1. Level 1 (3.06 stars, 104 notes)
2. Level 4 (4.43 stars, 138 notes)
3. Level 6 (4.95 stars, 234 notes)
4. Level 9 (5 stars, 343 notes)

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hi from in-game m4m

[Level 1]

00:04:079 (3) Try to make it more symetrical it doesn't look so good now
Fixed
00:06:632 (3) Delete one point in the slider. For this kind of simple slider, you never want to use more than three points total for the whole slider
those ticks fit song's beats, so no change
00:28:335 (1) try to make it look more symetrical
Fixed
00:30:569 (2) I would start new combo here instead of 00:30:888 (1)
Fixed

[Level 4]

You should use distance snapping oO change the slider speed if you don't like the distance but don't do your own dist snapping like this, it's hard to read because it's not very accurate
it's 0.7x snap.
00:17:164 (4,5) it would look better if the end point of slider 4 was on the same Y position as slider 5
move slider 5 down instead (same x-axis) i usually don't overlap sliders.
00:38:547 (5) not the prettiest slider I've seen
LOL'd Fixed
00:53:547 (3) try to make it more symetrical
Fixed
00:57:377 (8) I would start new combo here instead of 00:57:696 (1)
Fixed
00:58:813 (3) I'm sure this slider can look better than this
Fixed

[Level 6]

00:06:473 (4) I would rework the shape of this slider, especially towards the end
Fixed
01:01:367 (7) the placement is odd with the overlapping on 4,5, try to place this note somewhere else
intended

[Level 9]

(tbh I can't play the map but I still took a look xD)
i can, with no-fail mods

00:48:600 (6) not a very pretty slider
this one is intended
00:58:015 (2,3) try to make these two look the same, either by not curving 2 or by curving 3
Fixed

That's all I found, my TLDR is to rework sliders on all diff and the distance snapping on level4. Good luck with the map!
i'll see if anyone will complain on 0.7x snap in lv4, leave it like that for now

copolah123 wrote:

sorry late..
from queue (all suggestion)

[General]

add "ending" to the tags?
Fixed
consider making the BPM same at all diff (Normal and Insane are 94-188)
94 is a half of 188 ( slider tick reasons ) : no change

[Level 1]

00:07:909 make something like this (snap to white one)



or this (different pattern)


sounds very weird... i'll think about it
00:11:101 insert something,it feels empty
00:12:377 ^
00:13:654 ^
(there are some empty part like this,maybe you should add something at the "empty" part (example: 00:16:207 and 00:17:484)
Fixed
00:14:292 (7,8) change to slider?
Fixed
00:15:090 move this to previous white tick
Fixed
00:20:037 ^
Fixed
01:15:409 due to the next spinner,you have to remove this one (just a half beat delay is not enough for new players)
Fixed : moved spinner instead.

[Level 4]

Beat snap divisor 1/2? I see you dont use 1/4
yeah i don't... still got confused why 1/4 there
00:14:611 (8,9) change to slider (1 beat) and add circle 1 beat after

Fixed
00:39:664 why half a beat delay on Normal?
Fixed : reduce slider + move spinner
00:44:931 set this as new color
Fixed
00:50:037 ^
Fixed
01:03:760 change: half beat slider
it's already half-beat sliders...
01:04:080 change: 1 beat slider
For the 2 above,delete everything at that point and change to the one I give
sounds weird : 1/2 beat slider instead
01:15:409 delete this circle and move the spinner to this point
starting point of spinner has no sound, so no change

[Level 6]

so many circles O_O
can't find anything but 1:
I don't mean to mock you,but I think the placement/spacing is kind of ugly,maybe you should remap this one
yeah... i think so.
too much slider speed changed, decide to re-position all elements between 00:10:462 and 00:30:888
good luck then~

xxhckxyz wrote:

I am a beginner in modding so this is just a suggestion...if u think this is not useful, u can ignore it~~


level 1

SPOILER

00:25:781 (1,2,3,4) maybe....i suggest that the distance between 1 and 2 and the distance between 3 and 4 can be similar.
Fixed in another way
00:27:058 can add a circle or put a slider
Fixed
01:13:015 (1,2) i think use a slider instead of the circle will be more better...
Fixed w/ 00:07:909 too

level 4

SPOILER

01:11:739 (3) i will put it to 01:11:579
x

other...i cannot find any problem...sorry

maybe i am not a success modder~~haha

hope the suggestion can help you improve ur map~~

also hope ur map can be ranked~~

1. "bg4.jpg"is unused. you must remove it.
2. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels. so you must resize those.
3. these map offset is not same between diff. You must remove the other than 00:00:250.
   and Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. like 00:41:579 (4) in Level 9.
   If you want to change speed, use "slider velocity mulitiplayer" in inherited timing section.

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found issues. you must fix those.

[General]

1. "bg4.jpg"is unused. you must remove it.
   Fine, removed
2. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels. so you must resize those.
   UNFIX : RULES CHANGED
3. these map offset is not same between diff. You must remove the other than 00:00:250.
   and Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. like 00:41:579 (4) in Level 9.
   If you want to change speed, use "slider velocity mulitiplayer" in inherited timing section.
   heh, it should be 250ms on all diffs.... ( anyway, change offset : -1026 ms )
   for Level 9 : changing speed those ways will results having a slider tick appeared
   ( i don't want that, and i can't change slider tick rate through this either )
   need confirmation on this ( or anyway to change the tick rate in an inherited timing section )

272,96,51154,2,0,P|96:176|176:352,1,420,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[Ranger] wrote:

From M4M

[Level 1]
distance snap is too long.how about reduce 0.8?
it's ok with this slider speed, no change at current ( i'll think about it )

00:18:122 (4) - remove 1 repeat.it more easy and sounds good
x
[Level 4]
00:21:952 (4) - this silder looks ugly.how about make symmetry?
Fixed
[Level 6]
many note not have hitsound, add like insane diff
not really insane-like, but add some

00:42:377 (3) - add finish here?
x
00:52:590 (3) - ^
x

[Level 9]
00:00:250 (1) - Remove NC.i think it doesn`t need it
Fixed
00:10:422 (6) - Plz don`t use 1/8 beat.it too hard
Okay x_x
01:04:638 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is impossible! consider reduce distance.
make a zigzag type instead ( old one is square type )

ok,good luck~

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
From my queue~

- General
+) Please note that
- Use minus timing as offset is not recommended. You might want to change. I think 250 is better.
Fixed
- Ranking Criteria: Uninherited timing sections cannot be used to manipulate slider speeds. Since you use too much red timing to change your slider speed, you should fix it.
fine, go with those dots.
+) BG size should be 1024x768. Please resize all your BG.
maximum doesn't mean it has to be. i prefer 16:9 and have those black bars ( since video is 16:9) and those image won't look such weird
+) Please end all map at same time.
Okay


- My mod

> Level 9 <
- AR+1, OD -1.
AR +1 only
- Please fix red timing that you used for change slider speed.
hate those dots on slow slider, but might have to accept it
00:00:250 (1) - Remove NC.
already
00:00:569 (3) - Change Whistle at start of slider to Clap.
Fixed, thanks
00:01:367 (6) - NC here.
x
00:02:803 (1) - Remove NC
x
00:03:122 (2) - NC here.
x
00:10:462 (1) - Remove NC.
Fixed
00:10:781 (2) - NC here.
Fixed
00:20:675 (1) - Remove NC.
x
00:20:994 (2) - NC here.
x
00:24:505 (1) - Remove NC.
Fixed
00:25:143 (2) - NC here.
Fixed
00:46:048 (8) - NC here.
somwhere else
00:51:792 (12) - NC here.
Fixed
00:54:824 (10) - NC here.
x
00:55:143 (1) - Remove NC.
x
00:57:377 (12) - NC here.
x
00:57:697 (1) - Remove NC.
x
00:59:292 (9) - NC here.
x
01:00:409 (1) - Remove NC.
x
01:01:526 (6) - NC here.
01:04:637 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please do not use this kind of pattern for stream. It's too hard to press.
okay, already fixed from previous mod
01:14:930 (1) - Remove NC.
x
01:15:249 (1) - Remove NC.
x

> Level 6 <
00:01:686 (5,6,7,8) - These note are out of beat. Since it has no vocal here, you should put it in white tick instead of red. Back 1/4
guitar rhythm, no change
00:46:367 (6) - End this slider at 00:46:846 is better?
yeah, i think so. thanks.
00:51:154 (5) - Since osu! has new feature for helping mapper while creating curve slider, you just need to use 3 point to create nice curve slider.
Use this code and replace is file .osu

272,96,51154,2,0,P|96:176|176:352,1,420,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

thank you very much Fixed
01:03:760 (4) - NC here..
Fixed
01:13:015 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - May be use clap in all note here is better? Just my opinion xD
it's too much tam tam tam tam tam
01:15:409 (1) - Use finish instead of clap here.
x


> Level 4 <
00:12:696 (5) - NC here. Please don't use long combo in Normal/Easy map.
Fixed
00:18:122 (5) - ^
Fixed
00:23:228 (6) - ^
Fixed
00:25:462 (1) - Remove NC.
x
00:26:101 (3) - NC here.
x
00:28:015 (6) - ^
Fixed
00:32:643 (4) - ^
somewhere else
00:35:196 (9) - ^
somewhere else
00:35:994 (1) - Remove NC.
x
00:37:909 (6) - NC here.
Fixed
00:53:547 (3) - Fix this slider please.
Fixed
01:06:792 (4,5,6) - Out of beat.
guitar rhythm, no change

> Level 1 <
00:48:601 (4) - fix this slider

Ok that's everything i can found.
Good luck

• [General]

  1. Your spinner-background is not cleanly done
     
     pic

     
  2. Same with your combobursts if you could do something about those, please do.
  
  
  [Level 1]
• 00:06:632 (3) - I don't like how this slider is designed. Turn it into something neat like this.
• 00:18:122 (4) - I suggest you not to use this kind of slider. Use sliders with 2 reversals on higher diffs. Maybe turn one reversal into a circle or spread this into two.
• 00:43:973 - This space feels empty, why not put a circle with a whistle here? Try this.
• 00:48:601 (4) - why don't you try to redesign this slider an make it look nicer?
• 00:53:547 (4) - ^
• 01:15:090 (4,5) - Turn these circles into a slider. Beginners would read this part easier with that.
• 01:15:569 - Make the following spinner start here and end at 01:18:122. Also, use 5% volume instead of 10% on it.
  

That's all that I could point out. The map's rhythm is good but it needs some help on flow and aesthetics.
Since I like this song, I'll star~ and good luck

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hi~! modding from #modreqs

• [General]

  1. Your spinner-background is not cleanly done
     
     pic

     
  2. Same with your combobursts if you could do something about those, please do.
     i have to re-work on those to fix it (since i've cropped them off from the anime)
     might takes about a week or so but i will
  
  
  [Level 1]
• 00:06:632 (3) - I don't like how this slider is designed. Turn it into something neat like this.
  Fixed
• 00:18:122 (4) - I suggest you not to use this kind of slider. Use sliders with 2 reversals on higher diffs. Maybe turn one reversal into a circle or spread this into two.
  i got about 2 mods saying about this so, Fixed
• 00:43:973 - This space feels empty, why not put a circle with a whistle here? Try this.
  Fixed but no whistle
• 00:48:601 (4) - why don't you try to redesign this slider an make it look nicer?
  Fixed
• 00:53:547 (4) - ^
  Fixed (a bit)
• 01:15:090 (4,5) - Turn these circles into a slider. Beginners would read this part easier with that.
  Edit :Fixed
• 01:15:569 - Make the following spinner start here and end at 01:18:122. Also, use 5% volume instead of 10% on it.
  apply 5% ( no change on spinner, it start and end where it should )
  

[Level 4]00:07:909 (1) - This has two reversals and the next two sliders in this combo has only 1. That would be a little hard to read for the beginners so try either: Spreading this into two sliders; remove 1 reversal and add a circle; or remove new combo here and add new combo on 00:08:707 (2).
Fixed00:21:952 (4) - Blanket 00:20:994 (2) properly. Try redesigning this slider into something nice like this.
Fixed00:29:930 (5) - Try to redesign this as a ave slider, maybe something like this.
Fixed : Normal curve sliders00:43:654 (5) - Redesign it with something nice. :3
Fixed01:05:994 (3) - Same issue as 00:07:909 (1).
Fixed01:14:452 (1,1,1) - Remove NC on these notes.
x01:15:569 (1) - Make it end on 01:18:122 and apply 5% volume.
apply 5% ( no change on spinner, it end where it should )

[Level 6]00:07:909 (1) - Remove one of its reversals and put a circle on 00:08:388, so it can be easily read.
Fixed01:15:409 (1) - Remove NC.
x01:15:569 (1) - Make it end on 01:18:122 and apply 5% volume.
apply 5% ( no change on spinner, it end where it should )

[Level 9]00:10:303 - Add a circle here, and stack it together with the next to circles.
Fixed00:10:462 (6) - Remove "clap" and put a "finish"
x00:51:792 (1,2,3) - I don't like this barrage of sliders. Turn into a stream of circles instead.01:01:526 (1,2,3) - ^
consider change one of them ( these sliders are actually easier than stream of circles )01:04:638 (2) - Delete this note. It's not nice to start a stream on a blue tick.
drum sounds start here (kinda weird, but it really is !)01:05:117 (7) - Delete this note.
drum sounds end here01:15:250 (1) - Remove NC.
x01:15:569 (1) - Make it end on 01:18:122 and apply 5% volume.
apply 5% ( no change on spinner, it end where it should )

That's all that I could point out. The map's rhythm is good but it needs some help on flow and aesthetics.
Since I like this song, I'll star~ and good luck

( p.s. creating an creative slider without any mess is really hard )

Froztic wrote:

thanks really helpful

( p.s. creating an creative slider without any mess is really hard )

no prob
and this might help you.

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Froztic wrote:

thanks really helpful

( p.s. creating an creative slider without any mess is really hard )

no prob
and this might help you.

Cancel wrote:

Hi. From my Modding Queue.

General

Maybe change offset to 260? Its only my suggestion.
changed
TV Size is not allowed in the song title > t/89198 < I suggest you to remove it from ttitle, and put it in the beatmap description instead.
TV Size is an exception Reference ( it is the special version used in Anime )
Maybe use this hitsound? It sounds good with this song: http://puu.sh/1Ux07 (When you need help with the claps/where the hitsounds should be, please message me!)
edit : nah, i won't. thanks anyway

Now let's start with the mod ;P

Level 1

00:00:260 (1,2,3) - this line is so boring! Maybe change this beat a little bit: 00:00:898 (2) -
Fixed
00:18:132 (4) - You forgot a soft hitwhistle at the beginning of this slider
Fixed
00:18:132 (4) - Maybe change like this? >
x
01:18:770 - Maybe end spinner with a volume 5?
it's already 5% on volume (throughout spinner) , or i miss something ?
Level 4

01:00:170 - This timing point isn't standing on a beat! Please fix that
Fixed
01:15:409 (1) - Remove NC
x
Level 6

00:00:249 (1) - Move to
Fixed
00:10:462 (1) - Add a finish.
Add new hit-finish sounds
Level 9

I can´t mod hard-insanes (Level 6 was an exeption )

Good Luck!

Akashi_S wrote:

From my queue sorry for my lateness

[General]
Artist's name is 三澤 紗千香, put this in the artist, and Misawa Sachika in the Romanised artist,
Change the name of the song title to ユナイト (TV Size) and keep the romanised title as Unite (TV Size)
Fixed

SPOILER

[Easy]
00:13:023 (4) - New combo here
Fixed
00:18:128 (4) - ^
Fixed

[Normal]

Use distance snap through out this diff.. spacing is really weird. Because I think I am going to say whole 'spacing' issue here, I won't say.
DISTANCE SPACING : 0.7x
00:21:000 (2,4) - Blanket better here.
Fixed, should be a bit better
01:13:808 (1,1,1) - Don't NC spam here.
nc emphasize sounds in the end

-- I am stopping here because you need to use distance snap during mapping except when you are putting jumps/anti-jumps/symmetric patterns etc, and you are not using it making me unable to mod, when you have fixed and I suggest you to remap because the spacing is just won't do it. I have faced that before when I first mapped also, and it seems like restricting you from making maps because it limits you in certain spacing, but it is 'required' most of the part.. Good luck mapping and I will recheck if you request in my queue when it's open. --
DISTANCE SPACING : 0.7x
don't you curious while you're judging this, other modders didn't say about it...

tbh, i don't get what you're saying around here

when you have fixed and I suggest you to remap because the spacing is just won't do it

spacing isn't right because it isn't or you just think i'm not snapping ?
re-map is fine as long as it is reasonable to do

indyinyou wrote:

ขอม๊อดเป็นภาษาไทยนะ

http://puu.sh/1VCI8

ในนี้ มีไฟล์ soft-hitclap3 คือเสียงกลอง
soft-hitfinish3 คือเสียงฉาบ
soft-hitnormal4 คือเสียงเบส

แล้วก็มีไฟล์ ชื่อ level 6 hitsound test ผมได้ใส่เสียงแบบคร่าวๆให้ดูแล้ว พยายามใส่แบบนี้ให้มันลงจังหวะ

ไม่เข้าใจถามผมในเกมล่ะกัน

Froztic wrote:

indyinyou wrote:

ขอม๊อดเป็นภาษาไทยนะ

http://puu.sh/1VCI8

ในนี้ มีไฟล์ soft-hitclap3 คือเสียงกลอง
soft-hitfinish3 คือเสียงฉาบ
soft-hitnormal4 คือเสียงเบส

แล้วก็มีไฟล์ ชื่อ level 6 hitsound test ผมได้ใส่เสียงแบบคร่าวๆให้ดูแล้ว พยายามใส่แบบนี้ให้มันลงจังหวะ

ไม่เข้าใจถามผมในเกมล่ะกัน

ขอบคุณมากครับ
(แก้เสียงฉาบสั้นลงนิดนึง)

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copolah123 wrote:

maybe you should put ^ to your description?
EDIT: oops I didn't notice

indyinyou wrote:

เข้าใจไวดีแหะ ต่อ คงเป็นเรื่องจัดโน๊ตนะ

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/61

ลองดูในนี้ นะ มันมี ทำสไลแปลก ไม่ก้วิธี จัดโน๊ต

แบบในรูปนี้ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593377 จะเห็นว่าโน๊ต มันติดกันแต่ วางให้มันเป็นรูปร่าง หรือ ว่า pattern
หรือ เรียกว่าโน๊ตโดด หรือ jump

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593381 / http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593386 ถ้าคิดไม่ออกก้ นึกเป็น สามเหลี่ยม

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593395 แบบ สี่เหลี่ยม
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593399 ห้าเหลี่ยมมั๊ง lol

ที่ฮิตๆ ก้มีรูปดาว ดูเลขที่โน๊ตไป(1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593406

การโดดแบบนี่ทำได้ดิฟ ฮาด (hard) ขึ้นไป ส่วนการจัดทำได้ทุกดิฟนะ

เอาแค่นี้ก่อน ไม่ต้อง kd เด๋วไม่เข้าใจไรก้ถามแล้วกัน

เอาจริงๆผมก้ไม่ได้ทำเป็นไรมากมาย ช่วยได้เท่าที่ช่วยล่ะกัน 555

indyinyou wrote:

เฮ้ย เพลงไม่ได้อัพเดทเลยนี่หวา ไม่มีคนม๊อดเหรอ เด๋วไปช่วยหาคนมาดูให้ หรือ เลิกทำแล้วเนี่ย 555

1. BPM 188.000
   　
2. Offset 280
   
   don't forget resnap all notes.

Guy wrote:

timing check~

[Timing]

• 
  
  　

1. BPM 188.000
   　
2. Offset 280
   
   don't forget resnap all notes.

1. Suggestions or comments.
2. High recommend

• SPOILER

  

1. 00:36:503 (1) - remove New Combo?.
2. 00:36:822 (1,2) - ^

1. 01:02:354 - and 01:02:833 - i'd like add circles here o3o

-Cloudchaser wrote:

☢ Request from my modding queue ☢

1. Suggestions or comments.
2. High recommend

In general this map all its ok.

Level 9

• SPOILER

  
  the 4th speed (0.5x) has drain less than 4 beat, it might be ok ?

1. 00:36:503 (1) - remove New Combo?.
2. 00:36:822 (1,2) - ^
   Add more combo instead (HP barely recovered in this part)

Level 6

1. 01:02:354 - and 01:02:833 - i'd like add circles here o3o
   Added

Nothing else I can say, good map!

• • Your mp3 is 80 kbps, which is below the miniumum of 128 kbps. Please find a better mp3.
  • Remove audio from video to reduce filesize.

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Approach Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3
  • 00:07:939 (1,2,3,4) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:28:365 (1) - ^
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:38:577 (2,1) - End the slider 1/1 earlier and start the spinner 1/2 earlier.
  • 00:42:088 (1) - This slider is too soon after the spinner for an Easy, delete it and add a circle at 00:42:407. (also, consider moving it near the center of the screen)
  • 00:51:662 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 00:51:982.
  • 01:04:748 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 01:05:067. (or just add a circle at 01:04:748)
  • 01:11:131 (2) - Delete this circle. Start a slider at 01:10:811 and end it at 01:11:131.
  • 01:13:045 (1,2,3,4) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.

• • HP Drain Rate: 5
  • Approach Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 5
  • 00:07:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete (2) and add 2 repeats on (1), also try this spacing:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:28:684 (2) - Try this spacing:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
  • 00:51:662 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:58:843 (4) - I don't like this slider, try to do something different:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:04:748 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 01:05:067. (or just add a circle at 01:04:748)
  • 01:06:822 (5,6,7) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:13:843 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos.
  • 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Approach Rate: 7
  • Overall Difficulty: 6
  • 00:00:599 (2) - I don't understand why you used this slider here, try to do something like this to better follow the music:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:02:833 (1,2) - Same as before, I really don't like these long sliders.
  • 00:06:503 (4) - ^
  • 00:27:726 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:29:801 (x) - ^
  • 00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
  • 00:32:354 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:34:907 (x) - ^
  • 00:37:460 (x) - ^
  • 01:13:843 (1) - Remove this new combo.
  • 01:15:120 (1,1) - ^
  • 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Approach Rate: 7
  • Overall Difficulty: 6
  • Slider Tick Rate: 1
  • 00:15:439 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:27:726 (x) - ^
  • 00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
  • 00:48:631 (5) - I don't like this slider, try to do something like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:51:583 (2) - This part is kinda confusing, don't hide this circle under the previous one.
  • 01:04:708 (3) - Delete this circle, it doesn't follow anything.
  • 01:04:867 (5) - ^
  • 01:05:027 (7) - ^
  • 01:06:184 (5) - Convert this slider into 3 1/2 circles.
  • 01:06:822 (7) - ^
  • 01:11:609 (6) - ^
  • 01:12:248 (8) - ^
  • 01:14:960 (1,1) - Remove these new combos.
  • 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

• • Your mp3 is 80 kbps, which is below the miniumum of 128 kbps. Please find a better mp3.
  it's VBR. 80kbps is the lowest bitrate in this file (i've rendered at the highest VBR, average is 224kbps.)
  if they have lift that stupid no more than 192kbps (which is still sucks) let me know, i'll changed them to 320kbps CBR.
  • Remove audio from video to reduce filesize.
  i've already removed the audio since first submission. or do i miss something ?
  edit: i've checked with both mp4box and MediaInfo: there is no audio in this video.

Level 1

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Approach Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3
  AR / OD changed, not HDR (supposed to be easiest : can miss so much and not die easily)
  • 00:07:939 (1,2,3,4) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  Fixed
  • 00:28:365 (1) - ^
  
  SPOILER

  
  Fixed
  • 00:38:577 (2,1) - End the slider 1/1 earlier and start the spinner 1/2 earlier.
  Fixed
  • 00:42:088 (1) - This slider is too soon after the spinner for an Easy, delete it and add a circle at 00:42:407. (also, consider moving it near the center of the screen)
  Fixed (moved down to the x-axis), but it leaves some question to me: why center ?
  • 00:51:662 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 00:51:982.
  Fixed
  • 01:04:748 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 01:05:067. (or just add a circle at 01:04:748)
  Circle added.
  • 01:11:131 (2) - Delete this circle. Start a slider at 01:10:811 and end it at 01:11:131.
  Mmmm... kay
  • 01:13:045 (1,2,3,4) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  trying now
  • 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.
  x

Level 4

• • HP Drain Rate: 5
  • Approach Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 5
  AR5 OD5 HDR4
  • 00:07:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete (2) and add 2 repeats on (1), also try this spacing:
  
  SPOILER

  
  Fixed
  • 00:28:684 (2) - Try this spacing:
  
  SPOILER

  
  well, i don't like the spacing on 2 (looks neat, but not equally spaced), moved repeats on 1 iinstead
  • 00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
  3 isn't a lot. this part still keep on my standard (6-8 downbeat -> new combo)
  • 00:51:662 (x) - Add a circle.
  okay
  • 00:58:843 (4) - I don't like this slider, try to do something different:
  
  SPOILER

  
  Broken down this slider into 3
  • 01:04:748 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 01:05:067. (or just add a circle at 01:04:748)
  off-beat. or else i'll have to put circles on 1/8.... well, at least not on easy/normal
  • 01:06:822 (5,6,7) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  Fixed (Good idea )
  • 01:13:843 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos.
  well, second time on here. that means i have to remove them for sure
  • 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.

Level 6

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Approach Rate: 7
  • Overall Difficulty: 6
  Fixed
  • 00:00:599 (2) - I don't understand why you used this slider here, try to do something like this to better follow the music:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:02:833 (1,2) - Same as before, I really don't like these long sliders.
  • 00:06:503 (4) - ^
  Fixed (all 3 above : broken down sliders)
  • 00:27:726 (x) - Add a circle.
  Added
  • 00:29:801 (x) - ^
  'kay
  • 00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
  • 00:32:354 (x) - Add a circle.
  wow, you does catch the guitar sounds
  • 00:34:907 (x) - ^
  yay~
  • 00:37:460 (x) - ^
  added
  • 01:13:843 (1) - Remove this new combo.
  • 01:15:120 (1,1) - ^
  ....okay //okayface
  • 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.

Level 9

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • Approach Rate: 7
  • Overall Difficulty: 6
  too easy + too slow for insane sight-reading.
  • Slider Tick Rate: 1
  no. or else the 0.5x part will not be easily read. imo, it's a very fast to slow, letting them know via ticks.
  • 00:15:439 (x) - Add a circle.
  added
  • 00:27:726 (x) - ^
  added
  • 00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
  reduced. still, more than other diffs.
  • 00:48:631 (5) - I don't like this slider, try to do something like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  edit : fixed (accidentially skip it)
  • 00:51:583 (2) - This part is kinda confusing, don't hide this circle under the previous one.
  spread a bit ( i actually want to stacked them up ).
  • 01:04:708 (3) - Delete this circle, it doesn't follow anything.
  • 01:04:867 (5) - ^
  • 01:05:027 (7) - ^
  rip this stream. removed
  • 01:06:184 (5) - Convert this slider into 3 1/2 circles.
  • 01:06:822 (7) - ^
  • 01:11:609 (6) - ^
  • 01:12:248 (8) - ^
  no to all (too much circles, and it's downtime. i mean, those SPEED part has gone, should be more relax).
  • 01:14:960 (1,1) - Remove these new combos.
  removed.
  • 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.
  i hear nothing at that point. but well, maybe my earphone is too sucks

1. All your BG are 1024x576, it should be 1024x768 (4:3)
2. Maybe you should lower the video bitrate since your folder size is 24 MB (I myself don't like downloading big size osz)
3. bg4.jpg and spinner-rpm.png are unused
4. mp3 bitrate is 80 kbps, maybe you should find higher one? (ppl doesn't see the VBR or CBR, they see the bitrate at song properties)
5. If you don't lower the vid bitrate maybe you should convert your skin to jpg? (to save size)
6. doesn't need letterbox during breaks since this has no break and has a video
7. I don't think you have storyboard, just uncheck the "display storyboard in front of combo fire"
8. use normal hitsound instead of soft? This song is loud and soft can't beat it

copolah123 wrote:

Just re checking using AIBat (I dont know if its correct or not) and some my suggestion
AIBat is half-half correct. this is because the guidelines isn't really stable. So something might be outdated.
I hope its useful no kd pls since you had given it at my last post

[General]

1. All your BG are 1024x576, it should be 1024x768 (4:3)
2. Maybe you should lower the video bitrate since your folder size is 24 MB (I myself don't like downloading big size osz)
3. bg4.jpg and spinner-rpm.png are unused
   Please re-download. Because i don't include bg4.jpg (sky raker) anymore.
   Also, i prefer 16:9 (1366x768). the current osz is that size, and guidelines has changed.
   about the video:render lower bitrate gives more crappy spot. i'll think of it. for now, i won't.
4. mp3 bitrate is 80 kbps, maybe you should find higher one? (ppl doesn't see the VBR or CBR, they see the bitrate at song properties)
   it's VBR. BATs should know.
5. If you don't lower the vid bitrate maybe you should convert your skin to jpg? (to save size)
   skin must be in .png just like how game skins are made
6. doesn't need letterbox during breaks since this has no break and has a video
   hmmm.. kay
7. I don't think you have storyboard, just uncheck the "display storyboard in front of combo fire"
   i've planned to do in the past... but i don't now.
8. use normal hitsound instead of soft? This song is loud and soft can't beat it
   custom hitsound.

[Level 1]

HP and CS +1 (its just my personal preference, you don't have to follow)
easy
I think the distance is too far for easy (I usually use 0.8 or lower) even your normal uses 0.7 which is lower,I don't find a reason for using more far DS on easier diff
00:38:577 why the slider end at red tick, maybe it should be at previous white tick
yeah.. my bad . Fixed
00:50:865 NC
well, i though it's new combo at the first look... it isn't right ?
Added
01:15:120 change to circle
x
01:15:439 if you follow ^ you should longer the spinner here
because spinner has no sounds. no change

[Level 4]

00:15:599 NC
mini-break
00:38:577 I prefer curved slider
Fixed
00:41:131 end the spinner here better
too long time spacing between spinner and slider
00:46:875 NC
00:57:088 ^
01:12:088 ^
01:12:726 ^
well, you don't have to follow the NC part since its my personal taste
All fixed, it looks better. Also broken down some long sliders so these circles fit

[Level 6]
Why 1/1 when you have 1/2 one
well, i always change them between 1/1 -> 1/2 -> 1/4, so i can really check on hitsounds.
You have some unstacked notes, I think its better to stack them
AIMod says it is all stacked
00:05:386 use finish instead of whistle, I think sounds better (soft finish)
Timing at 00:10:652 : I cant hear the hitsound even after I plugged my headphone lol
Because there's nothing; Timing for hitsounds purpose
00:15:599 use finish on here too (soft)
x
00:20:705 just finish ^
x
00:50:545 (3,4,5) bad spacing
Fixed
00:56:928 (7) change to 2 circles (R & W tick) like this

Fixed
01:01:237 remove NC
x

As usual, I can't mod Insane, but I think Insane is overmapped (no offense)
it isn't.

Yuki-kun wrote:

Small re-check.
Offset 294 is better than imo
i don't think so (the drums are actually off)
Also, in your Insane diff, so many un-perfect stack.

For example
00:03:166 (2,3,4,5) - Stack 4 with tail of 2, start of 5 with 3
stack leinency 0.7 and osu! will stack these (while playing) just like how i manually stack them
00:04:602 (7) - Stack with 00:03:964 (5) -
00:05:400 (1,2) - Same here.

We have option Stack laniency in F4, use it instead of make ugly place
00:49:123 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - because of stack leinency that stacked the middle,
0.4 is the highest point that osu! won't stack the middle for me. (means stack only 1/4 or lower)
So, the rest of the map that need to be stack (1/2): i've to manually stacked them.
that's why you saw it not properly stack

edit: you won't see how osu! stacked them on edit mode.
umm.. if you don't understand something feel free to ask then.

Well, good luck :p

copolah123 wrote:

Maybe ask the BAT to remove it?

Oh and 1 more, I have downloaded but the bg4 and rpm is still there, I don't know it is my error or yours (no offense again)

indyinyou wrote:

[level1] (ผมนับเป็นดิฟ easy นะ)
อ่าฮะ ไล่ E - N - H - I ตามเวลเลย

แนะนำให้ใช้ distance spacing 1.2 เวลาวางโน๊ต ลองกดชิบค้างนะ มันจะมีเส้น(อันนี้ไม่ค่อยแนะนำแต่ให้กด ait วางเองจะดีกว่า
หรือกดชิบบางอันก้ได้)
เหมือนหลายๆคนยจะบอกให้ใช้ DS ต่ำๆอ่ะ (เลยใช้ 0.8 ไปก่อนเพราะเซทดิฟใหม่มันก้ตั้ง 0.8x มาให้) (ติดเป็นพรืดเลย)
00:00:275 : ช่วงต้นลองทำสไลลากยาวแล้ว ใส่ เสียงสไลติกเอานะ (หรือ โน๊ตเว้น โน๊ตตามเสียงกลอง)
00:20:700 : ช่วงนี้ ถ้าจะทำโน๊ตเว้นโน๊ตแบบนั้นนะ ให้ ลงเสียงกลองเว้นกลองจะดีกว่า
00:22:934 : หรือ ลากยาวแบบนี้
คงรูปเดิมแหละ ลง downbeat เล่นง่ายดี
00:41:126 : สปินจบนี่ก้พอมั๊ง
สั้นไปอ่ะ
00:42:402 : ดูในตัวอย่าง วิธีใส่ new combo ให้ นับ เส้นที่ ขาวใหญ่ ใส่ NC แล้วผ่านไปเส้นนึง แล้ว ใส่ new combo ที่ 00:44:955
โอเคเลย

ดิฟ easy มันยังลูกเล่นไรมากไม่ได้ ลอง ดูไปก่อน ที่ผมแนะนำ มันเป็นเบสิก ไว้สำหรับทำเพลงให้มันแร้งน่ะ

เด๋วว่างๆจะมาดูอีก จะช่วยทีล่ะดิฟให้มันเข้าที่ เข้าทางก่อน พยายามใส่เสียงกลองด้วยอะ

http://puu.sh/2eGCA

ตัวอย่างจ้า

copolah123 wrote:

Maybe ask the BAT to remove it?

Oh and 1 more, I have downloaded but the bg4 and rpm is still there, I don't know it is my error or yours (no offense again)

Froztic wrote:

- i'll try ask BATs when i request them for bubbles.

- spinner-rpm.png is being used. AIBat is wrong on that (you can test on it by applying some really weird coloring and see)
- about bg4: it isn't there anymore, i've try re-download and don't see it.
(maybe you forgot to remove all of the old files before importing them)

Andrea wrote:

~General~

The bitrate for Misawa Sachika - Unite (TV Size).mp3 is 80 kb/s, which is below the miniumum of 128 kb/s.
it's VBR. 80kbps is the lowest bitrate in the file.

(click on images to view in full size)
You should resize all of your BGs to 1366x768, that's the correct dimension.
hmm... osu! resize this dimension for me. (i'm throwing x1080 img) anyway, fixed
The files cursormiddle.png and spinner-rpm.png are unused, removed them.
please... don't really trust AIBat that much.
cursormiddle is being used, along with support of new type cursor http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/119648
spinner-rpm.png is being used. you can try re-coloring a very weird one and see.

~Level 1~

Reduce OD and AR by 1 tick.
AR -1
00:08:732 (2) - Add a finish at the end of this slider.
okay~
00:26:285 (2,3,4) - This pattern is not a good idea for an Easy difficulty, it might confuse beginners, use some sliders instead.
Change 1,2 to slider.
00:30:594 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Same for this one.
Change 1,2 to slider. following vocal would be easiest for beginners. i think
00:42:402 (1) - Add a finish.
Added
00:57:721 (1,2,3) - Wrong spacing, check carefully with distance snap and fix it.
DS snap that for me. i'll move end of slider 1 so it don't confuse someone
01:10:487 (1) - Remove this whistle and add a finish instead, sounds better.
inconsistent of finish hitsounds
01:15:115 (3) - Finish at the end of this slider.
sounds weird to me

~Level 4~

00:05:381 (1) - Add a finish, sounds better than a whistle.
okay~
00:07:934 (1,2,3) - Different slider repeats are not suggested on easier difficulty, they confuse beginners, please consider using the same repeats for all of the sliders to make it consistent and easily readable.
following the bg sounds shouldn't be so difficult to beginners. synths are somehow catchy too.
00:37:934 (4) - Add a new combo here, lyrics restarts.
Added
00:51:657 (5,6) - Change these circles to a slider, it would be much better imo.
Fixed
00:55:168 (4) - New combo, otherwise it will be too long.
Fixed
01:00:275 (6) - ^ Same with this.
Fixed
01:14:477 (4) - ^ And this.
nope

~Level 6~

00:07:934 (1,2) - These sliders could be stacked much better.
Fixed. should be better
00:31:711 (4) - I don't think it's a good idea to place this note where you had some notes before, move it somewhere else perhaps? It would be better imo, though it's your choice.
moved to the 3rd quarter
00:58:838 (6) - I don't like this slider shape, it looks kinda ugly, try to make it better.
Fixed
01:04:264 (3) - Why this sudden slowdown? Also, the slider seems to be unsnapped.
speedy slider here just don't match with fading vocal. so i slow it down.
01:04:623 (4,5,6,7) - Unsnapped notes.
1/8 snap
01:15:434 (5) - Remove the clap and add a finish instead.
a stand-slone finish here doesn't fit. add like -Level 9-

~Level 9~

Whole difficulty has weird stacks, please disable grid snap and fix all of them manually.
okay. should be completed (if i don't forget something)
00:00:115 (1,2,3) - These triplet might be hard to catch, change it to a slider.
too easy. and if you're playing E/N/H before. you sure will know these these drum sounds do exist. also it gives a nice intro
00:35:062 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:221 (2) - Add new combo, it should go there instead.
Fixed (NC issue)
00:39:530 (7) - This slider is completely hidden from the previous one, do something else.
(so hidden that i don't see it too) (Fixed)
00:41:604 (4,1,1) - I don't like this slowdown, also that new combo spam doesn't make sense.
removed the nc-ing.
00:45:115 (4,5) - These sliders could be stacked much better than this.
i don't know how can i stack them better than this. so i unstack them
00:51:179 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Really ugly pattern, please don't overlap circles in this way.
look at it as a butterfly flying to the slider direction
00:52:934 (3,4,5) - Again, stack these sliders without grid snap.
Fixed
01:00:434 (3) - Weird slider, I suggest you to make it in another way than this.
Fixed
01:04:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as the other difficulty.
1/8 snap
01:14:157 (3) - Finish on slider start.
Added
01:15:274 (5) - Finish on slider end and remove the clap.
Added

Good luck with this!

Irreversible wrote:

Hi there from my queue!

[General]

The ranking criteria says: Try to keep osz files under 10mb, or 24mb if you include a video/storyboard (please remove the audio track from video files to save space). Yours is currently 25 MB, dunno if you have to change it though.
if the size is over the maximum, osu! won't allow me to upload. if i can upload, this means it's fine
Is there a reason why you call them Level 1,4,6,9 ? i mean.. the numbers, not level, i'm ok with that
referring to the anime, each diff level is the level of the character's duel avatar. 1 is the lowest while 10 is the maximum.

[Level 1]

I suggest using 1.0x Distance snap, it looks ways better
some says 0.8x, 1.0x or even 1.2x. i'm going to stick with 1.0x from now on
also, reduce SV to 0.7

00:29:477 (3) - make a straight slider?
okay~
00:36:019 (5,6) - this is confusing for new players D:
Fixed
00:48:626 (4) - remove this slider, and use circles and sliders instead (listening to the vocals is good there)
Fixed
01:07:934 (1,2,3) - this pattern, for exmaple, is the reason why you should use 1.0x distance snap. in my eyes, it just looks very bad :X
eventually fixed
The rhythm is very good though! good job :3
thanks

[Level 4]

00:04:743 (5) - hold shift while placing it, for a straight line, and a better flow
oh,i don't know that function like this do exist. pretty handy. fixed
00:06:657 (3,4) - very bad flow - place 4 over the slider end
Fixed
in my opininion, this spinner ( 00:39:689 (1) - ) should end here:00:41:126 -
i'll think of it
00:48:626 (5) - same as easy
Fixed
00:55:009 (4) - add a circle
there is already a circle
01:03:785 (4,5) - hm.. 0.7 DS is very less u.u i would higher it as well ><
well, it's fine. 1/2 space should look like that

i really love the hitsounds! woo! xDD


[Level 6]

00:00:594 (2) - ctrl + j for a better flow, arrange 3,4,5 also, that there will be a good flow
Fixed
00:01:711 (6) - nc
too frequent
00:28:040 (1,2) - place 2 a bit more up.
okay
00:37:455 (8,9,10,1) - http://puu.sh/2h5ZV
Fixed

rest seems fine

[Level 9]
woops, seems i forgot to change DS back to 1.0

00:00:195 (2) - x:208 / y: 188
00:00:275 (3) - x: 180 / y: 148
move (2) down
00:00:594 (5) - DS
yeah, DS is wrong, not me
00:06:019 (4,5,6,7) - this pattern just doesn't work, plz fix circle 5 and put it somewhere else
hmm, you don't actually 'slide' (4). just hold on and then press (5). should be worked
00:51:179 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - same here, this looks a bit odd
2nd time on here (actually, 3rd time though) i'll changed to something else then.
00:51:817 (1,2,3) - i don't really get this pattern, try use smth easier to read?
just a sliderstream. nothing more
00:52:934 (3,4,5) - iLike :3

Rest is okayish

________

The map is kinda okay. But unfortunately, i totally dont like how less Distance Snap you use, but it's up to you. you should use a bit more, otherwise everything looks so.. squashed. I hope you can understand me, this is no offence!
should be better by now
Good lcuk ~ ASK ME EVERYTIME IF YOU HAVE A QUESTION!

Hellzero wrote:

Hi from ♥Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[Level 1]
Use more hitsounds particularly "finish"

hitfinish mod by Hellzero

00:05:381 (1) - add finish
00:10:487 (1) - ^
00:20:700 (1) - ^
Try this hit-sounds pattern
00:25:806 - finish with 65% volume
00:26:923 - finish with 50% volume
00:28:360 - 65%
00:29:477 - 50%
00:30:913 - 65%
00:32:030 - 50%
ect
00:47:189 (1) - finish at end
00:48:626 (4) - finish at start
00:50:062 (6) - finish
00:51:179 (3) - ^
00:52:615 (1) - ^
00:57:721 (1) - F at star
00:58:838 (3) - ^
00:59:955 (5) - F at end
01:01:392 (3) - F
01:05:381 (1) - ^
01:10:487 (1) - ^
01:14:157 (2) - F at start
01:15:115 (3) - F at end

E / N has too less notes to make a good continuous drum sequence. so you will bearely heard it.
although those hitfinish sequence is nice, put them standalone will be weird.
and i also intended to make hitsound not thhe same for every diff.

00:36:019 (5) - add NC
Added
00:37:934 (1) - remove NC
no. combo will be too long
01:15:115 (3) - unsnapped
Fixed
01:15:753 (1) - remove clap
Fixed

[Level 4]
The same suggestions about finish
00:15:594 - good place for note
rest (no vocal)
01:07:296 (6,7,1) - spacing
Fixed
[Level 6]
The same suggestions about finish
00:02:189 - if follow the music you need add here note or make spacing beetwen 00:01:711 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - these triplet more far, because it look like jumps and maybe confuse players.
move 00:02:030 (8) down. should be nice too look at
00:07:934 (1,2) - use more creative

intended
[Level 9]
The same suggestions about finish
00:49:104 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - I can't to read it even AR9
changed to something else.

Too many random. Try use more pretty patterns and slider shape. Your DS good but notes too close it hard too read.Use jumps but don't abuse. Good luck
slider fixed ( curved most of them. some straight lines are intended )
i personally don't like jump that much, so i put them when i feel right and its fit.