1. ?Hard (3,42 stars, 89 notes)
2. ?Normal (1,43 stars, 58 notes)

Lanturn wrote:

You asked me a long time ago to mod this, and I just remembered about it when I saw your difficulty in the Mario song by Chewin.

[General]
Tags:
Add: Green | Japanese only version of this game. Not sure if really needed.
Add: Pokémon | the é yields different results Hmm.. if you say so.
Add: Cion Shion | This is the Japanese name of Lavender Town (シオンタウン Cion Town) | Might as well since you have Lavender Town in the tags. good good
Remove: Pokemon | Its already in the title lol why did I.. nevermind, removed.

Lead-in time: Instead of 2000, go with your offset of 24 and reduce it to 1976 so it is exactly 2 seconds before the first note hits. Okay.


I really can't find much wrong with your maps besides maybe a tad bit of over mapping on the Hard with some of the streams. This seems to be your own preference though and they seem playable enough, so I won't say anything else about it. yeah I am thinking in the same way partly. However if people thinks that the Streams are not good I'll do something. And I have deleted every second Circle from 01:06:569 - 01:07:660.

[?Hard]
00:40:933 (2,3,4,5,1) - Lower the volume for this stream, It feels really loud. | (2) @ 20% | (4) @ 40% | (5) @ 60% Done.
01:04:387 (2,3,4) - Volume 40%? | Note volume lowers a bit here. | Do this in ?Normal as well, the (2) is pretty loud I see what you did there. Alright.
01:09:569 (1,2) - I really don't like these notes. Completely unpredictable and empty and it will cause many many people to miss due to having no clue when to hit this. I would consider deleting them. Changed to a 1/4 Slider.

That is really all I can think of. Sorry for the short mod. Nothing really I can add to it.

1. Seems you need an spinner-approachcircle.png (idk AIBat says that)
2. meh, Audio Lead-In 1976 (+24) seems a bit fast to Normal diff. At least 2176 or 2276
3. tag pikachu since it's in the background, also tag piano since this music is performed by piano
4. As you see, the second line under the [Events] is this:
   

   0,0,"pikachusad.jpg",1,1

   That 1,1 in the end of the code would make your bg 1 pixel displacement when playing/testing. Consider to change it like this:
   

   0,0,"pikachusad.jpg",0,0

1. The slider velocity is pretty high in this diff, so consider to hp/od -1~-2 to make it more like a hard
2. 00:38:205 (3,4,5) - I unapproved this stream, seems really unnecessary to do that, it's inconsistent with other same parts, and also doesn't follow the music :S. Remove (4) would solve this problem.
3. 01:09:842 - A single note instead a reserve 1/4 slider would make the pattern more enjoyable imo. This is a hard diff, we can make something crazy \o3o/

1. 00:10:933 (2,1,3,4,1) - Whistles to follow the piano
2. 00:32:751 (1,2,3) - I'm nazi, this flow is better if you curve a slider like this
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   244,36,32751,6,0,P|180:48|148:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   152,224,33842,2,0,P|120:286|56:298,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   52,184,34933,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Flask wrote:

oh hi stefan-nyan, that pikachu in BG makes me scared :c

[General]

1. Seems you need an spinner-approachcircle.png (idk AIBat says that) fixed.
2. meh, Audio Lead-In 1976 (+24) seems a bit fast to Normal diff. At least 2176 or 2276I find it perfect.
3. tag pikachu since it's in the background, also tag piano since this music is performed by piano Okay.
4. As you see, the second line under the [Events] is this:
   

   0,0,"pikachusad.jpg",1,1

   That 1,1 in the end of the code would make your bg 1 pixel displacement when playing/testing. Consider to change it like this: fixed.
   

   0,0,"pikachusad.jpg",0,0

[?Hard]

1. The slider velocity is pretty high in this diff, so consider to hp/od -1~-2 to make it more like a hard Eh... I will ask you why are you thinking so.
2. 00:38:205 (3,4,5) - I unapproved this stream, seems really unnecessary to do that, it's inconsistent with other same parts, and also doesn't follow the music :S. Remove (4) would solve this problem. It feels quite good to play, no change here.
3. 01:09:842 - A single note instead a reserve 1/4 slider would make the pattern more enjoyable imo. This is a hard diff, we can make something crazy \o3o/ *sigh*

[?Normal]

1. 00:10:933 (2,1,3,4,1) - Whistles to follow the piano The sound of the Music Box isn't heavy enough to add a Whistle.
2. 00:32:751 (1,2,3) - I'm nazi, this flow is better if you curve a slider like this That's too mainstream imo. orz
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   244,36,32751,6,0,P|180:48|148:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   152,224,33842,2,0,P|120:286|56:298,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   52,184,34933,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Normal works like a Easy, better to map a true "Normal" to support the diff spread. I've did what I could but at all I cannot make it harder. I increased the Difficulty settings for a bit.
Nice job stefan-nyan, hope my short mod is useful :S

Lolicakes wrote:

God.. nice song~
I can't see anything wrong... ovó!
but in the diff "?hard" would be better with AR +1 It's currently a hard Decision since I am absolutely not sure what would fit better at last. For now I keep AR7 but I will remember on you if I change it.

sorry ;A; good luck~

ChivaCookie wrote:

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It is not very effective ! (Everything I say is nothing but suggestion, ignore it if it shouldn't be helpful)

[ Hard ]

00:15:296 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could use some slider there, since the voice the music box makes lasts a bit. You could listen to the decrescendo the box makes and where the sound is really gone. For example: You could add a slider from 00:15:296 until 00:16:114 The need of sliders in such a song is quite limited and this part just wouldn't like to have any of them.

00:26:205 (3) - same here Well yeah I can see what are you trying to show me here, done.

01:09:842 - Maybe becoming quieter would be good, since the map ends here and all The music itself doesn't fade out here already, so no.


[ Normal ]

Actually I can't find anything. I enjoyed playing this map, even though I think I shouldn't play it too much since it hurts somewhere in my heart Somehow that is nice but also really creepy to hear. o.o

01:10:933 - Maybe changing the sound somehow to show the map will end ? Same what I said in HArd.




Nothing else... Nice song and map! Good luck with it. I'll play it in multiplayer even without approved tuturuuu~ =3=

1. 00:03:296 (2) - NC?
2. 00:05:478 (1,3) - Not symmetrical.
3. 00:40:387 (3) - NC?
4. 01:13:114 - Why is it not mapped here and after?

1. 00:14:205 (3) - Because of the two previous slider it would be more aesthetic if it would be centered.
2. 00:43:387 - Add a note.
3. 00:45:569 - Add a note.
4. 00:47:751 (4,2) - Not at the same high.
5. 00:48:024 (1,3) - ^
6. 01:13:114 - Same as before.

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

Random mod:

[Normal]

1. 00:03:296 (2) - NC? Actually no, I use NC after every big white Note (how it works for usual)
2. 00:05:478 (1,3) - Not symmetrical. oh u fixed
3. 00:40:387 (3) - NC? Same reason as the first suggestion.
4. 01:13:114 - Why is it not mapped here and after? The Song epilouge fits good in the Ranking screen and also I don't feel to map it.

[Hard]

1. 00:14:205 (3) - Because of the two previous slider it would be more aesthetic if it would be centered. Okay.
2. 00:43:387 - Add a note. I do not find that it isn't really needed. However it's my opinion and because of that I won't accept it.
3. 00:45:569 - Add a note. ~
4. 00:47:751 (4,2) - Not at the same high. This would look too mainstream and monotone imo. No offense to anyone which finds it good, I personally find that this isn't needed to do that always.
5. 00:48:024 (1,3) - ^ ~
6. 01:13:114 - Same as before. ~

~Good luck~

Cubex wrote:

[General]

Delete the .osb file if you don't want to add a storyboard. Woops.
Maybe add 'leafgreen' and 'firered' to the tags. Because this theme also appeared in those editions (or remakes). c: Not really needed.

[Normal]

00:39:296 (2) - Move that circle to x:96 y:64 orz dayum Spacing error
01:10:933 (2) - How about deleting that reverse slider and place just a simple slider there instead?
01:12:024 (x) - That's why i wanted you to remove the reverse. In my opinion, you should place a spinner there, it would end the the map much better. I've changed that in my own way but yeah this seems better and at least I can use a Spinner in Hard. The current there is just awfully bad and out of place.

TL

[Hard]

I would recommend you, to reorder the "New combo" startings. In my opinion, it would fit much better, if you start a new combo at every single big white tick. Fixed some NCs which has needed to be fixed.

00:38:887 (4) - That circle feels kinda superfluous, i would really suggest you, to remove it. It's one of the less parts I find that a Triplet can be used. Maybe some people won't figure out my sense of rhythm and it's okay but I won't change this here.
00:40:933 (2) - This pattern feels not that smooth to play in my opion, rather remove (3), (5) and rearranging the pattern a bit. As above.
01:14:205 (x) - I generally have to say, that this point should end your map. So maybe add a spinner at 01:12:024 - instead of that circle. Okay.

Mehr konnt' ich leider nicht finden, Ich hoffe es passt soweit trotzdem.. c:

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:

?Normal:
00:07:660 (4) - this kind of stuff interact with 00:06:024 (2) - and 00:10:933 (2) - much better than just straight slider http://puu.sh/2X7fX.jpg Meh if you guys find that good then I change it.
00:50:751 () - I would not do break, song is slow Usually I would say yes but for now it is part of the atmosphere and I don't want to change it.

?Hard:
00:50:751 () - same for break Same as above.
01:01:114 (1) - this slider can be cooler, something like this http://puu.sh/2X7xR.jpg looks way better imo Good.
01:02:205 (2) - ^

well , there is not so much I can point out here. orz
for HS I can suggest to use something different on big whites ticks like http://puu.sh/2X7Dq.wav good good, I will add it.
Not bad for such a slow song. Good Luck!