1. Replay (5 stars, 1445 notes)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

送一分

1. Airtist: 茶太 & nayuta
   Romansed Airtist: Chata & nayuta
2. For Tags...
   Kazami Yuuka
   Gensokyo, Past and Present ~ Flower Land
   kokuchou
   usagi kinoko

1. e2.png: "歌い踊る色"
2. e5.png: "ただ佇んだ"
3. At the duet part, it is difficult to distinguish Chata's from nayuta's. it is better not to use similar colors

1. I highly recommend to add Break-Time. because of long-map, very tired. (the CUTE "section-pass.png" should be used, too)
2. 00:23:981 (1,2) - make DS larger
3. 01:27:981 (1,1) - delete the slider, and start the spinner at 01:27:981
4. 01:43:254 (5,6) - it is better not to jump
5. 02:34:527 (1) - remove NC
6. 02:35:072 (2) - NC
7. 02:56:709 (6) - ^
8. 03:02:527 (6) - ^
9. 03:09:799~03:31:618- SV 1.5x is too rapid, imo. Do you object if 1.4x same as before?
10. 04:01:254 (6,7) - I prefer the following
    
11. 04:13:072 (3) - Good!
12. 04:42:981 (1,1) - it is near-impossible to play ,isn't it?
13. 04:56:072 (1) - end at 04:57:072
14. 05:08:345~05:54:163- Do you object if 1.4x?

RandomEffect wrote:

Thank you for request~
I'm glad to be able to know such a wouderful map!!!

[General]

1. Airtist: 茶太 & nayuta
   Romansed Airtist: Chata & nayuta ok
2. For Tags...
   Kazami Yuuka
   Gensokyo, Past and Present ~ Flower Land ok
   kokuchou
   usagi kinoko

[Lyrics]

1. e2.png: "歌い踊る色"
2. e5.png: "ただ佇んだ"
3. At the duet part, it is difficult to distinguish Chata's from nayuta's. it is better not to use similar colors fixed thanks

[Replay]

1. I highly recommend to add Break-Time. because of long-map, very tired. (the CUTE "section-pass.png" should be used, too) OK I'll add some break
2. 00:23:981 (1,2) - make DS larger fixed
3. 01:27:981 (1,1) - delete the slider, and start the spinner at 01:27:981 no
4. 01:43:254 (5,6) - it is better not to jump I'll think about it
5. 02:34:527 (1) - remove NC fixed
6. 02:35:072 (2) - NC fixed
7. 02:56:709 (6) - ^ fixed
8. 03:02:527 (6) - ^ fixed
9. 03:09:799~03:31:618- SV 1.5x is too rapid, imo. Do you object if 1.4x same as before? I'll think about it
10. 04:01:254 (6,7) - I prefer the following
    
11. 04:13:072 (3) - Good!
12. 04:42:981 (1,1) - it is near-impossible to play ,isn't it? fixed
13. 04:56:072 (1) - end at 04:57:072 fixed
14. 05:08:345~05:54:163- Do you object if 1.4x? I'll think about it

Very nice SB and skin! That's amazing!!! ~☆ thank you
this map is too difficult for me
Sorry for poor modding. but I did my best~ thank you very much
~Good Luck~

general is very useful!!!

EmingK wrote:

专注nazi check三十年，别嫌我烦啊;w; 确实有点..

02:25:799 (6) - Ctrl-g? no
01:55:981 (4) - 柑橘需要某种clap 好
03:31:981 (4) - ^ ^
05:54:527 (4) - ^ ^

没包好系列

00:23:981 (1,2) - fixed
00:33:981 (5,1) - 这也要包?
00:47:254 (1,2,3) - fixed
01:16:890 (2,3) - fixed
01:24:163 (2,3) - fixed
01:59:254 (5,6) - 这里是故意的(保持1.2ds)
02:29:799 (3,4,1) - 包了就不好看了
02:49:981 (2,3) - 本来这个2是个短滑条(后面的5.6转个180度
03:54:709 (7,1,2,3,4,5) - fixed
04:00:709 (1,2) - fixed
05:10:527 (2,3) - fixed
05:24:345 (3,4) - fixed

没叠好系列

01:11:618 (4,4) - fixed
01:24:345 (3,1) - fixed
02:16:345 (2,3) - fixed
04:28:345 (1,2) - fixed[/notice]

EmingK wrote:

专注nazi check三十年，别嫌我烦啊;w;

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore

[notice]就一个难度我就不general了
删去改歌曲名后残留的osb文件
Chata - Yuune Zekka,Ryouran no Sai (sjoy).osb
Chata & nayuta - Yuune Zekka,Ryouran no Sai (sjoy).osb
使用了自定义的hitcircleoverlay，需要手动添加sliderborder颜色
为什么你们喜欢把物件挡在歌词上（诶有人打图的时候看歌词么
一大坨绿线真是.. ;w; 上面问题都已修复

00:29:799 (1,2,3) - 不放在一条线上么 好
00:36:345 (3,4,5,6) - 四边形梗歪了 fixed
01:06:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 六边形梗歪了 fixed
03:45:799 (5) - 往上弯跟(3,4)正好成一圈 好
04:02:527 (2,3) - 平行？ 好
04:03:618 (1,2) - 不做对称？好
04:12:345 (1,2) - 放到一条线上？或者04:11:618 (3,4,1,2) - 对称
06:03:618 (4,5) - 稍微往下一些？好

不愧是神麻婆 ;w;能RANK才是神
GL!

Pizza Kun wrote:

M4M from your queue, pleas read my post ^^

[map]

00:23:981 (1) - Ctrl+G , 00:24:709 (2,3) - Ctrl + G and 00:25:072 (4,5) - Ctrl + G , imo flow better ^^ ok
00:33:254 (1,2) - Ctrl+G ok
00:36:527 (4,5) - Stack no
---------------------------------------------
00:39:981 (1) - Move in 256||4 ok
00:40:345 (3) - Move in 256||120 ok
00:40:890 (7,9) - Move in 256||256 ok
---------------------------------------------
00:54:163 (5,6) - Ctrl + G? adding a jump ^^ ok
01:10:163 (1) - Shape like this: http://d.pr/i/wtam no
01:12:890 (4) - Move to 280||164 ok
01:33:618 (7) - Move to 256||180 and make blanket with 01:33:618 (7,3) ok
01:52:709 (1) - Move to 332||32 ok
---------------------------------------------

05:56:345 (3) - Ctrl+G ok

ban22 wrote:

我怎么就能mod出来这点;_;而且不改也没问题;_;简直蠢透了

It's not helpful, sorry

M4M能给我mod么

03:13:254 - 加一个note
03:19:618 (9) - 建议缩短到红线

1. Missing skin elements:
   
   1. reversearrow.png
   2. hit0.png
   Wrong size：
   
   1. spinner-background.png (1023x692)
   2. spinner-circle.png (666x666)
   useless element (should be removed)
   
   1. star.png
2. Uncheck widescreen support since your storyboard is 4:3 based

1. 00:43:981 (1,2,3,4,5) - looked odd a bit, i may suggest to reduce the spacing of this stream, ie
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:163 (3,4,5) - in this stanza, the triplet is not very fitful if your wanna follow vocal, or the slider 00:51:618 (1) - is not a good choice if you wanna follow drum. As my understanding, you choice may be follow drum so i'd like to change 00:51:618 (1) - to two notes.
3. 00:54:345 (6,1) - not a good flow.
4. 01:01:254 (5,6,1,2,3) - suddenly reduce the spacing here but i found no change of music..
5. 01:21:254 (3,4,5) - another odd placement... actually you needn't to stick yourself to DS...
6. 01:25:072 (1) - move to 302:285 for better flow?
7. 01:35:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - still bad shape, at least i hope here could be a blanket with 01:36:345 (6) -
8. 01:43:799 (7) - it breaks the whole flow of this combo, i highly recommend to move it away - even stack to 01:43:436 (6) - 's end is better than current.
9. 01:46:163 (3,4,5) - nonsense triplet
10. 01:46:890 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 01:48:345 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 01:52:709 (1,2,3) - ^. How to judge if the triplet is okay or not? a simplay way is to confirm if the third note stays on a stress beat or not. I won't mention similar issues in this mod more
13. 02:00:890 (6,7,8) - this jump is looked weird...
14. 02:08:527 (7) - try ctrl+g?
15. 02:12:345 (5,2,3,4) - i'd like to stack them or use low spacing
16. 02:37:436 (4) - ctrl+g & make it parallel to 02:37:072 (3) -
17. 02:42:345 (2,3) - also suggest ctrl+g
18. 03:41:436 (7) - 287:357?
19. 03:43:799 (3,4,5,6,7) - compared with 02:43:254 (6,7,8,9,1) - , it is not a good shape.
20. 03:49:618 (3,4,5) - stack is better imo
21. 04:16:709 (1) - make it smooth a bit?
22. 04:39:436 - from, i'd like to add three 1/2 notes.
23. 04:51:981 (1,2,3) - unexpected anti-stream, please re-consider here if it is possible
24. 04:56:072 (1) - spinner maybe not the best choice.. kinda waste the beats around here
25. 05:12:709 (3,4) - bad flow
26. 05:20:254 (6,7,8) - i should say the overlap here is pretty hard to read...
27. 05:35:072 (9) - ctrl+g
28. and also, the triplet issues in this kia
29. 06:00:890 (7,8,9) - i suppose the triplet here is unnecessary, an 1/2 repeat slider is better imo

Awaken wrote:

newbie mod
拖了两天;w;

SPOILER

皮肤赞

[Replay]
00:36:890 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - 建议正六边形 fixed
00:47:981 (3) - ctrl+g? fixed
00:58:890 (1) - 不够弯..建议包住2 先这样吧。
01:10:163 (1) - 建议这里SV搞慢点 然后这个滑条拖到01:10:436 拖拽感好玩 我考虑一下
01:56:890 (6) - 感觉跟5的距离可以远一点 毕竟你后面都拉远了. . 好
02:11:254 (6) - ctrl+g? 不了
02:50:163 (3) - 左移一点 包住2 fixed
02:51:254 (6) - 6的尾巴和5开头之间的距离可以等于4到5开头的距离 fixed
03:51:981 (1) - 这个不知道为什么打起来有点怪 感觉这个滑条的SV不怎么适合..建议慢点 我看看
04:10:890 (1) - 这个滑条可以突然快一下 爽号码 我看看
05:36:163 (6,7) - 这里的距离应该搞大点像这样鬼畜到底

SPOILER

看看

that's all
GL~
最后
你为何如此鬼畜

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~ mod from queue

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Storyboard & Skin]

1. Missing skin elements:
   
   1. reversearrow.png
   2. hit0.png
   Wrong size：
   
   1. spinner-background.png (1023x692)
   2. spinner-circle.png (666x666 I'll ask someone to make it )
   useless element (should be removed)
   
   1. star.png fixed
2. Uncheck widescreen support since your storyboard is 4:3 based ok

I'll ask someone to fix it
[Replay]

1. 00:43:981 (1,2,3,4,5) - looked odd a bit, i may suggest to reduce the spacing of this stream, ie ok
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:163 (3,4,5) - in this stanza, the triplet is not very fitful if your wanna follow vocal, or the slider 00:51:618 (1) - is not a good choice if you wanna follow drum. As my understanding, you choice may be follow drum so i'd like to change 00:51:618 (1) - to two notes. ok chang to notes
3. 00:54:345 (6,1) - not a good flow. move the 00:54:527 (1) -
4. 01:01:254 (5,6,1,2,3) - suddenly reduce the spacing here but i found no change of music.. make a bigger space.
5. 01:21:254 (3,4,5) - another odd placement... actually you needn't to stick yourself to DS... make a bigger space.
6. 01:25:072 (1) - move to 302:285 for better flow? ok and move the 01:25:254 (2) - too
7. 01:35:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - still bad shape, at least i hope here could be a blanket with 01:36:345 (6) - making a blankdet is my shortcoming
8. 01:43:799 (7) - it breaks the whole flow of this combo, i highly recommend to move it away - even stack to 01:43:436 (6) - 's end is better than current. you are right.01:43:799 (7) - just as a blanket for 01:43:981 (1) - I forgei to move it
9. 01:46:163 (3,4,5) - nonsense triplet
10. 01:46:890 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 01:48:345 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 01:52:709 (1,2,3) - ^. How to judge if the triplet is okay or not? a simplay way is to confirm if the third note stays on a stress beat or not. I won't mention similar issues in this mod morewho not triplet? I listen it in 25% speed?
13. 03:43:799 (3,4,5,6,7) - compared with 02:43:254 (6,7,8,9,1) - , it is not a good shape. I don't understand why is not a good shape
14. 03:49:618 (3,4,5) - stack is better imo ok
15. 06:00:890 (7,8,9) - i suppose the triplet here is unnecessary, an 1/2 repeat slider is better imo ok

That's all