00:07:408 (1) - move to x106 y368 (on top of 00:07:408 (1) - ) instead?
00:08:589 (4,5,6) - I can't hear any sound for 5, same thing for the next triples :x
00:20:400 (5) - would feel better if 5's head was lower (something like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161650)

00:42:132 (4,5) - swap their positions?
00:42:605 (6,7) - ^ and these too

00:47:565 (1) - couldn't read that slowdown... might work better if it was reversed? (ctrl-g)

00:57:959 (1,2,3) - maybe something that goes a bit more across the screen? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161671
00:59:140 - I think you should add a circle here and more the spinner's start 1/4 later (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161679 if you used my previous suggestion)

01:10:243 (5) - what about moving it 01:08:589 (2) - on top of this, and moving 01:10:715 (1) - there too, for a left/right/left movement?

01:32:684 (1,2) - would fit the stronger voice better if the spacing was a bit larger between these two
01:48:510 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - nice, but maybe a bit too many nc, you could group them by two instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161700
01:59:613 - add a circle here and move the spinner 1/4 away?
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - that broken heart :p

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Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
咦 还是觉得很不可思议有人做这歌

Insane
00:14:495 (3) - 感觉CTRL+G会让flow更好些
00:21:581 (1) - 这种没vocal的地方建议还是用1/2 slider打拍子 因为伴奏还是很规律的，00:22:526 (3) - 这个3/4我觉得就比较合适
00:28:668 (4) - 这不应该叠在和红锚点一样的位置 (316,120)吗？
00:32:684 (5) - 这肯定漏了NC。 还有就是这个如果放到右上角的话flow应该会舒服一些如下图，当然你也可以换个滑条形状，我只是简单把它转了个角度示意一下
SPOILER
00:58:904 (3) - 扔到和前面的2中心对称的位置怎样 用来和spinner衔接
01:03:156 (1) - 头上finish美丽
01:17:802 (3) - 最近这种slider有风险 祝你好运
01:47:565 (9) - 感觉这个3/4不太舒服 一个是因为后面那个是减速滑条 还离那么远 还有就是回碰到上一个slider感觉不太好看 建议还是用1/2 反正前面那个"acting"也不是什么长音
02:03:628 (1) - 头上的finish也美丽
02:04:573 (3,1) - 或许可以让它们不挨上？ 调整一下前面的东西的位置 嘛 也不是什么大事儿
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4) - 建议头上只用clap 这两个鼓一起打听起来很奇怪 至少我从打鼓的角度讲这个真的很奇怪……

Azmato's Hard
plz use AR7 for this diff, as the song is slow and diff is quite easy, and to make a difference between the Insane
I would also recommend OD6, but this is optional
00:20:400 (5,6) - this spacing is really unintuitive, plz better use a ordinary spacing for it
00:27:959 (1) - I think you kinda messed up the NCs here. I would suggest that you move this NC to 00:29:140 (3) - and move 00:31:739 (1) - 's NC to 00:32:920 (4) - , and your NCs would be more consistent
00:31:739 (1) - better use a 1/2 slider here, imo the "hurt" is not a long vocal sound at this point
00:32:920 (4) - I think you need a finish on its head to match with the music
00:33:865 (6) - missing whistle on head
00:37:172 (4) - missing whistle at end
00:43:550 (1,2) - recommended to exchange NC for consistency
00:59:140 (1) - whistle for ite end?
01:03:156 (1) - missing finish on head
01:16:384 - useless green lines should be removed
01:58:904 (2) - missing whistle
02:17:802 (4) - missing whistle at end

Normal
00:32:684 (3) - 建议NC 因为这里应该算是进入了一个新段落
01:03:156 (1) - 头上的finish
01:33:392 (3) - ^ 而且我还是觉得这里应该起新NC 你看要不要把前面的NC调整一下，让01:32:447 (1,2) - 它们两个归到前一组里去
01:45:439 (2,3,4) - 连续掉了好几个鼓音感觉还是有点难受 再考虑下节奏吧
01:48:274 - 无用绿线
02:11:187 (1) - 从这个地方开始我建议全都用clap whistle都去掉 感觉比较合曲 强调效果也好
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成一个spinner 毕竟是最低难度

That's all
Good luck
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Autumn
501 posts
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Topic Starter
Autumn
Damnae's mod

Damnae wrote:

Hello,

Normal

Looks fine

Azmato's Hard

Edit: the video is missing from this diff Fixed

Insane

00:05:518 (1) - feels to close to 00:05:282 (9) - , and from the previous movements it's expected to be more on the right side. I suggest to ctrl-h + ctrl-g it so it looks like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161361
if you do this ^, you should 00:06:699 (5) - move to x232 y304 (on top of 00:04:101 (5) - ) Good idea

00:07:408 (1) - move to x106 y368 (on top of 00:07:408 (1) - ) instead? OK
00:08:589 (4,5,6) - I can't hear any sound for 5, same thing for the next triples :x Uhh...Actually I chould hear the guitar here
00:20:400 (5) - would feel better if 5's head was lower (something like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161650) OK

00:42:132 (4,5) - swap their positions? Current one is better imo
00:42:605 (6,7) - ^ and these too ^

00:47:565 (1) - couldn't read that slowdown... might work better if it was reversed? (ctrl-g) I'll consider, this part is pretty hard indeed

00:57:959 (1,2,3) - maybe something that goes a bit more across the screen? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161671 I made this as a parallel flow
00:59:140 - I think you should add a circle here and more the spinner's start 1/4 later (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161679 if you used my previous suggestion) Actually I should add a note at 00:59:376 - ,but the spinner is just too short, I'll consider removing it later

01:10:243 (5) - what about moving it 01:08:589 (2) - on top of this, and moving 01:10:715 (1) - there too, for a left/right/left movement? The jump is a little too far ;w;

01:32:684 (1,2) - would fit the stronger voice better if the spacing was a bit larger between these two You're right, but I arrange the strong part on 01:32:684 (1) - , I think it's not necessary to arrange 2 jumps, but I'll consider later
01:48:510 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - nice, but maybe a bit too many nc, you could group them by two instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161700 I mean, the colour makes it easier to read ;)
01:59:613 - add a circle here and move the spinner 1/4 away? same as 00:59:140 -
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - that broken heart :p 8-)

best avatar Best ever :)
Thx for mod!
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
Zero__wind‘s mod

Zero__wind wrote:

咦 还是觉得很不可思议有人做这歌

Insane
00:14:495 (3) - 感觉CTRL+G会让flow更好些 √ 这梗我纠结了很久
00:21:581 (1) - 这种没vocal的地方建议还是用1/2 slider打拍子 因为伴奏还是很规律的，00:22:526 (3) - 这个3/4我觉得就比较合适 OK 好
00:28:668 (4) - 这不应该叠在和红锚点一样的位置 (316,120)吗？Fixed
00:32:684 (5) - 这肯定漏了NC。 还有就是这个如果放到右上角的话flow应该会舒服一些如下图，当然你也可以换个滑条形状，我只是简单把它转了个角度示意一下 Added，调整了排列
SPOILER
00:58:904 (3) - 扔到和前面的2中心对称的位置怎样 用来和spinner衔接 好
01:03:156 (1) - 头上finish美丽 加丽
01:17:802 (3) - 最近这种slider有风险 祝你好运 谢提醒 有问题就换减速
01:47:565 (9) - 感觉这个3/4不太舒服 一个是因为后面那个是减速滑条 还离那么远 还有就是回碰到上一个slider感觉不太好看 建议还是用1/2 反正前面那个"acting"也不是什么长音 好
02:03:628 (1) - 头上的finish也美丽 有丽
02:04:573 (3,1) - 或许可以让它们不挨上？ 调整一下前面的东西的位置 嘛 也不是什么大事儿 分开了
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4) - 建议头上只用clap 这两个鼓一起打听起来很奇怪 至少我从打鼓的角度讲这个真的很奇怪…… OK

Normal
00:32:684 (3) - 建议NC 因为这里应该算是进入了一个新段落 √
01:03:156 (1) - 头上的finish√
01:33:392 (3) - ^ 而且我还是觉得这里应该起新NC 你看要不要把前面的NC调整一下，让01:32:447 (1,2) - 它们两个归到前一组里去已调整
01:45:439 (2,3,4) - 连续掉了好几个鼓音感觉还是有点难受 再考虑下节奏吧 这个完全就是跟的vocal（A-O-A） 我觉得还行
01:48:274 - 无用绿线 Removed
02:11:187 (1) - 从这个地方开始我建议全都用clap whistle都去掉 感觉比较合曲 强调效果也好 好主意
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成一个spinner 毕竟是最低难度 我再考虑考虑，这里其实是属于那种戛然而止而不是渐出效果，转盘有点软

That's all
Good luck
给欧美音乐支援个星 谢谢！
Thx for mod! Updated
(Azmato is silenced so he's gonna response in 2 days)
[Cleto]
5 posts
Joined November 2013
[Cleto]
Hi ~
From Azmato 's Request :D

[Normal]
00:13:077 (1) - Delete NC and 00:14:022 (2) - Add NC


[Hard]
00:11:187 (3,4) - 앞 슬라이더 패턴처럼 곡선으로 바꿔주시는게..? 보기 안좋아요
00:12:605 (7,8) - 00:12:132 (5,6) - 이거랑 모양 맞춰주세요.
00:37:880 (5,6,7) - 노래랑 박자가 ... 안맞는거같기도 하고 :o
01:04:809 (4) - Ctrl + G
01:20:872 (1) - 여기에 뉴콤 지우고 01:22:526 (4) - 여기에 추가
01:24:652 (1) - 스핀 대신에 노트를 넣어도 괜찮을거 같습니다 ;)
01:52:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 하드에 이런 패턴 잇어도 되는건가영 'ㅅ' ..?

[Insane]
00:03:628 (4,7) - Add NC
01:27:487 (4) - Ctrl + G
01:59:613 (1) - I suggest to Add Note :roll:

GL!
Azmato
Azmato
SPOILER

Damnae wrote:

Azmato's Hard

00:48:038 (1,1,1,1,1) - this and the other similar parts are way too simple imo. you should reuse what you made for the second kiai here instead. Sure!
01:06:699 (1) - I think it would be better if you kept going with these 01:05:754 (6) - instead of putting a spinner here. nope..
01:10:715 (6) - would feel better around x376 y132 ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1161735 ) nope..
01:41:896 (5) - ctrl-g? nope..
02:02:211 - you should add a circle here Sure!
02:07:172 (1) - as in the previous kiai I think you should map this instead of having a spinner. Ok but I think It already have spinner

Zero__wind wrote:

Azmato's Hard
plz use AR7 for this diff, as the song is slow and diff is quite easy, and to make a difference between the Insane
I would also recommend OD6, but this is optional
00:20:400 (5,6) - this spacing is really unintuitive, plz better use a ordinary spacing for it
00:27:959 (1) - I think you kinda messed up the NCs here. I would suggest that you move this NC to 00:29:140 (3) - and move 00:31:739 (1) - 's NC to 00:32:920 (4) - , and your NCs would be more consistent
00:31:739 (1) - better use a 1/2 slider here, imo the "hurt" is not a long vocal sound at this point
00:32:920 (4) - I think you need a finish on its head to match with the music
00:33:865 (6) - missing whistle on head
00:37:172 (4) - missing whistle at end
00:43:550 (1,2) - recommended to exchange NC for consistency
00:59:140 (1) - whistle for ite end?
01:03:156 (1) - missing finish on head
01:16:384 - useless green lines should be removed
01:58:904 (2) - missing whistle
02:17:802 (4) - missing whistle at end

All Applied! Thanks

Cleto wrote:

00:11:187 (3,4) - 앞 슬라이더 패턴처럼 곡선으로 바꿔주시는게..? 보기 안좋아요 곡선은 아니지만 일부 적용
00:12:605 (7,8) - 00:12:132 (5,6) - 이거랑 모양 맞춰주세요. 이미 맞춰져있는듯...?
00:37:880 (5,6,7) - 노래랑 박자가 ... 안맞는거같기도 하고 :o X
01:04:809 (4) - Ctrl + G O
01:20:872 (1) - 여기에 뉴콤 지우고 01:22:526 (4) - 여기에 추가 O
01:24:652 (1) - 스핀 대신에 노트를 넣어도 괜찮을거 같습니다 ;) X
01:52:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 하드에 이런 패턴 잇어도 되는건가영 'ㅅ' ..?네 아마 괜찮을 겁니다. 겟난이라..한번더 지적오면 바꿀게요.
http://puu.sh/5OuSV.zip

Autumn can you add a video on my diff..?

I don know hot to add
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

[Cleto] wrote:

Hi ~
From Azmato 's Request :D

[Normal]
00:13:077 (1) - Delete NC and 00:14:022 (2) - Add NC Fixed

[Insane]
00:03:628 (4,7) - Add NC OK
01:27:487 (4) - Ctrl + G It's intended to arrange like this, to form a jump
01:59:613 (1) - I suggest to Add Note :roll: OK, one more modder pick this and I'll add

GL!
Thank you for mod! Updated
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hi. Random modding

General:

-- I think the only relevance of this song with "hyouka" is the BG. If that was a random BG by meikyuu, I'd say you to remove it from the tags.

Normal:

00:12:132 (1,3) - You've NCed every 2 stanza, and this is breaking the pattern, leading to mess of comboes. Delete NC (1), and NC (3). You'll know what to do after this until 00:32:447. If the NC was setted at 00:12:132 (1) because of 00:10:951 (2), I think it's ok since it doesn't lead to high combo count.
00:41:660 - I think this was a mistake to be ignored after seeking the other patterns. Consider adding a beat by changing pattern around here?
01:31:266 (1) - Delete NC for pattern I've mentioned before.
01:44:022 (5) - Reduce 1/2 to fit the lyrics?
02:05:518 (3) - Be consistent with 01:05:046 (1).
02:10:243 (4) - The same shape with (3) didn't looked interesting. Give a change as you done in 02:12:132 (2,4)?

Azmato's Hard:

00:12:132 (5) - 패턴 바뀌는 부분이니까 여기 뉴콤하면 좋을듯요
00:13:077 (1,3) - 뉴콤 바꿔주는게 음악과 패턴에 맞을듯요
00:37:880 (5) - 3/4 슬라이더는 (6) 부터 어울릴것 같네요. 이거는 1/4 줄여주세요.
00:48:510 (1,1,1) - 개인적인 감상으로 음악이나 패턴에 뚜렷한 구별이 없거나 읽기 어렵지 않은 부분에서의 뉴콤 스팸은 효과적이지 못하다는 느낌입니다.
00:49:928 (1) - 안티점프 여기서 어울릴지 모르겠습니다.
00:51:817 (5) - 피니시 제거요
00:55:597 (5) - ^
01:17:802 (1) - 변속이더라도 이전 슬라이더들과 같은 직선 모양이라서 뭔가 아쉬웠습니다. 진동같은 거라도 넣는게 어떨까요?
01:24:652 (1) - 좀 뜬금없는 스핀이라는 느낌이 듭니다.
01:32:211 (7) - 1/4 줄이는게 음악과 더 어울릴거 같습니다.
01:39:770 (6) - ^
01:40:479 (2) - 간격
02:14:495 (7) - (208,108) 정도에 놓아서 간격 지키는게 더 나을거라고 생각합니다. 좀 흐름을 끊고 뜬금 점프 같아요.
02:19:455 - 쓸모없는 타임라인 삭제

Insane:

-- Stack leniency 4 will be a better idea to suit 01:48:746 (1,1,1,1) in game.

00:06:463 (4) - NC for pattern distribution.
00:40:243 (1) - I really don't think a 3/4 slider fits here. Reduce 1/4 please.
01:17:802 (3) - I heard this was unrankable, not sure. Ask a BAT lol
01:33:156 (2) - This was the only Finish I've heard. Even this matched the song, I think it was a bit irregular.

Good luck ^^
Azmato
Azmato

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi. Random modding

Azmato's Hard:

00:12:132 (5) - 패턴 바뀌는 부분이니까 여기 뉴콤하면 좋을듯요 ㅇㅋ
00:13:077 (1,3) - 뉴콤 바꿔주는게 음악과 패턴에 맞을듯요ㅇㅋ
00:37:880 (5) - 3/4 슬라이더는 (6) 부터 어울릴것 같네요. 이거는 1/4 줄여주세요.ㅇㅋ
00:48:510 (1,1,1) - 개인적인 감상으로 음악이나 패턴에 뚜렷한 구별이 없거나 읽기 어렵지 않은 부분에서의 뉴콤 스팸은 효과적이지 못하다는 느낌입니다.ㅇㅋ
00:49:928 (1) - 안티점프 여기서 어울릴지 모르겠습니다.안티 점프가 뭐죠..?
00:51:817 (5) - 피니시 제거요ㅇㅋ
00:55:597 (5) - ^ㅇㅋ
01:17:802 (1) - 변속이더라도 이전 슬라이더들과 같은 직선 모양이라서 뭔가 아쉬웠습니다. 진동같은 거라도 넣는게 어떨까요?ㅇㅋ
01:24:652 (1) - 좀 뜬금없는 스핀이라는 느낌이 듭니다.ㅇㅋ
01:32:211 (7) - 1/4 줄이는게 음악과 더 어울릴거 같습니다.ㅇㅋ
01:39:770 (6) - ^ㅇㅋ
01:40:479 (2) - 간격ㅇㅋ
02:14:495 (7) - (208,108) 정도에 놓아서 간격 지키는게 더 나을거라고 생각합니다. 좀 흐름을 끊고 뜬금 점프 같아요.ㅇㅋ
02:19:455 - 쓸모없는 타임라인 삭제
ㅇㅋ
Good luck ^^

감사합니다 :D
http://puu.sh/5STsB.zip
Azmato
Azmato
for update


http://puu.sh/60cIN
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
hi

[Normal]
  1. you need to rearrange the NCs 00:12:132 (1) - from here to 00:32:211 (5) - here
  2. 00:49:928 (3) - what about changing the rhythm like this for better match with the vocal?
    example
  3. 00:53:707 (3) - same opinion with above
  4. 00:57:959 (1) - delete NC and add NC 00:59:140 (2) - here or 01:00:321 (3) - here for consistence (and 01:01:266 (1) - delete this NC as well if you fix thi)
  5. 01:31:266 (1) - delete NC
  6. 02:05:518 (3) - add NC here or 01:05:046 (1) - delete this NC
[Azmato's Hard]

[Insane]
  1. tick rate 2 fits this song best (and add some slidetick hitsounds as well)
  2. 00:06:463 (4) - consider adding NC here for indicating changed pattern and rhythm
  3. 00:37:172 (2) - curving this slider to upward feels little bit better than current one imo
    for example
  4. 01:06:699 (5,6,7) - current rhythm feels little bit off, maybe extending the slider length and delete latter note and reversing rhythm will work
    example
  5. 01:17:802 (3) - i'm not sure if this slider is still acceptable, well i'd rather adjust it to less twisted slider
  6. 01:35:046 (7,1) - this rhythm should be reversed if you followed with vocal sounds (and it seems you did)
    example
  7. 01:38:825 (10,1) - well another rhythm breaking? try changing this like following image
    example
  8. 01:42:605 (1) - uh.. one more awkward rhythm here, try this
    this
  9. 01:46:384 (5) - NC for consistence and large distance changing
  10. 01:48:274 - useless green line
  11. 02:17:802 (3) - well actually i placement doesn't look good for playing, reversing this slider by ctrl g can be better flow
nice song :) good luck for rank!
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi. Random modding

General:

-- I think the only relevance of this song with "hyouka" is the BG. If that was a random BG by meikyuu, I'd say you to remove it from the tags. The AMV is just about hyouka so I'd better keep it

Normal:

00:12:132 (1,3) - You've NCed every 2 stanza, and this is breaking the pattern, leading to mess of comboes. Delete NC (1), and NC (3). You'll know what to do after this until 00:32:447. If the NC was setted at 00:12:132 (1) because of 00:10:951 (2), I think it's ok since it doesn't lead to high combo count.All fixed
00:41:660 - I think this was a mistake to be ignored after seeking the other patterns. Consider adding a beat by changing pattern around here?Fixed
01:31:266 (1) - Delete NC for pattern I've mentioned before. OK
01:44:022 (5) - Reduce 1/2 to fit the lyrics? Nice diea
02:05:518 (3) - Be consistent with 01:05:046 (1). Fixed
02:10:243 (4) - The same shape with (3) didn't looked interesting. Give a change as you done in 02:12:132 (2,4)? Oh that's ok, not big issue


Insane:

-- Stack leniency 4 will be a better idea to suit 01:48:746 (1,1,1,1) in game. 4 is a little too off, 6 is better imo

00:06:463 (4) - NC for pattern distribution.OK
00:40:243 (1) - I really don't think a 3/4 slider fits here. Reduce 1/4 please. OK
01:17:802 (3) - I heard this was unrankable, not sure. Ask a BAT lol Well...changed
01:33:156 (2) - This was the only Finish I've heard. Even this matched the song, I think it was a bit irregular.Actually I just follow the BGM..well I'll consider later

Good luck ^^

To HelloSCV↓
SPOILER

HelloSCV wrote:

hi

[Normal]
  1. you need to rearrange the NCs 00:12:132 (1) - from here to 00:32:211 (5) - here Done
  2. 00:49:928 (3) - what about changing the rhythm like this for better match with the vocal? OK
    example
  3. 00:53:707 (3) - same opinion with above Uzing reversing slider for a change
  4. 00:57:959 (1) - delete NC and add NC 00:59:140 (2) - here or 01:00:321 (3) - here for consistence (and 01:01:266 (1) - delete this NC as well if you fix thi) OK
  5. 01:31:266 (1) - delete NC Done
  6. 02:05:518 (3) - add NC here or 01:05:046 (1) - delete this NC Added
[Insane]
  1. tick rate 2 fits this song best (and add some slidetick hitsounds as well) OK
  2. 00:06:463 (4) - consider adding NC here for indicating changed pattern and rhythm Done
  3. 00:37:172 (2) - curving this slider to upward feels little bit better than current one imo Hmm..I think the current one is better
    for example
  4. 01:06:699 (5,6,7) - current rhythm feels little bit off, maybe extending the slider length and delete latter note and reversing rhythm will work OK
    example
  5. 01:17:802 (3) - i'm not sure if this slider is still acceptable, well i'd rather adjust it to less twisted slider Removed
  6. 01:35:046 (7,1) - this rhythm should be reversed if you followed with vocal sounds (and it seems you did) OK
    example
  7. 01:38:825 (10,1) - well another rhythm breaking? try changing this like following image I choose the drum sound here
    example
  8. 01:42:605 (1) - uh.. one more awkward rhythm here, try this Great idea
    this
  9. 01:46:384 (5) - NC for consistence and large distance changing OK
  10. 01:48:274 - useless green line Removed
  11. 02:17:802 (3) - well actually i placement doesn't look good for playing, reversing this slider by ctrl g can be better flow OK
nice song :) good luck for rank!
Thx for mod! Updated
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,192 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
From Azmato's request and M4M

[Normal]

00:05:518 (4) - How about Ctrl + G?

00:27:014 (3,4) - Humm... I think this pattern is confused for Newbie player... You need to change 'Not Overlap With Slider'

Clean Diff : )

[Hard]
Korean

00:09:298 (6) - 00:08:353 (5) - 와 너무 가까운 것 같습니다. 00:08:353 (5) - 를 Ctrl + Shift + R를 이용해서 각도 조절 하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

00:15:912 (1,2,3,4) - 하드에서는 안 좋은 패턴 입니다. 차라리 풍차 돌리시는게 어떨까요?

00:27:959 (8) - 중간에 빨간 점을 이용해서 만드는게 더 이쁠것 같아요

00:52:290 (1) - 앞 부분 클랩 추가

00:52:762 (2) - 앞 부분 휘슬 추가

00:53:235 (3) - 앞 부분 클랩 추가

00:56:069 (1,2,3) - 위와 같습니다.

01:24:888 (1,2) - 1에는 휘슬 2에는 클랩 추가

01:25:833 (3) - 휘슬 추가

02:02:211 (2) - 클랩 추가

[Insane]

00:27:014 (1) - Last Point 1 grid up

00:27:723 - How about use soft-slidertick2 ?

01:24:416 - ^

01:28:195 - ^

01:48:038 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Very Confused :o NC is not good in this pattern

Good Song~ And Some funny patterns :D

Good Luck~
Azmato
Azmato

W h i t e wrote:

From Azmato's request and M4M



[Hard]
Korean

00:09:298 (6) - 00:08:353 (5) - 와 너무 가까운 것 같습니다. 00:08:353 (5) - 를 Ctrl + Shift + R를 이용해서 각도 조절 하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

00:15:912 (1,2,3,4) - 하드에서는 안 좋은 패턴 입니다. 차라리 풍차 돌리시는게 어떨까요?

00:27:959 (8) - 중간에 빨간 점을 이용해서 만드는게 더 이쁠것 같아요

00:52:290 (1) - 앞 부분 클랩 추가

00:52:762 (2) - 앞 부분 휘슬 추가

00:53:235 (3) - 앞 부분 클랩 추가

00:56:069 (1,2,3) - 위와 같습니다.

01:24:888 (1,2) - 1에는 휘슬 2에는 클랩 추가

01:25:833 (3) - 휘슬 추가

02:02:211 (2) - 클랩 추가

All applied

Good Song~ And Some funny patterns :D

Good Luck~
http://puu.sh/69762.zip
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi,Autumn,m4m req. 抱歉，在in-game跟你說好的mod，卻自己耽誤了數天..orz (倒

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.source可以增加 "Songs from the Tainted Cherry Tree"，它寫說是album封面，我覺得可以加看看。

這是他的wiki網址:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Boy_Who_Murdered_Love

2.Tag加"Indie, pop rock, synthpop"?

[Normal]

00:21:581 (1,2,3) - 似乎可以這三個選起來，然後移動疊住 00:21:581 (1) .
00:57:014 (3) - 試試跟前面疊起來。

[Azmato's Hard]

看我的PM吧。

[Insane]

00:16:857 (5) - 如果跟前面疊起來將會是好看的pattern，你後面的都有跟前面疊到，這邊怎麼就部分遮到，有點不太好看。
00:18:274 (1) - 滑條不如用00:18:746 (2) copy一下，一個弧和一個角的似乎不太搭。
00:35:991 (4) - 跟前面00:35:282 (2) 疊到了
00:42:841 (7) - 跟前面疊? 這00:41:424 (3,6) 都疊了，這邊怎不疊。
00:55:361 (1) - 感覺開頭能+finish，雖然是紅線..
02:18:746 (1) - 滑條頭加個finish試試看做個結束?

節奏沒什麼問題。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.話說這首跟冰果有關? 不然怎麼會用冰果BG。
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
<3
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
W h i t e

W h i t e wrote:

From Azmato's request and M4M

[Normal]

00:05:518 (4) - How about Ctrl + G? Nice idea

00:27:014 (3,4) - Humm... I think this pattern is confused for Newbie player... You need to change 'Not Overlap With Slider' Fixed

Clean Diff : )


[Insane]

00:27:014 (1) - Last Point 1 grid up Fixed

00:27:723 - How about use soft-slidertick2 ? OK

01:24:416 - ^

01:28:195 - ^

01:48:038 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Very Confused :o NC is not good in this pattern
I'll ask for more testplay to check!

Good Song~ And Some funny patterns :D

Good Luck~

小船

smallboat wrote:

Hi,Autumn,m4m req. 抱歉，在in-game跟你說好的mod，卻自己耽誤了數天..orz (倒 沒沒沒沒沒關係

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.source可以增加 "Songs from the Tainted Cherry Tree"，它寫說是album封面，我覺得可以加看看。

這是他的wiki網址:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Boy_Who_Murdered_Love

2.Tag加"Indie, pop rock, synthpop"?

All added
[Normal]

00:21:581 (1,2,3) - 似乎可以這三個選起來，然後移動疊住 00:21:581 (1) . 那個已經消失了啦
00:57:014 (3) - 試試跟前面疊起來。OK

[Azmato's Hard]

看我的PM吧。

[Insane]

00:16:857 (5) - 如果跟前面疊起來將會是好看的pattern，你後面的都有跟前面疊到，這邊怎麼就部分遮到，有點不太好看。換了排列
00:18:274 (1) - 滑條不如用00:18:746 (2) copy一下，一個弧和一個角的似乎不太搭。弄點變化 沒關係
00:35:991 (4) - 跟前面00:35:282 (2) 疊到了 沒擋道折返箭頭應該沒事吧
00:42:841 (7) - 跟前面疊? 這00:41:424 (3,6) 都疊了，這邊怎不疊。 OK
00:55:361 (1) - 感覺開頭能+finish，雖然是紅線.. vocal不是很強，finish不是很必要
02:18:746 (1) - 滑條頭加個finish試試看做個結束? 這裡是弱拍啊...

節奏沒什麼問題。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.話說這首跟冰果有關? 不然怎麼會用冰果BG。 AMV是和冰菓有關的

Thx for mod！！！Updated~
Sorry for delay guys :(
Bellum_old
Bellum_old
Hi Autumn~

[Normal]

good diff.


[Insane]

00:15:676 (6) - how about put this at same place with 00:17:802 (9) ?
00:33:392 (2) - bend it opposite side for better flow
00:35:991 (4) - nazi but 251||228 looks good :)
01:48:746 (1,1,1,1) - remove NC please. it looks like NC spamming
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4) - <3

[Latte's Hard]

00:31:502 (6) - 스택해주세요
01:04:809 (4) - ctrl +g하는것이 동선이 더 깔끔해집니다
02:11:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 슬라이더 틱 이용하셔서 하얀선에 클랩 넣는걸 추천.


I like this mapset

Have a star~ :)
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,846 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
ur m4m queue

rly well mapped. starr~

[Normal]

some of ur blankets could use some adjusting

00:30:085 (2) - fix blanket
01:19:219 (2) - this looks a bit off
01:20:872 (5) - this needs some work unless it's not suppose to be a blanket
01:33:392 (1) - ^

00:22:054 (2) - this isn't perfectly centered between 00:22:054 (2,3,4)

00:59:140 (2) - honestly i think this would look better flipped around (ctrl j)

02:05:518 (1) - ctrl g?


[Latte's Hard]

00:25:361 (1) - fix blanket a bit
00:32:920 (1) - ^

suggestion:
00:40:951 (3) - http://gyazo.com/e8cdcd619b0eac494c04afaae0ac361d ?

01:03:865 (2) - ctrl g?
01:04:809 (4) - ctrl g this too if you did the above

01:23:943 - needs something here

02:07:172 (1) - feels weird to have the end of a spinner as a beat. maybe end the spinner earlier and put a circle here 02:08:825
02:14:731 (1) - ^

00:43:550 (10,1) - not sure if allowed and it's hard to read :<


[Insane]

k these suggestions are probably useless but. anyway;

00:42:132 (4,5,6,7) - make these jumps more consistent maybe? hold alt to change the spacing stuff o-o
00:46:384 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

01:35:991 (2) - doesn't look good flip it around maybe

01:45:439 (3) - mm ctrl g?

k i'm too nub to mod this difficulty lol ;-;
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
CET 6
Hi Hi M4M~
点赞

Normal

00:10:243 (1,2,3,4) - 强迫症患者感觉这里没有对称有点···- -你懂得
01:02:211 (6) - ^


Latte's Hard

00:52:290 (1,2,3) - i think these straight sliders r not very good to look
00:50:400 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - there r too many straight slider in this section，may make people feel bored
01:24:888 (1,2) - these whistle is good ，why not continue using this effect in later sliders

00:48:038 (1,2,3,4) - 01:08:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:16:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these kind of pattern is a bit excessive


Insane

00:06:463 (1) - 感觉可以放好和00:06:935 (3,4) - 形成正三角形
00:47:565 (1) - 像这种减速出现好几处 感觉可以用单独的特殊的鲜艳颜色提示一下
感觉可以用一些soft whistle音效

大概就这样啦
GL~ :)
Caffe_[Latte]
112 posts
Joined November 2012
Caffe_[Latte]

Bellum wrote:

00:31:502 (6) - 스택해주세요 OK
01:04:809 (4) - ctrl +g하는것이 동선이 더 깔끔해집니다OK
02:11:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 슬라이더 틱 이용하셔서 하얀선에 클랩 넣는걸 추천.X

Kibbleru wrote:

00:25:361 (1) - fix blanket a bit OK
00:32:920 (1) - ^ OK

suggestion:
00:40:951 (3) - http://gyazo.com/e8cdcd619b0eac494c04afaae0ac361d ? nice suggestion!

01:03:865 (2) - ctrl g? OK
01:04:809 (4) - ctrl g this too if you did the aboveOK

01:23:943 - needs something here OK

02:07:172 (1) - feels weird to have the end of a spinner as a beat. maybe end the spinner earlier and put a circle here 02:08:825OK
02:14:731 (1) - ^OK but just trying. can be changed

00:43:550 (10,1) - not sure if allowed and it's hard to read :< I can :)

CET 6 wrote:

00:52:290 (1,2,3) - i think these straight sliders r not very good to look OK
00:50:400 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - there r too many straight slider in this section，may make people feel bored OK
01:24:888 (1,2) - these whistle is good ，why not continue using this effect in later sliders :( I can't make it constantly

00:48:038 (1,2,3,4) - 01:08:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:16:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these kind of pattern is a bit excessiveI don think so
Thanks :)

http://puu.sh/6CHVF.zip
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
Bellum

Bellum wrote:

Hi Autumn~

[Normal]

good diff.


[Insane]

00:15:676 (6) - how about put this at same place with 00:17:802 (9) ? Nice
00:33:392 (2) - bend it opposite side for better flow OK
00:35:991 (4) - nazi but 251||228 looks good :) Fixed
01:48:746 (1,1,1,1) - remove NC please. it looks like NC spamming OK
02:16:857 (1,2,3,4) - <3 w

[Latte's Hard]

00:31:502 (6) - 스택해주세요
01:04:809 (4) - ctrl +g하는것이 동선이 더 깔끔해집니다
02:11:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 슬라이더 틱 이용하셔서 하얀선에 클랩 넣는걸 추천.


I like this mapset

Have a star~ :)
Kibbleru

Kibbleru wrote:

ur m4m queue

rly well mapped. starr~

[Normal]

some of ur blankets could use some adjusting

00:30:085 (2) - fix blanket
01:19:219 (2) - this looks a bit off
01:20:872 (5) - this needs some work unless it's not suppose to be a blanket
01:33:392 (1) - ^

00:22:054 (2) - this isn't perfectly centered between 00:22:054 (2,3,4)

00:59:140 (2) - honestly i think this would look better flipped around (ctrl j)

02:05:518 (1) - ctrl g?

All fixed except 00:22:054 (2), the spacing is restricted due to DS


[Insane]

k these suggestions are probably useless but. anyway;

00:42:132 (4,5,6,7) - make these jumps more consistent maybe? hold alt to change the spacing stuff o-o Fixed
00:46:384 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Fixed

01:35:991 (2) - doesn't look good flip it around maybe Changed

01:45:439 (3) - mm ctrl g? That's fine

k i'm too nub to mod this difficulty lol ;-; Nope, nice mod indeed
CET 6

CET 6 wrote:

Hi Hi M4M~
点赞

Normal

00:10:243 (1,2,3,4) - 强迫症患者感觉这里没有对称有点···- -你懂得 尽量调整了一下，下同
01:02:211 (6) - ^


Insane

00:06:463 (1) - 感觉可以放好和00:06:935 (3,4) - 形成正三角形 OK
00:47:565 (1) - 像这种减速出现好几处 感觉可以用单独的特殊的鲜艳颜色提示一下 用了红色
感觉可以用一些soft whistle音效 嗯 我试试

大概就这样啦
GL~ :)

Thx for mod guys! Sry again for my delay ;w;
Updated
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
送一分~


Insane

  1. 00:44:258 (3) - 这个往上一点, 看起来下个note和下面那组3/4+1一样就行了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337488
  2. 00:56:542 (3,4) - 这两个往对侧旋转一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1337511
  3. 01:35:046 (1) - 没包好
  4. 02:16:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - 美丽
Latte's Hard

  1. 00:33:628 (2) - move this note 1 grid to topleft to make blanket perfect
  2. 00:54:180 (2) - i think distance is not good, stack a note on 2's top?
Normal

  1. 看着还好
看了一眼tags, 忽然想起了那个indie音乐的人最聪明的梗

Spring Roll
230 posts
Joined April 2013
Spring Roll
hello, mod from game PM

Insane

  1. 00:20:400 (5) - Ctrl+G一下应该比较顺手
  2. 01:52:290 (1,2) - 好像歪了。。1的尾巴没在2的拐点上（就像2和3那样
  3. 01:32:684 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:33:156 (2,3) - 这两个没包好

Hard

  1. 00:42:132 (7,8) - not stack perfect
  2. 00:40:243 (2,3) - can blanket well
  3. 00:48:983 (3) - not stack perfect with 124

NM看了几遍感觉没啥问题，就这样好了（我懒
Caffe_[Latte]
112 posts
Joined November 2012
Caffe_[Latte]
applied all mod

http://puu.sh/77cMT.zip
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
To AR3 & 春卷：
All applied
Updated
Selisi
721 posts
Joined October 2012
Selisi
nice~ ☆
占坑 过段时间来摸图> <
好棒的图> < 音效超级棒呢
[General]
  1. hard diff can not load video file, so try to add it by creator or Caffe_[Latte]
[Normal]
  1. 01:35:046 (3,4) - 这里建议这样 试试就知道啦 原来的感觉节奏不太感觉的出来
    戳我
  2. 01:39:770 - 这里建议和上面一样因为是normal难度嘛 不要太多的变化比较好> <
  3. 01:55:124 (4) - 这个建议不要这么长 很影响打击的节奏感 折返去掉比较好
    比如这样
[Latte's Hard]
  1. Hp+1 (it is so easy to play just increase~~
  2. 01:00:558 (1) - slider may changed to a circle at 01:00:794 - (Because it is very closed to spinner, and maybe very hard to catch as it mapped with lyrics.
  3. 01:08:589 (1) - this circle also suggest to be removed (01:06:699 (1) - this spinner maybe unnecessary, just remove it and map it with objects)
  4. 01:34:573 (6) - why put a jump here, it'll led to inconsistent. just try this
    click me

  5. 02:07:172 (1) - also unnecessary (suggest map it with objects but not spinner, spinner played not very good :C
  6. 02:14:731 (1) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:353 (1) - 这个靠太近了 spacing感觉不太好 移动到(104,104)怎么样
  2. 00:18:746 (2) - 尾巴和前面7的影子最好叠好了 看起来整洁些
  3. 00:25:124 (1,2,3,4) - 这个三连合4是不是反了...感觉位置不变4在123前面好些（这个ignore掉吧 咱自己都觉得不改好了> <
  4. 00:27:014 (1) - 这里还有后面很多不要偷懒呀 （破坏节奏+形状不好+折返滑条 直接就1分了
    比如可以这样

  5. 01:27:487 (4) - ^
  6. 00:42:132 (4,5,6,7) - 这里的跳不太对 7是重音 应该跳远一些 这里反而比较近 把5和7都选中ctrl+G试试
  7. 01:19:691 (3) - 移动到（104,148）
  8. 01:24:180 (2) - 漏掉一个音效 这里tick都不用 滑条减短就不错的说
  9. 02:18:746 (1) - 这个想法挺好的 不过就spacing而言太大了 而且结合视频的情况有些像口水...可以一个非常短的2.0X的滑条
    click
好棒的曲子 超好听 快快rank呀> <
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

nice~ ☆
占坑 过段时间来摸图> <
好棒的图> < 音效超级棒呢
[General]
  1. hard diff can not load video file, so try to add it by creator or Caffe_[Latte] Fixed
[Normal]
  1. 01:35:046 (3,4) - 这里建议这样 试试就知道啦 原来的感觉节奏不太感觉的出来 OK
    戳我
  2. 01:39:770 - 这里建议和上面一样因为是normal难度嘛 不要太多的变化比较好> < OK
  3. 01:55:124 (4) - 这个建议不要这么长 很影响打击的节奏感 折返去掉比较好 用来降星数的..
    比如这样
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:353 (1) - 这个靠太近了 spacing感觉不太好 移动到(104,104)怎么样 OK
  2. 00:18:746 (2) - 尾巴和前面7的影子最好叠好了 看起来整洁些 OK
  3. 00:25:124 (1,2,3,4) - 这个三连合4是不是反了...感觉位置不变4在123前面好些（这个ignore掉吧 咱自己都觉得不改好了> < 这个三角形antiflow还是挺基本的吧
  4. 00:27:014 (1) - 这里还有后面很多不要偷懒呀 （破坏节奏+形状不好+折返滑条 直接就1分了 真不是偷懒..当时只是跟了Vocal没想那么多.不过你说得对，改了一部分
    比如可以这样

  5. 01:27:487 (4) - ^ ^
  6. 00:42:132 (4,5,6,7) - 这里的跳不太对 7是重音 应该跳远一些 这里反而比较近 把5和7都选中ctrl+G试试 00:42:369 (5,6) - 是比较重的Base音，所以把比较远的跳放在这里了。
  7. 01:19:691 (3) - 移动到（104,148）OK
  8. 01:24:180 (2) - 漏掉一个音效 这里tick都不用 滑条减短就不错的说 加上了
  9. 02:18:746 (1) - 这个想法挺好的 不过就spacing而言太大了 而且结合视频的情况有些像口水...可以一个非常短的2.0X的滑条 口水,,,你们为何想象力这么好orz 我看看别人会不会这么想，还有就改掉。
    click
好棒的曲子 超好听 快快rank呀> <
多谢mod 很有帮助!
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
Love!
( ♥´∀`♥)ﾉ-☆
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

nice~ ☆
占坑 过段时间来摸图> <
好棒的图> < 音效超级棒呢

[Latte's Hard]
  1. Hp+1 (it is so easy to play just increase~~ 滑条速度已经比较难了，不能再提升了
  2. 01:00:558 (1) - slider may changed to a circle at 01:00:794 - (Because it is very closed to spinner, and maybe very hard to catch as it mapped with lyrics.Removed
  3. 01:08:589 (1) - this circle also suggest to be removed (01:06:699 (1) - this spinner maybe unnecessary, just remove it and map it with objects) Fixed
  4. 01:34:573 (6) - why put a jump here, it'll led to inconsistent. just try this The jump suits the vocal imo
    click me

  5. 02:07:172 (1) - also unnecessary (suggest map it with objects but not spinner, spinner played not very good :C Fixed
  6. 02:14:731 (1) - ^ Fixed
好棒的曲子 超好听 快快rank呀> <
Fix all for Latte
Updated.

yanlu wrote:

Love!
( ♥´∀`♥)ﾉ-☆
Thank U yanlu!!! :3
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn
Revived.
Changed hitclap
Aurele
Global Moderator
7,514 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Love , nooooooooo D':
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

Gabe wrote:

Love , nooooooooo D':
boy r u?
Aurele
Global Moderator
7,514 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
No, I'm obviously a girl
tehReggie
3 posts
Joined January 2014
tehReggie
I hope it'll be ranked asap, because playing this map is simply fun :)

KUTGW!
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
[Normal]

00:12:132 (4,5,1) - I personally think of this pattern, it Looks slightly better, and it also flows cool! Slider 5 is the symmetry of 00:11:187 (3) - http://puu.sh/8SIkh/3357e9a4a3.jpg
00:48:038 (1) - Blanket?
01:48:510 (1,2,3,4) - I think symmetry would be quit cool here (if you can shift it to the middle). If it doesn't work, just leave it.

Nice normal !

[Latte's Hard]

00:09:298 (6) - I don't really know why the spacing is different here - although you stacked it, it doesn't really look too nice, I would try to get another pattern here!
00:12:842 (4,5) - Make sure the spacing is 1.0, and not 0.95 or so, it's quite visible!
00:12:132 (1,2,3,4) - How about a pattern liek http://puu.sh/9pmE2.png ? I think the increasing jump would play really well.
00:17:329 (4) - I guess two circles fit the song way better.
00:33:628 (2) - Blanket
00:33:865 (3) - Make sure the start of this is fully covered by the sliderslide of 00:32:920 (1) -
00:38:353 (6) - spacing
00:42:841 (2) - blanket
00:38:353 (1) - Also, NC for indiciating the slowdown and the special vocals?
00:38:353 (1,2) - Just a random idea which came to my mind, I think it would look pretty neat. http://puu.sh/9pmOd.png
00:40:243 (2,3) - I think you should really try to improve the flow here like this; http://puu.sh/9pmQT.png
00:48:038 (1) - Spacing, please increase it. It's the start of the kiai, I don't think decreasing the spacing is a good idea!
00:53:707 (1) - Straight flow would work perfectly here, try it! I think it's a lot of fun to play. 168 100
01:00:794 (1) - Really nice part!
01:26:306 (1) - No need for this antijump here, the song just doesn't call for it. Please use normal spacing.
01:31:266 (5) - Well.. at least add NC. It fits the vocals good.
01:38:825 (4) - ^ (add NC on all extended sliders part, please)
01:49:455 (3,4) - Ehh, I kow what you tried here, but try this instead: http://puu.sh/9pndH.png The spacing should increase, and not decrease, it plays a lot better.
01:51:345 (2) - Doesn't look too neat, the sliders are really close together, do you mind pushing them a bit further?
01:51:817 (3) - Please move this a bit up, for a better flow.
01:59:849 (4) - Looks a bit weird, can you try another spacing here?
02:14:967 (1) - Your rhythm is slightly wrong here; try this instead. http://puu.sh/9pnvq.png The reason is that you want to follow the heavy drum, not just a weak one!

The map itself is fine, some spacing errors tho, please go over your map again carefully, to check it out yourself, and improve your map!

[Insane]

It's pretty good so far, but I still Need to mention some things. I'll do this tomorrow xD
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
;_____; nuuuh why grav? :C
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

Lally wrote:

;_____; nuuuh why grav? :C
Waiting for Irre's mod on Insane
Send him a message for me if u like :P
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Autumn

Irreversible wrote:

[Normal]

00:12:132 (4,5,1) - I personally think of this pattern, it Looks slightly better, and it also flows cool! Slider 5 is the symmetry of 00:11:187 (3) - http://puu.sh/8SIkh/3357e9a4a3.jpg Sorry but the pics were lost during such long thime due to my laziness... :(
00:48:038 (1) - Blanket?Fixed!
01:48:510 (1,2,3,4) - I think symmetry would be quit cool here (if you can shift it to the middle). If it doesn't work, just leave it. OK!

Nice normal !

[Latte's Hard]

00:09:298 (6) - I don't really know why the spacing is different here - although you stacked it, it doesn't really look too nice, I would try to get another pattern here! Changed!
00:12:842 (4,5) - Make sure the spacing is 1.0, and not 0.95 or so, it's quite visible! Fixed!
00:12:132 (1,2,3,4) - How about a pattern liek http://puu.sh/9pmE2.png ? I think the increasing jump would play really well.Changed!
00:17:329 (4) - I guess two circles fit the song way better.Changed!
00:33:628 (2) - BlanketFixed!
00:33:865 (3) - Make sure the start of this is fully covered by the sliderslide of 00:32:920 (1) - Fixed!
00:38:353 (6) - spacingFixed! It's 3/4 here so a little closer!
00:42:841 (2) - blanketFixed!
00:38:353 (1) - Also, NC for indiciating the slowdown and the special vocals?Fixed!
00:38:353 (1,2) - Just a random idea which came to my mind, I think it would look pretty neat. http://puu.sh/9pmOd.pngSorry but the pictures were lost already! :o
00:40:243 (2,3) - I think you should really try to improve the flow here like this; http://puu.sh/9pmQT.pngSorry but the pictures were lost already! :o
00:48:038 (1) - Spacing, please increase it. It's the start of the kiai, I don't think decreasing the spacing is a good idea! Incrased!
00:53:707 (1) - Straight flow would work perfectly here, try it! I think it's a lot of fun to play. 168 100 Fixed!
01:00:794 (1) - Really nice part! Actually this pard was made by me! Thanks! :P
01:26:306 (1) - No need for this antijump here, the song just doesn't call for it. Please use normal spacing. Changed!
01:31:266 (5) - Well.. at least add NC. It fits the vocals good. Changed!
01:38:825 (4) - ^ (add NC on all extended sliders part, please) OK!
01:49:455 (3,4) - Ehh, I kow what you tried here, but try this instead: http://puu.sh/9pndH.png The spacing should increase, and not decrease, it plays a lot better.Though the pics were lost but I got u idea! Changed!
01:51:345 (2) - Doesn't look too neat, the sliders are really close together, do you mind pushing them a bit further? OK!
01:51:817 (3) - Please move this a bit up, for a better flow. OK!
01:59:849 (4) - Looks a bit weird, can you try another spacing here? OK! Changed!
02:14:967 (1) - Your rhythm is slightly wrong here; try this instead. http://puu.sh/9pnvq.png The reason is that you want to follow the heavy drum, not just a weak one! Though the pics were lost but I got u idea! Changed!

The map itself is fine, some spacing errors tho, please go over your map again carefully, to check it out yourself, and improve your map!

[Insane]

It's pretty good so far, but I still Need to mention some things. I'll do this tomorrow xD
I have one thousand words for the reason why I replied it after 10 months... but in a word, I'm graduating!
Time is limited but I must reply every modder even if I would probably could't find a job after graduating...but I still love osu!
Since the GDer has already afked for such a long time, I would take care of his diff instead in order to get this ranked.
Updated.
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
nice to see this pending again o3o

[General]
  1. bg.jpg is 964x723 wich is not a rankable size provide a correct size
[Insane]
  1. 01:29:613 (1) - i would curve this one
  2. HP 6.5 atleast
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:298 (6) - i would do something like that
    SPOILER
  2. 00:44:258 (1) - :C
  3. 00:48:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would totally use sliders here
  4. 01:38:117 (1,2,3) - i would do a regular spacing here
  5. HP 5.5
[Normal]
  1. HP 3
get 1-2 mods and call me back o3o
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