Hi, M4M
[Easy]
One minor issue I have with this diff at first glance is the diff name. Rhythm choice here looks like coming from a Normal standards. I recommend changing the name into something like "Light"00:40:268 - Are u sure you don't want a 1/2 slider here? Your diff introduces consecutive 1/2 sliders so it should be here to cover. Optional 'cause you probably need simplification here
00:55:268 (2) - I would put 1/2 slider here as the red tick on 00:55:580 - holds quite a strong sound and 00:54:018 (1,2,3) - seems like a new pattern thoughout this part. Compare this with 00:49:018 (1,2,3) - , 00:56:518 (1,2,3) - to see an inconsistent pattern.
01:21:205 - 02:38:705 - 03:48:705 - - A circle here. I know it's an Easy diff and don't want too complex rhythm but sounds do need covering.
And one more thing is that if you can, increase SV up to 1.2x during kiai like you did on "Full Bloom". Don't worry if it's an Easy, I think it works.
Also, this is a 90+ bpm map so it's understandable the low spacing, but it's this close that it may confuse players to mistake them for 3/4 beatThe rest is pretty good. Love it
[Full Bloom]
00:05:268 (1,2) - This first set of 1/2 slider is spaced similarly to 00:09:018 (1,2) - which is put at the
beginning of the new streak of rhythm (8 beats). This might be inconsistent given that sounds are the same.
00:13:393 (1) - Expand to end the slider at blue tick. Personal opinion.
00:22:455 (4,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing as all 3 sounds on these bear the same strength.
00:43:393 (5,1) - Lack of emphasis. (1) holds a strong sound. Suggest spacing it out further. (It's also 1/2 beat not 3/4)
00:57:143 (2,3,4) - Triangular pattern would be great (I wasn't affected by my map when modding this. I swear lol xD)
01:04:018 (1) - Wouldn't hurt if you make it blanket 01:04:643 (3) - 's slider end, yes?
01:10:893 (5) - I would make this one's slider end overlap 01:10:424 (4) - about halfway through tbh.
01:50:268 (3) - Could NC this
01:53:080 (4,5,6) - 02:03:080 (4,5,6) - - (Optional) Your square pattern is great. For me I would make those like this; kinda like rhythm emphasis rather than regular 1/2 spacing you did throughout the map.
From 02:41:518 (1) - (Open box below)
My changes:
- Turned 02:42:768 (5) - into 1 circle to emphasize sound
- Place 02:43:080 (1) - slightly next to (5) I mentioned above. Make sure (1) stay further (2) after it so as to ensure emphasis
- Rinse repeat
Again this is
optional. This may require a somewhat different structure so you don't necessarily change. This is only my suggestions as this would better help represent this part.
03:00:268 (1) - NC this and make this slider into a slider art. Here's mine: (It includes a pointy head to emphasize the white tick as you did with repeat slider. But since it's not notable, using this would feel better)
Here's the code of the slider if you want to use it:
172,140,180268,6,0,B|151:113|156:80|156:80|170:53|167:24|167:24|183:48|214:58|214:58|241:83|241:129,1,240
03:58:705 (6) - Move this onto previous (4)'s slider end. This gives emphasis for 03:59:018 (1) -
04:00:893 (3,4,1) - Again, emphasis
04:05:268 (4,5,1) - Same as above
04:07:455 (1) - 04:08:705 (1) - Why NC tho? (2 more after this part)
The map is well done. The song is soothing as well; I'm into it. Can't wait to see it being ranked. GL