CS7 is fucking mental, but I guess if this is your style then I can't complain, it makes it unique, I like it
AR9 is a little harsh though, be lenient and make it ar9.3
00:04:399 (3,4) - kinda ugly overlap
00:07:880 (5) - blanket head with 4
00:18:487 (6) - out of play area?
00:13:681 (6,7,8) - reduce sv a little?
00:24:620 (3,4) - ^
00:26:940 (7,8,1,2,1,2) - make this neat
00:27:272 (1,1) - dunno if NC's are necessary
00:29:095 (7) - could pull the red anchor down a bit to make the shape more noticeable?
00:31:747 (3) - isn't quite overlapped properly with 00:31:747 (3)
00:37:051 (6) - change sv, not sure if it will work better slow or faster but I think it needs changing
00:44:178 (3) - stack properly
00:46:996 (3) - could overlap tail with one of the notes in the stream
00:48:487 (3,4) - not a fan of stack here
00:50:808 (1,1,1) - could remove nc?
00:51:802 (1,3,5) - i think making these symmetrical would look nicer
00:54:454 (2,4,6) - these look too janky, neaten them up a bit
00:56:775 (3,4) - move closer to the center so equal gap between all four slider tails
00:57:106 (1,5) - same as before, maybe symmetrical
01:02:907 (3) - ctrl+g ?
01:05:725 (1,2,3,4) - that's a bit op, reduce spacing a tad
01:43:847 (5,6,7,8,9) - curve this down a bit
https://i.gyazo.com/aa54fec9a63ac2cf255 ... 3894bd.png and make the first 6 a perfect circle
01:54:786 (5,6) - this is awk to aim compared to the previous jumps, keep consistent angles
01:57:769 (4,5,6,7) - could space it so it perfectly covers the slider and stack 7 on the tail properly
02:21:305 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - space this out a little more, it's doesn't encapsulate the intensity enough imo
02:26:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - eh not a fan of this
03:01:664 (9,1) - too intense of a jump i think
03:14:344 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - same as before, space these out a bit
03:22:631 (5,1) - nah. flow is non existent looks really awkward, change this up pls
03:50:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - neaten this up, maybe an S shape
03:55:614 (1) - stack on 3
04:01:416 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - reduce spacing a little
04:12:686 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - same again
04:17:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - YES LIKE THIS, do this for the other 3 times i mentioned
04:21:968 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16)
04:27:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make that curve a bit more gently, angle too sharp
04:28:515 (8,1,2,3,4,1) - make it a perfect circle
04:38:543 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not a huge fan of this stream, looks really hard to hit, I'll have to see though, and NC on first note (6)
04:42:852 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - perfect circle
04:43:764 (16,1,2,3,4) - angle looks a bit too sharp
04:53:626 (2) - overlap tail properly
04:54:703 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - perfect circle
05:00:753 (1) - remove nc
05:07:714 (1,2,3,4) - move this a tad closer to 05:08:045 (1) - looks a bit awk to aim
05:09:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - more circular
05:10:034 (5,6,7,8,1) - do this but with maybe 6 or 7 notes, the loop is a bit too small
05:11:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i reckon something like this works a bit better
https://i.gyazo.com/253a2dc1207d27fc5a3 ... 48dabd.png (just make sure the circle part is perfect)
I gotta say this is a damn fantastic map, can't wait to play it, really hope you go far with it, looks brilliant. Imma drop you a fav and a few stars too