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Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu - Best FriendS [Taiko]

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davidminh0111
Some changes:

  1. Changed some weird flows in Oni
  2. Updated xfrac's Muzukashii
  3. Added ily4's Inner Oni
Thanks, updated
Nyan
[Kantan]

Kiai unsnapped : 00:51:252

00:51:251 - reduce SV to 1.00x
01:14:809 (115,116,1) - can be replaced to a single long spinner
01:25:668 (13) - add Finish

[Blushing's Futsuu]

01:25:668 (6) - add Finish

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

01:01:374 (59) - add Finish
01:14:809 (122) - add Finish

[Oni]

01:23:828 (44,45,46,47,48) - add Finish

[ily4's Inner Oni]

Kiai unsnapped : 00:51:252
Aisha

Nyan wrote:

[xfrac's Muzukashii]

01:01:374 (59) - add Finish
01:14:809 (122) - add Finish
Ok!~
David can you please add both finishers? Thanks :>
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Nyan wrote:

[Kantan]

Kiai unsnapped : 00:51:252 Fixed

00:51:251 - reduce SV to 1.00xFixed
01:14:809 (115,116,1) - can be replaced to a single long spinner I want Kantan players have a break between 2 notes.
01:25:668 (13) - add Finish Added

[Blushing's Futsuu]

01:25:668 (6) - add Finish Added

[Oni]

01:23:828 (44,45,46,47,48) - add Finish Added

[ily4's Inner Oni]

Kiai unsnapped : 00:51:252 Fixed
Updated
Blackener
Hi! from NM. here
You can skip it if you feel my modding affects your mapping style.
Please keep in mind that I'm mapping newbie. So, feel free to ignore if you have reason enough, I'll try my best! :D


Kantan
I almost can't find any error
Maybe this mod is an error instead, isn't it? XD


00:17:754 (27) - k? it's the same pitch like the next one.

00:34:318 (53) - k?

00:41:312 (64) - k? Vocal pitch drops at 00:41:680 (65), not here.

00:54:932 (82) - k? it's high pitch

01:00:821 (92) - d? Vocal pitch drops here

(If you change it to d it'll reflect 00:57:140 (86,87,88,89,90) perfectly)

01:22:907 (8) - k, it's the higher pitch.

01:25:668 (13) - if you don't want to put spinner at the end, could you finish it with finisher? I'm sure it's strong enough.

Blushing's futsuu
00:02:846 (6) - k,high pitch here

00:09:472 (27) - d? To emphasize background instrument.

00:14:809 (42,43,44) - kdk, if you want to follow vocal.

change 00:23:643 (62) to k and 00:23:828 (63) to D ?

00:43:889 (33,34,35) - k ? I'm not sure.

00:54:932 (12) - k? higher pitch here.

00:56:036 (15,16) - Ctrl+G? It's the high pitch and the lower one.

01:04:502 (40) - kdk ? To reflect next dkd

01:05:607 (44) - k? to emphasize next lower pitch.

01:07:079 (48) - d? to emphasize next higher pitch.

01:10:760 (58) - k? It's another high pitch.

01:12:785 (64,68) - k? It's quite clear voice, it should be k, I guess.

01:17:018 (3,4) - d? (Optional)

01:18:122 (7,8,9,10) - I would go for k k k d

01:19:778 (12) - kd? It'll refect 01:20:331 (1,2)

01:21:987 (6) - k, high pitch here ?

01:25:668 (6) - Add spinner? It's strong enough.

xfrac's Muzukashii
00:12:416 (59) - Add finisher, like other diffs

00:33:031 (141) - k? to emphasize vocal

00:35:607 (152) - k? I'm not sure

00:47:938 (202) - d? I'm not sure either.

00:49:594 (1,2,3) - kkk? It's the same pitch like 00:49:963 (4)

00:51:619 (11,12) - Ctrl+G? high pitch is at 00:51:803 (12).

00:58:429 (45) - k, the high pitch is here.

00:58:429 (45) - Ctrl+G, ^

01:10:208 (102) - k, ^

01:14:257 (121) - k, it's the clear voice.

01:22:723 (155) - k? I'm not sure.

Oni
00:02:662 (15) - k, to emphasize next ddk

00:05:055 (26,27,28) - kdk , kdd , kkd will emphasize the next k

00:07:999 (43) - k, ^

00:09:104 (49,50,51) - kkd,kdd, ^

00:13:337 (72,73) - Ctrl+G? , to emphasize voice at 00:13:705 (74)

00:18:674 (96) - k, to emphasize guitar sound.

00:19:226 (98) - k, to emphasize next k (vocal)

00:24:012 (116) - Delete? It sounds strange when it is here in my opinion.

00:25:116 (121,122,123) - these triplets should place at 00:25:116.

00:26:220 (128,129) - Ctrl+G? high pitch is at 00:26:220 (128)

00:29:901 (145,146) - d at 00:29:901 (145) to emphasize K at 00:30:085 (146) (If you change it)

00:30:821 (148,149,150) - Ctrl+G to emphasize k.

00:31:558 (153,154,155) - ^

00:32:846 (162) - k to emphasize ddd.

00:40:944 (197) - d?? I'm not sure.

00:43:889 (209) - d? , not sure either.

00:55:116 (270) - k? , to emphasize d (Vocal)

00:55:668 (273) - d? to emphasize kkd

00:58:797 (291) - k? , to follow vocal

00:59:717 (296,297,298,299,300) - kkddk " Best Quintuplets in Taiko "

01:02:110 (309) - k? to emphasize Se--No.

01:02:662 (310) - Ctrl+G to follow Se--No.

01:05:055 (321,322,323) - kdk or kkk to follow high-pitched vocal.

01:08:551 (341,342,343,344,345) - ddkdk ?

01:11:496 (362) - k to follow vocal.

01:11:680 (363,364) - Ctrl+G, ^

01:14:533 (376,377) - Ctrl+G, to emphasize vocal.

01:17:018 (4,5) - d (optional).

01:18:122 (8) - k, to follow vocal

01:19:042 (12,13,14) - ddk? ^

01:20:147 (20) - k? I'm not sure.

01:21:803 (31) - k? Not sure either

01:25:300 (48) - Too bad, I expect spinner, finisher or something else that isn't drumroll, just kidding. ;3

ily4's Inner Oni
Wow, you're so experienced in mapping, I almost cannot find any error here, honestly. Maybe you'd better mod my map instead Accept my mod as you agree! ;3

00:35:607 (196,197,198,199) - Ctrl+G to follow background instrument.

00:40:760 (218,219) - Ctrl+G to follow vocal

01:13:153 (417) - d? to follow vocal.

(This diff's modding is fake modding, just kidding.)

Good luck to all of you on ranking! :D
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Blackener wrote:

Hi! from NM. here
You can skip it if you feel my modding affects your mapping style.
Please keep in mind that I'm mapping newbie. So, feel free to ignore if you have reason enough, I'll try my best! :D
Good

Kantan
I almost can't find any error
Maybe this mod is an error instead, isn't it? XD


00:17:754 (27) - k? it's the same pitch like the next one. Nope, the pitch its setting up from here so it would be better to do dk

00:34:318 (53) - k? But I make this pattern to make it easier for the players

00:41:312 (64) - k? Vocal pitch drops at 00:41:680 (65), not here. 00:41:680 changed to k

00:54:932 (82) - k? it's high pitch Melody is low pitch, not high :3

01:00:821 (92) - d? Vocal pitch drops here Sounds good, fixed

(If you change it to d it'll reflect 00:57:140 (86,87,88,89,90) perfectly)

01:22:907 (8) - k, it's the higher pitch. not really to me XD

01:25:668 (13) - if you don't want to put spinner at the end, could you finish it with finisher? I'm sure it's strong enough. Fixed

Blushing's futsuu
00:02:846 (6) - k,high pitch here But it's k already lol

00:09:472 (27) - d? To emphasize background instrument. Nice! Fixed

00:14:809 (42,43,44) - kdk, if you want to follow vocal. I'm following background instrument

change 00:23:643 (62) to k and 00:23:828 (63) to D ? Changed by myself

00:43:889 (33,34,35) - k ? I'm not sure. k dd instead

00:54:932 (12) - k? higher pitch here. WHAT? O_o. I hear low pitch :3

00:56:036 (15,16) - Ctrl+G? It's the high pitch and the lower one. The melody in the current time is rising up here

01:04:502 (40) - kdk ? To reflect next dkd Fixed

01:05:607 (44) - k? to emphasize next lower pitch. Nope, d will emphasize better

01:07:079 (48) - d? to emphasize next higher pitch. Correct, Fixed!

01:10:760 (58) - k? It's another high pitch. Pitch rising up

01:12:785 (64,68) - k? It's quite clear voice, it should be k, I guess.

01:17:018 (3,4) - d? (Optional) Disagree xD

01:18:122 (7,8,9,10) - I would go for k k k d Pitch rising up

01:19:778 (12) - kd? It'll refect 01:20:331 (1,2) Fixed

01:21:987 (6) - k, high pitch here ? I know but i think d will be better

01:25:668 (6) - Add spinner? It's strong enough. No ;w;

Oni
00:02:662 (15) - k, to emphasize next ddk I don't want to break this flow so no change

00:05:055 (26,27,28) - kdk , kdd , kkd will emphasize the next k But pitch is low?

00:07:999 (43) - k, ^ ^

00:09:104 (49,50,51) - kkd,kdd, ^ kkd

00:13:337 (72,73) - Ctrl+G? , to emphasize voice at 00:13:705 (74) ddk instead

00:18:674 (96) - k, to emphasize guitar sound. Fixed

00:19:226 (98) - k, to emphasize next k (vocal) Low pitch

00:24:012 (116) - Delete? It sounds strange when it is here in my opinion. Emphazising next triplet

00:25:116 (121,122,123) - these triplets should place at 00:25:116. Don't understand what you mean here

00:26:220 (128,129) - Ctrl+G? high pitch is at 00:26:220 (128) Nope, low xD

00:29:901 (145,146) - d at 00:29:901 (145) to emphasize K at 00:30:085 (146) (If you change it) Fixed

00:30:821 (148,149,150) - Ctrl+G to emphasize k. You can use other different way to say it, Ctrl+ G more than 3 notes will make it messy .
Fixed


00:31:558 (153,154,155) - ^ ^

00:32:846 (162) - k to emphasize ddd. 00:32:662 changed to k

00:40:944 (197) - d?? I'm not sure. Ok, incorrect xD :Think:

00:43:889 (209) - d? , not sure either. ^

00:55:116 (270) - k? , to emphasize d (Vocal) Made some changes

00:55:668 (273) - d? to emphasize kkd Yup, fixed

00:58:797 (291) - k? , to follow vocal But I'm following?

00:59:717 (296,297,298,299,300) - kkddk " Best Quintuplets in Taiko " ddkkd instead

01:02:110 (309) - k? to emphasize Se--No. No, it will break the flow

01:02:662 (310) - Ctrl+G to follow Se--No. :Think:

01:05:055 (321,322,323) - kdk or kkk to follow high-pitched vocal. Better with kkd

01:08:551 (341,342,343,344,345) - ddkdk ? Agree but mine is better

01:11:496 (362) - k to follow vocal. ???? I'm following

01:11:680 (363,364) - Ctrl+G, ^ Sounds good, fixed for a better flow

01:14:533 (376,377) - Ctrl+G, to emphasize vocal. Fixed

01:17:018 (4,5) - d (optional). Maybe not

01:18:122 (8) - k, to follow vocal Low pitch?

01:19:042 (12,13,14) - ddk? ^ Yep, fixed

01:20:147 (20) - k? I'm not sure. Fixed

01:21:803 (31) - k? Not sure either Ok, no change XD

01:25:300 (48) - Too bad, I expect spinner, finisher or something else that isn't drumroll, just kidding. ;3 Finisher

ily4's Inner Oni
Wow, you're so experienced in mapping, I almost cannot find any error here, honestly. Maybe you'd better mod my map instead Accept my mod as you agree! ;3

00:35:607 (196,197,198,199) - Ctrl+G to follow background instrument. But he's following?

00:40:760 (218,219) - Ctrl+G to follow vocal Current pattern is better

01:13:153 (417) - d? to follow vocal. dkk instead

(This diff's modding is fake modding, just kidding.)

Good luck to all of you on ranking! :D
thanks for the mod
Prophecy
From my special queue, short mod.

[General]
> Disable widescreen support

[Kantan]
> 00:01:926 (2,3,4,5) - it's quite hard for beginners, usually we don't use too much 1/2 in Kantan, consider to remove few 1/2 in order to provide a better spread.

> 00:01:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - too many kat in this part, for example, you can change 00:10:392 (15) - to emphasize the next higher pitch (16)

> 00:24:012 (35) - maybe you place the wrong D here?

> 00:23:275 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - too long, you need to put a break there like removing 00:31:374 (47) .

> Add a inherited timeline here (green line) for lower volume (~75%)

> 00:45:361 (70,71,72,73) - why you put here? you follow the vocal before. :3

Good kiai, However you must pay some attention on the diff. spread and the 1/2 issue. GL~
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Prophecy wrote:

From my special queue, short mod.

[General]
> Disable widescreen support Done

[Kantan]
> 00:01:926 (2,3,4,5) - it's quite hard for beginners, usually we don't use too much 1/2 in Kantan, consider to remove few 1/2 in order to provide a better spread. Deleted

> 00:01:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - too many kat in this part, for example, you can change 00:10:392 (15) - to emphasize the next higher pitch (16) Changed some

> 00:24:012 (35) - maybe you place the wrong D here? Nope, you may pay more attention to the background instrument

> 00:23:275 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - too long, you need to put a break there like removing 00:31:374 (47) . Deleted some

> Add a inherited timeline here (green line) for lower volume (~75%) Time please?

> 00:45:361 (70,71,72,73) - why you put here? you follow the vocal before. :3 Moved some notes

Good kiai, However you must pay some attention on the diff. spread and the 1/2 issue. GL~
Thanks for the mod
Skylish
Hi, from my M4M modding queue. Sorry for being late due to unexpected workload in osu and irl. NO KDS

[General]

> 'bg.jpg' resolution should be re-arranged to 1366*768, or you may find another BG for it.

> Remove the artist names in 'Artist' column. You can add them in 'Tag' column instead.

> Metadata check:
http://www.love-lab.tv/music/index.html


> OD/HP settings:

Kantan: HP may be 8 for a better HP spread, after all the notes in Kantan are much fewer comparing with Futsuu.
Futsuu: 3.5/7 You forgot to set it, Blushing.
Oni: 5/5 OD should be displayed in a linear scale.

[Blushing Futsuu + xfrac's Muzukashii]

> They are the most problematic difficulties in terms of spread. The exagerated expression in Kiai, comparing between Futsuu and Muzukashii is too large. F-M-O spread is very poor. Both of you please compromise with each others' difficulties and make some amendments. Both difficulties are good separately, but the spread could be improved more.

> Futsuu is too easy, overall density could be increased. Muzukashii is too hard, vice versa, esp.ly those triplet usages.

[]

I will come back with a proper mod when the above issues are addressed in a superficial extent.
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Skylish wrote:

Hi, from my M4M modding queue. Sorry for being late due to unexpected workload in osu and irl. NO KDS

[General]

> 'bg.jpg' resolution should be re-arranged to 1366*768, or you may find another BG for it. I don't know how to reduce the BG resolution and look for the new BG. Can u help me?

> Remove the artist names in 'Artist' column. You can add them in 'Tag' column instead. The main artist name should be in Japanese word.
You may check for another Best FriendS map more to find the information.


> Metadata check:
http://www.love-lab.tv/music/index.html


> OD/HP settings:

Kantan: HP may be 8 for a better HP spread, after all the notes in Kantan are much fewer comparing with Futsuu. It's already HP 8 ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Futsuu: 3.5/7 You forgot to set it, Blushing. Fixed
Oni: 5/5 OD should be displayed in a linear scale. Fixed

[Blushing Futsuu + xfrac's Muzukashii]

> They are the most problematic difficulties in terms of spread. The exagerated expression in Kiai, comparing between Futsuu and Muzukashii is too large. F-M-O spread is very poor. Both of you please compromise with each others' difficulties and make some amendments. Both difficulties are good separately, but the spread could be improved more. Will fix the Futsuu for him, and frac will fix by himself

> Futsuu is too easy, overall density could be increased. Muzukashii is too hard, vice versa, esp.ly those triplet usages. idk

[]

I will come back with a proper mod when the above issues are addressed in a superficial extent. Sure
Thanks for the suggestion
Skylish
It seems you ran into some troubles about General issues, here's another supplementary material for you:

[General]

> You may replace the bg with this 1920*1080 jpg . It is the same picture but in different resolution only.

> Remove that png file since it is not used. I forgot to check this for you in previous mod, sorry. https://puu.sh/xs7EO/f7c3acd20e.png

> Title should only be '藤女生徒会執行部'. Put 沼倉愛美 赤崎千夏 水瀬いのり 佐倉綾音 大地葉 in 'Tag' column. It is supported by the official website of anime. Other ranked mapset did so too. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/130104
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Skylish wrote:

It seems you ran into some troubles about General issues, here's another supplementary material for you:

[General]

> You may replace the bg with this 1920*1080 jpg . It is the same picture but in different resolution only. Changed

> Remove that png file since it is not used. I forgot to check this for you in previous mod, sorry. https://puu.sh/xs7EO/f7c3acd20e.png I deleted already

> Title should only be '藤女生徒会執行部'. Put 沼倉愛美 赤崎千夏 水瀬いのり 佐倉綾音 大地葉 in 'Tag' column. It is supported by the official website of anime. Other ranked mapset did so too. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/130104
Ok

Thanks.
Skylish
Artist: 藤女生徒会執行部
Romanized artist: Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu
Title: Best FriendS -TV Size-

Please fix it first before you get any mods....

** I typed 'Title' <-- this was a typo, I meant 'Artist'.... I think you should judge everything before you make changes.
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Skylish wrote:

Artist: 藤女生徒会執行部
Romanized artist: Fujijo Seitokai Shikkou-bu
Title: Best FriendS -TV Size-

Please fix it first before you get any mods....

** I typed 'Title' <-- this was a typo, I meant 'Artist'.... I think you should judge everything before you make changes.
:Think: Done
Alwaysyukaz
hi! Modding req from your queue :D

Kantan


00:03:214 (3) - kat? seems not have a quiet different from 00:01:926 (2) -

00:04:502 (4) - change to don,the sounds seems lower

00:10:392 (12,13,14) - why not make the all of this note to finish? its better in finish because the sounds is strong

00:12:232 (15) - change to kat is better if you follow my suggestion before

00:08:367 (9) - i think you its should be in white thick here 00:08:551 - . i know your mean but is seems difficult for

beginner players or as a kantan's players to try to tap it

00:20:883 (25) - ^

00:44:441 (54) - ^

00:56:220 (68) - ^

01:00:637 (74) - ^

01:19:778 (4) - ^


00:36:527 (41) - add finisher

00:40:944 (48) - don, opposite from 00:37:999 (43,44,45) -

00:48:122 (59) - i think its better in spinner than slider

00:53:091 (63) - change to kat? seems add some variation more interesting XD

01:13:337 (91) - don,the sounds still lower until here

01:24:932 (12) - change to kat? the picth of sounds seems high and i think its better


Oni


00:04:686 - add note here for consistancy

00:09:932 (58) - delete? i think isn't really fit when i compare with 3 1/2 note here 00:10:024 (59,60,61) - *as this part

i think the better one is using finish 00:10:024 (59,60,61,62,63,64) - but its up to you if you wanna use it or not XD

00:19:963 (101) - change to kat,for consistancy with 00:20:331 (102) -

00:27:324 - Add note here *don't leave it empty XD

00:31:558 (155,156,157) - change to dkd and make some variation from 00:30:821 (150,151,152) - seems better than monoton

pattern

00:48:122 (237) - why not using note than slider here? try this :D

00:57:509 - add note here


Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Alwaysyukaz wrote:

hi! Modding req from your queue :D

Kantan


00:03:214 (3) - kat? seems not have a quiet different from 00:01:926 (2) - Pitch is low, no change

00:04:502 (4) - change to don,the sounds seems lower Not really

00:10:392 (12,13,14) - why not make the all of this note to finish? its better in finish because the sounds is strong Yea

00:12:232 (15) - change to kat is better if you follow my suggestion before Ok

00:08:367 (9) - i think you its should be in white thick here 00:08:551 - . i know your mean but is seems difficult for

beginner players or as a kantan's players to try to tap it Ok

00:20:883 (25) - ^ Not this one

00:44:441 (54) - ^ Not this one

00:56:220 (68) - ^ This one

01:00:637 (74) - ^ Not this one

01:19:778 (4) - ^ Not this one


00:36:527 (41) - add finisher No, the melody isn't strong

00:40:944 (48) - don, opposite from 00:37:999 (43,44,45) - Fixed

00:48:122 (59) - i think its better in spinner than slider But spinner is better imo, will get more further mods

00:53:091 (63) - change to kat? seems add some variation more interesting XD Ok

01:13:337 (91) - don,the sounds still lower until here All diffs did like this

01:24:932 (12) - change to kat? the picth of sounds seems high and i think its better No ;w;



Oni


00:04:686 - add note here for consistancy Yea

00:09:932 (58) - delete? i think isn't really fit when i compare with 3 1/2 note here 00:10:024 (59,60,61) - *as this part

i think the better one is using finish 00:10:024 (59,60,61,62,63,64) - but its up to you if you wanna use it or not XD But I hear sound, fit to me imo

00:19:963 (101) - change to kat,for consistancy with 00:20:331 (102) - yea

00:27:324 - Add note here *don't leave it empty XD Has sound here, fixed

00:31:558 (155,156,157) - change to dkd and make some variation from 00:30:821 (150,151,152) - seems better than monoton

pattern But it should be variety

00:48:122 (237) - why not using note than slider here? try this :D Changed by myself

00:57:509 - add note here Ok


Good Luck! :D
Thanks for your mod
Marm
hey m4m with david for Sisterz - Inverse World

ily diff
00:50:331 - add a note for the vocal here?
01:09:748 - a note here (to make a 5 note stream) works better with the vocals than the 5 note stream at 01:10:392 (401,402,403,404,405) since there's a longer voice note at the first one. you could delete 01:10:484 (402) or 01:10:668 (404) if you agree.

the rest looks good o/.

oni
01:07:999 (346) - this to kat since the vocal has a higher pitch (like 01:07:447 (342) and 01:07:631 (343) )

xfrac diff
00:09:656 (44,45,46) - this to ddk or kkk to give more emphasis on the following d d K pattern that's more intense.
01:20:239 - could add a don to cover the piano

good good.

blushing diff
00:30:453 - or 00:30:637 - add a note. starting notes on red lines with no set rhythm before can be too challenging for futsuu players.
00:33:030 - or 00:32:846 - note for the transition. this is the only part in this section that has a 3/2 gap between notes while all the others are 2/2. that's hard for rhythm and even more for newer players.
The kiai could use a lot of finishers in the parts with a higher intensity/heavier beat/stronger vocals. You should take advantage of that and make it more interesting. The way it is now there's only 1 :C.

kantan
00:03:214 (3) - offbeat on the redline is too hard for kantan since there's no rhythm set and it's pretty much a sole note. I think you should change this part if you're going for ranked.
00:30:085 (32) - same as above.
00:31:558 (34) - same, move 1/4 backwards just like 00:30:637 (33) .
00:32:294 (35) - note on the red line works better in the white ticks.
00:47:570 (56) - move note 1/2 backwards to keep the 4/1 gap between notes flow. this rhythm break is too complex for kantan.

that's it from me,
good luck on standard pp map :^)
Zetera
Yo, M4M. (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/668397)

Spreadwise, I feel like the Kantan of your mapset is not connected to the rest. There is a very significant difficulty spike from Kantan to Futsuu, it is much bigger than that between Futsuu and Muzukashii (that is in terms of patterning and in terms of SR). Therefore, I'll have some suggestions for you that buff the Kantan just a tad.

Why is the OD on Oni higher than on Inner? I don't think the Oni needs an OD as high as 6. 5 is just about enough, and you could even buff the OD of the Inner by .5.

[Kantan]

00:14:441 - and 00:14:809 - could use some ds.
00:20:883 - I'm really not a fan of those 1/1+1/2 gap patterns in a kantan, why not go with something simpler like placing the d at 00:21:067 - ? If you decide to change this pattern, change 00:35:607 - as well.
00:25:484 - you could add a k here and a d at 00:26:588 - to buff the diff a bit.
00:31:558 (36,37) - This is equally troubling. I get that you're following the vocals, but I feel like it would make more sense to follow the background instruments instead.
00:43:889 (53,54) - Change these to d k d if you want to be consistent in rhythm with 00:40:944 (48,49,50) - and 00:37:999 (43,44,45) - . the colours add a little bit of difficulty.
00:54:196 (5,6,7) - how about d d k d k instead? all of these are on 1/1 snapping. If you change this, make sure you also change 01:05:975 - to the same pattern.

All in all, if every point has been considered and added, you'll have an SR of 1.62. Also, the difficulty will be a bit harder in general, which links it a little more
to the rest of the set.

[Futsuu]

00:09:656 - this is optional, but you might want to delete that circle for a little bit of a break before the finisher section.
00:29:901 (72,1) - This one may be a little bit too difficult. Remember that this forces you to do a jackhammer on one of your kat keys, and that's not easy for a beginner. To make this more playable, just remove the note in front of the finisher.
00:30:821 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is intriguing, but sticking to the instruments in the background may be the safer option.
00:44:809 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - Overall a very dense section and the main reason why the Kantan didn't really link to the rest of the set. Do you think you could find a way to nerf this bit?
01:16:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest you try to avoid 1/3 in Futsuus. There's probably an easier way you can structure this part. (Please note that the Oni is using the same pattern)

[Muzukashii]

00:00:453 - This is a very sudden hard pattern. If you followed the drums instead of the melodical instrument in the background by placing 1/2 notes instead of 1/4 notes, you could fix this really easily. Just remove the middle don of the triplet.
00:53:828 - All other diffs stress this note as a k, and it makes sense because of the vocals. Is there a reason as to why you don't use k here? If it's the triplet before this note, why not change the colour of the triplet?

[Oni]

00:02:294 - This doesn't necessarily have to be a triplet, since there is nothing worth stressing with a triplet in the song. k d should do the job. If you insist on keeping the triplet, then at least change it to kkd to put a more playable and more suitable emphasis on the last note of the pattern.
00:23:643 - I can't see what this pattern is trying to follow. The lyrics? I think you're better off using something like this:
Please note that I removed some circles after the k triplet.
00:30:637 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154) -
The SV speedup at 00:50:883 - in the Inner Oni is much smoother than here, so I'd recommend you change the sv change per green line to x0.01 instead of x0.02.
00:53:183 - using d here is much smoother.

[Inner Oni]

Other than your usage of kdd, I can't really notice any grave mistakes. Good job!

Welp, there you go. Hope I could help you.
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Marm wrote:

hey m4m with david for Sisterz - Inverse World

ily diff
00:50:331 - add a note for the vocal here? Following background instrument
01:09:748 - a note here (to make a 5 note stream) works better with the vocals than the 5 note stream at 01:10:392 (401,402,403,404,405) since there's a longer voice note at the first one. you could delete 01:10:484 (402) or 01:10:668 (404) if you agree. Nah, it's fine

the rest looks good o/.

oni
01:07:999 (346) - this to kat since the vocal has a higher pitch (like 01:07:447 (342) and 01:07:631 (343) Fixed

xfrac diff
00:09:656 (44,45,46) - this to ddk or kkk to give more emphasis on the following d d K pattern that's more intense.
01:20:239 - could add a don to cover the piano

good good.

blushing diff
00:30:453 - or 00:30:637 - add a note. starting notes on red lines with no set rhythm before can be too challenging for futsuu players.
00:33:030 - or 00:32:846 - note for the transition. this is the only part in this section that has a 3/2 gap between notes while all the others are 2/2. that's hard for rhythm and even more for newer players.
The kiai could use a lot of finishers in the parts with a higher intensity/heavier beat/stronger vocals. You should take advantage of that and make it more interesting. The way it is now there's only 1 :C. All fixed

kantan
00:03:214 (3) - offbeat on the redline is too hard for kantan since there's no rhythm set and it's pretty much a sole note. I think you should change this part if you're going for ranked. Ok
00:30:085 (32) - same as above.
00:31:558 (34) - same, move 1/4 backwards just like 00:30:637 (33) .
00:32:294 (35) - note on the red line works better in the white ticks.All fixed
00:47:570 (56) - move note 1/2 backwards to keep the 4/1 gap between notes flow. this rhythm break is too complex for kantan. Looks fine,
no change

that's it from me,
good luck on standard pp map :^)
Thanks for modding
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Zetera wrote:

Yo, M4M. (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/668397)

Spreadwise, I feel like the Kantan of your mapset is not connected to the rest. There is a very significant difficulty spike from Kantan to Futsuu, it is much bigger than that between Futsuu and Muzukashii (that is in terms of patterning and in terms of SR). Therefore, I'll have some suggestions for you that buff the Kantan just a tad.

Why is the OD on Oni higher than on Inner? I don't think the Oni needs an OD as high as 6. 5 is just about enough, and you could even buff the OD of the Inner by .5. Ok

[Kantan]

00:14:441 - and 00:14:809 - could use some ds. Ok
00:20:883 - I'm really not a fan of those 1/1+1/2 gap patterns in a kantan, why not go with something simpler like placing the d at 00:21:067 - ? If you decide to change this pattern, change 00:35:607 - as well. Fixed as Marm's mod
00:25:484 - you could add a k here and a d at 00:26:588 - to buff the diff a bit. Yea
00:31:558 (36,37) - This is equally troubling. I get that you're following the vocals, but I feel like it would make more sense to follow the background instruments instead. Fixed by Marm either
00:43:889 (53,54) - Change these to d k d if you want to be consistent in rhythm with 00:40:944 (48,49,50) - and 00:37:999 (43,44,45) - . the colours add a little bit of difficulty. Ctrl + G instead
00:54:196 (5,6,7) - how about d d k d k instead? all of these are on 1/1 snapping. If you change this, make sure you also change 01:05:975 - to the same pattern. Changed by myself

All in all, if every point has been considered and added, you'll have an SR of 1.62. Also, the difficulty will be a bit harder in general, which links it a little more
to the rest of the set.

[Futsuu]

00:09:656 - this is optional, but you might want to delete that circle for a little bit of a break before the finisher section. Deleted
00:29:901 (72,1) - This one may be a little bit too difficult. Remember that this forces you to do a jackhammer on one of your kat keys, and that's not easy for a beginner. To make this more playable, just remove the note in front of the finisher. yea
00:30:821 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is intriguing, but sticking to the instruments in the background may be the safer option. ok
00:44:809 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - Overall a very dense section and the main reason why the Kantan didn't really link to the rest of the set. Do you think you could find a way to nerf this bit?
01:16:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest you try to avoid 1/3 in Futsuus. There's probably an easier way you can structure this part. (Please note that the Oni is using the same pattern) Yea

[Oni]

00:02:294 - This doesn't necessarily have to be a triplet, since there is nothing worth stressing with a triplet in the song. k d should do the job. If you insist on keeping the triplet, then at least change it to kkd to put a more playable and more suitable emphasis on the last note of the pattern. Deleted
00:23:643 - I can't see what this pattern is trying to follow. The lyrics? I think you're better off using something like this:
Changed by myself

Please note that I removed some circles after the k triplet.
00:30:637 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154) -
The SV speedup at 00:50:883 - in the Inner Oni is much smoother than here, so I'd recommend you change the sv change per green line to x0.01 instead of x0.02. Ok
00:53:183 - using d here is much smoother. Ok

[Inner Oni]

Other than your usage of kdd, I can't really notice any grave mistakes. Good job! Thanks

Welp, there you go. Hope I could help you.
Thanks for your mod, will mod your map asap
Faputa
Hi David XD
From my Queue,

[Kantan]
⏩00:37:263 (43,44,45,46) - k ddd? It sounds better.
⏩00:47:754 (59) - I think moving to 00:47:570 - is easier for players to pick up.
⏩00:56:036 - You can add one note here, since the other half part of the kiai has 1/1 triples, why not this half.

[Blushing's Futsuu]
⏩00:14:073 (36) - Change to k? The song isn’t that flat here.
⏩01:06:343 (46) - k? since it is la do re, 3 semitones - 2 semitones. Better to use a k than d here.
⏩01:08:920 (53,54,55,56,57) - k kd dk? It sounds better.
⏩01:12:231 (62,63,64) - Kinda flat here.

[xfrac's Muzukashii]
Hi xfrac :’)
⏩00:08:736 (39,40,41) - Try kdd? It sounds better. And keeping dd,kks’ which you use it very often in the diff.
⏩00:36:159 (154,155,156) - Seems not a good position to place triples here, reduce it to ½ maybe?

[Oni]
⏩00:06:527 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - This pattern is quite complex for a 3* oni, try dkdddkd, or something like 00:35:791 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - .
⏩00:19:226 (97,98,99,100) - Ctrl+g? I think it will sound better.
⏩00:42:416 (204,205) - change (205) to k. Same pitch.
⏩00:43:153 (206) - d, to feature the high pitch of (207)
⏩01:13:521 (375) - Cancel this, because the previous section with similar sound doesn’t have this filler.

[ily4’s Inner Oni]
⏩01:07:263 (381,382,383,384,385,386) - k dkddk instead? Having 01:07:263 (381) - k responses the vocal, and overall it sounds better I think.
Your maps are always the best :D


That’s all! Thanks for requesting
Good luck with the mapset :D
Aisha

Blackener wrote:

xfrac's Muzukashii
00:12:416 (59) - Add finisher, like other diffs
Hmmm not pretty sure, gotta change just to have consistency with other diffs ><
00:33:031 (141) - k? to emphasize vocal
It emphasizes 00:33:582 (143) - already good
00:35:607 (152) - k? I'm not sure
Ye, made 00:35:607 (151,152) - ctrl+g
00:47:938 (202) - d? I'm not sure either.
Seems nice
00:49:594 (1,2,3) - kkk? It's the same pitch like 00:49:963 (4)
Isn't the same, it makes a crescendo :p
00:51:619 (11,12) - Ctrl+G? high pitch is at 00:51:803 (12).
Done
00:58:429 (45) - k, the high pitch is here.
Done
00:58:429 (45) - Ctrl+G, ^
Double kat is enough
01:10:208 (102) - k, ^
Nah, 01:10:392 (103) - here is clearly the acute pitch :')
01:14:257 (121) - k, it's the clear voice.
Too relax pitch for a kat here
01:22:723 (155) - k? I'm not sure.
Already seems nice talking about pitch follow

Skylish wrote:

[Blushing Futsuu + xfrac's Muzukashii]

> They are the most problematic difficulties in terms of spread. The exagerated expression in Kiai, comparing between Futsuu and Muzukashii is too large. F-M-O spread is very poor. Both of you please compromise with each others' difficulties and make some amendments. Both difficulties are good separately, but the spread could be improved more.

> Futsuu is too easy, overall density could be increased. Muzukashii is too hard, vice versa, esp.ly those triplet usages.

OK resuming I'm gonna take an overall view (also considering mods here)

Marm wrote:

xfrac diff
00:09:656 (44,45,46) - this to ddk or kkk to give more emphasis on the following d d K pattern that's more intense.
I like current pattern and emphasizes already great :')
01:20:239 - could add a don to cover the piano
Yeah it seems a little empty, fixed~
good good.

Zetera wrote:

[Muzukashii]

00:00:453 - This is a very sudden hard pattern. If you followed the drums instead of the melodical instrument in the background by placing 1/2 notes instead of 1/4 notes, you could fix this really easily. Just remove the middle don of the triplet.
Yeah I fixed it above, agree with you :')
00:53:828 - All other diffs stress this note as a k, and it makes sense because of the vocals. Is there a reason as to why you don't use k here? If it's the triplet before this note, why not change the colour of the triplet?
Fixed, I did on 01:04:870 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - idk why I didn't do it before lol

jack1817 wrote:

[xfrac's Muzukashii]
Hi xfrac :’)
⏩00:08:736 (39,40,41) - Try kdd? It sounds better. And keeping dd,kks’ which you use it very often in the diff.
I fixed it by myself while checking previous mod :')
⏩00:36:159 (154,155,156) - Seems not a good position to place triples here, reduce it to ½ maybe?
I think it's great since it emphasizes there comes a next section :p
Thank you all so much for the mods! : D
iloveyou4ever

jack1817 wrote:

Hi David XD
From my Queue,

[ily4’s Inner Oni]
⏩01:07:263 (381,382,383,384,385,386) - k dkddk instead? Having 01:07:263 (381) - k responses the vocal, and overall it sounds better I think.
change to k kkddk(kkddk unchange),01:07:447 (382,383) - it'd better to put kk instead of dk here imo
Your maps are always the best :D Thanks!

That’s all! Thanks for requesting
Good luck with the mapset :D
Reply myself to reduce david's workload XD
@david please change 01:07:263 - to k thanks!
[R]
yo

[Muzukashii]
00:06:159 - change kat ? high pitch here, similiar with 00:03:214 -
00:06:711 - change don ? pitch diferent with 00:06:895 -
00:29:717 - d k ddd change k d k , the triplet feels sudden so maybe u can remove it
00:35:239 - imo triplet more reasonable in 00:34:870 -
00:46:650 - change don, to mirror the pattern before
00:47:938 - change don ?
01:02:386 (64,65) - delete, following vocal
01:20:239 - add note ? you fill the piano sound like 01:25:392 -

[Oni]
00:01:742 - delete? no reasonable sound here
00:19:226 - change kat
00:23:828 (113,114) - invert, to make consistent sound with 00:23:275 -
00:27:509 - change kat, to emphasize note forward
00:29:901 - or 00:30:085 - change kat, there has different pitch
00:56:680 - add note ?

[Inner Oni]
00:00:545 - you may add note here
00:30:269 - delete, trumpet sound stop here so u can give a break here, or move 00:30:453 -

thats all from me
good luck
Raytoly
yo ,M4M
Kantan
01:07:079 it's nice if add d in here
01:22:907 add k
Blushing's Futsuu
00:30:637 d k d k k d ?
00:40:944 d ddk is nice
xfrac's Muzukashii
00:02:846 k k d it's very nice
00:35:607 change to k and delete 00:35:791
Oni
00:58:797 kkd k
ily4's Inner Oni
fine for me
good luck :) :) :)
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

[R] wrote:

yo

[Oni]
00:01:742 - delete? no reasonable sound here It does, you may pay more attention to the background instrument
00:19:226 - change kat No change because the flow will be bad
00:23:828 (113,114) - invert, to make consistent sound with 00:23:275 - 00:24:012 Deleted
00:27:509 - change kat, to emphasize note forward Pitch doesn't fit
00:29:901 - or 00:30:085 - change kat, there has different pitch 00:30:085 changed :D
00:56:680 - add note ? No sound, no change

[Inner Oni]
00:00:545 - you may add note here I don't like triplets at beginning, and there is no sound either, no change, sorry
00:30:269 - delete, trumpet sound stop here so u can give a break here, or move 00:30:453 - Idk, I will keep it from now, waiting for further mod

thats all from me
good luck

Cocoaaa wrote:

yo ,M4M
Kantan
01:07:079 it's nice if add d in here Want to leave a 4/1 space, no change
01:22:907 add k same
Blushing's Futsuu
00:30:637 d k d k k d ? Remapped by myself :D
00:40:944 d ddk is nice k ddk
Oni
00:58:797 kkd k Pitch doesn't fit, no change
ily4's Inner Oni
fine for me
good luck :) :) :)

jack1817 wrote:

Hi David XD
From my Queue,

[Kantan]
⏩00:37:263 (43,44,45,46) - k ddd? It sounds better. The original pattern is better :D
⏩00:47:754 (59) - I think moving to 00:47:570 - is easier for players to pick up. Yup, fixed
⏩00:56:036 - You can add one note here, since the other half part of the kiai has 1/1 triples, why not this half. Ok

[Blushing's Futsuu]
⏩00:14:073 (36) - Change to k? The song isn’t that flat here. But it will break the flow xD
⏩01:06:343 (46) - k? since it is la do re, 3 semitones - 2 semitones. Better to use a k than d here. Make sense, fixed
⏩01:08:920 (53,54,55,56,57) - k kd dk? It sounds better. 01:09:472 As the pitch is rising up, 01:10:208 pitch is setting down
⏩01:12:231 (62,63,64) - Kinda flat here. I don't understand this :o

[Oni]
⏩00:06:527 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - This pattern is quite complex for a 3* oni, try dkdddkd, or something like 00:35:791 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - . Remapped by mself :D
⏩00:19:226 (97,98,99,100) - Ctrl+g? I think it will sound better. Yea, fixed
⏩00:42:416 (204,205) - change (205) to k. Same pitch. But it's k already xD
⏩00:43:153 (206) - d, to feature the high pitch of (207) Flow will break, no change
⏩01:13:521 (375) - Cancel this, because the previous section with similar sound doesn’t have this filler. Fixed

That’s all! Thanks for requesting
Good luck with the mapset :D Thank you
Thank you for modding
Topic Starter
davidminh0111
Since Blushing doesn't care about his GD anymore, his Futsuu is deleted, replaced by my Futsuu
Poii

davidminh0111 wrote:

Since Blushing doesn't care about his GD anymore, his Futsuu is deleted, replaced by my Futsuu
RIP blushing
Removed from tag :(
Tyistiana
RIP blushing ;;w;;

From my queue,
Sorry for a big late, I've to handle with my final examination and the class representative work which it's force me to can't modding any map.

[ Overall]
OD spread looks weird for me, or maybe not?
  1. Formal OD spread
    Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii / Oni / Inner Oni = 3 / 5 / 4 / 5 / 5
We'll notice that Muzukashii difficulty have a lower OD than Futsuu. Which the difference of the note amount between these is difficulties is kinda big.
  1. Suggestion OD spread
    Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii / Oni / Inner Oni = 3 / 4 / 5 / 5 / 6
[ Kantan]
00:47:570 moves to 00:47:386 - For the consistency of 00:44:441 (55) - 00:45:177 (56) - 00:45:913 (57) - 00:46:650 (58)
01:01:558 moves to 01:01:374 - A dominate sound stands here. Both of vocal and pitch :3
01:14:809 - In Futsuu , you've use this point as a spinner before , so this one maybe should too. Or manage on Futsuu instead.

[ Futsuu]
00:29:901 - Don't sure that much that should we add note here or not? Seems too blank here.
01:13:153 - How about we add a note here , consider by the vocal.

[ xfrac's Muzukashii]
00:35:423 (144,145) - Ctrl+G , considered by the vocal.
00:37:263 (152,153) - Ctrl+G , considered by the piano pitch. Since 00:37:631 (153) piano pitch is similar to 00:36:895 (151) pitch

[ Oni]
00:47:478 moves to 00:47:662 - Only my opinion here.
00:48:122 - If consider this point by vocal , should be k

[ ily4's Inner Oni]
00:42:048 - A little piano pitch stands here , add a note here would make this point become not too blank! :3
00:46:834 - Delete , for the consistency of 00:45:361 - 00:46:097
01:16:189 / 01:16:282 - Delete , a pitch silence here

Great map!
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Tyistiana wrote:

RIP blushing ;;w;;

From my queue,
Sorry for a big late, I've to handle with my final examination and the class representative work which it's force me to can't modding any map.

[ Overall]
OD spread looks weird for me, or maybe not?
  1. Formal OD spread
    Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii / Oni / Inner Oni = 3 / 5 / 4 / 5 / 5
We'll notice that Muzukashii difficulty have a lower OD than Futsuu. Which the difference of the note amount between these is difficulties is kinda big.
  1. Suggestion OD spread
    Kantan / Futsuu / Muzukashii / Oni / Inner Oni = 3 / 4 / 5 / 5 / 6
[ Kantan]
00:47:570 moves to 00:47:386 - For the consistency of 00:44:441 (55) - 00:45:177 (56) - 00:45:913 (57) - 00:46:650 (58) No, it won't follow the vocal
01:01:558 moves to 01:01:374 - A dominate sound stands here. Both of vocal and pitch :3 Nice, fixed
01:14:809 - In Futsuu , you've use this point as a spinner before , so this one maybe should too. Or manage on Futsuu instead. Removed that spinner in Futsuu

[ Futsuu]
00:29:901 - Don't sure that much that should we add note here or not? Seems too blank here. I think the current arrangement is better because if we put the note in front of the Big note, it will be too complex for Futsuu Players
01:13:153 - How about we add a note here , consider by the vocal. 01:11:864 Note identical

[ Oni]
00:47:478 moves to 00:47:662 - Only my opinion here. My opinion is better xD
00:48:122 - If consider this point by vocal , should be k Fixed

[ ily4's Inner Oni]
00:42:048 - A little piano pitch stands here , add a note here would make this point become not too blank! :3 OK!! xD
00:46:834 - Delete , for the consistency of 00:45:361 - 00:46:097 I think this opinion is good but lets wait for further mod
01:16:189 / 01:16:282 - Delete , a pitch silence here Deleted both

Great map!
Good luck! :)
Thank you for modding
vrnl
q

general:
i think a spinner at the end of each dif would be good. the song carries out until the time is over (ily4's has this already)

muzu:

00:35:791 (146) - k for snare
00:38:551 (157) - d, lower vocal
00:44:441 - ^

oni:

00:04:686 (25) - move this over to the right 1/2, and change to d, it feels awkward where it is now
00:33:950 (166) - d
00:36:251 (177) - delete, little overmap
00:58:797 (295,296,297) - kkd ?

also this whole end kiai seems kind of random to me. not a clear structure, but im not sure how to fix

inner oni is good, no change. very nice map

hope this helps
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Astolfo wrote:

q

general:
i think a spinner at the end of each dif would be good. the song carries out until the time is over (ily4's has this already) But I like to end with a note, no change

oni:

00:04:686 (25) - move this over to the right 1/2, and change to d, it feels awkward where it is now There's a vocal background instrument,
no change

00:33:950 (166) - d But it will break the flow
00:36:251 (177) - delete, little overmap Not really
00:58:797 (295,296,297) - kkd ? Pitch doesn't fix, no change

also this whole end kiai seems kind of random to me. not a clear structure, but im not sure how to fix Remapped some part :D

inner oni is good, no change. very nice map

hope this helps
Thank you for modding
ASPIRIN

hello there


ily4's Inner Oni

Mapping



00:47:662 (254) - Remove this note

00:52:079 (281) - I think will be better if you will replace note from here to 00:52:263

01:12:048 - lost sound
Oni

Mapping


00:30:085 (144) - remove this note or add finisher at 00:30:269

00:30:821 (146,147,148) - Change to kdd
00:31:558 (151,152,153) - Change to dkk

00:47:386 (228) - Change to d

01:20:055 (404) - Remove note here and add note 01:20:423 here

01:21:711 (415) - Change to d
xfrac's Muzukashii

Mapping


00:02:662 - i think this is important sound
00:04:318 - ^ (in this pattern i think)

00:04:870 (18) - move it at 00:05:055

00:46:374 - add k here

00:52:079 (13) - move from here to 00:51:711

01:02:386 (60) - move from here to 01:02:202
Cool map! Good luck in ranking!
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

ASPIRIN wrote:

hello there


ily4's Inner Oni

Mapping



00:47:662 (254) - Remove this note Ok, fixed because for variety and note identification

00:52:079 (281) - I think will be better if you will replace note from here to 00:52:263 00:52:355 Has a strong percussion, no change since if I move this note to the place you tell me, it would be weird

01:12:048 - lost sound Music end in 01:11:864

Oni

Mapping


00:30:085 (144) - remove this note or add finisher at 00:30:269 But the percussion end here and it has strong meoldy

00:30:821 (146,147,148) - Change to kdd
00:31:558 (151,152,153) - Change to dkk Both of this for music identification. The vocal is the same and I think i will keep it

00:47:386 (228) - Change to d 00:47:018 variety

01:20:055 (404) - Remove note here and add note 01:20:423 here Fixed

01:21:711 (415) - Change to d 01:21:803 to k and changed to d

Cool map! Good luck in ranking!
Thank you for modding
Aisha

[R] wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:06:159 - change kat ? high pitch here, similiar with 00:03:214 -
Current one is good, making the same as 00:06:711 (28,29) - doesn't look nice
00:06:711 - change don ? pitch diferent with 00:06:895 -
Yeah but is not that different so it emphasizes 00:07:079 (30) - better
00:29:717 - d k ddd change k d k , the triplet feels sudden so maybe u can remove it
D: there's not any triple
00:35:239 - imo triplet more reasonable in 00:34:870 -
Same ^
00:46:650 - change don, to mirror the pattern before
I pref changing 00:46:466 (186) - instead
00:47:938 - change don ?
Already don D:
01:02:386 (64,65) - delete, following vocal
It already follows vocal nice
01:20:239 - add note ? you fill the piano sound like 01:25:392 -
Added before
I'm pretty sure you have modded other version D: but thank you anyways:3

Cocoaaa wrote:

xfrac's Muzukashii
00:02:846 k k d it's very nice
Done
00:35:607 change to k and delete 00:35:791
It's already k and deleting that will make it feel so empty

Tyistiana wrote:

[ xfrac's Muzukashii]
00:35:423 (144,145) - Ctrl+G , considered by the vocal.
Pref this, done
00:37:263 (152,153) - Ctrl+G , considered by the piano pitch. Since 00:37:631 (153) piano pitch is similar to 00:36:895 (151) pitch
Done

Astolfo wrote:

q

muzu:

00:35:791 (146) - k for snare
Seems too louder imo D:
00:38:551 (157) - d, lower vocal
Done
00:44:441 - ^
It fills better according to high pitch on 00:44:441 (177) -

ASPIRIN wrote:

xfrac's Muzukashii

Mapping


00:02:662 - i think this is important sound
I'm following piano here so isn't neccesary imo
00:04:318 - ^ (in this pattern i think)
A break for the beginning seems good :p
00:04:870 (18) - move it at 00:05:055
Done
00:46:374 - add k here
Don't like triplets for that section
00:52:079 (13) - move from here to 00:51:711
01:02:386 (60) - move from here to 01:02:202
I'm using these triplets to emphasize next vocal single note usage, also for section changes :p
Thank you all for the mod!

muzu
http://puu.sh/xJtYn/f3382ebca6.osu
Topic Starter
davidminh0111
Updated
Ringer
hi, NM as requested

Kantan


00:02:662 - Don ? the other don after feels weird
00:03:398 (3) - move it to 00:03:398 - ? sounds less weird even if it's red tick so may be confusing for beginners
00:42:416 (52) - kat sounds better for me because the voice sounds more like 00:43:889 (54) -

Futsuu


00:14:809 (38) - change to kat and change 00:15:177 (40) - to don ? it sounds better to emphasize the voice imo
From 00:30:637 to 00:36:527 - Wouldn't it be better to map some of the white ticks ? sounds empty at moment even for a Futsuu, if we compare with the rest of the song
00:45:729 - don to be coherent with before ?
00:46:466 - Same
00:54:564 - Don because it sounds empty ? (sounds empty if you compare to the rest of the rythm)

xfrac's Muzukashii


00:01:005 (4,5) - don don kat instead of that pattern ? :c
00:04:686 (17) - this note disturbs me, it goes on no sound at all ?
00:11:864 (51) - k instead of K ? the finish is too much imo
00:24:380 (99) - D instead of d to fit with before ?
00:35:975 - A note here would be better nah ?
00:45:177 (180,184,187,4) - Finish ? it sounds better for me, I have a little doubt about 4 tho
01:20:515 (141,144,147) - Finish ?

Oni


00:04:502 (24) - K instead of k because you can and it emphasize the map better imo ?
00:24:748 (116) - ^ ?
00:45:453 (216,217) - swap these two ?
00:47:110 (227,228) - swap these two ?


ily4's Inner Oni


00:42:416 (225) - K ? For the beginning of new lyrics
00:56:864 - d ? it sounds better to emphasize the lyrics
01:03:030 (352,372) - big don for the same goal ? but it sounds weird so not sure about it

no more to say, clean map; gl for ranking :p
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

Ringer wrote:

hi, NM as requested

Kantan


00:02:662 - Don ? the other don after feels weird Added
00:03:398 (3) - move it to 00:03:398 - ? sounds less weird even if it's red tick so may be confusing for beginners Fixed but you need to get the right timing xD!
00:42:416 (52) - kat sounds better for me because the voice sounds more like 00:43:889 (54) - Fixed

Futsuu


00:14:809 (38) - change to kat and change 00:15:177 (40) - to don ? it sounds better to emphasize the voice imo I'm following background instrument
From 00:30:637 to 00:36:527 - Wouldn't it be better to map some of the white ticks ? sounds empty at moment even for a Futsuu, if we compare with the rest of the song I will consider it
00:45:729 - don to be coherent with before ? Didn't think is a good idea, while testplay, better
00:46:466 - Same ^
00:54:564 - Don because it sounds empty ? (sounds empty if you compare to the rest of the rythm) Securing a break

Oni


00:04:502 (24) - K instead of k because you can and it emphasize the map better imo ?Ok
00:24:748 (116) - ^ ? Not really a stron vocal
00:45:453 (216,217) - swap these two ? 00:45:453 for variation
00:47:110 (227,228) - swap these two ? ^ vice versa


ily4's Inner Oni


00:42:416 (225) - K ? For the beginning of new lyrics k only
00:56:864 - d ? it sounds better to emphasize the lyrics Not really. The triplet isn't fit here
01:03:030 (352,372) - big don for the same goal ? but it sounds weird so not sure about it No. Because vocal isn't strong enough

no more to say, clean map; gl for ranking :p
Thank you for modding
rew0825
Hello from my modding queue!

General
  1. Please check Aimod of xfrac's Muzukashii and fix them.

ily4's Inner Oni
  1. 00:01:005 (5) - Change to k? I think a sound on this is similar like 00:01:097 (6) -
  2. 00:42:048 (224,225) - Ctrl+g? The sound on (224) is louder (225)
  3. 01:01:374 (340) - Add finish? The sound I think it's loud.
  4. 01:17:754 (442) - Remove finish? The sound is lower than the notes at before.
  5. 01:21:251 (464) - Add finish? For the pattern?

Oni
  1. 00:02:294 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I suggest to change to this? It's follow the melody better i think.
  2. 00:06:527 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - I suggest to change this to ddkdkdk. Look it follow the sound better?
  3. 00:21:251 (103) - Change to k? 00:20:331 (100,101,102,103,104) - will opposite with 00:21:803 (105,106,107,108,109) -
  4. 00:25:760 (122) - Remove this note? I unheard a melody on this.
  5. 00:35:791 (172,173,174) - How about change to kkd? I think it follow a melody better.
  6. 01:01:374 (309) - Add finish? The sound look too loud.

xfrac's Muzukashii
  1. 00:04:318 - I think you can add note here.
  2. 00:11:496 (49) - Change to d? I think it shouldn't different 00:10:760 (46,47,48) - part.
  3. 00:32:294 (132,133,134) - Change to d k d? For opposite with 00:31:558 (129,130,131) -.
  4. 00:33:031 (135,136,137,138) - Change to k d k d? For opposite with 00:30:637 (125,126,127,128) -.
  5. 00:52:355 (15,23) - Add a finish? For consistency with Oni and Inner oni.
  6. 01:17:754 (128) - Remove finish? I think the sound is not loud.

That is all from me. Hope it can help you. Good luck :)
Topic Starter
davidminh0111

rew0825 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue!

General
  1. Please check Aimod of xfrac's Muzukashii and fix them. Unicode problem. Will fix by xfrac

ily4's Inner Oni
  1. 00:01:005 (5) - Change to k? I think a sound on this is similar like 00:01:097 (6) - Maybe you should use 50% playback rate to listen more carefully
  2. 00:42:048 (224,225) - Ctrl+g? The sound on (224) is louder (225) 00:42:785 Changed to k
  3. 01:01:374 (340) - Add finish? The sound I think it's loud. Added for all other diff
  4. 01:17:754 (442) - Remove finish? The sound is lower than the notes at before. Ok
  5. 01:21:251 (464) - Add finish? For the pattern? Not really strong enough

Oni
  1. 00:02:294 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I suggest to change to this? It's follow the melody better i think. Good point, fixed
  2. 00:06:527 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - I suggest to change this to ddkdkdk. Look it follow the sound better? I think the current pattern is better
  3. 00:21:251 (103) - Change to k? 00:20:331 (100,101,102,103,104) - will opposite with 00:21:803 (105,106,107,108,109) - Fixed
  4. 00:25:760 (122) - Remove this note? I unheard a melody on this. 00:25:668 added a note
  5. 00:35:791 (172,173,174) - How about change to kkd? I think it follow a melody better. Ok
  6. 01:01:374 (309) - Add finish? The sound look too loud Same as Inner Oni.

That is all from me. Hope it can help you. Good luck :)
Thank you for modding
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