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Yui Horie - PRESENTER [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
crim

[R] wrote:

yo

[General]
place Finisher at first note

[Oni]
00:01:014 - delete
- no change
00:01:610 - change kat
- no change
00:06:180 (24,25) - change kat to give a variety

00:07:968 - change don

00:26:147 - delete and place 00:26:246 - finisher instead

00:31:710 (4,5) - delete, part still calm imo
- well... i prefer this rhythm
00:33:796 (15,16,17) - change k k d
- i hear this melody ddk
00:31:014 (1,1,2,3) - delete ?
- no change
00:53:663 - or 00:53:862 - change kat to unify part with 00:53:266 -
- changed 00:53:862 -

maybe just that from me
good luck
thank you for modding !
toara_fict
NM

All diff

00:59:623 (1) - add Finish

Good Luck
Topic Starter
crim

toara_fict wrote:

NM

All diff

00:59:623 (1) - add Finish かえましたW

Good Luck
kiai timeのところ少しいじりました
thanks for modding ^-^
yuzu__rinrin

toara_fict wrote:

NM

All diff

00:59:623 (1) - add Finish 

Good Luck
@Pnkmjp 変えておいて
kouzuki_karen
,
Diva Days


[General]

The preview time line didn't snap on white line

[yzrin's Futsuu]

00:23:862 (22) - move to 00:24:061 as u did it at 00:41:147 (21)
at kiai time - better follow vocal, u just made only some notes follow vocal. cuz the most of Futsuu notes followed background sounds.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

Start - If Followed background sound, u missed some notes like u did it at 00:03:200


00:05:186 - better change to k ddd, This well follow vocal and what u want to follow.
00:08:564 - forgot d here

00:10:153 (1) - since it's Muzukashii, should change to notes.
: There's one idea to me if u can't add note here.

D___d D____D___d D and at end make it ddd

00:53:862 - better follow vocal, change it to kkk
01:26:643 (56) - move to 01:26:445 and change to k
yuzu__rinrin

Diva Days wrote:



[General]

The preview time line didn't snap on white line

[yzrin's Futsuu]

00:23:862 (22) - move to 00:24:061 as u did it at 00:41:147 (21)
no, 00:41:147 - The sound is clear.
but, 00:23:862 - I would like to take this as a drum.


at kiai time - better follow vocal, u just made only some notes follow vocal. cuz the most of Futsuu notes followed background sounds.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

Start - If Followed background sound, u missed some notes like u did it at 00:03:200

I think that it is better to keep density even if not so clear.

00:05:186 - better change to k ddd, This well follow vocal and what u want to follow.
vocal kkd is better
00:08:564 - forgot d here
lol

00:10:153 (1) - since it's Muzukashii, should change to notes.
: There's one idea to me if u can't add note here.

D___d D____D___d D and at end make it ddd
I think that it is good with spinner.

00:53:862 - better follow vocal, change it to kkk
change dkk
01:26:643 (56) - move to 01:26:445 and change to k
As the pattern collapses, ease of hitting is impaired.
thank you for modding.
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58602
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:PRESENTER (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:PRESENTER (TV Size)
Artist:Yui Horie
ArtistUnicode:堀江由衣
Creator:Pnkmjp
Version:yzrin's Muzukashii
Source:DOG DAYS
Tags:elements garden nakamura kanata ending yuzu__rinrin
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Topic Starter
crim
update
frukoyurdakul
Hello from my modding queue.

Note: The preview point of the map is not snapped.

I need to say something now, I can't mod kantan pretty well compared to higher diffs, so if you want you can skip all of the suggestions about it.

Kantan
01:06:776 (43) - How about moving this note to 1/4 back?

01:08:365 (45) - ^

01:21:080 (62) - I think you can move this note to 01:20:882 - here.

Futsu is pretty good.

yzrin's Muzukashii
00:22:868 - How about adding two dons here in 1/4? It will support the drum sound.

00:56:743 - Maybe you can add a don here.

00:57:438 (102,103,104) - I've tried reversing the colors here and it sounded good.

01:28:531 - Adding dk in 1/4 here will fit to the outro of the song imo. It also support vocals.

Oni
I think you can use Od=6 or 5.5 here to make a difference between muzu and oni diffs.

00:01:412 (4,5) - Ctrl + g? The second sound is higher than the first one.

00:02:802 (9) - How about moving this one to 00:02:703 - here? The keyboard sound is here.

00:03:200 (11,12) - Instead of making these with finishers, I think you can use small kats to support the vocal since there is no crash cymbal sounds.

00:05:087 (18) - Not sure about this one, but i tried a kat here and it sounded good for me. It is for variety.

00:09:160 (40) - You can move this one to 00:09:061 - here to match the keyboard sound.

00:09:756 - Maybe add a d here, since there is a slight keyboard sound also. But in this way, it looks good too.

00:22:868 - How about adding two d notes in 1/4 starting from here to make a ddd triplet? With this way the drums are filled in the diff properly.

00:43:332 (6,7,8,9) - I'll suggest a whole different thing for these notes. Now, how about changing 00:43:332 (6,7) - these notes to kat, 00:43:729 (8) - removing this finisher and adding finisher to 00:44:127 (9) - this? I think it will emphasize the keyboards and drums together with this way.

00:45:120 (13) - Adding a finisher will sound good. It also emphasizes the high pitch keyboards here.

00:50:683 (37) - Filling a finisher to support the crash cymbal will be a good idea.

00:52:272 (44) - Changing this one to DON will also support the crash cymbal here. I said don for variety, if it's not good enough you can keep it as a kat.

00:53:266 (48) - I recommend a finisher here too.

01:04:193 (24) - This vocal sound is the lowest compared to 01:02:802 (19,20,21,22,23) - these notes so i recommend you to change it to a don.

01:08:166 (48) - The vocal is low compared to 01:08:266 (49) - this note. There is also a slight kick sound to put the note as a don.

01:09:756 (57) - Kat maybe? The vocal is pretty high.

01:17:405 (93) - A kat will sound good there.
Topic Starter
crim

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello from my modding queue.

Note: The preview point of the map is not snapped.

I need to say something now, I can't mod kantan pretty well compared to higher diffs, so if you want you can skip all of the suggestions about it.

Kantan
01:06:776 (43) - How about moving this note to 1/4 back?

01:08:365 (45) - ^

01:21:080 (62) - I think you can move this note to 01:20:882 - here.
- no change

Oni
I think you can use Od=6 or 5.5 here to make a difference between muzu and oni diffs.
- umm... keep...

00:01:412 (4,5) - Ctrl + g? The second sound is higher than the first one.

00:02:802 (9) - How about moving this one to 00:02:703 - here? The keyboard sound is here.

00:03:200 (11,12) - Instead of making these with finishers, I think you can use small kats to support the vocal since there is no crash cymbal sounds.

00:05:087 (18) - Not sure about this one, but i tried a kat here and it sounded good for me. It is for variety.
- no change

00:09:160 (40) - You can move this one to 00:09:061 - here to match the keyboard sound.

00:09:756 - Maybe add a d here, since there is a slight keyboard sound also. But in this way, it looks good too.

00:22:868 - How about adding two d notes in 1/4 starting from here to make a ddd triplet? With this way the drums are filled in the diff properly.

00:43:332 (6,7,8,9) - I'll suggest a whole different thing for these notes. Now, how about changing 00:43:332 (6,7) - these notes to kat, 00:43:729 (8) - removing this finisher and adding finisher to 00:44:127 (9) - this? I think it will emphasize the keyboards and drums together with this way.

00:45:120 (13) - Adding a finisher will sound good. It also emphasizes the high pitch keyboards here.
- no change

00:50:683 (37) - Filling a finisher to support the crash cymbal will be a good idea.

00:52:272 (44) - Changing this one to DON will also support the crash cymbal here. I said don for variety, if it's not good enough you can keep it as a kat.
- keep

00:53:266 (48) - I recommend a finisher here too.

01:04:193 (24) - This vocal sound is the lowest compared to 01:02:802 (19,20,21,22,23) - these notes so i recommend you to change it to a don.

01:08:166 (48) - The vocal is low compared to 01:08:266 (49) - this note. There is also a slight kick sound to put the note as a don.

01:09:756 (57) - Kat maybe? The vocal is pretty high.
- no change

01:17:405 (93) - A kat will sound good there.
- no change
thank you for modding :)
yuzu__rinrin

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Futsu is pretty good. thanks ><

[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:22:868 - How about adding two dons here in 1/4? It will support the drum sound.
No change.
I think it's a good idea. But I'd like to get an easy-to-understand melody.


00:56:743 - Maybe you can add a don here.
ok,changed

00:57:438 (102,103,104) - I've tried reversing the colors here and it sounded good.
nice idia.

01:28:531 - Adding dk in 1/4 here will fit to the outro of the song imo. It also support vocals.
keep...
At muzu I feel a little discomfort.
I will change it when another modder points out.
thank you for modding~
@Pnkmjp sorry late. 許せ
Otakumojp
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Topic Starter
crim
update
Shadowa Pinkman
from my queue o/

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:23:465 (35,36) - CTRL+G,because first sound is low,second is high,also that would be fit.
  2. 00:26:246 (46,47,48,49,50) - Add finisher,sounds are too strong imo
  3. 00:45:120 (52) - That sound is strong,too.Why didn't you add finisher :/
  4. 01:09:557 (38) - Move to 01:09:458 - for better vocal emphasis
  5. 01:25:451 (52) - There is no drum sound.
  6. 01:27:835 (60) - Same above
[Oni]
  1. 00:03:200 (11,12,13,14) - Strong drum sounds.So add finisher pls
  2. 00:31:412 (1) - There is no any vocal,piano or drum sound.
  3. 00:40:551 (48,51,54) - That's just suggestion..Drum sounds are too strong,try it with finisher.
  4. 01:03:200 - Add a note here if you wanna emphasize vocal here,that would be better.
  5. 01:03:796 - ^
  6. 01:23:465 (126) - ddkdkkkkk pattern isn't good.Use more common pattern,like ddkdkkkkd
  7. 01:24:061 (128,129,130,131) - These notes for vocal emphasis is unnecessary for here.
I guess that's it,Good Luck :)
yuzu__rinrin

zigizigiefe wrote:

from my queue o/

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:23:465 (35,36) - CTRL+G,because first sound is low,second is high,also that would be fit.
    ok
  2. 00:26:246 (46,47,48,49,50) - Add finisher,sounds are too strong imo
    m,ok
  3. 00:45:120 (52) - That sound is strong,too.Why didn't you add finisher :/
    wwwww ok
  4. 01:09:557 (38) - Move to 01:09:458 - for better vocal emphasis
    ok
  5. 01:25:451 (52) - There is no drum sound.
    deleted
  6. 01:27:835 (60) - Same above
    Move to 01: 27: 736 - in order to pick up vocal
I guess that's it,Good Luck :)
thank you for modding~

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toara_fict
No kds.

[ General]
  1. Romanised Artist : Yui Horie -> Horie Yui

  2. 全難易度 01:32:405 - spinのおわりここじゃない?
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[ Kantan]
  1. 00:57:835 (31,32) - finishで色そろえていいと思う

    それだけ
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[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:10:153 (1) - spinの終わり違和感

    それだけ
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:696 (17) - change d ( kkddkでいいかなって )

  2. 00:45:120 (52) - finishにするかkにするかしたいかな 個人的にはkかなって感じ

  3. 00:55:253 (93,94,95) - swap ( kkdでいいかな 後ろの音的に )


    Nice diff.
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[ Oni]
  1. 00:22:074 (23,24,25) - change dkd or kkd is better.

  2. 00:25:849 (40) - change k ? ( 正直どっちでもいいと思う)

  3. 00:40:352 (47) - change k ( 後ろの音あがってる )

  4. 00:47:306 (23) - change K ( 00:44:127 (9) - 合わせて )

  5. 00:47:703 (24,25,26,27) - change kddk oe dkdk ( 00:48:100 (26) - ここはdだとおもう )

  6. 00:52:272 (44) - change d ( 00:50:683 (37) - 00:53:266 (48) - 音の高さそんな変わらない )

  7. 00:53:862 (50,51,52,53) - ここの2連打くどいとおもうからこんな感じでいいんじゃない? ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316326 )

  8. 00:57:835 (72,73,74) - add finishでもいいかと

  9. 01:01:213 - add k ( 01:01:610 (11,12,13,14,15) - ここが違和感なくなるとおもう )

  10. 01:02:306 (17) - move 01:02:504 (18) - & 01:02:405 (17) - ここからddk

  11. 01:10:948 - ここから3連打のdddでも追加していいんじゃない? kiaiだし音はあるし

  12. 01:13:928 - add d & 01:13:729 (77) - change k ( 01:01:213 - ここと同じ理由 )

  13. 01:15:120 (87,88,89) - swap. ddkでいいのでは

  14. 01:22:471 (121) - ここから https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316392 これでもいいかと Vocalでとりたくないならそのままで


    割と主観だから全部変えなくていいと思う
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ざっくりとしか見てないからこんな感じで

頑張れクソガキ
yuzu__rinrin

toara_fict wrote:

No kds.

[ General]
  1. Romanised Artist : Yui Horie -> Horie Yui
    できるならHorie YuiがいいけどそーすあるからYui Horieとかいうクソダサい感じになってる
    http://king-cr.jp/artist/horie/


  2. 全難易度 01:32:405 - spinのおわりここじゃない?
むずとfutsuに適用

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[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:10:153 (1) - spinの終わり違和感
    違和感あるけど打数調整したいんご...

    それだけ
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:696 (17) - change d ( kkddkでいいかなって )
    ok
  2. 00:45:120 (52) - finishにするかkにするかしたいかな 個人的にはkかなって感じ
    上でfinishにしてたらしい、pnkmjpの更新遅れ

  3. 00:55:253 (93,94,95) - swap ( kkdでいいかな 後ろの音的に )
    ok

    Nice diff.
 アリガトウ_(:3 」∠)_

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ざっくりとしか見てないからこんな感じで

頑張れクソガキ
arigatoara_fict

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Topic Starter
crim

zigizigiefe wrote:

from my queue o/

[Oni]
  1. 00:03:200 (11,12,13,14) - Strong drum sounds.So add finisher pls
    - added finisher to 11,12,14
  2. 00:31:412 (1) - There is no any vocal,piano or drum sound.
    - no change
  3. 00:40:551 (48,51,54) - That's just suggestion..Drum sounds are too strong,try it with finisher.
    - added finisher to 00:41:941 (54) -
  4. 01:03:200 - Add a note here if you wanna emphasize vocal here,that would be better.
    - added d
  5. 01:03:796 - ^
    - added d
  6. 01:23:465 (126) - ddkdkkkkk pattern isn't good.Use more common pattern,like ddkdkkkkd
    - i think it is high pitch. no change
  7. 01:24:061 (128,129,130,131) - These notes for vocal emphasis is unnecessary for here.
    - umm... keep
I guess that's it,Good Luck :)
thank you for modding !!
Topic Starter
crim

toara_fict wrote:

No kds.

[ General]
  1. Romanised Artist : Yui Horie -> Horie Yui
    - これまでのRankedのやつ見てみたらHorie Yui多かったし変更!

  2. 全難易度 01:32:405 - spinのおわりここじゃない?
    - カエタ
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[ Kantan]
  1. 00:57:835 (31,32) - finishで色そろえていいと思う
    - K K にした
    それだけ
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[ Oni]
  1. 00:22:074 (23,24,25) - change dkd or kkd is better.
    - kkd にした

  2. 00:25:849 (40) - change k ? ( 正直どっちでもいいと思う)

  3. 00:40:352 (47) - change k ( 後ろの音あがってる )

  4. 00:47:306 (23) - change K ( 00:44:127 (9) - 合わせて )

  5. 00:47:703 (24,25,26,27) - change kddk oe dkdk ( 00:48:100 (26) - ここはdだとおもう )
    - d k d k に変えました

  6. 00:52:272 (44) - change d ( 00:50:683 (37) - 00:53:266 (48) - 音の高さそんな変わらない )

  7. 00:53:862 (50,51,52,53) - ここの2連打くどいとおもうからこんな感じでいいんじゃない? ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316326 )

  8. 00:57:835 (72,73,74) - add finishでもいいかと

  9. 01:01:213 - add k ( 01:01:610 (11,12,13,14,15) - ここが違和感なくなるとおもう )

  10. 01:02:306 (17) - move 01:02:504 (18) - & 01:02:405 (17) - ここからddk

  11. 01:10:948 - ここから3連打のdddでも追加していいんじゃない? kiaiだし音はあるし

  12. 01:13:928 - add d & 01:13:729 (77) - change k ( 01:01:213 - ここと同じ理由 )

  13. 01:15:120 (87,88,89) - swap. ddkでいいのでは
    - うーん ちょっと違和感ある感じしたから kkk にした

  14. 01:22:471 (121) - ここから https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7316392 これでもいいかと Vocalでとりたくないならそのままで
    - そのままにしたい


    割と主観だから全部変えなくていいと思う
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ざっくりとしか見てないからこんな感じで

頑張れクソガキ
modありがとナス!
komasy
M4Mです! mod超初心者ですが、よろしくお願いします。

Oni
00:03:200 (11,12) - 00:03:994 (14) - delete finish? そんな強い音なっていないのに加え周りとの雰囲気を考えたときに結構浮いているような印象を受けました

00:22:670 (26) - delete finish? 上の理由に加え1/4と隣接した同色なのでプレイ感の向上を図る目的もあります

00:23:465 (31) - change to k? 4小節前の1/2のddkdから縁の量を増やして変化を付けるという目的と00:24:855 (35,36,37) - がkkdだから視覚的な面で綺麗にするという目的です

00:31:014 (1) - delete? ここからはボーカル合わせになっていることを考えるとここに音符を置くのは少し違和感を感じました。

00:31:809 (3) - delete? ボーカルがないのと、静かな部分なので密度を下げてほかの場所を盛り上げる役割です

00:32:206 (4,5) - ctrl+g? ボーカルの高低です。(ctrl+g後、00:32:206 (4) - をkにするのもありだと思います)

00:33:299 (9) - change to d and 00:33:398 (10) - delete? ^^

00:38:166 (33) - change to k and move to 00:38:266 - ? ボーカル合わせを進めることで統一感の増加に加え軽快な気持ちで叩くことができるかもしれません

00:38:763 (36) - change to k? ボーカルの高低です。キック音から外れることになりますが、あんまり目立たないので…

00:39:756 (42) - move to 00:39:855 - ? ^^の提案を受けた場合は変更することをお勧めします~

00:40:551 (46) - and 00:41:147 (49) - add finish? この付近の小節で縁大音符を置くことでパートの代わり際としてぴったりだと思います

00:44:425 - add k? ここは好みです 個人的にはこうしたほうが00:44:723 (12) - の音が際立って好きです

00:47:604 - ^

00:48:696 (30) - change to d? 00:47:902 (27,28,29) - ここがkdkなので変化を付けたいです

00:55:451 (62) - change to k? ドンが三回単音で続くのは若干寂しい…?

01:01:213 (9) - move to 01:00:617 - こっちの方が伴奏のリズムを気持ちよくフォローできると思います。

01:03:398 (23) - change to k? ボーカルの高低をフォロー。

01:04:392 (28) - changeto k? ここもやっぱりボーカルをフォローしたい。01:04:988 (32) - ここも同じくカツになっているので…

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41) - change to kddk? この配置だと両端のkがボーカルにぴったりだと思います。

01:07:074 (44) - change to d? こちらの方が聞こえがいいと思います。

01:07:868 (49) - move to 01:08:067 - ^^と^の部分とリズムパターンを統一したほうがいいと思います

01:13:332 - 01:13:431 - にadd kし、01:13:431 (78) - をchange to k 、そして01:13:729 (79) - をchange to dして01:13:928 (80) - をdelete?
つまり01:13:133 (77) - から、「k kkk d kkdkdkd 」というのはどうでしょうという提案です。01:01:213 (9) - を変更した場合はこちらもそれに合わせるといいと思います

01:14:623 (87) - delete? ピアノの音小さくなっていっているし、5連に収めておいた方が纏まりがいいと思います。

01:14:921 (88) - change to k? ボーカル この提案を受けた場合は01:15:120 (89,90) - をchange to dd?

01:22:570 - 個人的にadd kです。ボーカル鳴っているためです。ここはお好みで

01:25:849 (144) - change to k?

01:27:041 (149) - ここadd d して01:27:438 (150) - をchange to kというのはどうでしょうか
Muzukashii
00:56:842 (101) - 1/4一個分左にmove? ここはどうしても違和感を感じました

01:03:398 (13) - change to k? ボーカルの高低に合わせる目的です

01:05:385 - や 01:05:584 - にadd k? 休符を短くして流れを崩したくない感じです

01:08:961 (38) - delete? 次の付点リズムに向けて

01:16:114 (19) - ^^^
Futsuu
00:03:200 (5) - change to k?

00:06:378 (10) - change to k?

01:03:200 - add d?

01:04:988 (17) - finisherもありだと思います
01:05:981 (18) - ^
01:10:749 (30) - ^
01:11:345 (31) - ^
01:12:339 (1) - ^
01:18:697 (18) - ^
01:20:286 (21) - ^
01:28:829 (39,40) - ^

01:15:915 (12) - add d?

01:29:226 (40) - change to k?
Kantan
00:24:657 (14) - change to k?

00:44:921 (16) - add d and 00:45:120 (16) - move to 00:45:319 - ? 00:46:114 (17,18) - ここと合わせ簡易的なリズムに?

00:49:292 - add k?

01:29:226 (75) - move to 01:29:027 - ?
GOOD LUCK!!! :)
yuzu__rinrin

komasy wrote:

M4Mです! mod超初心者ですが、よろしくお願いします。

[Muzukashii]
00:56:842 (101) - 1/4一個分左にmove? ここはどうしても違和感を感じました
音聞き取り間違えてますね...直しました、changed

01:03:398 (13) - change to k? ボーカルの高低に合わせる目的です
パターン被るのでdd k d に変更しました。

01:05:385 - や 01:05:584 - にadd k? 休符を短くして流れを崩したくない感じです
わかるけどキープで。自分としてはMuzuplayerにも休憩を与えたいです。

01:08:961 (38) - delete? 次の付点リズムに向けて
no change.難所作りです。ただ坦々とプレイしたって面白くないじゃないですか。kiaiなのでいくらか許容されると思います。

01:16:114 (19) - ^^^
ok

[Futsuu]
00:03:200 (5) - change to k?
no change. なんで

00:06:378 (10) - change to k?
no change. なんで

01:03:200 - add d?
no change. 休みを潰したくありません。

01:04:988 (17) - finisherもありだと思います
01:05:981 (18) - ^
01:10:749 (30) - ^
01:11:345 (31) - ^
01:12:339 (1) - ^ ok
01:18:697 (18) - ^
01:20:286 (21) - ^
01:28:829 (39,40) - ^
その他no change. なぜFinishをつける意味があるか理解できませんでした。別につけなくてもいい音だと思います。

01:15:915 (12) - add d?
no change. 休みを潰したくないです。

01:29:226 (40) - change to k?
no change. 音程そのままなんですけど。

GOOD LUCK!!! :)
modありがとうございました

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Topic Starter
crim

komasy wrote:

M4Mです! mod超初心者ですが、よろしくお願いします。

Oni
00:03:200 (11,12) - 00:03:994 (14) - delete finish? そんな強い音なっていないのに加え周りとの雰囲気を考えたときに結構浮いているような印象を受けました
- 他よりも強い音がなっているように感じたのでfinishを置きました。他のmodder様に同じところ言われたら変更します。

00:22:670 (26) - delete finish? 上の理由に加え1/4と隣接した同色なのでプレイ感の向上を図る目的もあります
- No change.

00:23:465 (31) - change to k? 4小節前の1/2のddkdから縁の量を増やして変化を付けるという目的と00:24:855 (35,36,37) - がkkdだから視覚的な面で綺麗にするという目的です

00:31:014 (1) - delete? ここからはボーカル合わせになっていることを考えるとここに音符を置くのは少し違和感を感じました。
- ピアノの音がなっているしno change

00:31:809 (3) - delete? ボーカルがないのと、静かな部分なので密度を下げてほかの場所を盛り上げる役割です
- ここは個人的に3連打にしたい… Keep

00:32:206 (4,5) - ctrl+g? ボーカルの高低です。(ctrl+g後、00:32:206 (4) - をkにするのもありだと思います)
- Keep

00:33:299 (9) - change to d and 00:33:398 (10) - delete? ^^
- 上の理由と同じくKeep

00:38:166 (33) - change to k and move to 00:38:266 - ? ボーカル合わせを進めることで統一感の増加に加え軽快な気持ちで叩くことができるかもしれません
- change to k ここに2連を置くのは違和感を感じました。

00:38:763 (36) - change to k? ボーカルの高低です。キック音から外れることになりますが、あんまり目立たないので…

00:39:756 (42) - move to 00:39:855 - ? ^^の提案を受けた場合は変更することをお勧めします~
- No change

00:40:551 (46) - and 00:41:147 (49) - add finish? この付近の小節で縁大音符を置くことでパートの代わり際としてぴったりだと思います

00:44:425 - add k? ここは好みです 個人的にはこうしたほうが00:44:723 (12) - の音が際立って好きです
- メッチャ悩みましたがkeepさせていただきます。

00:47:604 - ^
- 同上

00:48:696 (30) - change to d? 00:47:902 (27,28,29) - ここがkdkなので変化を付けたいです

00:55:451 (62) - change to k? ドンが三回単音で続くのは若干寂しい…?

01:01:213 (9) - move to 01:00:617 - こっちの方が伴奏のリズムを気持ちよくフォローできると思います。

01:03:398 (23) - change to k? ボーカルの高低をフォロー。
- Keep

01:04:392 (28) - changeto k? ここもやっぱりボーカルをフォローしたい。01:04:988 (32) - ここも同じくカツになっているので…

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41) - change to kddk? この配置だと両端のkがボーカルにぴったりだと思います。

01:07:074 (44) - change to d? こちらの方が聞こえがいいと思います。
- No change.

01:07:868 (49) - move to 01:08:067 - ^^と^の部分とリズムパターンを統一したほうがいいと思います
- 同じ4連というのも少しアレなのでここは少しアレンジを効かせました。他のmodder様に指摘されたら変更します。

01:13:332 - 01:13:431 - にadd kし、01:13:431 (78) - をchange to k 、そして01:13:729 (79) - をchange to dして01:13:928 (80) - をdelete?
つまり01:13:133 (77) - から、「k kkk d kkdkdkd 」というのはどうでしょうという提案です。01:01:213 (9) - を変更した場合はこちらもそれに合わせるといいと思います
- 01:13:133 (77) - を change to d 01:13:332にadd k 01:13:431 (78) - をchange to kしました。

01:14:623 (87) - delete? ピアノの音小さくなっていっているし、5連に収めておいた方が纏まりがいいと思います。
- ピアノの音がそこまで小さくないのでNo change.

01:14:921 (88) - change to k? ボーカル この提案を受けた場合は01:15:120 (89,90) - をchange to dd?
- No change.

01:22:570 - 個人的にadd kです。ボーカル鳴っているためです。ここはお好みで
- No change.

01:25:849 (144) - change to k?

01:27:041 (149) - ここadd d して01:27:438 (150) - をchange to kというのはどうでしょうか
Kantan
00:24:657 (14) - change to k?

00:44:921 (16) - add d and 00:45:120 (16) - move to 00:45:319 - ? 00:46:114 (17,18) - ここと合わせ簡易的なリズムに?
- 難易度が難易度なのであまり難しい配置を置きたくないです。00:45:120 (16) - は周りの間隔があいているかつ強い音がなっているので置いています。

00:49:292 - add k?
- Keepさせてください。

01:29:226 (75) - move to 01:29:027 - ?
- No change.
GOOD LUCK!!! :)
modありがとうございました!
Waribashi
こんにちは。MODします。(主観的な指摘が主です)from gamechat
[Kantan]
スピナーの終了地点を00:30:617 (18) - から00:29:425 (18) - に移動させてみてはどうでしょう。次のノーツにスピナーが貼り付いてて少々忙しないかもしれません。
[yzrin's Futsuu]
01:17:504 (16) - delete (サビの同じリズム箇所(01:04:789 (1) - 01:11:147 (30) - )をとってなくて敢えてここを取る必要はないかなと感じました。)
[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:37:769 (24,25) - change to k d (変えるのなら00:39:359 (30,31) - ここも)
01:01:809 (6) - change to d (「響けば」の「ば」をとるのならば音階的に下がっているよう聞こえるのでここはkより低いdで取るべきだと思います。)
[Oni]
00:22:670 (26) - change to d (こ↑こ↓よくわかんなかったです)
00:31:710 (2,3) - delete (静かなパートということもあり密度をそれに合わせる形にしたほうがいいと感じます。)
00:33:299 (8,9) - delete (上と同様)
00:34:789 (14) - change to d
00:52:272 (44) - change to D
00:58:630 (75) - delete (ここを切ることによって前のドラムのキレの良さを再現できると思います)

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね;;;
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います!good luck 8-)
yuzu__rinrin

KitajimaYN wrote:

こんにちは。MODします。(主観的な指摘が主です)from gamechat

[yzrin's Futsuu]
01:17:504 (16) - delete (サビの同じリズム箇所(01:04:789 (1) - 01:11:147 (30) - )をとってなくて敢えてここを取る必要はないかなと感じました。)
keep... あえて取らなくてもいいけど... voとりたさ... ん~...
[yzrin's Muzukashii]
00:37:769 (24,25) - change to k d (変えるのなら00:39:359 (30,31) - ここも)
changed. なるほど、ここ一帯こねくり回しましたここ結構いい感じなのでfutsuuもchangeしました。
01:01:809 (6) - change to d (「響けば」の「ば」をとるのならば音階的に下がっているよう聞こえるのでここはkより低いdで取るべきだと思います。)
dの方が理にかなってるんですけど、kの方が良い説ある気がする(?)

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね;;;
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います!good luck 8-)
modありがとうごじゃいました

Fu
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Topic Starter
crim

KitajimaYN wrote:

こんにちは。MODします。(主観的な指摘が主です)from gamechat
[Kantan]
スピナーの終了地点を00:30:617 (18) - から00:29:425 (18) - に移動させてみてはどうでしょう。次のノーツにスピナーが貼り付いてて少々忙しないかもしれません。
- 確かにギリギリで叩ききったプレイヤーが次のノーツでミスをしてしまう可能性も無しではないので短くしました。
[Oni]
00:22:670 (26) - change to d (こ↑こ↓よくわかんなかったです)
- 他より音強いから~って置いたんだけど今見たらこれわっかんねえな 戻しました。
00:31:710 (2,3) - delete (静かなパートということもあり密度をそれに合わせる形にしたほうがいいと感じます。)
- なるほど fixed !
00:33:299 (8,9) - delete (上と同様)
- fixed
00:34:789 (14) - change to d
- No change
00:52:272 (44) - change to D
- fixed
00:58:630 (75) - delete (ここを切ることによって前のドラムのキレの良さを再現できると思います)
- fixed

私に言えるのはこれくらいですね;;;
既にかなりまとまってると思うのであとちょっとだと思います!good luck 8-)
modありがとうございました!! 返信遅れて申し訳ないです ;3
gaston_2199
Hi!
NM from my queue~
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:22:670 (11) - Kat for consistence as 00:16:312 (3) -
  2. 00:25:054 - You can add kat here to follow the melody
  3. 00:25:451 (15) - This change to kat for the same reason as above (only if you accept)
  4. 00:31:014 (1,2) - Why not change to kat? Because the sound is sharper than this 00:37:372 (7,8) -
  5. 00:53:266 (26,27,28,29,30) - How about dkkdd? 00:54:061 (27,28) - I listen these notes turn up the volumen, so maybe change to kat
  6. 01:10:352 (48) - These notes 01:09:160 (46,47,49,50) - you follow the vocal. In my opinion it's sounds good if you delete 01:10:352 (48) - to emphatizes better the vocal
[ yzrin's Futsuu]
  • How about change the diff name to "yuzu's Futsuu"? Only my opinion c:
  1. 00:02:008 (3) - This note is unnesesary, no destacable sound. Maybe move to 00:03:597 - to follow the vocal?
  2. 00:03:994 (6) - Kat? vocal
  3. 00:23:465 (21,22) - Change to don? This 00:23:465 (21) - is the same that 00:17:107 (7) -, and this too 00:23:862 (22) - but the tone is more low than 00:17:504 (8) -
[ yzrin's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:32:802 (7) - Move this to 00:32:604 - to follow the piano, is better.
  2. 00:33:398 (9) - The same as above, move to 00:33:200 -
  3. 00:34:193 - Add kat to follow piano?
  4. 01:10:153 (41,43) - Delete this, because is the same than here 01:09:160 (37,38,39) - and emphatize the vocal
[ Oni]
  1. 00:10:153 (45) -Change to don?
  2. 01:23:465 (133,134) - Change to don? In the others diff was always don
That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~
Topic Starter
crim

gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi!
NM from my queue~
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:22:670 (11) - Kat for consistence as 00:16:312 (3) -
    - i think it is low pitch. No change
  2. 00:25:054 - You can add kat here to follow the melody
    - ok
  3. 00:25:451 (15) - This change to kat for the same reason as above (only if you accept)
    - I think it is the same as pitch with 00:27:041 (18) -
  4. 00:31:014 (1,2) - Why not change to kat? Because the sound is sharper than this 00:37:372 (7,8) -
    - ok
  5. 00:53:266 (26,27,28,29,30) - How about dkkdd? 00:54:061 (27,28) - I listen these notes turn up the volumen, so maybe change to kat
    - ok :3
  6. 01:10:352 (48) - These notes 01:09:160 (46,47,49,50) - you follow the vocal. In my opinion it's sounds good if you delete 01:10:352 (48) - to emphatizes better the vocal
    - ok
[ Oni]
  1. 00:10:153 (45) -Change to don?
    - I follow the vocal. I think this pitch is high
  2. 01:23:465 (133,134) - Change to don? In the others diff was always don
    - ok changed
That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~
Thank you for modding !! :)
yuzu__rinrin

gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi!
NM from my queue~
[ yzrin's Futsuu]
  • How about change the diff name to "yuzu's Futsuu"? Only my opinion c:
  1. 00:02:008 (3) - This note is unnesesary, no destacable sound. Maybe move to 00:03:597 - to follow the vocal?
    ok
  2. 00:03:994 (6) - Kat? vocal
    ok
  3. 00:23:465 (21,22) - Change to don? This 00:23:465 (21) - is the same that 00:17:107 (7) -, and this too 00:23:862 (22) - but the tone is more low than 00:17:504 (8) -
    change d k


[ yzrin's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:32:802 (7) - Move this to 00:32:604 - to follow the piano, is better.
  2. 00:33:398 (9) - The same as above, move to 00:33:200 -
    changed it a little by myself.
  3. 00:34:193 - Add kat to follow piano?
    If it is piano sound, I think that this is correct.
  4. 01:10:153 (41,43) - Delete this, because is the same than here 01:09:160 (37,38,39) - and emphatize the vocal
    ok.

That's all, nice map!
Good luck~~
thanks for modding ~

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Topic Starter
crim
update
Remus
Hello.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:21:875 - miss don here. There is drum sound.
  2. 00:27:637 - i think that you should put here kat/don here to not miss very loud instrumental. Move spinner a bit further.
  3. 00:30:617 - miss loud sound again. As we know, Muzu isn't diff where you can put anything you want, so you should use any of your opportunities here(i mean use any your chance to emphasize the sound).
  4. 00:45:517 (53,54,55,56) - what about dkkd here?
  5. 00:48:696 (66,67,68,69) - well, you made it further, so last suggestion SeemsGood.
  6. 00:56:842 (101) - move it to 00:56:743. Imo, sounds better.
  7. 01:29:623 - as i said before
[Oni]
  1. 00:27:637 - i mentioned it in Muzu. Better to map and move spinner a bit.
  2. 00:33:796 (9) - kat for better rhytm.
  3. 01:04:392 (28) - the same reason as above. Lack of kats sometimes looks weird, when before/after this part there much of them(kats). Stability is always good, so better to fix here.
  4. 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86) - kkkdk?
  5. 01:21:875 (121,125) - the same as above, but here you can skip this, because it is looks nice even without kats.
  6. 01:29:623 - if you decided to fix that moment before, fix here too.

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.
yuzu__rinrin

Remus wrote:

Hello.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:21:875 - miss don here. There is drum sound.
    ok
  2. 00:27:637 - i think that you should put here kat/don here to not miss very loud instrumental. Move spinner a bit further.
    When putting the notes there will be uncomfortable at the beginning of the spinner.
  3. 00:30:617 - miss loud sound again. As we know, Muzu isn't diff where you can put anything you want, so you should use any of your opportunities here(i mean use any your chance to emphasize the sound).

    It is best to start a notes from here
  4. 00:45:517 (53,54,55,56) - what about dkkd here?
    I think kddk is better.
  5. 00:48:696 (66,67,68,69) - well, you made it further, so last suggestion SeemsGood.
  6. 00:56:842 (101) - move it to 00:56:743. Imo, sounds better.
    ok
  7. 01:29:623 - as i said before
    no

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.
thank you for modding :3

q
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Topic Starter
crim

Remus wrote:

Hello.



[Oni]
  1. 00:27:637 - i mentioned it in Muzu. Better to map and move spinner a bit.
    - No change
  2. 00:33:796 (9) - kat for better rhytm.
    - ok
  3. 01:04:392 (28) - the same reason as above. Lack of kats sometimes looks weird, when before/after this part there much of them(kats). Stability is always good, so better to fix here.
    - ok
  4. 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86) - kkkdk?
    - umm... keep...
  5. 01:21:875 (121,125) - the same as above, but here you can skip this, because it is looks nice even without kats.
    - No change
  6. 01:29:623 - if you decided to fix that moment before, fix here too.
    - No change

In conclusion : map looks very neat. Emphasizing of sounds is very good(and music good too).
Good luck.
Thank you for modding :)
Tomoka Rin
IRC savelog
00:18 Sanawieck: そういえばなんですけどmodって出来ますか?
00:21 *Sanawieck is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)]
00:21 Sanawieck: 前自分がやった感じのやつです!
00:21 Tomoka Rin: おおお
00:22 Tomoka Rin: やってみる
00:24 Tomoka Rin: えっと
00:24 Sanawieck: >w<b
00:25 Tomoka Rin: ちょっと気になるところはね
00:26 Sanawieck: うん
00:26 Tomoka Rin: 01:03:994 (25,26) - ここdk、01:04:789 (31) - ここもkかな
00:28 Sanawieck: 01:03:994 (26) - ここkにした! 01:04:789 (31) - は後ろのドラム音取りたいからkeepにしたい
00:28 Tomoka Rin: うん
00:28 Sanawieck: dk に変えた!
00:31 Tomoka Rin: あと
00:31 Tomoka Rin: 00:40:749 (45) - ここ、kならどう
00:32 Tomoka Rin: dもいいけど
00:33 Tomoka Rin: ここはおすきにw
00:34 Sanawieck: とても悩む…www
00:36 Sanawieck: 音程どおりにしたいのでここはdでいきます!
00:36 Tomoka Rin: うん...さっきも悩んでるw
00:37 Sanawieck: ww
00:40 Tomoka Rin:  01:13:729 (80) -
00:41 Tomoka Rin: ここdになったら
00:42 Tomoka Rin: 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) -
00:43 Tomoka Rin: 元のはpianoについてる、https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499712
00:43 Tomoka Rin: これ変えたらもいいと思う
00:44 Tomoka Rin: あくまで個人的な意見けどw
00:44 Sanawieck: kkdkddk良い!!ww
00:44 Sanawieck: 変えたw
00:46 Tomoka Rin: 01:22:670 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) -
00:46 Tomoka Rin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499737
00:48 Tomoka Rin: 最後は01:28:829 (156) - kもdもいいよ、お好きにw
00:49 Sanawieck: うーんkeepで;;;
00:51 Tomoka Rin: はい(*゚▽゚)ノ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: 以上だ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: いい譜面やリズムと思うよ
00:51 Sanawieck: ありがとー!!!
00:52 Sanawieck: 嬉しい>ω<
Topic Starter
crim

Tomoka Rin wrote:

IRC savelog
00:18 Sanawieck: そういえばなんですけどmodって出来ますか?
00:21 *Sanawieck is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER (TV Size)]
00:21 Sanawieck: 前自分がやった感じのやつです!
00:21 Tomoka Rin: おおお
00:22 Tomoka Rin: やってみる
00:24 Tomoka Rin: えっと
00:24 Sanawieck: >w<b
00:25 Tomoka Rin: ちょっと気になるところはね
00:26 Sanawieck: うん
00:26 Tomoka Rin: 01:03:994 (25,26) - ここdk、01:04:789 (31) - ここもkかな
00:28 Sanawieck: 01:03:994 (26) - ここkにした! 01:04:789 (31) - は後ろのドラム音取りたいからkeepにしたい
00:28 Tomoka Rin: うん
00:28 Sanawieck: dk に変えた!
00:31 Tomoka Rin: あと
00:31 Tomoka Rin: 00:40:749 (45) - ここ、kならどう
00:32 Tomoka Rin: dもいいけど
00:33 Tomoka Rin: ここはおすきにw
00:34 Sanawieck: とても悩む…www
00:36 Sanawieck: 音程どおりにしたいのでここはdでいきます!
00:36 Tomoka Rin: うん...さっきも悩んでるw
00:37 Sanawieck: ww
00:40 Tomoka Rin:  01:13:729 (80) -
00:41 Tomoka Rin: ここdになったら
00:42 Tomoka Rin: 01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) -
00:43 Tomoka Rin: 元のはpianoについてる、https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499712
00:43 Tomoka Rin: これ変えたらもいいと思う
00:44 Tomoka Rin: あくまで個人的な意見けどw
00:44 Sanawieck: kkdkddk良い!!ww
00:44 Sanawieck: 変えたw
00:46 Tomoka Rin: 01:22:670 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) -
00:46 Tomoka Rin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7499737
00:48 Tomoka Rin: 最後は01:28:829 (156) - kもdもいいよ、お好きにw
00:49 Sanawieck: うーんkeepで;;;
00:51 Tomoka Rin: はい(*゚▽゚)ノ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: 以上だ
00:51 Tomoka Rin: いい譜面やリズムと思うよ
00:51 Sanawieck: ありがとー!!!
00:52 Sanawieck: 嬉しい>ω<
IRCありがとう!!!!!

update !
davidminh0111
Sorry, I can't mod your because i don't mod graveyard beatmap
davidminh0111
Hello from my modding queue:
Oni:
00:35:782: Remove this
01:14:226 (83, 85): Remove this
01:15:517: Add Drum
Topic Starter
crim

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue:
Oni:
00:35:782: Remove this
- No change
01:14:226 (83, 85): Remove this
- No change
01:15:517: Add Drum
- No change
Thanks for modding
Ozu
( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD


[ General ]

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Bog kat



[ Kantan ]

00:44:127 (15) - D? there isn't any notes around here so eazy to play big note, and sound is emphasized here.
00:47:306 (19) - ^

01:05:981 (42,43,44,45) - k k d d? to lay down offbeat burden.

01:28:829 (71) - add d seems OK. not difficult, fit very nice.



[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

01:05:981 (17,18,19) - looks like just 1/4 ddk because of bgm.

*suggestion 1*
01:06:378 (18) - delete
*suggestion 2*
01:05:981 (17,18,19) - dkd
*suggestion 3*
01:06:180 (18) - add d <- most i like

01:07:570 (20,21,22) - ^



[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

Perfect to me~♪(*´∀`)



[ Oni ]

00:19:690 (13) - k? if you don't want to k, how about 00:19:888 (14,15,16,17) - kkdk?

00:45:120 (13) ,00:48:299 (27) - K? Big note is love <3

01:24:259 (136,137,138) - little much d in this stream. change here like kdd so that avoid one color.

01:28:829 (156,157) - D K?



sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~
yuzu__rinrin

404 AccNotFound wrote:

( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

01:05:981 (17,18,19) - looks like just 1/4 ddk because of bgm.

*suggestion 1*
01:06:378 (18) - delete
*suggestion 2*
01:05:981 (17,18,19) - dkd
*suggestion 3*
01:06:180 (18) - add d <- most i like

01:07:570 (20,21,22) - ^

no change,
I tried it variously. However, I decided that the shape of the current form is a form that the rhythm and the break are moderately taken.

I thought that Futsuu players should do the one-step difficult rhythm as well.




[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

Perfect to me~♪(*´∀`)
( ˘ω˘ )thank you( ˘ω˘ )



sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~
thank you for modding ~ :)
Topic Starter
crim

404 AccNotFound wrote:

( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ hi~
nm from my queue~
im a noob modder, so please just refer this modding xD


[ General ]

d = don
k = kat
D = Big don
K = Bog kat



[ Kantan ]

00:44:127 (15) - D? there isn't any notes around here so eazy to play big note, and sound is emphasized here.
00:47:306 (19) - ^

01:05:981 (42,43,44,45) - k k d d? to lay down offbeat burden.

01:28:829 (71) - add d seems OK. not difficult, fit very nice.

- All changed :3

[ Oni ]

00:19:690 (13) - k? if you don't want to k, how about 00:19:888 (14,15,16,17) - kkdk?
- No change

00:45:120 (13) ,00:48:299 (27) - K? Big note is love <3
- umm... keep

01:24:259 (136,137,138) - little much d in this stream. change here like kdd so that avoid one color.
- ok

01:28:829 (156,157) - D K?
- changed d K



sorry for short modding, but means that this map is already perfect xD
Good luck~
Thank you for modding !! :)
Karee Pan
Hey!
From my queue.

[ Kantan ]

00:46:114 (17,18,19,20) - Sounds like this should be d k K d . Also mirrors the previous pattern nicely.
01:21:080 (61) - move to 01:20:882
01:22:272 (63) - Consider deleting this. It seems tough for Kantan

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

00:36:577 (11) - Sounds like a d to me.
00:43:531 - Looks like a good spot to keep the doubles going with a d, If applied, then i would also delete 00:46:908 (35) for consistency.
01:07:570 (20) - Maybe switch to k ? Even though the vocals stay the same the guitar pitch rise makes this sound better as a k to me


[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

00:31:412 (2) , 00:33:001 (8) , 00:36:180 (20) - I don't see any reason for these notes in a very calm part of the song
00:36:577 (20) - d sounds better to me
01:03:398 (13) , 01:16:114 (19) - k like the previous pattern to follow the vocal ?


[ Oni ]

00:19:491 (11) - Melody says d, bassdrum says d, gotta be a d.
00:19:888 (14) - To me k sounds better and flows alot better
00:22:670 (26) - k imo
00:25:650 (38,39,40,41,42) - I would go with dkkdk for some variety, might be just my preference.
01:27:339 - Could add a note


Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it ;)
Best of Luck!
yuzu__rinrin

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey!
From my queue.

[ yzrin's Futsuu ]

00:36:577 (11) - Sounds like a d to me.
I think kk is better.
00:43:531 - Looks like a good spot to keep the doubles going with a d, If applied, then i would also delete 00:46:908 (35) for consistency.
ok
01:07:570 (20) - Maybe switch to k ? Even though the vocals stay the same the guitar pitch rise makes this sound better as a k to me
I would like to make the map even simple according to vocal.


[ yzrin's Muzukashii ]

00:31:412 (2) , 00:33:001 (8) , 00:36:180 (20) - I don't see any reason for these notes in a very calm part of the song
I erased it a little.
00:36:577 (20) - d sounds better to me
k
01:03:398 (13) , 01:16:114 (19) - k like the previous pattern to follow the vocal ?
I use a different color scheme to avoid duplication. 01:12:637 (2,3,4,5) -


Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it ;)
Best of Luck!
thank you for modding~ :3

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Topic Starter
crim

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey!
From my queue.

[ Kantan ]

00:46:114 (17,18,19,20) - Sounds like this should be d k K d . Also mirrors the previous pattern nicely.
- changed k d D k
01:21:080 (61) - move to 01:20:882
- ok
01:22:272 (63) - Consider deleting this. It seems tough for Kantan
- ok


[ Oni ]

00:19:491 (11) - Melody says d, bassdrum says d, gotta be a d.
- ok
00:19:888 (14) - To me k sounds better and flows alot better
- umm... keep
00:22:670 (26) - k imo
- No change
00:25:650 (38,39,40,41,42) - I would go with dkkdk for some variety, might be just my preference.
- No change
01:27:339 - Could add a note
- ok


Most of these might just be my preferences. Mapset is already pretty good, kinda hard to find anything wrong with it ;)
Best of Luck!
Thank you for modding !! :)
Arrival
Hello

[Kantan]

00:29:325 - This green line is useless as it is, leave the whole slider at 75% volume or reduce it from 75 to 65 graduatelly.

00:50:087 (22,24) - Consider putting these notes as finishers. Choice is yours

01:06:676 (43,45) - Avoid mapping blue ticks on Kantan. Although I see you want to map the vocals, there are also dominant sounds on 01:06:577 - and 01:08:166 - which sould be prioritized since we're on the easiest difficultu of the set. Put these 2 notes on the previous red ticks.

01:28:829 (70) - Add this as a finisher too

Really tired i'll do the rest tomorrow. PM me in game if I forget
Topic Starter
crim

Arrival wrote:

Hello

[Kantan]

00:29:325 - This green line is useless as it is, leave the whole slider at 75% volume or reduce it from 75 to 65 graduatelly.
- ok

00:50:087 (22,24) - Consider putting these notes as finishers. Choice is yours
- Add finisher to 00:50:683 (23) -

01:06:676 (43,45) - Avoid mapping blue ticks on Kantan. Although I see you want to map the vocals, there are also dominant sounds on 01:06:577 - and 01:08:166 - which sould be prioritized since we're on the easiest difficultu of the set. Put these 2 notes on the previous red ticks.
- ok

01:28:829 (70) - Add this as a finisher too
- ok

Really tired i'll do the rest tomorrow. PM me in game if I forget
Thank you for modding :)
Arrival
Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .

[Futsuu]

00:51:279 - 00:52:868 - I'd suggest to add 2 kats here to reflect more the intensity of the part, as it is it is a bit undermapped, even for a futsuu.

01:16:908 (14,15,16,17) - Swapping these to k d d k would definetly fit better for the vocals than d k k d.

[Muzukashii]

00:15:319 (2) - This note doesn't fit on any sounds and makes the pattern too long overall. Please delete it.

00:49:888 (69) - Considering the 3/2 snapping of these notes 00:50:385 (71,72) - I'd recommend deleting this note to make a small 1/1 break. Furthermore, this 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - is mapping to the instruments and not the vocals, making this note quite unfitting to the pattern.

01:05:584 - The break here is pretty big and breaks a bit the density of the kiai, also considering you mapped these 2 notes 01:07:173 (29,36) - .

[Oni]

00:01:014 - Weird to play, there is no actual beat here. I'd suggest simply deleting this note.

00:07:372 (32) - The density increase is pretty weird here, and the map is swapping from beats to piano without break which sounds odd. So same here, deleting this note would be necessary.

00:10:153 (44) - No finisher here although there are at 00:10:948 (47,50,53) - ?

00:15:021 - 00:15:815 - Add notes here to represent the build up better !

00:16:710 - 00:27:438 - This part feels a bit underwhelming compared to the build up. Consider adding a bit of density.

00:51:180 - 00:52:769 - What about triplets here ?

00:56:445 (67) - Either put a triplet or add a note at 00:56:345 - to emphasize the build up -> Here is though what I'd have made for this part
-> 00:55:054 - I think there is a good flow with the doublets and quads, and it fits the song pretty well.
If you do this I don't recommend putting a finisher at 00:56:445 (70) - though.

00:58:829 (75,76,77,78) - What about only letting this note : 00:59:226 (77) - ? It would make a way better emphasis on the vocals than every note here.

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think you should use the same structure as 01:07:769 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - . As it is its a bit awkward, the second structure feels definetly better.

01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - I understand you want to be along woth the piano here, however this feels a little bit sudden considering the density of the kiai and how you mapped it without thinking of the piano before, most of all folowing the vocals. I'd recommend deleting this note 01:14:425 (85) - .

01:24:061 (134,136) - Maybe removing these notes would make a better emphasis ?

That's all for now, call me back.
yuzu__rinrin

Arrival wrote:

Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .
fixed.


[Futsuu]

00:51:279 - 00:52:868 - I'd suggest to add 2 kats here to reflect more the intensity of the part, as it is it is a bit undermapped, even for a futsuu.
ok, changed~


01:16:908 (14,15,16,17) - Swapping these to k d d k would definetly fit better for the vocals than k d d k.
ok, changed kd-dk

[Muzukashii]

00:15:319 (2) - This note doesn't fit on any sounds and makes the pattern too long overall. Please delete it.
ok, deleted.


00:49:888 (69) - Considering the 3/2 snapping of these notes 00:50:385 (71,72) - I'd recommend deleting this note to make a small 1/1 break. Furthermore, this 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - is mapping to the instruments and not the vocals, making this note quite unfitting to the pattern.

Certainly break is necessary.
But I think that I do not need a 1/1 interval break.
deleted 00:50:385 (71) -

For 00:48:696 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - , no change as a pattern of consistency. 00:45:517 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55) -


01:05:584 - The break here is pretty big and breaks a bit the density of the kiai, also considering you mapped these 2 notes 01:07:173 (29,36) -
ok
01:05:385 - add d
01:05:584 - add k

You should hear a high sound. I picked it up.
01:07:173 -
01:08:763 -


That's all for now, call me back.
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256,192,21478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,21875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,22074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,22173,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,22272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,27041,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,27438,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,35186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,35584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,35782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,36180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,36577,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37372,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,37769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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288,192,38564,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,38961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,39557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,39955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,40551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,40948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,41544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,42935,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,224,45915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,46114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,46312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,46412,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,224,46511,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,46710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,224,47306,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,49292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,160,49590,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,160,49690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,49888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,50087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,51080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,51279,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,160,52868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,53266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,53663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,53862,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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288,160,54855,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,160,55253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,55451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,55650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,55849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,55948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56047,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,56445,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,57438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,57637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,57835,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,58233,1,12,0:0:0:0:
288,192,58431,1,12,0:0:0:0:
224,192,59623,5,4,0:0:0:0:
224,128,59921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,60219,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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288,160,60815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,192,61213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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288,192,64690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,64789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64988,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,192,65584,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,192,65782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,66378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,66974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,160,67372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,192,68266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
crim

Arrival wrote:

Mod follow up, no kd
[General]

01:12:339 - Please put a finisher here. It has the same musical impact as 00:59:623 - .
- ok

[Oni]

00:01:014 - Weird to play, there is no actual beat here. I'd suggest simply deleting this note.
- ok

00:07:372 (32) - The density increase is pretty weird here, and the map is swapping from beats to piano without break which sounds odd. So same here, deleting this note would be necessary.
- ok

00:10:153 (44) - No finisher here although there are at 00:10:948 (47,50,53) - ?
- added finisher

00:15:021 - 00:15:815 - Add notes here to represent the build up better !
- 00:15:021 added d 00:15:815 added k

00:16:710 - 00:27:438 - This part feels a bit underwhelming compared to the build up. Consider adding a bit of density.
- added little notes

00:51:180 - 00:52:769 - What about triplets here ?
- changed ddk

00:56:445 (67) - Either put a triplet or add a note at 00:56:345 - to emphasize the build up -> Here is though what I'd have made for this part
- it's difficult to 00:56:345 add note. no change
-> 00:55:054 - I think there is a good flow with the doublets and quads, and it fits the song pretty well.
If you do this I don't recommend putting a finisher at 00:56:445 (70) - though.
- change it


00:58:829 (75,76,77,78) - What about only letting this note : 00:59:226 (77) - ? It would make a way better emphasis on the vocals than every note here.
- it's unnatural to me. so deleted 00:58:829 (75,76,77,78)

01:06:378 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - I think you should use the same structure as 01:07:769 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - . As it is its a bit awkward, the second structure feels definetly better.
- ok changed

01:14:127 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - I understand you want to be along woth the piano here, however this feels a little bit sudden considering the density of the kiai and how you mapped it without thinking of the piano before, most of all folowing the vocals. I'd recommend deleting this note 01:14:425 (85) - .
- ok

01:24:061 (134,136) - Maybe removing these notes would make a better emphasis ?
- it's unnatural to delete these notes. no change

That's all for now, call me back.
Thank you Arrival !!!! :) :)
Arrival
irc log
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: 01:11:345 (49) - Remove this note in kantan so we have a 4/1 break in the kai
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: for new players
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: and I think everything is good

Do it and call meDone.

Everything seems good now. Good luck !
Topic Starter
crim

Arrival wrote:

irc log
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: 01:11:345 (49) - Remove this note in kantan so we have a 4/1 break in the kai
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: for new players
2017-05-24 16:06 Arrival: and I think everything is good

Do it and call meDone.

Everything seems good now. Good luck !
Arrival <3 Thank you !!
yuzu__rinrin
thanks Arrival :3
Skylish
From my modding queue. My mod waiting for your mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/602600

[General]

> I am concerned by the title, there's no '(TV size)'in the official ED track:



[Kantan]

> 00:13:332 - how about end the spinner at this timing? You started the spinner at the beginning of piano chord, the ending should also follow the end of piano chords lol.

> 00:21:478 - this note is strong enough to be a Finisher in Kantan, Finish it to show the consistency better with Oni.

> 00:26:246 (17,18) - same case as above

> 00:50:087 - This should be another Finisher to show the high-pitch vocal and strong base drum hit.

> 01:06:577 - / 01:08:166 - I would like to suggest shifting them 1/4 forward to completely fit the vocal notes. As the spacing is large enough, it would not be a big problem for Kantan level players to hit these off-beat notes accurately imo.

> 01:28:233 - Finish it too, you put Finish on all piano chords likely.

[Oni]

> 00:00:816 - just directly use 80% in the red timing point and remove the green one, that's unnecessary.

> 00:13:332 - how about changing it to k, to show a mirror pattern with 00:12:140 (50,51,52) - , just like what you did at 00:10:551 (44,45,46) - / 00:11:345 (47,48,49) -

> 00:14:524 - change it to d can improve the flow and prevent kat-spamming

> 00:50:087 - same as Kantan's

> 00:51:676 - ^

> 00:16:412 - changing it to d can show a better emphases on those piano high-pitch notes at 00:16:312 (15,17) - , and also avoid spamming kat everywhere +_+

> 01:13:928 - remove this note to keep the consistency well with 01:01:213 - , variation is already done in the triplet at 01:14:127 -

> 01:19:292 - / 01:20:286 - / 01:20:882 - / 01:21:875 - Where are the Finishes, comapring with exactly the same pattern usage at the section of 00:50:087 -

> 01:21:875 - this part flaws the structure:

- missing vocal emphasis at 01:22:570 - which you were following actually
- repetitive usage of dons (similar case at 00:14:524 - )
- 01:22:670 - the flow of this stream is a rocky (anti-flow)
- 01:23:465 - / 01:23:663 - high-pitch notes with potential Finishers, using dons for displaying them seems not really that nice

How about this: 01:21:875 (119) -


+ 01:22:471 - ddd shows the vocal part well, matching the style at 00:36:378 -
+ 01:22:272 - changed to k to prevent accumulative uses of single colour, that'd be too boring otherwise
+ 01:22:769 - this note is removed to show a better seperation from vocal to instrumental part
+ 01:22:868 - the flow of stream is finely polished
+ 01:23:465 - / 01:23:663 - k k now to show the piano note

> 01:28:233 - / 01:28:829 - where are the Finishers again?

[yzrin's Futsuu]

! All of your difficulties have too strong vol., consider -15~20% of them, or follow Sana's settings.

> 00:10:153 (1) - ending it at 00:13:332 - fits the piano end as well, like what you did in Muzukashii

> 00:21:478 - Finish? It is strong enough to be a Finisher absolutely.

> 00:26:246 (28,29,30) - Finish them too since you emphasized them in Muzukashii.

> 00:30:617 - extend the spinner ending to this timing? It seemed you carelessly shortened the spinner.

> 00:45:120 - / 00:48:299 - Finish them as well? Loud instrumental part can be heard.

> 01:09:557 (24,27) - either they are on the accurate spots or they should be gone. They sound off (and actually they are really off lol) and do not have a really good gameplay effect. I think removal of them is just fine.

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

! Vol. issue

> 00:00:816 -

Your current ver. is not identifiable to those hidden 3/2 patterns. You can feel it very clearly at 00:03:200 - / 00:07:968 - (check the mod below too)

> 00:05:186 - remove it to make the vocal outstand.

> 00:07:968 - a similar pattern at 00:03:200 - is expected here. 00:08:365 - shifting it 1/4 to match the 3/2 patterns.

> 00:21:478 - same in Futsuu

> 00:36:180 - shift it 1/2 forward to match the vocal and follow the style you used before at 00:06:974 -

> 00:48:299 - Finisher can still be used here

> 00:53:862 - triplet kat to express the vocal better?

> 01:27:041 - shift it 1/4 backward this time, you can understand why I am suggesting it

> 01:27:736 - changing it to d can improve the note flow better imo

[]

Please confirm the metadata, call me back when everything is settled.
yuzu__rinrin

Skylish wrote:

From my modding queue. My mod waiting for your mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/602600

[General]

> I am concerned by the title, there's no '(TV size)'in the official ED track:



PRESENTER Ranked map
[]
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/32725 old
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/316230
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/342603 new
[]
It is difficult for us to judge whether or not to attach it, because the notation oscillation has occurred on Ranked map.

I think that attaching TVsize makes it easier to understand, but I will leave this decision to Sana.

[yzrin's Futsuu]

! All of your difficulties have too strong vol., consider -15~20% of them, or follow Sana's settings.

fixed


> 00:10:153 (1) - ending it at 00:13:332 - fits the piano end as well, like what you did in Muzukashii
ok

> 00:21:478 - Finish? It is strong enough to be a Finisher absolutely.
ok

> 00:26:246 (28,29,30) - Finish them too since you emphasized them in Muzukashii.
ok

> 00:30:617 - extend the spinner ending to this timing? It seemed you carelessly shortened the spinner.
ok

> 00:45:120 - / 00:48:299 - Finish them as well? Loud instrumental part can be heard.
ok

> 01:09:557 (24,27) - either they are on the accurate spots or they should be gone. They sound off (and actually they are really off lol) and do not have a really good gameplay effect. I think removal of them is just fine.
ok

[yzrin's Muzukashii]

! Vol. issue

> 00:00:816 -

Your current ver. is not identifiable to those hidden 3/2 patterns. You can feel it very clearly at 00:03:200 - / 00:07:968 - (check the mod below too)
ok

> 00:05:186 - remove it to make the vocal outstand.
ok

> 00:07:968 - a similar pattern at 00:03:200 - is expected here. 00:08:365 - shifting it 1/4 to match the 3/2 patterns.
ok

> 00:21:478 - same in Futsuu
ok

> 00:36:180 - shift it 1/2 forward to match the vocal and follow the style you used before at 00:06:974 -
ok

> 00:48:299 - Finisher can still be used here
ok

> 00:53:862 - triplet kat to express the vocal better?
ok

> 01:27:041 - shift it 1/4 backward this time, you can understand why I am suggesting it
ok

> 01:27:736 - changing it to d can improve the note flow better imo
ok

[]

Please confirm the metadata, call me back when everything is settled.
Thanks Skylish! :3 

Sorry for simple reply. i'm busy lol

@Sanawieck 音量調節がおかしかったら変えても大丈夫です。W

ふつう
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むずかしい
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Topic Starter
crim
1/2

Skylish wrote:

From my modding queue. My mod waiting for your mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/602600

[General]

> I am concerned by the title, there's no '(TV size)'in the official ED track:



I'm very worried it T_T
the official track is full ver. but I didn't choose it (i chose Anime ED ver → https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jz2hN0VbmFY )
so i think not have to remove (TV size)...



[Kantan]

> 00:13:332 - how about end the spinner at this timing? You started the spinner at the beginning of piano chord, the ending should also follow the end of piano chords lol.
- fixed

> 00:21:478 - this note is strong enough to be a Finisher in Kantan, Finish it to show the consistency better with Oni.
- fixed

> 00:26:246 (17,18) - same case as above
- fixed

> 00:50:087 - This should be another Finisher to show the high-pitch vocal and strong base drum hit.
- fixed

> 01:06:577 - / 01:08:166 - I would like to suggest shifting them 1/4 forward to completely fit the vocal notes. As the spacing is large enough, it would not be a big problem for Kantan level players to hit these off-beat notes accurately imo.
- fixed

> 01:28:233 - Finish it too, you put Finish on all piano chords likely.
- fixed !
i'm very busy. i couldn't reply your check of Oni.
tomorrow i'll reply it. sorry :(
Skylish
There's still no '(TV size)' wording in the official ED.

I think there's necessary to remove it.

EDIT: Otherwise if you insist on using (TV size), may you find out the OST of it since I can't even find the album lol.
Topic Starter
crim
2/2

Skylish wrote:

From my modding queue. My mod waiting for your mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/602600

[Oni]

> 00:00:816 - just directly use 80% in the red timing point and remove the green one, that's unnecessary.
- it's a my mistake ;3 removed

> 00:13:332 - how about changing it to k, to show a mirror pattern with 00:12:140 (50,51,52) - , just like what you did at 00:10:551 (44,45,46) - / 00:11:345 (47,48,49) -
- fixed !

> 00:14:524 - change it to d can improve the flow and prevent kat-spamming
- fixed

> 00:50:087 - same as Kantan's
- ok

> 00:51:676 - ^
- ok :3

> 00:16:412 - changing it to d can show a better emphases on those piano high-pitch notes at 00:16:312 (15,17) - , and also avoid spamming kat everywhere +_+
- ok ! w !

> 01:13:928 - remove this note to keep the consistency well with 01:01:213 - , variation is already done in the triplet at 01:14:127 -
- ok ~ !

> 01:19:292 - / 01:20:286 - / 01:20:882 - / 01:21:875 - Where are the Finishes, comapring with exactly the same pattern usage at the section of 00:50:087 - 01:19:292 - / 01:20:286 - / 01:20:882 - added to Finisher.
but i don't think put finisher at 01:21:875 - i don't fell strong sound


> 01:21:875 - this part flaws the structure:

- missing vocal emphasis at 01:22:570 - which you were following actually
- repetitive usage of dons (similar case at 00:14:524 - )
- 01:22:670 - the flow of this stream is a rocky (anti-flow)
- 01:23:465 - / 01:23:663 - high-pitch notes with potential Finishers, using dons for displaying them seems not really that nice

How about this: 01:21:875 (119) -


+ 01:22:471 - ddd shows the vocal part well, matching the style at 00:36:378 -
+ 01:22:272 - changed to k to prevent accumulative uses of single colour, that'd be too boring otherwise
+ 01:22:769 - this note is removed to show a better seperation from vocal to instrumental part
+ 01:22:868 - the flow of stream is finely polished
+ 01:23:465 - / 01:23:663 - k k now to show the piano note
- i'm very worried your nice suggestion.
As a result, i put notes in this way


01:22:769 if don't put note, I feel that something is missing...

> 01:28:233 - / 01:28:829 - where are the Finishers again?
- ok!!

Please confirm the metadata, call me back when everything is settled.

Skylish wrote:

There's still no '(TV size)' wording in the official ED.

I think there's necessary to remove it.
- I see. remove :3

EDIT: Otherwise if you insist on using (TV size), may you find out the OST of it since I can't even find the album lol.
Skylish, thank you for modding !!! :)
Skylish
IRC checking with Sana
2017-05-29 22:18 Sanawieck: hi Skylish :3
2017-05-29 22:18 Skylish: hey :D
2017-05-29 22:19 Sanawieck: i updated my map. please check it ;3
2017-05-29 22:19 Skylish: np it please?
2017-05-29 22:20 Sanawieck: ok
2017-05-29 22:20 Sanawieck: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER]
2017-05-29 22:25 Skylish: did you really fix your Kantan?
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: I am pretty sure I am checking the most updated ver. https://puu.sh/w4ydI/92f770ee54.png
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: but I did not see you changed what you said to fix
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: for example: 00:13:332 -
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: did you make some mistakes when you updated the mapset? :thinking:
2017-05-29 22:28 Sanawieck: !?
2017-05-29 22:28 Sanawieck: Just a moment, please. T_T
2017-05-29 22:28 Skylish: no problem
2017-05-29 22:28 Skylish: I will be waiting
2017-05-29 22:32 Sanawieck: i couldn't update only Kantan diff ;w;
2017-05-29 22:32 Sanawieck: done... maybe...
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: sorry for long waiting
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: are you here/ free for a IRC checking?
2017-05-29 22:49 Sanawieck: okay :3
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: In Oni: 01:17:703 (101) -
2017-05-29 22:50 Skylish: 01:17:504 (100,101) -
2017-05-29 22:50 Skylish: ctrl+G (d k) to follow the vocal pitch better?
2017-05-29 22:51 Sanawieck: ok !!
2017-05-29 22:51 Sanawieck: changed !w!
2017-05-29 22:55 Skylish: 01:26:445 (144,145) -
2017-05-29 22:55 Skylish: ctrl+G too? same reason
2017-05-29 22:57 Sanawieck: ok :3 i think so too
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: I think that's all
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: do you have anything want to ask?
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: otherwise I am going to re-bubble the mapset as the title is changed
2017-05-29 23:00 Sanawieck: nope !
2017-05-29 23:00 Sanawieck: i'll update
2017-05-29 23:00 Skylish: okay please update
2017-05-29 23:01 Skylish: oh forget to mention, would you like to change the HP of Oni from 5 to 6?
2017-05-29 23:01 Sanawieck: done
2017-05-29 23:02 Skylish: good
2017-05-29 23:02 Skylish: lol your 'done' is refering to the updating action
2017-05-29 23:03 Sanawieck: www
2017-05-29 23:03 Sanawieck: i want to keep HP
2017-05-29 23:03 Skylish: you think HP=5 in Oni is fine?
2017-05-29 23:03 Skylish: just asking, not challenging you
2017-05-29 23:04 Sanawieck: oh
2017-05-29 23:04 Sanawieck: i'll change HP 6 of oni ww
2017-05-29 23:04 Skylish: okay, (maybe you were a bit confused few mintues ago
2017-05-29 23:05 Skylish: plesae update it again, sorry for late noticing
2017-05-29 23:05 Sanawieck: ok updated

Reset Bubble~

Metadata check: p/6035939
Topic Starter
crim

Skylish wrote:

IRC checking with Sana
2017-05-29 22:18 Sanawieck: hi Skylish :3
2017-05-29 22:18 Skylish: hey :D
2017-05-29 22:19 Sanawieck: i updated my map. please check it ;3
2017-05-29 22:19 Skylish: np it please?
2017-05-29 22:20 Sanawieck: ok
2017-05-29 22:20 Sanawieck: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1225752 Horie Yui - PRESENTER]
2017-05-29 22:25 Skylish: did you really fix your Kantan?
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: I am pretty sure I am checking the most updated ver. https://puu.sh/w4ydI/92f770ee54.png
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: but I did not see you changed what you said to fix
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: for example: 00:13:332 -
2017-05-29 22:26 Skylish: did you make some mistakes when you updated the mapset? :thinking:
2017-05-29 22:28 Sanawieck: !?
2017-05-29 22:28 Sanawieck: Just a moment, please. T_T
2017-05-29 22:28 Skylish: no problem
2017-05-29 22:28 Skylish: I will be waiting
2017-05-29 22:32 Sanawieck: i couldn't update only Kantan diff ;w;
2017-05-29 22:32 Sanawieck: done... maybe...
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: sorry for long waiting
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: are you here/ free for a IRC checking?
2017-05-29 22:49 Sanawieck: okay :3
2017-05-29 22:49 Skylish: In Oni: 01:17:703 (101) -
2017-05-29 22:50 Skylish: 01:17:504 (100,101) -
2017-05-29 22:50 Skylish: ctrl+G (d k) to follow the vocal pitch better?
2017-05-29 22:51 Sanawieck: ok !!
2017-05-29 22:51 Sanawieck: changed !w!
2017-05-29 22:55 Skylish: 01:26:445 (144,145) -
2017-05-29 22:55 Skylish: ctrl+G too? same reason
2017-05-29 22:57 Sanawieck: ok :3 i think so too
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: I think that's all
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: do you have anything want to ask?
2017-05-29 22:59 Skylish: otherwise I am going to re-bubble the mapset as the title is changed
2017-05-29 23:00 Sanawieck: nope !
2017-05-29 23:00 Sanawieck: i'll update
2017-05-29 23:00 Skylish: okay please update
2017-05-29 23:01 Skylish: oh forget to mention, would you like to change the HP of Oni from 5 to 6?
2017-05-29 23:01 Sanawieck: done
2017-05-29 23:02 Skylish: good
2017-05-29 23:02 Skylish: lol your 'done' is refering to the updating action
2017-05-29 23:03 Sanawieck: www
2017-05-29 23:03 Sanawieck: i want to keep HP
2017-05-29 23:03 Skylish: you think HP=5 in Oni is fine?
2017-05-29 23:03 Skylish: just asking, not challenging you
2017-05-29 23:04 Sanawieck: oh
2017-05-29 23:04 Sanawieck: i'll change HP 6 of oni ww
2017-05-29 23:04 Skylish: okay, (maybe you were a bit confused few mintues ago
2017-05-29 23:05 Skylish: plesae update it again, sorry for late noticing
2017-05-29 23:05 Sanawieck: ok updated

Reset Bubble~

Metadata check: p/6035939
Thank you for Bubble <3
Arrival
We had a talk with Skylish and Nardoxyribonucleic about these notes in Kantan 01:06:676 (43,45) -

They should be reverted to red ticks for something easier.

Call me immedietly after that
yuzu__rinrin
asleePnkmjp
Topic Starter
crim

Arrival wrote:

We had a talk with Skylish and Nardoxyribonucleic about these notes in Kantan 01:06:676 (43,45) -

They should be reverted to red ticks for something easier.
- changed !!

Call me immedietly after that
Arrival
Everything is fine, good luck !
Surono
hey congrats pnkmhjy%#%#jgp for first rank map! owo
Topic Starter
crim

Arrival wrote:

Everything is fine, good luck !
Thank you Arrival !! >w<
Topic Starter
crim

Surono wrote:

hey congrats pnkmhjy%#%#jgp (!?!?!?!?) for first rank map! owo
Thank you Suronoooooooooo !!
yuzu__rinrin
1stRankedおめでとうヾ(。>﹏<。)ノ゙
Topic Starter
crim

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

1stRankedおめでとうヾ(。>﹏<。)ノ゙
ありがとうううう!٩(๑òωó๑)۶
toara_fict
あら^~
Y O U T A
1st Ranked おめでとう!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
alacat
おめでとうございます。Romanised Artistですが、過去のRanked mapより公式の表記が優先されます。CDや公式サイトを見るとYui Horieと表記されているので、変更するべきだと思います。変更する際にPMください〜
Topic Starter
crim

toara_fict wrote:

あら^~
あ^〜

Y O U T A wrote:

1st Ranked おめでとう!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ありがとう!!・:*+.(( °ω° ))/.:+
Topic Starter
crim

alacat wrote:

おめでとうございます。Romanised Artistですが、過去のRanked mapより公式の表記が優先されます。CDや公式サイトを見るとYui Horieと表記されているので、変更するべきだと思います。変更する際にPMください〜
ありがとうございます。
Romanised Artistについては現在pcに触れられない状況なので今日の夜頃に改めてご連絡致します。
alacat
Disqualify for change the artist to "Yui Horie"



http://king-cr.jp/artist/horie/profile/
Topic Starter
crim

alacat wrote:

Disqualify for change the artist to "Yui Horie"



http://king-cr.jp/artist/horie/profile/
fixed !
alacat
ok, Back~
yuzu__rinrin
(。◕ˇдˇ​◕。)/
Skylish
I shouldsnap slap myself.... I only checked the TITLE, but not the ARTIST, even though I had already provided the Source....

#shameonskylish

I am sorry that you need to suffer a DQ for your first ranked mapset, I am so sorry, sana....
Charlotte
おめでとう :)
Topic Starter
crim

alacat wrote:

ok, Back~
ありがとうございます~!
Topic Starter
crim

Skylish wrote:

I shouldsnap slap myself.... I only checked the TITLE, but not the ARTIST, even though I had already provided the Source....

#shameonskylish

I am sorry that you need to suffer a DQ for your first ranked mapset, I am so sorry, sana....
No problem...!!!!! :3
I'm really grateful for you <3

Charlotte wrote:

おめでとう :)
ありがとうございます~!!!
Surono
regratz pnkpjpmpgpgpgp :3

Skylish wrote:

I shouldsnap slap myself.... I only checked the TITLE, but not the ARTIST, even though I had already provided the Source....

#shameonskylish

I am sorry that you need to suffer a DQ for your first ranked mapset, I am so sorry, sana....
cute Stylish, im proud of you. <3
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Akemi_Homura
Gratz~! :)
I love this song.
Hanjamon
gratz on your first qualified map~
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crim
Thank you all !!! :) :)
Shadowa Pinkman
Sorry for being late,gratz ^^
Etsu
I was thinking give mod this map but i arrived late, gratz :P
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