Kaifin wrote:

only rule is that if you're an absolute beginner, this probably isn't the place to get feedback on your first map and you should instead either PM me or another mapper in game

Celektus wrote:

Hi o/

here's the code for the HitsoundsThanks!

Easy

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:This Guy Moaned At least This Loud (Jurassic Park)
TitleUnicode:This Guy Moaned At least This Loud (Jurassic Park)
Artist:Video Junkie
ArtistUnicode:Video Junkie
Creator:Nihs_Nooj
Version:Easy
Source:jurassic park moan meme
Tags:
BeatmapID:1268824
BeatmapSetID:600444

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.500000005960464
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"JurassicParkjpg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
191,285.714285714286,4,1,0,5,1,0
11736,285.714285714286,4,3,0,30,1,0
25950,-100,4,1,0,5,0,0
29333,-100,4,1,0,5,0,0
30262,-100,4,1,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 61,237,188
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192

[HitObjects]
256,192,191,12,0,9333,0:0:0:0:
144,137,11736,6,0,P|151:122|173:90,2,50.0000005960464,6|6|0,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,226,12878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,266,13450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,231,14021,6,0,P|331:205|338:179,2,50.0000005960464,2|2|0,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,170,15164,5,0,0:0:0:0:
271,81,15736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,84,16307,6,0,L|406:101,1,50.0000005960464,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
394,158,16878,2,0,L|352:199,1,50.0000005960464,2|6,0:1|0:2,0:0:0:0:
346,327,18021,5,0,0:0:0:0:
255,328,18593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,266,19164,2,0,P|186:156|241:82,1,200.000002384186,4|0,0:1|2:0,3:0:0:0:
320,118,20878,6,0,P|368:112|380:115,2,50.0000005960464,6|6|0,0:1|0:1|0:0,3:0:0:0:
246,170,22021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,259,22593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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239,352,24307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,323,24878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,254,25450,6,0,L|88:198,1,50.0000005960464,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,26021,12,0,30357,2:0:0:0:

Normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:This Guy Moaned At least This Loud (Jurassic Park)
TitleUnicode:This Guy Moaned At least This Loud (Jurassic Park)
Artist:Video Junkie
ArtistUnicode:Video Junkie
Creator:Nihs_Nooj
Version:Normal
Source:jurassic park moan meme
Tags:
BeatmapID:1268800
BeatmapSetID:600444

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.6
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.90000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"JurassicParkjpg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
191,285.714285714286,4,1,0,5,1,0
11736,285.714285714286,4,3,0,30,1,0
25950,-100,4,1,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 61,237,188
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192

[HitObjects]
256,192,191,12,0,11048,0:0:0:0:
68,224,11736,5,6,0:1:0:0:
147,150,12021,1,6,0:1:0:0:
178,253,12307,2,0,P|219:217|233:164,1,90.000000596046,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
234,76,12878,2,0,P|288:72|339:92,1,90.000000596046,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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419,263,14021,5,2,0:1:0:0:
328,321,14307,1,2,0:1:0:0:
221,302,14593,2,0,P|247:252|287:226,1,90.000000596046,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
283,124,15164,2,0,P|342:151|366:181,1,90.000000596046,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
441,238,15736,2,0,P|399:266|352:274,1,90.000000596046,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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233,113,16593,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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424,179,25736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,26021,12,0,30357,2:0:0:0:

[Mod]

have cerkal before the start of the spinner 00:26:021 (1) - so that the last sound is clicked... like put the spinner one 1/8 or 1/16 later

Fixed

Kaifin wrote:

Kaifin wrote:

only rule is that if you're an absolute beginner, this probably isn't the place to get feedback on your first map and you should instead either PM me or another mapper in game

Nihs_Nooj wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/600444
Can you check if maybe the BPM should be halved?
Thanks!

KingBranBran wrote:

Nihs_Nooj wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/600444
Can you check if maybe the BPM should be halved?
Thanks!

Yes, you should cut the bpm in halfFixed

00:12:307 - On here you might want to put another red timing point with the same values to make the beat sound better, but that's optional

Joe Castle wrote:

Hi, i came here from #modreq, to see if i can help you with your map!

lets see what you made (this is just my opinión)



Easy:

1. 00:00:191 (1) - This is a suggestion, but you should end this spinner at 00:11:190, it fits better to the songI extended the spinner but not as much as you suggested due to leaving 4 beats of recovery time (in 180 BPM) in easy difficulties
2. 00:11:736 (1,2,3,1) - You could improve this part so it could look like a better shaped curveFixed
3. 00:14:021 (1,2,3,1) - try doing something like this (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7848170)Done
4. 00:16:307 (1,2) - separate this sliders a Little bit more, so it can look more cleanI stacked them in order to be consistent with time-distance equalityI agree that having them seperated would look cleaner
5. 00:20:878 (1,2,3,1) - move the circles a Little bit, so they can créate a better shaped curve. oh! and move the Green slider according to the circles (if you move them of course)Fixed~
6. 00:26:021 (2) - try doing this (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7848188)I'd like too but I'm leaving it as is due to time-distance equality





Normal:

Looks pretty solid, but i recommend putting the circles/slider-ends near the curves of the other sliders, it could look nice uwuThanks!




Also, nice meme

Error- wrote:

from queue .-.

dafuq is thissame xd

[General]
Title: This Guy Moaned At least This Loud
Source: Jurrasic Park
tags: moan meme

[Easy]
00:00:191 (1) - End 00:11:048Originally I wanted to leave more recovery time after the spinner but I guess I'll change it since I've heard this twice now
00:16:878 (2) - Instead of 1/2 slider, Maybe a 1/1 or maybe a 3/2 slider might work or maybe a circle instead, or a repeast of 00:16:307 (1) - Its up to you anyway.I'd rather emphasize the change in the music and the beat on the slider end seems pretty audible but I'll think about it
00:25:450 (1,2) - Follow 00:16:307 (1,2) - Changed it to a reverse slider

[Normal]
1/4 advisorFixed~
Please watch this also this. (Thanks to pishifat!) this will help you much.I do I used a little uncomfortable flow to emphasize the sliders but I still think it flows well

00:16:878 (3,4) - nooo delete 00:16:878 (3) - and move 00:17:164 (4) - to 00:16:878Fixed sounds better now

I cant mod anything else lmao anyway gl!Thanks!

1. Disable Widescreen Support
2. Why the mp3 is cut lo

1. 00:14:021 (1,2) - Kinda breaks the flow
2. 00:16:307 (1,2) - Please avoid using these kinds of patterns such as overlaps in easy
3. 00:16:878 (2) - The sound on the white tick doesn't sound much audible as the sound on the red tick

   End sliders on equal or of less strength

1. 00:12:021 (2,3) - Blanket thx
2. 00:14:307 (2,3) - Same ^
3. 00:14:593 (3,4) - ^

-Aqua wrote:

Hello from modreqs

[General]

1. Disable Widescreen SupportIt's already disabled, that's just the bg... maybe I'll change it if it's a problem
2. Why the mp3 is cut lo

Part of the meme xd Idk that's just how the audio is

[Easy]

1. 00:14:021 (1,2) - Kinda breaks the flowFixed
2. 00:16:307 (1,2) - Please avoid using these kinds of patterns such as overlaps in easyFixed
3. 00:16:878 (2) - The sound on the white tick doesn't sound much audible as the sound on the red tick

   End sliders on equal or of less strengthChanged the whole slider into a reverse

Overall changed a lot in easy diff to help playability
[Normal]

1. 00:12:021 (2,3) - Blanket thxFixed
2. 00:14:307 (2,3) - Same ^Fixed
3. 00:14:593 (3,4) - ^Fixed

Fixed a few more blankets as well
Goodluck~

1. 00:12:307 - unecessary red timing point (other diff too)
2. 00:16:306 (1) - would make circle and slider instead
3. 00:29:333 and 00:30:262 - these green timing points are unnecessary

1. 00:12:307 (3,4) - ds
2. 00:16:878 (3) - this slider can be better. seems like it wants to blanket 00:16:593 (2) but fails
3. 00:24:877 (5,1) - ds
   Strange things are going on with flow in this diff. If you chose to use regular circular flow, then use it properly. For example, 00:21:450 (3,4,5) and 00:23:736 (3,4,5). On 00:24:878 (5) flow changes direction for some reason. Try not to overuse this kind of pattern, there are many other options which would be more interesting

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello there! From queue

Easy

1. 00:12:307 - unecessary red timing point (other diff too)Fixed~
2. 00:29:333 and 00:30:262 - these green timing points are unnecessary

I forgot to add volume changes to those greenlines >.< Fixed~
Normal

1. 00:12:307 (3,4) - dsFixed
2. 00:16:878 (3) - this slider can be better. seems like it wants to blanket 00:16:593 (2) but failsFixed
3. 00:24:877 (5,1) - ds
   Strange things are going on with flow in this diff. If you chose to use regular circular flow, then use it properly. For example, 00:21:450 (3,4,5) and 00:23:736 (3,4,5). On 00:24:878 (5) flow changes direction for some reason. Try not to overuse this kind of pattern, there are many other options which would be more interesting

I used flow change to emphasize the 'vocals?' but yeah, I fixed all the flow problems
Hope that you'll find something useful. Good luck!Thanks!

Nedsing wrote:

Easy

00:00:191 (1,1) - Not enough time to recover after spinnerFixed~
00:26:164 (1) - Spinner should end on the white tickI think this is fine and it also gives the map 30 seconds of play time

Normal

00:16:878 (3) - idk, slider looks weirdYea changes it
00:26:164 (1) - Plz end on white tickSame as Easy

LOL I have no words. Good map?? xD xD

Joe Castle wrote:

You should keep the Source totally blank tho.

there is no need to fill it with that

instead, fill the tags with those wordsFixed~

lilligantEX wrote:

[general]
10-second spinner is too long for both easy and normal - find a way to map the rhythm or use a sliderFixed~

[easy]
sliders with reverse arrows are hard for new players to read - try sliders that take up the same amount of time as the reverse sliders but with no reverseI think this works fine especially since the song is 105 BPMI'll keep it in mind tho

[normal]
00:16:878 (3) - try a red anchor at 00:17:164 and make a bend in the slider to correctly follow the rhythmFixed the blanketNot adding a red anchor tho cuz the map only uses curved sliders and I think it fits the music decently anyway :3

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi

Easy

00:14:021 (1) move a little bit right
00:15:735 (3) move a little bit left
00:25:450 (1) move a little bit up and right

Normal

00:09:735 (2) move a little bit down
Nothing more

Checked all the DS hopefully I didn't leave errors w
Nice map xDThanks xD

i can add my diff from this map?This is my first map so I'd rather have no GDs owo If you've already made a diff I can take a look at it tho

Yahuri wrote:

from meme

General
-the song cut at the end sounds really bad :/

Easy
00:09:450 (1,2) - fix stackNot sure what you mean there isn't even a 2 here :thinking:
00:12:307 - add finish?Fixed~
00:19:164 - i dont think theres really any instrument which supports a finish hereI think it's fine imo. It emphasizes this sound this way.
I'll keep it in mind tho
00:22:593 (3,1) - fix blanketFixed~

Normal
00:09:450 (1,2,3) - these objects line up with the instrumentals. however, since you started mapping at this point, it sounds like you're trying to map to vocals. 00:09:735 (2) - doesn't perfectly match up with any vocals, which could be problematic.I think it's fine but I'll definitely keep it in mind
00:12:307 - add finish?Sounds weird with blanket imo
00:13:450 (5) - fix blanketFixed~
00:14:307 (2,3) - ^^
00:18:593 (5,1) - ^^
00:12:878 (4,2) - might not be too much of a problem because of time distance, but the visual spacing doesnt look good, space them out furtherI think it looks fine
00:15:164 (4,1) - blanket? It is blanketing, just at an angle to make it easier to catch/flow
00:16:307 (1) - 00:16:878 (3) - overlap doesnt look good, if you still want to keep the overlap then try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7881109 perfect overlapFixed <3
00:16:878 (3,5) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7881111Fixed
00:16:593 (2,4) - stack?I want to avoid stacks in normal diff
00:20:878 (1,2) - i dont think theres really any instrument which supports a finish hereChanged~

good luck!Thanks!

LiousPL wrote:

• 
  General

1. Don't use a Enable countdown option, when you don't have any Storyboard on map...Fixed
2. The sound for spinner was start at - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7926857 - OwO xD (1/12 pattern, yup, I know this)I think it's fine as is since it's a spinner but I'll definitely change it if it's a problem thanks <3
   
   Normal
   
   You must to work on patterns here, I think you are irregularly sliced sliders, but OK, I have few problems about map:
3. 00:19:164 (1) - This slider was end at 00:20:307Fixed
4. 00:24:878 (5) - Normal can't have repeats in the same place, after few notesNot sure what you mean here...
   
   Easy
   
   You must to work on patterns tho :#
   
   GL~Thanks!

Celektus wrote:

this is slightly too late 00:09:735 (2) - I think it's fine as is

Hitsounds are all ok maybe just add soft-hitnormals on slider ends without soundsAll fixed thanks!