Sry I found I just overvaluate my english level too much ;w;. The lyrics is written in a chinese ancient poem form. Too hard for me.
But I could still give you the general idea of it: It's a story about a woman,born with beautiful appearance, but unfortunately married with a ugly and lowly man. She is having a period on haggling over her fate agonisingly.Finally decide to be errant and enjoy the happiness of sexual life. Most of the lyrics are describing how beautiful she is,her state of mind and misfortune.(Especially the word describe her appearance, too hard to translate. Like "trollflower" means "beautiful and small feet"in chinese.Even some of the chinese don't know what the lyrics refer to.;w;)
About the timing point:z1's version is check by 3 bns so no big problem here. I know Lequack and ur meaning. But the bpm actually changes in the chinese string instrument part in the intro and some another portion. Speaking of the voice, the singer is not a machine, so she would make mistake and doesn't snap her voice on beat as synth did, that's not big deal. About the third problem, I think I do made some mistake, really small mistake about 1to5ms I guess? Add some new red timing point here.
https://puu.sh/uWzAM/5e2b9823f6.osu
Btw delete "Crystal" in the tags. That's the gder in 09kami's mapset(crystal doesn't finish yet so you can't see his diff now).
One more suggestion about the ur mapping job: It give good feedback to me . But some of the pattern are just a little messy and the structure and flow aren't good enough.(For example 03:26:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - too many overlap job here. And here02:07:193 (2,3) - you don't need 1/4 slider here. That just emphasize the music wrongly) Try to learn more about mapping. Some of your idea is great(some sv variation). Fight!^-^
But I could still give you the general idea of it: It's a story about a woman,born with beautiful appearance, but unfortunately married with a ugly and lowly man. She is having a period on haggling over her fate agonisingly.Finally decide to be errant and enjoy the happiness of sexual life. Most of the lyrics are describing how beautiful she is,her state of mind and misfortune.(Especially the word describe her appearance, too hard to translate. Like "trollflower" means "beautiful and small feet"in chinese.Even some of the chinese don't know what the lyrics refer to.;w;)
About the timing point:z1's version is check by 3 bns so no big problem here. I know Lequack and ur meaning. But the bpm actually changes in the chinese string instrument part in the intro and some another portion. Speaking of the voice, the singer is not a machine, so she would make mistake and doesn't snap her voice on beat as synth did, that's not big deal. About the third problem, I think I do made some mistake, really small mistake about 1to5ms I guess? Add some new red timing point here.
https://puu.sh/uWzAM/5e2b9823f6.osu
Btw delete "Crystal" in the tags. That's the gder in 09kami's mapset(crystal doesn't finish yet so you can't see his diff now).
One more suggestion about the ur mapping job: It give good feedback to me . But some of the pattern are just a little messy and the structure and flow aren't good enough.(For example 03:26:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - too many overlap job here. And here02:07:193 (2,3) - you don't need 1/4 slider here. That just emphasize the music wrongly) Try to learn more about mapping. Some of your idea is great(some sv variation). Fight!^-^