1. Hard - 7Key (3.68 stars, 646 notes)
2. Insane - 7Key (5 stars, 982 notes)
3. Normal - 7Key (2.28 stars, 406 notes)

YunoFanatic wrote:

This your first O!M map? anyways from my modding queue

NORMAL!
00:25:725 change to holders since its normal until 00:26:125
00:27:325 ^ until 00:27:725
00:30:525 ^ until 00:30:946
00:32:125 ^ until 00:32:525
00:33:725 ^ until 00:34:125
00:35:325 ^ until 00:35:743 this is the last one
Thats all

HARD!
-Seriously look like insane in the pattern 00:1:706 until 00:20:966 i recommend you to remap this pattern or use 6k notes


Insan will come just wait

ljqandylee wrote:

Nice map~
Just some suggestions XD
[Insane]
00:04:525 - add a note at 6 sounds good
00:20:925 - 00:22:525 - I think you can make this part harder, it's a bit pale compared to other parts.added notes
00:36:525 (36525|5,36525|1) - delete one and move the other to 3. The strong beat appears at 00:36:425、00:36:725 and 00:36:925, so use only 1 note here would be better in my mind. you're right,fixed

00:48:525 - add a note at 4 ✘
00:48:725 (48725|3) - delete ✔
00:48:925 - add a note at 4 ✔

01:23:125 - add a note at 2 ✔

[Hard]
00:13:125 - add a note ✔
00:47:625 (47625|2,47725|2) - it doesn't have a beat at 00:47:725, so putting a small-jackhammer here is improper, better to move one to other columns (besides, you can add a note at 00:47:625 if you want to strengthen the beat)fixed this part

[Normal]
00:34:525 - add a note ✔
00:34:725 - ^ ✔
00:36:125 - ^ ✔
00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 00:36:425 ✘ added a note at 00:36:425
01:08:925 (68925|5) - end at 01:09:525 or 01:09:725 ✔
01:09:625 - add a note ✘ quite hard for normal diff
01:10:125 - ^ ✔
01:18:325 (78325|2) - move to 5 or 6✔

Gilochan wrote:

[Normal]
00:14:425 (14425|3) - remove ✔
00:14:325 (14325|5) - move to 7th collumn ✔ good idea
00:20:725 - add ✔
00:20:925 - ^ ✔
00:24:925 - ^ ✔
00:25:125 - ^ ✔
01:20:725 (80725|2,81125|4) - remove ✔
[Hard]
00:02:925 - add at 1st collumn ✔
00:06:125 - ^ ✔
00:14:425 (14425|5) - remove ✔
00:31:525 - add ✔
00:31:725 (31725|5) - move to 6th collumn ✔
00:31:925 (31925|2) - move to 4th collumn ✔

[Insane]
00:07:725 - add ✔ ok ._.
00:18:025 (18025|3) - move to 2nd collumn ✔
00:18:325 (18325|3) - move to 3rd collumn ✔
00:18:425 (18425|2) - move to 5th collumn ✔
00:18:525 (18525|4) - move to 4th collumn ✔
00:21:625 - add note kat sini ✔
00:22:525 - add ✔
00:22:725 (22725|5) - move to 5th collumn ✔
00:22:725 - add at 7th collumn ✔
01:12:125 (72125|4) - remove ✔

niec map de hope this go rank hehehe <3 u
*star~\

rumi pui

17VA wrote:

Clear check from Song setup - Letter box during breaks and count downs. ✔

Insane -

OD 8 ✘ too stronk ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

I can't find awkward notes.

Hard -

i can't find awkward notes.

Normal -

Add note at 00:12:125 - ,00:12:925 - , 00:13:725 - ✔

00:15:325 - http://puu.sh/47eMY.png (if you don't like, igonre this) ✔

00:16:125 - http://puu.sh/47eNX.png (if you don't like, igonre this) ✔

00:23:925 (23925|6) - remove ✔

00:32:925 (32925|2) - move 5 ✔

00:33:325 (33325|4) - move 3 ✔

01:00:925 (60925|0) - decrease length 1/4 ✔

01:11:325 - http://puu.sh/47eUf.png (if you don't like, igonre this) ✘ changed to other pattern

01:12:525 (72525|2) - move 7 ✔

01:14:125 (74125|4) - add a note ✘

01:14:925 (74925|4) - add a note ✘

01:17:325 (77325|1) - add a note ✔

01:24:125 - http://puu.sh/47eYM.png (if you don't like, igonre this)

01:26:925 (86925|2) - add a note ✔

01:27:725 (87725|2) - add a note ✔

01:28:525 (88525|4) - add a note ✔

01:30:125 (90125|0,90925|0) - ^ ✔

indyinyou wrote:

Hi

i try hitsound mod (drum sound only)

try add some hitsound like this

http://puu.sh/48bNg

i add hitsound in Hard diff

hope u like it

c36098651 wrote:

[Design]
http://puu.sh/484qQ.png
Both Enable countdown and Letterbox are Unnecessary.

[Insane]

00:02:725 add note ✔

00:04:325 ^ ✔

00:07:825 ^ ✔

00:20:125 add another note ✔

00:29:525 add note ✘

00:31:125 ^ already have note

around 00:38:825 ✘ i like it better this way,thx for suggesting tho~

the song sings at 00:38:525 , 00:38:825 and 00:39:125 , so you can just make more holds about them.

and there are many places like this, if you think do like ↑ is too difficult, just ignore it.

01:02:825 01:03:025 01:03:225 01:03:425 01:03:625 01:03:825 add note

01:04:825 add note

01:15:525 ~ 01:16:925 every blue line should have the note ✘ i purposely ignore them for the sv changes

good luck!

Roxas wrote:

Yoyo

[Normal]
00:10:325 (10325|1) - Move 6 - k
00:10:525 (10525|3) - Move 5 (for move those 2 notes in right hand) - k
00:12:125 (12125|4) - Move 6 - k
00:11:325 (11325|3,12125|3,12925|2,13725|2,16125|0) - I'd remove those holds - change to circles
00:20:725 (20725|4) - Move 6 - k
00:20:925 (20925|4) - Move 7 - nope
00:55:725 (55725|0,55925|0) - Delete - k
01:06:525 (66525|2) - Delete and put a circle - nope
01:15:325 (75325|3,76125|4) - Remove both maybe? - nope
01:19:325 (79325|1) - Delete - nope

[Hard]
00:19:725 - I know you want to keep symmetry, but you need a double here imo - fixed
00:24:925 - Do like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/961913 - ok
00:31:325 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/961920 - ok good pattern
00:33:325 (33325|2) - Move 2 - k
00:34:925 (34925|2) - Delete - k
00:35:125 - Add note in 2 - at 1 is better imo
00:52:725 (52725|2) - Move 2 - sure

[Insane]
00:14:125 (14125|6,14125|5,14325|6,14525|6) - This is a bit annoying pattern xD - ok i remove the hold lol~
00:34:325 (34325|4) - Delete - why?
00:35:925 (35925|6,36025|5) - ^ - nope
01:15:325 (75325|3,76125|3) - Don't like this so much - its stays like that

GL o/

Davteezy wrote:

Time to train my modding skills~

General
Change title to fripSide - fortissimo -the ultimate crisis- to follow https://osu.ppy.sh/s/20759

Normal
I didn't find much problems in here. I think it fits the "normal" diff but the chart was kinda bland /_\
Change od to 7 and hp to 7 ✔

Hard
This was pretty fun and the only i found strange was the sv at 01:02:525. Maybe add more emphasis?
Change hp to 8 ✔

Insane
Hp to 9 ww
At 00:28:125, this part was awkward. Try this? http://puu.sh/4PVeS.jpg ✔ good idea
At 00:29:625, another suggestion http://puu.sh/4PVmI.jpg ✔ sure
Lol was that a hold note for the drum at 01:02:525? I woulda thrown in a lv60 stream there hh4h4h4h. Also SV comment applies here as well. ✘ nahh i'll keep it that way , its not my style to make lv 60 + notes xD
How about a jack at 01:15:925 like dis http://puu.sh/4PVBj.jpg ✔ evil! yet nice idea,i'll make this XD

Overall the difficulty spread seems fine. C-can i have unreasonable LN streams?!?!?

Remillion Cross wrote:

hi - R u m i a -
here's my mod, you can accept or ignore these mods.

Normal

* 00:26:925 (26925|4) - move to 5th column - sure y not
* 00:38:525 (38525|1) - move to 4th column - ok !
* 00:51:925 (51925|2) - move to 4th column or move it to 4th column and 00:51:725 (51725|4) - move to 6th column changed to other pattern
* 01:23:725 (83725|5) - move to 4th column - to 5 instead

Hard

* 00:06:925 (6925|6) - move to 6th column - ok
* 00:07:125 (7125|3) - move to 2nd column - nahh i'll keep this
( Hmm.. i don't see any wrong or strange here )

Insane

* 00:03:725 (3725|3) - move to 5th column - nope
* 00:10:525 (10525|2) - move to 5th column - to 7th instead, a bit pattern change
* 00:15:925 (15925|4) - move to 6th column - ✔
* 00:16:025 (16025|5) - move to 5th column - ✔
* 01:13:125 (73125|4) - move to 7th column - to 6th instead
Nice map and hitsounds

indyinyou wrote:

i add some drum hitsounds on insane diff

it up to you use it or not xD

here http://puu.sh/4UExd

no kd -3-

victorica_db wrote:

M4M~
only some my personal idea~ i'm noob in 7K

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NM
00:14:125 (14125|6) - - move to 3 good idea
00:14:325 (14325|6) - move to 4 good idea
00:23:325 (23325|2,23325|4) - del one? nope
00:23:725 - add a note at 5 nope
00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 3 nope
00:36:925 - add one note ? ok!
00:52:525 (52525|3) - move to 2? reversed this with v
00:52:725 (52725|3) - move to 3? reversed this with ^
01:20:925 (80925|3) - move to 5 ]
01:21:125 (81125|4) - move to 4 ]
01:21:325 (81325|5) - move to 3 ] ----- changed to other pattern
01:21:525 (81525|3) - move to 2 ]
01:21:725 (81725|1) - move to 3 ]


HD
00:26:925 - add one note at 6? ok!
nothing seems to be revised
insane
00:33:725 - add one note ? ok!
00:52:525 - ^ ok!
00:54:925 - ^ ok!
01:15:325 (75325|3,76025|3,76125|3) - too difficult XD im evil \3:D/


very nice map
star~~

richardfeder wrote:

Rumia :3

SPOILER

0123456 column

NM(I am a little bit confuse with some part of it)

[00:02:125 (2125|4) - ,00:03:725 (3725|4) - ,00:05:325 (5325|5) - deliberately putting them on the red line instead of blue? just confirm that you did it not by accident XDDD]

00:23:725 (23725|5) - ADD one here? I am a little not sure about this but I feel strange when two different beat meet same treatment of one note.
Another way to do this is move 00:23:625 (23625|3) - to 6 00:23:925 (23925|4) - to 3 while 00:23:725 (23725|6,23725|5) - to 2 and 4, just as what you did in 00:22:925 (22925|2,22925|4,23325|4,23325|2) - your choices XD

00:34:525 (34525|4) - move to 2, 00:34:725 (34725|2) - move to 4 and 00:34:925 (34925|4) - move to 5

00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 00:36:425 (36425|1) - . No sound in 00:36:525 - there is beat here

00:47:725 (47725|1) - move to 00:47:625 (47625|1) - and delete 00:47:625 (47625|6) - . same reason - there is beat here

00:52:525 (52525|2) - delete. this is only beat appear in this period, pretty weird XD - nope.

01:02:925 (62925|5,62925|1,63325|2,63325|4,63725|4,63725|2) - hmm, this part I suggest map 1/2 timing note(white and red line) in a symmetrical pattern. your double notes are really none sense to me because no remarkable hit should be emphasize while some are just ignore. 1/2 timing note not only map out every hit but also offer a feeling of equality that every beats are the same sure.

01:05:925 (65925|3) - what is this? suggest move this to 01:06:125 (66125|1) - make it becomes one member of drum layer so that you could distinguish this no-corresponding note from 01:06:125 (66125|5,66325|3,66525|2) - fixed

01:16:025 (76025|5) - move to 6 - its already at 6?

01:23:125 (83125|6) - move to 2 - deleted this

01:24:125 (84125|2,84325|3,84525|4,84725|5,84925|6) - make them 65432 according to the pitch - this is already according to pitch

01:25:325 (85325|4,85325|2) - move to 4 and 6 - ok!

01:32:725 (92725|4,92725|2) - hmm... what are they? consider this is the easiest diff in your map set, maybe delete them would be a better choice XDDDDD oh sure xD

HD
I love this diff XDDD

00:04:725 (4725|0) - move to 00:04:525 (4525|0) - (like 00:06:325 (6325|6) - ) fixed

00:06:125 (6125|5) - add - sure

00:06:925 (6925|6) - add - sure

00:13:125 (13125|3) - delete. redundant - fixed

00:14:325 (14325|4) - move to 3 - ok

00:15:125 (15125|1,15225|2,15325|3) - not very sure about this - fixed

00:34:725 (34725|0,34925|2,35125|0) - move to 1,3,5 and delete 00:35:325 (35325|2) - and move 00:36:425 (36425|6) - to 4
I think this will make election and beat more clear

00:48:125 (48125|4,48225|3,48325|2) - not very sure

01:01:925 (61925|4) - delete

really interesting to play

IN
00:12:225 (12225|5,12325|6) - a little bit uncomfortable and not necessary recommend delete - deleted 1 of em xD

00:15:925 (15925|5) - move to 00:15:725 (15725|0) - sure!

00:16:925 (16925|1,17125|2,17525|4) - delete and add at 00:17:325 (17325|5) - much more clear I think. Original design ignore the beat of 00:17:325 (17325|3) - while putting extra 00:17:125 (17125|2,17525|4) - which I consider not necessary XD - fixed

00:20:725 (20725|6) - add and move 00:20:925 (20925|5) - to 6 fixed

00:28:725 (28725|6) - delete - done.

00:29:925 (29925|2) - ? maybe move to 1 and add at 00:30:125 (30125|2) - ? XD no changes

00:34:325 (34325|4) - delete. nothing here i suppose - there is ;w;

00:52:125 (52125|6,52225|4,52425|4) - add drum sound to them XDD or they will be really strange XDDDD - fixed

01:07:725 (67725|1) - add added.
In fact everything is good enough! But I just cannot make sure if those 1/4 trouble anybody who may accuse your over noting
But it is really good after all
well this isnt overnote D: should be hear by headphones tho~

Yooo~ really fun to play
Good luck on this :3

woc2006 wrote:

turn off letterbox in hard.

The major issues are in Normal:
I'd like to call it Normal+ instead of Normal, too many holds with presses, try to limit the usage of such patterns, especially hold with 2 normal notes.

In Insane:
00:41:724 - to 00:43:324 - consider exchanging columns of notes in column 1 and 2. More comfortable to play.

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi Rumia ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Normal

Inside :3

00:02:825 (2825|6) - move to 4th column, move it closer to LN, more comfortable for NM fixed

00:25:725 (25725|2) - make this LN longer and continue in this way, at first - it's hard for novices, at second - this piano sound lasts longer changed to normal notes

00:28:925 (28925|6) - turn into LN, continue your previous pattern, it's good . changed to normal notes

00:36:425 (36425|5) - move to 3rd column and this one 00:36:525 (36525|3) - move to 1st column, bass goes here that way fixed

00:49:525 (49525|6,49625|0) - move to 1st and 5th columns accordingly and make them closer to next chord, make some alternation ok!

00:57:725 - add note to 1st column, there's strong beat like previous ok!

01:16:725 (76725|1,76825|3) - move them to 2nd and 4th column, more suitable with your pattern here sure!

Hard

Inside :3

00:02:925 (2925|0) - move to 3rd column, good catch for your pattern here good idea!fixed

00:15:925 (15925|1) - a bit uncomfortable and there's no double sound, move to 2nd column fixed!

00:20:925 - maybe add here LN in 5th column with ending at 00:22:125 in according to the singing ok but added to 6 instead

00:36:425 (36425|6) - move to 2nd column and 00:36:525 (36525|1) - to 3rd column in according to the bass ok!

00:56:125 (56125|3) - move to 2nd column, it'll be good with your pattern here nice idea!

01:19:525 (79525|3) - move to 2nd column again, you leave it alone for a long time and there's no need to place one note after another

Insane

Inside :3

This diff seems good for me without any exception, awesome patterns for HD and good hitsounds like in previous diff.

Like this song, you've got my star...awwww >///<
Good luck :3/

ljqandylee wrote:

[General]
HP 6 → 7 → 8 ?

[Insane]
00:04:225 (4225|6) - Move to 00:04:125
00:04:325 - Add a note
00:22:825 - ^
00:45:725 (45725|2) - Begin from 00:45:525, maybe also move to 1 , this is not the voice ,there is a piano sound here and ok i move to 1

[Hard]
00:08:825 (8825|4) - Delete

Krah wrote:

Not completely sure but it seems that the title is not rankable.

t/89198
and
p/2339704

Ask a bat before but you probably need to remove the "short ver."


EDIT : It seems ok since it's a VN ... (this rule is completly wtf...)

ljqandylee wrote:

Ranked~

Spy wrote:

Congratulations!

QHideaki13 wrote:

Congrats abam Rumia!