1. L18's Hard (4.83 stars, 551 notes)
2. Lunatic (5 stars, 698 notes)
3. Normal (2.64 stars, 263 notes)

Tachibana Kanade wrote:

:3 emem
kanade!!
00:04:257 (5) - delete?
00:07:374 (4) - ^
00:08:153 (3) - I'd suggest just make this part same as the beginning of the song
like this
http://puu.sh/22auC it feels a little repetitive like this.. not sure

00:10:491 (1) - delete
00:17:894 (3) - y axix shall be same as 00:17:699 (2) - (y:72)
00:19:453 (2) - stack with 00:18:673 (2) -
00:21:206 (4) - remove nc
00:26:661 add note
00:32:895 (2) - start at 00:32:700 added note there instead?
also, 00:33:285 (3) - start at 00:33:090
then add a note at 00:33:480
00:51:305 (6) - delete
00:51:598 (1) - suggest start at 00:51:452 then add a note at 00:51:841 not possible in 1/4?
00:59:975 (1) - spinner shall start at 01:00:754 , and add a slider at 00:59:975 (6) -
http://puu.sh/22aQ0
01:50:043 (2) - stack with 01:49:653 (5) -

go!!

k1llrogg wrote:

Hello there.
How do you know, that Lunatic's is my favorite type of beatmaps? D: :3
Let's start!

General

Background: 19132347.jpg is 1047x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
Tags: Add "Yuri Time" to your tags.

Lunatic

Set a preview point!
Increase the circle size to 4.
00:24:128 (6) - Move to x:124 y:128
00:32:895 (3) - Inverse.
00:38:155 (2) - Create an oval stream.
01:09:716 (4) - Move to x:416 y:76
01:36:795 (10) - Start new combo.
01:41:861 (7) - Start new combo.
02:04:265 (6) - Inverse.
02:10:889 (10) - Start new combo.

Try to do "New combo" more often. ><

Good luck

emmy wrote:

k1llrogg wrote:

Hello there.
How do you know, that Lunatic's is my favorite type of beatmaps? D: :3
Let's start!

General

Background: 19132347.jpg is 1047x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
Tags: Add "Yuri Time" to your tags.

Lunatic

Set a preview point!
Increase the circle size to 4.
00:24:128 (6) - Move to x:124 y:128
00:32:895 (3) - Inverse.
00:38:155 (2) - Create an oval stream.
01:09:716 (4) - Move to x:416 y:76
01:36:795 (10) - Start new combo.
01:41:861 (7) - Start new combo.
02:04:265 (6) - Inverse.
02:10:889 (10) - Start new combo.

Try to do "New combo" more often. ><

Good luck

fixed all
random mod thanks~

koromo wrote:

I don't really know how to mod. Just suggestions. ;w;

[General]
Should add "Taiko GD by Yuri Time" to your map description, to keep consistency with Loneight's GD. Also add Loneight to your tags.

[Lunatic]
00:01:530 - 00:26:466 try 50% volume maybe?

00:28:609 (2) remove clap?

00:34:649 (4) stack with 00:33:674 (1)

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apaffy wrote:

that normal's going to need a bazillion mods

emmy wrote:

apaffy wrote:

that normal's going to need a bazillion mods

if you ever finish it wwwwww

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 from my queue

General
clock-like hitsound really nice ! thank you!

Lunatic
00:08:153 (3) - shorten to a 1/2 reverse ? keep the same rhythm with the former part
00:16:336 (8) - something like this ? http://puu.sh/32Tnc.jpg
00:18:479 (1) - remove NC
00:19:648 (3) - why using such a long slider, I don'f find something fit with this in the music slightly audible sound for it...but just noticed i started slider late anyway, will fix
00:26:953 - sure to use 90% volume normal hitsound ? I think it's too loud i think it's fine..will make it 80% though..
00:38:935 - add a note to end
00:50:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - a bit weird hitsound using
01:23:645 (7) - shorten it to a common 1/2 slider and make it start 1/4-beat later (end at the same time) changed a little but differently
01:31:535 (1) - no need to use a single NC oops ww
01:32:509 (2,3) - maybe avoid overlapping
01:33:678 (2,3) - ^
01:52:576 (1) - remove this NC and add it on 01:53:745 (7) -
02:02:706 (3) - too curved, not satisfying shape
02:27:448 (1) - remove this NC and add it on 02:28:033 (5) -
02:38:942 (4,5,6,1) - so confusing, omg it's weird but i like it..i'll keep for now
02:44:592 (1) - a bit wuird rhythm i changed this a little
02:52:190 (2,3,4,5) - don't stack them that totally
03:17:127 (9) - add NC to hint the sv changed nice idea
03:23:361 (7) - why so closed to the former idk orz
03:28:816 (1) - not beautiful
04:01:350 (2,3) - exchange their order on time line ?
changed everything else!

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 from my queue

Hard
Holy Shit ! It's 飞翔神麻婆！ 求不黑
01:51:407 (1,4) - avoid overlap ?
01:58:031 (4,1) - stack accurately ?
02:33:487 (5) - whistle at end ? 改成normal原聲~
03:16:347 (1) - remove NC ? okay~

I can't find anything Q^Q

Good luck

Zero__wind wrote:

Normal
00:07:764 (1,2) - keep consistent rhythm to the others ? added a note
00:15:167 (3) - not beautiful i'll go ahead and curve it, but for future reference I prefer weird, snaky sliders to boring simple curves; just because it's a normal doesn't mean it can't be interesting
00:17:505 (5) - NC, the combo seet is too long agreed
00:23:739 (5) - ^ same
00:35:817 (3) - the mid part of this overlapped itself, maybe do a small fixing ? couldn't fit it in so I just curved it
00:37:376 (4) - NC ok
01:06:209 (3) - omg please obey distance snap in a Normal diff what do you want me to snap it to, 0.4? it was fine as is and all three notes were properly snapped, but I went ahead and reworked this part slightly because it was too difficult
01:06:988 (1,2) - exchange NC deleted a note in the next combo so this was no longer necessary
01:16:340 - why don't add a note missed that, thanks
01:19:554 (2) - start it 1/4 beat earlier and end at the same time fixed
01:23:353 (3,4) - don't let them touch each ohter ? fixed
01:31:925 (1) - not satisfying shape made smoother
01:40:887 (1) - spacing issue. Check all the spacing isuue in this diff by yourself . Always obey the distance snap you set moved it
01:53:745 (4) - NC agreed
01:57:251 (1) - why does this own a single NC ? Plz use NC more regularly i don't know sorry; fixed
this diff needs much work to improve

Good luck

RandomEffect wrote:

Good song!

let me mod standard-osu, please

[Lunatic]
01:24:132 (1,2) - avoid this overlap okay! changed
02:15:369 (9,1) - they exist at the same time(02:15:564). reduce the number of revers of 02:15:369 (9) - oops orz
very nice hit-sound (especially soft-hitnormal.wav) thank you!
~Good Luck~

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

Mod Request

AR 9 does not fit to 155 Bpm! Lower it to 8. sorry but i think it's fine..a lot of the patterns would get really chaotic with 8

From the beginning of the song to 00:13:219 - i miss some patterns, Stars, Chains etc. i'm not sure if the map should start so difficult like this

Lunatic!

00:32:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a Curve maybe. changed but differently
00:38:155 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make it Smoother, Curvier. ok
00:50:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Keep the distance between 6,1 the same as between all other notes. ok
00:54:520 (6,7,8,9) - seems a bit strange to me with the sound in the bg. right, tried something different
01:16:047 (2,3,4,5) - Make a Curve. i like it straight here
01:23:353 (6,7) - This is a nice pattern, you should use it more often.
01:43:614 (6,7,8,9,10) - keep distance between 6,7 the same as between 7,8,9,10. changed with different spacing
01:46:342 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make a star or another pattern? i'll keep this
01:58:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Some Triangles would be cool here.
02:03:096 (1,2,3,4) - Strange to play because of the sound in the bg.changed
02:06:992 (1,2) - ^ changed but differently
-> Here you could use the 01:23:353 (6,7) - Pattern.
02:21:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ i'll keep
02:24:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:52:969 - Add a Note with Finish Sound here. done
03:05:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Great Scene for some Buttons and Forms. was trying to keep vocal here more
03:52:778 (1,2,3,4) - Do a parallelogram? ok
04:01:545 (3) - Add a Finish sound here. okay


Nice Song, Very nice and good BG, have fun mapping!